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Re: ? Custom Jutsu Submission ?

Summoning:LightSaber-(Kuchiyose: Ranpu Guntou)
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user Summons a Green Lightsaber that can be used for Sword to sword combat.This Lightsaber can use B-A Rank Lightning justu.
Note: This Justu can only be used by Minato1
Note: this summoning lats for 3 turns.
Note: can only be used Once per battle

*declined*

(Doton:Chiribomu )-Earth Style: Dust Bomb
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:User Drops a bomb of dust that suffocates the opponent because of the dust molecules enter the opponents respiratory system and clogs the tubes that let air past through your body thereby suffocating the opponent.Then the opponent slowly looses the air they need to breath. The dust damages the Lungs of the opponent stopping them from breathing at all (this process takes about 2 turns to complete which means after the 2 turns i did this justu the opponent will die).
*This jutsu can be only taught by Minato1*

*Declined*remove the death part. and limit resubmit.*
 
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raiton: seidenki seken (lightning relase: static world)
Rank:A
Type:sup
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/a
discription: the user will form a few sets of hands seal and will generate and create static aorund the whole battle field. the static is harmless and will only irrtate the opponent when he/she moves.
the static will help lightning jutsus to connect to the target or wit other lightning jutsus. Th static will also cling on to any metal objects and water.
*the jutsu will last as long as the user desires (chakra -2 per turn)

*Remove that as long as you desire bit. Knowing you there is some trick to this. Limit.*
 
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Re: ? Custom Jutsu Submission ?

(Fuuton:Raikou Iya Ichidan)-Wind Style: Lightning No More
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:User Pumps the opponent full of their Wind chakra.The user can control the wind chakra in the opponent from Mid Range.Everytime the opponent tries to perform a lightning jutsu, the user controls their wind chakra inside of them to make it mix with the opponents lightning chakra canceling out the lightning jutsu before the lightning jutsu is fully performed.
*No Handsigns needed to use this jutsu*
* Only Minato1 can teach this jutsu*
*i can only teach this justu only up to 2 students*
*this justu lasts 3 of my opponents turns*
*This jutsu can be only taught by Minato1*

*Declined*
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Summoning: Weapons of Death.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+5 for every weapon called forth)
Damage: N/A (-20 to user) (-40 to user The Second time)
Description: The user has control of 6 weapons. Sword, Mace, Lance, Axe, and Dagger. The Thing about theses Weapons is they were once actual women who have been cursed to take the form of the a weapon to be used when called. These Women cannot preform any jutsu, however they are able to transform at will into the weapon of thier name. As the user as to use a more than normal amount of Blood to summon forth these weapons, the user takes damage.
(Last 4 Turns)
(Usable 2times)

Weapon: Horyu. (The Dragon Cannon)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40 (-5 every 2turns)
Damage: 80(if a normal shot is used) (-20 to user)
Description: A Witch Gun only uasble by the most powerful of Sword-Gun Users. This Weapon allows the User to stay comfortable at a Long Range fight. (Sorta Like a Sniper) But when Coupled with the Weapon Senryu. Can Be a Nightmare to anyone. Due to the long Barrel of this Weapon. The User is able to block Some Taijutsu moves with this. This Gun Is so powerful it has to be feed an amount of blood for it to stay under the user control.
(User Must Know Sword-Gun Conversion)

Weapon: Senryu (Tornado Dragon)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (-10 to user)
Description: This is a well-Known Weapon only usable By Master Sword-Gun Users. It Allows the User To Fire Off Normal Bullets with Cannon like Force. And Create Powerful Witch Beast. Although its not good for long range attacks Coupled with The Dragon Cannon the user can prove to be at Worthy Fighter at any range. While its only A-Rank the user Must Still Give this Weapon a amount of blood to stay under his control.
(Must Know Sword-Gun Conversion)

*All declined* This is naruto. Witch beast do not exist here. And yes i know bianca approved your witch gun, but your not even attempting to convert that animes move into jutsu like moves.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Buraindo Taijutsu-(Blind Fighting Style)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A(+30 if you add chakra to improve you speed)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user closes their eyes making them "blind".This Fighting style uses the sound the opponents make to let the user know the exact location of the enemy and their Smell.This Taijutsu Style is effective against Sharingan Based genjustu.Since the user is "Blind" that form of genjustu won't work.The user of this justu hears every single little thing around him making him aware of everything.The user of this justu can Add large amounts of Chakra to enhance the their speed by 5x faster than they were before:
Note: This can only be used by Minato1

Rip off of Zatoichi Taijutsu. Grimm or Rei should check. They should have a unbias opinion of this.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

All right, I have one:
Mokuton: Mokuton kanbou soujuu (Wood release: Wood Cell Manipulation)
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By getting up close to their opponent, the wood user presses their hand upon their opponent, aiming at the chakra central above the heart. If aimed correctly, the wood user can send their wood chakra into their opponent's chakra system, first freezing them with invasion of foregin chakra, then infiltrating their chakra and cells and changing it into wood. Would kill them if process completes. This process takes less than ten seconds.
Note: *only TenzoX can teach this jutsu*

(This idea is taken from the third Naruto movie, where that guy had the ability to change stuff into stone and kill them.)

*Declined*
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Doujutsu: onwoadadekaesu) Eye Technique: Return Evil for Good
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short to Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: depends on jutsu returned
Description: An advanced Mangekyou Sharingan technique which allows the user to return an opponents attack back onto them. for example, my opponent would use a A-Rank fire jutsu, by using this technique, the jutsu would harm him instead of me, giving him the damage points. The returned jutsu would not count towards my total since i am only returning the attack to the original summoner. extremely hard to counter because it is an instant return
-Can only be used three times per fight
-Can only return A-Rank and lower
-After use, can not use any other MS technique for two turns
-Requires Mangekyou Sharingan
-Can only be used by Ragnaroc and can not be taught​
*declined* Oped rag. O_O!
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Earth Style: Earth Eon ♦ [Doton: Tsuchi Ion]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: - [+40 for every crushed limb]
Description: Earth Eon is an unique jutsu, developed by Reido Kira in the Lightning Temple.The user creates swarms of earth, that are able to capture enemies' limbs, making them unable to move, the maximum swarms that can be created are four, for all four limbs, once captured, the limb cannot move the following turn.The swarms can go up in the air too, reaching a height of approx. 10 m.The user can summon the swarms at his will for three rounds, and the earth can crush his enemies' limbs.
- Effects of this jutsu last 3 turns.
- May be used only by Lightning Temple members under the guidance of Reido Kira.

*Approved*

Lightning Style: Underground Lightning Blast ♦ [Raiton: Chika Raikou Bakuha]
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user stomps the ground under him, sending a great amount of lightning chakra underground, whilst the earth is a conductor, the lightning travels very quick to the enemy, once the user takes his foot off the ground the lightning underground blasts, creating an explosion in a circular area of approx 10 square meters.The blast goes up 20 meters in the sky, and it can completely turn the enemy into ash if completely hit.
- May be used once per battle.
- User is not allowed to use any Lightning Jutsu for the following 3 rounds.
- May be used only by Lightning Monks, under the guidance of Reido Kira.

*Grimm Check this as well*
 
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Weapon Name:Kumori
Rank; Forbidden
Chakra cost;
Description:Taken from the chamber of the murdered demon lord,this katana can be used as an extension of the ability of the user.The katana is able to use whatever chakra the user have or use.Its blade is made from a special alloy that can't be broken down by a-class down jutsu's and has a safeguard ability that activates when the owner is not holding it. A unique ability is that it is able to have sage chakra focused into it , this makes it able to invisably alter its striking range, if this ability is used another 7 damage will be done to the user for each turn used.
*only hinaru can holds this katana*
*Does 7 damage to the user for each turn it was used*
*Last only 5 turns in battle*
*After the 5 turns it will become a normal sword*

*Declined*

(katon:Hisaki Kabe) Fire style:Wall of Flames
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: A offensive jutsu, the user creates a fire around the oppenent using the oxygen around him and makes a dome around him leaving him no escape and the ground around him will be hot that he can't go down or else he'll be toast.
*only be used once*
*The user can't use fire jutsu for 2 turns*
*The user will have -15 damage for 3 turns*
*Only be used once in battle*
* only Hinaru can teach or used this jutsu*
*Declined*Oped.
Weapon Name:Kumori
Rank:S
type:supplementary
Chakra cost:40 Chakra
Description:Taken from the chamber of the murdered demon lord,this katana can be used as an extension of the ability/Kg of the user.The katana is able to use whatever chakra the user have or use.Its blade is made from a special alloy that can't be broken down by s-class down jutsu's and has a safeguard ability that activates when the owner is not holding it.
*only hinaru can holds this katana*
*Summon only once in batte*
*The user cannot make a summoning for 1 turn*

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(katon:Hisaki Kabe) Fire style:Wall of Flames
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: A offensive jutsu, the user will do a handsigns,then
*only be used once*
*The user can't use fire jutsu for 2 turns*the user will spit off a large fireball that will turn to a bird and will go to the target.If the target is touch or reach the target will be instantly enveloped with flames so so hot that it will kill the target in an instant.If it does not reach the target or rather it just touch it the part of where it is touch will be burned for 2 turns and will be immobile.The flames is also hot that it can turn rocks into magma rocks the only element can stop the is an S-rank water jutsu.
*will not be able to cast off fire jutsu for 2 turns*
*The user will have -15 damage for 3 turns*
*Only be used once in battle*
* only Hinaru can teach or used this jutsu*

ps:what do i type wrong to get it declined????

They're overpowered thats why they got declined.

Still are overpowered. So Declined
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Summoning: Weapons of Death.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+5 for every weapon called forth)
Damage: N/A (-20 to user) (-40 to user The Second time)
Description: The user Summons and control of 6 weapons. Sword, Hammer, Mace, Lance, Axe, and Dagger. The Thing about theses Weapons is they were once actual women who have been cursed to take the form of the a weapon to be used when called. although These Women cannot preform any jutsu, however they are able to transform at will into the weapon of thier name. As the user has to use a more than normal amount of Blood to summon forth these weapons, the user takes damage.
(Last 4 Turns)
(Usable 2times)
(Only Teachable to 2 people)
(When they are Women they are able to be destroyed by jutsu just as the user would be)
~Declined~
O_O sounds like a kinjutsu
and y does it sound so seductive?


Weapon: Horyu. (The Dragon Cannon)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40 (-5 every 2turns)
Damage: 80(if a normal shot is used) (-20 to user)
Description: A Weapon only uasble by the most powerful of Sword-Gun Users. This Weapon allows the User to stay comfortable at a Long Range fight. (Sorta Like a Sniper) But when Coupled with the Weapon Senryu. Can Be a Nightmare to anyone. Due to the long Barrel of this Weapon. The User is able to block Some Taijutsu moves with this. This Weapon Is so powerful it has to be implanted with some of the user blood for it to stay under the user control.
(User Must Know Sword-Gun Conversion)
~Declined~
sounds like a kinjutsu


Weapon: Senryu (Tornado Dragon)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (-10 to user)
Description: This is a well-Known Weapon only usable By Master Sword-Gun Users. It Allows the User To Fire Off Earth Bullets with Cannon like Force. And Use Jutsu only usable with this weapon. Although its not good for long range attacks Coupled with The Dragon Cannon the user can prove to be at Worthy Fighter at any range. While its only A-Rank the user Must Still Give this Weapon a amount of the user blood to stay under his control.
(Must Know Sword-Gun Conversion)
~Declined~
O_O sounds like a kinjutsu


Ok Moves Edited To Fit Naruto Format.
 
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(Amatsu Ryy Kujiku) – Heavonly Dragon Crush

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:
Description: The user charges their legs with lightning chakra whilst jumping high into the air and then using the light to act as a blinding against the opponent and making the users movements hard to predict the user then comes crashing down striking the enemies shoulders with their legs and crashing them into the ground whilst discharging the lightning chakra into the opponents body and making them numb.

Note: Numbing lasts 1 turn
Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can only be Taught by Hazure.

*limit twice per battle*

(Tsubame Sora Bakushin) – Swallow Sky Rush

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user charges their hands and legs with chakra and does a sweeping leg kick to the enemies chin and sending them into the air and then follows though with several punches and kicks into the opponents upper body and then finally finishes by striking the enemy down into the ground.

Note: Can only be taught by hazure

*approved*

(Tentou Tenshoku Daichi Kobushi) – Heavons Calling Earth Fist

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user charges their hands with chakra and then strikes the enemy in the chin dealing four uppercuts and lifting them into the sky and then jumps above them and by somersaulting above the enemy and bringing their legs into the enemies face and sends them crashing down into the ground and then the user follows down thrusting four strikes into the opponents stomach.

Note: Can only be taught by Hazure

*Approved

(Monsu-n Kobushi) – Monsoon Fist

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user charges their fists with water chakra and then attacks the opponent with a combo of 5 attacks. The first two are strikes too the chest lifting them off the ground slightly and then striking the chest to lift them up into the air then following through with a sweeping hi-kick to the chest sending them through the air and then the user appears above the user and then finishes them off with a drop kick into the stomach and sending them crashing into the ground.
(The water attacks cause the enemy to suffer heavy breathing)

Note: Can only be taught by Hazure
*DeclinedHow does the water effect opponents breathing

(Getsuei Kiba Joushou) – Moon Fang Rising

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost:20
Damage point:40
Description: the user jumps at the enemy grabbing the forearms and placing their feet onto the enemies chest and then lifting them up into the air and by jumping back off the enemy and using the floor they jump up above the enemy and then bring down a jack hammer charged with earth chakra dealing more damage and sending them down into the ground.

Note: Can only be taught by Hazure

*Approved
 
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Sempai Oshie: Tenrai Amatsu Keigoku) Elder Teachings: Divine Heavenly Punishment

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is taken from the southern Chinese Bak Mei style of martial arts. The user charges their elbows and knees with lightning chakra and then appears below the enemy quickly striking their chin and sending them into the air and continue striking the enemy with a further 17 electrified strikes using there elbows and knees dealing extra damage due to the power of the knee and elbow and striking the vital parts of the stomach, chest hitting the lungs and heart and the chin and neck and shoulders. When the user strikes the enemy with the attacks they discharge the lightning chakra which causes numbness of the places hit and then dealing the final strike to the chest where the user uses the discharged chakra to disrupt the breathing of the heart and making the enemy incapable of focusing chakra for the following turn.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito

*limit twice per battle
*


(Sanmai Ashige): Absorption Kick

Rank: B
Type: Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: this is based around the Bak Mai Pa of sothern chinese marital arts and the use of enemies body weight. the user will concentrate chakra into their leg and then lift it up to lean into the enemy when then are attacking with taijutsu and by using the body weight of the enemy and the chakra concentration the user will absorb the power of the enemies attack and rebound it in with the kick to send the enemy flying.

Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
*ApprovedAdd a note can counter B rank taijutsu and lower

(Sempai Oshie: Roku sacchi) Elder teachings: sixth sense

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: (-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Elder teachings six senses is a skill known only to those whom achieve mastery in meditation and fighting arts. The user unlocks the six senses which is also known as a clear state of mind where the user eliminates the factors clouding the mind such as fear and regret and allows the user to be able to increase their reaction to incoming taijutsu attacks and not fear death making the user possible to react fast to the attacks.

Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: lasts 4 turns.
*PendingNeeds Grimm or Rei's Approval also
~approved~

(Sempai Oshie: Purantan Ryuuchou Yanagi Shushou) – Elder Teachings: Springtime Flowing Willow Palm

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage point: N/A
Description: The user after opening their sixth sense (elder teachings: sixth sense) begins taking a special stance where they are acting like a flowing willow tree using their palms flat and using the maximum surface area of the palm is then capable of reacting fast enough to deflect incoming attacks because of the clear mind and when coming to taijutsu attacks the user uses the body weight of the enemy and throws them behind them throwing them some distance due to use of body weight.

Note: Can only Taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: Can only be used after use of Elder teachings: sixth sense
*Pending*Same as above

(Muneisei Za chuushin) - Will power of the heart

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: (+15 to taijutsu techniques)
Description: The user will use this when they are at deaths door and then have dying thoughts that they had believed there was something they didn’t quite accomplish and then by using sheer will power they manage to pull themselves together long enough to accomplish that goal and provides the user with extra power due to the sheer determination of the heart of the user. Jiraya shows this technique when he fights the 6 paths of pein. This jutsu provides +15 damage points to all taijutsu techniques.

Note: Lasts 3 turns and can only be used once
Note: User must defeat the enemy in the 3 turns or they die due to depletion of energy
Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
*Approved
 
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Yajuu Motte-In (Beast Within)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: User
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: When the biju of the Kyuubi is in mortal damager he will release the Kyuubi’s power within. When this occurs a dome of dark chakra will circle the user. This dome of chakra is incredibly strong resisting all attacks of any sort, this is to allow the Jyuubi to be released. When used the user will heal completely from whatever damage has been caused, thus this being a last resort.

Note: Useable Once per battle.
Note: Only useable by the Kyuubi (Naruto Uzumaki).
*Declined

Kyouhakuteki Mari (Menacing ball)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 150
Description: When in Kyuubi mode naruto will disperses a massive amount of his chakra and blood into the air. He then solidifies this chakra into a sphere in front of him, firing it away when ready. It has been shown that this attack has different levels of power with different amount of tails that have been released, meaning that full release of the 9tails has this attack at its strongest. Due to the attack this move is unblockable.

Note: Usuable Once per battle.
Note: Must be in Biju form and only the Kyuubi (Naruto Uzumaki) can use this jutsu.

*DeclinedKinjutsu

Keiteki off Sendo (Whistle Of Death)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user puts two fingers inside of their mouth. They then blow an extremely powerful whistle that will blow the opponents ear drums.

Note: Opponent is now deaf.
Note: Useable once per battle, can effect multiple targets.
*Declined
 
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Raiton: Raikou Doragon Dageki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Strike)

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user would begin to release a surge of lightning from his body which in the blink of an eye will take the form of a massive and extremely long dragon made of pure and bright surging electricity coiling around and above him. The dragon will then rush towards the opponent with extreme speed and no matter how far the dragon have traveled its tail would extend to stay connected to the user. The dragon delivers a lethal dose of electricity making for a swift but painful death if taking the full brunt of it. A short range avoidance would not be suggested due to the fact that the dragon's electrical energy can expand on the users command and would still cause a powerful and devasting shock.
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Weak against wind of equivalent strength


*declined* Remove the highlighted and resubmit.
Raiton: Raikou Doragon Dageki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Strike)

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user would begin to release a surge of lightning from his body which in the blink of an eye will take the form of a massive and extremely long dragon made of pure and bright surging electricity coiling around and above him. The dragon will then rush towards the opponent with extreme speed and no matter how far the dragon have traveled its tail would extend to stay connected to the user. The dragon delivers a lethal dose of electricity making for a swift but painful death if taking the full brunt of it. A short range avoidance would not be suggested due to the fact that the dragon's electrical energy can expand on the users command and would still cause a powerful and devasting shock.
Note: Can only be used twice times
*ApprovedLimited to twice per battle ;)
 
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(Fuuton: Tenrai Gouu) Wind: Divine Downpour
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: 90(-15 to the user)
Description: User will first conrol the wind above and around the opponent and then will cause all the wind to blow straight down onto the target, the winds have the power to slice and shread, and when the wind is pushing down on the opponent the pressure will be so dense the opponent cannot move.
~Cannot use wind jutsus on next turn~
~Twice per battle~
*DeclinedKinjutsu
 
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Genjutsu: Suigin Tegotae (Effect of Mercury)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will hold up a handsign to insert their chakra into any mercury in attempt to try to cast the opponent in a genjutsu. The illusion will only activate whenever the opponent sees any bit of mercury. Once the illusion is activated, the opponent would to begin to feel the poisonous effect of Mercury. The mercury entering the body would cause irreverisble nervous system and brain damage causing the opponent to be paralyzed, blindness, numbness, and memory loss (this causes the opponent to forget how to perform simple task such as handsigns, jutsu, etc.)
Note: Can only be used three times

Didn't know why it was decline so I'm just going to add a little more detail to it to make it more acceptable

*Declined
 
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Genjutsu: Naishoubanashi Fuuton (Whispering Wind)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will send a strong gust of wind at the opponent in which he/she will fall into a genjutsu. The illusion is simply the opponent feeling like he/she is being constantly lifted into the air without having the thought of falling back onto the ground.
*Approved
 
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(Kichuu Taijutsu:Finga Shikyo) - Mourning Taijutsu: Death Finger
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The user points out his pointer finger, and starts attacking the target with it directly. The movements of the finger are very fast, which makes it look like the finger is transporting.The more sad the user is, faster he moves the finger.
*DeclinedDo not resubmit.

(Kuchiyose:Kyojin Yuki Fukurou) - Summoning: Giant Snow Owl
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:30
Description:The user bites his finger, and then puts it on the neck, where there is a tatoo saying ''Nasu sore Yuki''(make it snow).There is a loud bang and a white cloud appereas around the user.When it clears, there is a giant owl standing behind the user. it's about 5 meter high, and weights about 300 kg. The user can fly on it, or it can attack the enemy.
*Note: can only be used by the owners of the contract.*
*Approved
 
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Illusion Technique: Flash-Lag ♦ [Genjutsu: Senkou-Okure]
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: -
Description: By putting on of his palms on the enemies' head, and sending a chakra impulse in his brain, the user makes the enemy see a projection of the user, running in circles around him.Similar to the Flash-Lag effect, because during the running the projection changes color and transports from an area to another provoking confusion.
- May be used twice per battle.
- Effects of this jutsu last only one turn.
- May be used and teached only by Reido Kira.
~approved~

Illusion Technique: Reverse Phi Illusion ♦ [Genjutsu: Gyaku Phi Gen'ei]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: -
Description: A mediocre Jounin-Level genjutsu, allowing the user to make his image to move slower in the enemies' eyes, allowing him to hit the enemy before he can see his fist or leg coming.
- This lasts only one round.
- May be used and teached only by Reido Kira.
~decline~
its similar to the genjutsu i use for my time manupliation jutsu

Both Above have Rei or Grimm check.

Earth Style: Underground Earth Hands ♦ [Doton: Chika Tsuchi-Te]
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: -
Description: Two hands of earth, rise from underground, grabbing the enemies' legs and pulling him in.Best used with Reverse Phi Illusion.
- May be used and teached only by Reido Kira.
*DeclinedJust Exist

Lightning Style: Charging Spiraling Shuriken ♦ [Raiton: Juuden Rasenshuriken]
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 55
Damage Points: 90 (+30 damage to the user)
Description: A derived version of Fuuton: Rasenshuriken, developed by the Lightning Elders.The user creates a Spiraling Shuriken, and charges it with electricity.Once thrown the Rasenshuriken charges at the opponent at very high speeds, and once hit, it shocks the opponent and cuts him at a microscopic level, the total amount of cuts is 400.
- May be used only by Lightning Elders.
- May be used once per battle.
- The user cannot use Forbidden techs. for the rest of the battle.
- May be used only if the user has at his side at least one clone.
- The user cannot use Lightning the following round.

*Declined


Illusion Technique: Reverspective ♦ [Genjutsu: Sakaenkei]

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Depends on the enemies' genjutsu range.
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: -
Description: Reverspective is the short form of "reverse perspective", that makes the user's image distort, and it's distorted form creates two projections of itself, that in the enemies' eyes they go up and down, while the room/enviroment starts moving from left to right, making the enemy dizzy.
- May be used only through direct eye contact.
- May be used and teached only by Reido Kira.
*Approvedinserted direct.
 
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