[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Xylon]

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Fusion Swords
The Fusion Swords is a six-piece sword, having a interlocking mechanism, the 6 swords themselves serves a variety of purposes and comes in different shapes and sizes thus suited best weapon for different combat situations, when fused together the form a broad sword which in status surpass all the other component swords.
Main Blade;

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Also known as the 1st blade, resembles an exaggerated two-handed sword in its shape and appearance, despite its apparent size and weight. It consists of a long hilt wrapped in a red material, a distinctively large handguard which the other swords are locked into, a wide length of blade, and an equally long but thinner length ending in a point. The main blade is the only sword among the six that is double-sided. The main blade apparently has 2 different forms, One with the blade of the sword appearing to be one solid length of metal except for the transition between the wide and thin halves. In the second, the blade is pulled in two lengthwise; the edges are locked apart and a complex inner portion of the sword is visible.

Hollow Blade;

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The hollow blade does not have an inner core as the main blade sword. Rather, it is essentially (though not exactly) a thick sheet of metal folded in a V-shape when looked from above, the edge of the sword being the bottom point of the V, with its lower one-third of its length wrapping around a red double-hilt. The hollow blade is locked onto the front edge of the main blade, where it snugly covers that entire edge of the main blade, and its own edge serves as the striking point for the assembled sword.

Back Blades;

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The back blades are identical long swords, mirror images of each other, with one straight edge and one saw toothed edge, with a long black hilt for each. These two swords are attached to the back of the main blade, on both sides of the main blades back edge, with the saw-tooths pointed forward toward the hollow blade. The addition of these two swords completes the trapezoidal silhouette of the fusion swords.

Side Blades;

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The side blades are identical, mirror image dagger-like swords, though they are still quite long. They are singled edged, with a gear-like mechanism between the hilt and the blade that allow them to fold up like a switchblade. It is in this folded form that the two sides blades are locked onto the two sides of the assembled sword, with their edges turned forward toward the main blade at the front of the sword. In addition, one of the two blades can be quickly ejected from the assembly if needed. The side blade in unassembled form serves a projectile like purpose, if thrown away the can be controlled by the magnetic core of the 1st blade, to redirect them, though in a rough manner showing that the control over it is really weak and cannot always be count on.

Buster Sword;

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The fully assembled form of the fusion auxiliary blades, has the looks of a broad sword, The assembled form of the fusion swords is a heavy sword, most suited to crushing, and is not necessarily intended to serve the role of a slicing weapon as a nodachi would be. It is capable of being used for slicing, however being able to cleanly slice through rebar reinforced concrete with it. Although its appearance is as stout and sturdy, In overall when compared to the other swords, the buster is indestructible (literally or virtually), where destroying the other blades may seem easy, buster can completely resist out the pressure with its unique form, it space vacancies through out the fused blade though weakens the its offensive power, absorbs damage in critical situations.

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~ Weapon Approved ~

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(Ken Sen) Blade Beam
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user focuses his chakra through the 1st blade opening in its core (thus while the sword is open, see picture) and releases it as a destructive beam of white chakra. The point of the beam is shaped into the point of a blade and along the edges of the entire bleam smaller blades appear. These blades are long enough to make deep trenches in the earth along the course of the beam.

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*Must have Fusion Swords*
*Can only be used with the 1st Blade*
*Can only be taught by DS and Caliburn*

~ Needs restricting ~

Omni Slash (Omuni Kiritateru)
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (-15)
Description: The user releases Ken Ki, focuses a large amount of chakra into the Buster Blade and launches himself towards the opponent with it at an enormous speed. Just before reaching the opponent the user opens the side blades and swings the Buster Blade at the opponent. At this time the sword splits up and 5 swords surround the opponent in a circular formation while still holding the first sword. As a result of all the chakra that was infused in the sword, the swords keep hoovering around the opponent and are surrounded by the users chakra. After the first slash, with excellent timing and immense speed given by Ken Ki, the user attacks the opponent first with the Beam Blade, leaving after images and attacks the opponent once with every other sword, ending with blade beam again slashing him downwards to the ground, resulting in a 7 hit combo.
He attacks in straight lines: first he slashes with the first blade and appears at the second blade, grabs it and uses the chakra around the swords as a launching platform to shoot himself again towards the opponent, slashes him and grabs the next sword. This happens in total 7 times, however due to Ken Ki it happens all in only a few seconds and it seems the user is actually hoovering through the air without touching the ground.
Every time the user hits, chakra is released from the blade that explodes on contact

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*Must Have Fusion Swords*
*Can only be used with Buster sword*
*Must have released Ken Ki*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*The user takes -15 damage*
*Can only be thaught by Dark Sage and Caliburn*

~ Approved, very nice ~

Omni Slash of the War God (Omuni Kiritateru Henran Tentei)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120 (-20)
Description: A stronger version of the Omni Slash. The user releases Ken Ki, focuses an enormous amount of chakra into the Buster Sword and launches himself towards the opponent. He does one strike with the Buster Sword and the sword separates into 6 swords during it, all infused with chakra, that start to hoover around the opponent in a circular formation. The user goes from one sword to another and uses his own chakra, that is spread around the sword, as a launching platform without touching the ground and starts to slash the opponent 6 times.
However this time He does it again 6 times, using the speed of Ken Ki at its max, that it looks like he attacks 6 times at the same time with all six swords, leaving 6 after images. The user finishes by attacking from above one last time with the Beam Sword.
Every time the opponent is hit the chakra, that was infused in the sword, explodes on contact. Whatever is left is blasted to the ground with the final attack of the Beam Blade with a Blade Beam-like attack.

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*Must Have Fusion Swords*
*Can only be used with Buster sword*
*-20 damage to the user*
*The user can't use any forbidden-rank jutsu's next two turns*
*The user can't use any jutsu's with the Fusion Swords next two turns*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
*Can only be thaught by Dark Sage and Caliburn*

~ Declined ~

~i'd like the person checking these to check the sword related jutsus separately (ken ki is one of cali's modes if there's a problem identifying that), also i don't think there should be a problem with this since there is nothing much in this except the jutsu's(which will be submitted momentarily) and the special design which offers different valid techniques in the means of sword combat~

~ Do you have another weapon already ? Tell me on VM ~

 

[Artimis]

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(Magumaton:Makura kazangan)- Pillow lava
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate a special kind of lava from the ground; the lava is special because it appears to be a really big rock about one meter in diameter it is really soft just like a pillow and can be fired at the opponent once the lava pillow makes contact with anything it will explode causing the lava in side of it to be blow everywhere in short range of it.
Note: can be used 3 times in battle

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~ Pillow Lava is not soft O_O ~

 

[Lord of Kaos.]

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Summoning Wyverns: matari (kichiose no jutsu Wyverns: matari)
RAnk:S
RAnge:long-short
TYpe:supplementry
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description: the users summons a big wyvern with a wing spam of 10m and a lenght of 25m. THis wyver is a master of the wind element and can use wind element up to Arank. hE is very fast and can fly 300km/h. Also he is very swift and agile.his skin is made up of hard scales able to deflect most weapon hits. He has a great sense of smell and sound but not a very good eye sight. He is the boss of all wyverns and can use his high pitch sounds like a sonar to locate objects.
*can only be used by Rain of Hell

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Summoning Wyverns: Kosome (kichiose no jutsu Wyverns: Kosome)
RAnk:S
RAnge:long-short
TYpe:supplementry
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description: the users summons a big wyvern with a wing spam of 7m and a lenght of 17m. THis wyver is a master of the lightning element and can use lightning element up to Srank. hE is very fast and can fly 240km/h. Also he is very swift and agile.his skin is green and he can chage the tone of his skin color to hide himself. He has a great sense of smell and sound and a good eye sight. he can track objects up tp 100m away using his nose and he is very powerfull in combat.
*can only be used by Rain of Hell

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Summoning Wyverns: Prismatic (kichiose no jutsu Wyverns: Prismatic)
RAnk:S
RAnge:long-short
TYpe:supplementry
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description: the users summons a big wyvern with a wing spam of 8m and a lenght of 21m. THis wyver cant use any elements. hE is very fast and can fly 250km/h. Also he is very swift and agile.his skin is filled with crystals so his skin is hard and can deflect almost any blows also his wings and claws are made of crystals to so he can cut almost anything with his claws and wings. He can shoot the crystals in his body out of his mouth like projectiles. He has a great sense of sound and a good eye sight. He can use use his scales as a mirror to deflect sunlight and lightning jutsu below B rank.
*can only be used by Rain of Hell

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note: wyverns and dragons are very differant first wyverns are usually skinnyer.
second dragons have wings and arms but wyvers wings are his arms

~ Declined, do not resubmit. I do not want any arguments about this either. Come up with some other contract ~

 

[Icemyster]

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](Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
Type-Summoning
Rank-S
Range-All
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
*Can only be Used By Icemyster*
*Cannot use both effects. If chakra is given only C-rank and below genjutsu can be used*
*Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*

~ Needs more restricting ~

( Icemyster's giragira) Icemyster's Glare
Type-Attack
Rank-S
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user glares at the opponent, trapping them in this genjutsu(eye contact must be made for one half of a second), once trapped the opponent begins to believe that their hands and feet have been frozen solid, and they are being encased in ice. Due to the genjutsu the opponent cannot make hand seals or run. Also, due to the strain on the user, he cannot perform any genjutsu for three turns.
*Can only Be used by Icemyster*
*Can only Be used once per Battle*

~ Approved ~

]](Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
Type-Summoning
Rank-S
Range-All
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
*Can only be Used By Icemyster*
*Cannot use both effects. If chakra is given only C-rank and below genjutsu can be used*
*Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*
*Cannot be re-summoned*
*Will go away if genjutsu is performed successfully*

~ Approved ~

( Hyouton: hokkyokukou) Ice Release: aurora borealis
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short/Long
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description-
The user emits low amounts of raiton while controlling the moisture around him, the light from the raiton is refracted through the water molecules around the user, giving him a greenish glow that remains in the air even after the user has moved. After the user activates this(takes as long as the raikage's assault armor) he gains an extreme control of the ice around him, making him able to turn wind and water into ice by manipulating the molecules. With this effect he can create tendrils of extremely cold water and wind that turn into ice once then come into contact with a solid object. The glow will surround him like him like a biju's chakra does the jinchurikki. This cloak prevents the user from being hurt by wind, water, and ice justu by either turning them into ice or turning ice into water. The user may extend the tendrils(maximum of eight) to his opponent to hit them, and the ground the user walks on turns into ice. Lasts three turns. The user's speed is increased to that of the 5th gate while activated.

*Once Activated the user can only use ice and water jutsu*
*Once is over the user cannot move for one turn due to fatigue*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*The tendrils move extremely fast(only third tomoe and up can read)*
*After using the jutsu the user loses the ability to perform ice justu the rest of the battle*
*Can only be taught by icemyster*
*Cannot perform any summons after this justu is used*

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Geezus]

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Fuuton: Haipa-Tsue (Wind Style: Hypercane)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 60 (+50 from added elements)
Damage: 120 (-60 to user)
Description: The user preforms a long row of handseals, and fuses Wind, Water, Lightning, and Fire into the sky. By using fire, the user causes the sky to drastically heat up so that it cretes very dark clouds that cover the sky. Next, by manipulating Mass amounts of Wind Chakra, the user causes a giant funnel within the clouds causing them to whip around creating the Hypercane. This Hypercane moves at speed of up to 500mph and destroys anything in its path. Finally by adding both Lightning and Water elements into this jutsu the user creates a massive thunderstorm within the clouds. This Hurricane is so massive it can cover the whole arena, immediately.
(Usable Once)
(No Element Beside Earth Over B- rest of battle)

~ Declined, do not resubmit in any shape or form. ~

 

[Pain..]

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Bunshinjutsu (Clone Technique)

Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Bunshinjutsu are techniques that create a copy of the user. The standard Clone Technique is considered the most basic of basic ninjutsu. Despite this, bunshinjutsu are very versatile and useful.

~Very much DECLINED~ You do realize that this is just Kage Bunshin -_-

 

[Musashibo]

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50 (10 for a different chakra and 5 chakra to keep it the same type.)
Damage Points: Must be used in conjunction with Gentle fist style.(Gentle fist taijutsu damage + 5.)
Description: The user has this with him at all times. This weapon is made of metal and has multiple, hardly visible, holes throughout the club. With griped handles the user can use these Tonfa to defend and attack with ease. These Tonfa allow the user to manipulate chakra easier. Though it is hollow within, the user has no need to worry about the Tonfa being easily broken. The hollow inside and the small holes leading the the surface allow the user to insert and freely use chakra within them. This function can be used to make the Tonfa have fire/wind/lightning/earth/water chakra for 1 turn. The user must focus on 1 type of chakra each turn and in turn it costs energy to keep changing it. The user's chakra have the same weaknesses and strength's as the normal elemental chart. Lightning will shock the opponent (not stun or anything just damage lol), wind with cut, earth will provide more physical blunt damage, fire will burn the opponent, and water will deal water damage and can be used alone for supplementary use. Depending on the chakra type, the user will have different effects. If the fire chakra is within the Tonfa the user will deal 10 more damage with fire jutsu and 5 less damage with water jutsus. This weapon was created by weapon specialists in the Hyuga family trying to enhance their Gentle Fist style through weapons.

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Note: Only members of the Hyuga family can wield this pair of weapons.
Note: These are indestructible, but it can't destroy anything.
Note: User must specify in the beginning of their turn what chakra type it is.
Note: If the user starts with this at the beginning of the fight, then he is deducted 50 chakra + 10 if he chooses a chakra type as well. 10 chakra will also be used to switch form turn to turn. 5 chakra will be used if it is kept the same.
Note: If this weapon is used, the user can't use a different weapon throughout the battle.
Note: Only Musasibou can give/make these out.
Note: Gentle fist Taijutsu gained 5+ damage.

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Tell me if I need to add more restricts or change something. Please and thanks. ^^

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (plus 5 damage with shurikan/kunai)
Description: The user can make these sparrows for defense or for a projectile attack. Can also add shuriken/kunai for hidden extra damage. The user creates multiple medium sized swallows of condensed water surrounding him or her. Spiraling around him or her the swallows can protect him from fire jutsus in a sphere shape of defense. The user can then use them as a projectile by ordering them to attack the opponent. These swallows are very fast and can pierce through rock and trees.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Must specify if extra damage is used, if reaction time is allowed.
Note: Up to 5 Sparrows can be thrown at the opponent.
Note: User can't used another water jutsu this turn.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~ DO not deserve their ranks ~

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers chakra to create earth walls after slamming his foot to the ground and directing the chakra to it's desired location. The user can form walls of refined ores and rock from the earth's crust to make a highly dense prison. This can also be used as a shield or a 360 degree cover for the user. This shield/prison withstands up to A rank fire/wind/lightning, S rank Earth and Forbidden rank Water. When the targeted opponent is trapped the user will then clap his hands to crush the opponent.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: These walls are as tough as iron walls.
Note: The user can't perform earth jutsu next turn.
Note: The user can use this ore as earth material.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will grab two katanas and rush the opponent at high speeds. He will then use his chakra to slash and before it makes contact the sword seems to split into two. Making the opponent very confused and distracted from the real attack which is actually the other sword. The target is then slash horizontally and then stabbed in the chest with the next sword. This is possible with genjutsu making the swordsman be able to trick the opponent at critical times to get the upper hand. The target will become confused and distracted enough to be slashed by the other sword and then with good timing the swordsman can then stab the opponent for the finishing blow. This requires high genjutsu skill and swordsman skill to execute and can be done from left handed or right handed sides.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Does not require Infinite One-Sword Style Setup.
Note: Can't be performed with another Infinite One-Sword Style attack other than the setup.
Note: Must have 2 swords available.
Note: User can't use genjutsu next turn.

~ Needs to be limited to X number of times per battle ~

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will cast a genjutsu upon the target by touching contact (Hitting, blocking, ect...). Without realizing what is happening to the opponent the victim of this genjutsu will continue his actions, but start to feel sluggish. The opponent will begin to slow down to the point where he thinks he is stopped in place and the user is moving at lightning speed. The user will then have the ability to attack the user. The user can also use this to stop a jutsu from executing correctly or at all.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: The user can't perform genjutsu the following turn, and cannot perform this for 3 turns.
Note: This can be used to help stop a jutsu from activation.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: The user can only use 1 other move this turn.

~ Approved ~

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will grab two katanas and rush the opponent at high speeds. He will then use his chakra to slash and before it makes contact the sword seems to split into two. Making the opponent very confused and distracted from the real attack which is actually the other sword. The target is then slash horizontally and then stabbed in the chest with the next sword. This is possible with genjutsu making the swordsman be able to trick the opponent at critical times to get the upper hand. The target will become confused and distracted enough to be slashed by the other sword and then with good timing the swordsman can then stab the opponent for the finishing blow. This requires high genjutsu skill and swordsman skill to execute and can be done from left handed or right handed sides.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Does not require Infinite One-Sword Style Setup.
Note: Can't be performed with another Infinite One-Sword Style attack other than the setup.
Note: Must have 2 swords available.
Note: can be used 3 times per battle.
Note: User can't use genjutsu next turn.

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 for a different chakra and 5 chakra to keep it the same type.)
Damage Points: Must be used in conjunction with Gentle fist style.(Gentle fist taijutsu damage + 10.)
Description: The user has this with him at all times. This weapon is made of metal and has multiple, hardly visible, holes throughout the club. With griped handles the user can use these Tonfa to defend and attack with ease. These Tonfa allow the user to manipulate chakra easier. Though it is hollow within, the user has no need to worry about the Tonfa being easily broken. The hollow inside and the small holes leading the the surface allow the user to insert and freely use chakra within them. This function can be used to make the Tonfa have fire/wind/lightning/earth/water chakra for 1 turn. The user must focus on 1 type of chakra each turn and in turn it costs energy to keep changing it. The user's chakra have the same weaknesses and strength's as the normal elemental chart. Lightning will shock the opponent (not stun or anything just damage lol), wind with cut, earth will provide more physical blunt damage, fire will burn the opponent, and water will deal water damage and can be used alone for supplementary use. Depending on the chakra type, the user will have different effects. If the fire chakra is within the Tonfa the user will deal 10 more damage with fire jutsu and 5 less damage with water jutsus. This weapon was created by weapon specialists in the Hyuga family trying to enhance their Gentle Fist style through weapons.

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Note: Only members of the Hyuga family can wield this pair of weapons.
Note: These are indestructible, but it can't destroy anything.
Note: User must specify in the beginning of their turn what chakra type it is.
Note: If the user starts with this at the beginning of the fight, then he is deducted 40 chakra + 10 if he chooses a chakra type as well. 10 chakra will also be used to switch form turn to turn. 5 chakra will be used if it is kept the same.
Note: If this weapon is used, the user can't use a different weapon throughout the battle.
Note: Only Musasibou can give/make these out.
Note: Gentle fist Taijutsu gained 5+ damage.

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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (plus 5 damage with shurikan/kunai)
Description: The user can make these sparrows for defense or for a projectile attack. Can also add shuriken/kunai for hidden extra damage. The user creates multiple medium sized swallows of condensed water surrounding him or her. Spiraling around him or her the swallows can protect him from fire jutsus in a sphere shape of defense. The user can then use them as a projectile by ordering them to attack the opponent. These swallows are very fast and can pierce through rock and trees.

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Note: Only Musasibou can teach this.
Note: Must specify if extra damage is used, if reaction time is allowed.
Note: Up to 5 Sparrows can be thrown at the opponent.
Note: User can't used another water jutsu this turn.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

>.> I didn't know if you wanted me to edit that now so you can check it emperor. ;_; I really thought I put everything I needed to put on my CJs I submitted. Since your notes for my CJs seem kinda like you want me to edit them I did. If not then disregard this and i'll resubmit this next week. Since I got no more spots to resubmit this week.

Sorry for this post if I misunderstood.

~ Yes, resubmit next week ~

 

[~Kensei-kun~]

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嵐遁, Ranton:teikiatsu sumasshu (Storm Release:Cyclone Smash
Type:Offense
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra:60
Damage:90
Description:The user preforms hand signs then focuses on combining lightning water into both of there hands.The user fuses them together to make a storm style cyclone in the palm of there hand when it is released it grows in size and can devestate a landscape in seconds.

嵐遁, Ranton: tensai(Storm Release:Tusnami Disaster)
type: offense
Rank:S
Range:long
Chakra:60
Damage:80
Description:The user does handsigns and fires of lightning that flows like water (nature of storm release)that strikes an opponemt then combindes at a point into a tsunami.

~ Both Declined ~

 

[Chago]

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Sword Arts: Exploding Dance (Subeta gigei: kibaku Dansu)
Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Discription: The user infuses chakra to his/her sword and then stands with both feet far apart with the sword in both hands then the user does a 12 combo slash at the opponent in high speeds then the user relases the infused chakra of the blade and causes it to explode devastating the opponent.
(Note: can only be taught by chago.)
(Note: can only be used 3 times a battle.)
(Restriction: The user must have a sword in order to do this move.)
(Restriction: you have to wait at least two turns in order to reuse this jutsu.)


-Declined: There's no such thing as self exploding pure chakra-


Sword Arts: Flame Dance (Subeta gigei: honoo Dansu)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 60
Discription: The user infuses fire chakra to his/her blade then he/she will do a stand where both feet are close together and the user is holding his/her blade close to the eye kinda like riku's stands then the user will move in high speeds and do a series of 9 slashes at the opponent.
(Note: can only be taught by chago.)
(Note: can only be used 3 times a turn.)
(Restriction: The user must have a sword.)
(Restriciton: The user must have to wait 2 turns in order to re-do the jutsu.)


-Approved-

Sword Arts: Typhoon hit (subeta gigei: taifuu atari)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 60
Description: The user infuses a great amount of wind/water chakra to his/her sword then instantly throws it vertically creating a wheel of wind that devastates the opponent.
(Note: can only be taught by chago.)
(Note: can only be used twice in battle.)
(Restricion: must have a sword.)
(Restriciton: The user has to wait at least 3 turns to re-use.)


-Pending: why water? O_O-

Sword Arts: Exploding Dance (Subeta gigei: kibaku Dansu)
Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Discription: The user infuses chakra to his/her sword and then stands with both feet far apart with the sword in both hands then the user does a 12 combo slash at the opponent in high speeds then he/she throws 3 kunais with paper bombs at the opponent.
(Note: can only be taught by chago.)
(Note: can only be used 3 times a battle.)
(Restriction: The user must have a sword in order to do this move.)

~ Declined, does not deserve to be a jutsu ~

Dual Swords: The heavens and the Earth (dyuaru subeta Summin: za kyuuten za Doton)
Rank: S
Type: supplementary
Range: short/long
chakra cost: 40
Damage: none
Description: the user summons out two legendary deflecting/Offensive swords the heavens and the Earth the two swords are also linked to a chain of chakra done by the user and can be thrown at least 12 meters from the user.
(Dual Sword 1: the heavens) this sword has a dark handle with white stripes around it the handle also as a medal of the sky(heavens) symbol the steel of the sword is also white and the user can infuse chakra to this sword to create a barrier of chakra around the sword that blocks in coming lighting jutsu up to A rank.
(Dual Sword 2: the Earth) this sword also has a dark handle with white stripes around it the handle also has a medal of the earth symbol the steel of this sword is light blue and the user can infuse chakra to this sword to create a barrier of chakra around the sword that can block earth jutsu up to A rank.
(Note: can only be used by chago)
(Note: can only be used 3 times a battle.)
(Restriction: the user cannot use any jutsu in the same turn they have summon the dual swords.)
(Restriction: the swords last 4 turns.)
(Restriction: must wait at least 4 turns to re-do the jutsu.)

~ Declined ~

Sword Arts: Typhoon hit (subeta gigei: taifuu atari)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 60
Description: The user infuses a great amount of wind chakra to his/her sword then instantly throws it vertically creating a wheel of wind that devastates the opponent.
(Note: can only be taught by chago.)
(Note: can only be used twice in battle.)
(Restricion: must have a sword.)
(Restriciton: The user has to wait at least 3 turns to re-use.)

~ Wrong Details ~

woops sorry I meant only wind haha

 

[Smoker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Raiton : Guburos No Raikou - Lightning Release : Gloves Of Lightning
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User Will Concetrate Their Chakra At Their Hands And Raise Them At Air , Then Bolt Of Lightning Will Hit Their Hands And Then Lightning Will Form Shape Of Gloves At Their Hands .

- Only I Can Use This Jutsu -
- If Some One Steals These They Will Disappear -
- Causes 15 + Damage Due The Lightning Bolt -
- Costs 5 Chakra Per Turn -
- Lasts 4 Turns -
- Gloves Boost 5 + Lightning Damage To 3 Lightning Attacks Used After This -

~ Approved ~

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon/Kenjutsu: Bara Fo-Me-Shon)- Fire/Sword Release: Rose Formation
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will focus fire chakra throughout there sword, activating the rose formation, activation rose formation will mean when using sword or fire jutsus, they will be more sweet, and loved, and meaning, the opponent won't find the reason to attack, and so the user will be able to attack more easily, if the opponent is over jounin rank, this won't effect them as much, and will use only b-rank jutsus and below on the the user, if the opponent is a kage, the opponent will find to only use s-rank and below. Any higher and the opponent willl find no struggle.

In the rose formation, the user is also more elegant, and is known as a Red Red Rose.
-The Rose Formation is in effect for 6 turns
-After use the user will have less fire chakra, and strength for sword and fire jutsus, so b-rank and down use for both after 6 turns.
-Taught by Sin only

~ WTH ? O_O Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

•Added More Restriction And Change Some Stuff

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Hitotsu Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: One-Tailed Shukaku Prison
• Type: Attack-Defense
• Rank: Forbidden
• Range: N/A
• Chakra cost: 50
• Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
• Description: When Garra transforms in the One-Tailed Shukaku, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of sand and wind in a huge and compresses ball,around the opponent,summoning etc.. In prison them in a sand with layers of wind chakra mix with the sand prison giving it a powerful defense to the sand prison.The attack behind this jutsu is that when Garra has in prison the enemies he will increase mass and compressed the prison enough making it explode.
•Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
•After used only Bijuu Style and Sand and Wind Release jutsus can be done
•A large sand source is required to use this jutsu.
•Shortens user’s lifespan
•Reduces bijuu mode by one turn

~ Shortens lifespan - explain ~

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Hitotsu Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: One-Tailed Shukaku
• Type: Attack-Defense
• Rank: Forbidden
• Range: N/A
• Chakra cost: 50
• Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
• Description: When Garra transforms in the One-Tailed Shukaku, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of sand and wind in a huge and compresses ball,in front of his mouth, then he will shoot it at the opponent. The user can make this ball to divide, transforming it into thousands of mini demon-sand balls. Any of the balls, the small or the big one, explode when the user wants to. If the big ball explodes, his strength is enough to blow up one entire village and turn it into a sad waste land, if someone touches the sand, even with the tip of his fingers, the demon chakra within it will burn the opponent’s arm. Same thing happens with the smaller balls, except the explosion each one does is smaller, but if they explode all at the same time, they do the same damages as the big one does. The user can freely control the smaller balls, but the big one can only be shoot forwards in a straight line.
•Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
•After used only Bijuu Style and Sand Release and Wind jutsus can be done
•Shortens user’s lifespan

~ Declined, OPed ~

(Sunaton: Suna Kankaku )-Sand Release: Sand Sense
•Type:Supplementary
•Rank:A
•RangeShort-Long
•Chakra Cost:30
•Damage Points:
•Description:The user of this jutsu will be able to detect the opponent, summonings etc.. vibrations through sand on top and bottom, sense there location and instantly know there location.
•Last for 4 turns
•Need a sand source is required to use this jutsu.

~ Approved ~

(Sunaton: Suna Bakuhatsu)-Sand Release: Sand Explosion
•Rank: S
•Type: Attack
•Range: All
•Chakra Cost: 40
•Damage Points: 80
•Description: After performing a single hand sign, any thing sad-related (jutsus, battlefield, etc) will instantly explode violently. The explosion is large enough to damage large summons and kill multiple enemies.
•Can only be used 3 times per battle.
•The user must wait one turn before they can use it again.
•No S-ranked sand jutsu in the next turn

~ Reduce strength of explosion ~

(Sunaton: Suna Katame)-Sand Release: Sand Hardening
•Rank: S
•Type: Supplementary
•Range: All
•Chakra Cost: 40
•Damage Points: N/A
•Description: The user will form a single hand sign and any sand jutsu or source will immediately harden. If the opponent has sand on them, it will harden as well. The opponent won't be able to move the part of their body that is covered in the hardened mud.
•The user does not need to have physical contact with the sand he/she wishes to harden.
•3 times per battle
•No S-ranked sand jutsu in the next turn

~ How much sand per use ? ~

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Hitotsu Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: One-Tailed Shukaku Prison
• Type: Attack-Defense
• Rank: Forbidden
• Range: N/A
• Chakra cost: 50
• Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
• Description: When Garra transforms in the One-Tailed Shukaku, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of sand and wind in a huge and compresses ball,around the opponent,summoning etc.. In prison them in a sand with layers of wind chakra mix with the sand prison giving it a powerful defense to the sand prison.The attack behind this jutsu is that when Garra has in prison the enemies he will increase mass and compressed the prison enough making it explode.
•Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
•After used only Bijuu Style and Sand and Wind Release jutsus can be done
•A large sand source is required to use this jutsu.
•User take damage +10
•Reduces bijuu mode by one turn

~ Approved ~
explain: It's just another way of saying user take damage from using this jutsu

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Hitotsu Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: One-Tailed Shukaku
• Type: Attack-Defense
• Rank: Forbidden
• Range: N/A
• Chakra cost: 50
• Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
• Description: When Garra transforms in the One-Tailed Shukaku, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of sand and wind in a huge and compresses ball,in front of his mouth, then he will shoot it at the opponent. The user can make this ball to divide, transforming it into thousands of mini demon-sand balls. Any of the balls, the small or the big one, explode when the user wants to. If the big ball explodes, his strength is enough to blow up one entire village and turn it into a sad waste land, if someone touches the sand, even with the tip of his fingers, the demon chakra within it will burn the opponent’s arm. Same thing happens with the smaller balls, except the explosion each one does is smaller, but if they explode all at the same time, they do the same damages as the big one does. The user can freely control the smaller balls, but the big one can only be shoot forwards in a straight line.
•Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
•After used only Bijuu Style and Sand Release and Wind jutsus can be done
•Shortens user’s lifespan

??? Warth has this same jutus but another than using sand it's lave which is way more powerful than sand

~ Idc; this is declined, do not resubmit ~

(Sunaton: Suna Bakuhatsu)-Sand Release: Sand Explosion
•Rank: S
•Type: Attack
•Range: All
•Chakra Cost: 40
•Damage Points: 80
•Description: After performing a single hand sign, any thing sad-related (jutsus, battlefield, etc) will instantly explode violently (whatever the user wish to explode). The explosion is large enough to damage medium size summons and kill multiple enemies.
•Can only be used 3 times per battle.
•The user must wait one turn before they can use it again.
•No S-ranked sand jutsu in the next turn

~ Approved ~
Also I have this jutsu approve but with using mud another than sand

(Sunaton: Suna Katame)-Sand Release: Sand Hardening
•Rank: S
•Type: Supplementary
•Range: All
•Chakra Cost: 40
•Damage Points: N/A
•Description: The user will form a single hand sign and any sand jutsu or source will immediately harden. If the opponent has sand on them, it will harden as well. The opponent won't be able to move the part of their body that is covered in the hardened mud.
•The user does not need to have physical contact with the sand he/she wishes to harden.
•3 times per battle
•No S-ranked sand jutsu in the next turn

~ Approved ~
How much sand per use ? : Don't get what your saying..but anything that has sand on it harden, (anything the user wish to harden)

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 to user per turn )
Damage points: 100 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for two turns or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for clouds due the ash that's raining
- Dragon lasts three turns as Clouds last two turns
- No S - Ranked Fire for next two turns
- Costs 10 chakra per turn

~ What clouds ? ~


Custom weapon: ( Tai adomin/modere-ta sāberu ) - Anti admin/moderator Saber

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 15 to user when activated )
Description: Anti admin saber is legendary sword that's forged by the NB's by elders from fallen meteor into sword that's blade part glows red. The real powers of meteor are still unknown but it can easily slice through normal iron and steel.
Known abilities:

• Is able to weaken Narutobase's moderators and admins making them unable to use any dojutsu or Genjutsu attack when activated. ( With the expections of Kai )
• Can cut through normal Iron and steel.
• Saying words Anti admin powers activate will weaken admin's and moderator's attacks by - 5.
• It cannot be or wielded by anyone else expect the owner.
• The sword's indestructible ( That doesn't mean that It can cut through everything ).

Note:
- Causes - 15 damage to user when activated
- Costs - 10 chakra per every turn to user when activated
- User can't perform Genjutsu, Ninjutsu or Taijutsu for two turns after using this.
- Weakens admins and moderators.

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I'm dropping this weapon for teh sword:

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( Kuchiyose: Kougake no Armstrong ) Summoning technique: Gauntlets of Armstrong
Type: Summoning / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( + 5 to taijutsu and + 10 to lightning )
Description: User summons the gauntlets of legendary alchemist Alex Louis Armstrong ( AKA Strong arm alchemist ) of the Armstrong family. The gauntlets have Spikes on place of knuckles and Alchemical notes carved on the top to boost the Lightning attacks. When the gauntlets have activated they boost Taijutsu attacks + 5 and Lightning + 10. * Can be only used twice per battle and they last for five turns. Only myartisablast is able of teaching this summon and teach how to use these gauntlets. *
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~ Do you have another weapon except for this ? Tell me on a VM And this thing is anyway declined. Still, tell me on a VM~

Custom weapon: ( Sāberu no Darth Tobz ) - Saber of Darth Tobz

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 20 to user when activated )
Description: Anti admin saber is legendary sword that's forged by the NB's by elders from fallen meteor into sword that's blade part glows red. After being forged the NB's Noobs gathered to infuse their noobness power into the sword making it to absorb epicness of some admins and moderators. The real powers of meteor are still unknown but it can easily slice through normal iron and steel.
Known abilities:

• Can cut through normal Iron and steel.
• Saying word Activate will cause it to weaken possible admin/moderator
• It cannot be or wielded by anyone else expect the owner.
• The sword's indestructible ( That doesn't mean that It can destroy anything ).
• Chakra can be guided into this sword making it have the affinities of that element.

Note:
- Causes - 15 damage to user when activated
- Costs - 10 chakra per every turn to user when activated
- User can't perform Genjutsu, Ninjutsu or Taijutsu for two turns after using this.
- Weakens only Nexus and Kaito making them unable to use dojutsu.

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~ Declined; Much as I would like to see Kaito and Nexus fail, I cannot approve this. DO NOT Resubmit, else infraction. -_-" ~

( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 to user per turn )
Damage points: 100 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for two turns or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for explosion at sky due the ash that's raining
- Dragon lasts three turns.
- No Forbidden - Ranked fire for next two turns.
- Costs 10 chakra per turn

~ Rain cannot occur for two turns, that is too much ~

( Genjutsu: Suishō senmei hibiki ) - Illusion technique: Crystal clear Echo

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 40 ( - 10 to user )
Description: User will draw out two Kunais and infuse chakra into them making them to form Tuning fork. After it when the kunais are chakra infused the user will hit these kunais together emitting Crystal clear chakra infused sound wave at target(s). When the sound wave will reach target(s) it will cause their eardrums to shatter and confuse the balance organ making the target's world to start shake while target(s) is/are deaf as their brains register information about echoes that they hear.

• Can be used only once.
• User can't perform Genjutsu for two turns afterwards.
• Confuse of balance organ lasts one turn as deafness lasts four turns.
• Causes - 10 damage to user.
• After the kunais are transformed into tuning fork they're no longer use in battle

~ This sounds like Sound Element. Do you know it ? If not, Declined, and do not resubmit. If yes, Approved. ~

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Ta-Ru Iten) Earth: Tar Demise
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After using Swamp of the Underworld(both these jutsu can be used simultaneously), the user combines their earth chakra with the tar and the tar begins to spin uncontrollably and quickly turns into a large whirlpool underneath the opponent and immedately drags the opponent underground into the swamp and suffocates them.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~ Approved ~

(Fuuton: Tandai Kaze) Wind: Heavy Breeze
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user cause the wind around the opponent to become very dense and heavy and surrounds the opponent making them unable to move, due to the immense pressure of the wind around them. As the wind surrounds the opponent it also cuts them to pieces.
~Once per battle and Wind jutsus cannot be used on the next turn.

~ Declined; jutsu exists ~

(Enjin Yarikata: Shukyou Henkai) Gorrila Mode: Primate Transformations
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Affects the user
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: None(-50 to the user once finished)(+40 to each one of the user attacks)
Description: The user must have signed the contract of the gorrilas to use this jutsu. The user will first complete a series of hand seals that are required for the gorrila summoning and then instead of placing their hands on the ground to summon a gorrila, they will bring their hands together and begin focusing their chakra and drawing power from the gorrilas. The user will draw power from the gorrilas and begin to transform into a large gorrila quarter the size of Gamabunta, the user will gain immense strength and endurance but their speed decreases and thus can only user 2 jutsus per turn, the user will last in this mode for 1 turn. After that turn is over the user chakra will begin to dramatically increases as they begin to glow yellow and shirnk in size back to their oringinal size, they will now have thick reddish brown hair on their chest area, have biggers muscles like primates, and a tail. The user now can use 3 jutsus per turn again, has increased chakra as they draw even more power from the gorrilas making their jutsus more powerful, more strength, increased endurance, and the surplus of chakra that goes into their muscles allows them to travel at speeds up to the 5th gate, the user can remain in this form for 4 turns.
~This jutsu can only be used once per battle.
~After the jutsu ends the user will completely drained of all chakra reserves in their body and will be unable to move until 3 turns after this jutsu ends.
~The user cannot use jutsus that are S-rank or higher for 5 turns.
~The user cannot summon any gorrilas after this jutsu is over.

~ Declined, OPed ~

 

[Caliburn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The first thing the user does is rotating a part of his body by using one of his legs as a post while the other one rotates backwards in a circle motion (compare it to a compasses). This way the user can avoid thrusts completely and he can postpone the moment a horizontal slash would hit him (he can't dodge that one). Either way the user turns one of his shoulders 90? backwards, which gives the ideal stance for the attack: The user holds in each hand a sword horizontally, however with a reversed handgrip. One hand is positioned at the users hip, while the other one is positioned just above the head.
Then when the opponents attack is avoided or postponed, the user brings the upper sword down and the lower sword up like a double guillotine untill the users both arms are completely stretched (the lower is now up and vice versa). This way the user can cut of an entire arm, make the opponent drop his sword or even cut half his head off.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*If the user can use the Santoryu-style, he can place a third sword in his mouth, creating a triple guillotine which adds +10 damage*

Position of the swords before the strike:

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user crosses his two swords across his chest upwards. Then the user focuses katon based chakra into his feet to heet up the space around him, making him and his swords look bending or waving (that effect you see when it's extremely hot). This results in making it extremely difficult to block/avoid the attack as you can't really see it well (unless Byakugan/Sharingan).
After that the user uses the same chakra in his feet to give him a speed-boost, he catapults himself forwards and attacks the target by swinging the swords across his chest, resulting in a descending flat diagonal-crossing slash from both swords while the swords are twisted during the slash for added force, ending in a position with the stretched arms and the swords point forwards behind the opponent. The attack is strong enough to break through opponents thrusts and it can attack multiple targets at the same time.
When used with Yubashiri, due to the friction of the swords and Yubashiri being very flammable, the swords get on fire, increasing the damage with +10 (doesn't count as a fire jutsu) or with a normal sword katon-chakra can be infused with it as you already were doing that to give yourself a boost (in this case it counts as a fire jutsu) and it is called Yaki Oni Giri - Burning Demon Slash -
As last the move can also be done without first making heat, thus making the user attack a bit sooner. Though it will not have any effect on the damage, in this case it's called Oni Giri - Demon Slash -


*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
*The fire-combo (with Yubashiri or a normal sword) can only be done once per battle*
*If the user can use the Santoryu-style, he can place a third sword in his mouth, creating a third slash on top of the other two at the same time and adds +10 damage*

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defence at the same time
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120 (-20)
Description: This is the ultimate and strongest technique of the Santoryu-style. The user grabs his sword with his left hand in a reversed handgrip and points the tip of the blade diagonally down to the right. The user grabs with his right also a sword with a normal handgrip, points the tip of the blade diagonally up to the right and places the end of the handle at the guard of the other sword, making the hands of the user be close together.
After that the user quickly starts spinning both swords. The one the left counterclockwise, while the one the right clockwise which results in giving the swords extreme momentum.
After that the user goes at max speed (chakra in the feet) towards the opponent (or if the opponent attacks he just steps forwards). The spinning blades can nearly nulify/destroy any incoming sword-based attack and when the user is close at the opponent he makes two incredibly powerful horizontal slashes, using the momentum of the spins. As last, by holding a sword in his mouth, the user can do one more horizontal slash to finish just after the two other slashes and he ends behind the opponent.
It can be used as a defence against jutsu's due to the extreme spinning motion, however it depends on the type and nature of the jutsu (FE it will not defend against a jutsu that attacks the user from all sides).

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used when learned the Santoryu-style*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*User takes -20 damage due to the strain on the body*
*When combined with Butai Kyuuen the added strenght will be +40 instead of 20 as the spinning motion creates an enormous blaze of the used element. It will however backfire giving the user another -20 damage + Butai Kyuuen can't be used anymore for 4 turns*

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Leaving for Roku

Don't forget about these :T_T:

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Bone Animal Instincts (Hone Ikimono Insutinkuto)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates his calcium within his bones to change the skeletal structure of his body to mimic the structure of any animal with a backbone, such as an wolf, monkey, tiger, etc. The user gains a increase in either strength, speed, or agility depending on the animal he “becomes.” While having the skeletal structure of an animal, the user can only use taijutsu. Lasts at most three turns. Can only be used twice a battle. The user can revert his skeleton back to human structure whenever he needs to but most re-perform the jutsu to turn his skeletal structure back into an animal
Note: The only animals the user can “turn” into are primates, felines, wolves/foxes/dog/other animal such as those two, and bears.
When the skeletal structure is of those animals, the user gains a small increase in regards to the animals: primates-increased flexibility and agility; felines-increased speed; canines- + 5 to all taijutsu and small increase in speed; bears- + 15 to all taijutsu attacks.

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to anyone who checks the above jutsu: This may seem OPed but if one were to really think about it, Kaguya's can manipulate their bone structure to make anything out of the bones (like the bone field that Kimimaro made against rock lee) so merely changing them to mimic those of an animal makes since in a way.

~ Approved ~

Name: Spinning Bombardment
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40 (-20 to the user)
Description: The user opens the 5th gate and launches at the enemy at extreme speeds, and, bombards the enemy with several kicks and punches, leading to a blade-kick into the air. The user then jumps into the air, connecting a spinning leg kick to the enemy, hitting several times, and kicks them higher in the air, setting up for a possible further combination of attacks.
*Requirement: 5th gate open*

~ Declined ~

Doton: Ro-ma Koroshiamu (Earth Style: Rome’s Coliseum)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes a large dome surrounding him and the opponent, creating a coliseum of sorts. The only way out of the dome is to use certain S-rank and above lightning. The dome cancels out all light, leaving it completely dark inside it.
*the dome last for the whole battle until destroyed with S-rank lightning*
*can only be used once*

~ Approved ~

Doton: Korandamu Panteon no Kamigami (Earth Style: Corundum Pantheon of the Gods)
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user uses his Earth Chakra to extract Aluminum and create a dome around me as one of his clones uses his wind as the shield is forming to make Aluminum Oxide in a solid state known as Corundum. It is impenetrable except for A-Forbidden rank Lightning Jutsu's because of elemental combination.
Note: Can only be used 2 times in a battle
*must have used Shadow Clone jutsu before hand*

~ Declined; DO NOT resubmit anything using Corundum or any other specific mineral ~

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Water Style; Infinite Dragons Rampage (Suiton; Mugenkyaku Abaremawaru)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-Long
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; A stronger version of Water Dragon Bullet, the technique requires the user to perform a set of 120 hand seals, whilst the users performing the hand seals, water from nowhere and all sources starts to gather around the user in circular manner surrounding and protection him from incoming attacks, once done the user release a barrage of dragon bullets towards the target which rampage all around the battle field changing its shape, the technique is highly difficult to avoid because of the infinite amount of dragons the users controlling but is balanced with the insane amount of hand seals it consumes.
Note; Usable twice in a battle.
-Does 10 damage and causes fatigue to the user.
-No water jutsu’s until next turn.

~ How long do these bullets rampage ? ~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fire Style; Flame Emperor (Katon; Entei)
Rank; Forbidden
Type; Attack
Range; Short-Long
Chakra Cost; 60
Damage points; 100 (25 to the user)
Description; The user release huge amounts of flame from his body in a wave like manner spiraling around centering him, he then amasses it at focused point and creates huge Fire ball solidifying it turning it into a small sun in the users hand, when the attack is thrown at its target it engulfs the entire area in flames incinerating and obliterating everything inside being able to consume anything within a 5 km range.
Note; -Usable once in a battle.
-Does 25 damage to the user.
-No Forbiddens in the next turn
-No fire release or related CE?s the following and next turn.

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Ace already made that jutsu =/

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Speed rave (Issanniushi)
Rank; A
Type; Supplementary
Range; Short-Long
Chakra cost; 30
Damage points; N/a
Description; A sword fighting style that puts a large emphasis on overwhelming enemies with wide-ranged, speed-based combos. The user draws near large amounts ki from objects everywhere and utalizes it all to mainly increase his speed, the magnitude of the ki slightly levitates the user above ground. The mode is wideranged and speed is particularly raised upto these basis, the user will require a wide area to move at, attacking from different directions.
Note; Last 3 turn after activated

|| Declined || Like i said you can't do such things, taking the ki from objects is just insane

Speed rave (Issanniushi)
Rank; A
Type; Supplementary
Range; Short-Long
Chakra cost; 30
Damage points; N/a
Description; A sword fighting style that puts a large emphasis on overwhelming enemies with wide-ranged, speed-based combos. The user releases large amounts ki from his body and utilizes it all to mainly increase his speed, the magnitude of the ki slightly levitates the user above ground. The mode is wideranged and speed is particularly raised upto these basis, the user will require a wide area to move at, attacking from different directions.
Note; Last 3 turn after activated
Note; Only usable 2 times per battle

~Edited the draawing of ki part to the use of own ki~

~ Leaving to Rei ~
-Approved with the added restriction; else just delete it-

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ace already made that jutsu =/

really i'l remove it then