[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[-Yard-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Samurai's Mune) Warrior's Will

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Type: Supplement
Rank: N/A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points+10 Taijutsu) (+15 Ninjutsu)
Description: The user focuses chakra to their heart which speeds up their heart rate and causes blood to pump faster allowing better chakra flow and faster movements.

Note: can only be used once per battle.
Note: Only lasts 5 turns.
Note: Can only be taught by ~Yard~

(en samurai) I Warrior

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Type: Supplement
Rank: N/A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: (+10 For Earth Jutsu)
Damage Points: (+10 For Earth Jutsu)
Description: This is a mode in which the user becomes more in tune to their earth chakra and can use it much more freely and naturally than they normally could. This makes a great change in how earth chakra is used and allows the user to use more of their earth chakra at once with it being controlled perfectly. Due to this change, all earth jutsu used will gain an extra Rank in strength and can be used faster and easier.

Note: Must have a bio in which the character lives in Iwagakure.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: lasts for 5 turns.
Note: No earth jutsu for one turn after this mode wears off.

(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Hagetaka koutetsu) Condor Armour

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Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: (-5 To Taijutsu)
Description: The user bite's their thumb and presses their hand on the center of their chest. This summons a special Armour made by the condor elders that has been passed down for many generations to aid the contract holder in battle. The armor is made to fit any size and can block S rank attacks (only 1 per turn for 3 turns.)

Note: Must have signed the condor contract to use.
Note: Can be used by anyone who has signed the condor contract.
Note: Armour lasts for 3 turns
Note: Can only block 1 S rank attack per turn during the 3 turns of use.
Note: This Armour can only be summoned once and after 3 turns it will reverse summon.

(Doton: tsuchi Summoning) Earth Release: Earth Summoning

[No japanese word for the word "summoning" I checked freedict O_O]​

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Type: Supplement
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:
Description: By using earth chakra, the user creates a palate of earth that they can use for earth based attacks. The palate of earth spreads out to mid range and is 12inches thick. However, this takes a great amount of Doton chakra to make and so the user cannot use any earth based attacks for the rest of the turn and can only use A rank earth techs and below on the next turn.

Note: No Doton for the rest of the turn.
Note: Only A rank doton and below can be used on the next turn.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle but if used twice the user can only use B rank doton for the rest of the match.

~All Declined~

 

[Frozenstein]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

now my bio changings are approved so i give it a shot.

custom puppets:

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Tora
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Tora is a tiger form puppet, however a bit smaller than a real one. Originally designed for quick, precise attacks. It has striped painting allowing the user to hide it easier in tall grass. Tora’s body hardened by light steel and iron to prohibit the enemy to destroy this puppet during close combat. The body is cointaining several changes, like much bigger steel claws capable of doing deep cuts, big steel tooth to bite the opponent, hidden blades inside of the legs and in the body. At the end of the tail have 5 blades, 1 at the very end to stab, and 4 on the sides to cut. It can also be separated to similar parts, but these parts are linked with chain allowing the user to tie his/her opponent. In the back of Tora, has a small hidden cannon capable of shooting ninja weapons and tools (kunais, needles, smoke/flash bombs, etc, and a net which is attached with remoted exploding tags and kunais). Tora is also capable of storing electricity and absorbing lightning style jutsus. Tora's body can be destroyed only by an A-rank or higher jutsu or when the cannon is out with a B-rank or higher jutsu.
- Can store maximum 5 charges of lightning at a time.
- Only can be used by Frozenstein.

Venom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a spider form puppet from a mysterious country far west. It’s size can compete with salamander’s size. Venom has several eyes on the head, 8 legs, a torso and a huge abdomen. The legs can be separated to different parts up to total 24 parts. Each one has a hidden poisoned blade. In her abdomen has hundreds of palm sized spider puppets. These little spiders are equipped with poisoned short blades in their mouth and remoted exploding tags inside theirs body. Venom’s abdomen is the most resistant part of her body and enough big to let an average person to hide in it. Unfortunately if it’s an enemy the user can detonate the remaining spiders inside it and kill the victim. This explosion won’t destroy the abdomen. If the user hiding in it, it can also be used to block incoming jutsus up to B-rank.
- The abdomen can’t be used to hide, until Venom release some of her spiders from it.
- Only can be used by Frozenstein.

if the puppets are approved:

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(Lightning Reflection) – Raikou Kaisou
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30 (If the orb is shooted)
Description: The user use Tora’s body to block lightning style jutsus and absorb them completely. This can be done by send Tora in the way of the lightning, or by separating his tail, or thrusting his claws into the ground. This way the lightning can be absorbed from the air, ground, water, mud, etc and directly from the enemy’s body if he/she using lightning style armours and technics. This lightning can be stored in Tora’s body and can be shoot from his mouth in a shape of an orb, or can be used with other lightning based technics.
- Can only be used against B-rank or lower lightning.
- Can only be used with a Tora puppet.
- Can only be used or taught by Frozenstein.

(Body Crippling) – Shitai Haishitsu
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user use the lightning in Tora’s body to perform a lightning based attack. First, the user reveals the hidden blades in the puppet’s body and than release lightning into the air and into the ground/water/other materials (if standing on it) to short range to paralise the opponent for 1 turn. If the user shoots the blades from Tora's body, he/she can perform this jutsu up to middle range, but only in the surface underground remaining a short range attack.
- Can only be used with a Tora puppet.
- Can only be used or taught by Frozenstein.

(Spider Destroyers) – Kumo Hakaisha
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user release several little puppet spiders from Venom’s abdomen. These puppets can travel to long range on chakra threads or any physical objects. They can also jump off from cliffs or other objetcs if needed. After they get near to the enemy (short range) they explode themselves. They can also cover up a medium sized area and explode simultaneously. The user can explode them anytime he/she wants with a single hand seal. That means he/she doesn't need to explode them in the turn when he/she perform this jutsu.
- Exploding the puppets doesn't count as a move.
- Can only be used with a Venom puppet.
- Can only be used or taught by Frozenstein.

if the puppetsd above are approved:

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(Falling Spider Destroyers) – Tsuiraku Kumo Hakaisha
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Close-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user send Venom high into the air and release a huge amount of little puppet spiders from Venom’s abdomen. These puppets reveals their poisoned blades to make small cuts into the enemy poisoning him/her. They can also cover up a medium sized area and explode simultaneously. They explode automatically when at least half of them hit the ground. The user can explode them anytime he/she wants with a single hand seal.
- Can only be used with a Venom puppet.
- Can be performed without sending Venom in the air, if has an active Chakra Web.
- Can only be used or taught by Frozenstein.

(Chakra Web) - Chakra Amimono
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Close-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes a single hand seal and creates a high amount of chakra threads around himself/herself, covering a defined area. These are only visible for sensor type and puppet user ninjas. These are linked up to the whole area (trees, smaller plants, rocks, ground, etc) allowing the user to stand on it, send puppets on it, or tie his/her opponent (for 2 turns). Even if the area is clear these threads can be linked up to the ground in long range, allowing the user to stand on it right above the ground. While connected to the web with a single chakra thread, the user can tell the location of the enemy if he/she gets in contact with the web.
- This jutsu last for 5 turns.
- The user must state the range he/she uses this technics.
- Can only be used or taught by Frozenstein.

puppets was declined
and my custom weapon again.

Sword Of The Falling Sun – Katana no Tsuiraku Taiyou

Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Short/Middle
Chakra: N/A (+20 wind)
Damage Points: 30/10 (+30 if infused with wind chakra)
Description: However it seems to be a normal katana, actually it isn’t. The sword made from rare materials to be one of the lightest and sharpest blade ever. Because of it’s weight the user can make quick precise attacks to the enemy without losing important seconds to brandish the sword. Adding wind chakra to it, makes even sharper and can cut through almost everything (except other chakra weapons/armors). At the end of the grip there’s a dragon head with open mouth. It’s a decoration, but at the same time it has a hidden attainment. In the mouth of the dragon has 3 hidden holes. These holes are the exits of hidden weapons where you can shoot needles. If the blade infused with chakra, the needles too. The shoots doesn’t make sound so your enemy can’t block or dodge it from close range. To activate the darts, there’s a hidden button on the grip.

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Rokusho..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kōkusukuryū Bakuha) - Corkscrew Blast

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers chakra into his dominant fist and compresses it , the user will then deliver a corkscrew punch and releases a great amount of compressed chakra out of it as a rotating beam of compressed chakra which works like a drill and it is able to penetrate through plateaus and huge rocks with ease . On top of that , it can follow a curved path too .

-Can only be used 3 times
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

Declined, do not resubmit

(Kaiten shīrudo) - Rotating Shield

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Type: Attack / Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers chakra into his dominant fist and compresses it , the user will then deliver a corkscrew blow and releases a stream of compressed chakra from the user's fist and the corkscrew blow causes the stream of chakra to rotate , creating a dense rotating shield of chakra in front of the user which can also be used offensively . It is large enough to protect the entire self of the user and most attacks can be repelled due to the rotating nature of the shield .

-Can only be used 3 times
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

Declined, do not resubmit

(Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers chakra into the muscles of his arms and legs to strengthen it . Then he applies a high-speed footwork with the chakra in the muscles of his leg augmenting his speed to create multiple images of the user to multiply the number of blows dealt . This creates the illusion that he is striking three places at once .

-Can only be used 3 times due to the amount of stress it poses on the user's legs
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

Declined, do not resubmit no after images

(Soru) - Shave

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage Points: - (+15 if used in combination with taijutsu )
Description: The user gathers compressed chakra into his legs and kicks off the ground while releasing a burst of compressed chakra out of the soles of the user's feet to allow the user to move at extremely high speeds in order to avoid attacks , as well as to attack at higher speeds and with greater power .

-Can only be used 5 times due to the amount of pressure the legs go through in using this jutsu
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

Declined, Similar jutsu exists

Tell me if there's anything which needs to be changed ^^ .

 

[Shade Dracova]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Red Cardinals
Scroll Owner: Rinnegan On The Moon
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
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Approved
Sandā no ha- Blade Of Thunder
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Sandā no ha is a long sword that was forged with a special type of metal that stores lightning inside it. It has the power to redirect lightning to a certain point on the field when lightning is struck. The user can redirect the lightning into the sword to super charge it with lightning affinity increasing it cutting power. If the sword comes in contact with another metal object while charged with lightning affinity that object is streamed with A rank lightning also all the way to the handle of the sword. The user's lightning jursu get +20 plus damage. The sword can also shock the user to get his heart pumping faster making the user more tolerent to pain. It works somewhat like a defribillator.
* Can only be used by Rinnegan On The Moon*
*Can only redirect lightning 3 times*
*Can only shock user once*
*Can be broken*

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Declined, do not resubmit
~ Feel free to edit anything~

 

[Mathias]

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(Raiton Bu-meran Ashinami) Boomerang Lightning Step
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: By doing a simple kick the user shoots out two powerful beams of lightning at great speeds being able to slice through solid objects or cut down attacks. As soon as the beam is launched and makes contact with anything it will come back towards the user like a boomerang and disperse.

Can only be used 5 times per battle.
Must have mastered lightning.
Can only be taught by Mathias
Declined, limit use more its S rank

This is what it kind of looks like

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(Raiton Tobikomi suchlike) Lightning Jump Start
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: (+10 Taijutsu) (+15 Ninjutsu)
Description: Using lightning chakra the user will shock his own heart without harming it making it beat faster than normal causing blood to pump faster allowing better chakra flow and the preformance of faster hand seals. Also allowing the user to react faster than normal. This mode will increase the users speed up to lee's speed without weights.

Can only be used once per battle
After 5 turns the heart will go back to its normal beating rate
Must have complete mastery of the lightning element.
No lightning jutsu for one turn after this mode wears off.
Can only be taught by Mathias
After the mode wears of the user will receive +20 damage

Declined, do not resubmit

(Go-ruden nibai Knife) Golden Double Knife
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Close-Short
Chakra Cost:40 (+20 for using Lightning/Wind techniques)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Golden Double Knife is a special dagger created by Mathias. It is made of a special metal that is able to release lightning and wind blade/blast-related techniques. The dagger is able to deflect any lightning or wind technique A rank or below. The dagger has a special attack called Lightning Assassination.

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Every time the user deflects an attack he gets -10 damage
Can only be wielded by Mathias
Can only absorb a Lightning or Wind technique twice per battle
If the dagger is used for a Lightning or Wind attack/blast. No S-Rank or above techniques of that element for one turn.
Declined, do not resubmit

(Raiton Ansatsu) Lightning Assassination
Type:Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:90
Description: The user slashes the air with his dagger in a cross motion several times sending blades of lightning in a wave towards the target slicing through anything in its path. After releasing this attack the user feels drained.

Must have the Golden Double Knife
Can only be used once per battle
After releasing the attack the user gets -20 damage
Can only be used by Mathias
Declined, do not resubmit

This is what it kind of looks like

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(Fuuton: Hermes' Izou) - Wind Style: Hermes' Legacy
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, without the need of making any hand seals, focuses all of his wind chakra into his legs, turning them into a spinning vortex of wind. This way, the user is able to float or travel at very fast speeds, reaching lee's speed without weights.
This technique is used mostly as a defense mechanism, being the perfect technique to escape and/or avoid techniques.

The user is able to mantain this form for only 2 turns
The user can only use this jutsu twice per battle
After the jutsu ends, the user will be left exhausted, so he won't be able to use any S-rank wind jutsus next turn.
Can only be taught by Mathias or Jinbei the co-creator
Declined, similar jutsu exists
Feel free to edit anything ^_^

 

[BishamonSama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Anbu Kakashi already made this jutsu - Lightning Release: Redirection Of Lightning)

Actually, Anbu Kakashi stole that jutsu from me. Lightning Release: Deflector of Lightning.

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal:Apes
Scroll Owner:Sage of Darkness
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:


Summoning Boss: Tartarus
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid Range
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)
Description: Tartarus is the leader of the apes as he has the most expierence in combat and is an elder ape. Tartarus is the Chief of the apes seeing that they don't have royalty. He is a large ape (as large as the Gamabunta). He doesnt liked to be someoned by just anyone and doesnt like being bossed around. He carries a large Hammer in his back known as the Fist of Rukt he can only use wind techs up to A rank
*note*
He can only be in battle for 3 turns
He can only be summoned by people with the ape contract
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Summoning: Ramm
Rank: B
Range: Mid Range
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 40
Description:
Ramm is an elite ape warrior. His talents are well known to his kind. Ramm is a speacial ape with the ability to sense other life beings withing a 10 mile radius. He is a talented ninja animal and he can control fire nature and make devastating fire attacks. He is the older son of Tartarus and Second in command of the apes
*note*
He can only be summoned with those who have signed the ape contract
He can only be in play for 4 turns.
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*If any mod needs to fix something feel free*

Apes are not a specific species, it is a name to describe hominoids. If you meant Gorillas when you said apes, I already own the contract.

 

[Pervyy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: kasai kakujuu) - Fire style: Fire expansion
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short - long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: +25
Description: After releasing a fire jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the fire jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the fire jutsu boosting any fire jutsu by 25 damage points. By the increase in chakra the fire gains more power as it absorbs more oxygen increasing its power.

Note: Can only use used on fire the user or the users summon has created
Note: Can only be used once one each fire jutsu creates
Note: can only be used 3 times
Approved

(Raiton: kiri kakujuu) - lightning style: lightning expansion
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short - long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: +25
Description: After releasing a lightning jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the lightning jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the lightning jutsu boosting any lightning jutsu by 25 damage points. By the increase in chakra the lightning gains more power as the power of the electrical current is increased.

Note: Can only use used on lightning the user or the users summon has created
Note: Can only be used once one each lightning jutsu creates
Note: can only be used 3 times
Approved

(Fuuton: kaze kakujuu) - Wind style: Wind expansion
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short - long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: + 25
Description: After releasing a wind jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the wind jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the wind jutsu boosting any wind jutsu by 25 damage points. By the increase in chakra the wind gains more power as it increases the power of the wind blast aswell as the size by expanding the wind currents.

Note: Can only use used on wind the user or the users summon has created
Note: Can only be used once one each wind jutsu creates
Note: can only be used 3 times
Approved

(Suiton: Mizu kakujuu) - Water style: Water expansion
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short - long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: +25
Description: After releasing a water jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the water jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the water jutsu boosting any water jutsu by 25 damage points. By the increase in chakra the water gains more power as the wave of water increases in size and the power and speed of the water is increased.

Note: Can only use used on water the user or the users summon has created
Note: Can only be used once one each water jutsu creates
Note: can only be used 3 times
Approved

 

[DopeyDwarf]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kikaichu Tsukamu Kumite) – Destruction Bug Kata

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: 60 (+10 damage to taijutsu)
Description: The use will release many Kikaichū bugs out of his body which coat his limbs (arms, legs, etc. – the user chooses what) with the crowd of insects. The user can use these insects as an extension of their limbs giving them longer reach with taijutsu and can also be used to restrict the opponent.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Note: The user is capable of performing jutsus and form hand seals while this is active.
Created by DopeyDwarf

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(Hijutsu: Mushi) – Secret Technique: Insect Shroud

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user disperses his insects all around the battlefield allowing him to perform Aburame jutsu easier and quicker.
Note: Can only be used twice and lasts 4 turns.
Note: Must wait at least two turns to activate again.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf

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(Hijutsu: Haku Sakini) – Secret Technique: Fade Away

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user gains the ability to merge himself into the shroud/swarm of insects around the battlefield and capable of appearing out from any part of the insect swarm.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: This is similar to Kimimaro's “Sawarabi no Mai - Dance of the Young Ferns”
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf

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(Kikaichu Konchuu Mure) - Destruction Bug Swarm

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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases many Kikaichū bugs which burst out of the user’s body scattering all over the battlefield as the user disappears and then reappears at another location where his insects are. This sudden outburst of insects provides a great distraction for the user to flee or attack as the mass of insects obscures any retreating ninja. When no longer needed, the insects return to the user.
Note: This is similar to “Murder of Crows Confusion”.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf

Approved, note i removed the damage because it doesnt cause damage and its more like a substitution aswell so it will count towards a sub useage

 

[Ginga]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Delete this, you don't even have a bio to be posting this jutsu.

I figured that out. I'll work on the bio

 

[Heavens Blade]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(kaichou no kichigai) melody of the mad
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user will play a ocarina or flute and the opponent will then loose all there strength then they will see there skin start to fall off the sight of there flesh falling off there body will cause the one under the genjutsu to loose there calm and makes them even easier to controll
- can only be taught by foamy
- takes time to fully take effect (2 notes and opponent begins to lose strength meaning they cant run anymore 5 notes and they wont be able to walk anymore 7 notes and the skin falls off after 10 notes they are completly under the genjutsu)
-as stated in the jutsu you can only do this with orcarina or flute
Declined, do not resubmit its a rip off of tayuya's cursed seal 2 genjutsu

(fezachiri Kuchiyose no Jutsu) fezachiri summoning
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: fezachiri is a humming bird her beak and talons are both enhanced by doton chakra increasing there strength and defence (not against lightning clearly) the feathers in its wings are infused with fuuton chakra and she can shoot them at his opponent in a attack (its like a fuuton infused kunai) which count towards one the users moves and equals to C rank power fezachiri can use both doton and fuuton abilities up to A rank (needs summoner on his back and summoner must do handseals if required) feza is capable of surrounding herself in a dense wind protecting himself against S ranked attacks (A-ranked if katon) and can only be used once. Feza is married to Hagane
-the dense wind counts as one of your jutsu
-any jutsu used by feza counts as one of your jutsu
-can be out for 4 turns
-must have signed humming bird contract
-can be summoned once per match
Approved

(hagane Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Hagane sumoning
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:Hagene is a humming bird it with a extremly long tail which he uses to protect himself or his summoner. his feathers are as hard as steel (thus his name which means steel) the feathers on Hagenes are made speacial however the ones on his tail are stronger then the rest of his body. due to this feathers he is able to deal with B ranked attacks (tail can block A ranked). Hagen can use both fire and wind techs up to A rank (cant use ones that need hand seals unless someone preforms them for him and they must be on his back at the time) Haganes talons are also on fire and there hot enough to melt through steel (can be put out by S ranked water) Hagane is married to Feza
-jutsu used by him count as one of your jutsu
-can be out for 4 turns
-must have signed humming bird contract
-can be summoned once per match
Declined, do not resubmit

(oni bansan) demon dinner
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user plays the flute or ocarina and traps the opponent in a genjutsu where a demon comes out of the ground and steals their soul once the demon takes there soul the victim cant move
-takes 5 note for victim to fall under genjutsu
-can only be taught by foamy
Declined, do not resubmit

(katon: kouen kei) fire release: flame whip
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (additional 15 to make it whip)
Description: the user preforms 3 handsigns then shoots a long flame out of his mouth that looks similar to a flamthrower however by doing one more handseal you can make the flame can whip making it extremly difficult to dodge this jutsu
-if handsign is done before hand can hit someone trying to dodge with hurrican fist or doton pillar
-can only be taught by foamy
Approved

Take note for future submittions make sure your grammer is correct and try make your descriptions more understandable


please feel free to edit i would rather not have to resubmit

 

[black uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Mushi Kuuchuufuyou no jutsu) – Insect Levitation Technique

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A cloud of insects that can either be used to levitate the user or his opponent lifting them up into the air.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan
Created by DopeyDwarf

Hey please remove this one as its just my insect cloud thanx

 

[Kurisutina]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Sloths ナマケモノ
Scroll Owner: AzNsKtLs
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Not yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
Approved

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Summoning Technique: Sloths - Mylo (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Namakeno Mylo)
Rank: B
Type: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Mylo is about twice the size of a human, is a two-toed sloth, and has the qualities of one. His fur is a light brown color with white on his hands, feet, and neck. He is often lazy, lax, and rude. His claws are slightly curved and meant mainly for crawling but can be used to attack, ineffectively. Mylo has jutsu up to C-Rank in Earth although he hates using it.
*Only lasts 4 turns
*Must have signed the Sloth Contract (held by AzNsKtLs)

Approved

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Summoning Technique: Sloths - Vaive (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Namakeno Vaive)
Rank: A
Type: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Vaive is a gray sloth with three toes. He has white around his eyes and brown fur that extends from the top of his chest to his neck. Vaive is more active then most Sloths and he is very respectful to his summoners. He is able to use B-Rank Earth Jutsu.
*Only lasts 3 turns
*Must have signed the Sloth Contract (held by AzNsKtLs)

Approved
First Submission Ready to be edited, thank you.

 

[Damon Salvatore]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Raiton: Doki)-Lightning:Wrath
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:60
Damage Points:80
Description:The user concentrates upon his raiton chakra.After 4 handseals the user is able to release the lightning through anypart of his body.Then he slams the ground and is able to use the negative electrons stored within the earth to shoot lightnings towards the positive electrons into the sky.
Note: Can be used twice per battle.
Note:Can only be taught by Damon Salvatore
Note:Only useble if there are cloud in the sky.

Declined, do not resubmit

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(Raiton:kyuushuu) Lightning:Suction
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Once a lightning jutsu is used against the user he does 3 handseals and lifts his hands towards the coming lightning.Then he absorbs the Raiton chakra from the justu.
Note:Can be used 2 times per battle.
Note:After used the user must use lightning jutsu in the same turn to free the stored lightning chakra.
Note:Only taught by Damon Salvatore
Note:Can absorb only till A rank justus.

Approved

Summoning Animal: Steller's Sea Eagle
Scroll Owner: Damon Salvatore
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Anubis
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
Approved

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Summoning Boss: Anubis
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid Range
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)
Description:Anubis is a large Steller's sea eagle.His size is the same as Gamabunta.When flaping wings he creates B rank wind vortex.His most impresive ability is that he is able to use his chakra to create also B rank and below Genjutsus.Due to his eagle vision he is able to use 1-3 kilometer in distance.
Note:The B rank both wind and genjutsus count as a move and cannot be used in the same turn together.

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Declined, elaborate more on the effects of the genjutsu and also state that they count towards one of your 3 moves per turn

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(Suiton: Kiri senro)-Water:Mist track
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:The user uses his suiton chakra to influence the Hidden Mist Jutsu on tracking the opponent by detecting his suiton chakra
Note:Can be used twice per battle
Note:Only taught by Damon Salvatore
Note:Can be used only with hidden mist jutsu regardles of who summoned the mist

Declined, how can this work unless they use a water technique cause a person doesnt show elemental chakra unless they are using a specific elemental ability

 

[jaydennscott]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fire release : Flames of invisibility (Katon: 不可視の炎 Fukashi no honoo)
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: short/Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points:80
Description: After performing the needed hand-signs the user then spews out a almost invisible fire that can blast though even metals. all you can see of this fire is the mirage mist seen above fire. dojutsu like sharingan and bakugan can easily see this fire because the chakra in it .

Summoning Animal: Giant Phoenix
Scroll Owner: Jaydennscott
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Uwaki - a giant blue phoenix
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description: A phoenix is a mythical bird with a colorful plumage and a tail of gold and scarlet (or purple, blue, and green according to some legends). It has a 500 to 1000 year life-cycle, near the end of which it builds itself a nest of twigs that then ignites; both nest and bird burn fiercely and are reduced to ashes, from which a new, young phoenix or phoenix egg arises, reborn anew to live again. The new phoenix is destined to live as long as its old self.

alot like the toad summoning these Phoenix can speak english
in order to summon the phoenix the user must preform the needed hand-seals then bite his thumb so that it bleeds and wipe the blood across the the phoenix tattoo (seen below) then slam there hand on the ground NOTE: only jaydennscott can teach this summoning

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Summoning boss: Uwaki
Type: summoning
Rank: A
Range: mid/long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 60
Description Uwaki is the leader of the phoenix and the strongest of them. Uwaki has alot of experience in battle but he is often very stubborn and will only listen to a few people, just like other summoning's he dose not like to be summoned unless there is a good reason for it. he is also known to be very lazy.

All Declined, do not resubmit

 

[black uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Rhinoceros beetle
Scroll Owner: Black Uchiha
Other Users who have signed the contract: none
Summoning Boss if existing: King Shinobu
Other Animals tied to contract: Ryu (car size)
Rie (20 ft wing span), Satoru (dump truck size), Kumiko & Kamiko (Akamaru (shippuden) size)

These rhinoceros beetles are from Mt. Gen they are known for there strength and power as they can carry things 850 times their own weight. They are under the leadership of King Shinobu. Most of them have Lightning, Earth, and Wind affinitys. These beetle range in sizes from normal to bigger that Gamabunta. They can fly but in most cases don't

~Contract approved~

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Ryu. Ryu has a nature affinity for Lightning element using lightning jutsu up to A rank. Known for his strength and his durability do to his size.
-this Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns (my turns).
-this Summoning can only be Summoned 3 times per battle.

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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Rie. The size of a jet ski. The user stands aborad her to achive flight. She has the nature elements of lightining and wind using them up to A rank. With her 20 ft wings she add +10 damage to her wind techs (like Temari's fan). Known for her speed.
-this Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns (my turns).
-this Summoning can only be Summoned 4 times per battle.

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Rank: A
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Satoru. Satoru has the nature elements of earth, using it up to A rank. With his hard earth infused exoskeleton, he can block up to S Rank: Earth, Wind, and Water techs, without harm. Known for his strength and his durability do to his size, mostly used for defense.
-If used to block S-rank techs Satoru is disperse for 3 turns.
-this Summoning can only be in play for 2-turns(my turns).
-this Summoning can only be Summoned 4 times per battle.

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Rank: B
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: User summons the Kum/Kam twins. The twins are the size of Akamaru (Shippuden). Kumiko has a nature affinity for lightining element using it up to B rank and Kamiko has a nature affinity for wind element using it up to B rank. Both are skilled shinobi amongst the shinobi from Mt. Gen. Known for their taijutsu skills, both carry basic ninja tools (makibishi spikes, senbon, kunai…etc)
-this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns(my turns).
-this Summoning can only be Summoned 3 times per battle.

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~All jutsus declined~ Resubmit separately, don't submit a contract and jutsus for that contract in the same post.

Rie

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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Rie. The size of a jet ski. The user stands aborad her to achive flight. She has the nature elements of lightining and wind using them up to A rank. With her 20 ft wings she add +10 damage to her wind techs (like Temari's fan). Known for her speed.
-this Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns (my turns).
-this Summoning can only be Summoned 4 times per battle.

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Approved

Satoru

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Rank: A
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Satoru. Satoru has the nature elements of earth, using it up to A rank. With his hard earth infused exoskeleton, he can block up to A Rank: Earth, Wind, and Water techs, without harm. Known for his strength and his durability do to his size, mostly used for defense.
-If used to block S-rank techs Satoru is disperse for 3 turns.
-this Summoning can only be in play for 2-turns(my turns).
-this Summoning can only be Summoned 4 times per battle.

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~Declined~ Block A rank without any damage is too OP for an A rank summoning.
Pheromones are also used to attack/defend...some plants even use them to make them taste bad to plant eaters

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(Feromon hōden) pheromone discharge

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (+ 10 when used inside an enclosed space do to a higher concentration)
Description: After one handseal, bugs fly around the opponent releasing pheromones (odorless, colorless, & tasteless). The pheromones (when in healed) cause the opponent to lose sight (blurred vision), and feel extreme pain on their insides (nasal passages, lunges & stomach). Aburame are immune.
-Last 2 turns
–must be a bug user
–only taught by Black Uchiha

Declined, limit its useage and add note that doujutsu can see the colour of the chakra infused within them

(Konchū mahi) Insect paralysis

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After two handseals, insects fly at the opponet's face as a distraction, while other insects sneak up from behind, fly or crawl up the clothing, unnoticed and place themselves along the spine. Latching onto the nerves along the spine, causing paralysis.
-Last 2 turns
– bugs must be released beforehand
– can be used in conjunction with other bug jutsu
- must be a bug user
– only taught by Black Uchiha

Declined, do not resubmit

(Suzumebachi no su) Hornet's nest

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Type: Attack-defense-supplementary
Rank: A
Range: short-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user pulls out a scroll and inject his/her chakra into it to summon forth a 10ft high, 9ft wide, 500 lb; wooden and steel hornet's nest. The nest contains 50 puppet hornets, the size of akamaru (puppy size). These hornets can be used one by one or can be used as a swarm (all 50), each with the usual puppet weapons (senbon, smoke bombs...etc all poisoned). The nest can be summoned over the opponent to crush them. The nest can also be used to block A-rank and below attacks (do to its weight and steel design).

- can only be summoned twice per battle (two different ones)
- if using all 50 the user can't use any other puppets on the field, with the exception of sasori as he would use his 100 puppet mechanism to easily do so
- chakra can be injected through puppets/chakra strings
- can only be taught by black uchiha

(I think this is possible because a puppet master with ten fingers can control ten puppets (chyio), each witch many different working parts. So controlling 50 smaller puppets with fewer working parts should be possible)
Declined, do not resubmit

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[Toku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- Kojack Gurizurī) Summoning- Kojack the grizzly
Type: Attack/Defend
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user will summon Kojack, cousin of Odin, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Kojack has an elemental affinity of earth allowing him to harden his fur as hard as a rock and cause small tremors by slamming his front paws down on the ground. He is the same size of Gamabunta. He is also able to use B-rank earth jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
*Note: can only be used once per battle.
*Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
Declined, give the hardening the fur a rank level and make it one the three moves per turn

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- Taffy Ahiru) Summoning- Taffy the Duck
Type: Attack/Defend
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user will summon Taffy, the son of Luffy, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Taffy has an elemental affinity of earth allowing him to flap his wings at high speeds and release rock sharp feathers along w/ dust clouds . He is big enough to carry one person in flight and can fly at high speeds. He is able to use B-rank earth jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
*Note: can only be used once per battle.
*Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
Declined, need to rank his abilities and count them as one the 3 moves per turn

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- Laffy Ahiru) Summoning- Laffy the Duck
Type: Attack/Defend
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user will summon Laffy, the son of Luffy, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Laffy has an elemental affinity of fire allowing him to release fire from his mouth. He is big enough to carry one person in flight and can fly at high speeds. He is able to use B-rank fire jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
*Note: can only be used once per battle.
*Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
Declined, need to define the breathing fire from his mouth, is this him using the fire techniques or an ability of his own, if his own provide a rank and count towards one your three moves

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- Kojack Gurizurī) Summoning- Kojack the grizzly
Type: Attack/Defend
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user will summon Kojack, cousin of Odin, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Kojack has an elemental affinity of earth allowing him to harden his fur as hard as a rock and cause small tremors by slamming his front paws down on the ground. He is the same size of Gamabunta. He is also able to use B-rank earth jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
*Note: can only be used once per battle.
*Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
*Note: Fur armor is S-ranked(like earth hardening tech.) and counts as one of the jutsus of a turn.

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- Taffy Ahiru) Summoning- Taffy the Duck
Type: Attack/Defend
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user will summon Taffy, the son of Luffy, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Taffy has an elemental affinity of earth allowing him to flap his wings at high speeds and release rock sharp feathers along w/ dust clouds . He is big enough to carry one person in flight and can fly at high speeds. He is able to use B-rank earth jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
*Note: can only be used once per battle.
*Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
*Note: Dust clouds are B-rank and count as one of the jutsus of a turn.

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- Laffy Ahiru) Summoning- Laffy the Duck
Type: Attack/Defend
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user will summon Laffy, the son of Luffy, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Laffy has an elemental affinity of fire allowing him to release fire from his mouth. He is big enough to carry one person in flight and can fly at high speeds. He is able to use B-rank fire jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
*Note: can only be used once per battle.
*Note: can only stay in play for a total of 5 turns.
*Note: Fire bullets are B-rank and count as one of the jutsus of a turn.
~All Approved from here up~
(Katon- Hebi no sōkutsu) Fire release- Den of Snakes
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user will release a flame of fire that will form a large sphere of fire on the users left hand. The user will then begin spinning it w/ his right releasing flame whips that will make their way towards the opponent burning them severely on contact.
*Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*Note: can only be used by Toku.
~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's

 

[McKnockout]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Katon: Kasai Soujou) – Fire Manipulation

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra throughout the air causing any already created fire to fall under the user’s manipulation. Once this jutsu is in affect, the user can control the fire in any way he chooses.
*Note: Only up to S-rank fire
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: Fire must already be created.
*Note: Last for 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Declined, S rank is abit to much

Resubmitting Fire Manipulation..
(Katon: Kasai Soujou) – Fire Manipulation

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra throughout the air causing any already created fire to fall under the user’s manipulation. Once this jutsu is in affect, the user can control the fire in any way he chooses.
*Note: Only up to A-rank fire
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: Fire must already be created.
*Note: Last for 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Changed it to "only up to A-rank fire". Please just edit where you see fit.
~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's

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New submissions..
(Buki: Iya Kumori Katana) - Weapon: The Shadowless Sword

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (+15 damage to every wind based jutsu)
Description: This chokutō was made by a blacksmith who had a secret method of sword making who only crafted for people he believed to be worthy of his works. It is made out of special hardened chakra infused metals which he named “The Shadowless Sword” in reference to its special abilities. It has a movable handle allowing it to switch from a traditional sword to a double-headed sword; the handle was designed to fit on either side of the blade. This sword has the ability to absorb chakra and coat/channel the blade in three different elements of fire, lightning or wind. By using chakra flow, the user can extend the reach and cutting ability of the sword. However, the greatest advantage of this sword is allowing its user to perform wind techniques with the use of only a single handseal.
*Note: This sword can not be destroyed.
*Can only be used by McKnockout

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~Declined~ OP
(Iya Kumori Shinkirou Dageki) - Shadowless Mirage Strike

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user concentrates either fire, lightning or wind chakra into The Shadowless Sword and performs a slash with the sword which releases a crescent shaped energy blast of raw chakra that is infused with the elemental chakra that was absorbed by the sword at the desired location. These crescents of raw chakra have different affects depending on the elemental chakra used. Lightning will severely shock the opponent, fire will induce 3rd degree burns and wind will pierce and shred the opponent’s skin.
*Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle (regardless of elemental chakra used).
*Can only be used by McKnockout

~Declined~ Sword was approved
(Genjutsu: Mugen Senkou) – Illusion Technique: Continuous Flashbang

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: An illusion where the opponent is suddenly blinded by a flash (there is a bright burst of blinding light much like a flash bomb) that continues to detonate/flash over and over again. This causes the opponent to immediately stop what they were doing and futilely attempt to shield their eyes. But most importantly, this technique blinds the opponent making them unable to rely on their vision.
*Note: Blinding effects last for 1 turn.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

~Declined~
(Genjutsu: Kage Mane?) – Illusion Technique: Shadow Imitation?

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: An illusion where the opponent finds themselves trapped and paralysed as he sees his shadow combine with the user’s shadow (or the user’s ally e.g. a clone) exactly like Shadow Imitation. In reality, the opponent is paralysed and unable to move. This jutsu requires a single handseal to perform.
*Note: Paralysing effects last for 1 turn.
*Note: Can only use 3 times per battle.
*Note: Must wait at least 1 turn to be used again.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

~Declined~

 

[Omachy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Oudan Sono Taiga)- Crossing the River
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user summons 4 spikes of water from a nearby water source, which will impale the enemy with two spikes piercing from the front and 2 from the back. The tips of the spikes will all cross each other upon impalement.
~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's
(Suiton: Kadou Kuro-N Gikou)- Vortex Clone Technique
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will disappear in a cloud of smoke as a perfect clone of themselves will run from the smoke towards the enemy and once it gets within range it will explode into a cutting vortex of water that will rise vertically into the sky cutting the opponent or the clone can stand still with the same effect as before if the opponent enters range.
Note: The clone can only run a maximum of mid-range before it explodes on its own, but the actual vortex requires it to get within short range of the opponent. The clone cannot use jutsu.
~Declined~

 

[Sindy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Peacocks
Scroll Owner: Sinderella23
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Approved

(Doton: oshi sacchi) Earth Release: Pressure Sensing
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user sends small amounts of chakra through ground around him so he can sense the pressure in certain locations of the battle field. By doing this the user can sense where his opponent is standing and where his opponent is if he/she is underground.
-User must make contact with the ground while using this jutsu.
-Must be taught by Sinderella23
Approved

(Genjutsu: Kujaku Umou) Peacock Feathers
Type: Supplementry
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates the illusion that the opponent is seeing peacock feathers floating around them. While in the genjutsu, the colorful 'eyes' on the feathers are looking at the opponent. In reality, the feathers are actually kunais with paper bombs attached to them and explode on inpact as soon as the kunais reach the opponent.
Note:
- The eyes on the feathers can only be 2 tomoe Sharingan and lower if the user has the Sharingan
- Can only be taught by Sinderella23
Declined, remove the sharingan part unless your referring to sharingan being able to see through it, as sharingan techniques arent allowed in custom jutsu submittion, and if being reffered to for the

Resubmitting:

(Genjutsu: Kujaku Umou) Peacock Feathers
Type: Supplementry
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates the illusion that the opponent is seeing peacock feathers floating around them. While in the genjutsu, the colorful 'eyes' on the feathers are looking at the opponent. In reality, the feathers are actually kunais with paper bombs attached to them and explode on inpact as soon as the kunais reach the opponent.
Note:
- Can only be taught by Sinderella23
~Approved~