[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

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(Raiton:Raikouhebi )-Lightning Release: Lightning Snakes
Type: Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:The user shoots a blast of lightning shaped like a snake at the opponent.The user can Shoot Multiple Blasts of lightning at the opponent at one time(up to five blasts of lightning)
-Can only be used by Karui
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(Fuuton: Inukeridibou)-Wind Release : Clever Daylight Division of Dog Fur
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Points:N/A
The user focuses their wind chakra, making the wind near the opponent's body form into spheres ( invisble to the normal eye, since they are made of wind ) and causes them to cling on to various points on the opponent's body. The wind spheres then become increasingly heavy ( they exert the force of gale winds downaward on the opponent ) thus slowing the opponent down massively, if not completely holding them immobile.
*Can only be used twice
*Sharingan can see the spheres

~approved~
all eye kgs can see this jutsu
 
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dansei hametaosu iku tezawari) – The Stranger of Loves Orgasmic Touch

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: the user will concentrate a special chakra that when the user touches the opponent it will induce orgasmic reactions and cause them to become immobilized from the orgasmic feelings rushing through them.

*Note: Note Orgasmic feelings last 1 turn and can only be used 3 times
Note: Note can only be used by The man of Love (HellsBaddass)

*(Shikaisha Hijutsu: KamiKorosu Aburana no Jutsu) – Moderator Secret Technique: Yawn Rape technique

Rank: S
Type: Pawner
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will release fire chakra into the air creating the temperature to rise and making the enemy become drowsy and then yawn. As the enemy yawns the user pokes their finger
*into the enemies mouth releasing chakra to enter their throat and cause muscle retraction and making it hard for them to breathe.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Must Be a Moderator


Kokutou Yoru
Rank: S
Type: attack/defence/ supp
Range: Short- long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Known to be the strongest Sword in the world, the Kokutō Yoru is one of the 12 Saijō Ō Wazamono Grade Swords. It is an ornately decorated and very long blade with a length of at least 6 feet, as it is seen to be taller than the user when it is placed on his back. On the hilt of this blade is a crossguard, though the bars between the blade and the hilt are much longer than average. The blade itself is pitch black with a very strong sheen, and its shape is similar to the German "Gro?es Messer", a single-edged long sword with a slight curve at the end of the blade.
Kokutō Yoru has tremendous power, as it was seen destroying large items with a single strike. While Kokutō Yoru is the sharpest blade in the world, it is also gentle.it can also launch a massive slashing attack of compressed air or energy wave that can reach an extremely long distance. It also seems to generate otherworldly purple streaks as it slices.


*the energy wave/ compressed air can be fired only twise per battle and the user has to wait one turn before he can fire that wave again*

|All Approved| xd @ the first jutsu
 
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( raiton : hekireki butoukai dangan ) lightening jutsu : lighening ball shot
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: an more perfect virson of ligtening ball, by useing your lightning chakra, you creates an ultra lightening ball then throw it down to kick it (( soccer like kick )) with more lightning chakra to make it an huge and fast lightening ball that can destroy an hall so easly
Hells: ~Declined~
no upgradeing existing jutsu


( suiton : nibai gogyou doragon jiten ) water style : double water dragon spin

Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 ( +10 if lightening was added )
Description: an more perfect virson of water dragon , as you create two water dragon , they attacks the opponent by spinnin all around him, and if u add an lightening jutsu on it, the damages will be great
Hells: ~Declined~
my jutsu


( raiton : tsume chidori ) lightening style : chidori claw-hand

Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30 ( - 10 for each turn you keep it on you hand )
Damage Points:60
Description: an more perfect virson of chidori which make the lightening chakra looks like a claw , you can hit two times with it each time you make it , and it can stay on your hand for 3 turns , you can use it to block taijutsu to or make it more powerfull with doing taijutsu with it
Hells: ~Declined~
my jutsu
 
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(Samehada Jishin) - Shark Skin Earthquake
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:Kisame slams Samehada to the ground. The combination of Kisame's huge chakra, and the Sword's power, causes and immense earthquake. The earthquake destroys a huge area, it can take down even a city, leaving nothing but ruins and cracks all around.
*Note:Can only be used by Kisame Hoshigaki.*
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(Samehada Bakuhatsu) - Shark Skin Explosion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user points Samehada in the air. The outer layer of shreds on the sword explodes, making the shreds fly in all dirrection, except toward the user.It makes huge damage all around.
*Note: Can only be used by Kisame.*
*Note: The layer of shreds appears back, since the sword heals it's self.*
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~all declined~
 
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lighting sper opening

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton:the use turn his Hiramekarei into a sper. When this sper is throw to someone or something the user can use some hand seals to make the sper point open and make the hole sper a big lightning ball that suck in any thing with in 8 feet and shock them.
*can be use 2 time

water sper opening
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: the use turn his Hiramekarei into a sper. When this sper is throw to someone or something the user can use some hand seals to make the sper point open and throw some type of water Syrup that well make any thing very sicky with in 6 feet
*can be use 3 times

dust wind sper opening

Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: the use turn his Hiramekarei into a sper. When this sper is throw to someone or something the user can use some hand seals to make the sper point open and well blast dust ever where
*can be use 1 time

earth sper help
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: the use turn his Hiramekarei into a sper. When this sper is hold up and the user use some hand seals the sper well call in five wall that well give the user Chakra
*can be use 4 time

exp:if the user have use dust wind sper they cant not go into no other 1

Lightning lil birds
Type: Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:The user shoots a blast of lightning shaped like a lil birds at the opponent.The user can Shoot Multiple Blasts of lightning at the opponent at one time(up to ten blasts of lightning)

*if 6 of them hit the opponet they get stun and can use 2 move not 3
~find the japanese names~
 
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(Kuchiyose: kontan kishi : sono kontan za kakou kaji ) Summoning: soul knights : the soul of the fallen fire

Type: (Summoning) Supplementary,
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: this is one of the fallen knight souls, how once saved the planet with thier life by defeating the evil with there elementery powers, and cursed t look like one of the nature kings which is lion, dragon, phionix, and the one horn flying hourse , this one is the fire soul which is the dargon how can use the fire so easily that he defeated the dark empire's army alone with his fire ..
Hells: ~declined~
 
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(Katon: Houka Kubochi) - Fire Release: Fire Pit
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After a string of hand seals, the user stomps his leg on the ground, causing a small earthquake, during the earthquake the user infuses fire chakra into the the earth calling forth all igniting minerals and then sends them towards their enemies underground, once the minerals reach the enemy(approx. 20 meters), all the minerals will ignite and will burn the ground beneath the opponent, as he falls into the pit, other minerals will ignite and will burn the surface of the earth, resulting in the opponent getting severe burns.
~approved~
 
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Name: (Katon) :nenshou ranpu (Burning Light)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 20-30 depending on how close the person is
Description: The user will do a string of hand signs and send chakra through they're blood stream and collect magnesium from they're blood stream then they will collect it into a certain place IE the fingertip of their hand and will then ignite it using their fire chakra which will then react to the oxygen producing a bright light which will render the opponents eyes blind for 10 seconds.
*Can only be used twice per battle*


this is my first custom jutsu i hope will be approved .
the person will onli be blind for 10 seconds and will regain sight after the eyes get over the brightness as magnesium and oxygens reaction wears away quickly

Hells: ~Declined~
medical jutsu
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

This one already got approved, but I changed the part about being stronger than normal fire jutsu as you asked, so this doesn't count as one of my five customs.

(Kaguzuchi) - Fire-Producing Spirit God -

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user pulls out Yubashiri from its scabbard, but then the user slides the blade along the metal edge(from the guard to the tip) of the scabbard. Yubashiri is an ancient sword that killed thousends of men and creatures across the ages and absorbed their fat into the blade. Fat is very flammable, thus due to the friction with the metal edge, Yubashiri is set on fire. Yubashiri gets surrounded by quick-spinning mini-cyclone of fire, this fire is extremely hot and can even melt boulders and other metal weapons when it collides with them and the user keeps pressuring on the boulder/weapon with Yubashiri.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*This not a fire-jutsu, this is real natural fire*
Hells: ~Approved~

Grimm said that this one was only slight OP and that I should reduce the amount of uses for getting it approved. It used to be 3 chakra slash and 1 elemental slash, so 4 in total. I made it 2 in total now, though it can be both chakra/elemental.

(Tenrai Kiritentou) - Divine Slash of the Heavens -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 if it is forbidden)
Damage points: 80 (+20 if is forbidden)
Description: The user grabs the hilt of his sword that's still in its scabbard. The user starts to focus their chakra into the scabbard. Then he pulls the sword out if it, aiming at the opponent. Instantly a vertical slash is released from the sword that travels at the opponent with incredible speed. This slash is strong enough to cut through almost everything, but it can only go in one straight line. The slash doesn't only appear above ground, but also underground with the same lenght as above. The slash is so powerful it cuts almost through anything, it's so strong that it creates shockwaves on the left and right of the slash.
The user can also, instead of normal chakra, infusing the scabbard and the sword with chakra of the five basic elements. When this is the case, this becomes a forbidden-rank jutsu for the respective element with all its strenghts and weaknesses. If the user only focuses normal chakra, he doesn't need to focus into the scabbard, but can do it just in the blade.

*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice*
*Depending on the element used, the user can't use that element in the next turn*
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Hells: i agree wit goro. i think u should remove the cut tru almost anything part

Still Declined. Remove the elemental part, for it becomes a kinjutsu. Not to mention your rank doesn't allow you to use Forbidden jutsu.

(Ryu Tsui Sen) - Dragon Hammer Flash -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses chakra in both his legs and by bending his legs while he's focusing chakra, he builds up momentum (just like with a flikker of a finger) and then he jumps up till a maximum height of 10 meters. The user grabs his sword with both hands and starts to focus chakra in it. When the user goes down he makes a vertical slash right on the opponent, using the force of the gravity to make the slash a lot stronger then when he would do it on the ground. The strength this generates is enough to cut the opponent almost vertically in half, however there is more. When the user does the slash, the chakra that was focused in the sword is forced to the tip of the blade, where it is released as a shockwave at the point of impact, making the damage even higher. This shockwave can also be used as a defence to block an opponents attack when the user stays on the ground, though he can also block them when he's in the air, but then his attack is aborted.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used by Yubashiri and swords made by Caliburn*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
Hells: ~Approved~ it does not seem that oped =/ i have seen this kind of move is most animes that have samurai fighting. caliburn is just makin it more naruto contect

(Doton: Do Ryu Sen) - Earth style: Earth Dragon Flash -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user grabs his sword with one hand and poins it to the air, while the user focuses doton-based chakra into the sword. The user then slams the sword on the ground, creating a shockwave that travels straight to the opponent. However this shockwave rips large chunks of earth from the ground and catapults them at the opponent, bombarding his entire body. So the opponent is hit both by a shockwave and large chunks of earth.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri and swords made by Caliburn*

Approved


(Kaigan Yubashiri: Keijikatana Akumakingu) - Awaking of Yubashiri: The Apocalyptic Sword of The Demon-King -

Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The chains that were stripped around Yubashiri break (if the chains were still around it) and are catapulted away into all directions, slamming on the earth violently causing craters into it. Yubashiri has a set of unique effects. The sword itself can change its own temperature, making it as hot as the sun or as cold as on Antarctica and can instantly switch between them. Of course this only does damage if it touches the opponent. The sword itself was already physically indestructable, but now it's completely immune to everything else (fire, wind, poison, etc. the user can still be harmed, but it doesn't affect the sword). It can also be infused with all kinds of chakra. Another special effect is that it automatically detects even the slightest temperature fluctuations (heat<->cold) and that includes if it just pops up somewhere, but it does not sense chakra. By a spiritual bond Yubashiri lets the user knows this info, this is not a sense.
Every jutsu that needs a sword to be used gets +25 damage if preformed with Yubashiri.
Also Yubashiri acts like a lightning rod, it can completely nullify E-D rank lightning jutsu's. Higher lightning jutsu's still do normal damage, however Yubashiri directs some of it away, just enough to make the user survive if hit directly with one. Lightning based custom weapons have no effect at all.

*Can only be wielded by Caliburn*
*If anyone else touches it, he gets burned or frozen*

Declined Oped to the extreme. The highlighted portion says way, although the entire jutsu could have been highlighted.
(Tenrai Kiritentou) - Divine Slash of the Heavens -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user grabs the hilt of his sword that's still in its scabbard. The user starts to focus their chakra into the scabbard. Then he pulls the sword out if it, aiming at the opponent. Instantly a vertical slash is released from the sword that travels at the opponent with incredible speed. This slash is strong enough to cut through jutsu's of the same rank, but it can only go in one straight line. The slash doesn't only appear above ground, but also underground with the same lenght as above. The slash is so powerful that it creates slicing shockwaves on the left and right of the slash.
The user can send it also when he's in the air/shoots at the air and in that case he can just focus chakra in the sword itself and doesn't need to focus it in the scabbard.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
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~approved~

(Kenkaku Mugoi Undoushinkei) - Swordsman Inhuman Reflex -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 0-80
Description: By very extensive training in swordsmanship the muscles of the swordsman have been developed so much that they even can react without interference of the brain as a reflex. The reflex kicks in when the user is attacked from a blind spot/ambushed/suddenly looses track of the opponent. When something/someone enters the reach of the sword, the arm(s) automatically pull out the sword and slash/deflect it. It's mainly used for when things as kunai are thrown at the users blind spot or when the opponent is to fast for the user and attacks him head on, in that case it could sever a limb. The reach is considerd as a globe(the user is the center of it and the edges are the reach of the sword). By dislocating the shoulderjoints the user can block them on all sides. Of course it won't be of much use when encountering jutsu's, unless the jutsu's are based on projectiles.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
~approved~

(Fuuton: Kaze No Yaiba Shippuu) - Wind style: Wind Blade Hurricane -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses fuuton-based chakra into his sword. By rotating once fast around his axis, while he's holding the sword, a hurricane of slicing winds appears around the user. It's mainly used as a defence jutsu, but the slicing winds can shred and slice things in short range.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn*

~approved~

(Kaigan Yubashiri: Keijikatana Akumakingu) - Awaking of Yubashiri: The Apocalyptic Sword of The Demon-King -

Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: An ancient katana that was said to be forged for a demon-king that ruled in a long-forgotten era. The handle and guard are made of an indestructible, silverwhite material called Mithril, the handle has been ornamented with sapphireblue leather. The blade itself is made from the indestructible material Adamant, wich gives it a lightgrey color. The scabbard is pitchblack. Most of the time the katana was locked in its scabbard by chains the were stripped all around it because people were scared that its true power would be unleashed.
Yubashiri has a set of effects:
  • The blade can change its temperature from extreme hot to extreme cold and it can do that instantly
  • The sword can be infused with all kinds of chakra
  • The sword is completely indestructible, it's immune to every kind of effect, climat or environment (wind, water, lava, poision etc) however this doesn't mean it can destroy everything (big difference).
  • Every jutsu that needs a sword to be used gets a +25 damage if preformed with Yubashiri.
  • Acts like a lightning rod, it can completely nullify E-D rank lightning jutsu's. Higher lightning jutsu's still do normal damage, however Yubashiri directs some of it away, just enough to make the user survive if hit directly with one. Lightning based custom weapons have no effect at all.
*Can only be wielded by Caliburn*
*If anyone else touches it, he gets burned or frozen*


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(youso koutetsu) - Elemental Armor

Rank : C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user can use any of the 5 basic elements to act as an armor around a certain object. That object can't be hit by the weaker element, and the armor must be taken out before the object
Note:The user must know the element (at least C-rank)
Note:The user can't use the element they covered the item with as long as its in use
Note: can only be taught by Axle
~delinced~
limits


(Kibaku Nendo) - Exploding Clay

Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15-50(Depends on the C-level used)
Damage Points:30-90
Description:The user makes clay figurines that are infused with there chakra.These works of art can explode causing huge damage to the opponent and area.
The user creates a clay web, that the user can throw at the opponent, the user can also set the web up as a trap which is hardly visible and explodes as soon as touched
(Chakra= 20,Damage= 50)

(Kibaku Nendo) - Exploding Clay

Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15-50(Depends on the C-level used)
Damage Points:30-90
Description:The user makes clay figurines that are infused with there chakra.These works of art can explode causing huge damage to the opponent and area.
The user creates Clay clones, that sets off whenever the user wants, they act as shadow clones except they can't use jutsus, but they can make clay with their own bodies and the user can use the clone to make other clay jutsus in an instant
(chakra=30,Damage= 70)

~declined on clay jutsus~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Updating this jutsu

Dragon Wave (Doragon Nami)

Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range- Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: Releasing a huge mass amount of chakra, the user of this jutsu compresses the chakra in a small, volleyball sized sphere with two hands. The process, in which, the ball is created takes time to develop, making this attack dangerous to use in the middle of a battle. Even when fired prematurely. The blast is so powerful it has the capability of completely devouring half a village. This jutsu is more of an explosive type move then wave based attack
Note: If attacked within short to mid range, the blast will be utterly disrupted and will cause a huge explosion causing great damage to both the user and the opponent.
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi
Note: Can only be used once in battle
~approved~
 
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Warp Spiral sphere(Sori rasengan)
Rank; S
Range; Mid-Long
Chakra Cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; This technique is a combination of Minato Namikaze's Flying Thunder God Technique and Rasengan. Minato charges up a large Rasengan, warps himself behind the enemy, striking them with it and sending the enemy flying and causing incredible damage, though considering its power the opponent never dies in 1 hit, often avoiding the technique if in close range, or even intercepting it since the user has to use rasengan along with Flying Thunder God with no limit such as a seal requiring too much of a skill.
(Note; Minato's(The Yellow Flash[according to game reference]) lvl.2 charged ougi in Naruto; Ultimate ninja 3)
Note; Usable twice in a battle.
~declined~

don't say its op-ed i have given more then enough ways to avoid it, also this wasn't in the list and i have given the exact reference
please!!! :pwease:
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

As my first jutsus weren't Approwed I decided to do summonings like these:

(Kuchiyose: Karasui: Kuro Hane) Summon: Crow: Black feather

Type: (Summoning) Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
After users bitten his/her Finger He/she summons Black feather that is black crow which has been trained for spying that works as extra pair of eyes. This crow can be used like deidara's clay birds - for flying. * note only myartisablast is able to use/teach this jutsu *


(Kuchiyose: Karasui: Hyaku karasuis) Summon: Crow: hundred crows

Type: (Summoning) Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: ( + 15 when Crows attack to opponent )
After users bitten his/her Finger He/she summons 100 crows that are able to attack and spy opponent. * note only myartisablast is able to use/teach this jutsu. *

~pending~
ask goro and roku to check it


I suppose they can be accepted, seeming itachi's crows are genjutsu not an actual summoning creature. Still roku should weigh in.
 
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(Raiton: Kesei Bakuha) Lightning: Existing Explosion
Type: Attack
Rank: S-B
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40-20
Damage: 80-40(-10 to the user)
Description: The user will focus on lightning around them and will add their own chakra to existing lightning and cause it to overload and combust causing a large explosion. The power of the explosion will depend on the lightning jutsu that is combusted.
~User can not use any other Lightning jutsu on the same turn as this one~
~declined~

(Fuuton: Rasen Nagashi) Wind: Spiraling Current
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will concentrate on the wind around them and will force their own chakra into it and cause the wind in the area to densen, then they will quickly begin to make the wind spin and create a tornado around their target( may be created around user to protect), if the user wishes the tornado can close in and cut the target to shreads, the tornado can be created in many places even underwater to create cutting whirlpools.
~No other wind jutsu this turn or the next turn~
~declined~
limits



|Declined| I have a jutsu like this.


(Suiton: Chinka Oshi) Water: Sinking Pressure
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 0(-10 for the user to continue)
Description: The will mix their chakra into the water, then the oppoents feet will begin to sink into the water and then the water around the opponent will begin to drag the opponent into the water with more force. The opponent will remain underwater though no damage will be done to them they cannot escape easily. Must be a on large water source for this jutsu to be used. The opponent will remain underwater for one turn, due to control needed to maintain this jutsu only one other jutsu can be used on the same turn. Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~approved~
 
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(Pe-Pa Doragon) - Paper Dragon

Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: Konan releases a large amount of paper from her self She then Forms A large Dragon made out of paper. This dragon can take flight and shoot large amount of paper with wind chakra to make it extremely Sharp at the opponent. The dragon is capable of blocking up to B-Rank Lightning Jutsu.
-This justu can Only Be used and taught by Konan
-The Dragon lasts for 3 turns.
~pending~
i am not sure if paper can blick lightning jutsus


Lightning would shoot through the paper, setting it a flame

(Sobou Pe-Pa Katana) - Hardened Paper Sword

Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: Konan create a Sword or Katana made of hardened paper.For extra Damage the User can Focus Earth Chakra into the Sword to Make it Denser.
-This justu can Only Be used and taught by Konan
-The sword lasts for 3 turns.
~approved~
 
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(Kuchiyose : Grace " kirameki kage" ) Summoning: jaguar : Grace " the sparkle of shadows "

Type: (Summoning) Supplementary,
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: from the land of glory , Grace was born in , he grows and his lightening powers grow with him , he use the lightening element so perfectly that he got the ability to make an thunder storm that destories an country ( this is not an attack of his yet ) , he and his clan never apeared to ayone execept for those with pure minds and souls ..
~declined~
already exist
 
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(fuuton:kaze tousa sawgi)wind style:wind current uproar
type:supplementary/attack
range:short-long
rank:S-rank
chakra:20
damage:40(-5 every time it is used)
description:an uproar of razor sharp wind rushing the opponent at 100-150mph blowing the then back into or on an oblect,or to propell
a thrown object...

note: limited to three uses per fight.
note: limited only to me and who i teach it to.
note: limited to only 4 ppl for it to be taught to.
restriction: if used more than three times the user is disqualified and the match goes to opponent.
huh? O_O disqualified?
 
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(San Butai Katana Danmaku) - Three Element Sword Barrage
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user strikes the opponent with 3 stabs or slashes each one is charged with one of the 3 basic elements (Lighting, Fire, and Wind). This is a highly advanced skill that adds the affects from the elemental additions of the chakra being added to the stabs and slashes. Lightning will causing numbing for one turn, fire will cause burning, and wind will cause shredding and slicing. This is a weapon oriented attack with a sword. It uses the same style of technique as the attack named (Go Animaru Go Soshi Genkotsu) – 5 Animal 5 Element fist, but only uses 3 elements.

Note: Can only be used 2 Time during a match.
Note: After the attack has been used the user can only use A Rank or lower Jutsu.
Note: Requires a Sword.
Note: Can only be taught by Musasibou and Yugura
~approved~

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(Shokkingu Sutoraiku) - Shocking Strike
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user take a stance pointing the blade towards the enemy while focusing chakra into the blade. The user will then use chakra to enhance his speed and guide the sword to strike a vital organ. When struck the opponent will be hit with a burst of chakra attacking the victim's chakra network. Limits chakra flow for one turn for the victim after the opponent is hit by it. This attack uses the same idea behind of the Hyuga's Gentle Fist Style, but in a more broad and weapon oriented way. With focused chakra in the blade the chakra can be dispirsed inside the enemy while the blade is still within the target.

Note: This can only be Taught by Musasibou and Yagura.
Note: This can only be used 2 times during battle.
Note: User must wait 3 turns before being able to use this again.

Hope these get approved ^ ^
~delinced~
must be hyuuga
 
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