Katon: Arutemisu Keshin| Fire Technique: The Artemis Incarnation
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Exerting their chakra from their body, the user can create copious amounts of ash from either the ground, their body or by spewing it forth from their mouth. As the ash bursts into existence it will immediately form into a demonically winged Centaur, the size of which can range from human sized to EoS Gamakichi sized. The Centaur, clad in light armour and composed of jet black condensed ash, is capable of moving a rank faster than its creator, can regenerate from damage that doesn't destroy it in one go, and is capable of manipulating its body to form, or extend into, any armament imaginable to attack or defend. It's signature weapons however are the bow and sword, and when these are used the Centaur is granted additional abilities. With the creation of a bow, the Centaur will be capable of creating arrows of fire which, upon their initial release will travel at the speed of an arrow fired from a compound bow, however on account of their unique constitution the arrows continuously accelearate once released - occurring as the rear of the arrows constantly devolve into fire-based explosions which serve to propel the arrow forwards to greater speeds. By the time the arrow leaves short range it will be a blur to anything below 2t, with a 100% growth per 5 meters, however, because of the linear nature of an arrows flight an opponent can easily predict where the arrow will travel to from its initial trajectory and thus seek to avoid or defend. The ability of the sword, then, is that it has a passive A ranked ability that allows it to convert any solid object that it touches to ash (respects elemental weaknesses/strengths), with the conversion rapidly spreading out from the point of contact, and being fatal in the case of human conversion (Does not apply to the user or his possessions). The created ash can then be manipulated to, oncer per turn, create A ranked or below structures to defend or attack with. Finally, the Centaur is capable of transforming it's entire body into a far more powerful, compressed weapon or armour to be wielded by its user - in this state the Centaur's ash and arrow abilities are bolstered by a rank and, while hot to the touch of opponents, the ash is completely inert to the user - thus the user can freely come into contact with the Centaur.
Notes:
- Can only be created 3x
- Lasts four turns once created
- Two turn cooldown between uses and when the Centaur perishes the user is prohibited from using fire above S rank that turn.
- Despite being made of ash, the Centaur is capable of freely traversing across either ground or air.
- Arrows are classed as an A rank ability that is useable once per turn, one or multiple arrows can be fired throughout the turn that it is utilised - with the power of an A rank being divided between them.
- Visual representation;
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- Once used twice, the user must wait six turns before using a third time.
‡ Declined ‡ No to the human conversions. The acceleration ability of the arrows is too strong (every five meters? That's just ridiculous). This simply has too many abilities but I'm pretty sure you never state they count as moves. Lower the uses to two. Overall, just make this something that isn't completely unreasonable.
(Katon: Doragonburesu) | Fire Release: Dragon Breath
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique deviates from the primarily offensive usages of Fire release in that it is, uncharacteristically of the element, used for defence. This technique involves the release of chakra into the users surroundings so as to saturate the environment surrounding the user with fire chakra. The released fire chakra then forms a defence that is undetectable to anyone but Doujutsu users or Chakra Sensors until triggered. When an enemy attack enters into the area of effect of the fire chakra, the conditions for the activation of this technique will be met. The first condition is oxygen - essentially the surrounding air, which is easily met - the second is an opposing force which, when it enters into the atmosphere that the fire chakra occupies will act as a firestarter - triggering a violent combustion that'll rapidly expand outwards, consuming the intruder and neutralizing the threat. Naturally, as a defensive technique, this technique is highly specialised in that the explosions can never harm the user, instead they are always angled away from the user, thus preventing their harm. This essentially mimics the tetrahedron of fire, oxygen from the air, with the fire chakra acting as fuel and, when an opposing object enters its field of influence it greatly amplifies the thermal energy created by the friction, vibration, air resistance and also heat of the intruder, thus creating a combustion with sufficient power to neutralize the invading object. Naturally the strength and size of combustion will increase proportionally to the speed, size and power of the incoming object, thus in response to a Kunai invading, an explosion the strength of say, an explosive tag will be created - just strong enough to destroy the kunai, likewise an S ranked burst of fire will form for the invasion of an S ranked earth boulder. Naturally this technique will not interfere with the actions of the user or their technique as it is their own chakra, similarly the actions of allies can be permitted so that they can perform as usual without triggering the defence so long as the user is aware of, and permits their actions. (Unknown or unwanted actions by an ally may result in their termination).
Notes:
- This jutsu can be utilised once every seven turns, last for four turns, during which time this defense will be capable of producing 80 damage points worth of force each turn - essentially allowing it to neutralize the equivalent of one S ranked attack per turn (Respects elemental weaknesses/strengths/boosts and infusions), during turns that the combustion activates to neutralize an enemy jutsu the user can only utilise two other techniques, and this technique can only be used twice. During this time the user is incapable of using wind, lightning, earth or water techniques above S rank, this technique saps 30 chakra per turn for maintenance, and once it ends the user will be incapable of using it again for three turns,
similarly they won't be able to use fire techniques above S rank for that same and the next turn. The created 'barrier' of fire chakra extends short range from the user, and moves along with them, so if they move to a new area so will the fire chakra, centering on their position - unless the user wishes for it to stay in a certain position in which case they can make it go there.
‡ Declined ‡ This needs to have a usage limit and needs to be visible. I'm not having someone unknowingly run into an S-Rank fire technique. Also, restrict it suitably. The bolded is almost meaningless.
Katon: Arutemisu Keshin| Fire Technique: The Artemis Incarnation
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Exerting their chakra from their body, the user can create copious amounts of ash from either the ground, their body or by spewing it forth from their mouth. As the ash bursts into existence it will immediately form into a demonically winged Centaur, the size of which can range from human sized to EoS Gamakichi sized. The Centaur, clad in light armour and composed of jet black condensed ash, is capable of moving a rank faster than its creator, can regenerate from damage that doesn't destroy it in one go, and is capable of manipulating its body to form, or extend into, any armament imaginable to attack or defend. It's signature weapons however are the bow and sword, and when these are used the Centaur is granted additional abilities. With the creation of a bow, the Centaur will be capable of creating arrows of fire which, upon their initial release will travel at the speed of an arrow fired from a compound bow, however on account of their unique constitution the arrows continuously accelearate once released - occurring as the rear of the arrows constantly devolve into fire-based explosions which serve to propel the arrow forwards to greater speeds. By the time the arrow leaves short range it will be a blur to anything below
3t, with a
50% growth per 5 meters, however, because of the linear nature of an arrows flight an opponent can easily predict where the arrow will travel to from its initial trajectory and thus seek to avoid or defend. The ability of the sword, then, is that it has a passive A ranked ability that allows it to convert any solid object that it touches to ash (respects elemental weaknesses/strengths), with the conversion rapidly spreading out from the point of contact
and being fatal in the case of organic conversions. (Does not apply to the user or his possessions and does not affect people). The created ash can then be manipulated to, once per turn, create A ranked or below structures to defend or attack with. Finally, the Centaur is capable of transforming it's entire body into a far more powerful, compressed weapon or armour to be wielded by its user - in this state the Centaur's ash and arrow abilities are bolstered by a rank and, while hot to the touch of opponents, the ash is completely inert to the user - thus the user can freely come into contact with the Centaur.
Notes:
- Can only be created 2x
- Lasts four turns once created
- Two turn cooldown between uses and when the Centaur perishes the user is prohibited from using fire above S rank that turn.
- Despite being made of ash, the Centaur is capable of freely traversing across either ground or air
and his abilities can reach into long range.
- Arrows are classed as an A rank ability that is useable once
per turn and is classed as a move, one or multiple arrows can be fired throughout the turn that it is utilised - with the power of an A rank being divided between them.
- Ash manipulation to create ranked structures naturally counts as a move too.
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- Once used twice, the user must wait six turns before using a third time.
‡ Declined ‡ The speed thing is too much. I can't approve this in good conscience.
(Katon: Doragonburesu) | Fire Release: Dragon Breath
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique deviates from the primarily offensive usages of Fire release in that it is, uncharacteristically of the element, used for defence. This technique involves the release of chakra into the users surroundings so as to saturate the environment surrounding the user with fire chakra
(Its creation is initially visible as a subtle soft gold glowing pulse) The released fire chakra then settles into a
defence that is thereafter undetectable to anyone but Doujutsu users or those with some kind of sensing until triggered. When an enemy attack enters into the area of effect of the fire chakra, the conditions for the activation of this technique will be met. The first condition is oxygen - essentially the surrounding air, which is easily met - the second is an opposing force which, when it enters into the atmosphere that the fire chakra occupies will act as a firestarter - triggering a violent combustion that'll rapidly expand outwards, consuming the intruder and neutralizing the threat.
(This is visually represented by the initial soft glow returning to the trigger area that then immediately gives way to a fiery explosion.) Naturally, as a defensive technique, this technique is highly specialised in that the explosions can never harm the user, instead they are always angled away from the user, thus preventing their harm. This essentially mimics the tetrahedron of fire, oxygen from the air, with the fire chakra acting as fuel and, when an opposing object enters its field of influence it greatly amplifies the thermal energy created by the friction, vibration, air resistance and also heat of the intruder, thus creating a combustion with sufficient power to neutralize the invading object. Naturally the strength and size of combustion will increase proportionally to the speed, size and power of the incoming object, thus in response to a Kunai invading, an explosion the strength of say, an explosive tag will be created - just strong enough to destroy the kunai, likewise an S ranked burst of fire will form for the invasion of an S ranked earth boulder. Naturally this technique will not interfere with the actions of the user or their technique as it is their own chakra, similarly the actions of allies can be permitted so that they can perform as usual without triggering the defence so long as the user is aware of, and permits their actions. (Unknown or unwanted actions by an ally may result in their termination).
Notes:
- This jutsu can be be used twice, last for four turns, during which time this defense will be capable of producing 80 damage points worth of force each turn - essentially allowing it to neutralize the equivalent of one S ranked attack per turn (Respects elemental weaknesses/strengths/boosts and infusions), during turns that the combustion activates to neutralize an enemy jutsu the user can only utilise two other techniques, and this technique can only be used twice. During this time the user is incapable of using wind, lightning, earth or water techniques above S rank, this technique saps 30 chakra per turn for maintenance, and once it ends the user will be incapable of using it again for three turns, similarly they won't be able to use fire techniques above
A rank for that same and the next turn. The created 'barrier' of fire chakra extends short range from the user, and moves along with them -
with the soft glow that signifies the borders of this defence returning each time the barrier moves, so if they move to a new area so will the fire chakra, centering on their position - unless the user wishes for it to stay in a certain position in which case they can make it go there.
‡ Approved ‡ Edited.
Resubmitting. Removed any lightning application, changed it to fire, changed restrictions, and made a few other changes to compensate for them. I didn't bold the changes in the description simply because I rewrote practically all of it.
(Katon: Honō Koka Keisei) – Fire Release: Flame Solidification Formation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A (+10 chakra cost to techniques this used upon)
Damage: N/A (+20 to Fire)
Description: A type of activation technique applied to the user’s Fire Style techniques. The Flame Solidification Formation allows for the user to apply and utilize a substantial reserve of chakra and apply it to their own Fire techniques to allow for a much more advanced degree of shape manipulation upon their creation. This technique is based upon the concept of the solid and physical nature of certain Fire techniques which have the ability to punch through solid obstacles unlike regular intangible fire techniques. The technique takes that principle and applies it to all fire techniques, causing fire techniques of the user to be manipulated by this additional shape manipulation and infusion of additional chakra. The result is that fire techniques of the user will be produced as effectively solid, similar to the solidity and physical nature of waves of water and mud. Thus allowing the user’s fire techniques to clash and block intangible techniques as well as punch through physical obstacles. This technique can even be applied to fire techniques which are already possessing physical solidity. This happens by the infusion of chakra and additional shape manipulation adding an additional layer of solid fire increasing its size and effective power.
Note: Can only be used two times per battle.
Note: Once activated this technique will last for four turns.
Note: No Fire techniques above A-Rank for the same and next turn after this technique has been deactivated or has expired.
Note: Can only be taught by Drackos
‡ Declined ‡ Remove the damage boost and the capability to apply this to techniques which are already solid-like in composition. The "waves of water and mud" description should only apply to stream-like techniques, for projectiles their solidity would be more akin to solid substances. Remove that hefty restriction. Maybe make this so your techniques can explode on impact? Right now it doesn't seem like this is too useful. Edited the template to fit infusion techniques. Make this instant in activation and state that it doesn't have to be applied to every fire technique used while this ability is active. Decreased how many times this can be used to two.[/COLOR]
(Katon: Honō Koka Keisei) – Fire Release: Flame Solidification Formation
Type: Supplementary
Rank:
B
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
(+5 chakra cost to applied techniques)
Damage: N/A
Description: A
specialized type of activation technique applied to the user’s Fire Style techniques. The Flame Solidification Formation allows for the user to apply and utilize a substantial reserve of chakra and apply it to their own Fire techniques to allow for a much more advanced degree of shape manipulation upon their creation. This technique is based upon the concept of the solid and physical nature of certain Fire techniques which have the ability to punch through solid obstacles unlike regular intangible fire techniques. The technique takes that principle and applies it to all fire techniques causing fire techniques of the user to be manipulated by this additional shape manipulation and infusion of additional chakra.
In terms of fire projectiles this technique will make them effectively solid allowing as well as causing them to explode on impact. Because the explosions are infused with the user’s chakra the user will also be able to angle the explosion away from their body should they wish allowing them to keep safe despite the size and potential devastation of the explosion. In terms of stream-like fire techniques this technique will cause their nature to be akin to waves of water or mud allowing them similar physical characteristics. However, stream techniques do not gain the same explosive benefits as projectiles under the effects of this technique. To fire techniques already solid in nature the Flame Solidification Formation offers no benefit and cannot be applied to them.
Note: Can only be used two times per battle.
Note: Once activated this technique will last for four turns.
‡ Approved ‡ 
I'm going to look in to this.
