[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

Alucard · Apr 15, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Alucard said:
(Fuuton: Kazefunka) - Wind Release: Wind Eruption

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will send wind chakra underground and then he will do a hand seal. Right after the hand seal, a great quantity of wind with 4 metres wide will erupt from the ground, cutting and hitting everything up to 10 metres high with slicing winds and rocks that were dragged by the wind. This jutsu has the advantage of tricking the opponent: on the moment before the wind erupt, the earth will obviously start to tremble, making the opponent to think he's being target of a doton jutsu and thus, he'll possibly use a raiton to counter it when in fact is a fuuton, which has elemental advantage over raiton and because of that, it will overpower -almost for sure- the opponent's lightning technique. However, an accurate sensor who can see chakra flowing underground won't be tricked that easily.
*Usable twice per battle

~ Where does the wind come from ? Under the opponent. to his front, where ? ~

(Fuuton: Kaze Kyuushuu) - Wind Release: Wind Suction

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will do a hand seal and create a vacuum behind the opponent. This vacuum amplifies user's wind jutsus, giving them +10 damage points, however, the user will need to spend +5 chakra every turn to maintain the vacuum behind the opponent.
*Usable twice per battle

~ Unrealistic. Declined. ~

(Fuuton: Kazefunka) - Wind Release: Wind Eruption: It's clearly stated that it comes from the ground. Now if it appears beneath or in front of the user depends on how i use the jutsu.

~ Approved ~

(Fuuton: Kaze Kyuushuu) - Wind Release: Wind Suction: How come it's unrealistic if it was already proved on the manga (Danzo vs Sasuke) it's possible?

~ If its already used in the manga, WTF are you doing submitting it in the Custom Jutsu thread ? ~

Typhon · Apr 15, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Hypnotiq said:
Custom Weapon: Warhammer of Akimichi Pride
(Shuukan Buki: Sensoo-Kanazuchi o Akimichi Jiman)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 45 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 90
Description: After using the Super Multi-Size technique the user opens a scroll and summons this massive hammer. Due to its size its only usable by Akimichi clan members who are using the super multi-sized technique. Even a person with immense physical strength such as Tsuande who was seen lifting Gamabunta's sword would be helpless to lift it. The hammer itself is massive and made of a metal that can conduct pure chakra. Because of this property the hammer is best used in conjunction with the three colored pills of the Akimichi clan due to the massive boost in chakra they receive. After using a pill the user then transfers the newly formed chakra to the hammer in order to create a devastating attack. Naturally the strength boost is dependent on the pill used. The strength increases from green to yellow to red in an exponential fashion. Once the user's super multi-sized technique is released the hammer is re-sealed into the scroll.
~ Can only be wielded my Akimichi clan members.
~ Must have used super multi-sized technique in order to use.
~ Lasts the duration of the multi-sized technique.
~ Due to its size the wielder must use 10 chakra per turn.

~ You aren't stronger than Tsunade, no matter how many pills you take ~

Custom Weapon: Warhammer of Akimichi Pride
(Shuukan Buki: Sensoo-Kanazuchi o Akimichi Jiman)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 45 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 90
Description: After using the Super Multi-Size technique the user opens a scroll and summons this massive hammer. Due to its size its only usable by Akimichi clan members who are using the super multi-sized technique. The hammer itself is massive and made of a metal that can conduct pure chakra. Because of this property the hammer is best used in conjunction with the three colored pills of the Akimichi clan due to the massive boost in chakra they receive. After using a pill the user then transfers the newly formed chakra to the hammer in order to create a devastating attack. Naturally the strength boost is dependent on the pill used. The strength increases from green to yellow to red in an exponential fashion. Once the user's super multi-sized technique is released the hammer is re-sealed into the scroll.
~ Can only be wielded my Akimichi clan members.
~ Must have used super multi-sized technique in order to use.
~ Lasts the duration of the multi-sized technique.
~ Can only be summoned and used for one strike twice per battle
~ No elemental ninjutsu during the turn this hammer is summoned
~ Due to its size the wielder must use 10 chakra per turn.

~ Approved, I added bits ~

(I removed the bit about Tsunade being unable to lift it)

Konoha's Yellow Flash · Apr 15, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Shozaichi )-Earth Style:Earth Vibrations
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu allows a ninja to sense movement from long distances by vibrations in the ground. The ninja must first be undergroound through means of a seperate jutsu. The range of the jutsu is 15 meters.The jutsu requires the user to lightly layer themselves in chakra,meaning it takes small amounts of chakra to keep up.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Konoha?s Yellow Flash.
Note:can only be used if underground by a previous jutsu.
Note:can only be done tiwce per battle.
Note: this jutsu does not attack in any way it just senses the vibrations on the ground and makes it easier to locate the enemy if the user is underground.

~ Declined, Do not resubmit ~

(Taku Hiza )-High Knee
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:60
Description:The user will leap high into the air, comparable to jumping high off the tight ropes in a traditional wrestling ring. Once in the air they will skillfully shift their weight and come crashing back down to the ground at blazing speeds. The aim is to slam into the opponent with extreme force with either the knee, the heel, or the actual leg. Even if the attack misses those in the immediate area will take damage from the shock wave and large bits of debris created when it makes impact with the ground.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Konoha?s Yellow Flash.
Note:if the attack misses, the opponent will take half the damage it would take from the actual hit.
Note: can only be used twice per battle if succeded in the first attempt.

~ How the heck will you jump so high that you come down at "blazing speeds" which require something along the level of the Sixth Gate ? ~

(Suiton: Enkou Henkan Sakuryaku)-Water Release: Flammable Conversion Tactic
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seal, the user can convert a source of water that they are making physical contact with into a flammable liquid called Naphtha, which has a high temperature flash point and cant be extinguished with just water once it catches fire.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Konoha?s Yellow Flash.
Note: as stated in the jutsu there must be a water source present,this may be either provided by the user/enemy or by the enviorment.
Note:Can only be used twice per battle

~ WTF, this should be submitted as a CE. Declined. ~

Pain.. · Apr 15, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Hade Kasai ) Loud Fire

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user do only one handseals and star focusing opponent chakra ( It only takes 1 minutes ) and then the user opponent skin star coming down and burning.

NOTE: Only Obito-Uchiha can use this jutsu.

~ Declined, I don;t understand a word ~

( X- Raion Subeta -X ) X- Lion Sword -X

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user take out X- Lion Sword -X and star putting fire to it the user that is using X- Lion Sword -X Doesn't need to do handseals just focus fire chakra into the sword with it take less then a minute when the sword is in fire the user that is using X- Lion Sword -X can put the opponent body on fire on contact because the sword is so high that the fire is as high as the sword. The X- Lion Sword -X have a special power that the user hit the ground and all around the user fire erupts for a metre. This can be done twice. When the sword is used in conjunction with a wind technique to propel the sword, it gains speed for its strikes comparable to the 3rd Gate.

NOTE: Only Obito-Uchiha could use the sword.
NOTE: No water jutsus for as long as the sword is in battle.
NOTE: User's Genjutsus lose a rank as long as the sword is in play.

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~ Approved, I fixed bits ~

Faust · Apr 15, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Dyuaru Kokyuu)-Dual Breath

Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Must be two people or clones to perform this. One of them gathers lightning chakra into his lungs, but the other gathers water chakra. Then at the same time they release big water and lightning blasts from their mouths that connects into the air making a huge water/lightning ball sent at the enemy. If the opponent is hit, he becomes palsied from the lightning.
*Note: No Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu the next turn.
*Note: The opponent is palsied for one turn.
*Note: Usable twice per battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

(Kazanbai Bunshin no Jutsu)-Volcanic Ash Clone

Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: After forming the needed hand seals the user will create a copy of himself or herself from the extra dust or ash on the ground. This clone is stronger then typical bunshin in that it actually has substance and therefore can take one or two hits before dispelling. When the Kazanbai Bunshin dispels it explodes into a shower of hot ash and gases that can start fires and blind anyone standing too close.
*Note: When the clone is destroyed it explodes into a shower of hot ash and gases and will burn anyone near him.
*Note: Usable twice per battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

(Katon: Inferuno Bakufuu)-Fire Style: Infernal Blast

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses as much fire energy as they can into their body, then expels it suddenly with as much force as they can. This blasts everything in the area with an intense wave of fire, burning everything around the user, but not lasting long enough to cause permanent damage. Releasing the fire through a single hand in a conical blast can also focus this technique, although this requires lots of concentration. After performing this technique, the user will be fatigued and unable to use Fire jutsu for some time.
*Note: No Fire Style for the next turn.
*Note: Can be used as a defense from wind jutsus.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~ All Declined ~

Artimis · Apr 16, 2010

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(X-shippuu)X- Hurricane
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short -mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: This move starts out by the user extending both arms in a outwards position, Then the user lets out very larger flames from each arm, once that is done the user starts to spin at a very fast speed making the fire start to twist around him forming a very powerful Hurricane, the fire Hurricane is very larger if the opponent is standing mid from the user he will be caught in the attack once caught inside the opponent will be ripped and burned to death since the attack is made up of wind and fire and the Hurricane can’t just be stopped by any water attack must be S-rank or a two element combo
Note: can only be used once in a fight
Note: once used user can’t use any S rank fire jutsus next turn
Note: must have X-gloves on to perform this jutsu

(X-panchi)X-Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short -mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will charger up his right X-glove once the glove is full charger (3 seconds to charger) he will use X-push only using his left hand to blast him towards the opponent at incredible if the user is in short range with the opponent it might almost be instant. The user will have a enough speed and power to break through S-rank defense and the user can stop X-punch and use another X-move at anytime.
Note: Only can be done with X-Gloves
Note: can be used twice in battle
Note: Wait 2 turns before using X-Punch

This is just to show you what X-push is so you can understand how it works better this is already approved

(X-pusshu)X-Push
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short -mid
Chakra Cost:35
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By infuse his gloves with charka and point both gloves to one direction, the user is able to push himself in any direction he wants just by pointing the gloves. This work by when the user puts charka in to the gloves they let out a very strong blast that is strong enough to move the user so the user uses the move to blast him to any direction he want in really fast speeds. This can be used to quickly dodge a opponent attack, or it can be used to get closer to your opponent and this move may be used in the air.
Note: can be used 4 times during battle
Note Have to wait one turn before using again
Note: each push, pushes the user about 20 feet from where he was standing
Must have X-gloves on to use

~ Leaving for Roku ~

Axle · Apr 16, 2010

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Great Wind Divider (Fuuton: Daishou Fuuton Debaida)
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user forms a giant wind slash, this wind is so densed that it can't be controlled and can cut through solid rock, it also has a high vibration with the wind going at a fast pace, this makes it able to split a fire attack in 2, and still continue towards the opponent
Note: can only be used once
Note: Co-Creater Mato~kun
Note: the user cannot use Wind jutsus for the rest of the battle

Turtle Sage Mode (Kame Seijin Mo-do)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Description: The user absorbs the natural energy in nearby life in the area, and controls it letting enter Sage Mode. The user's skin turns green and oily, their muscles highly expand, and they grow a shell on their back capable of repelling B-rank and lower attacks.

~Abilities~

-The user's physical strength, speed, and durability dramastically increase.
-The user's other ninjutsu and genjutsu also increase, the user can have the natural energy surrounding them become an extension of their body, increasing the reach of their taijutsu.
-The user gains the ability to sense chakra.
-The user gets stronger as time passes instead of weaker, in turn healing any injuries they receive.

~Drawbacks~

-Because the user is moving, the Sage chakra cannot be replenished, which means the user can't stay in this mode for extended periods of time.
- In order to gather enough Natural energy to initiate the transformation into Hermit Mode, the user must remain perfectly still. Because of that, the user can be an easy target for an opponent
-As as soon Turtle Sage Mode ends the user is left in an exhausted state, and can easily be attacked.

Note: Sage Mode can only be used once
Note: Sage Mode lasts 4 turns
Note: It takes 2 turns to gain the Natural Energy to transform
Note: Only Axle may teach this
Note: All ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu used while in this mode gains +15
Note: once Sage Mode is over the user can no longer defend themselves and automatically lose the battle
Note: Must have a contract with the Turtles

~ Both Declined ~

KeotsuEclipse · Apr 16, 2010

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Way of the Samurai (Bushidō)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: None
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: Zero
Description: The user gives up the way of the Shinobi, in favor of Samurai skills, transforming himself/herself into a Samurai. As a Samurai, the user cannot use any Ninjutsu or any Genjutsu at all – all non-chakra-based Taijutsu are still available. Also, the user gains access to the Samurai Arts. Samurai have 300 chakra less than what they had before they used this move. All damage taken by Ninjutsu is reduced by 25%, and all Taijutsu damage does 50% normal damage due to the armor.
*Custom Weapons are still allowed. Any specific “jutsu” that the Weapon can use are null, though the Weapons properties remain.
*Custom Taijutsu that are not Chakra Based are still allowed.
*This technique is irreversible during battle, once activated.
*KeotsuEclipse and those who know this technique whom he gives permission to are the only ones who can teach this.
*Though KG and Custom Element Jutsu cannot be used, the respective chakras (if any) can be channeled through the Samurai’s sword for different effects (though, this is a separate technique in its own accord).

~ Approved, I edited and removed lots of it ~

Samurai Art: Torrent Beyond the Heavens (Samurai Gijutsu: Se Tengai)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short- Medium
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Cost: 40
Description: Holding their blade sideways, the Samurai will run Water Chakra through their blade, activating the technique. A great downpour will come over the terrain, providing water for this technique, as well as dropping all Fire Justu down one rank, and reducing their damage by 10. A ring of water will form around the Samurai with a radius equal to that of the complete wingspan of the Samurai (meaning it would be roughly 10-11 feet [roughly 3.2 meters] in diameter). This ring has a single tentacle for each of the eight points of the Compass Rose: North, South, West, East, Northeast, Northwest, Southeast, and Southwest. The tentacles will strike at anything within range as the Samurai commands them, but they do not attack on their own; they are approximately 5 feet [1.5 meters] long, and the Samurai must know the general vicinity of the opponent(s) to strike them if they are behind him/her. The final ability is that with every slash of the Samurai’s blade, a wave of water is sent rushing along in the same direction, until it is either disrupted (by terrain, opponent, or otherwise), or it reaches Mid range.
*As long as the rain continues to fall, this technique remains. If the torrent is lessened, the waves stop appearing, but so long as it is raining, the ring and tentacles remain. If the rain is stopped completely, but there is an ample amount of water around (or a large body of water), the ring can remain. (If the field is flooded by the torrent or otherwise, the waves can continue under these conditions as well.)
*The low Chakra cost is do to this being a Samurai Art, and the Samurai peak Chakra value of 100.

~ Declined. ~

Deidara... · Apr 16, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Iseris... said:
Jutsu Update

original jutsu:

Katon: Ryuuen Kumo ( Fire Release : Dragon Blaze Cloud )

Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
The user spits a cloud of flames that moves and surrounds the opponent. Then flame dragons shoot out of the cloud from every direction at the opponent. The cloud itself will cause burns.
NOTE: can only be taught by iseris Or Emperor
NOTE: can only be used three times per battle

Katon: Ryuuen Kumo ( Fire Release : Dragon Blaze Cloud )

Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
The user forcefully spits out a cloud of flames that moves and surrounds the opponent. Then flame dragons shoot out of the cloud from every direction at the opponent. The cloud itself will cause burns.
NOTE: can only be taught by iseris

~ No restrictions ? ~

forbidden form:

Katon: Ryuuen Kumo ( Fire Release : Dragon Blaze Cloud )

Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: Forbidden
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
The user forcefully spits a cloud of flames. while in flight the the cloud begins to condense forming a single dragon. the dragon then explodes and the result is enormous pillar of fire that consumes all that in touches
NOTE: can only be taught by iseris
NOTE: can only be used once per battle

~ Declined ~

(Genjutsu: kinaga uxe-to)Illusion: Lying in wait
Type: supplementary / Offensive
Rage: Short - Mid
Rank: S
Damage: 40
Chakra: 80
Description: the user places the opponent in an illusion where they witness no change of any sort, at the users will the opponent will then see earth cords constrict their feet if they are standing still. and if they are in motion they think the muscles in their legs contract forcibly causing them to capsize and then earth cords constrict them. the effects of this jutsu can be activated turns after the opponent has been placed in the illusion.

Note: this jutsu's effects must be used two turns after the casting of the illusion or it wears off altogether.
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: can only be taught by Iseris...

~ Declined, I need more restrictions ~

Katon: Ryuuen Kumo ( Fire Release : Dragon Blaze Cloud )

Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
The user forcefully spits out a cloud of flames that moves and surrounds the opponent. Then flame dragons shoot out of the cloud from every direction at the opponent. The cloud itself will cause burns.
NOTE: can only be taught by iseris.
NOTE: Can only be Used Four times

~ Declined. Firstly, you haven't edited anything of the substance of the jutsu worked out by ME, and given to you a long while ago, so you aren't justified in removing my name from the users. Secondly, you haven't edited ANYTHING except change the three times per battle to four, so that's ridiculous as well. This is permanently declined, and cannot be resubmitted in any way, shape or form. ~

(Genjutsu: kinaga uxe-to)Illusion: Lying in wait
Type: supplementary / Offensive
Rage: Short - Mid
Rank: S
Damage: 40
Chakra: 80
Description: the user places the opponent in an illusion where they witness no change of any sort, at the users will the opponent will then see earth cords constrict their feet if they are standing still. and if they are in motion they think the muscles in their legs contract forcibly causing them to capsize and then earth cords constrict them. the effects of this jutsu can be activated turns after the opponent has been placed in the illusion.

Note: this jutsu's effects must be used two turns after the casting of the illusion or it wears off altogether.
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: Further Genjutsu or Lightning/Fire techniques cannot be used by the user during the two turns of the Genjutsu
Note: can only be taught by Iseris...

it can only be used twice and the jutsu must be used in two turns. what other restrictions could be put?

~ Approved. See the restrictions I put. ~

Passion · Apr 16, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Teh-Tobz said:
( Kuchiyose: Akuma ) - Summoning jutsu: Fiend

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 ( - 5 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will make Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram handseals and/or wipe blood on their tattoo 黒 ( Black ) Summoning Akuma the giant blackbird that has eye patch and red stripe on his back. The feathers and wings of akuma are hard like steel so it can protect user from incoming attacks ( Up to A - Rank ) once without turning into cloud of smoke. The Akuma also is mostly used for stealth missions so it has the ability to split into eight smaller blackbirds. The Akuma can be used for flying and it has the ability to use Genjutsu and Ninjutsu Up to B - rank.
Note:
- Can be summoned only once
- Can block B - Ranked attack only once
- It has ability to split into eight smaller blackbirds

~Declined~ Remove either the genjutsu or the ninjutsu part.
( Ito Bunshin ) - Thread clone

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: Kakuzu will let out threads from his body parts that'll form a mass of threads in form of person that solidifies into perfect copy of him that's able of using Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu and thread attacks but is unable to use elemental ninjutsu. When the clone is destroyed it'll revert into threads.

~Declined~
( Genjutsu: Tenbun no Megami ) - Illusion technique: Gift of the Goddess

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 10 when technique ends + Damage that's done )
Description: User cast an illusion around him preventing sense of pain to work and allowing user to keep on fighting no matter what is done to him. When the jutsu is in play the only way to stop the fight is to either incapacite user or damage his brains enough that he can't keep on fighting. This jutsu will grant user the full immunity to pain for one turn and when the jutsu is over the user will suffer - 10 damage + the damage that's done to his body when this jutsu was in play. The user is also paralyzed when the jutsu ends.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- No Genjutsu allowed in whole battle after usage
- Costs - 10 damage + the damage that's done to him while this jutsu is in play

~Declined~ don't resubmit

Replacing following custom:

Custom weapon: ( Na kumi no rōnin ) - Blade set of Ronin

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 5 per turn when chakra is infused to smaller blades )
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is the blade set of skilled ninja. It contains four different parts. The first part is giant sword that's similar to Zabuza's hidden swordmen of the mist sword. The sword is called Guillotine and it was forged inside of hidden mist's master smith's workshop from eighteen smaller steel swords while he was inspired by the design of Zabuza's sword and decided to make something that looks like it but these swords differ from each other by the fact that zabuza's sword is longer, has the holes in the blade and is heavier. This sword is mainly carried on back. The three other swords are smaller type katanas that were too forged on the same place. The Katanas are made from special metals that causes them to have the ability to absorb elemental affinities just by user focusing different natured chakra into them meaning that one katana can contain one only one element that it can absorb. Shortest katana can only absorb wind element chakra causing it become sharper and the length of katana is increased by 4-6 inches. The middle sized katana can absorb only lightning nature chakra making it slightly numb place around the cut. The longest katana can only absorb water nature chakra making it cut faster in rain or underwater.

[*] The Guillotine is carried on back of ninja
[*] Three smaller swords are carried on left hip
[*] Guillotine sword can be only swung by its master
[*] Three smaller swords contain the ability to absorb elemental affinities.
[*] Only skilled swordman can carry this set
[*] While wearing these user can't perform any taijutsu
[*] Shortest Katana can only absorb wind element chakra
[*] Middle sized Katana can only absorb lightning element chakra
[*] Longest katana can only absorb water element chakra

Guillotine looks similar to this expect it doesn't have the holes or isn't that long:

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Three smaller blades:

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New one:

Custom weapon: ( kūsō hane ) - Daydream weapons

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 5 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will draw out the daydream dual swords and use them in fight. The swords are called Masamune and Father hood. The origins of these swords are unknown but it is known that they've been forged from chakra infused metal that isn't shown on earth.

Masamune

The sword is indestructible but it isn't able of break everything.
It is light like a feather and it cannot be wielded by anyone else but its owner.
It boosts the speed of user in handseal forming.
It is able of breaking through rocks with lightning chakra infused into it.

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Fatherhood

It is slower sword but it can deal huge amount of damage in small amount of time.
Only skilled swordsman can use sword that is this big
This sword is also indestructible and cannot be wielded by anyone expect it's owner.
It breaks easily through regular steel/iron swords

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Note:
- Only skilled swordsman can use these two swords at the same time.
- They cost - 5 chakra per turn when wielded
- User cannot perform genjutsu for whole battle when these swords are in drawn.
- No Forbidden or S ranked taijutsu or Ninjutsu can be used while these swords are in play

~ Approved ~

( Kuchiyose: Akuma ) - Summoning jutsu: Fiend

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 ( - 5 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will make Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram handseals and/or wipe blood on their tattoo 黒 ( Black ) Summoning Akuma the giant blackbird that has eye patch and red stripe on his back. The feathers and wings of akuma are hard like steel so it can protect user from incoming attacks ( Up to A - Rank ) once without turning into cloud of smoke. The Akuma also is mostly used for stealth missions so it has the ability to split into eight smaller blackbirds. The Akuma can be used for flying and it has the ability to use Wind or Lightning Ninjutsu Up to B - rank.
Note:
- Can be summoned only once
- Can block B - Ranked attack only once
- It has ability to split into eight smaller blackbirds. This form can be used only once, and lasts for four turns. The smaller birds cannot use jutsu.

~ Approved, I edited bits. ~

-Only for emperor-

Faust · Apr 16, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom weapon: ( Daidokoro kitto no shi ) - Kitchen kit of DOOM

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will infuse chakra into own custom weapons and draw out the Kitchen kit of DOOM. The kit contains multiple weapons such as Fork, Knife, Rolling pin and a Spoon. Each of these weapons have been infused with chakra so they cause same damage like any sword that user would wield.

Rolling pin

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The rolling pin of DOOM is capable of blocking swords because of the chakra that's infused inside of it.
The rolling pin works like a club and it can easily shatter ribs and bones like that ( Does not affect Kaguyas )
The Rolling pin of DOOM is indestructible like any other part of this kit.

Fork

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The Fork is indestructible like any other part of this kit.
It's very sharp and is mainly used to stab opponent.
When Lightning chakra is conducted inside of the blade it will numb body parts when it lands a hit.
The fork conducts heat aswell so when fire jutsu hits the fork it cannot be used for one turn.

Knife

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Knife is indestructible like any other part of this kit.
The handle of knife has plastic insulates so it can withstand incoming lightning chakra.
User of this knife can challenge even a skilled swordsman with the powers of this knife and it's much lighter than regular sword.
Can be infused with Wind chakra so it will gain 10 cm more length.

Spoon

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The spoon is indestructible like any other part of this kit.
It can be infused with Earth elemental chakra so it will gain slight stone layer covering it allowing user to cause bruises and slight hairline fractures and pain to muscles.
It is also weak to heating up since it doesn't have any other than metal handle.

Chopping board

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It is indestructible and it can withstand cuts and slashes.
It is wielded like shield.
It is able of withstanding Lightning and Fire chakra.

Note:
- Genjutsu cannot be used in whole battle after drawing out these weapons.
- Upto A - Rank taijutsu can be used when wielded
- Costs - 5 chakra per turn

~Credit goes to Tobz. ;D

~ Declined. This is a copy of my chef set idea except with different items. ~

Ben-sama · Apr 17, 2010

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(Mokuton : Gesuidou Mokuzai) Wood Release : Draining Wood

Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The user infuuses the wood around the opponent with his chakra and makes the wood to start sucking the opponent's chakra away from him. The stolen opponent's chakra then is stored in the wood pieces and can be detonated with the Monkey handsign causing the drained away chakra to be turned into light explosives.
- -10 to the opponent every turn since this jutsu is being used.
- The damage of the explosion is halved from the chakra gathered up by the wood around the opponent.
- No Mokuton during the turns this jutsu is active
- This jutsu may last up to 5 turns.
- Once/If this jutsu last 5 turns it explodes without a handsign.

(Tsuchi - Mokuzai Kirikae) Earth - Wood Conversion

Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The user uses his chakra to convert extract water chakra from wood to turn it into plain earth or adds water chakra to earth to turn it into wood.
- Twice per battle
- User cannot use earth techniques next turn.
- The conversion process takes about 5 seconds no matter the size of the target.

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit ~

-Mugen- · Apr 17, 2010

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~ Both Declined, follow the template properly ~

Eddy-kun.. · Apr 17, 2010

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(Suiton: Suiton Kokatsu)-Water Style: Water Pressure

Type: Defense/Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user will make one hand seal and any mass of water or anything mostly made up of water chosen on the field will violently implode on itself. With one other hand seal, the user can release all that pressure, causing the water to expand in all direction.

Can only be used 2 times per match
No S-rank water the next turn

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

-Mugen- · Apr 19, 2010

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Please edit if needed

~ All Declined, do not resubmit any ~

-Ventus- · Apr 19, 2010

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(buki Kuchiyose:hi gloves) Weapon Summoning:Ice Gloves/I-Gloves
Type:Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The I-Gloves are a special weapon made from the most finest materials in yuukigakure.The hyouton users that wears this gloves boost up their hyouton attacks by 20% percent.The gloves also can condense the water in the air and make them solid ice of different shape and can block a-rank fire.
~If the ability is used -10 in chakra~
~Can only be summoned once in the battle~
~Can only be used by Shinn~

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(Hyouton:Forbidden koori mo-do)Ice release:Forbidden Ice mode
Rank : Forbidden
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 50
Damage Points : N/A
Description :The user will do a set of handseals that unlocks the full potential of a bloodline hyouton user, it releases all of his hyouton chakra.Thus allowing him to use the sacred Ice jutsu of the ancient Hyouton users and making all ice jutsu's 90% stronger.The user will be enveloped by its hyouton chakra thus making him into a humanoid ice that negates all water,wind jutsu's s-class below and making all class of fire negated to him.The user can also condense water drom the air making them ice that can help the user offensive and defensive and they range up to short - mid.This jutsu also has its drawback because the user unlocked the 90% of his hyouton chakra he can only use ice jutsu's until the form ends.This form last 5 turns and after the last turn the user's wind,water chakra are locked so he cannot use any hyouton jutsu's and only have 10% chakra reserve(cannot do C-forbidden jutsu) and are only enough to make him live and can only use d-rank jutsu for the rest if the fight.
~Can only be used once per battle~
~Shinn can teach this jutsu~

(buki Kuchiyose:Ultima setto) Weapon Summoning:Ultima Set
Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost:50
Damage Points:90
Description:The Ultima Set are forged from highest grade materials that can be found in the depths of the earth.They are forged by 6 elemental masters,by which each weapon and armor is infused of a elemental chakra.

Foundation of Golem

This armor is very strong that it can block c-b rank attacks of any kind

This armor can negate and cancel C-D rank earth attacks

It gives +20 damage to earth attacks

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Angklets of Shiva

the angklets of shiva gives the user dramatically increase in speed (gates1)

It also gives the user +20 to all wind attacks

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Born of the Phoenix

The blades of the sword is infused with fire chakra itself,meaning that a touch of this sword can damage the part and making it unusable because of the burn

the sword gives +20 to all fire attacks

the sword is capable of absorbing c-d rank fire attacks

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Whip of leviathan

At the start it needs to absorb a water source so that it can form

The length of this whip can differ from short to mid

It gives +20 to all water attacks

It can absorb c-d rank water attacks

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Gloves of Ramuh

1 touch of this gloves can numb a body part of the opponent

It gives +20 to lightning attacks

it also absorbs c-d rank attacks of lightning

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Restrictions
~The user can only use A rank Ninjutsu of any kind while the set are in play~
~The user also gives up -30 of chakra~
~Because of strain the user -5 health every turn~

~ All Declined. Do not resubmit any, Are you aware of the fact that you can have only one weapon ? O_O ~

Wind and Fire release:Blazing rasenshuriken!
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60-80
Description:When doing the rasenshuriken the user will then put his fire chakra in combination w/ the rasenshuriken.Making it not only pinch the cells but also burning them microscopically.This jutsu will result in the immediet death of the enemy and also will put the user's arm in critical state because the damage he will also recieve.This jutsu is far more power full than fire rasengan combined w/ rasenshuriken because it cannot be block by S-class water jutsu or water combination because it will only evaporate the water because of extreme heat.
*only be used once*
*only Shinn can do this jutsu*
*-30 health on the user*
*cannot do any S-ranks katon for 2 turns*
*Cannot do any S-Ranks Fuuton for 2 turns*

~ No Rasengan variations ~

Emperor · Apr 19, 2010

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( Nankyokukansoku ) - Antarctic Exploration

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Skipper flares his chakra and releases it as a wave of pure cold, chilling the atmosphere in the Battle Arena to a significant degree, with the temperatures dropping to 0 C. However, human beings can withstand this level of cold without significant damages, and as such the opponent will merely begin losing stamina and speed by one rank each turn onwards due to the cold. Using a Katon technique above C rank [ regardless of the heat it generates ] will heat up the localised area for one turn, but the next turn the chill would have set back in, lowering stamina and speed again.
The technique can only be activated once per battle Skipper is in. Since Skipper is a penguin, he is unaffected by the cold.

( Shigokuchoko ) - Rigor Mortis

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
When the air in the surroundings is sufficiently chilled, Skipper further rapid cools the air surrounding the opponent. A two foot thick layer of ice forms itself from the air around the opponent, on every side of his, before imploding upon command, doing crushing damage.
Skipper requires a gap of one turn between each use of this technique. Furthermore, he may not use any Raiton techniques during the same turn.

( Shitsuren ) - Broken Heart

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Skipper locally cools the air around the targets' ( may be more than one ) chest area and fixedly maintains the air there so it moves along with the opponent. The cooling reduces the temperature of the heart, making the blood vessels constrict. This means that the heart has to work harder to push blood through the constricted vessels. This causes sharp stabbing pains to the opponent every five seconds, thoroughly distracting him and making him permanently breathless. The pain increases in frequency and intensity the faster the opponent moves.
To use this localised cooling, Skipper cannot use any other Ice techniques for that turn, and can activate the technique only once. Furthermore, unless the temperature is already cool, the opponent will sense the cooling around his chest and know the technique is affecting him.

( Senkishi Hyosho ) - Death by a Thousand Ice Crystals

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Skipper creates small, nearly invisible fragments of ice, and controls them to float through the air towards the opponent. So tiny that a normal eye cannot see them, they cause a multitude of long scratches on an opponent, making his plight reminiscent of the archiac torture method of the "Death by a Thousand Cuts". Since a normal ninja cannot see them, to him it will look like cuts are magically appearing on his skin. The fragments also cause much damage to eyes, making them bleed if not go blind. Skipper can control the flight path of the crystals with thought.
The [ Two-tomoe and above ] Sharingan can see the fragments due to its attention to detail. Skipper can use this technique only once per battle and cannot use any other Ice technique while the fragments are still activated and floating.

~All Declined~ All OP

Jet · Apr 19, 2010

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Summoning Technique: Rikumaru (Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Rikumaru)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 25
Damage: None
Description: User summons a male deer of the name of Rikumaru. Rikumaru, with a height of over 6'0 ft., has the ability to use earth jutsu of B and lower. Has quick speed and its antler can pose a threat to enemies as its very sharp and pointy.

~ Abilities too similar to existing summons ~

Alucard · Apr 19, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Alucard said:
(Fuuton: Kazefunka) - Wind Release: Wind Eruption: It's clearly stated that it comes from the ground. Now if it appears beneath or in front of the user depends on how i use the jutsu.

~ Approved ~

(Fuuton: Kaze Kyuushuu) - Wind Release: Wind Suction: How come it's unrealistic if it was already proved on the manga (Danzo vs Sasuke) it's possible?

~ If its already used in the manga, WTF are you doing submitting it in the Custom Jutsu thread ? ~

(Fuuton: Kaze Kyuushuu) - Wind Release: Wind Suction
Because this jutsu is different O.- Danzo's summoning was sucking the air, while on this one i create a vaccum behind the opponent which sucks the air. It's similar but no need for a summoning.

~ O.- So basically you're just transposing the effect of the vacuum from in front and requiring a summon, to behind and not requiring a summon ? And you want it approved ? Nope. Declined, do not resubmit or argue. ~

Axle · Apr 19, 2010

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Turtle Sage Mode (Kame Seijin Mo-do)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Description: The user absorbs the natural energy in nearby life in the area, and controls it letting enter Sage Mode. The user's skin turns green and oily, their muscles highly expand.

~Abilities~

-The user's physical strength, speed, and durability dramastically increase.
-The user's other ninjutsu and genjutsu also increase, the user can have the natural energy surrounding them become an extension of their body, increasing the reach of their taijutsu.
-The user gains the ability to sense chakra.
-The user gets stronger as time passes instead of weaker, in turn healing any injuries they receive.

~Drawbacks~

-Because the user is moving, the Sage chakra cannot be replenished, which means the user can't stay in this mode for extended periods of time.
- In order to gather enough Natural energy to initiate the transformation into Hermit Mode, the user must remain perfectly still. Because of that, the user can be an easy target for an opponent
-As as soon Turtle Sage Mode ends the user is left in an exhausted state, and can easily be attacked.

Note: Only Axle may teach this
Note: Must have a contract with the Turtles

~ DECLINED. DO NOT RESUBMIT. Do you understand that ? Do not resubmit again. Ever. ~

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