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Finally it is out ! Time for me to read it :p

Edit: :eek: Killerbee was defeated :( It seems Madara, Kabuto and Akashi are a strong team, I hope Naruto's upcoming battle with Akashi is a grand one. This chapter was worth the wait, although the wait could have been a week shorter xd Now you have me wondering what will happen :D Great chapter, I want more like this one (only longer, lol).
 
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come on! dont tell me killerbee is already out of the game! plus the battle is going to be intense i guess! so many fights! u sure can handle this?? no doubt, u need to take a lot of rest after creating such a great scenario! will be waiting for the next one! plus ur release kind of quenched my thirst for manga!hehehe!
 
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Great! Finally out! Really nice chapter you wrote.:)
Thanks:p


finally out, well worth the wait tho
Thanks:) Hehe, well it was about time I guess:p


great chapter can't wait for the next one...great job michael
Thanks:p Good to hear:)


Wow, finally xd
I think that I know why you took so much time to release it now. Despite being short, the fight seemed quite hard to imagine. Nice job though even if I wanted more from KB.

You also did a great job of putting high anitcipation on your two Chronicles (giving you more job and prwssure to write xd).

Kimimaro still being here surprised me. The best phrase is the one where it's said that the village hidden in the mist would face a battle so bloody, that it would make its former nickname fall pale in comparison. It's pin-point to make readers feel the tension of the forthcoming battle. Hope that I'll not wait so long as from now to get next chapter. xd
Yeah it was a little shorter this time around, but to be honest, this is actually the size I had imagined that every chapter would be like, only that it didn't happened at allxd

Hehe, well I had actually planned to release kakashi 2 before this one, but since that didn't happened, I had to have Akashi appear, without revealing what happened in his battle with Kakashi:p So the original and Kakashi Chronicles kinda goes hand in hand. To be honest, I'm not sure what will happend in Kakashi 2 and 3 yetxd

And regarding Sasuke Chronicles 3; I thought that since it will be about Kabuto and Zetsu attacking Iwa, I dropped the deep explaination here in this chapter. So I will go deeper on that in Sasuke 3:p;)

Hehe, well I kinda had to make up some summons that are not in the manga, so the first thing that came to my mind was him:p Would be wird if the FF said that Kabuto had a lot of new summons, and no one was mentioned by name:p

Well I kinda liked the first part of the chapter the best, with the Madara-Kabuto scene. There is just something about writing them that i can't put my finger on. Maybe I should make a Kabuto-Madara Chronicles too?:rolleyes: JKxd

Yes, Indeed:p


great chapter. looking forward to next chapter.
Thanks:)


very good! :)
Thank you:D


How long has it been?Finally the master makes his move again.
Hehe, it's been over a month indeed:p Ehehe:D Not sure if I'm worthy being named that:p


great chap . nothin g more to say
Hehe, thanks:p


:O!!! i see a spelling mistake heheh, nvm xd, nice chap Michael!! keep up the good work, both in fanfic-ting and real life >:D
Oh? Where!:pxd The Ka"g"ekage part? Already corrected that that:p
Thanks, I'll try my best:p;)


Madara is badass once again! xD Nice chapter. When can we expect new chapter?
Hehe, yeah someone commented that he appeared weak some chapters ago (maybe that was you?:p).
But I did that on purpose to build up to this point where he's finaly back, more powerful than ever before:p;)

Nothing more this week (it's thursday here now), but in the first half of next week most likely.


great chapter dude and nice sentence that you wrote using killerbee style
Hehe, well that was the part where I had to stop for a sec to thinkxd Not that I think his sentence are too great though:p


Interesting! the next chapter will be exciting.
Akashi is back then that means the Kakashi died or something.
The attack was too unexpected.
Thats sad that killerbee will die.Do you planned to kill him?Or he will be saved by Naruto or somebody else?Well good chapter by the way;)
I sure hope so myself:p

Well, as I mentioned above; I have no idea of the real outcome of his battle with Kakashi yet, so who knows:p;)

Well it was in the cards all along, just a matter of time:p

Killerbee... Well to be completely honest. At first I had planned for him to die, but then I changed my mind. And now... I'm not sure:p But the answer will come next chapter (Be sure to look for the title of it;))

Thanks:)


Finally it is out ! Time for me to read it :p

Edit: :eek: Killerbee was defeated :( It seems Madara, Kabuto and Akashi are a strong team, I hope Naruto's upcoming battle with Akashi is a grand one. This chapter was worth the wait, although the wait could have been a week shorter xd Now you have me wondering what will happen :D Great chapter, I want more like this one (only longer, lol).
Hehe:p

Yeah. I was unsure wheter or not to describe that battle, but ended up on deciding that I simply didn't have time for it:p Even Killerbee would have a hard time against Madara, Kabuto and the newcomer Akashi:p
Naruto vs Akashi round 2? We'll see;):p

Hehe, yeah the time went faster by than I expected:p
xd Yeah, but it's not always about the lenght;)
Felt good for once to write a shorter one:p


What's a Kagekage? :p

Nice chapter anyways again Michael, you epic hounddoggy!
Oh! Corrected it right away!;)

Hehe, thanks:p:)


come on! dont tell me killerbee is already out of the game! plus the battle is going to be intense i guess! so many fights! u sure can handle this?? no doubt, u need to take a lot of rest after creating such a great scenario! will be waiting for the next one! plus ur release kind of quenched my thirst for manga!hehehe!
Hehe, well I talked a little about Killerbee in the posts above, so check it out:p;)

Yeah, it's building up towards the end:p

I sure hope soxd Think I will have a little hard time writing the two final chapters.

Hehe, always glad to hear that people like my chapters:):p
 
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Yeah it was a little shorter this time around, but to be honest, this is actually the size I had imagined that every chapter would be like, only that it didn't happened at allxd

Hehe, well I had actually planned to release kakashi 2 before this one, but since that didn't happened, I had to have Akashi appear, without revealing what happened in his battle with Kakashi:p So the original and Kakashi Chronicles kinda goes hand in hand. To be honest, I'm not sure what will happend in Kakashi 2 and 3 yetxd

And regarding Sasuke Chronicles 3; I thought that since it will be about Kabuto and Zetsu attacking Iwa, I dropped the deep explaination here in this chapter. So I will go deeper on that in Sasuke 3:p;)

Hehe, well I kinda had to make up some summons that are not in the manga, so the first thing that came to my mind was him:p Would be wird if the FF said that Kabuto had a lot of new summons, and no one was mentioned by name:p

Well I kinda liked the first part of the chapter the best, with the Madara-Kabuto scene. There is just something about writing them that i can't put my finger on. Maybe I should make a Kabuto-Madara Chronicles too?:rolleyes: JKxd

Yes, Indeed:p
Well, I'm really waiting for an epic Kakashi-Akashi battle now. :rolleyes:About the 3rd Sasuke Chronicles, I also wanted to read more about how Sasuke gained old Onoki's trust. He's so grumpy xd that Sasuke will perhaps need to do extraordinary things to gain his trust enough to be promoted Tsushikage. I don't know if you want to mention these things but who knows :p

About, Kimimaro, he was summoned in the manga, that's why I'm surprised. Now, he could have not been taken out :p

Well, I'm supporting you full-force if you create more chronicles. xd Besides, chronicles about the best 2 villains, could be quite awesome. :cool:
 
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Well, I'm really waiting for an epic Kakashi-Akashi battle now. :rolleyes:About the 3rd Sasuke Chronicles, I also wanted to read more about how Sasuke gained old Onoki's trust. He's so grumpy xd that Sasuke will perhaps need to do extraordinary things to gain his trust enough to be promoted Tsushikage. I don't know if you want to mention these things but who knows :p

About, Kimimaro, he was summoned in the manga, that's why I'm surprised. Now, he could have not been taken out :p

Well, I'm supporting you full-force if you create more chronicles. xd Besides, chronicles about the best 2 villains, could be quite awesome. :cool:
Hehe:p

Oh? Can't remember that. Oh well no harm done; as Kabuto mentioned (or maybe it was Madara) in one of the chapters of mine, that he didn't lose all of his original summons, so then Kimimaro just have to be one of them then I guess:p Maybe I'll introduce some new ones in the next chapter;)

Hehe, we'll see:p My release plan is really like: Kakashi 2, Sasuke 3, 14, Kakashi 3, 15, Jiraiya 1, 2, 3, Pause, Secret chronicle 1-9 (or 12). haven't planned further as I've been thinking of starting a complete new work sooner or later, but who knows if a new idea hits me:p I had thought of a Konohamaru chronicle too, but decided to drop it and include it in the secret instead:p;)
 

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Hehe:p

Oh? Can't remember that. Oh well no harm done; as Kabuto mentioned (or maybe it was Madara) in one of the chapters of mine, that he didn't lose all of his original summons, so then Kimimaro just have to be one of them then I guess:p Maybe I'll introduce some new ones in the next chapter;)

Hehe, we'll see:p My release plan is really like: Kakashi 2, Sasuke 3, 14, Kakashi 3, 15, Jiraiya 1, 2, 3, Pause, Secret chronicle 1-9 (or 12). haven't planned further as I've been thinking of starting a complete new work sooner or later, but who knows if a new idea hits me:p I had thought of a Konohamaru chronicle too, but decided to drop it and include it in the secret instead:p;)
Hmm, well, indeed, he can still be here! Now about new summons, I always wanted old Jiraiya (kind of dream to have Naruto v/s J-Man). There's also old Onoki xdAlso, I don't know what was Kakashi's fate but if he died, then maybe........

That's a tough schedule as I might have said. Hope you'll be able to keep it up. Since you're 2 chapters from the last (now if you wish to make it longer, everybody will be happy xd), you could make us thirsty by revealing some crispy ideas about that "SECRET" chronicle. xd
 
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Hmm, well, indeed, he can still be here! Now about new summons, I always wanted old Jiraiya (kind of dream to have Naruto v/s J-Man). There's also old Onoki xdAlso, I don't know what was Kakashi's fate but if he died, then maybe........

That's a tough schedule as I might have said. Hope you'll be able to keep it up. Since you're 2 chapters from the last (now if you wish to make it longer, everybody will be happy xd), you could make us thirsty by revealing some crispy ideas about that "SECRET" chronicle. xd
Hehe, yeah I'll have to give that some thinking time:p

I guess people is wondering how I will be able to wrap all the fighting and events up in only two chapters, but you will see:p;)

Hehe, once I've posted chapter 15, I'll reveal what it's all about... or almost:p As people would probably ask me what the he*ks going on after reading 15xd
 

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Review? Why, did you think I read? LOL! You really are conceited fag thinking that people who come here and say nice, awesome, etc are reading your stuff, ha?
Hehe, if you were referring to MR. X below, then you're right, but it's you we're talking about. You're the one who has send me most pms of all the people who has appeared on my threads asking for my next chapters, Mr. Random Aladin in the sand:p

Persian boy from the sand kinda has a point but that i told you before.
When it comes to you, agree. Now go make chapter 2 of your FF before the "fans" gives up on you;)
 

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Hehe, if you were referring to MR. X below, then you're right, but it's you we're talking about. You're the one who has send me most pms of all the people who has appeared on my threads asking for my next chapters, Mr. Random Aladin in the sand:p



When it comes to you, agree. Now go make chapter 2 of your FF before the "fans" gives up on you;)
O.O And so speaks the great Jafar with his long chin. Never heard of "Sleeping with the enemy", didn't you? Oh, I forgot, fagots like you just can't understand.U_U
 
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I've heard "keep your enemies closer":| Think you missunderstood at class. You don't need to sleep with them. Who's the faggot now:rolleyes:
Muhahaha! Do you not know why it is quoted? It is so because it is used as description for a thing to be done that not a faggot could understand!O.O

I bet she'll be on here any minute.
Been more than a minute now, don't you think so?
 
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Muhahaha! Do you not know why it is quoted? It is so because it is used as description for a thing to be done that not a faggot could understand!O.O

Been more than a minute now, don't you think so?
Just take your genie and magic carpet and go spam elsewhere. While you're at it, make a wish you could be a top notch flamer such as John here, as you're not quite there yet:|

He lives in slow motion so you're statement is invalied:rolleyes:
 
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