Storyboard Mission Submission

[Anbu Kirito]

Players involved: Anbu Kirito
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: (4) - Steal A Large Or Valuable Asset
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: March 3rd, 2019
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Azuma is sent into a desert to "Fetch something from a vault"; even he admits it appears the mission is over ranked. There's no risk of conflict, and everything seems to be going well. When he gets there, he realizes that the thing he's fetching doesn't belong to the person he's fetching it for... and isn't even where he was told it was. Features some problem solving and serves as an introduction to Azuma as a character.

Mission Failed. You write well and tell a decent story but you quickly glance over your objective and focus much too heavily on setting up your objective/narrative instead of actually performing the objective itself. Writing a lot doesn't mean it all counts toward your mission as it's not a word count type of thing, it's more about performing the Storyboard Element adequately and to completion. Your mission was supposed to be all or mostly about how your bio goes onto "steal a large or valuable asset." Instead, you took a large portion of your biography's time to explain who hired it, and what they wanted it to do and how it got lost along the way. I feel like you needed to focus more directly on actually having your bio steal the asset, in this case, you could have made excavation a more daunting task or you could have added some danger into the situation like a rivaling explorer. Think more Indiana Jones and less just going through the motions. Keep in mind, this was close to passing because I could see the work you put into it, you don't write a 1600 word mission without putting in work, I debated it back and forth, and even read it thrice. You just don't put in the right amount of effort on the Storyboard Element for an A rank or a single element mission. I suggest trying out a few B ranks, it'll help you get accustomed to time management.

Checked by @Howard​

 

[Ryóma]

Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Stomp out protest and/or dissent (3)
Convince a criminal to confess (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 5/03/2019
Relevant mission links: [x]
Additional information:

Mission Passed. You also win a B-rank custom artifact. It can be submitted here or exchanged for the mission value in Ryo.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Korra.]

Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Create a village hospital without the use of a Wood user (4)

- Get fellow villagers involved in a village project (4)

- Make all the necessary plans and arrangements for your Clan (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 3/5/2019 - 3/5/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/takinomori-117.756130/page-6#post-21919062
Additional information: this is is the most i wrote T____T

Mission Passed. In the future don't include such large images in your post e.e.

 

[RuckenTM]

Players involved: Rucken
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Explore ruins with booby-traps (4)
- Manage a dysfunctional group (4)
- Protect, save and, serve (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20190310
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/tetsukai-125.756138/post-21920437
Additional information: N/a

Mission Passed, with some generosity. My issue is mostly with your last custom story element. It's extremely vague and doesn't really offer any direction. In the future please narrow it down to something more concrete and less abstract of an idea like "protect, save, and serve."

Players involved: Rucken
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Explore ruins with booby-traps (3)
- Defeat an strong enemy (3)
- Outwit an enemy (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20190312
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/tetsukai-125.756138/post-21920761
Additional information: N/a

Mission Passed.

 

[Korra.]

Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: (4) -
- After doing something for the village, take advantage of it for personal gains (4)

- Get rid of loose ends to keep your secrets doing any means necessary (4)

- Create a secret lab underneath a hospital to use the hospital as a cover up (4)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: March 13, 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/takinomori-117.756130/page-6#post-21921183
Additional information: Lab will be used for mostly RP purpose and tech is mostly just basic for RP purposes

Mission Passed. The adjustments made to this landmark are not permanent (only for mission purposes). To make them permanent you need to submit them in the Landmarks thread.

 

[Pyro NB]

Players Involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Terrorize a large community
Date of beginning, Date of conclusion: 03/17/2019
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Players involved: Joestar and Vex
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Doubles Tournament Event
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: March 3, 2019/March 5, 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/doubles-championship-mission-vex-and-joestar.767726/#post-21918604
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Punk Hazard]

Players involved: Joestar and Vex
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Doubles Tournament Event
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: March 6, 2019/March 12, 2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/doubles-tournament-mission-vex-and-riker-2.767795/
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Delta]

Players: Delta
Mission rank: C rank
Story Element: Set up a secure Camp
Date of beginning and conclusion: 21/03/2019
Mission link: https://animebase.me/threads/mauna-loa-142.756156/page-2#post-21924405
Addition info: N/A

Mission Passed. Susanno to remove some weeds seems a bit much but to each their own.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

• Explore a landmark ( 1 )
• Explore the history of something ( 3 )

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
02/10/2019
03/18/2019
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ FINISH ]
Additional information: Explored a LM talked to an NPC about the history of the LM and the danger it was in.

Mission Passed – Goetia

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

• Establish control over a hostile area ( 5 )
• Destroy a large group or settlement ( 5 )
• Assassinate the enemy commander ( 5 )

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
03/18/2019
03/23/2019
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ x ] [ FINISH ]
Additional information: Fought through some Uchiha, destroying a large part of their compound/killing a lot of them. Then assassinated their MS using commander. She used Izanagi to ress, but I did assassinate her. Going to use the situation and the character to do a few more missions in the future.

Mission Passed: This was a nice read. Good job – Goetia

 

[Zatanna]

Players involved: Zatanna
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: -Defend yourself from wild animals (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24th March
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/alexandros’-bluff-185.756200/post-21925965
https://animebase.me/threads/alexandros’-bluff-185.756200/post-21925981
Additional information:
"The Wailing Caverns mystery"

Mission Failed. I suggest reading the Storyboard Missions Criteria specifically the portion about single element missions.
"Choosing to use a single element requires that seventy-five percent of the mission and the narrative of the story be directly placed upon that element."
"It doesn't include things like a climate, the weather, or setup/outro roleplay that doesn't build toward the completion of the storyboard element. There is little room for off-topic work in single element missions."
"You can write a very long mission but if 50% of the mission is off topic toward the guiding element then it won't count toward passing the mission, leading to failure."

Checked by @Howard​

 

[Pervyy]

Players involved: The Pervy Sage
Mission Rank: 3 = B
Story elements chosen:

• Explore the history of something (3)
• Investigate the history of a landmark (3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 26/03/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/bone-fields-078.755896/post-21926799
Additional information: Sin explores a new area.

Mission Passed.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Pervyy]

Players involved: The Pervy Sage
Mission Rank: 3 = B
Story elements chosen:

• Fight an individual of comparable strength (3)
• Make an enemy of the Clan disappear (3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 27/03/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/bone-fields-078.755896/post-21926956
Additional information: Sin deals with what he uncovered in the depths of the earth...

Mission Failed. This one was close to a pass but you started out light, and I went back and forth while reading it. The main reason being it didn't really feel like a fight between individuals of "comparable strength" the Jashin didn't have any substantial abilities that could manage to push your bio even in the slightest. Nor did he do anything that couldn't have been dealt with freeform by your bio. Your bio was in complete control the entire time which wouldn't have been a problem if the Jashin had actually put up a fight beyond just swinging his scythe. Even the one time the Jashin put your bio in danger was just an illusion. The "Make an enemy of the Clan disappear" element felt like it was just tacked onto the end in the five or so sentences you used to seal him.

Checked by @Howard ​

 

[Ryóma]

Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Build a ninja academy in one of your landmarks without using Ninjutsu (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 28/03/2019
Relevant mission links: [x]
Additional information: I used a custom made clan storyboard element as the current ones didn't suit me.

Mission Passed. ._. Plsnomore.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Pervyy]

Players involved: The Pervy Sage
Mission Rank: 4 = A
Story elements chosen:

• Disperse a mob (4)
• Capture an important target (4)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 29/03/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/bone-fields-078.755896/post-21927595
Additional information: Time to bring down the cult

Mission Passed.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Pervyy]

Players involved: The Pervy Sage
Mission Rank: 3 = B
Story elements chosen:

• Torture a suspect

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 31/03/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/bone-fields-078.755896/post-21928246
Additional information: Time find out where the rest of the jashin cultist are

Mission Passed. This was a cool take on the mission, using genjutsu to torture the suspect.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Korra.]

Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
- Put the Clan’s interests first (2)

- Expand the village's land (2)

- Send a clone to do your work (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/1/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/takinomori-117.756130/page-6#post-21928577
https://animebase.me/threads/chilli-pepper-pass-118.756131/page-2#post-21928678
Additional information: Going to do more land claims but will try and make them different so didnt want to group like 9 landmarks into one giant mission

Pending. Leaving for someone else.

Mission Passed – Goetia

 

[Pervyy]

Players involved: The Pervy Sage
Mission Rank: 2 = C
Story elements chosen:

• Build technology

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 03/04/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/bone-fields-078.755896/post-21929358
Additional information: Time to be a spy

Mission Passed. Props to Shinta for creating that element.

Checked by @Howard

 

[Korra.]

Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

- Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your clan (3)

- Force the hand of officials of a land (3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/2/2019-4/3/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/chilli-pepper-pass-118.756131/page-2#post-21929228
https://animebase.me/threads/graveyard-of-sin-115.756128/page-14#post-21929299
https://animebase.me/threads/omashu-091.755909/page-2#post-21929458
Additional information: Kinda forgot about the new travel rules but still waited an hour between landmarks

Pending. Leaving for someone else.

Mission Failed: Please add the relevant links to your submissions. These links were to your previous mission, and I had to find the posts that you intended to submit in this one. Now, I'm failing this because while the first element was satisfied, the second one wasn't. Getting the villagers to agree to join your village wasn't something you forced them into, but rather, you earned their favor and they chose to join you because of that. – Goetia