[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Technique: Hashiso and Tamiko [Kuchyose no Jutsu: Hashiso no Tamiko]

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Summoning
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 55 (+10 every turn)
Damage Points: -
Description: The user calls forth two bodies, with slightly different appearances than him, similar to Pein's Realm Summoning technique.Hashiso is able to use Summoning Techniques [that is his only ability] while Tamiko is able to use Water Style up to [and including] S-Rank and Taijutsu up to [and including] C-Rank techs(Gate Taijutsu not included).
-Cannot be used whilst another summoning.
-The user is not allowed to use Water and Lightning during the summoning.
-Can be teached only by Reido Kira [Itachi].

Declined*No need to be forbidden, and too similar to pein ability

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Aisu Horimonos] Summoning Technique: Ice Sculptures
Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will use ice and by moulding it they create a sculpture, which they put their blood on then smash into the ground, summoning the sculpture they make.
Note: Must know Ice jutsus
Note: Must be taught By ~Sin~

*Declined*How many sculptures are made? This seems more like a ninjutsu than a kuchiyose no jutsu...

[Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Glome, Sono Aisu Musha] Summoning Technique: Glome, The Ice Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: When Glome is summoned, he can deal double water and ice damage, and can cause ice spikes to form from the ground by slamming down onto the ground. Glome is friendly to his summoners, but is vicious to enemies, he is fast and can make easy escapes.
Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~
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*Declined* Oped. Remove that double water and ice damage and resubmit.*

 

[Kiwii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Genjutsu: Ombrophobia ( Ame Osore )

Rank: S
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Note: Requires Rain
Description: Ombrophobia is the fear of Rain or being rainned upon. This genjutsu will make the opponent suffer the symptoms of this phobia. Being rainned uppon will start to make the opponent enter in a panic state with disabling shaking. The user will not be able to stand on his feet. The damage of this genjutsu will be caused by the feeling that the opponent has of being constantly hit by needles, wich go deeper and hurt even more as the time passes. Soon enough, the needles turn into acid, and will give the user the feeling of having is flesh desintegrated, and that they're just bone.
*this jutsu is not avoidable by chakra. The opponent must feel a great physical pain (not just stab himself or break a finger) or hurt the user*
*Can be broken by Bijuu Chakra*
|Approved|
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Genjutsu: ShapeShift (Tatazumai Shifuto)

Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This will change the image that the opponent has of himself. The user can change anything, from giving disabling wounds or amputating several limbs to transforming the opponent on another being.
The victim will not be able to sense what is gone and will feel any extra changes. This is limited to 2 parts of the body and only once for the entire jutsu (Hand, Arm, Shoulder and one chest, Neck and Sternum, Rib Cage, Belly, Censorated, Butt, Lower back, Upper back, Head, Leg and finnaly Foot.) This jutsu rans off when the user wants and can only be released with someone own means, wich means no 3rds chakras or pain caused by others. If the user losses concentration caused by a mental of physical pain, the genjutsu is off aswell.
*No Kai*
*can only be used once per battle*
*takes 10 damage points to the user*

- Restricted - Only 2 parts can be changed and once for the entire jutsu. Can only be used once per battle. And it damages the user.
Declined Oped. Making peoples heads disappear and no way to disable...Don't resubmit.

Genjutsu: Senses Manipulation ( Gokan Manipyure-shon)

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will be able to be in charge of a person's senses. This is a very raw genjutsu, but it has a tremendous downside: The user will only be able to trick one sense, meaning the others will still remaning the same.
The opponent can only escape the genjutsu by causing the user to feel extreme Physical or Mental pain.
Vision: You can control anything the opponent sees. Turning existing objects and beings invisible, bend and re-shape them or even create new things with motion.
Sound: Creates new sounds or manipulates existing sounds.
Smell: Can atract or repulse the opponent to extremes. It can also make some smells go.
Taste: There's not many applications for this sense in battles, but it can repulse the opponent so that he looses concentration.
Touch: This is what gives the damage to the jutsu. Can make the opponent feel anything at any part of his skin, being burns, smashes, cuts, penetrations or simple pressions, or even take away those, in order to prevent him from sensing vibrations.
*This jutsu can be used 2 times, after the effects run off (meaning that it can't be used while the other is still in effect) with the exeption of Touch, wich makes the jutsu be only used once per battle*

Ex: First I use Sound. After it rans off I can use 2 other jutsus and choose other or the same sense.

-Restricted - Only twice per battle. this is restricted enough, being that you can only manipulate 1 sense. This makes very fake genjutsus if not used carefully. I don't see it as overpowered as many jutsus around here.
Declined. Again! Controlling any sense is overpowered. You stop eyesight and win matches immediately. Or touch and lob off an arm and the person wouldn't know.

-I dont know who checked them the first time but the same one needs to check them again-

Goro, can you please check this?

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

lightening element : double lightening sabers cut tounyuu (raiton :futae raiton gontuo kire)

Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:50 ( +5 if it was hit it froma short range )
Description: by letting your ightening chakra throw your hands , and making an lightening saber each one of them you can fuse it togather in one X like slash directed at your opponent , or if you hit it directly to your oponent it will be more efective
*stick to the guideline for jutsu...*
Damage should he 40 and chakra 20. Edit and resubmit.*

lightening element : samurai brust ( samurai sai )

Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-mid
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:50
Description : by getting your lightening chakra out around your sword and throw it with slashing it toward your terget
*Declined* To similar to other jutsu

 

[Kiwii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Puppet: Ventus / Flamma / Terra / Aqua / Fulgur

Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user closes his hands and opens them again, forming an elemental chakra ball from the size of a basket ball. This ball has all the characteristics of the element and after it's creation, it stands on it's own, without adding more chakra. The puppet is created with 2 chakra threads, wich the user will use to manipulate it. The first thread is used to move the puppet around and the second thread is to change the shape of the ball.
The ball can be stretched, flatten, squared, etc, as longs as the mass stays the same.
The user can summon and control 5 puppets in row, with the same element or not.
Fusions, of any kind, will upgrade the rank and power of the jutsu to the rank above. All five will fused be equal to an S rank.
The puppets can stay the whole battle, but the fusions can only be mantainned 1 turn, due to the unstability.

Grimm or Rei please check. Thanks^^

 

[Deidara...]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kuchiyose no jutsu:kyojin orochi (Giant snake Summoning technique)

Rank B
Type: Summoning
Chakra: 30
Range: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons large snakes that are capable of assisting in battle.

contract info

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Summoning Animal: - Nagini
Contract (Scroll Owner): - Iseris
Users who have signed contract: - orochimaru, sasuke
Summoning Boss: -Manda
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: - manda, and several other nameless snakes

Cannon Summoning Contracts will not be alter in this role play.

 

[Hokage]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ryuusei Tobikomi) Meteor Dive

Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The summoned phoenix fly high up into the sky, as high as it can go and then dives down towards the opponent with its steel hard beak. The phoenix itself is made of fire which adds fire element to the attack
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: can only be taught by Hokage
Approved.

(Kamisori Tsume) Razor Claws

Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The summoned phoenix attacks the opponent with a barrage of slashes using its razor sharp talons which can cut through rocks.
Note: can only be taught by Hokage
Approved.Limit twice per battle

(Nenshou Umou) Burning Feathers

Rank: S
Range: Mid ? Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The summoned phoenix flaps its massive wings, sending a shower of huge, sharp and burning feathers towards the opponent. Even if the fire is put out, the feathers can still pierce the foe.
Note: can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: can only be taught by Hokage
Approved.

(Suiton: Poseidon Hando) Water Style: Poseidon?s Hand

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short ? Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user concentrates his charka into the water and after making the necessary hand seals he is then able to control a large amount of it. The water rises in the shape of a giant hand (like what Gaara does with his sand) which moves according to the users will as if it was an extension of their body. The user can also control the density of the water, making the attack hit the opponent like a wave or crushing them like a rock.
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: lasts for 4 rounds
Note: the user must stay still while the jutsu is activated
Note: can only be taught by Hokage
Declined.
Make twice per battle,last one turn, Needs a large water source.

(Kamisori Tsume) Razor Claws

Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The summoned phoenix attacks the opponent with a barrage of slashes using its razor sharp talons which can cut through rocks.
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: can only be taught by Hokage

*Approved, but this doesn't need to be a S rank jutsu....I'll fix it this time.*

(Suiton: Poseidon Hando) Water Style: Poseidon?s Hand

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short ? Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user concentrates his charka into the water and after making the necessary hand seals he is then able to control a large amount of it. The water rises in the shape of a giant hand (like what Gaara does with his sand) which moves according to the users will as if it was an extension of their body. The user can also control the density of the water, making the attack hit the opponent like a wave or crushing them like a rock.
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: lasts for 1 round
Note: the user must stay still while the jutsu is activated
Note: needs a large water source
Note: can only be taught by Hokage

-Declined: Sorry Hokage, someone just notified me, and a similar jutsu already exists-

 

[naruto55]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Water Chakra Distubance(Suiton:chakra disuta-bu)
Rank:A
Type:Supplemantry
Range: Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage:0
Description:The user sends his chakra through water and the part of the water where the users enemy is standing gets filled with chakra and breaks the enemys chakra which he uses to stand on water. Shortly:the users opponant cant stand on water and falls in the water.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
*Can only be used 3 times
*Can only be used if both the user and the enemy are standing on water
*Can only be used by wave ninja


Make C rank

Water Chakra Distubance(Suiton:chakra disuta-bu)
Rank:C
Type:Supplemantry
Range: Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage:0
Description:The user sends his chakra through water and the part of the water where the users enemy is standing gets filled with chakra and breaks the enemys chakra which he uses to stand on water. Shortly:the users opponant cant stand on water and falls in the water.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan and also naruto55
*Can only be used 3 times
*Can only be used if both the user and the enemy are standing on water
*Approved*

Summoning 500 hands (kuchiose: 500 hakku)
Rank:C
Type:Supplemantry
Range: Long-mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage:0
Description:The user summons 500 hands and each hand holds 1 kunai. some of the hands are made of wood and some are made of metal. The hands all come from the same scroll and they are 10cm thick but can extend up to 5m. None of the hands can move if they have no connection to the scroll.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan and also naruto55
*Can only be used 2 times per battle
*The hands count as weapons so they last as long as they arent destroyed
*Declined*

Summoning Flat Worm(kuchiose: furatto wa-mu)
Rank:C
Type:Supplemantry
Range: Long-mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage:0
Description: The use summons a brown 10m long worm.The worm can use D-rank earth jutsu and this 1 C-rank jutsu (Doton: Dochuu Eigyo) - Earth Style: Underground Fish Projection. The worm has a small mouth and a lound voice. When the worm is cut up each piece forms a new worm like in realaty.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan and also naruto55
*Can only be used 2 times per battle
*Lasts 5 turns

*Approved* But can be summoned only once per battle.
all the above jutsu were burakyilan's ideas but submitted by me

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose : Balder no Kori Kuguma)- Summoning: Balder the Black Bear
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Balder the Black bear. Balder has a nature affinity for fire element using fire jutsu up to A rank and is a skilled shinobi amongst the shinobi bear clan. Known for his taijutsu skill and his ability to release a dense chakra endow smokescreen. Being dense with chakra the smokescreen can be recalled if blown away.
~Approved

(Taijutsu Kuciyose: Seishun Genkotsu Nunchuku )- Summoning: Youthful Fist Nunchucks
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+10 When used with Raiton chakra)
Description: Users summons two medium size silver spiked rods.Using chakra user creates links that connect the two rods to form nunchucks. Nunchucks can be charged with raiton chakra to cause addition damage to opponets.
~Approved

(Za Sueshijuu Ranmyaku no Mai)- The Eternal Chaotic Dance
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 85 (-30)
Description: After unlocking the Seventh Gate: Kyomon (Gate of wonder): User will fiercely attack his opponent with a barrage of kicks and punches, leading to a uppercut sending them into the sky. User will then jump into the sky to match opponents position to assualt again with a barrage of punches knocking the opponent into the ground. User speeds are nearly untraceable by the eyes (Sharingan Doujutsu cannot trace for their is no chakra to see. The Byakugan cannot keep up with the speed of the user). After the attack users muscles are ripped to shreds from strain of The Seventh Gate.
Note: Useable Once Per battle
Requirement: 7th Gate Open
~Declined
its abit overpowered. there should be alot of side effects since its the 7th gate

 

[Gatsndshanks]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose : Balder no Kori Kuguma)- Summoning: Balder the Black Bear
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Balder the Black bear. Balder has a nature affinity for fire element using fire jutsu up to A rank and is a skilled shinobi amongst the shinobi bear clan. Known for his taijutsu skill and his ability to release a dense chakra endow smokescreen. Being dense with chakra the smokescreen can be recalled if blown away.

~Declined~

 

[Flawful]

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[Hazure]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon: Shifuto
Rank: S
Length: 5-7meters long
Wielder: Hazure (Shai/Wrath)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A sword that is thin but can withstand any attack even from Samehada. Its ability is the ability to 'Shift' its length and width to any size Shai/Wrath wishes; this of course takes up a bit of chakra.
*Shifuto can only be wielded by Shai/Wrath (Hazure)
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~Declined
a thin katana is not indistructable. they become flimsy

( Taijutsu: Shifuto ) - Taijutsu: Shift
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user of this technique moves so fast that their opponent doesn’t even know that they have moved because when the user moves, they move so fast that it leaves an image of them in the exact position that they were before they “Shift”. This can be used to appear and attack the opponent before they can comprehend the situation or it can be used to flee from an area.
*Movement can only be detected by Sharingan - 3 tomoe or higher
*Can only be used twice per battle
*Can only be used by Shai/Wrath
*The user takes 15 damage for each time they use this.
Note: This is not a time/space jutsu!
~Declined

( Ninpo: Tarento Kawari ) - Ninja Art: Personality Change
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Shai uses this technique to let Wrath take control of his body. When it is activated, Shai’s wounds heal and his health is replenished. When the jutsu ends, Wrath becomes yet again dormant and Shai takes control again.
*Can only be used once per battle
*Lasts 5 turns
*When the jutsu ends Shai cannot move for one turn
*Can only be used by Shai
~Declined

 

[~Kensei-kun~]

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[Hyouton-Doragon Hisame Sotu-mu] Ice Style; Dragon Hail Storm
Rank; A
Range; mid/long
chakra:35
damage:60
description:The user summons ice dragons from the sky raining down on the enemy.It aslo changes the feild itself over it with ice
note; only taught can be taught by kenseitachikage

~Decline~
I hold the contract for the ice dragon

[Kuchyose no Jutsu aisu setsu kouken]*Summoning Jutsu-Ice Temple Guardian ganma
Rank; Forbidden
Range;-
chakra: 50
damage: 90 [-10]
description; The user summons a temple guardian Ganma[human size]. Ganma is the leader of the temple gaurdains he carrys a spear and a scythe on his back.he can use up to B-rank ice style jutsus and can take on any ice style jutsu up to B-rank. when the gaurdain is destoryed he leaves behind a scythe.

Notenly be used by KenseiTachikage
Note:the scythe is a weapon that can freeze an emeny on direct contact

~Overpowered

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ice Style: Frost Of The Underworld [Hyouton:Furosuto Za Akunochimata]

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Rank: S-Class
Type:Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a mist of ice capable of freezing to the opponent or giving them frostbite.The user can manipulate the mist if the opponent blocks it. The Ice mist can just be simply blown away by wind justu(it will just make this mist colder), they have to use fire justu of S-Rank to melt this justu.When the justu is melted by the ice i can use the melted ice(water) to preform water justu.This justu can also be formed by the moisturized air because it accumulates the evaporated water and makes it ice cold forming this justu.
Note:this justu cannot harm the user.
Note: This Justu can only be used by Minato1
Note:This justu last 4 turns but the user can stop the justu by manipulating it.

*Approved*But make it last last three turns and useable once per battle.

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fifth and last submission for this week.

(Yobu No Yaban) Call of the Wild
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: None
Chakara cost: 50
Damage: None (-30, -40, -50 to the user after jutsu ends, depends on changes 1,2,3 elements)
Description: User will first choose one element, and will release a massive amount of that type of elemental chakara into the atmosphere. This chakara will not allow any type of natural chakara of the same type to affect the user or be used in the range of the chakara atmosphere. The chakara in the atmosphere in no way can harm the opponent but it does not allow the user to utilize the same type of elemental chakara while in the users presence. Once the chakara is sent out the user is also not able to use that type of elemental chakara based ninjutsus until the affects of this jutsu wears off. The user is able to switch between elements and change the type of elemental chakara that is cancelled out in atmosphere anytime during the span of this jutsu but for each change they must wait a 1 turn.
~Only usable once per battle and effects last up to 3 turns~
~Jutsus of the elements(only one element can be active at one time during the span of this jutsu, can be changed but only one per time) that the user picks cannot be used while this jutsu is active~
~Once the effects of this jutsu wears off, each elemental affinity the user used during this jutsus effect may not be used for a certain amount of turns after the end of this jutsu. If the user used 1, they cant use that one for 2 turns, if 2 were used those 2 cannot be used for 3 turns, if 3 were used they are not able to use those 3 for the next 4 turns, no more than 3 changes are permitted during this jutsus effect since it takes one turn to change and this is only active for 3 turns~
~After it ends, for the next 2 turns only 2 jutsus can be used and have to be A-rank or lower~
*Declined*Oped.Please Do Not Resubmit.

 

[Mugiwara]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Duh, didnt know i had to make a new post :S Edited the old one, and did wat Rei told me to do. anyway here it is.


(Fuuton: Koujin Doragon) Wind Release: Dust Dragon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a dragon from highly compressed cutting wind chakra, and mixes it with a little earth, to give it a firm head, and a body filled with dust, the dragon is controlled by the user, as any other elemental dragons. Its firm head gives it protection against fire jutsu up to rank A.
Note:Lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Only 2 times per battle.
Note:Can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto

-make it usable only 2 times per battle-

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(Kuchiyose: Houou)Summoning: Mythical Phoenix Bird
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User summons the Mythical creature, the Phoenix Bird, whose body is made of fire. The Phoenix is a very strongest fire creature, and is able to do all fire attacks up to rank A, with the attacks power increased with 20 damage points, and regenerate his body with fire at all times. The Phoenix flies back and forth, using firebreath on the opponent.
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto.

-state up to what rank fire jutsus the Phoenix can use, I suggest A rank-

(Houou Jikogisei) Mythical Phoenix Bird Self-Sacrifice
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Summoned Phoenix spins around rapidly increasing its temperature, until its temperature is so high that it explodes and causes fire damage to the opponent, the user does not take any damage from this. The user does +20 damage with all his fire attacks, but cannot use water attacks this, or the next round.
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto.

(Katon: Kasai Doragon Kobushi) Fire Release: Fire Dragon Fists
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage: 80
Description: The user gains the hands of a fire dragon, which gives his hands ability to manipulate fire. The users hands are on fire while the technique is active, and the user has the ability to send back and incomming fire attack back at the opponent. Or the user can just use the Dragon fists to attack they're opponent at close combat.
Note: Lasts for 2 rounds
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto.

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(Kuchiyose: Buryoko no Gouka) Summoning: The Sword of Hellfire
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons a great sword named "The Sword of Hellfire". This is a very legendary and powerful sword, which has the ability to endure extreme heat, the user can use fire style to heat up the sword to a high enough temperature that it can melt the opponents weapons(Kunai, regular sword). The user can decide if he wants to summon 2 swords, or just one.
Note: This just can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto
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(Fuuton: Koujin Doragon) Wind Release: Dust Dragon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a dragon from highly compressed cutting wind chakra, and mixes it with a little earth, to give it a firm head, and a body filled with dust, the dragon is controlled by the user, as any other elemental dragons. Its firm head gives it protection against fire jutsu up to rank A.
Note:Lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Only 2 times per battle.
Note:Can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto
*Approved*
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(Kuchiyose: Houou)Summoning: Mythical Phoenix Bird
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User summons the Mythical creature, the Phoenix Bird, whose body is made of fire. The Phoenix is a very strongest fire creature, and is able to do all fire attacks up to rank A, with the attacks power increased with 20 damage points, and regenerate his body with fire at all times. The Phoenix flies back and forth, using firebreath on the opponent.
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto.
*Declined* This summoning already exist..

(Houou Jikogisei) Mythical Phoenix Bird Self-Sacrifice
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Summoned Phoenix spins around rapidly increasing its temperature, until its temperature is so high that it explodes and causes fire damage to the opponent, the user does not take any damage from this. The user does +20 damage with all his fire attacks, but cannot use water attacks this, or the next round.
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto.
*Declined*

(Katon: Kasai Doragon Kobushi) Fire Release: Fire Dragon Fists
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage: 80
Description: The user gains the hands of a fire dragon, which gives his hands ability to manipulate fire. The users hands are on fire while the technique is active, and the user has the ability to send back and incomming fire attack back at the opponent. Or the user can just use the Dragon fists to attack they're opponent at close combat.
Note: Lasts for 2 rounds
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto.
*Declined*Fire Dragon exist on here and Grimm and Rag signed that contracts.. You can edit resubmit the jutsu so that your hands are on fire, but that jutsu exist as well.
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(Kuchiyose: Buryoko no Gouka) Summoning: The Sword of Hellfire
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons a great sword named "The Sword of Hellfire". This is a very legendary and powerful sword, which has the ability to endure extreme heat, the user can use fire style to heat up the sword to a high enough temperature that it can melt the opponents weapons(Kunai, regular sword). The user can decide if he wants to summon 2 swords, or just one.
Note: This just can only be taught by Namikaze Naruto
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*Declined* Hell fire is a CE on this site, and a sword of hellfire already exist.

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Second Submission :

Katon : Shinkirou ( Fire Release : Mirage )

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: 35 ( + 10 per turn )
Damage: N/A
The user heats up the surroundings with their Fire Element Chakra, making the temperature soar to over 45 degrees C. This gives the surroundings the temperature of a desert, causing the heat to play on an opponent, causing them to see a mirage.
In it's crudest form, it is just a lake of water - however, the user may use their chakra to force the haze to take on the shape they wish, making the opponent see potentially anything.
This technique is not a Genjutsu - rather, it is a Ninjutsu that creates a haze, due to the natural formation of mirages, and utilises chakra to shape the haze. In effect, this means that Sharingan or Kais will not get rid of this - in fact, the more sensitive a person's eyes are, the more susceptible they are to mirages, and an Uchiha will find it almost twice as hard to resist this technique.
Notes:
~ Can only be used twice per battle
~ Lasts for a maximum of three turns
~ User may not use any Genjutsu while this is in effect
~ User has to be above the rank of Sannin to successfully utilise this technique

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*Declined*Jutsu Exist Already

 

[Hazure]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon: Shifuto
Rank: S
Length: 5-7meters long
Wielder: Hazure (Shai/Wrath)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A sword that is thin but can withstand any attack even from Samehada. Its ability is the ability to 'Shift' its length and width to any size Shai/Wrath wishes; this of course takes up a bit of chakra.
*Shifuto can only be wielded by Shai/Wrath (Hazure)
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~Declined
a thin katana is not indistructable. they become flimsy

( Taijutsu: Shifuto ) - Taijutsu: Shift
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user of this technique moves so fast that their opponent doesn’t even know that they have moved because when the user moves, they move so fast that it leaves an image of them in the exact position that they were before they “Shift”. This can be used to appear and attack the opponent before they can comprehend the situation or it can be used to flee from an area.
*Movement can only be detected by Sharingan - 3 tomoe or higher
*Can only be used twice per battle
*Can only be used by Shai/Wrath
*The user takes 15 damage for each time they use this.
Note: This is not a time/space jutsu!
~Declined

( Ninpo: Tarento Kawari ) - Ninja Art: Personality Change
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Shai uses this technique to let Wrath take control of his body. When it is activated, Shai’s wounds heal and his health is replenished. When the jutsu ends, Wrath becomes yet again dormant and Shai takes control again.
*Can only be used once per battle
*Lasts 5 turns
*When the jutsu ends Shai cannot move for one turn
*Can only be used by Shai
~Declined

Custom Weapon: Shifuto
Rank: S
Length: 5-7meters long
Wielder: Shai/Wrath (Hazure)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A huge sword that is thick and can withstand most minor attacks and a few major attacks. It's ability is the ability to 'Shift' its length and width to any size Shai/Wrath wish, this of course takes up a bit of chakra. *Shifuto can only be weilded by Shai/Wrath.
*Can only be used by Hazure's Shai/Wrath Bio

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*Approved*Remove the bolded text. It can be made larger and wider sure, but any length is insanely too general.

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Yuuen Rokuhenkei Daichi Bakuha) Earth Style: Grand Hexagon Earth Explosion
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short ? Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user makes few hand seals and then slams his hands on the ground and creates a hexagonal pattern of chakra around the opponent and then it lights up and explodes causing the earth inside the hexagonal pattern to begin breaking up and shooting out of the ground colliding with the enemy and then they fall back down on top of the enemy and burry them underneath the rubble.
*Earth Jutsu cannot be used for 2 turns after this jutsu is performed
*Does 15 damage to the User
*Can only be used Twice per battle
*Can only be used by members of Sharinganmasters Hideout

|Make S rank|

(Raiton: Ichi Ikusen Hekirekiboruto) Lightning Release: One Thousand Thunderbolts
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The User sends an enormous amount of Lightning Chakra into the sky, which creates Thunder clouds above the target. Then 1000 Bolts of Lightning rain down in rapid succession attacking the target.
*Lightning Jutsu cannot be used for 2 turns after this jutsu is performed
*Does 15 damage to the User
*Can only be used Twice per battle
*Can only be used by members of Sharinganmasters Hideout

|Declined|
Similar to other jutsu

(Fuuton: Aeolus Amatsu Iki) Wind Style: Aeolus?s Heavenly Breath
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user sends an enormous amount of Wind Chakra into the sky, which causes a huge gale to come down and encircle the target in a dome of wind, in the wind the target is being rotated in mid-air, and is rapidly increasing in rotation so they cannot focus on hand signs properly and is also getting cut because of the wind. Because the dome is large, occasional gusts of wind are sent at the user.
*Wind Jutsu cannot be used for 2 turns after this jutsu is performed
*Does 15 damage to the User
*Can only be used Twice per battle
*Can only be used by members of Sharinganmasters Hideout

Make Once per battle

(Katon: Jigoku Doki) Fire Style: Hells Wrath
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user slams their hands onto the ground and sends an immense amount of fire chakra into the ground until cracks appear below the target and fire starts shoot up and mixes with the ground creating lava which the target slowly sinks into.
*Fire Jutsu cannot be used for 2 turns after this jutsu is performed
*Does 15 damage to the User
*Can only be used Twice per battle
*Can only be used by members of Sharinganmasters Hideout

|declined|

(Suiton: Taikaikamigami Doki) Water Style: Poseidon?s Wrath
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user gathers a vast amount of water chakra into their hand(s)and punches forward making a large hand of water shoot out from their arm(s) and grab the enemy causing them to drown. It can also be used to punch the enemy making chakra infused water to sink into their pours to erode the bones and seep into their lungs.
*Water Jutsu cannot be used for 2 turns after this jutsu is performed
*Does 15 damage to the User
*Can only be used Twice per battle
*Can only be used by members of Sharinganmasters Hideout

|Declined|
Water cannot erode bone that simply. Edit Description and resubmit.

resubmitting with changes for the group

(Doton: Yuuen Rokuhenkei Daichi Bakuha) Earth Style: Grand Hexagon Earth Explosion
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short ? Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes few hand seals and then slams his hands on the ground and creates a hexagonal pattern of chakra around the opponent and then it lights up and explodes causing the earth inside the hexagonal pattern to begin breaking up and shooting out of the ground colliding with the enemy and then they fall back down on top of the enemy and burry them underneath the rubble.
*Earth Jutsu cannot be used for 2 turns after this jutsu is performed
*Does 15 damage to the User
*Can only be used Twice per battle
*Can only be used by members of Sharinganmasters Hideout
Made S rank

*Approved*

(Fuuton: Aeolus Amatsu Iki) Wind Style: Aeolus?s Heavenly Breath
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user sends an enormous amount of Wind Chakra into the sky, which causes a huge gale to come down and encircle the target in a dome of wind, in the wind the target is being rotated in mid-air, and is rapidly increasing in rotation so they cannot focus on hand signs properly and is also getting cut because of the wind. Because the dome is large, occasional gusts of wind are sent at the user.
*Wind Jutsu cannot be used for 2 turns after this jutsu is performed
*Does 15 damage to the User
*Can only be used once per battle
*Can only be used by members of Sharinganmasters Hideout

Made once per battle
*Approved*

(Suiton: Taikaikamigami Doki) Water Style: Poseidon?s Wrath
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers a vast amount of water chakra into their hand(s)and punches forward making a Large hand race towards the enemy and then turns into a large volume of water in a crashing wave that then envelops the enemy and drowning them. The aftermalf of the jutsu leaves a large amount of water behind which can be used as a water source for jutsu.
*Water Jutsu cannot be used for 2 turns after this jutsu is performed
*Can only be used Twice per battle
*Can only be used by members of Sharinganmasters Hideout
*Approved*Made it S rank though.
made a better description

 

[The_Empire]

Re: ? Custom Jutsu Submission ?

(Nendo Sensu:Nendo Mure Saraundo)Clay Style:Clay Swarm Surround
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user rides on a bird in the air . Then the user puts alot of clay inthe mouths of their hands. Next the user will send a ocean of spiders to surround the enemy. Then the user sends out a swarm of birds to surround the spiders. The user will denoate the spiders and birds when they are ready.
*Declined**Make S rank and limit to once per battle if you want to send an ocean of spiders and birds(being that it would require ALOT! of chakra. Or Lower the amount of Spiders and Birds*

(Nendo Sensu:Nendo Yon Tensuu)Clay Style:Clay Four Points
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:25
Damage:40
Description:Theuser creates four big birds and send them flying towards the enemy. The birds don't go striaght to the enemy. The birds will spread out and make a four points. One in front, back, left and right of the enemy. Then the user will denoate them when they is ready.
*Approved*