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(Gama Sekiyu Honoo Bakudan) - Toad Oil Flame Bomb
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: When the User Summons a Toad, that Toad Spits out and Enourmous Amount of Oil from His/Her Mouth. The user Uses a fire jutsu to set the Oil on Fire causing a Big Explosion.This Explosion is So great that it can incinerate a nearby forest containing about 50 trees tops.

Note: Can only be used 2 Time during a match.
Note: After the attack has been used the user can only use A Rank or lower fire Jutsu for One turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Minato
~already exist~
 
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(Kirigakure Genkaku no Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Hallucination Technique
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Description: The user manipulates the small parts of H2O, that are concentrated in the mist, to create images, of strange creatures in the mist. The creatures attack the enemies that are within the mist, and though being harmless, they create mental shocks and make the enemies strike the mist for pure fear. This technique can only be used when the "Kirigakure no Jutsu" was already done. The jutsu leaves the victims in confusion.
*Note:Can only be used by Momochi Zabuza.*
~declined~
similar o my jutsu


(Kirigakure Shuuchuu no Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Focusing Technique
Type:Supplementary/Defence
Rank:A
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Description:The user manipulates the small parts of H2O, that are concentrated in the mist, and concentrates(focuses) them in one point. The user can make so, invisible walls, steps on the floor, and pointed objects. The enemy so trips over steps, get's stabed by sharp concentrated mist and walks directly in mist walls. The walls can defend from minor attacks too, and the pointed objects do some minor damage.This technique can only be used when the "Kirigakure no Jutsu" was already done. The jutsu leaves the victims in confusion.
*Note:Can only be used by Momochi Zabuza.*
~approved~

(Kirigakure no Shiagari) - Hidden Mist Cancel
Type:Supplementary/Defence
Rank: C
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Description: The user makes one Handseal(Ox), and makes the mist disappear.
*Note:Can only be used by members of the Hidden Mist Village.*
~declined~
 
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(Amatsu Ryy Kujiku) – Heavonly Dragon Crush

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:
Description: The user charges their legs with lightning chakra whilst jumping high into the air and then using the light to act as a blinding against the opponent and making the users movements hard to predict the user then comes crashing down striking the enemies shoulders with their legs and crashing them into the ground whilst discharging the lightning chakra into the opponents body and making them numb.

Note: Numbing lasts 1 turn
Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can only be Taught by Hazure.

*limit twice per battle*
(Amatsu Ryy Kujiku) – Heavonly Dragon Crush

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:
Description: The user charges their legs with lightning chakra whilst jumping high into the air and then using the light to act as a blinding against the opponent and making the users movements hard to predict the user then comes crashing down striking the enemies shoulders with their legs and crashing them into the ground whilst discharging the lightning chakra into the opponents body and making them numb.

Note: Numbing lasts 1 turn
Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: Can only be Taught by Hazure.
~approved~
 
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(Katon:Kuroi Honoo Kaisari)- Black Flame Kaisari
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will hold Kaisari and release fire chakra into Kaisari, which builds up black flames and make black flames surround Kaisari. Kaisari can defend the user from b-rank fire attacks and c-rank water attacks. Kaisari can also stretch into a medium sized pole of black flames, it can be used as a vault. Kaisari can also release beams of fire which count as a move.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: This is mode 1 of Kaisari's Special Abilities
Note: Must be given Kaisari by -+Izure+- or be given a sword similer to kaisari.

Grimm or Roku should check
I am lost O_O sin, pm the details about this jutsu and kaisari
(Katon:Go-Ruden Honoo Kaisari)- Golden Flame Kaisari
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will hold Kaisari and release fire chakra into Kaisari, which builds up black flames and make golden flames surround Kaisari. Kaisari can defend the user from b-rank fire attacks and c-rank water attacks. Kaisari can also stretch into a medium sized pole of gold flames, it can be used as a vault. Kaisari can also release beams of fire which count as a move.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: This is mode 1 of Kaisari's Special Abilities
Note: Must be given Kaisari by -+Izure+- or be given a sword similer to kaisari.
Note: The golden flames are partly yin and yang (which I'm getting trained in)

I also have a custom on page 30, that needs checked, so yeah
~approved~
 
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(Satetsu: Raiton bou)-Iron sand style: lighting rod
Type:supplementry
Rank:S
Range:short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:-
Description: The user makes several large metal rods around the terrian, The user then Charges the lighting rods with postive and negative electricity. Gives them the ability to attract upto and including S rank lighting jutsu's, of the user and the oppenent and be conducted harmlessly into the ground,
Note:
can only be user twice per battle.
must be the 3rd kazekage to use

Approved


(Satetsu: airon toride)-Iron sand style: iron fortess
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defence
Range: self
Chakra Cost:60
Damage Points: -15 from the user due to the amount of chakra used
Description: After form the need hands seals the user will erect a fortress of iron sand around the user to project them, the user massively compresses the iron sand together make it inpenetrable and indestructible.
notes:
last 1 turn and then turns back to iron sand
only be used twice per batle
No iron sand jutsu the next turn
Can only be used after (Satetsu soushi)- iron sand creation
Must be the 3rd kazekage to use

Declined

(Satetsu:airon otome)- Iron sand style: Iron maiden
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user causes iron sand to spin around the oppenent before it begins to incase there body to the shape of a iron maiden torture device from the device. Then the user well forms larges spears to form around it then by clenching there fist the spears peirce into it impaling the iron maiden
must be the 3rd kazekage to use

Declined limits!

(Satetsu:rensa)-Iron sand style: Chains
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60(+10 if explosive tags are used)
Description:The user forms the iron into into chains which have a pointed tips. The user can contoll the chains to either perice the oppenent silimar to shikamaru shadow sewing, or be used to wrap around the oppenent to bind them in place, the user can also apply explsive tags to them to cause extra damage.
Nust be the 3rd kazekage to use

Approved


(Satetsu:Satetsu)-Iron sand style:Iron sand tsunami
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:After forming the need hand seals the user will create a massive tsunami of iron sand which rushes at the oppenent with ebough force that if it hits it would shatter the bones of even a kguuya clan member. as it being iron sand it will also shred the skin similar to sand paper
Notes:
can only been used by the 3rd kazekage
No iron sand jutsu the next turn
Can only be used after (Satetsu soushi)- iron sand creation
~the 3rd hokage does not know iron sand~
Declined

fixed the mistakes changed it from hokage to kazekage >.<
 
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(Raikou Keiriku) Lightning Execution
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (+20 to user, and 10 additional damage to the opponent the next round.)
Description: The user charges natural lightning from around him into both his palms, as he charges it, he slowly releases chakra from his hands, and two bolts of lightning get created in the user’s palms.As he fully releases the lightning chakra, the ground starts shaking and the user travels at very high speeds towards his enemy.Once reached his target, the user stabs him in a diagonal way with both bolts.If, during the attack, the lightning is watched through a microscop, there can be seen small chakra streams that spread throughout the lightning, and once hit the enemy, the streams get out of the lightning and affect him at a cellular level, and the opponent doesn’t notice in the beginning, but later on he starts feeling pains and gets muscle cramps.The small streams of chakra affect the user too, while he is holding both bolts in his palms.
- May be used once per battle.
- If the enemy is hit, the cellular damage is unavoidable.
- Can be teached only by Shigure and Kaito.

Get Roku to Check.
-Approved-

(Shichiakuma) - Shichiakuma
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: - (+5 to the user each turn)
Description: Shichiakuma, literally meaning "Seven Devils", are Shigure's seven Chakra Swords.Each one goes in a different support in his body. They are hiltless swords, similar to Killer Bee's swords.They are all able to cut through diamond.Each time a sword hits the enemy, it drains him of +5 chakra. As the swords are hiltless, the user is holding them on the blade, which pretty much hurts him too.

- Can be used only by Shigure and it cannot be teached.

Declined Remove the chakra absorption

(Suisaru) - Drunken Monkey
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This is a variation of "Crazy Monkey".Drunken Monkey which involves a lot of throat, eye and groin strikes as well as tumbling and falling techniques. It incorporates a lot of false steps to give the appearance it is defenseless and uses a lot of off-balance strikes. The practitioner waddles, takes very faltering steps and sometimes fall to the ground and lies prone while waiting the opponent to approach at which time a devastating attack is launched at the knees or groin areas of the opponent.This technique is comprised of a combo of 25 hits.
- Must have learned Crazy Monkey.
- Must be in a Drunken state.
- Must be teached by Shigure.
(Allowed by Kaito)

Approved


(Suimugenru) - Drunken Infinite Loop

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user kicks the opponent in the chin, sending him upwards, then he appears behind the enemy, and does a 5 kick combo, the first two kicks go to his lower body(groin, legs) the following two go to his upper body (chest, arms, shoulders) and the final kick is towards the head, the kick is strong enough to smash the opponent in the ground.
- Must be in Drunken state in order to use.
- Must be teached by Shigure.

Approved


(Suikyou) - Ravaging Drunkenness
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: - (-5 to the user every turn for the rest of the battle, and +30 to all Taijutsu attacks, and -5 dmg from any taijutsu attack)
Description: After drinking a special Sake Bottle, the user will start getting dizzy, and because of the special ingredients in the Sake, he will recieve stomach burns, and muscle cramps during this technique.He will be constantly dizzy, but his moves become very unpredictable, and all his attacks are more efficient, also his defence rate is much higher.This technique will constantly hurt the user's internal organs each turn for the rest of the battle.
- This mode lasts untill the user is shocked by Lightning or untill he is knocked uncouncious.
- Must posses Suiken.
- Must be teached by Shigure.

DeclinedLets change the limitation on this shall we.^^
 
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(Touken Gensou) - Swords of Illusion
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user casts a genjutsu upon the opponent that makes the user believe that the swordsman is moving at an incredible speed that it looks like he is teleporting around him or her. The user makes this happen by making his sword reflect light towards the opponent making him blind at crutial moments during this technique to make the opponent believe this. The attack ends with the sword slowly being struck into the opponents chest causing a serious and life threating wound. This is a tatic made for those without the ability to make mist and have the speed available to silently assassinate people like the swordsman, Zabuza.

Note: This can only be taught or used by Musasibou.
Note: Can only be used twice in battle.
Note: Cannot work in absolute darkness.
Note: Requires a Sword.

Approved

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(Senkou Suraisu Gikou) - Flash Slice Technique
Type: Defense (counter)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 40 + 1/2 of the opponent's attack that was used.
Description: The swordsman keeps his sword in his sheath and puts his hand on the handle of his sword. The swordsman then gets into a defensive stance and when the physical attack (Taijutsu) is about to hit the user will pull out his sword with lightning speed angled slice. This sword technique is based on a sword style called Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu and uses the sheath to enhance the speed of the blade on top of the stance giving the swordsman complete control over the incoming attack.

Note: Requires a sword and sheath.
Note: User can not move in this stance and cannot perform handseals during the stance.
Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Can only be used and taught by Musasibou.
~declined~
this move is not needed coz its a basic sword tech

 
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(fuuton:kaze tousa sawgi)wind style:wind current uproar
type:supplementary/attack
range:short-long
rank:S-rank
chakra:20
damage:40(-5 every time it is used)
description:an uproar of razor sharp wind rushing the opponent at 100-150mph blowing the then back into or on an oblect,or to propell
a thrown object...

note: limited to three uses per fight.
note: limited only to me and who i teach it to.
note: limited to only 4 ppl for it to be taught to.
restriction: if used more than three times the user is disqualified and the match goes to opponent.
huh? O_O disqualified?
wat i mean is if u use this jutsu more than three times u loose the fight
 

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(Suiton: Jinsoku Senbon Dangan) – Water Style: Rapid Senbon Bullets

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user spits out their mouth highly compressed jets of water in the shape of Senbon that can pierce through skin and rock.

Note: Co-Producer HellsBadass

limits?
(Suiton: Jinsoku Senbon Dangan) – Water Style: Rapid Senbon Bullets

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user spits out their mouth highly compressed jets of water in the shape of Senbon that can pierce through skin and rock.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Co-Producer HellsBadass

Approved Can pierce through rock B rank and lower.


(Katon: Amatsu-ten Hoshi) Fire Style: Celestial Heavens Star

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: The user will create a large fire ball in their hands and then by sending it into the sky and using the wind currents to increase the size of the fireball making it a Giant sized Ball of Fire representing a burning star that then comes crashing down at the enemy target and as it gets near it then explodes sending a rain of fire balls to decend and scatter at and around the target leaving burning craters in its aftermath.
(Does –15 damage from making fireball in users hands)

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Co-produced by Emperor
-Approved-

(Suiton Fuuton: Kouki Rekueimu) – Water and Wind Style: Final Requiem

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-15 damage to user)
Description: The user will make a few hand seals and then create around them spheres of Water and Wind spinning around them which will then be shot at and around the target/s which then water and wind spheres will then combine and explode creating tornado vortexes of water and wind combination which then rips and shreds the terrain and then sends flying earth rubble at fasts speeds sending into the target/s creating further damage.
(-15 damage to user from the strain on the body)
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Co-produced by Emperor
-Approved-

(Katon: Seikou Youkou Hirameki Kaen) – Fire Style: Ultimate Crimson Flash Flame

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: The user will make a few hand seals and then creates orbs of fire shoot out from their hands and shooting them at and around the enemy target and then the user will make them explode in a fury of Large fireballs which turn into dragons that then burns the enemy and then turns the ground to lava.

Note: Causes – 15 damage to user from burning of the hands
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Co-produced by HellsBadass
-Declined- Similar jutsu exists and sort of OP (effects on terrain)

(Kuchiose no Jutsu) Summoning Technique: Valkyrie Goddess Freya

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Description: The user Summons The Valkyrie Goddess Freya. She is an adept warrior in close range combat and User of Lightning Element capable of using lightning to the rank of the user. She is capable of using the following technique of the user: (Amatsu Shinsei Awai Kiyome Yoichi Reikon no Jutsu) –Heavenly Divinity Light Purification of Worldly Soul technique. She Simply obeys one person, who is her summoner and will fight along side Kuja and wont listen or fight along side anyone else unless given the order from Kuja. She wields a long 41 inch Kudachi Blade.
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Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: Lasts 4 turns
Note: Can only be Taught by Kaito-sama

Declined
 
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(Kirigakure Hijutsu:Kiri kou Mizu) - Hidden Mist Secret Techniques: Mist to Water


Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Description: The user changes the mist to water. If fighting within mist, makes him so an unfinishabe font of water.
*Note:*Only shinobis from the Hidden Mist can use this jutsu and once a member leaves the group/kicked out, he or she will not be able to use this jutsu.*
*Note:This is a group jutsu.*

Declined Don't post group jutsu here.

(Suiton: Dan'atsu Geyser) - Water Style: Pressure Geyser

Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80
Description: This jutsu requires a sword, and great water and chakra control. The user must stab the sword in to the ground (it can be any material). Then he flows his water chakra through it, into the ground. He causes a great volumn of hot water under pressure errupt from below the enemy. The enemy is blown in the air, he gets burned severely cuz the water is hot, and he is then left in a cloud of steam the geyser left there after it errupted.
The enemy doesn't get suspicious before the jutsu is done and isn't able to dodge it out of this reasons: The user can be just leaning on the sword while he is channelling chakra into it, and it needs no seals, so the enemy doesn't know anything about the jutsu before he is cooked alive.
This is based on real facts:
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*Note:Can only be used by Momochi Zabuza.*
*Note: can only be used twice per battle.*
*Note:Based on real facts.*

Declined


Note:I sent the upper jutsu to grim and He said they are approvable.If you don't believe, wait for grimm to check the thread U_U <----I don't care if you've previously sent this jutus to grim! And with the description you've placed(highlighted portion) it deserves to be declined. Now if grim or roku wants to approve this they can.

(Suiton:Mizu Dangan) - Water Style: Water Bullet

Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The user shoots a water bullet from his mouth. It is a so called "fast" jutsu - the user needs no hanseals, he just focuses his water chakra in his gullet, and then shoots it out from his mouth with high pressure and speed. The bullet is a small projectile but with cannon like power. The jutsu is done quicker than a trigger is pressed.
*Note: Can only be used by Momochi Zabuza and Kisame Hoshigaki.*
*Note: Doesn't need a water source.*

Declined
 
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(Hone Tsume)-Bone Claws
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80(+10 to the user)
Description: The user forces their bones to come out of the users knuckles like Wolverines claws.The Bones are sharp and dense and can cut through nearly anything. when the user performs this taijutsu, it causes the damage to the user because it causes pain.
-This Jutsu May only be used 3 Times per baattle
-This can only be used by ~Minato~

Approved


(Hone Bunshin no Jutsu)-Bone Clone Technique
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user forces their bones to come out of their body to form a clone out of themselves. The Clone can use Kaguya techniques.
-This Jutsu May only be used 3 Times per battle
-This can only be used by ~Minato~

Declined Exists!


(Genjutsu- Hone Hakachi)-Illusion Tehinque- Bone Graveyard
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user traps the opponent in an genjutsu where the user is in a graveyard. There bone skeletons come up from the ground and attack the opponent. In reality the user is motion and immobilized so they can't do any jutsu or even defend themselves.
-This Jutsu May only be used 2 Times per battle
-This can only be used by ~Minato~
-The Effects of this jutsu lasts 1 turn.

Declined Exist!


(Doujutsu:Takusenme )Eye Technique-Oracle's Eye
Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbbiden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:100
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user's eye transforms into an eye with a black pupil and yellow surrounding it.This Eye technique can see or predict the future to give the user an advantage.This Eye Also has a series of high level genjutsu that can immobilize the opponent, put them to sleep,Etc.This Jutsu puts a strain on the users sight meaning they will not be able to see properly for the Next 2 turns after its activation.Iff the user makes a clone while this jutsu is activated, the clones won't have it only the real can have it.This Jutsu can Also can sense if the opponent is using chakra around them but cannot pinpoint their location.While this jutsu is activated the user cannot you any genjutsu except for genjutsu that is related to this eye technique.
-This Jutsu May only be used 2 Times per battle
-This Eye Technique lasts for two turns.
-This can only be used by ~Minato~.
-No Hand signs needed to do this jutsu
Oracles eye:
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Declined
 
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(Kaeru: Kaeru Shou Ganbutsu) Frog Arts: Frog Call Imitation
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80(-10 to the user)
Description: During times when Shima and Fukasaku are not present, the user will imitate Shima and Fukasaku by collecting chakra into their voice and then the user will let out a loud screech from their mouth. The opponent will be paralyzed, confused, and distracted, leaving them unable to move as soon as it is heard, but this jutsu will give out the users position immediately. To use this jutsu you must know how to summon toads, entering Sage Mode is not required.
~declined~
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(Raiton: Kesei Bakuha) Lightning: Existing Explosion
Type: Attack
Rank: S-B
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40-20
Damage: 80-40(-10 to the user)
Description: The user will focus on lightning around them and will add their own chakra to existing lightning and cause it to overload and combust causing a large explosion. The power of the explosion will depend on the lightning jutsu that is combusted.
~User can not use any other Lightning jutsu on the same turn as this one~
~declined~
(Kaeru: Kaeru Shou Ganbutsu) Frog Arts: Frog Call Imitation
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80(-10 to the user)
Description: During times when Shima and Fukasaku are not present, the user will imitate Shima and Fukasaku by collecting chakra into their voice and then the user will let out a loud screech from their mouth. The opponent will be paralyzed, confused, and distracted, leaving them unable to move as soon as it is heard, but this jutsu will give out the users position immediately. To use this jutsu you must know how to summon toads, entering Sage Mode is not required.
~Can only be used twice per battle


Declined

(Raiton: O-ba-ro-do) Lightning: Overload
Type: Attack
Rank: S-B
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40-20
Damage: 80-40(-10 to the user)
Description: The user will focus on lightning around them and will add their own chakra to existing lightning and cause it to overload and combust causing a large explosion. The power of the explosion will depend on the lightning jutsu that is combusted.
~Twice per battle
~User cannot use any other lightning jutsu on the same turn or the next turn

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(Raiton: Assai Kinjitou) - Lightning Release: Crushing Pyramid
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will release his raiton chakra through the air, he will open his hand and a super dense lightning pyramid will form very close to the opponent's body, shocking him, then, when the user closes his hand, the pyramid will crush whoever is inside. If a wall of the pyramid is destroyed, the others continue the process and will just shock and cut through whatever is inside. This can only be used once per battle and does 10 damage to user.
-Approved I guess-

(Yōton: Yougan Kasei) –Lava Release: Lava Transformation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will use the chakra of his bijuu to transform temporaly transform himself into lava (just like in [Doton: Kouka jutsu) - Earth Style: Hardening]). The user can use this to defend himself from incoming jutsu and he can even regenerate some missing limbs by absorbing the lava in the field. Can only be used twice and lasts two turns.

Pending Um earth hardening covers the person in earth not transforms them into earth. This is abit oped. Have roku check and if is ok with it than so am i.
Agree with Goro...-Declined-
 
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(Ryu Kan Sen) - Dragon Wrap Sword -
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: One of the most dangerous, but effective counters there is. There are number of varations of it, it depends if you want to kill your opponent or not and if you use a sword or not, however the basic is always the same.
  1. Sword variation one: when the opponent attacks with a stab/punch/kick you go straight to it, but just when it is about to hit you, you start to rotate. As a result his attack just passes by you, while you rotate forwards on the outside of his arm and/or sword. After one rotation you're exactly at the opponent's back, at this point you use the momentum of your spin to cut of his head starting from the back of his head (the sword slashes the head of at the moment the rotation is complete)
  2. Sword variation two: this can be used also when the opponent attacks from the left to the right with his sword/arm and vice versa. You start to rotate again, but this time inwards. This way you can block the opponents attack (during the rotation) and after the rotation is complete you use the momentum to cut of his head starting from the back, only now from his other side. By lowering your body during the spin you can attack him from below too and targetting his legs or attack upwards.
  3. Elbow variation: this is exactly the same as with sword variation one, however you don't use a sword, but your elbow. When your rotation is complete you use the momentum to hit the opponent with your elbow on the back of his head(instead of decapitating). This can be directly followed by a vertical shop on the opponents neck with that same arm by just stretching it immediately after the elbow connected. You can focus chakra to increase the damage.
When the opponent attacks with his left arm(sword or not) for example, you rotate counterclockwise with numbers 1 and 3 and clockwise with number 2.
This is an extremely fast counter that is in normal conditions almost impossible to block or dodge.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*Can only be used if learned Elder teachings: sixth sense by Kaito-same himself*


A picture of sword variation two:
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-Approved- @_@

(Ryu Shou Sen) - Dragon Flight Flash -
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: There are also two ways this technique can be preformed:
  1. You hold your sword so that it is pointed at the oponent. However the sharp edge(if it is a katana) is pointing to the right and the blunt side to the left. You bend your knees and when the opponent comes, you jump. On that same moment you hit with your fist the bottom of your blade and right on the opponents chin. As a result of the jump and the sword-punch, the opponent is thrown into the air
  2. The second version is more deadly. Instead of poiting your sword to the opponent, you point it to the left (the sword is parallel to the users body). You bend your knees and when the opponent comes you jump. This time you point the sharp edge upwards. As you jump you straighten your arms and push the sharp edge on the throat of the opponent with both your arms. Due to the strength of the jump the opponents throath is both slashed and crushed and he's thrown into the air.
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and Yubashiri*

(Sou Ryu Sen) - Double Dragon Flash -
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is a variation of a battou jutsu technique (sword drawing). The user grabs his scabbard with one hand and draws out his sword with his other hand making a horizontal/diagonal slash. By having trained extensively in swordsmanship and having learned Elder teachings: sixth sense the users speed, strength, reflexes and precision have increased tremendously. As a result the battou jutsu has become much more precise, faster, stronger and deadlier than normal. By adding chakra to the blade the strenght of the battou jutsu can be enough to break the opponents sword/stance. However every battou jutsu has one great weakness: it leaves the user wide open if he misses or if it is blocked. But with this technique the user attacks also with his scabbard. The body automatically moves when the battou jutsu is preformed with the sword and this momentum is used to attack the opponents arm or neck with the scabbard. Though it's blunt, the force behind it is strong enough to break an opponents arm and/or sever its tendons. Because the opponent is bussy with the sword and doesn't expect the scabbard, he's caught completely off guard.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and Yubashiri*
*Can only be used if learned Elder teachings: sixth sense by Kaito-sama himself*


The users stance after both strikes(the sword is in his right hand from the first slash and the scabbard in his left for the second attack)
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(Oni Denpatanchiki) - Demonic Radar -

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 10 each time it is used (that makes 40 max)
Damage: N/A
Description: As a result of Yubashiri's temperature-affinity it can detect temperature fluctutations. Yubashiri can detect even the slightest change of temperature and if the object itself hasn't got a temperature he can still detect the object by comparing it with the temperature of the air around it. This way it can make a "temperature map". However the user can only make use of this effect a certain amount of times, but when he uses it, it doens'nt require any form of handseals or chakra manipulation. The only requirement is that he has direct physical contact with Yubashiri. As Yubashiri is continuously registering the temperature, the user knows in an instant the information. The info goes from the sword into the users body, into the nervous system and to the brain. This is not regarded as a sense.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used 4 times per battle*
*Each time the effect is used it lasts for one turn*

(Ken Ki) - Swordsman Spirit -
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: N/A (-5 for each turn, max of -20)
Description: A power that only can be awakened by the most experienced swordsman as a result of years of training and countless deathmatches. The basic is that the swordsman can overcome his own physical limits by using his own willpower to live. This can be compared to the fourth Inner Gate, however the effects are mainly for specific swordsman techniques. Thus the spirit is more or less the same as the fourth IG, but in HTH-combat the IG would still be a lot stronger than a swordsman, but in plain swordfighting the swordsman would be stronger than the IG:
  • The users stamina, speed, reflexes and strenght are increased tremendously. However this is mainly for swordtechniques (blocking projectiles, sword drawing, faster reaction time on incoming attacks, faster slashes etc.)
  • All sword jutsu's and techniques are increased with +20 damage
  • Taijutsu techniques are increased with +10 damage
  • The user can endure a lot more pain than normally and fight without being bothered much with his injuries
  • If there are allied swordsman in short range of the user, they receive +5 damage for every sword jutsu and technique and they can indure more pain
This is a step further than the Elder teachings: sixth sense where you de-activate your emotions. Though it may sound paradoxal, but the swordsman spirit is based on "living". This doesn't mean the user should fear death (then you would have gone a step back of the Elder) but actually have the desire to live and win while having no fear of death at all. As swordsman are often in near-death situations, as a result death has become a second nature. But when the user finds the will to live again, he awakens his Swordsman Spirit.
As said before it is comparable to the fourth IG, however global seen the gate is a lot stronger as the spirit only focuses on certain aspects. The Spirit can be activated immediately.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used if learnedElder teachings: sixth sense by Kaito-sama himself*
*The effect lasts only for 4 turns max*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*The user takes -5 damage for each turn*

All you Roku.
Grimm, check the rest please @_@
O_O y me... anyways all approved
 
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(Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Fainaru Bentsu) - Thunder Emperor Arts: Final Vent
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: n/a (+10 to Thunder Emperor Arts damage)
Description: The user's sword is charged with Raiton chakra and the sword changes it's shape. The sword's shape is changed from a wakizashi to odachi and can add more damage if the user uses Thunder Emperor Arts.
~declined~
limits, side effects and restriction


(Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Tsuchi Bure-ka) - Thunder Emperor Arts: Earth Breaker
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user after uses the final vent, uses his sword to slice the ground and the ground leaks up to mid range. The opponent can be sliced if his is in the mid range.
~declined~
limits, side effects and restrictions
(Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Fainaru Bentsu) - Thunder Emperor Arts: Final Vent
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: n/a (+10 to Thunder Emperor Arts damage)
Description: The user's sword is charged with Raiton chakra and the sword changes it's shape. The sword's shape is changed from a wakizashi to odachi and can add more damage if the user uses Thunder Emperor Arts. The user can't use thunder emperor mode again if it is deactivated when this jutsu is already in use. And can only be used 2 times
-Approved-

(Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Tsuchi Bure-ka) - Thunder Emperor Arts: Earth Breaker
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user after uses the final vent, uses his sword to slice the ground and the ground leaks up to mid range. The opponent can be sliced if his is in the mid range. The user can't use Raiton jutsus for the next 2 turns after this. And can only be used 3 times.
-Approved-

(Kuchiyose: Curtana ) - Summoning: Sword Of Mercy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons his sword, Curtana and when he summons this he can only use 1 jutsu after but the jutsu can be used twice.

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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

lighting sper opening

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton:the use turn his Hiramekarei into a sper. When this sper is throw to someone or something the user can use some hand seals to make the sper point open and make the hole sper a big lightning ball that suck in any thing with in 8 feet and shock them.
*can be use 2 time

water sper opening
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: the use turn his Hiramekarei into a sper. When this sper is throw to someone or something the user can use some hand seals to make the sper point open and throw some type of water Syrup that well make any thing very sicky with in 6 feet
*can be use 3 times


Lightning lil birds
Type: Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:The user shoots a blast of lightning shaped like a lil birds at the opponent.The user can Shoot Multiple Blasts of lightning at the opponent at one time(up to ten blasts of lightning)

*if 6 of them hit the opponet they get stun and can use 2 move not 3
~find the japanese names~
re-name
Raitingu kyuuban(lighting sucker)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton:the use turn his Hiramekarei into a sper. When this sper is throw to someone or something the user can use some hand seals to make the sper point open and make the hole sper a big lightning ball that suck in any thing with in 8 feet,then it well make the other person get shock with 200 blots

Declined Work on your description.


Gogyou shiroppu(water sper syrup)
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: the use turn his Hiramekarei into a sper. When this sper is throw to someone or something the user can use some hand seals to make the sper point open and throw some type of water Syrup that well make any thing very sicky with in 6 feet

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Raitingu chiisai kakou(Lightning small birds
Type: Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:The user shoots a blast of lightning shaped like a lil birds at the opponent.The user can Shoot Multiple Blasts of lightning at the opponent at one time(up to ten blasts of lightning)

Declined Work on the description.

new for this week
1000 kinchou kakou (1000 Birds drop)
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:low-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:40
Description: user throw 1 big bird in the sky that then turn into 1000 birds that drop but as the drop the user can do hand seal to make all the birds connect with lightning to shock anything that it on,this also can be do to make the other peson stuck in a shape like a cube

*use 2 time

Declined

Raitingu teiku ofu

Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range:low-long
Chakra Cost:100
Damage Points:all the lighint time x2
Description:This user will bite there tumb to put blood on the floor that well make a snake (it not a snake it look like a snake) and then use lighting on the the blood then the user have to have there hands on the blood they well not be able to move at all if they do then this well not work.They well have to stay there for 2 of there turn then this well make a huge headphones that well suck in any lighting move that the other person do or the user then if the user want he can make all that lighting and send it to the sky,As it in the sky the user well have 1 shot and 1 shot onley to send in all that lignting in 1 shot

*if the user miss the user well not be able play no more

ways to make this not work
*use water on the headphones
*do not use lighting
*make the user to put hes hands up
*kill the user

You can only sumbit five per week, resubmitting counts as apart of your 5.
 
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Wood Style: Redwood Armor (Mokuton:Amerikasugi Yoroi)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Chakra: 40
Description: User coats their entire body with a layer of redwood. Redwood is extremely durable against water and fire...having tough bark and durable foundations. It provides protection against all A-Rank fire and water jutsus unless the armor is destroyed by stronger jutsus.
*can only be taught by TenzoX*
*mokuton users*
Sources:



Declined Similar jutsu exist.


Wood Style: Chakra Sensing (Mokuton: Chakra Sacchi)

Rank: B-Rank
Chakra: 20
Range: Short-long
Description: User stomps the ground and releases their mokuton chakra through an area of at least half-a-mile radius. This chakra resonates with the ground the trees nearby and allows the user to sense where his/her opponent is if they are in the ground or close to it (doesn't apply if they are in the air.)
*can only be taught by TenzoX*
*mokuton users*

Declined
 
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