[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Konoha's Yellow Flash]

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(Kuchiyose:Takatenshi) Aviansie
Rank: B
Type: Summoning
Range:Long
Chakra cost:40(-10 per jutsu it performs)
Damage: N/A

Description: Aviantise are reknown for the expertiese in wind nature manipulation.This eagle like creatures have developed four limbs plus their wings.If they are not using wind jutsus they tend to use small throwing axes or in some cases, javelins.They tend to attack from above rather than hand to hand combat, hence, they rarely land.

*Note The user may not use Fuuton while the summon is active or right after they leave.
*Note The summon can only use up to B rank fuuton jutsus.
*Note All the Aviansies but the leader last up to 3 turns.(the boss can last up to 4)
*Note Only Konoha?s Yellow Flash can grant the Aviantise Summoning scroll.
*Note it can only be used once per battle.

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~ Declined - No weird mutated thingies. O_O ~

 

[Chiryoku]

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(Bunshi Hijutsu: Ribingu Deddo no Yobigoe) Molecule Secret Arts: Call of the Haunted
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user breaks himself down to a molecule level and inserts himself into the ground/water. The user is unable to get hit when in this mode, since they are broken down to molecule levels.
Note: Only usable by Souma no Kou-users
Note: Once per battle
Note: must come up the turn used
Note: Works on water too
Note: Only one body can go under with this technique, one turn after this technique ends the body will lose a limb, which limb is lost will be chosen by the user


-Approved-

Chakra Layer (Chakra Sou)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A (+ 20 for each hit with weapon)
Description: The user produces a layer of chakra around themselves, the user’s defence will increase. If the user has a weapon, the weapon will also be coated in chakra, causing it to deal more damage. If the user wishes he can form the chakra used into a weapon of his/her choice to use in battle. This weapon is stronger then a regular weapon, but when this is used the layer of chakra is taken away, causing the user to have regular defence again.
Note: Only lasts 3 turns
Note: Twice per battle


-Declined: seems like a chakra barrier and those are only allowed to mednins-

Armour of Fire – (Yoroi no Kaisa)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will form a layer of chakra around their skin, and then form another layer over it. They ignite this second layer with their fire chakra, and have the first layer protect their skin from the flames. The first layer can't hold back all the flames though, and the fire will hurt the opponent, but due to the burning effects the user will be in pain, causing his adrenaline levels to rise. Because of this he gets a boost of speed and energy. His body heat will also be raised, causing the blood to go faster around the body. This also increases the user's speed, since the glucose gets to the muscles quicker. This raises the user's speed to about the 2nd Gate. The user will also, due to the high body heat, be able to use fire jutsu quicker.
Note: When deactivated the armour can't be activated again for the rest of the battle
Note: -20 when using the armour at first, then -10 each turn it is active
Note: Using this jutsu will lead to second-degree burns on deactivation
Note: The user will be more vulnerable to water jutsus (+10 to any water jutsu of the opponent)
Note: When deactivated the adrenaline level drops and because the user used alot of energy he/she will be exhausted
Co-created by Axle



-Declined: seems like a chakra barrier (layers of chakra) and those are only allowed to mednins-

(Suiton: Tate no Perseus) –Water Release: Shield of Perseus

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will excrete a liquid substance from their mouth to create a large circular shield of water that can be used as a means to defend against Physical based techniques to some degree (up to B rank) or the user can use as a projectile based technique to throw at the opponent with devastating power.
Co-created by Kaito-sama

-Pending: the red part needs explaining-

(Raiton: Nami no Kyouran) – Lightning Release: Wave of Madness

Rank: S
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user concentrates their chakra and then shoots from their mouth a wave of medium lightning blasts that converge on a wide area, shocking and exploding on impact leaving craters of devastation behind.

Note: Numbing effects last 1 turn.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Co-created by Kaito-sama



-Approved-

Volley of the Eternal Arrows – (Seisha no Kagirinai Yas)
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will mold his wind chakra with the wind affliction of his sword, creating a volley of wind arrows behind him/her. These arrows are incredibly sharp and fast due to their wind affinity. At the moment the user points their sword up and swings it forwards these arrows are released at the opponent.
Note: Twice per battle
Note: Only usable with Dark Monarch

~ Does not deserve S Rank ~

Peasant of the Earth – (Noufu no Koudo)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: A broadsword which looks like it’s incredibly heavy, but actually is very light. It’s the opposite of the sword Dark Monarch, and because of this it has the Earth element. The broadsword doesn’t have any decorations, thus giving it the name of peasant.
It has several effects.

• Gives +20 to every Earth jutsu of the user
• -10 damage from each Earth jutsu of the opponent
• The user can stab this sword into the ground and channel his/her earth chakra through it, causing an earthquake, thus attacking all who are underground. This takes 10 seconds to prepare, the user must stab the sword into the ground and concentrate, leaving him/her open to an attack.
• The user can slash with this sword, and at that moment let several earth spikes come from the blade. These stab wildly in every direction, so also towards the user’s arm, damaging it.
• The sword can be infused with Earth-chakra, making it harder to block due to the increased weight. This also makes the sword harder to handle and blunt.

*Only Ingwer Hatake can wield this blade*
*All skills can only be used twice and the Earth Spikes damage the user by 20 when used. The Earth chakra infusion lasts for two turns*
*The sword is indestructible, this doesn’t mean it can destroy everything*

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~ Declined. Only one special weapon per person ~

(Suiton: Tate no Perseus) –Water Release: Shield of Perseus

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will excrete water from their mouth to create a large circular shield of water that can be used as a means to defend against Physical based techniques to some degree (up to B rank) or the user can use as a projectile based technique to throw at the opponent with devastating power.
Co-created by Kaito-sama

~ Declined. This is basically a combo of water wall and water missile. ~

Fire Release: Armour of Fire – (Katon: Yoroi no Kaisa)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will create an armour of fire around themselves, but keep it distanced with the use of fire chakra. This distance can’t hold all flames back though, and the fire will still hurt the user, but due to the burning effects the user will be in pain, causing his adrenaline levels to rise. Because of this he gets a boost of speed and energy. His body heat will also be raised, causing the blood to go faster around the body. This also increases the user's speed, since the glucose gets to the muscles quicker. This raises the user's speed to about the 2nd Gate. The user will also, due to the high body heat, be able to use fire jutsu quicker.
Note: When deactivated the armour can't be activated again for the rest of the battle
Note: -20 when using the armour at first, then -10 each turn it is active
Note: Using this jutsu will lead to second-degree burns on deactivation
Note: The user will be more vulnerable to water jutsus (+10 to any water jutsu of the opponent)
Note: When deactivated the adrenaline level drops and because the user used alot of energy he/she will be exhausted
Co-created by Axle

~ Declined, jutsu exists. ~

 

[Geezus]

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Raiton: Kono Za Han'i, Kaishoku Motte Raikage!!
Lightning Release: This is The Extent, Dont Mess With The Raikage!!!
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Chakra: 60 (+ 30 Every Turn)
Damage: 120 (+50 to Raiton) (+ 30 To User Every Turn)
Description: As The Raikage is known to have the chakra levels of a Bijuu, by combining more chakra with his Raikage Armor, he creates a huge outer layer of Lightning Chakra which then shapes into the shape of a feral dog as the electricity stands as if it were fur when a dog gets mad. This makes the Raikage appear as if he has his own Bijuu and this Chakra function much like his armor but on a far greater scale.
His Defense
Opponent's lightning does nothing to him regardless of the jutsu.
Uneffected by anything but Wind and Water and Lightning Resistant CE (Unless another Technique permits otherwise)
Control of Lightning
Makes Him Able to utilize any lightning jutsu without seals and control it how he wants.
Power
Able to cause great craters where ever he steps and it seems as if the world is being pelted by meteors as he runs
Speed
Runs with Same Speed as The Raikage Assualt Armorwith the speed of his Armor..
The main Drawback is the amount of Chakra used and th estrain it puts on the nerves.
(User can't use any technique over C-rank after use)
(User Cant move 2 turns afterwards)
(Usable Once)
(Last 3 turns)
(Raikage Only Technique)

~ Declined, OPed. I do not see how it would withstand Fire, or ANY Combination element, not only Lightning defeating CEs. Remove that. And remove the control how he wants. Except for the Shukaku, no Bijuu can control its attacks once released. Remove the meteor pelting thing. Specify the size of the craters, what damage will occur if the opponent is nearby when the crater forms ? Restrict it to two turns. ~

 

[Alucard]

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(Suiton: Kiriteijou) - Water Release: Stationary Mist

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will add more water chakra to the mist already on the field. With this the user can add more intensity to the mist so that it can't be blown away by any wind jutsu
*Can be used three times per battle
*Can stand up to 3 attempts of been blown away with a wind jutsu each time it's used.

~ Jutsu exists ~

(Honeton: Hone Kubikiri Hōchō) - Bone Release: Bone Decapitating Carving Knife

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: After seeing Zabuza's sword, Heihachi found it very usefull so he made his own version of the sword, which is equal but it's completly made of bone and therefore much more resistant. It's only special abilitie is that the user can use bone jutsus with/from it since it's main purpose it's for silent killing.
*Useable twice per battle.

~ Usable twice per battle for how many turns each ? ~

(Honeton: Hone Shuriken) - Bone Release: Bone Darts

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will fire a large number of small explosive "darts" from his body (elbows, hands, knees, feet, etc) with enough charge to demolish huge buildings. They dont exactly explode but the impact and shockwave released are so big it looked like they exploded. They look somewhat similar to an axe blade, but with an indention in the middle and they're shoot with greet speed, so great that the naked eye has difficulty keeping up with their movement.
*Useable three times per battle

~ Unless you jet propel them with elemental chakra, bones are not going to reach this speed ~

(Honeton: Howaido Kenhou) - Bone Release: White Sword Gun

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user points out Hone Kubikiri Hōchō at the opponent and compresses the minerals on the sword, then shoots the tip of the blade with extreme force from the blade, leaving it with half it's size. Then he uses his bone KG to reconstruct the tip of the blade again.
*Useable twice per battle

~ Get Bone Kubukiri Hocho approved first ~

 

[Mugiwara]

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(Kire Kouyou no Mai)- Dance of the Slicing Elements

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Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will make bones stick out of his body, as he starts spinning, the bones become longer and longer(3 meter max). He starts spinning, starting off with charging lightning element, changing the elements ever 3 seconds, changing from lightning to fire, then to earth and then to water and lastly wind. Once the dance has started, it cannot be stopped. While the user is spinning, the bones will block any incoming projectiles.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: After spinning at really high speed, this technique will leave the user very dizzy and unbalanced.

~Declined~ I don't believe its possible to change elements that quickly, modify or remove the part in blue
(Iba Shintai)- Uncontrolled Body

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (3 to the user)
Description: The user activates this technique, forcing bones to come out, but at the same time, suppressing them with chakra, so they remain in. When the users chakra flow gets disrupted, (by a genjutsu, or something similiar), or when the user is paralyzed and cannot control his chakra perfectly, the bones with burst out uncontrollably around out of the user, and from the ground, defending the user against incoming projectiles, as well as giving the user superficial cuts, breaking him loose from genjutsu or paralyzation.
The Bones burst out at really high speed right after the users chakra flow is disrupted, or when he cannot control it perfectly.
Note: Once activated, this lasts until the end of the battle, or until it is used up.
Note: Can only be activated twice per battle, and it has to be reactivated once the users chakra flow gets disrupted or when he cannot control chakra.

^ The bones doesn't pop out when projectiles are thrown at me, but when my chakra flow is disrupted. And I'm not hurting myself very much, its almost the same as getting a clone to throw a shuriken, cutting my ear to break me out of a genjutsu.
~Declined~ Too OP

(Iba Shintai)- Uncontrolled Body

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (3 to the user)
Description: The user activates this technique, forcing bones to come out, but at the same time, suppressing them with chakra, so they remain in. When the users chakra flow gets disrupted, (by a genjutsu, or something similiar), or when the user is paralyzed and cannot control his chakra perfectly, the bones with burst out uncontrollably around out of the user, and from the ground, defending the user against incoming projectiles, as well as giving the user superficial cuts, breaking him loose from genjutsu or paralyzation.
The Bones burst out at really high speed right after the users chakra flow is disrupted, or when he cannot control it perfectly.
Note: Once activated, this lasts for 6 rounds.
Note: Can only be activated once per battle, once the users chakra is disrupted, the technique ends.

~ I like the idea, but this means you cannot use Kaguya techniques yourself. If you bring bones out to use Kaguya techniques, you will cancel this. If you still want this, add the above restriction to it. ~

(Hone Ami) Bone Network

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Rank:S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80*
Description: The user gathers chakra in his palms, and places them on the ground, creating an underground bone network. Spiky bones appear all over underground, some sticking out of the ground like trees(5-10 bones) around the battlefield. This technique will prevent the opponent from going underground, if he does so, he will get stabbed by the bones that are underground.
Note: *Does only damage if the opponent is underground while the technique is being used, or goes underground after it is used.
Note: Cause of the chakrastrain 5 damage to the user.
Note: The Bone network takes time to create, so while the technique is being used, the user is defenseless.

~ Remove the sticking out part. That makes it like Sawarabai no Mai ~

(Fuuton: Tei Sou)- Wind Release: Air Layer

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80*
Description: The user uses his wind chakra to push away all the air around him, pressurizing it into thin layer of highly pressurized cutting air 360 degrees around the user, 3 meters away from the user, sucking all the oxygen from inside the layer, pressurizing it into the layer. The user is left without any oxygen to breathe while this technique is active.
Note: *Fire jutsus won't work on the user, because of theres no oxygen after the fire passes the layer.
*Lightning jutsus won't work either, because of the layer of pressurized cutting air. The layer also stops regular projectiles.
*Weakens incoming Earth and Water jutsus.
*Lasts for 1 round because of theres no oxygen for the user.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Only B rank or lower wind techs for next 2 rounds.

~ What the hell ? A vacuum like this will crush your organs if you use it, and you are not some CE user to remove only Oxygen. Declined. ~

 

[Caliburn]

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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The first thing the user does is rotating a part of his body by using one of his legs as a post while the other one rotates backwards in a circle motion (compare it to a compasses). This way the user can avoid thrusts completely and he can postpone the moment a horizontal slash would hit him (he can't dodge that one). Either way the user turns one of his shoulders 90? backwards, which gives the ideal stance for the attack: The user holds in each hand a sword horizontally, however with a reversed handgrip. One hand is positioned at the users hip, while the other one is positioned just above the head.
Then when the opponents attack is avoided or postponed, the user brings the upper sword down and the lower sword up like a double guillotine untill the users both arms are completely stretched (the lower is now up and vice versa). This way the user can cut of an entire arm, make the opponent drop his sword or even cut half his head off.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*If the user can use the Santoryu-style, he can place a third sword in his mouth, creating a triple guillotine which adds +10 damage*

Position of the swords before the strike:

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user crosses his two swords across his chest upwards. Then the user focuses katon based chakra into his feet to heet up the space around him, making him and his swords look bending or waving (that effect you see when it's extremely hot). This results in making it extremely difficult to block/avoid the attack as you can't really see it well (unless Byakugan/Sharingan).
After that the user uses the same chakra in his feet to give him a speed-boost, he catapults himself forwards and attacks the target by swinging the swords across his chest, resulting in a descending flat diagonal-crossing slash from both swords while the swords are twisted during the slash for added force, ending in a position with the stretched arms and the swords point forwards behind the opponent. The attack is strong enough to break through opponents thrusts and it can attack multiple targets at the same time.
When used with Yubashiri, due to the friction of the swords and Yubashiri being very flammable, the swords get on fire, increasing the damage with +10 (doesn't count as a fire jutsu) or with a normal sword katon-chakra can be infused with it as you already were doing that to give yourself a boost (in this case it counts as a fire jutsu) and it is called Yaki Oni Giri - Burning Demon Slash -
As last the move can also be done without first making heat, thus making the user attack a bit sooner. Though it will not have any effect on the damage, in this case it's called Oni Giri - Demon Slash -


*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
*The fire-combo (with Yubashiri or a normal sword) can only be done once per battle*
*If the user can use the Santoryu-style, he can place a third sword in his mouth, creating a third slash on top of the other two at the same time and adds +10 damage*

Before the attack:

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defence at the same time
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120 (-20)
Description: This is the ultimate and strongest technique of the Santoryu-style. The user grabs his sword with his left hand in a reversed handgrip and points the tip of the blade diagonally down to the right. The user grabs with his right also a sword with a normal handgrip, points the tip of the blade diagonally up to the right and places the end of the handle at the guard of the other sword, making the hands of the user be close together.
After that the user quickly starts spinning both swords. The one the left counterclockwise, while the one the right clockwise which results in giving the swords extreme momentum.
After that the user goes at max speed (chakra in the feet) towards the opponent (or if the opponent attacks he just steps forwards). The spinning blades can nearly nulify/destroy any incoming sword-based attack and when the user is close at the opponent he makes two incredibly powerful horizontal slashes, using the momentum of the spins. As last, by holding a sword in his mouth, the user can do one more horizontal slash to finish just after the two other slashes and he ends behind the opponent.
It can be used as a defence against jutsu's due to the extreme spinning motion, however it depends on the type and nature of the jutsu (FE it will not defend against a jutsu that attacks the user from all sides).

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used when learned the Santoryu-style*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*User takes -20 damage due to the strain on the body*
*When combined with Butai Kyuuen the added strenght will be +40 instead of 20 as the spinning motion creates an enormous blaze of the used element. It will however backfire giving the user another -20 damage + Butai Kyuuen can't be used anymore for 4 turns*

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Leaving for Roku

 

[~Hasashi~]

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T_T fine i will give up on storm mode


anywho


fire style: fire fart (katon: kasai onara)
rank: S
type: attack
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: upon entering flame on mode and the users entire body becomes flames the user can focus his chakra to his anus and let out a very powerful and damaging fart the fart smells so bad that someone who has enhanced smelling can literally die from the smell and a normal person will have blurred vision and be forced to stop whatever they are doing to cover their nose furthermore b/c the users body is fire from the users anus a HUGE wave of fire that travels very fast and gets an added bonus in damage (plus 20) do to the fart and plus 30 from flame on mode it can literally incinerate an opponent who gets caught in it
~once per battle
~must be in flame on mode
~the user has immense pain to his anus afterward and cannot focus for about 3 seconds
~does 20 damage to the user


the description is kinda what i mean so i didn't change it =/

fire style: fire explosion (katon: kasai ekusupuro-jon)
rank: S
type: attack
range: short-mid
chakra: 20 (in flame on mode it is easier to preform fire jutsu therefor it takes less chakra)
damage: 80
description: once in flame on mode the user will focus his fire chakra throughout his body once done the user will erupt and spread everywhere his flames will completely incinerate anything they come in contact with
~once per battle
~the user reforms after usage
~30 damage to the user

~Change the first two to forbidden and I'll reevaluate~
summoning animals of storm (kuchitose ikimonos of suto-mu)
rank: S
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 40
damage: n/a
description: the user will bite his thumb and spread the blood along the side of his arm (tattoo) once done he will slam his hand on the ground and summon an animal of storm (hawk, tiger, lion, snake, monkey,) these animals are not actual animals with flesh and blood although they have a conscious the animals are made up of storm their bodies although a solid look as if on the inside there is a huge storm going on they are made up of lightning, rain, cloud, thunder, all things that involve a storm they can use lightning jutsu up to the user's rank although this lightning is actual lightning not the chakra lightning (though it is not nearly as powerful it is still more powerful then average lightning)
~once per battle
~if the storm animals are cut 3 times they will go poof (xD)
~the user can use all lightning jutsu without hand signs while storm animals are on the field
~only one storm animal can be summoned
~the storm animals all have different sizes
hawk= same size as sasuke's hawk tiger= gamakichi lion= gamabunta = snake=manda monkey= enma
~this is a new contract with storm animals they are not one actual race of animals they are storm animals so no contract is needed with any animals listed above
~Declined~ OP
fire style: heat vision (katon: atsusa vijon)
rank: A
type: attack
range: short-mid
chakra: 30
damage: 60
description: the user emits fire chakra from his eyes directed at the opponent the fire chakra works that it stays chakra until it hits something and it instantly becomes flames burning whatever it hits it can also be used to heat up a metal instantly so if the opponent is hold a kunai the user can use this to heat up the kunai thus burning the opponent
~3 times per battle
~invisible to the naked eye
~Declined~ OP Plus this would cause severe damage to your eyes so no

fire style: fire fart (katon: kasai onara)
rank: forbidden
type: attack
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: upon entering flame on mode and the users entire body becomes flames the user can focus his chakra to his anus and let out a very powerful and damaging fart the fart smells so bad that someone who has enhanced smelling can literally die from the smell and a normal person will have blurred vision and be forced to stop whatever they are doing to cover their nose furthermore b/c the users body is fire from the users anus a HUGE wave of fire that travels very fast and gets an added bonus in damage (plus 20) do to the fart and plus 30 from flame on mode it can literally incinerate an opponent who gets caught in it
~once per battle
~must be in flame on mode
~the user has immense pain to his anus afterward and cannot focus for about 3 seconds
~does 20 damage to the user

~Declined~ Sorry but i can't possibly think of a way for this jutsu to be approved. every time i read it i just keep thinking no...sorry
the description is kinda what i mean so i didn't change it =/

fire style: fire explosion (katon: kasai ekusupuro-jon)
rank: forbidden
type: attack
range: short-mid
chakra: 20 (in flame on mode it is easier to preform fire jutsu therefor it takes less chakra)
damage: 80
description: once in flame on mode the user will focus his fire chakra throughout his body once done the user will erupt and spread everywhere his flames will completely incinerate anything they come in contact with
~once per battle
~the user reforms after usage
~30 damage to the user
~Declined~ add a time and touch restriction because you would need some time to build up the chakra and if you were to be touched it would cancel it. and remove the part in blue

summoning animals of storm (kuchitose ikimonos of suto-mu)
rank: S
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 40
damage: n/a
description: the user will bite his thumb and spread the blood along the side of his arm (tattoo) once done he will slam his hand on the ground and summon an animal of storm (hawk, tiger, lion, snake, monkey,) these animals are not actual animals with flesh and blood although they have a conscious the animals are made up of storm their bodies although a solid look as if on the inside there is a huge storm going on they are made up of lightning, rain, cloud, thunder, all things that involve a storm they can use lightning jutsu up to the A rank although this lightning is actual lightning not the chakra lightning (though it is not nearly as powerful it is still more powerful then average lightning)
~once per battle
~if the storm animals are cut 3 times they will go poof (xD)
~the user can use all lightning jutsu without hand signs while storm animals are on the field
~only one storm animal can be summoned
~the storm animals all have different sizes
hawk= same size as sasuke's hawk tiger= gamakichi lion= gamabunta = snake=manda monkey= enma
~this is a new contract with storm animals they are not one actual race of animals they are storm animals so no contract is needed with any animals listed above
~no lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle
~no wind or water jutsu the rest of the battle
~Declined~ Changed their usage rank but remove the part in blue

 

[Musashibo]

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50 (10 for a different chakra and 5 chakra to keep it the same type.)
Damage Points: Must be used in conjunction with Gentle fist style.(Gentle fist taijutsu damage + 5.)
Description: The user has this with him at all times. This weapon is made of metal and has multiple, hardly visible, holes throughout the club. With griped handles the user can use these Tonfa to defend and attack with ease. These Tonfa allow the user to manipulate chakra easier. Though it is hollow within, the user has no need to worry about the Tonfa being easily broken. The hollow inside and the small holes leading the the surface allow the user to insert and freely use chakra within them. This function can be used to make the Tonfa have fire/wind/lightning/earth/water chakra for 1 turn. The user must focus on 1 type of chakra each turn and in turn it costs energy to keep changing it. The user's chakra have the same weaknesses and strength's as the normal elemental chart. Lightning will shock the opponent (not stun or anything just damage lol), wind with cut, earth will provide more physical blunt damage, fire will burn the opponent, and water will deal water damage and can be used alone for supplementary use. Depending on the chakra type, the user will have different effects. If the fire chakra is within the Tonfa the user will deal 10 more damage with fire jutsu and 5 less damage with water jutsus. This weapon was created by weapon specialists in the Hyuga family trying to enhance their Gentle Fist style through weapons.

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Note: Only members of the Hyuga family can wield this pair of weapons.
Note: These are indestructible, but it can't destroy anything.
Note: User must specify in the beginning of their turn what chakra type it is.
Note: If the user starts with this at the beginning of the fight, then he is deducted 50 chakra + 10 if he chooses a chakra type as well. 10 chakra will also be used to switch form turn to turn. 5 chakra will be used if it is kept the same.
Note: If this weapon is used, the user can't use a different weapon throughout the battle.
Note: Only Musasibou can give/make these out.
Note: Gentle fist Taijutsu gained 5+ damage.

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (plus 5 damage with shurikan/kunai)
Description: The user can make these sparrows for defense or for a projectile attack. Can also add shuriken/kunai for hidden extra damage. The user creates multiple medium sized swallows of condensed water surrounding him or her. Spiraling around him or her the swallows can protect him from fire jutsus in a sphere shape of defense. The user can then use them as a projectile by ordering them to attack the opponent. These swallows are very fast and can pierce through rock and trees.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Must specify if extra damage is used, if reaction time is allowed.
Note: Up to 5 Sparrows can be thrown at the opponent.
Note: User can't used another water jutsu this turn.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~ DO not deserve their ranks ~

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers chakra to create earth walls after slamming his foot to the ground and directing the chakra to it's desired location. The user can form walls of refined ores and rock from the earth's crust to make a highly dense prison. This can also be used as a shield or a 360 degree cover for the user. This shield/prison withstands up to A rank fire/wind/lightning, S rank Earth and Forbidden rank Water. When the targeted opponent is trapped the user will then clap his hands to crush the opponent.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: These walls are as tough as iron walls.
Note: The user can't perform earth jutsu next turn.
Note: The user can use this ore as earth material.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will grab two katanas and rush the opponent at high speeds. He will then use his chakra to slash and before it makes contact the sword seems to split into two. Making the opponent very confused and distracted from the real attack which is actually the other sword. The target is then slash horizontally and then stabbed in the chest with the next sword. This is possible with genjutsu making the swordsman be able to trick the opponent at critical times to get the upper hand. The target will become confused and distracted enough to be slashed by the other sword and then with good timing the swordsman can then stab the opponent for the finishing blow. This requires high genjutsu skill and swordsman skill to execute and can be done from left handed or right handed sides.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Does not require Infinite One-Sword Style Setup.
Note: Can't be performed with another Infinite One-Sword Style attack other than the setup.
Note: Must have 2 swords available.
Note: User can't use genjutsu next turn.

~ Needs to be limited to X number of times per battle ~

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will cast a genjutsu upon the target by touching contact (Hitting, blocking, ect...). Without realizing what is happening to the opponent the victim of this genjutsu will continue his actions, but start to feel sluggish. The opponent will begin to slow down to the point where he thinks he is stopped in place and the user is moving at lightning speed. The user will then have the ability to attack the user. The user can also use this to stop a jutsu from executing correctly or at all.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: The user can't perform genjutsu the following turn, and cannot perform this for 3 turns.
Note: This can be used to help stop a jutsu from activation.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: The user can only use 1 other move this turn.

~ Approved ~

 

[Pervyy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fire style: gust of fire attack
rank: S
type: combo (wind/fire)
range: short - long
chakra: 60
damage: 100
description: The user focusses fire chakra into one hand whilst focussing wind chakra into the other, then the user claps there hands together making i giant gust of fiery wind combo, sending it at there opponent at high speeds.

Note: usable twice per battle

~ Declined ~

 

[~Kensei-kun~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

name:Raiton:Lightning Release: God of Lightning
rank:S
type:Attack/Supplementary
range:short
chakra:40
damage:80(+10 each lightning and water style attack after)
description:The user is struck by lightning and his surrounded by an aura of electricity that can stun an enemy at direct on contact.But is not as strong as the Raikages lightning armer
note:can only be used by Dauri
note:last 3 turns
note:can be used twice
~Declined~ How are you harnessing the natural lightning
name: (Raiton Katanas meiun)Lightning release: blades of doom
rank:Forbidden
type:Offense/Deffense
range:Mid
chakra:50
damage:90
description: Darui makes three Raiton blades that he can use to kill from the inside out.His blades enable him to miss with his opponents brain waves when he makes contact with his opponent or opponents.
note: can only be used by Dauri
note:last 3 turns
note: only used once
~Declined~ Just no

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Kiriteijou) - Water Release: Stationary Mist

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will add more water chakra to the mist already on the field. With this the user can add more intensity to the mist so that it can't be blown away by any wind jutsu
*Can be used three times per battle
*Can stand up to 3 attempts of been blown away with a wind jutsu each time it's used.

(Honeton: Hone Kubikiri Hōchō) - Bone Release: Bone Decapitating Carving Knife

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: After seeing Zabuza's sword, Heihachi found it very usefull so he made his own version of the sword, which is equal but it's completly made of bone and therefore much more resistant. It's only special abilitie is that the user can use bone jutsus with/from it since it's main purpose it's for silent killing.
*Useable twice per battle.

(Honeton: Hone Shuriken) - Bone Release: Bone Darts

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will fire a large number of small explosive "darts" from his body (elbows, hands, knees, feet, etc) with enough charge to demolish huge buildings. They dont exactly explode but the impact and shockwave released are so big it looked like they exploded. They look somewhat similar to an axe blade, but with an indention in the middle and they're shoot with greet speed, so great that the naked eye has difficulty keeping up with their movement.
*Useable three times per battle

(Honeton: Howaido Kenhou) - Bone Release: White Sword Gun

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user points out Hone Kubikiri Hōchō at the opponent and compresses the minerals on the sword, then shoots the tip of the blade with extreme force from the blade, leaving it with half it's size. Then he uses his bone KG to reconstruct the tip of the blade again.
*Useable twice per battle

Sorry for this post but I have already made a jutsu like

• (Suiton: Kiriteijou) - Water Release: Stationary Mist

 

[Faust]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Shippou Hane) - Silverwing

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Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Silverwing is a sword of mystery, made by the monks out of titan. The monks infused their power into the sword giving it many abilities, some of them are yet to be discovered.
Known abilities:

• Gives +20 damage to each lightning jutsu of the wielder.
• The opponents wind jutsu's lose -10 damage.
• The user can stab the sword into the ground and spread his wings letting him fly for 2 turns. User infuses the Silverwing's power and can fly up to 25m.
• Silverwing can be infused with lightning, letting the user swing it 2 times faster then normal and giving more speed to the user.
• The user can use silverwing's hidden ability: Demon's shield. The user raises Silverwing and a huge black ring of chakra surrounds the user protecting him from any up to A-rank attack.

*Silverwing can only be wielded by Faust.*
*After flying the user doesn't feel the ground and does everything slower.*
*Demon's shield can only be used once.*
*The sword can be infused with lightning twice and has greater speed when infused.*
*The wielder can't use any basic Ninjutsu/Genjutsu for 2 turns after using silverwing.*

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(It was pending, so I thought I need to re post it again...)
~Declined~ OP
(Doton: Kyokan Mukade)-Earth style: Giant Centipede

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After preforming the required hand seals the user will pick a spot anywhere on the ground and focus chakra on it. A huge centipede made from rock will emerge from that spot and lunge at a target with its jaws open. If the target is not quick enough, the centipede will capture in its jaws and a slam it back into the ground. Once the centipede hits the ground it will crumble.
*Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~Approved~
(Genjutsu: Hyoukai Jinniku)-Illusion Technique: Melting Flesh

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This will cause an opponent to feel and see the flesh on his bones slowly waste away. The look of this will cause tremendous fear and pain, rendering the enemy useless in combat.
*Note: Only 1 handseals is needed.
*Note: Can be used twice in battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~Declined~ add to the description, how long does this last?
(Fuuton: Kaze Kyodan)-Wind Style: Wind Missles

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Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: This jutsu sends highly long ranged, fast-paced wind missiles at the target. The user will send out five bursts of wind highly concentrated to a point. These are extremely sharp, fast paced, piercing blasts capable of piecing various defences, and even if they are dodged or blocked the shock wave they create, throw the opponent off balance. The user is able to guide these blasts slightly by holding the seal used to create them, however, they move so fast that often a slight turn in the missiles direction is all that can be made even at long distances. They are extremely hard to avoid because they are so fast.
*Note: Usable once per battle.
*Note: 5 missiles are created and they travel at great speed.
*Note: If the opponent tries to block this with a fire move, the fire is turned back with a boost.
*Note: Cause of the great chakra exhaustion the user cannot perform wind, genjutsu, ninjutsu for the next two turns.
*Note: If the wind is blocked, the opponent is thrown off balance cause of the great wind blast.
*Note: The missiles can be controlled only mid range by holding the seal used to create them.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~Declined~ If a fire move is used that is the same rank as this, than it would over power it not give yours a speed boost
(Katon: Shouten Kaen Tama)-Fire style: Focus Flame Shot

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Performing the first handseal and holding the second one for as long as they focus their fire chakra. Streams of heat will flow off the hands, as the user pushes their hands forward. Releasing a powerful fast flying shot of flame, so powerful that it is capable of leveling almost anything in its path.
*Note: Usable 2 times in battle.
*Note: Can overpower wind attacks up to S-rank.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~Declined~ OP and fire already beats any wind up to a rank and weakens s rank so it can't beat S rank if its an a rank

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninpo: Kiji Tenma no Jutsu) Ninja Art: Cloth Demon Technique

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 40
Description: the user takes out a scroll making a few hand seals to release a piece of the cloth attached at both ends demon windmill shuriken. The user will focus their chakra into the cloth and manipulate the cloth by performing a sort of dance where the cloth is shot at the opponent using the demon windmill shuriken and dealing heavy damage.
~Declined~ How can you control the cloth without any chakra strings?
(Heikou Ryou no Jutsu) – Balancing skill Technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their ears to help correct their balance when it is disrupted from a technique or disturbance of their balance.
~Pending~ Ask Rei if this is possible since she's the medical expert

(Ninpo: Kiji Tenma no Jutsu) Ninja Art: Cloth Demon Technique

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 40
Description: the user takes out a scroll making a few hand seals to release a piece of the cloth attached at both ends demon windmill shuriken. The user will focus their chakra into the cloth and manipulate the cloth by performing a sort of dance where the cloth is shot at the opponent using the demon windmill shuriken and dealing heavy damage.
~could be charged with lightening chakra to make the demon go even faster by only mentioning it
~ strings are connected.
~Declined~ How would you charge the cloth with lightning just by mentioning it?
(Heikou Ryou no Jutsu) – Balancing skill Technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their ears to help correct their balance when it is disrupted from a technique or disturbance of their balance.

Leaving this for Rei

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
Type-Summoning
Rank-S
Range-All
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
*Can only be Used By Icemyster*
*Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*

~ Needs restrictions ~

( Icemyster's giragira) Icemyster's Glare
Type-Attack
Rank-S
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user glares at the opponent, trapping them in this genjutsu(eye contact must be made,), once trapped the opponent begins to believe that their hands and feet have been frozen solid, and they are being encased in ice. Due to the genjutsu the opponent cannot make hand seals or run. Also, due to the strain on the user, he cannot perform any genjutsu for three turns.
*Can only Be used by Icemyster*
*Can only Be used once per Battle*

~ Explain in detail the time period for this effect to occur ~

( kazangan hane ) lava plume
Type-Attack
Range-Mid/long
Rank-S
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Description-
The User stomps on the ground, causing the earth in front of him to rise into the air, while gathering fire chakra in his lungs, then he expels the chakra in the form of a giant and intense fireball, that drags the earth along with it towards the opponent, turning into lava in the process. Due to the intensity the user cannot use any fire techniques for the next three turns without causing major damage to themselves.
*Can only be taught be icemyster*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
*Cannot be used the turn after used*

~ Declined, do not resubmit this ~

](Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
Type-Summoning
Rank-S
Range-All
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
*Can only be Used By Icemyster*
*Cannot use both effects. If chakra is given only C-rank and below genjutsu can be used*
*Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*

~ Needs more restricting ~

( Icemyster's giragira) Icemyster's Glare
Type-Attack
Rank-S
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user glares at the opponent, trapping them in this genjutsu(eye contact must be made for one half of a second), once trapped the opponent begins to believe that their hands and feet have been frozen solid, and they are being encased in ice. Due to the genjutsu the opponent cannot make hand seals or run. Also, due to the strain on the user, he cannot perform any genjutsu for three turns.
*Can only Be used by Icemyster*
*Can only Be used once per Battle*

~ Approved ~

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User will form one handseal, and by doing that handseal, a huge burning storm will form, heating up the sky for use for kirin, but also burning the opponent because of the raising tempature, and with another handseal, The user will be able to form a blast of heat to fall down directly to the opponent burning the opponent alive. The user will form two handseals making the firestorm end, and when it does, it will all seem to heat up the earth so any earth jutsus used using the earth will automatically turn on fire melting it. This also increases fire jutsus damage by +20, and water jutsus used that are b-rank and below, will create steam, blocking view, but any higher water jutsus used will create bigger steam but also cool down the heat, but also will not do as much damage, -20 Damage.
-After use, user can only use fire jutsus b-rank and down for two turns and then when using it again after 5 turns have past, User can only use b-rank fire jutsus for two turns again
-Can only use this twice per battle
-Using this a second time will make it even stronger
-After use the first time, User must wait 5 turns before using it again
-If raining, this won't work as well, and -10 in each effect

~ Declined , OPed ~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Sensory Shift
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user completely shuts off the use of one of their five senses and re-routes it to another. That sense has its ability increases tremendously.
Specific Senses
Sight
- The user gains the ability to see a much further distance as well as minute movements. A flinch, muscle twitch, weight shift or muscle tension can be seen.
Sound
- The user gains the ability to hear incredibly faint sounds. They can hear movement, breathing and even heart beats.
Touch
- The user becomes incredibly sensitive to vibrations such as those made by a person's movement or disruptions of wind patterns.
Smell
- The user's smelling ability grow to that of a nin-dog allowing them to track the movements of things through scent.
Taste
- The ability to taste is increased allowing the user to taste faint traces of things in the air.
Notes:
*Once a sense is shut off, it cannot be re-opened until the end of the technique.
*The improved sense is prone to overload.
*Lasts 3 turns.
*Can only be used twice.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Name: Heat-seeking Firebomb
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user gathers a large amount of fire chakra and released it into a small baseball sized ball of fire. This fireball then locks on to the enemy's heat signature and will follow the enemy's movements. At any point the user can click their teeth causing the fireball to explode with a force large enough to leave a crater with a 10 meter radius.
Notes:
*No other jutsu is usable while the fireball exists.
*If a large heat source is created between the target and the fireball the fireball will lock on to that heat source instead.
*Usable twice per match.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Name: Mud Beam
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user preforms a series of hand signs (length depends on user's rank) and stomps their foot next to a source of mud. The user then uses the mud to fire up to three beams of concentrated mud at their enemies. Due to being concentrated and travelling at high speeds these beams can pierce rock easily and cut through metal.
Notes:
*Must have a source of mud at at least short range.

~ Declined, Mud is a CE ~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

•Added More Restriction And Change Some Stuff

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Hitotsu Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: One-Tailed Shukaku Prison
• Type: Attack-Defense
• Rank: Forbidden
• Range: N/A
• Chakra cost: 50
• Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
• Description: When Garra transforms in the One-Tailed Shukaku, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of sand and wind in a huge and compresses ball,around the opponent,summoning etc.. In prison them in a sand with layers of wind chakra mix with the sand prison giving it a powerful defense to the sand prison.The attack behind this jutsu is that when Garra has in prison the enemies he will increase mass and compressed the prison enough making it explode.
•Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
•After used only Bijuu Style and Sand and Wind Release jutsus can be done
•A large sand source is required to use this jutsu.
•Shortens user’s lifespan
•Reduces bijuu mode by one turn

~ Shortens lifespan - explain ~

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Hitotsu Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: One-Tailed Shukaku
• Type: Attack-Defense
• Rank: Forbidden
• Range: N/A
• Chakra cost: 50
• Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
• Description: When Garra transforms in the One-Tailed Shukaku, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of sand and wind in a huge and compresses ball,in front of his mouth, then he will shoot it at the opponent. The user can make this ball to divide, transforming it into thousands of mini demon-sand balls. Any of the balls, the small or the big one, explode when the user wants to. If the big ball explodes, his strength is enough to blow up one entire village and turn it into a sad waste land, if someone touches the sand, even with the tip of his fingers, the demon chakra within it will burn the opponent’s arm. Same thing happens with the smaller balls, except the explosion each one does is smaller, but if they explode all at the same time, they do the same damages as the big one does. The user can freely control the smaller balls, but the big one can only be shoot forwards in a straight line.
•Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
•After used only Bijuu Style and Sand Release and Wind jutsus can be done
•Shortens user’s lifespan

~ Declined, OPed ~

(Sunaton: Suna Kankaku )-Sand Release: Sand Sense
•Type:Supplementary
•Rank:A
•RangeShort-Long
•Chakra Cost:30
•Damage Points:
•Description:The user of this jutsu will be able to detect the opponent, summonings etc.. vibrations through sand on top and bottom, sense there location and instantly know there location.
•Last for 4 turns
•Need a sand source is required to use this jutsu.

~ Approved ~

(Sunaton: Suna Bakuhatsu)-Sand Release: Sand Explosion
•Rank: S
•Type: Attack
•Range: All
•Chakra Cost: 40
•Damage Points: 80
•Description: After performing a single hand sign, any thing sad-related (jutsus, battlefield, etc) will instantly explode violently. The explosion is large enough to damage large summons and kill multiple enemies.
•Can only be used 3 times per battle.
•The user must wait one turn before they can use it again.
•No S-ranked sand jutsu in the next turn

~ Reduce strength of explosion ~

(Sunaton: Suna Katame)-Sand Release: Sand Hardening
•Rank: S
•Type: Supplementary
•Range: All
•Chakra Cost: 40
•Damage Points: N/A
•Description: The user will form a single hand sign and any sand jutsu or source will immediately harden. If the opponent has sand on them, it will harden as well. The opponent won't be able to move the part of their body that is covered in the hardened mud.
•The user does not need to have physical contact with the sand he/she wishes to harden.
•3 times per battle
•No S-ranked sand jutsu in the next turn

~ How much sand per use ? ~

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

fire style: fire fart (katon: kasai onara)
rank: forbidden
type: attack
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: upon entering flame on mode and the users entire body becomes flames the user can focus his chakra to his anus and let out a very powerful and damaging fart the fart smells so bad that someone who has enhanced smelling can literally die from the smell and a normal person will have blurred vision and be forced to stop whatever they are doing to cover their nose furthermore b/c the users body is fire from the users anus a HUGE wave of fire that travels very fast and gets an added bonus in damage (plus 20) do to the fart and plus 30 from flame on mode it can literally incinerate an opponent who gets caught in it
~once per battle
~must be in flame on mode
~the user has immense pain to his anus afterward and cannot focus for about 3 seconds
~does 20 damage to the user

~Declined~ Sorry but i can't possibly think of a way for this jutsu to be approved. every time i read it i just keep thinking no...sorry
the description is kinda what i mean so i didn't change it =/

fire style: fire explosion (katon: kasai ekusupuro-jon)
rank: forbidden
type: attack
range: short-mid
chakra: 20 (in flame on mode it is easier to preform fire jutsu therefor it takes less chakra)
damage: 80
description: once in flame on mode the user will focus his fire chakra throughout his body once done the user will erupt and spread everywhere his flames will completely incinerate anything they come in contact with
~once per battle
~the user reforms after usage
~30 damage to the user
~Declined~ add a time and touch restriction because you would need some time to build up the chakra and if you were to be touched it would cancel it. and remove the part in blue

summoning animals of storm (kuchitose ikimonos of suto-mu)
rank: S
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 40
damage: n/a
description: the user will bite his thumb and spread the blood along the side of his arm (tattoo) once done he will slam his hand on the ground and summon an animal of storm (hawk, tiger, lion, snake, monkey,) these animals are not actual animals with flesh and blood although they have a conscious the animals are made up of storm their bodies although a solid look as if on the inside there is a huge storm going on they are made up of lightning, rain, cloud, thunder, all things that involve a storm they can use lightning jutsu up to the A rank although this lightning is actual lightning not the chakra lightning (though it is not nearly as powerful it is still more powerful then average lightning)
~once per battle
~if the storm animals are cut 3 times they will go poof (xD)
~the user can use all lightning jutsu without hand signs while storm animals are on the field
~only one storm animal can be summoned
~the storm animals all have different sizes
hawk= same size as sasuke's hawk tiger= gamakichi lion= gamabunta = snake=manda monkey= enma
~this is a new contract with storm animals they are not one actual race of animals they are storm animals so no contract is needed with any animals listed above
~no lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle
~no wind or water jutsu the rest of the battle
~Declined~ Changed their usage rank but remove the part in blue

summoning animals of storm (kuchitose ikimonos of suto-mu)
rank: S
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 40
damage: n/a
description: the user will bite his thumb and spread the blood along the side of his arm (tattoo) once done he will slam his hand on the ground and summon an animal of storm (hawk, tiger, lion, snake, monkey,) these animals are not actual animals with flesh and blood although they have a conscious the animals are made up of storm their bodies although a solid look as if on the inside there is a huge storm going on they are made up of lightning, rain, cloud, thunder, all things that involve a storm they can use lightning jutsu up to the B rank although this lightning is actual lightning not the chakra lightning (though it is not nearly as powerful it is still more powerful then average lightning)
~once per battle
~if the storm animals are cut 3 times they will go poof (xD)
~only one storm animal can be summoned
~the storm animals all have different sizes
hawk= same size as sasuke's hawk tiger= gamakichi lion= gamabunta = snake=manda monkey= enma
~this is a new contract with storm animals they are not one actual race of animals they are storm animals so no contract is needed with any animals listed above
~no lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle
~no wind or water jutsu the rest of the battle

~ Do you have Storm Element ? Leaving this to Rag ~

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kyuusho Sukuro-ru Jutsu:Tensai Shippuu)-Secret Scroll Technique: Disastrous Hurricane
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range:Long
Chakra cost:60
Damage: 80
Description: The user Bites their thumb and the blood trickles out. He/She Spreads their blood across the scroll and the user forms a specific hand sign. A Hurricane shoots out of the scroll. the hurricane also has slicing winds capable of impaling the opponent and even the user of the Jutsu. The User can use the sharingan to control the hurricane.

*Note The user may not use Fuuton for 3 turns
* Hurricane lasts 3 turns
* Can only be used once per battle
* Can only be used by Minato.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 10 to user per turn )
Damage points: 80 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for two turns ( Clouds can also be used for kirin if user defines so ) or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The Dragon is so firm that user can fly with it all around the field. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for clouds due the ash that's raining
- Dragon lasts three turns as Clouds last two turns
- No S - Ranked Fire for next two turns
- Dragon can breath out cloud of smoke that will blind the enemy unless He/She has dojutsu.
- Dragon can use C - Ranked Fire attacks
- Costs 10 chakra per turn
~Declined~ Make it forbidden and remove the part in blue. Only Thunderclouds work for Kirin
( Fuuton: Hashira yari ) - Wind release: Pillar spears
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 to user when he/she uses the spear as weapon )
Damage points: 80
Description: User will send some of his wind chakra into sky and form out clouds. After the user has formed out clouds multiple Spears of wind will rain down at the opponent. Skilled opponent can see through this jutsu with or without any dojutsu. The landed spears will stay sticking out from the ground so they can be picked up and thrown at the opponent.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle
- Costs 5 chakra if spears are used as weapons
~Approved~

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( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 to user per turn )
Damage points: 100 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for two turns or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for clouds due the ash that's raining
- Dragon lasts three turns as Clouds last two turns
- No S - Ranked Fire for next two turns
- Costs 10 chakra per turn

~ What clouds ? ~


Custom weapon: ( Tai adomin/modere-ta sāberu ) - Anti admin/moderator Saber

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 15 to user when activated )
Description: Anti admin saber is legendary sword that's forged by the NB's by elders from fallen meteor into sword that's blade part glows red. The real powers of meteor are still unknown but it can easily slice through normal iron and steel.
Known abilities:

• Is able to weaken Narutobase's moderators and admins making them unable to use any dojutsu or Genjutsu attack when activated. ( With the expections of Kai )
• Can cut through normal Iron and steel.
• Saying words Anti admin powers activate will weaken admin's and moderator's attacks by - 5.
• It cannot be or wielded by anyone else expect the owner.
• The sword's indestructible ( That doesn't mean that It can cut through everything ).

Note:
- Causes - 15 damage to user when activated
- Costs - 10 chakra per every turn to user when activated
- User can't perform Genjutsu, Ninjutsu or Taijutsu for two turns after using this.
- Weakens admins and moderators.

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I'm dropping this weapon for teh sword:

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( Kuchiyose: Kougake no Armstrong ) Summoning technique: Gauntlets of Armstrong
Type: Summoning / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( + 5 to taijutsu and + 10 to lightning )
Description: User summons the gauntlets of legendary alchemist Alex Louis Armstrong ( AKA Strong arm alchemist ) of the Armstrong family. The gauntlets have Spikes on place of knuckles and Alchemical notes carved on the top to boost the Lightning attacks. When the gauntlets have activated they boost Taijutsu attacks + 5 and Lightning + 10. * Can be only used twice per battle and they last for five turns. Only myartisablast is able of teaching this summon and teach how to use these gauntlets. *
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~ Do you have another weapon except for this ? Tell me on a VM And this thing is anyway declined. Still, tell me on a VM~