what about a lightning attack that makes the opponents hair go all fizzy and protrude down towards their eyes...make them slightly blind / watery eyed.
Omg thank you frozo, you rock!it's quite a mess for me now. maybe I'm too tired... however you CAN'T make certain elements totally unaffected just because you are surrounded by chakra. the walls only contains your chakra and you are inside them, so any lightning technique that hits even the smallest parts of the wall may be lethal to you. Hozuki members are especially weak against lightning techniques.
(Suiton: Mizu Heya Giman) - Water Room Deception
Type: Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the Rat → Tiger → Dog handseals and slam one of his hands on the ground. Then he channels water chakra in the existing water source under him and his opponent and create a perfectly squared room from it, covering the two people. As the room is made, the user then uses the Hydrification Technique to merge with the room's walls and travel inside it freely. Then if the user wishes, he could materialize fully or partially to attack. While merged with the walls, the user is unaffected by most physical attacks such as spikes, hits, cuts, etc. But large scaled attacks that destroys the walls may cause damage to the user and/or force him to cancel his technique(s).
Notes and Restrictions:
- Can only be uses twice per battle.
- Because the room's walls contains the user's chakra, doujutsu users will not be able to spot the user easily or until he is materializing
- Can not use S-rank or higher Suiton techniques in the next turn.
- Must be a member of the Hozuki clan to use
- Can only be taught by EdwardSama
(Raiton: Raikou Rensa-tou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain-sword(Raiton: Raikou Rensa-tou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain-sword
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user releases lightning chakra into the ground and spread it out equally. When the chakra is in the ground, the user uses this chakra to electroduce the iron sand found in the earth and once an enough amount is electroduced, raise and collect it above the ground, creating a sword from it. The sword is only made of this iron sand and lightning chakra, where the lightning chakra flutters/vibrates the iron sand grains inside the sword, making it work like a chainsaw. Due to this effect the sword can cut solid objects easily. Advantage of this technique is that the iron sand can be manipulated as the user wishes due to the sword has no solid form. If the user wishes, he can reshape the sword into a long, but thin whip, what he can control using his lightning chakra presented in the sword/whip.
- can only be used 2 times per battle
- sword/whip lasts 3 turns before the chakra runs out
- re-shaping the sword/whip counts as a move
- can only be taught by Frozenstein
How the jutsu looks like:
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X-Declined-X Its alright, but define the extent of your manipulation of this iron sand. Make sure to mention that it doesnt hinder a magnet release technique.
Only read the restrictions and my comment is this; F-rank and only physical draw back is slower hand seals? F-ranks will always do damage to the user, hence why the are Forbidden jutsu.(Fukushū No Za Higashi To Nishi Mizu Doragon) - Water Style: Revenge of the East and West Water Dragons
Type:
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user will perform the following 6 hand seals: Monkey → Horse → Ox → Ram → Serpent → Boar and send an incredible amount of chakra in a large water source nearby. He uses a large amount of water from the water source and shapes it into an enormous orb of water on top of the user. The user will hold up their two hands to hold up the orb of water, because chakra alone cannot levitate the orb on top of the user due to the pressure and the large amount of water. The user will then continue and use shape manipulation to shape two dragons (the size of the orb) coming out from the left and right of the orb. This dragon has the tails attached to the orbs itself. The two dragons can spit out a large torrent of water from their mouths and flap their wings to throw senbon shaped water tendrils. The water orb is a few feet larger then the orb that the four sensory ninjas created in the war HQ, and the two dragons made are about the size of the orb of water they created in the war HQ (in the anime)
Notes and Restrictions:
- The water torrent created from the dragon's mouth is A-ranks
- The water tendrils created from the wings are B-ranks
- Can only be used once per battle
- Cannot use any water techniques up to S-ranks in the next 2 turns
- Handsigns are slower after the technique is created for 1 turn, because of the strain and pressure placed on the two hands from holding it up.
~_~ thoughts?
unfortunately I don't have much clue about this Super Saiyan Transformation since I only watched Dragon Ball when I was about 12-14... but I more or less get what you want. tho the problem: a transformation itself is not a cfs. it is a custom clan ability at max, so you first need to find out a close combat style first. also eye techniques are strictly forbidden, so it is a no go to copy sharingan.My CFS idea is one related to the Super Saiyan transformation which increased strength, speed, sight, and durability. Saiyan eyes are also somewhat like the sharingan, as they can view speedy movements undetectable by the normal eye. Saiyans also increase in power when they face death and live, I wanna incorporate that as well (like if they are healed after being close to no life left). I am also wondering if I should make up some techs exclusive to the CFS
From what I can see, I know I need to create limits as far as how long it last, chakra costs and all. I just am clueless how to go about it. I am open to suggestions of any kind so I get a better idea how to word this, and hopefully not get a DNR
Thanks alot Frozenunfortunately I don't have much clue about this Super Saiyan Transformation since I only watched Dragon Ball when I was about 12-14... but I more or less get what you want. tho the problem: a transformation itself is not a cfs. it is a custom clan ability at max, so you first need to find out a close combat style first. also eye techniques are strictly forbidden, so it is a no go to copy sharingan.
you can, however make it so that you possess more strength and better reaction time than average, but I'm not sure exactly what is ok and what is not. it's not allowed to gain certain boosts from a cfs. =/
being healed is a no go either, you need medical training for that, but if you just fool your body by certain means, it may be ok.
so what you need to do:
- create a close combat style for this cfs, most probably taijutsu/nintaijutsu
- find out what kind of abilities do you want, increased strength/power and better reaction time
- find out how you want to incorporate it with your transformation
- make a basic description and post it again so we can help
what I think could work:
you use your chakra to slightly transform certain parts of your body and boost them with certain things. like you transform your legs and make your kicks even stronger and make you to run faster. or transform your arms to gain more strength. or transform your chest/upper body to gain better resistance against incoming attacks.
to be honest I was already thinking about a cfs that makes my body extremely resistant to attacks and gives me better life force, but it may be too close to custom clans.
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