[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Old Jutsu

Ninja Inu Kuchiyose Cerberus (Ninja Dog Summoning Cerberus )
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage N/A
Description: The Head Honcho of the Ninja Dogs Cerberus is equipped with two extra heads. Thes heads give him the mastery over three diffrent types of Jutsu. Fire, Lightning, Wind. He is also Roughly the Size of Gamabunta.
(Must have contract with Dogs)

Ninja Inu Kuchiyose Aoimaru (Ninja Dog Summoning Blue)
Rank: C
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Descrption: The distant relative of Akamaru. Aoimaru is able to utilize the same attacks used by the the ninja beast duo.
(must have contract with dogs)
(Contract Holder Lgray)

Jutsu Update---

Ninja Inu Kuchiyose: Cerberus (Ninja Dog Summoning: Cerberus )
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The 'official' boss summon of Ninja Dogs in Mount Fang, Cerberus is roughly the size of Gamabunta and also possess 2-extra heads giving him mastery of two extra elements: Fire, Lightning, and Wind. Having been born in the depths of the Earth, Cerberus is able to utilize the Hellfire element and chakra when a student or user of Hellfire has summoned him.
(Must have contract with Dogs)
(To use Hellfire Chakra, user must be a Hellfire User)
~Declined~ A custom summon boss using a custom element? no way in hell
Ninja Inu Kuchiyose: Aoimaru (Ninja Dog Summoning: Blue)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+10 to Inuzuka Techs)
Description: The distant relative of Akamaru, Aoimaru was once apart of the Inuzuka Clan. Wanting to take his ninja life to the next step, Aoimaru traveled on his and found refugee with the Ninja Dogs of Mount Fang. Now he has his own style of fighting unseen by other Ninja Dogs. He is eqiupped with a dagger that he can carry in his mouth and a chain around his neck that help him with his Inuzuka technique usage. He also has the ability to use Lightning techniques the user knows and use the chakra to momentairly give him a speed and agility increase. He is also able to bark small B-Rank wind spheres and bullets that travel at the speed of sound. He is roughly the size of a Golden Retriever.
(Must have contract with dogs)
(Usable 2 Times)
(Last 3 Turns)
~Declined~

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu)- Flying Heaven Honorable Sword Style
Type-Supplementary/Offensive
Rank- S
Range-Short-Mid
Chakra cost-N/A
Damage- (-15 for each time the enemy uses a taijutsu / kenjutsu attack during the 3 turns)
Description-This is a taijutsu sword style that focuses on predicting enemy movements by the slightest body movements for defense and using extreme speed for offense. The user must first spend 1 turn analyzing the opponents moves (Meaning the user cannot preform any moves and must soley concentrate on the enemy). Once this is done, the user can accurately predict the enemy's taijutsu / kenjutsu attacks for 3 turns (User also can only use taijutsu / kenjutsu during those 3 turns). If the enemy uses any taijutsu / kenjutsu attacks within those 3 turns the user automatically blocks and counterattacks any openings.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use this style and/or teach it
*Can accurately predict enemy taijutsu and weapon attacks the same as someone with a level two Sharingan. If the opponent is the same rank as the user or higher the user cannot predict their movements and will simply have to react.

~ Approved. Go wild, Kenshin. ~

 

[Kaziname]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Over the weekly limit

i posted those jutsu on sunday so i can post new jutsus today right?



(Suiton: Tsunami)-Water Style: Tidal Wave

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: User performs needed handseals and molds water chakra in his hands. After that he puts his arms on water surface and releases precise amount of chakra thus creating huge tidal wave that can cover a large area and drown the enemy in water.
*note- can be only thaught by Kaziname
*note- needs huge water source

~ Sigh...unoriginal, its already been made. Declined ~


(Suiton: Mizu Fujō)-Water Style: Water Levitation

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User gathers water chakra in his hands and aggressively hits water surface thus sending strong pulses into water. After sending pulses, small amount of water (2x2 meters) rips from surface and denses. After it denses user is able to levitate it and stand on it, because, pulses left chakra trait in water's molecules. Jutsu can be used for evasion or for using air advantage.
*note- can be only thaught by Kaziname

~ I can't understand a word. Declined ~

Summoning Animal: Plancton
Scroll Owner: Kaziname
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Plancton
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

(Kuchiose: Purankuton )- Summoning Jutsu: Plancton

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: After user performs needed handseals he summons Plancton. When summoned Plancton is big as a basketball ball. He is solely consisted of chakra so he has no physical abilities whatsoever. Once user signes the contract, black tattoo appears on his left arm. Tattoo is actually a seal that serves as catalizator for merging of user's left arm and Plancton. Once merged user can manipulate water with his left arm up to mid range.
*note- can be only thaught by Kaziname
*note- can be summoned only once in battle

~ How the hell is a summon made of chakra ? ~

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Requested By Emperor- Only For Emperor to Check

(Subeta Tame Hou Kirikae)- Sword to Gun Conversion
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (+5 for every bullet fired)
Damage: 60
Description: The user takes thier sword(s) and while applying chakra , spins them around in a star-shaped fashion. By doing so the user completes a long-lost ninjutsu that transforms thier weapon into a chakra-powered gun. This weapon is then able to be used to preform multiple jutsu only possible with this weapon. The weapon can also be given unique properties if used with certain swords. Also by applying earth chakra the user can create dense erath bullets that can be fired with cannon like force due to the built up chakra applied when firing the gun.
(Last 2 Turns)
(Usable 2Times)

~ Still not perfectly realistic, but it'll do ~

Suiton: Genbu Kyanon (Water Style: Water King Cannon)
Rank: S
Range:Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 40 (+10 per jutsu)
Damage:+40 to Water Jutsu
Description: After Sword to Gun Conversion is complete, the user can then imbue water chakra into the gun changing it into a gun that has multiple water based properties. This is shown from in the weapon's jutsu as all the techniques become water based. This also allows the user to produce most water techniques without a water-source.
(last 3 turns)
(No Water Jutsu for 2Turns afterwards)

~ Declined. Non water source is a Tobirama only thing ~

Koga Dato-Dan: - (Great Shark Tooth Sword Bullet)
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user spins their gun in a similar star-shaped fashion to the Sword-Gun conversion. By doing so the user focuses chakra into the weapon and creates a shark-shaped sword made of full metal and razor-sharp edges that can cut through the toughest material. The special thing about this jutsu is that it is able to gain more power through the (Kyoka Maho-Dan: Enhancement Bullet) Jutsu. By doing so the user can create an even more destructive jutsu at the expense of chakra.
(Last 2 turns)
(Usable 3 Times)

~ Declined. Looks like the Samehada. O_O ~

(Doton: Namu Gariri-Dan)- Earth Style: Stone Dragon Bullet
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user spins their gun in a similar star-shaped fashion to the Sword-Gun conversion. By doing so the user focuses chakra into the weapon and creates a fully stone dragon head that is similar to the Mud-Dragon jutsu in terms of only being a head and body. Due to being connected to the earth, the dragon is able to send a wave of fire -up to 2 times- from the intense heat of the Earth's core. The special thing about this jutsu is that it is able to gain more power through the (Kyoka Maho-Dan: Enhancement Bullet) Jutsu. By doing so the user can create an even more destructive jutsu at the expense of chakra.
(2 are able to spawn at one time)
(Last 1 turns)
(Usable 2 Times)
(User cannot move from position)

~ Approved, I edited some ~

(Katon: Kahoshori-Dan)- Fire Style: Flaming Pheonix Dragon Bullet
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user spins their gun in a similar star-shaped fashion to the Sword-Gun conversion. By doing so the user focuses chakra into the weapon and once released creates a Flaming Dragon that can attack the opponent and carry him off along with burning him. The special thing about this jutsu is that it is able to gain more power through the (Kyoka Maho-Dan: Enhancement Bullet) Jutsu. By doing so the user can create an even more destructive jutsu at the expense of chakra.
(Usable 1 times)
(No fire jutsu next turn)

~ Approved, I edited it ~

Kyoka Maho-Dan( Enhancement bullet)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 60
Damage: +20 damage.
Desription:The user applies a vast amount of chakra into his weapon. Then by shooting a already existing Sword-Gun Jutsu, the built up chakra is forcibly injected into the jutsu making it more destructive.
(Usable 2 Times)

~ Approved, I edited quite a lot ~

Bakuu Sho-O Dan (Explosive Wing-Soaring Hawk Bullet)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage 60 (-20 to user if caught in blast)
Description: The user spins their gun in a similar star-shaped fashion to the Sword-Gun conversion. By doing so the user focuses chakra into the weapon and once released creates medium sized hawk-shaped projectile. The chakra within this hawk is so reactive it is able to explode at the user command. The special thing about this jutsu is that it is able to gain more power through the (Kyoka Maho-Dan: Enhancement Bullet) Jutsu. By doing so the user can create an even more destructive jutsu at the expense of chakra.
(Usable 2 Times)

~ Declined. ~

TeggaHorin- Dan (Iron-Fanged Cannon Dragon bullet)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage:90 (-20 to user)
Description: The user spins their gun in a similar star-shaped fashion to the Sword-Gun conversion two times. By doing so the user focuses chakra into the weapon and once released creates a fully metallic dragon. This dragon can split its head into 3 seperate appendages and fire off a rapid-fire of earth-based projectiles.
(Usable Once)
(Last 2 Turns)
(No Sword-Gun Jutsu rest of battle)

~ Declined. Metal is not a controllable element. ~

Basada-Dan (Binding Chain Snake Bullet)
Rank:B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user spins their gun in a similar star-shaped fashion to the Sword-Gun conversion two times. By doing so the user focuses chakra into the weapon and once released creates a snake made fully of chain that can tie down the opponent.The special thing about this jutsu is that it is able to gain more power through the (Kyoka Maho-Dan: Enhancement Bullet) Jutsu. By doing so the user can create an even more destructive jutsu at the expense of chakra.

~ Declined. Metal chains are not controllable or creatable ~

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

wind style: shock wave (fuuton: dagekinami)
rank: S
type: attack
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: the user will focus his chakra on the air around him and start to compress it into a small ball once he is done the user is done compressing the ball will decompress releasing a huge shockwave at the opponent
~3 times per battle

~ Declined ~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon: Warhammer of Akimichi Pride
(Shuukan Buki: Sensoo-Kanazuchi o Akimichi Jiman)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 45 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 90
Description: After using the Super Multi-Size technique the user opens a scroll and summons this massive hammer. Due to its size its only usable by Akimichi clan members who are using the super multi-sized technique. Even a person with immense physical strength such as Tsuande who was seen lifting Gamabunta's sword would be helpless to lift it. The hammer itself is massive and made of a metal that can conduct pure chakra. Because of this property the hammer is best used in conjunction with the three colored pills of the Akimichi clan due to the massive boost in chakra they receive. After using a pill the user then transfers the newly formed chakra to the hammer in order to create a devastating attack. Naturally the strength boost is dependent on the pill used. The strength increases from green to yellow to red in an exponential fashion. Once the user's super multi-sized technique is released the hammer is re-sealed into the scroll.
~ Can only be wielded my Akimichi clan members.
~ Must have used super multi-sized technique in order to use.
~ Lasts the duration of the multi-sized technique.
~ Due to its size the wielder must use 10 chakra per turn.

~ You aren't stronger than Tsunade, no matter how many pills you take ~

Fire Style: Heat Wave
(Katon: Atsusanami)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates their fire chakra in a medium sized area surrounding the opponent. This doesn't create any fire but raises the temperature of that area. If the opponent stays in this area for an extended time they will begin to fatigue due to the heat making them capable of preforming less jutsu. If the opponent is in the area for an extended period of time and then escape they suffer the effects for 1 turn after which they return to normal.
-If caught in the area for 3 consecutive moves the opponent is restricted to rank A or below techniques.
-If caught in the area for 6 consecutive moves the opponent is restricted to two rank B or below move.
-If caught in the area for 9 consecutive moves the opponent is restricted to one rank C or below move.
-If caught in the area for 12 consecutive turns the opponent suffers a heat stroke and is incapacitated.
~ Must be taught by Hypnotiq.

~ Declined ~

Wind Spring
(Fuuton: Fuuton Chuyaaku)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user releases a medium sized burst of wind chakra through their feet which propels them upwards about thirty feet. The direction the user goes in is dependent on the angle of the surface they're standing on. Their feet must be flat on the surface or else the wind will be ineffective and this technique will fail. This technique does not require hand seals.
~ Must be taught by Hypnotiq
~ Can only be used three times per battle.

~ Declined ~


Flaming Pellet Machine Gun
(Katon: Moeagatteimasu Mashingan)
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 30
Description: The user preforms a short series of hand seals and then inhales a large volume of air. After mixing fire chakra with the air the user begins to release small fire balls from their mouth. These fireballs are the size of a baseball and travel very quickly. The user releases these fireballs in fire quick succession similar to how a machine gun fires. This technique can release a maximum of 30 baseball sized fireballs.
~ Must be taught by Hypnotiq

~ Oh, an upgraded version of Hosenka, still ranked C and no restrictions, and you expect it to get approved ? o-O ~

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Emperor's request continued,
Emp I added a few in place of some other jutsu. the Bijuu Jutsu. Ill be posting those jutsu periodically.

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Hachibi Kyogyu Imari) – Bijuu Style: Eight-Tailed Giant Ox Menacing Ball
• Type: Attack
• Rank: Forbidden
• Range: Short-Long
• Chakra cost: 50
• Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
• Description: When Kirabi transforms into the Eight-Tailed Giant OX, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu into a black ball with electricity in front of his mouth, then he will shoot it at the opponent. This will become a gigantic wave of electricity and bijuu chakra to annihalate anything in his path. The resulting explosion was enough to destroy a large portion of Kumogakure.
•Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu Mode
•Shortens user’s lifespan (Reduces Bijuu Mode By Two Turn)

~ Approved, I edited bit ~

(Hachibi Imari) Eight-Tailed Menacing Rain
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage 90 (+20 Bijuu Chakra) (- 30 To User)
Description: After going into Tailed Version 2, Kirabi can now produce a small miniture version of a menacing ball on the tip of his tails. By shooting this into the sky, the menacing balls collide and explode into hundreds of searing ink that burns the opponent on contact.
(Usable Once)
(User instantly comes out of Tailed Beast Version 2 and cannot go back for three turns)

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

Enrai (Distant Thunder)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: +50 to any physical move used.
Description: By manipulating his bijuu's chakra, Kirabi can increase his strength exponentially but only while moving. At high enough speeds, virtually no obstacle or force is able to impede its movement, except by other things that cannot be physically broken. He can, however, be dodged by a fast enough opponent.
(Last 1 Turns)
(Usable Once)

~ Approved ~

(Hachibi Otakebi) Eight Tails Sonic Roar
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Eight-Tailed Giant Ox, uses its massive chakra reserve to turn a simple roar into a powerful force of pressure and destruction. It build up chakra for two seconds before unleashing it.
(Usable Once Per Battle)
(User instantly comes out of Bijuu Mode)
(User cannot go back to it)

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

Ninja Inu Kuchiyose: Cerberus (Ninja Dog Summoning: Cerberus )
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The 'official' boss summon of Ninja Dogs in Mount Fang, Cerberus is roughly the size of Gamabunta and also possess 2-extra heads giving him mastery of two elements: Fire, Lightning. Despite his size he is very agile and able to move quickly from one place to another.
(Must have contract with Dogs)
(Last 4 Turns)
(Usable 1 Times)

~ Approved, I changed quite a bit ~

Ninja Inu Kuchiyose: Aoimaru (Ninja Dog Summoning: Blue)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+10 to Inuzuka Techs)
Description: The distant relative of Akamaru, Aoimaru was once apart of the Inuzuka Clan. Wanting to take his ninja life to the next step, Aoimaru traveled on his and found refugee with the Ninja Dogs of Mount Fang. Now he has his own style of fighting unseen by other Ninja Dogs. He is eqiupped with a dagger that he can carry in his mouth and a chain around his neck that help him with his Inuzuka technique usage. He also has the ability to use Lightning techniques the user knows and use the chakra to momentairly give him a speed and agility increase. He is also able to bark small B-Rank wind spheres and bullets that travel at the speed of sound. He is roughly the size of a Golden Retriever.
(Must have contract with dogs)
(Usable 2 Times)
(Last 3 Turns)

~ Declined =/ No Inuzuka ripoffs ~

Raiton/Fuuton: Mabushii Unari (Lightning/Wind Release: Radiant Howl)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user concentrates a large amount of wind and lightning Chakra in his mouth that when releases sends out massive shockwaves of lightning and wind around that can obliterate whatever is in it path. The rippling of wind and the high pitched lightning creates a deafening howl that is able to drown out all sound and causes the user and opponent to be deaf for the turn afterwards.
(No Lightning Or Wind Next Turn)
(Usable 2 times)

~ Declined ~

Katon: Aoikouen (Fire Style: Blue Flame)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra:40
Damage: +40 to any fire jutsu used.
Description: Utilizing the user's anger, the user emotions add to the intensity of their fire chakra. This causes the chakra to burn hotter than the standard flames, becoming a more ferocious bluish-white flame causing the flames to cause more damage to the opponent.
(Last 3 turns)
(The user may not perform any fire jutsu for 2 turns afterwards)
(Usable Twice)

~ Declined. Sounds unrealistic and like a CE ~

Kuchiyose: Takahieiki (Summoning: Weapons of Death.)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+5 for every weapon called forth)
Damage: 80 (-5 to user per turn)
Description: The user summons and controls 6 weapons: Sword, Hammer, Mace, Lance, Axe, and Dagger. The thing about these weapons is they are actual women who have the ability to change themselves into weapons. Although these women cannot preform any jutsu, however they are able to transform at will into the weapon of thier name. Due to the strain of controlling and wielding these weapons the user takes damage each turn.
(Last 3 Turns)
(Usable 2times)

~ Declined. WTF, women. ~

 

[Kid Ace2392]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kuchiyose No Jutsu Summoning Jutsu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Med
Charka cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary hand seals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, and then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, and then touch the ground.

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Crocodiles
The Crocodile is a bigger and more powerful version of the alligator.
To summon the crocodiles one have to sign the contract with the King of the Crocodile’s, NaidaSama.

Note: Crocodiles can only be summoned by Kid ace2392
And anybody who I let sign the contract.

~ Declined, contract exists ~

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Old approved jutsu

Spoiler

(heishi mune houmen) - Dying Will Release
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases 90% of their remaining chakra into a force known as the user's "Dying Will", the user's 5 senses are pushed to the Max, also it greatly increases the users reaction time dramatically improved tenfold, but this jutsu takes alot of pressure on the user's body
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: only lasts 3 turns
Note: after using this jutsu is cancelled, the user can only used B and below ranked jutsu

New updated jutsu to better explain how it works allowed by axle

Spoiler

(heishi mune houmen) - Dying Will Release
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user release 90% of their remaining Chakra into a force known as the user?s Dying Will? turns all of the person?s safety switches off and in exchange for risking their life, they are able to harness great strength. While in dying will any damage done to the user will become least affected on the user moves during the fight meaning if the was to be stab by a kunai in the side or something that won?t kill them instantly he will be able the continue what he was doing without stopping, the back draw is the user still take damage normally, so once the user comes out of ?Dying will? he will feel the full affect that might cause him to be unable to continue fighting.
Note: while in Dying will the user 5 senses are pushed to the Max and increase the users reaction time dramatically improved tenfold
Note: While the user senses are push to the Max the user will have full control on how the senses work, so the user wont hear something so loud that it blow there ear drums?
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: only lasts 3 turns
Note: after using this jutsu is cancelled, the user will be able to perform 4 more jutsu before there chakra comeplete runs out

~ Declined, too simliar to existing jutsu ~

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(nano konchuu kuchiku) Nano-Bug Destruction
Type-Offensive/Defensive
Rank-S
Range-Short
Chakra-N/A (-15 per turn opponent is affected)
Damage-80
Description-
(Only useable by Torune and Shikuro Aburame)
The user's special nano bugs are spread to the opponent, through direct touch (punch, grab, kick, etc). These bugs act as a poison, causing major pain (as seen in the anime) and can cripple an opponent if not taken care of. They are able to circumvent most types of clothing. Once inside the opponent they multiply rapidly.
*Only usable by Shikuro and Torune Aburame*
*Must be in contact with opponent or something connected with opponent*


(I submitted the above to be in jutsu form so there is no arguing in the battle arena about when I come into contact with someone in the Aburame Bio, any questions Vm me.)

~ O_O This is the freaking CUSTOM jutsu thread, VM Kaito if you want a canon jutsu made =/ For cripes' sake, how many times do I have to tell you people ? ~

(Hyouton: Zukokku) Ice Release: Intense Pain
Rank-A
Range-Short/Mid
Type-Offensive
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description-
The user makes the required two signs, and inhales, transforming the air he/she intakes into pure Ice Chakra, and exhales, creating a large gust of extremely cold air, that freezes everything in range of the blast(not the user). Due to the strain of this attack the user cannot use this attack more than three times per battle.
*only usable by ice users*
*Can only be used three turns per battle, and cannot be used on next turn*
*can only be taught by Icemyster*

~ Declined ~

 

[Deidara...]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Jutsu Update

original jutsu:

Spoiler

Katon: Ryuuen Kumo ( Fire Release : Dragon Blaze Cloud )

Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
The user spits a cloud of flames that moves and surrounds the opponent. Then flame dragons shoot out of the cloud from every direction at the opponent. The cloud itself will cause burns.
NOTE: can only be taught by iseris Or Emperor
NOTE: can only be used three times per battle

Katon: Ryuuen Kumo ( Fire Release : Dragon Blaze Cloud )

Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
The user forcefully spits out a cloud of flames that moves and surrounds the opponent. Then flame dragons shoot out of the cloud from every direction at the opponent. The cloud itself will cause burns.
NOTE: can only be taught by iseris

~ No restrictions ? ~

forbidden form:

Katon: Ryuuen Kumo ( Fire Release : Dragon Blaze Cloud )

Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: Forbidden
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
The user forcefully spits a cloud of flames. while in flight the the cloud begins to condense forming a single dragon. the dragon then explodes and the result is enormous pillar of fire that consumes all that in touches
NOTE: can only be taught by iseris
NOTE: can only be used once per battle

~ Declined ~

(Genjutsu: kinaga uxe-to)Illusion: Lying in wait
Type: supplementary / Offensive
Rage: Short - Mid
Rank: S
Damage: 40
Chakra: 80
Description: the user places the opponent in an illusion where they witness no change of any sort, at the users will the opponent will then see earth cords constrict their feet if they are standing still. and if they are in motion they think the muscles in their legs contract forcibly causing them to capsize and then earth cords constrict them. the effects of this jutsu can be activated turns after the opponent has been placed in the illusion.

Note: this jutsu's effects must be used two turns after the casting of the illusion or it wears off altogether.
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: can only be taught by Iseris...

~ Declined, I need more restrictions ~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuton: Kazefunka) - Wind Release: Wind Eruption

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will send wind chakra underground and then he will do a hand seal. Right after the hand seal, a great quantity of wind with 5 metres wide will erupt from the ground, cutting and hitting everything up to 20 metres high with slicing winds and rocks that were dragged by the wind. This jutsu has the advantage of tricking the opponent: on the moment before the wind erupt, the earth will obviously start to tremble, making the opponent to think he's being target of a doton jutsu and thus, he'll possibly use a raiton to counter it when in fact is a fuuton, which has elemental advantage over raiton and because of that, it will overpower -almost for sure- the opponent's lightning technique. However, an accurate sensor who can see chakra flowing underground won't be tricked that easily.
*Usable twice per battle

~Declined~ too big an area for a Arank
(Fuuton: Kaze Kyuushuu) - Wind Release: Wind Suction

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will do a hand seal and create a vacuum behind the opponent. This vacuum amplifies user's wind jutsus, giving them +20 damage points, however, the user will need to spend +5 chakra every turn to maintain the vacuum behind the opponent.
*Usable twice per battle

~Declined~ that much extra damage on an a rank?

(Fuuton: Kazefunka) - Wind Release: Wind Eruption

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will send wind chakra underground and then he will do a hand seal. Right after the hand seal, a great quantity of wind with 4 metres wide will erupt from the ground, cutting and hitting everything up to 10 metres high with slicing winds and rocks that were dragged by the wind. This jutsu has the advantage of tricking the opponent: on the moment before the wind erupt, the earth will obviously start to tremble, making the opponent to think he's being target of a doton jutsu and thus, he'll possibly use a raiton to counter it when in fact is a fuuton, which has elemental advantage over raiton and because of that, it will overpower -almost for sure- the opponent's lightning technique. However, an accurate sensor who can see chakra flowing underground won't be tricked that easily.
*Usable twice per battle

~ Where does the wind come from ? Under the opponent. to his front, where ? ~

(Fuuton: Kaze Kyuushuu) - Wind Release: Wind Suction

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will do a hand seal and create a vacuum behind the opponent. This vacuum amplifies user's wind jutsus, giving them +10 damage points, however, the user will need to spend +5 chakra every turn to maintain the vacuum behind the opponent.
*Usable twice per battle

~ Unrealistic. Declined. ~

 

[Kid Ace2392]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton:honkyochi)-Water base
Type:Attack/defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:User sends water chakra through his feet making a body of water
under him. which alows the user to be able to levitate on the body of water that can go in any direction. And if the user uses enough charka it can be used as a shield tha can block A-rank fire an and C-rank wind and D-rank earth attacks.
No hand signs needed this jutsu is simultaneoulsy at least 2 seconds

Note: Can only be taught by Kid ace2392

~ I can't understand a word of this either. ~

 

[Pain..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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( Sabu Ke ) Sub Sword

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Range: Long
Description: The user focus lightning Chakra on the sword and when they finish they put lightning to the sword ( To focus lightning chakra to the sword is only take about two seconds ). Then the user that is using the sword can attack the opponent(s) and with the lightning on it the user can have more speed.
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NOTE for mods only Emperor can check the jutsu.
NOTE for Emperor if i make any mistake please edit it.

NOTE: Only Obito-Uchiha can use this jutsu.

~ There is no actual mistake, the only problem is that the effects resemble Chidori Nagashi + sword, so it's Declined ~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Only for Emp to check

Illusion Technique: Distorted Reality (Genjutsu: Ibitsu Riariti)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user would cast an illusion immediately and unknowingly when the opponent have suffer any kind of pain, cut, wound etc. (it can be minor or life threatening). The illusion causes the opponent's pain, wound, cut etc. to becoming extremely painful and have the opponent severely afraid of their wounds which causes them into a state of complete horror-struck
Note: Can only be used twice
Note:Only Anbu K & Eddy allow to use
Note:This genjutsu is done by sound

~ Hasn't this been submitted by Anbu K and approved already ? ~

 

[-Ventus-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuton:kokyuu oujou) Wind Release:Breath of Death
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user releases a large portion of his chakra into the air combining it.Then he focuses and concentrates the winds in the targets lungs and in the surrounding area of the target, the user then after a the forming 1 handseal he will use the wind on the lungs of the opponent to crush the inside of his body and the surrounding wind crush the outsides of the body and also making the target unable to breath automatically after the handseals are done.
~No wind jutsu's for the next 3 turns~
~Only A rank jutsu wind for the rest of the battle~
~The user deals -20 to his health because of the strain of the jutsu~
~Can only be used once~

~ WTF. Declined, unrealistic. ~

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Genjutsu Ranma (Illusion Technique: Anarchy)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description :
Activation of Ranma requires contact with the back of the head, where the visual cortex is located (either via direct touch or a Chakra string). It targets Area V1 of the visual cortex, which contains cells that form a retinotopic map of the visual field. By using a flow of Chakra, Ranma alters the retinotopic map contained in the brain, causing what the target sees to be interpreted differently by their brain. Ranma is a very difficult jutsu to master as it requires precise knowledge of the area targeted and extremely accurate Chakra control. Therefore, although Ranma is a versatile jutsu, there are two main uses:
Ranma no Gyakuten (Anarchy’s Reversal) entails completely reversing the retinotopic map using a linear flow of Chakra. This will result in inverted vision for the target - left and right, as well as up and down, are reversed. As the part of the brain which controls motion is unaffected by Ranma no Gyakuten, the target will continue to fight by reflex, causing them to move the wrong body parts - no matter how intelligent the target, it is impossible for the human brain to counter attacks while trying to process the inverted world.
Ranma no Tsukami (Anarchy’s Grip) employs a scattering of the user’s Chakra to send the retinotopic map into a complete disarray. This means that what the target sees will make no sense to the brain, thanks to the scrambled retinotopic map. Essentially, this means that the target is fighting blind (but with an disarray of colour, form and shadow around them, which is very likely to seriously unnerve them, if not drive them insane).
~(User may Not Attack the Opponent in Same Turn)
~(Last 2 Turns)
~(Usable Once)

~ Very nice idea, but Declined ~

Kidzuki no Shi (Death of Awareness)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description : By opening and closing the neurological pathways with a flow of Chakra, Kidzuki no Shi gives the user the ability to heighten or dull the five senses. By opening/closing individual pathways, he can choose which of the five senses to affect. This jutsu is very versatile in the fact that it can be used on the user himself, or a chosen target by merely touch
(Usable 2 Times)
(Last 2 Turns)
(While in use User may alter the senses)

~ No sense enhancement jutsus ~

Raiton: Chidori Zenkai - (Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Perfect Form)
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-25 to user)
Description: The User will create a Chidori within the palm of his clenched fist. As he opens his hand, the Chidori will burst and scatter into "One Thousand Birds" of lightning. The lightning birds can be manipulated at will and can be used for both defence and attack. This is noted as the Chidori's final and most powerful form.
(Usable Once)
(No Lightning 3 turns after)

~ Declined ~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Thats Anbu Kakashi jutsu and he never gave you permission to resubmit it even if you put his name in it, it stills not yours to resubmit without out asking him

Dude Anbu K allow me to use it because I allow him to use any of my custom jutus if would not reply to this, but only in vm

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Haku)-Fade
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Utilizing the fact that the Nara clan shadow jutsus are indisguishable from natural shadows to all but shadow users, the user will wrap himself in his own shadow. As long as the user is within natural shadows he will be invisible to the opponent. However, since the user is wrapped in his shadow he cannot use any other shadow jutsu that require the use of his shadow until this jutsu wears off, or unless he releases this jutsu early.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*This jutsu lasts for 3 turns
*No other shadow jutsu can be used while this jutsu is active
*Fire or lightning jutsus f used will scatter the shadows and stop the invisibility for upto five or six seconds
*Dojutsu and other chakra sensing abilities cannot see through this, as in the guidelines thread, the shadows are indistinguishable to all but shadow users. Not all but shadow users and those able to sense chakra.

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

"Nara's Abilities:

Having a special KG, Nara clan is known for their manipulation of shadows and tending of deer, which graze in a large area of Nara clan forest. They have the ability to control and use their own shadows, and the shadows of others to their advantage, by attaching their shadow to the opponent's, and then take control of him/her. The opponent then, becomes a mirror of the user's movement and for as long as they are trapped in the shadows, the bodies move by the will of the Nara member;
Using their shadow controlling techniques, Nara members can extend, combine, control, and more with them, even going so far as to being able to strangle a person with their own shadow.
Manipulating Shadows however is not as easy as it looks. Most ninjas in Naruto are high skilled, they are fast and some of them even sense chakra. Therefor, Nara members have to be extremely cautious relatively to when they will choose to attack (best time is dusk and dawn, as shadows are at their largest then) and also where as natural shadows help the Nara members to hide or expand their ability's length and power, strength and speed. The Shadow jutsus are indistinguishable from natural shadows to all except the shadow users themselves. "

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Only for Emp to check

Illusion Technique: Distorted Reality (Genjutsu: Ibitsu Riariti)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user would cast an illusion immediately and unknowingly when the opponent have suffer any kind of pain, cut, wound etc. (it can be minor or life threatening). The illusion causes the opponent's pain, wound, cut etc. to becoming extremely painful and have the opponent severely afraid of their wounds which causes them into a state of complete horror-struck
Note: Can only be used twice
Note:Only Anbu K & Eddy allow to use
Note:This genjutsu is done by sound

~ Hasn't this been submitted by Anbu K and approved already ? ~

Oh yea my bad forgot