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Was gonna make it a Custom MS tech, but I have more chance getting it as a normal CJ than an MS tech. Unless I get MS myself and then submit it, cause then I have more options for this tech.
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(Hyouton Release: Ranryuu) Water/Rain : Wrath of the blue roses
Type:Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user after having performed the suiton jutsu Rain at will .Will perform a sequence of three handsigns.Upon doing so the rain droplets within the air made by rain at will,Will freeze up (Stop moving) before quickly joining together to form a multitude of roses resembling a blue colour due to the sheen coming from the sun.The roses will then all charge towards the enemy.Upon contact they brake into sharp shards of ice.Cutting and shredding both skin and ground.
-Can be used 4 times
-Must know Hyouton
-Only useable by Blaise12 unless Taught
What you think?
Type:Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user after having performed the suiton jutsu Rain at will .Will perform a sequence of three handsigns.Upon doing so the rain droplets within the air made by rain at will,Will freeze up (Stop moving) before quickly joining together to form a multitude of roses resembling a blue colour due to the sheen coming from the sun.The roses will then all charge towards the enemy.Upon contact they brake into sharp shards of ice.Cutting and shredding both skin and ground.
-Can be used 4 times
-Must know Hyouton
-Only useable by Blaise12 unless Taught
What you think?
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Just stashing this here to work on, never once mentioned using two elements at once, but whatever lol
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(Hokuto Shinken) - Big Dipper God Fist
Type:RaitonFutonTaijutsu
Background:During Ancient times there was a secret art passed down by an clan unknown to most of the Ninja world. That clan was the Hokuto clan of the Hidden Moon. The main purpose of Hokuto Shinken is assassination. For 1800 years, 1 successor per generation would chose the most worthy of his students to receive the title of "Fist of the Northstar". Due to the deadliness of it's original form, Hokuto Shinken could only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who were not chosen to inherit the succession were to renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed rendering their jutsu useless. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart. This rule would lead to the demise of all the Hokuto clan except one...the one who would be chosen by Ryuken, the previous successor and his adoptive father, as the true Fist of the Northstar! His name was Kenshiro, the youngest of the Hokuto brothers. After Ryuken chose Kenshiro as his successor, he was slain by Raoh in a fit of jealous rage, a feat made possible by chance; he suffered a stroke at the moment he was about to seal Raoh's fist. Roah left bent on taking the title from Kenshiro by force, but not before Ryuken spoke to Raoh of Hokuto's Ultimate form, Musō Tensei, an ability Ryuken, laughing in the face of death, said was unattainable by Raoh, his great ambition stopping him from ever knowing true sorrow.
Now aware of Roah's true intention's and with a blood lust for vengeance, Ken seeks out Raoh to avenge their father.During the course of battle, the pain of loss of friend and foe alike took a toll on Kenshiro, and the deep sorrow that he bared eventually awakened the state of Musō Tensei, and a revelation of the style's future form. This shook Raoh to the core, experiencing the sensation of fear for the first time as he remembers Ryuken's dying words to him. After an hour of fighting, Raoh had fallen. Kenshiro, now battered and bloody, drops to one knee next to Raoh, who smiles at Kenshiro and expresses his regret for killing their father, and that he knew Kenshiro was truly worthy now. As Roah, the only person Ken truly considered a friend died, he decided that the bloody cycle created by Hokuto Shinken's "1 successor per generation" rule must be changed.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The main components of Hokuto Shinken are usage of taijutsu, futon and raiton to achieve piercing and paralyzing effects thru precise striking, as well as focusing to connect with the souls of fallen rivals and friends thru the usage of Musō Tensei, giving a boost to CJ's taught to the user while Musō Tensei is active.
Example Techniques:
(Hokuto Shinken - Musō Tensei) Big Dipper God Fist - Nil-Thought Rebirth
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (15 per turn to maintain)
Damage: N/A
Description: It is said that the strongest thing in this world is nothingness. Mastering that nothingness to gather souls to help in battle, that is Musō Tensei. The user begins by performing The Heaven breaking stance, clearing his mind while molding their chakra, allowing the user is to enter the Nil-Thought Rebirth. Considered the ultimate form of Hokuto Shinken, Musō Tensei is learn-able only by one who has known infinite sadness, focusing to connect with the souls of fallen rivals and comrades who's secrets have been carved into his soul by the sadness of battle,(ie; their techniques learned by the user), and can, on instinct alone, feign out of the way or parry one incoming attack (with-in reason)
~Notes~
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Because of the connection to the souls of fallen rivals and comrades, customs created by others and taught to the user gain a +10 damage, customs created by the user do not gain the bonus
-Dodging or parrying follows substitution rules, and will end the jutsu 1 turn sooner if used and can only be performed once per battle
-Effects last 3 turns
-Must be trained in Hokuto Shinken
-Cannot use Hokuto Shinken for 2 turns after this ends
Tenma No Kamae: The Heaven breaking stance form:
(Hokuto Shinken - Himitsu no Jutsu: Tenha Kassatsu) Big Dipper God Fist - Secret Technique: Heaven's Impalement
Type:Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Considered one of the Ultimate defenses of Hokuto Shinken , Tenha Kassatsu rescues the user from the brink of peril without having to touch the opponent. By focusing wind chakra to the users fists, they are able to thrust forwards with both hands quickly, four fingers pointed outwards in a square on one hand and 3 fingers at an angle on the other, forming the shape of the Big Dipper constellation. Upon thrusting the hands forwards, seven bullets shaped bursts of wind chakra will shoot outwards in a tight grouping towards the enemy, capable of piercing straight thru the enemy, sending them flying backwards
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Can only be used twice per battle, with a 1 turn cool down
(Hokuto Shinken Kakushi idō: Watashi no aite no ken) - Big Dipper God Fist Hidden Move: The Fist of my opponent
Rank: B
Type: Supplemental
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Hokuto Shinken, the greatest of assassination martial arts passed thru a single bloodline, allows the user to master the fist of his opponent. After seeing a particular style used while in a state of Musō Tensei, a Master of Hokuto Shinken can appropriate the techniques used against him on the following turn.
~Notes~
-Must have Mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Usable 1 time per battle
-Must be in a state of Musō Tensei
-Must use this during the turn an opponent uses a CFS technique, and only allows the copying of the technique used against you (Not the entire CFS, also must have training in said field, ie; couldn't copy a Fuuin style if having no Fuuin training, etc.) for the one turn afterwards, not usable after the next turn.
(Hokuto Shinken - Hokuto dōbutsu aigo Ken) - Big Dipper God Fist: - North Star Humane Fist
Rank: C
Type: Supplemental
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Toki, Kenshiro's pacifist brother, defined the highest pleasure as the absence of suffering and pleasure itself as "freedom from pain in the body and freedom from turmoil in the soul" and thus created the North Star Humane Fist jutsu. The pleasure center is the set of brain structures, predominantly the nucleus accumbens, which will produce great pleasure when stimulated electrically. By performing the Tiger seal, the user will send a small amount of their Raiton chakra into the targets brain, particularly the pleasure center, allowing the enemy to "Experience Heaven before death", alleviating any pain.
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (15 per turn to maintain)
Damage: N/A
Description: It is said that the strongest thing in this world is nothingness. Mastering that nothingness to gather souls to help in battle, that is Musō Tensei. The user begins by performing The Heaven breaking stance, clearing his mind while molding their chakra, allowing the user is to enter the Nil-Thought Rebirth. Considered the ultimate form of Hokuto Shinken, Musō Tensei is learn-able only by one who has known infinite sadness, focusing to connect with the souls of fallen rivals and comrades who's secrets have been carved into his soul by the sadness of battle,(ie; their techniques learned by the user), and can, on instinct alone, feign out of the way or parry one incoming attack (with-in reason)
~Notes~
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Because of the connection to the souls of fallen rivals and comrades, customs created by others and taught to the user gain a +10 damage, customs created by the user do not gain the bonus
-Dodging or parrying follows substitution rules, and will end the jutsu 1 turn sooner if used and can only be performed once per battle
-Effects last 3 turns
-Must be trained in Hokuto Shinken
-Cannot use Hokuto Shinken for 2 turns after this ends
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Type:Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Considered one of the Ultimate defenses of Hokuto Shinken , Tenha Kassatsu rescues the user from the brink of peril without having to touch the opponent. By focusing wind chakra to the users fists, they are able to thrust forwards with both hands quickly, four fingers pointed outwards in a square on one hand and 3 fingers at an angle on the other, forming the shape of the Big Dipper constellation. Upon thrusting the hands forwards, seven bullets shaped bursts of wind chakra will shoot outwards in a tight grouping towards the enemy, capable of piercing straight thru the enemy, sending them flying backwards
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Can only be used twice per battle, with a 1 turn cool down
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(Hokuto Shinken Kakushi idō: Watashi no aite no ken) - Big Dipper God Fist Hidden Move: The Fist of my opponent
Rank: B
Type: Supplemental
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Hokuto Shinken, the greatest of assassination martial arts passed thru a single bloodline, allows the user to master the fist of his opponent. After seeing a particular style used while in a state of Musō Tensei, a Master of Hokuto Shinken can appropriate the techniques used against him on the following turn.
~Notes~
-Must have Mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Usable 1 time per battle
-Must be in a state of Musō Tensei
-Must use this during the turn an opponent uses a CFS technique, and only allows the copying of the technique used against you (Not the entire CFS, also must have training in said field, ie; couldn't copy a Fuuin style if having no Fuuin training, etc.) for the one turn afterwards, not usable after the next turn.
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(Hokuto Shinken - Hokuto dōbutsu aigo Ken) - Big Dipper God Fist: - North Star Humane Fist
Rank: C
Type: Supplemental
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Toki, Kenshiro's pacifist brother, defined the highest pleasure as the absence of suffering and pleasure itself as "freedom from pain in the body and freedom from turmoil in the soul" and thus created the North Star Humane Fist jutsu. The pleasure center is the set of brain structures, predominantly the nucleus accumbens, which will produce great pleasure when stimulated electrically. By performing the Tiger seal, the user will send a small amount of their Raiton chakra into the targets brain, particularly the pleasure center, allowing the enemy to "Experience Heaven before death", alleviating any pain.
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shinken
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must have completed Wind, Lightning, and Taijutsu to train in Hokuto Shinken
-User gains heightened reflexes and reaction time when using Hokuto Shinken when compared to a regular Strong Fist taijutsu user
-Must be Kage rank or higher to learn and must be taught all techniques to be considered a Master at Hokuto Shinken
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Type: Weapon
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The Z sword was a weapon forged for those who are truly warriors at heart. The creator built the sword out of the finest materials around. Forging the metals needed to form a proper alloy that would allow for the blade to be light, but still very durable. The core of the blade would be interlaced with a series of cells that act as both storage devices and passage ways for chakra. This allows the wielder's raw chakra to flow through the handle of the blade, to be stored into the cells. After the required amount of chakra is amassed, the user could then use nature manipulation to convert the chakra to their choice of element. This would coat the blade in a representation of that element (i.e. flames for katon, static for raiton, etc) allowing the user to slash through techniques by utilizing their elemental weakness. But that is not the main purpose of these cells. The main purpose of these cells is to assist the user in achieving heights that exceed the limits of normal men, in a sort of Zen-Kai blast of power.
Slowly, throughout the battle, whether being directly held or not, the blade will absorb the wielders raw chakra and store it into these cells. After a period of time, these cells will reach their maximum capacity for raw chakra, giving the wielder the ability to absorb the chakra back into their bodies by forming one hand seal, giving them a surge of power in many ways. While this is active, the users reaction time is nearly doubled, along with their physical strength. Their base speed increases by a factor of about X1.5, along with hand seal speed. While using this technique, the user will be enveloped in a golden aura which peaks at their hair, colored the same and standing on end. The sudden surge of chakra will also cause the user's eyes to take on a sort of green glow. After the end of this technique, however, the user will experience extreme physical exhaustion due to using their chakra in the process.
Note: User must have the weapon on their person at least 1 turn prior to using the counter for C-Rank techniques, 2 for B-Ranks, and 3 for A-Ranks.
Note: Counter can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: User must have the weapon on their person at least 4 turns before Zen-Kai technique can be used
Note: Zen-Kai technique last 3 turns
Note: Exhaustion causes two jutsu limit for the next 3 turns following the use of this technique
Note: The Zen-Kai technique can only be used once per battle
Note: Techniques associated with this weapon must be taught by Xicer
(Denkiteki Subeta Kiai - Zed-Ken): The Sword of the Fighting Spirit - The Z Sword
Type: Weapon
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The Z sword was a weapon forged for those who are truly warriors at heart. The creator built the sword out of the finest materials around. Forging the metals needed to form a proper alloy that would allow for the blade to be light, but still very durable. The core of the blade would be interlaced with a series of cells that act as both storage devices and passage ways for chakra. This allows the wielder's raw chakra to flow through the handle of the blade, to be stored into the cells. After the required amount of chakra is amassed, the user could then use nature manipulation to convert the chakra to their choice of element. This would coat the blade in a representation of that element (i.e. flames for katon, static for raiton, etc) allowing the user to slash through techniques by utilizing their elemental weakness. But that is not the main purpose of these cells. The main purpose of these cells is to assist the user in achieving heights that exceed the limits of normal men, in a sort of Zen-Kai blast of power.
Slowly, throughout the battle, whether being directly held or not, the blade will absorb the wielders raw chakra and store it into these cells. After a period of time, these cells will reach their maximum capacity for raw chakra, giving the wielder the ability to absorb the chakra back into their bodies by forming one hand seal, giving them a surge of power in many ways. While this is active, the users reaction time is nearly doubled, along with their physical strength. Their base speed increases by a factor of about X1.5, along with hand seal speed. While using this technique, the user will be enveloped in a golden aura which peaks at their hair, colored the same and standing on end. The sudden surge of chakra will also cause the user's eyes to take on a sort of green glow. After the end of this technique, however, the user will experience extreme physical exhaustion due to using their chakra in the process.
Note: User must have the weapon on their person at least 1 turn prior to using the counter for C-Rank techniques, 2 for B-Ranks, and 3 for A-Ranks.
Note: Counter can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: User must have the weapon on their person at least 4 turns before Zen-Kai technique can be used
Note: Zen-Kai technique last 3 turns
Note: Exhaustion causes two jutsu limit for the next 3 turns following the use of this technique
Note: The Zen-Kai technique can only be used once per battle
Note: Techniques associated with this weapon must be taught by Xicer
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Lyanna Stark
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:vincent: -Declined DNR No chakra infused swords allowed anymore -
change it from a sword then it might be approved
Lyanna Stark
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well as far as I am aware no chakra infused swords.Were they updates of old weapons perhaps? and its very similar to a weaker kisame's sword with the chakra boost so possibly change that as well.
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Similar to a rain jutsu that also freezes rain... pretty sure, I don't know much about rain jutsu.
Weapons should only be the one rank, you can then post the rank of the abilities within the description itself, as well as the restrictions on the ability. Also, elemental stream has been done to death .__.
I drafted this up on the spot, so it needs refining. I'd like to know if you all think this is useful or just a waste of time .__.
Zantetsu - Iron Slicer
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short (Self)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Zantetsu refers to the skill of a swordsman in there ability to cut through object that are equally as hard as, or stronger than their own sword. By adding more chakra to their strikes and adding emphasis to the core technique of their swordsmanship, honed through years of training; the user is able to boost the rank of their Kenjutsu strike by one rank in order to overcome the strength of any opponents steel/earth/bone/crystal based jutsu. This jutsu must be applied during the kenjutsu strike, applicable to anything listed as non-elemental kenjutsu, and costs an additional jutsu slot on the turn of use. The defining purpose of this jutsu it to allow the user to continue using their sword(s) even against such users as Kaguya's, Steel Users, Crystal users etc, for their abilities are generally stronger than a standard kenjutsu strike can take on.
Notes:
- This technique is applicable only on non-elemental based kenjutsu, meaning any elemental chakra channeled into the sword itself to deal damage.
- This applies to all swords the user is holding/using during the attack and ends the moment the strike has been completed.
- Takes up one of the three jutsu slots each time it is used, meaning that when used (with an appropriate kenjutsu technique) the user has only one jutsu slot remaining and thus by default, can only be used once per turn.
- Can only be used five times per match.
- Can only be taught by Shinta.
Nope.. It was brand new.. And the chakra blast is the only reason I made this stupid thing. I could care less about the elemental stuff. I hope no one else compares this to Samehada, because Samehada takes everyone's chakra, is sentient, doesn't have a cap to how much chakra it takes, and adds to chakra reserves/stamina where as this one would only take the wielder's chakra, is a weapon only, has a max of chakra it can handle, and gives a power boost (leaving the user exhausted after). So aside from the chakra feeding/absorption part of the user, they are almost completely opposite. I just want Trunks to have the Z-Sword and for it to let him go Super Saiyan ._. (cosmetically speaking of course).
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Similar to the samurai technique taught in samurai specifically I renember it from when i had my mifune bio.possibly could get approved cause its targeting specific clans/types but yeh similar to samurai exclusive jutsu/kenjutsu.
Actually, thanks for that. I believe I'm going to take the elemental stuff out, and add something else in its place. I mean, there are cannon jutsu that do that exact thing, so why take up the spot on my CW for it?
And Zantetsu could be very handy, but at the same time is very situational. I guess its usefulness is derived from your trouble with these users and the extent to which you use Kenjutsu, so those are things you will have to decide for yourself. Personally, I wouldn't mind having it, just for the extra insurance.
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You're going to have to link me the jutsu you think it is similar to, as I had a quick glance through the kenjutsu thread and can't see anything at the present.
Yeah, unless I make it a rank boosting type of jutsu or something similar to that... I have a few ideas but I don't have the words for it right now. Maybe tomorrow xD
Lyanna Stark
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you wouldnt find it its in the actual samurai permission group like our own amegakure custom jutsu.
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Hidden Magpie swallow
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Chakra :20
Damage :40
Description: The user will bite their thumb on both forearms.And place their thumbs on a tattoo of the Magpie Summoning contract which is on both forearms.To summon a multitude of small magpies the size of tennis balls which have explosive tags attacked to them.Upon contact with an object be it human or otherwise they will explode.Each dealing C-rank blast and fire damage.
Restrictions
-Only useable if signed Magpie Summon contract
-only useable 3 times per battle
-Each magpie has explosion damage of c rank
-Maximum magpies summoned is 2 each hand
Theres one for my contract which i should work on.
Water release:Vladimir's Vengeance
Type: Offensive,Supplementry
Rank : A rank
Damage: 30
Chakra:60
Description:The user will convert their body to a pool of water roughly 3mx3m in size The user will then slide along the floor of the battle field until their just behind their opponent.Reforming their body the user clasps a hand over the enemies mouth whilst stabbing them in the neck killing or disabling the enemy.
Restrictions
-Must have mastered water release
-Only useable twice per battle
-only useable by blaise12 unless taught it.
Wind Release:Egyptian hieroglyphic shield
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Chakra: 20
Damage : N/A
Description:
The user will channel wind chakra into a semi solidified symbol which represent shield in the ancient language of Egypt out of the tenketsu upon the BACK of their hand upon saying the word for release a shield that is roughly 2mx6m effectively shielding the user.From attacks
Restrictions
-Only useable twice per battle
-Only useable by Blaise12 unless taught the jutsu
-The glyph may remain on the back of the hand HOWEVER no fuuton jutsu B+Rank may be used whilst it i there
-No S rank fuuton next or in the same turn.
Okay so 3 CJ made up on the spot.Please let me know what you think of them.I already submitted 3 others this week so may be put in next weeks if people think their decent.
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Chakra :20
Damage :40
Description: The user will bite their thumb on both forearms.And place their thumbs on a tattoo of the Magpie Summoning contract which is on both forearms.To summon a multitude of small magpies the size of tennis balls which have explosive tags attacked to them.Upon contact with an object be it human or otherwise they will explode.Each dealing C-rank blast and fire damage.
Restrictions
-Only useable if signed Magpie Summon contract
-only useable 3 times per battle
-Each magpie has explosion damage of c rank
-Maximum magpies summoned is 2 each hand
Theres one for my contract which i should work on.
Water release:Vladimir's Vengeance
Type: Offensive,Supplementry
Rank : A rank
Damage: 30
Chakra:60
Description:The user will convert their body to a pool of water roughly 3mx3m in size The user will then slide along the floor of the battle field until their just behind their opponent.Reforming their body the user clasps a hand over the enemies mouth whilst stabbing them in the neck killing or disabling the enemy.
Restrictions
-Must have mastered water release
-Only useable twice per battle
-only useable by blaise12 unless taught it.
Wind Release:Egyptian hieroglyphic shield
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Chakra: 20
Damage : N/A
Description:
The user will channel wind chakra into a semi solidified symbol which represent shield in the ancient language of Egypt out of the tenketsu upon the BACK of their hand upon saying the word for release a shield that is roughly 2mx6m effectively shielding the user.From attacks
Restrictions
-Only useable twice per battle
-Only useable by Blaise12 unless taught the jutsu
-The glyph may remain on the back of the hand HOWEVER no fuuton jutsu B+Rank may be used whilst it i there
-No S rank fuuton next or in the same turn.
Okay so 3 CJ made up on the spot.Please let me know what you think of them.I already submitted 3 others this week so may be put in next weeks if people think their decent.