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[Penguin]

Suiton: Kyūketsuki no Pengin - Water Release: The Vampiric Penguin
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-80 per turn to the opponent)
Damage: 15 (+30 per turn to the opponent)
Description: The user starts gathering their chakra and channels it on the opponent's skin where their sweat is present. As the chakra enters their sweat, the sweat latches on the skin and starts draining the opponent's chakra such as Suiton: Uramiame no Jutsu - Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique drains chakra. The sweat gets bigger and bigger each turn until it eventually gets as big as bowling balls. This would weigh the opponent down so much that they would fall down and become immobile as the sweat eventually drains them dry of chakra. The technique is self sustaining after the sweat latches on.

Note: Cannot use above A-rank suiton while this jutsu is being used
Note: Takes two turns for the technique to immobilize the opponent
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.

 

[Penguin]

Katon: Pengin no Nokoribi - Fire Style: Penguin's Embers
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user sends their katon chakra into both their palms and their feet. After channeling their chakra into their palms and feet, they exert the chakra so that flames come out. These flames come out so fast that they can actually push the user in the opposite direction that the flames come out at incredible speeds, almost like a blur to the naked eye. If the user was already in the air, they could actually glide in the air and sustain a hover, but not go upwards.

Note: The user can control how far the flames reach
Note: Only usable four times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.

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[Kamishiro]

Katon: Pengin no Nokoribi - Fire Style: Penguin's Embers
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user sends their katon chakra into both their palms and their feet. After channeling their chakra into their palms and feet, they exert the chakra so that flames come out. These flames come out so fast that they can actually push the user in the opposite direction that the flames come out at incredible speeds, almost like a blur to the naked eye. If the user was already in the air, they could actually glide in the air and sustain a hover, but not go upwards.

Note: The user can control how far the flames reach
Note: Only usable four times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.

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Me likey, it is somewhst near to a move zero could perform in megaman. No idea if it isn't similar to exiting techniques or not, tho.

 

[Vegeta]

That is pretty cool Penguin ^_^

I submitted this bad boy, should be DNR'd immediately

(Faiyāmasutā no ha) - Blade of the Fire Master
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Forged in the mountainside caverns of the now extinct TaiyōGakure, the Village Hidden in the Sun, the Blade of the Fire Master was the last sword forged by legendary sword maker Hattori Hanzo, and by far his finest work. The sword was slowly made over the course of an entire year. The blade is the length of a standard Katana blade with a square black hilt, the steel ot the Blade is slightly darker than normal, approximately 1 meter long with a black leather handle which has a wire attached to it mid range in length wrapped around the base to retrieve the sword if knocked out of the users hand. The sheath is made of a dense wood also black in color with the kanji for "Fire" in red on it. Inscribed on the blade are the words "If god should cross it's path, he himself would be cut down!" , a dedication to the sheer strength and sharpness of this blade as it was said the special chakra enhanced steel was hammered and folded over 9000 times using nothing but Katon chakra for the heat, the chakra painstakingly imbued by Hattori himself, a Fire specialist amongst Fire specialists, and a step above his brethren in the art who went into hiding while making the Blade. From the manor it was created, this swords metal is extremely reactive to the users Katon chakra, and can be used as a medium for Katon jutsu's allowing the wielder to use them without the need for seals while holding. The sword itself would be no more than a standard sword in the hands of a Non Fire specialist.

Abilities:
-Ability to use Katon without seals can be done 6 times per match, and the sword must be drawn and in the users hand to use
-When the Blade is filled with Katon chakra, a slash attack with the sword will deliver S rank damage, slicing thru and cauterizing wounds from the excessive heat, and is hot enough to slice thru Earth and Steel release of A rank and below within reason. This ability counts towards the 6 times Katon can be used without seals
-2 times per match, the sword itself can be used to create a barrier of A rank Katon chakra from residual chakra in always in the metal, which surrounds the user in short range, delivering A rank damage to those caught in it, but needs 1 turn cool down between uses. This can be done by simply touching the handle channeling chakra into the sword to activate and does not require the wielder to unsheathe the Blade.
-Once per match, the user can grasp the sword with both hands while channeling extremely large amounts of chakra into the Blade to use a Forbidden ranked attack at the expense of the Blade's abilities, rendering it useless for the rest of the match:

Spoiler

(Katon Kenjutsu: Honō no senshi no tamashī o moyasu) -Fire Release Sword technique: Burning Soul of the Fire Warrior
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: This is the Ultimate attack created by the Blade of the Fire Masters creator, and is only unlocked upon mastering it's usage. The user begins by grabbing the swords handle with both hands, concentrating and channeling large amounts of Katon chakra into the Blade, mixing with the residual Katon chakra already in the Blade while raising the sword high in the air, then pointing the Blade downwards, driving it into the ground violently with both hands. The chakra is then released into the ground, which spreads outwards immediately erupting upwards 2 meters around the user and extends up to mid range in a fiery explosion of flames. This leaves the ground area scorched except the 2 meter radius around the user

~Notes~
-Must posses the Blade of the Fire Master and be a Fire Specialist taught by -Vegeta to use
-The user of this jutsu will suffer minor burns to the hands and will be unable to use hand seals for 2 turns after using
-No Katon jutsu the next turn after use, and only A rank and below for 1 turn after that
-Counts as 2 moves in the 3 move limit per turn due to the time to gather such a large amount of Katon chakra into the Blade which will have a fiery aura around the Blade when fully charged
-Using this attack renders the Blade unusable for the rest of the battle

~Notes~
-Must have Katon as a main affinity (1 seal) to wield the Blade of the Fire Master
-Can only be wielded by -Vegeta and those he teaches
-Because of the heat generated by the sword, the user will start to suffer fatigue if using the sword for more than 3 turns in a row and would need a 2 turn cool down to use its abilities again
-All abilities count towards the 3 move limit per turn
-The Blade and sheath are indestructible within reason

 

[Frozenstein]

Katon: Pengin no Nokoribi - Fire Style: Penguin's Embers
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user sends their katon chakra into both their palms and their feet. After channeling their chakra into their palms and feet, they exert the chakra so that flames come out. These flames come out so fast that they can actually push the user in the opposite direction that the flames come out at incredible speeds, almost like a blur to the naked eye. If the user was already in the air, they could actually glide in the air and sustain a hover, but not go upwards.

Note: The user can control how far the flames reach
Note: Only usable four times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.

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Katon: Pengin no Nokoribi - Fire Style: Penguin's Embers
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage: 40
Description: The user sends their katon chakra into both their palms and their feet. After channeling their chakra into their palms and feet, they exert the chakra so that flames come out. These flames come out so fast that they can actually push the user in the opposite direction that the flames come out at incredible speeds, almost like a blur to the naked eye. If the user was already in the air, they could actually glide in the air and sustain a hover, but not go upwards.

Note: The user can control how far the flames reach (short-mid range)
Note: Can only be sustained for 3 turns
Note: Only usable four times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.
Note: Only wants to teach it to Frozenstein U_U

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[Lyanna Stark]

Katon: Pengin no Nokoribi - Fire Style: Penguin's Embers
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user sends their katon chakra into both their palms and their feet. After channeling their chakra into their palms and feet, they exert the chakra so that flames come out. These flames come out so fast that they can actually push the user in the opposite direction that the flames come out at incredible speeds, almost like a blur to the naked eye. If the user was already in the air, they could actually glide in the air and sustain a hover, but not go upwards.

Note: The user can control how far the flames reach
Note: Only usable four times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Penguin.

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Make firebending into a cfs I tried and nearly got it done.Only need to change a few things but cbf.otherwise yeh it MIGHT get approved.

 

[Penguin]

Make firebending into a cfs I tried and nearly got it done.Only need to change a few things but cbf.otherwise yeh it MIGHT get approved.

Firebending? o-o

Can you link meh?

 

[Goetia]

Raiton: Bakudō #63. Sajō Sabaku | Lightning Release: Way of Binding #63. Locking Bondage Stripes
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Raising his/her palm up to the target, the user gathers Raiton chakra around the opponent, and by closing the palm and using shape manipulation, turns the chakra into thick chains which can bind the upper half of the opponent's body, making them unable to form handseals.

Notes:

-These chains are breakable, but cause damage upon physical contact. They can only be broken by being cut by a sword or shattered by brute force.
-Can only be used twice in one fight.
-Full paralysis lasts for one turn.
-How the jutsu is performed [

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-Can only be taught by SilverAssassin


Raiton: Hadō #63. Raikōhō | Lightning Release: Way of Destruction #63. Fiery Lightning Howl
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-S Rank
Range: Short-Long Range
Chakra: 30-40
Damage: 60-80
Description: Generating Raiton chakra into their hand, the user then uses shape manipulation to turn it into an orb of lightning. The user then fires the built-up Raiton orb at his/her target as a massive concentration of energy which resembles a lightning strike. The effect has devastatingly destructive results. To increase the destructive potential of the technique, the user must recite the incantation and concentrate more chakra into their hand.

Notes:

-Incantation - "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!"
-Can only be used 3 times per fight
-How the jutsu is performed [

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-Can only be taught by SilverAssassin

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I need thoughts on these two. These are my first Kido submissions and I need to know what I can do to make them more balanced or approvable if necessary.

 

[Penguin]

Raiton: Bakudō #63. Sajō Sabaku | Lightning Release: Way of Binding #63. Locking Bondage Stripes
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Raising his/her palm up to the target, the user gathers Raiton chakra around the opponent, and by closing the palm and using shape manipulation, turns the chakra into thick chains which can bind the upper half of the opponent's body, making them unable to form handseals.

Notes:

-These chains are breakable, but cause damage upon physical contact. They can only be broken by being cut by a sword or shattered by brute force.
-Can only be used twice in one fight.
-Full paralysis lasts for one turn.
-How the jutsu is performed [

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-Can only be taught by SilverAssassin


Raiton: Hadō #63. Raikōhō | Lightning Release: Way of Destruction #63. Fiery Lightning Howl
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-S Rank
Range: Short-Long Range
Chakra: 30-40
Damage: 60-80
Description: Generating Raiton chakra into their hand, the user then uses shape manipulation to turn it into an orb of lightning. The user then fires the built-up Raiton orb at his/her target as a massive concentration of energy which resembles a lightning strike. The effect has devastatingly destructive results. To increase the destructive potential of the technique, the user must recite the incantation and concentrate more chakra into their hand.

Notes:

-Incantation - "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!"
-Can only be used 3 times per fight
-How the jutsu is performed [

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-Can only be taught by SilverAssassin

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I need thoughts on these two. These are my first Kido submissions and I need to know what I can do to make them more balanced or approvable if necessary.

Venom already submitted this. A lot of Hado and Bakudo has already been done bud.

 

[Matt]

Raiton: Bakudō #63. Sajō Sabaku | Lightning Release: Way of Binding #63. Locking Bondage Stripes
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Raising his/her palm up to the target, the user gathers Raiton chakra around the opponent, and by closing the palm and using shape manipulation, turns the chakra into thick chains which can bind the upper half of the opponent's body, making them unable to form handseals.

Notes:

-These chains are breakable, but cause damage upon physical contact. They can only be broken by being cut by a sword or shattered by brute force.
-Can only be used twice in one fight.
-Full paralysis lasts for one turn.
-How the jutsu is performed [

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-Can only be taught by SilverAssassin


Raiton: Hadō #63. Raikōhō | Lightning Release: Way of Destruction #63. Fiery Lightning Howl
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-S Rank
Range: Short-Long Range
Chakra: 30-40
Damage: 60-80
Description: Generating Raiton chakra into their hand, the user then uses shape manipulation to turn it into an orb of lightning. The user then fires the built-up Raiton orb at his/her target as a massive concentration of energy which resembles a lightning strike. The effect has devastatingly destructive results. To increase the destructive potential of the technique, the user must recite the incantation and concentrate more chakra into their hand.

Notes:

-Incantation - "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!"
-Can only be used 3 times per fight
-How the jutsu is performed [

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-Can only be taught by SilverAssassin

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I need thoughts on these two. These are my first Kido submissions and I need to know what I can do to make them more balanced or approvable if necessary.

Well for starters you cant really submit these as they are A-S and you havent learnt A-S lightning as far as im aware

 

[Goetia]

Venom already submitted this. A lot of Hado and Bakudo has already been done bud.

I knew Venom and one other member submitted different Kido, but most have already been done before?

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Well for starters you cant really submit these as they are A-S and you havent learnt A-S lightning as far as im aware

My plan was to submit them when I completed the element.

 

[Penguin]

I know for sure the Bakudo has been done, I don't know about the Hado. I know in Randy's CC they have Hado #90. Someone submitted the Hado Kisuke used against Aizen. There have honestly been a lot done Lol

 

[Goetia]

I know for sure the Bakudo has been done, I don't know about the Hado. I know in Randy's CC they have Hado #90. Someone submitted the Hado Kisuke used against Aizen. There have honestly been a lot done Lol

Yeah, I saw the Rikujokoro submission. I haven't seen Raikōhō submitted though.

So Hado 90 Kurohitsugi and Senjukotentaiho (the Hado Urahara used) have already been submitted? Interesting. But if I were to submit these, should I change anything to get it approved?

 

[Penguin]

Yeah, I saw the Rikujokoro submission. I haven't seen Raikōhō submitted though.

So Hado 90 Kurohitsugi and Senjukotentaiho (the Hado Urahara used) have already been submitted? Interesting. But if I were to submit these, should I change anything to get it approved?

Mhm.

Submitting previously submitted ideas is a no no, even if you change some things.

 

[Goetia]

Mhm.

Submitting previously submitted ideas is a no no, even if you change some things.

Alright then.

 

[Xicer]

I didn't see anything like this in the threads I looked at, but this had to be thought up already by someone somewhere. I hope not, but I wanted to check with you guys first. Oh, and its my first CJ, so I need to make sure you guys think it's viable.

Raiton: Taiyou Furea; Lightning Style: Solar Flare
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will raise their hands and focus their chakra to create a lightning bolt. By manipulating their chakra, the user focuses the lightning bolt to release its energy in the form of light. The result is a blinding light that engulfs the area around the user up to short range. Anyone within the radius of the technique, excluding the user, will suffer from vision loss for 1 turn.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Xicer

 

[Kamishiro]

I didn't see anything like this in the threads I looked at, but this had to be thought up already by someone somewhere. I hope not, but I wanted to check with you guys first. Oh, and its my first CJ, so I need to make sure you guys think it's viable.

Raiton: Taiyou Furea; Lightning Style: Solar Flare
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will raise their hands and focus their chakra to create a lightning bolt. By manipulating their chakra, the user focuses the lightning bolt to release its energy in the form of light. The result is a blinding light that engulfs the area around the user up to short range. Anyone within the radius of the technique, excluding the user, will suffer from vision loss for 1 turn.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Xicer

I remember having a cannon technique that does the same. Though, I can no longer find it. It is the technique that Cee used against Sasuke.

 

[Vegeta]

I didn't see anything like this in the threads I looked at, but this had to be thought up already by someone somewhere. I hope not, but I wanted to check with you guys first. Oh, and its my first CJ, so I need to make sure you guys think it's viable.

Raiton: Taiyou Furea; Lightning Style: Solar Flare
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will raise their hands and focus their chakra to create a lightning bolt. By manipulating their chakra, the user focuses the lightning bolt to release its energy in the form of light. The result is a blinding light that engulfs the area around the user up to short range. Anyone within the radius of the technique, excluding the user, will suffer from vision loss for 1 turn.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Xicer

I remember having a cannon technique that does the same. Though, I can no longer find it. It is the technique that Cee used against Sasuke.

Yeah it's Flash of illusion or something, blinds the enemy as a catalyst to begin a genjutsu, I believe it's S rank. Also Yard has a cj Light switch that does the same thing as well. You can always try, worst that can happen is a decline

 

[Kamishiro]

Yeah it's Flash of illusion or something, blinds the enemy as a catalyst to begin a genjutsu, I believe it's S rank. Also Yard has a cj Light switch that does the same thing as well. You can always try, worst that can happen is a decline

Found it;


(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns

 

[Xicer]

Oh. Well that sucks. I have about 1,200 more post before I can learn it then lol