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(Taijutsu:Tora Hae) Tiger Fly
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will form claws like a tiger, and then jump with a force of chakra, making them hover in the air, and while the opponent tries to attack, the user will spin in the air with chakra and be able to dodge attacks in the air by careful movements, and by careful timing in the air, the user will strike by diving and spinning and carefully aiming, at the target they will do a uppercut with chakra claws of a tiger.
Note: The user can perform jutsus while doing this move
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~

(Fuuton:Kaze Skates) Wind Release: Wind Skates
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+5 each turn this is active)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will create wind currents in the air and then transfer chakra from feet to the currents, the user then will jump onto the currents and be able to glide and run on the air, like the user has skates of wind, the user will be able to manover in the air aswell as having +5 damage on wind jutsus when this jutsu is active.
Note: Can Only Be Used Twice Per Battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~


Is their a translation for skates?
That jutsu is at most an OP copy of my Levitation technique.




Fire Style: Mountain Melting ♦ [Katon: Yamaya]

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user spits out a huge flame that can cover up to 30 square meters, the fire heats up the ground making it impossible for the enemy to escape from it underground, and it can also drain small lakes.This jutsu can be used to whatever distance the user wants(from 1 to 30 meters).
-May be used twice per battle.
-May be used only by Reido Kira
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Kuchiyose: Fawkes) Summoning Fawkes
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons a giant phoenix (100m approximately) and is the Lord of phoenixes. Fawkes can not only use fire jutsus, but it will also raise the damage of fire jutsus by 10. It can also attack using its big razor sharp talons and its powerful beak. Fawkes can be used as a defence and protects the user with its enormous wings, it will completely block E ? C rank jutsus and reduces the damage of B ? A rank jutsus by 50% while summoned.
Note: Fawkes drains a huge amount of charka from the user as it has various abilities, it can only be summoned once per fight and it only lasts 4 turns.

-approved-
 
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Fire Release: Dragon Tornado(Katon:Riuka Tatsumaki)
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Range:Short/Long
Class:Offense
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Descriptions:The user creates a massive spiral fire dragon that,while rotating,generates enourmous heat,burning everything that gets near it

-there are already fire jutsu that form dragons-
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Taijutsu: ketatamashii houkou) Piercing Howl
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a high pitch sound or howl which surrounds the enemy piercing their ears, making them vulnerable for until the echoes of it remains. the user then attacks by charging and kicking the enemy's stomach with his/her knee while hitting the head with his/her elbow, thus making it a lot more painful.

*can be used once per battle*
*this can be used both by Amaya and Hinaru*
*Hinaru is co-creator of this jutsu*
P.S *for Hinaru, it is S Rank: 40 Chakra / 80 Damage*

______________
~Pending~

this is more like a ninjutsu
so is it still pending? do i have to make it ninjutsu? -.-)

well here's another one
(Taijutsu: Shikyo rakka) Death Drop
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges and kicks the enemy in the stomach throwing him 3 feet away then appearing behind and hitting him again (this continues for 5 multiple hits) as for the final blow the user hits the enemy's jaw throwing him 5 feet above, then jumping and using both elbows to hit him again in the stomach making it a deathly drop for him.

*can be used once per battle*
*this can be used both by Amaya and Hinaru*
*Hinaru is co-creator of this jutsu*
P.S *for Hinaru, it is S Rank: 40 Chakra / 80 Damage*

can i submit summoning?

1. Yes you need to make it ninjutsu
2. The Death DRop jutsu for you must be A rank and used twice per battle and for Hinaru S rank used once per battle.

3. yes you can
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Being Sunday its a new week so these are this weeks new submissions.

(Senpō: Ryōsei no Jutsu)Sage Art: Amphibian Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: None
Description: The user will summon Shima and Fukasaku then they will use this technique to fuse with user. It maximizes the sage chakra for the person they are fused to and allows them to access Sage Mode. This allows Fukasaku and Shima to continuously gather sage chakra for the user, as he cannot do so himself while on the move, thus eliminating the weakness of exhausting all of his sage chakra in battle thus allowing the user to enter Sage Mode without having to stay still. The user will enter sage mode immediately after this jutsu is used, sage mode is still the same and lasts for 4 turns. This jutsu can only be used once per battle. The user can also use combination jutsu with both Shima and Fukasaku and is not affected by any Genjutsu due to the chakara of all three.
~Must know Sage Mode~
~ ~
~Cannot be used by a Bijuu~

~Aren't u a naruto character?

(Senpō: Kawazu Naki)Sage Arts: Frog Call
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakara cost: 40
Damage: 80(-10 to the user)
Description: After summoning Shima and Fukasaku and using Amphibian Technique both Shima and Fukasaku sing, releasing large, loud, and powerful sound waves that effectively annoy, distract, and temporarily paralyze the target for 1 turn. The opponent is affected as soon as it is heard.
~Must know Sage Mode~
~ ~

~Restrictions and limits

(Zaibatsu Doragon Kobushi) Super Dragon Fist
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakara cost: 60
Damage: 110(-20 to the user)
Description: The user focuses all their chakara into their hands after this is done they will compress it and then with a burst they will punch the air and a blast of chakara will be released into the air in the shape of a giant dragon, this dragon can be manipulated by the user and when it reaches contact with the opponent it was cause massive damage and will destroy anything in its way. This dragon is able to break through defensive jutsus up to S-Rank and will shred and go through the opponent with contact. The time in which the dragon is released can be changed by the user. Can only be used once per battle and the user will not be able to use any other jutsu for the remainder of this turn and will be paralyzed and unable to move and can only use 2 jutsu on the next turn.
~some1 already made this jutsu
-leaving these for Grim as I dont know SM well enough-
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Genjutsu: Ombrophobia ( Ame Osore )

Rank: S
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Note: Requires Rain
Description: Ombrophobia is the fear of Rain or being rainned upon. This genjutsu will make the opponent suffer the symptoms of this phobia. Being rainned uppon will start to make the opponent enter in a panic state with disabling shaking. The user will not be able to stand on his feet. The damage of this genjutsu will be caused by the feeling that the opponent has of being constantly hit by needles, wich go deeper and hurt even more as the time passes. Soon enough, the needles turn into acid, and will give the user the feeling of having is flesh desintegrated, and that they're just bone.
*this jutsu is not avoidable by chakra. The opponent must feel a great physical pain (not just stab himself or break a finger) or hurt the user*
*Can be broken by Bijuu Chakra*

- Edited

Genjutsu: ShapeShift (Tatazumai Shifuto)

Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This will change the image that the opponent has of himself. The user can change anything, from giving disabling wounds or amputating several limbs to transforming the opponent on another being.
The victim will not be able to sense what is gone and will feel any extra changes. This is limited to 2 parts of the body and only once for the entire jutsu (Hand, Arm, Shoulder and one chest, Neck and Sternum, Rib Cage, Belly, Censorated, Butt, Lower back, Upper back, Head, Leg and finnaly Foot.) This jutsu rans off when the user wants and can only be released with someone own means, wich means no 3rds chakras or pain caused by others. If the user losses concentration caused by a mental of physical pain, the genjutsu is off aswell.
*No Kai*
*can only be used once per battle*
*takes 10 damage points to the user*

- Restricted - Only 2 parts can be changed and once for the entire jutsu. Can only be used once per battle. And it damages the user.

Genjutsu: Senses Manipulation ( Gokan Manipyure-shon)

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will be able to be in charge of a person's senses. This is a very raw genjutsu, but it has a tremendous downside: The user will only be able to trick one sense, meaning the others will still remaning the same.
The opponent can only escape the genjutsu by causing the user to feel extreme Physical or Mental pain.
Vision: You can control anything the opponent sees. Turning existing objects and beings invisible, bend and re-shape them or even create new things with motion.
Sound: Creates new sounds or manipulates existing sounds.
Smell: Can atract or repulse the opponent to extremes. It can also make some smells go.
Taste: There's not many applications for this sense in battles, but it can repulse the opponent so that he looses concentration.
Touch: This is what gives the damage to the jutsu. Can make the opponent feel anything at any part of his skin, being burns, smashes, cuts, penetrations or simple pressions, or even take away those, in order to prevent him from sensing vibrations.
*This jutsu can be used 2 times, after the effects run off (meaning that it can't be used while the other is still in effect) with the exeption of Touch, wich makes the jutsu be only used once per battle*

Ex: First I use Sound. After it rans off I can use 2 other jutsus and choose other or the same sense, but I can't choose Touch.

-Restricted - Only twice per battle. this is restricted enough, being that you can only manipulate 1 sense. This makes very fake genjutsus if not used carefully. I don't see it as overpowered as many jutsus around here.

-I dont know who checked them the first time but the same one needs to check them again-
 
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(Suiton-Mizuhara)-Water Style: Water Field
○Type:Attack/Defense/Supplementary
○Rank:S
○Range(Depends on the water source)
○Chakra Cost:45
○Damage Points:N/A
○Descritpion:The user uses the water on the ground to his advantage.Focusing Water chakra in his feet, the user turns the water on the ground into sticky liquid , getting stuck in it for 2 turns. If the opponent is also in range, he will get stuck as well.The user can manipulate the liquid to attack/defend/create weapons (bullets,spears,shields etc…)
-During this time the user may only use Suiton jutsus.
-There must be water on the ground in order to use this
-Can only be canceled by suitable jutsus(Sense and Description Required)


|remove the the highlighted text.
Make usable twice per battle. Lasting 2 turns each.
(Suiton:Mizuhara) - Water Style:Water Field
○Type:Attack/Defense/Supplementary
○Rank:S
○Range(Depends)
○Chakra Cost:45
○Damage Points:N/A
○Descritpion:The user uses the water on the ground to his advantage.Focusing Water chakra in his feet, the user turns the water on the ground into sticky liquid , getting stuck in it for 2 turns. If the opponent is also in range, he will get stuck as well.The user can use the liquid to attack/defend/create weapons (bullets,spears,shields etc…)
-During this time the user may only use Suiton jutsus.
-There must be water on the ground in order to use this
-Can only be used twice per battle and lasts 2 turns
~Aprroved

Chakra Tanchiki – Chakra Detector
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description:User focuses a massive amount of chakra into their right foot, then slams it to the ground releasing it at once .The chakra spreads through the ground and into the air , detecting any other chakra source.For 10 seconds, the user is able to detect and follow any chakra flow and movement in the area.
-When use, must wait 5 turns before using again

~Declined
 
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(Taijutsu: Niassai Hirate) - Fighting Style: Two Crushing Palms
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (10 to user)
Description: The user will gather a huge amount of chakra into his arms and hands and will compress it. Then the user will release it all when he hits the torax of the opponent with his two palms vertically. The pressure of this attack is so great that will just break the opponent's torax and will even pierce trough the opponent's lungs. This attack happens with extreme speed due to the great concentration of chakra in the user's arms. The drawback of this jutsu is that because of the strain put under the user's arms, his bones will break and he will unable to use them; making seals for example.

-needs to be restricted to once per battle, cause there is a chance that you are fighting a med nin and they would survive this attack-

(Katon: Kashouten) - Fire Release: Converging Fire
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes fire converge on the opponent. This happens because the user quickly releases fire chakra into the air and heats it until a combustion happens. The user then can make fire appear where he wants. This jutsu can only be used 2 per battle

-you need something to cause the "heating" of the chakra-



(Doton: Tsuchi Mine) - Earth Style: Earth Mine
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user makes his chakra go trough the earth and compresses the minerals of the earth so much that they're ready to explode. If something causes disturbance on the area, like placing one foot or hand on the ground, it will explode.

-declined: now make it S rank at least-
(Taijutsu: Niassai Hirate) - Fighting Style: Two Crushing Palms
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (10 to user)
Description: The user will gather a huge amount of chakra into his arms and hands and will compress it. Then the user will release it all when he hits the torax of the opponent with his two palms vertically. The pressure of this attack is so great that will just break the opponent's torax and will even pierce trough the opponent's lungs. This attack happens with extreme speed due to the great concentration of chakra in the user's arms. The drawback of this jutsu is that because of the strain put under the user's arms, his bones will break and he will unable to use them; making seals for example. This jutsu can only be used once per battle

~Aprroved

(Doton: Tsuchi Mine) - Earth Style: Earth Mine
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user makes his chakra go trough the earth and compresses the minerals of the earth so much that they're ready to explode. If something causes disturbance on the area, like placing one foot or hand on the ground, it will explode. 3 times per battle

~Some1 already made this

(Katon: Kashouten) - Fire Release: Converging Fire
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes fire converge on the opponent. This happens because the user quickly releases fire chakra into the air and when the air around the opponent is hot enough (after a fire jutsu A-rank or above as been used near the opponent) a combustion will happen. The user then can make fire appear where he wants. This jutsu can only be used 2 per battle
~Pending. ask rei to check it
~Approved but remember that you send your fire chakra in the air and not on the ground. Therefor the fire should appear from air.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Name: Raiton: Raikage Yougeki Gusoku (Lightning Style: Thunder Shadow's Assault Armor)
Rank:S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+5 every turn active)
Damage: +30 to taijutsu and +20 to Lightning
Description: The Raikage can Automatically Release Lightning Chakra from every point of his body, giving him a boost in reflexes, speed, and power comparable to Rock Lee in his 8-Gates Mode.
(Last 4 Turns)
(Usable 2 times; 1 turn Recharge)
(Only Teachable by Kirabi)

~Aprroved

(Trying to Keep some type of Speed Otherwise its ineffective and inconsistent with the manga.)

Katon: (Kaensuto-mu) Fire Style: Flamestorm
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 120
Description: The User has a Seal of Fire on the Back of his Hand that activates when Blood is marked on it. The User then concentrates all fire chakra into this palm and the slightest set of friction causes it to release an explosive amount of Fire that converges around the opponent burning them alive.
(The Opponent Must Be Bound or Stationary for this Jutsu To Even Be Used)
(After use User may no longer preform any Fire Jutsu for 5 turns.)
(Only Usable Once)
~Sounds like a kinjutsu

Name:Raiton: Raiga Bomu (Lightning Style: Liger Bomb)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: the Raikage grabs his opponent and lifts them high into the air. Then, using his extreme strength, he smashes them head first onto the ground in what resembles a powerbomb maneuver. This is devastating enough to shatter the ground itself on impact. Darui noted that nobody has ever survived it before, and had Sasuke Uchiha not used Susanoo, he might have been killed by it. The impact of this technique was strong enough to snap two of Susanoo's rib bones
(Usable 2times Per Battle)
(S-Rank Ninja and Higher can Survive this Jutsu Only Once, But Speed is slowed due to the effects on the Neck. Paralyzing them)
~Aprroved

(Just trying to keep it realistic to the manga. Thats what it said on Leafninja.com
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

summoning:wind blades (kuchiyose kaze ken)
rank: FORBIDDEN
range: short-long
type: attack/supplementary
chakra: 50
damage: death (100 to user)

the user will summon about 100,000,000 tiny blades of wind that appear invisible the they will then cut the user in 10 places (10 damage each) (but the opponent cant see) the blades have a few special ability's besides being invisible
1. they have (not literally) a mind of there own they know when they are detected and then appear IF AND ONLY IF THEY ARE DETECTED

2. the blades are indistructable if they aren't detected and once then can only be destroyed by A rank fire and up
after 3 turns the jutsu becomes impossible to block and avoid even with space/time jutsu the blades will surge toward the opponent at amazing speed and become visible right b4 they destroy the opponent (completely ripping/tearing them to shreads)

NOTES

once per battle

the user cant user wind for the rest of the battle from when the swords are summoned
the user cant use fire while the swords are on the field
the opponent must explain CLEARLY how he detects the swords
once per battle
can be detected by byakugan/sharringan 3 tomo

~hrmmmmm =/ D E C L I N E D
 
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(Suiton: Hito Kuchini Mizu Mandore-Ku) – Water Style: Man Eating Water Mandrake

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a man-eating mandrake plant made of chakra infused-water that then can be used by shooting out roots made of water and then impales the enemy through the limbs and then the flower head of the mandrake opens releasing a sharp condensed water tongue, which finishes the enemy off by impaling them through the stomach.

Note: Can only be used 2 times

Note: opponent must be in water to use this jutsu
Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito


-you need to add that the opponent is in the water to use as it is similar to Kisame's sharks-
(Suiton: Hito Kuchini Mizu Mandore-Ku) – Water Style: Man Eating Water Mandrake

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a man-eating mandrake plant made of chakra infused-water that then can be used by shooting out roots made of water and then impales the enemy through the limbs and then the flower head of the mandrake opens releasing a sharp condensed water tongue, which finishes the enemy off by impaling them through the stomach.

Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: Requires a water source

Note: requires a source of water to use
Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito

added the requirement of water source

~I am lost dude =/ wats a mandrake?

(Akuma Fuukaku: Haraguroi Shiro Mizu bakufuu)- Demon stye: Malicious white Water blast

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: whilst in the bijuu mode the sanbi collects a large amount of chakra and condences it and releases a giant condenced malicious white water chakra blast towards the enemy. this technique is capable of ripping away the terrain leaving nothing but destruction.

Note: Only usable 3 times
Note: Can only be used in Bijuu mode

~Approved

resubmitting as new rules out now
 
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Weapon Name:Kumori
Rank; Forbidden
Chakra cost;
Description:Taken from the chamber of the murdered demon lord,this katana can be used as an extension of the ability or kg of the user.The katana is able to use whatever chakra the user have or use.Its blade is made from a special alloy that can't be broken down by s-class down jutsu's and has a safeguard ability that activates when the owner is not holding it. A unique ability is that it is able to have chakra infused to it like sage chakar(ex.having the blade infused w/ sage chakra and when slash tot he oponent it is infused to the oponent making it to a frog) or to make the same chakra jutsu stronger(ex.i put fire chakra in it and use the fire jutsu w/ it making it stronger), if the ability of the katana is used it will take half of the user's hp from the whole battle.
*only hinaru can holds this katana*
*Can only be used in 7 turns*
*Only be summoned once in battle*

~Declined

(Taijutsu: Shikyo rakka) Death Drop
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges and kicks the enemy in the stomach throwing him 3 feet away then appearing behind and hitting him again (this continues for 5 multiple hits) as for the final blow the user hits the enemy's jaw throwing him 5 feet above, then jumping and using both elbows to hit him again in the stomach making it a deathly drop for him.

*can be twice once per battle*
*this can be used both by Amaya and Hinaru*
*Hinaru is co-creator of this jutsu*

Hinaru restriction

*its rank S*
*Only be used once in battle*
~Approved

(katon:Hisaki Kabe) Fire style:Wall of Flames
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: A offensive jutsu, the user creates a fire around the oppenent using the oxygen around him and makes a dome around him leaving him no escape and the ground around him will be hot that he can't go down or else he'll be toast.
*only be used once*
*The user can't use fire jutsu for 2 turns*
* only Hinaru can teach or used this jutsu*
~declined
limits, restriction and side effects
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Fifth Submission :

Fuuinjutsu : Kagirinaishi ( Sealing Technique : Eternal Death )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra: 40 ( + 10 each turn )
Damage: N/A
The user places a seal on themselves. This seal begins to periodically send out pulses of chakra. Since every seal requires perfect internal structure to work, these chakra pulses disrupt the structure of the seal ( Imagine having a wave of chakra pass over a seal, and the chakra slightly alters the seal since that is also made of chakra ) causing it ineffective.
Notes:
- The user is also affected by this, meaning that they also cannot use any seals.
- This does not affect Jinchuuriki seals
- The effect of this seal decreases with distance - i.e. - an opponent may be able to use simple seals if they are at a distance from the user.
- User takes 5 damage each turn due to the strain of maintaining the seal, as well as loses 10 chakra per turn.

-Hm, there must a be trick since you are insisting so much. Leaving this for Grim or Goro-
O_______O
You don't trust me ? :p

Okay, so

Fifth Submission of last week :


Fuuinjutsu : Kagirinaishi ( Sealing Technique : Eternal Death )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra: 40 ( + 10 each turn )
Damage: N/A
The user places a seal on themselves. This seal begins to periodically send out pulses of chakra. Since every seal requires perfect internal structure to work, these chakra pulses disrupt the structure of the seal ( Imagine having a wave of chakra pass over a seal, and the chakra slightly alters the seal since that is also made of chakra ) causing it ineffective.
Notes:
- The user is also affected by this, meaning that they also cannot use any seals.
- This does not affect Jinchuuriki seals
- The effect of this seal decreases with distance - i.e. - an opponent may be able to use very simple seals if they are at a distance from the user.
- User takes 5 damage each turn due to the strain of maintaining the seal, as well as loses 10 chakra per turn.

~Declined

Now.


First Submission :


Ninjutsu : Hekigen'ei Bunshin ( Ninja Technique : Warped Vision Clones )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra: 35 ( per clone )
Damage: N/A
The user creates normal Kage Bunshin, but simultaneously with their creation, place a Genjutsu on the Bunshin, so that when they appear, the opponent will see them as hideous monsters, and will be paralysed with shock. Also, the Genjutsu makes the opponent's vision seem to slide off the Bunshin, making them appear hazy.
Notes:
- Only a maximum of three clones can be created.
- Can only be used once.
- The Sharingan can see through the Genjutsu
- The Bunshin can use techniques, but will disappear if a solid hit is taken, much like any other Kage Bunshin.
- User takes 5 damage each turn due to the strain of maintaining the Genjutsu.
~Approved
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

resubmitting this 1
Forbidden Fire style; Hells shine (kinkaton no jutsu; Naraku terasu)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost; 50
Damage; 80(30 to the user)
Description: An attack that releases an invisible flame in the air which burns down the targets, it is difficult to avoid it even with time/space(unless if you could judge the flame). By drawing hydrogen particles near then, burning them in the presence of oxygen in the air creates a flame releasing ultraviolet rays instead of ordinary, creating a partially invisible flame.
Note; Can only be used 2 times in a battle. Doujutsu can see through this, but gets the user of the doujutsu blind slowly if seen too much of it(Effect of ultraviolet light rays), The opponent have to stay in the doujutsu state to see properly.
-Based on real life science.



(see the combustion part)
-I'm not manipulating hydrogen, hydrogen is present in the air and is absorbed by our body stored in the lungs from where the heart takes in the oxygen only, then from exhalation the hydrogen is released in the air aswell, so i have the presence without manipulation. So its not an element >.>
-That jutsu is my original idea and is many months old, i submitted it on AD near the time the mission board rules were introduced. ask lara
-Dude please tell me what to edit exactly i can't think up anything what to edit to make something approved xd

Light Barrage (Hirenda)
Rank; A
Range; Short-Mid
Type; Attack
Chakra cost; 30
Damage; Depending on attack.
Description; A Taijutsu style Minato uses with combination of his time/space, using stunning attacks in combination with great speed stopping opponent from countering.
Note; Takes 1 usage of FTG per usage of this technique, all seal are applied on the target without him knowing while linking combo's. Only Minato Namikaze can perform this technique.
Attacks;
Instant Thunder Blade; The user dashes towards the opponent and disappears at the very last moment of contact appears behind and slashes the opponent.
Flash Assault; The user flares the opponent reflecting light from his kunai and quickly kicks his chest knocking him in the air passing a seal and appears behind the opponent as it hits.
Light Beam Kick; The user suddenly appears in front of the opponent by a already passed seal and flip kicks him followed by a reverse flip kicks, then slides down the opponent kicking him from the back.
Light Particle Kick; A technique so fast it breaks the highest lvl. guards cause the opponent does not receive enough reaction time. The user kicks the opponent with a hidden kunai and appears behind him with a massive barrage of stunning kicks greatly damaging the opponents face neck and chest.
Rising Thunder Flash; The user jumps and kicks the opponent in the air followed by a aerial flip kick with both legs from beside and appears behind slashing through.
Falling Thunder Blade;After using Rising Thunder Flash(without finishing blow), the user appears above the target and stabs him drilling down till reach the ground.
Instant Bullet; After a aerial flip kick the user flips behind the opponent starting a mid-air dash slashing the opponent.
Shooting star flash; After a combo of kicks the user appears above the opponent at 60 degrees angle and dives drilling down.
Instant Triple Blades; After a barrage of kicks knocking the opponent high, the user flicks above the opponent giving a flip kick pushing him down and appears below followed with 2 slashes and 1 stab killing the opponent.
Instant Light; The user flicks randomly around the opponent continuesly attacking him from all sides and confusing him.
Damage Description;
Instant Thunder Blade; 10
Flash Assault; 20
Light Beam Kick; 15
Light Particle Kick;25
Rising Thunder Flash; 20
Falling Thunder Blade; 35(plus 5 per 30 cms high)
Instant Bullet; 20
Shooting Star Flash; 25
Instant Triple Blades; 25
Instant Light; 5 per attack hit
Note;Information and attacks taken from original character moves in game Naruto Ultimate ninja 3
Wind style; Turbulence (Fuuton; fuon)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage; 80
Description; A tremendous blast of wind, that increases the air pressure of the area where hit, which cause deafness and lessening of oxygen. The effect wears off after a turn.

-Don't think i need to limit it now but yea whatever you say if there is a need of.

Sealing Technique; Chakra Pathway Seal (Fuuinjutsu; Chakra tsuuro no fuuin)
Rank; A
Type; Supplementary
Range; Short-Medium
Chakra; 30
Damage points; N/A
Description; The technique randomly seals off the targets tenketsu, while this all the techniques the target use costs 30% more and the target cannot perform any S or A rank ninjutsu. The seal can be placed on a specific organ to seal off of chakra related contents of that part, the effect of the seal is temporary, it wears off after 4 turns
Note; Can only be used 2 times per battle

Moving seal (iten fuuin)
Rank; C
Type; Supplementary
Range; Short/Long
Chakra cost; 10
Damage points; N/A
Description; The user forms a seal on the ground which starts moving by the users orders, the seal is controlled with handseals.

______________
~Let goro handle this when he gets back
reminding about this post
~Declined

New submits
Earth Style; Hard rocks (Doton; kataiwa)
Rank; S
Type; Attack/Defense(can be both at the same time)
Range; Short/Long
Chakra Cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user levitates rocks and boulders from the surrounding area, and applies preassure on them and simultaneously compresses each fragment into smaller, denser and harder rocks, essentially keeping the rocks under pressure for more volatile attacks if needed. Lastly, the rocks are directed to orbit around until they are put to use. When needed the user disintegrated one of his compressed rocks to form a Sphere and shot its shrapnel like fragments with great speed, in a machine gun-like fashion. Due to the speed and density of these rocks, they make great damage to the landscape and fatal damage to the target, Also in increase to the users defense at the same time, the orbits speed can get fast enough to form seemingly complete rings crushing things apart that comes in contact with it .

-declined: that's an environmental control mode not a jutsu-

Lightning sprayer (Raifunmuki)
Rank; S
Range; Short-long
Type; Attack-Defense(Can be both at the same time)
Chakra cost; 45
Damage points; 80
Description; The user does a single handed tiger seal and directs it towards the targets, then he starts performing single handed seals from the other hand and sprays outs electrified water from the tip of seal which turns into a very dense and thick mist blocking high level attacks, as the seemingly normal mist surrounds the opponent, it starts to paralyze him, the water gets absorbed by the pores and does fatal damage to the targets inner organs as human body is the best electrical conductor, the damage from the inside causes failure of different organs, the target dies without showing any signs of murder or assassination.
Note; Must have both Lightning and water style affinities

-declined: OP and i knew some can multi task but that goes beyond normal multi tasking-
@ 1st, i think its limited to rocks and boulders, not technically environmental control, i'm manipulating them and making them stronger at the same time
a bit similar to these 1's but my own better version.
(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Stone Lodging Destruction

Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:15
Damage Points:N/A
Descripton:This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.
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(Doton: Retsudo Tenshou) - Earth Style: Revolving Split Earth Palm

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:15
Damage Points:30
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

well here's another one
(Taijutsu: Shikyo rakka) Death Drop
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges and kicks the enemy in the stomach throwing him 3 feet away then appearing behind and hitting him again (this continues for 5 multiple hits) as for the final blow the user hits the enemy's jaw throwing him 5 feet above, then jumping and using both elbows to hit him again in the stomach making it a deathly drop for him.

*can be used once per battle*
*this can be used both by Amaya and Hinaru*
*Hinaru is co-creator of this jutsu*
P.S *for Hinaru, it is S Rank: 40 Chakra / 80 Damage*

can i submit summoning?

1. Yes you need to make it ninjutsu
2. The Death DRop jutsu for you must be A rank and used twice per battle and for Hinaru S rank used once per battle.

3. yes you can
mmm... I'm still special jounin so... i don't think i can make mine A rank >.>
if so that it should be A rank then i'll resubmit when i'm jounin
if piercing howl element is wrong pls notify me <.< i originally thought
it would be taijutsu so i'm not sure wat element was it supposed to be

(Futon: ketatamashii houkou) Piercing Howl
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a high pitch sound (howl) from the air which surrounds the enemy piercing their ears, making them vulnerable for until the echoes of it remains. the user then attacks by charging and kicking the enemy's stomach with his/her knee while hitting the head with his/her elbow, thus making it a lot more painful.

*can be used once per battle*
*this can be used both by Amaya and Hinaru*
*Hinaru is co-creator of this jutsu*
P.S *for Hinaru, it is S Rank: 40 Chakra / 80 Damage*

~futon is wind not sound jutsu

oh yeah do i submit my own summon here?
or do i need to make some kind of conract somewhere? if so...


(Kuchiyose: Usagi: ichigo) Summon: Rabbit: strawberry

Type: (Summoning) Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 05
Damage Points: 10
Description: Strawberry is one of the cutest rabbit there is, she is the basic summon of the Rabbit family and should only be used for training purposes; such as getting the basics for the summoning. She loves attention and is very gentle so she ealisy strays away from her summoner which should not happen.

*Must have signed the contract of the Rabbit (held by Amaya)
*This can only be used/taught by Amaya*
*This can only be handled by Amaya*

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(Kuchiyose: Usagi: Miruku) Summon: Rabbit: Milk

Type: (Summoning) Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: Milk is an intellegent rabbit, who is mostly dependend upon when spying the enemy; She uses her sharp hearing sense especially when she needs to spy from afar, not being noticed; she is small and will surely do her job well done though she only listens to the order of her summoner -Amaya.

*Must have signed the contract of the Rabbit (held by Amaya)
*This can only be used/taught by Amaya*
*This can only be handled by Amaya*

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(Kuchiyose: Usagi: kyouran) Summon: Rabbit: Fury

Type: (Summoning) Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: Fury is one of the fastest rabbit there is of the rabbit family. He uses lighting release that allows him to move with great speed and agility; especially when attacking the enemy with multiple hits, numbing them as well; he is tough and will not allow anyone to hold him except for Amaya.

*Must have signed the contract of the Rabbit (held by Amaya)
*This can only be used/taught by Amaya*
*This can only be handled by Amaya*

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almost forgot only 4 jutsu left that i can submit >.>

~Approved~
 
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(Raiton: Ikazuchi Tori (Lightning Style: Thunder Bird)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user shoots a bolt of pure lightning into the sky, the bolt then turns into a massive lightning bird, that’s extremely large. This bird can use upto A-Rank lightning jutsu, and if needed it can crash headon into the opponent causing a massive explosion.

Note: Useable once per battle.
~how long does it last?

Buin Off Sono Kyousei Wizards (Staff Of The Great Wizards)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (Depends on the jutsu used against the user)
Description: The user summons the ‘Staff of the great Wizards’, this staff is very powerful. And if used in the right way it allows the user to re-direct attacks of any element. The user simply twills the staff around, this blocks the attack and sends it back at the opponent.

Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
~ehhhh no =/
declined
 
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Water:Tentecle Strike (Suiton:Tentecle couldnt fin a definition Atakku)
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Type:Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per each turn)
Damage:0
Discription: The user does the necesery handsignes and thouches any body of water. As that happens under the enemy 8 tentecles form out of water appear. The tenticles can be as large as 50m long and 1m thick or they can be as small as 1m long and 10cm thick.The once the tentecles grab the enemy its very hard to escape. The tentecles dont hurt the enemy a lot(as much as a tight rope) but they are strong enough to hold even large summons.
*There must be a large source of water for this to be used
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*The tentecles last only 3 turns
*It can only be used 2 times per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing 2 turns
*the enemy must be standing on the water the user touched
~Approved~

Water:Giant Bulding (Suiton:Grand tou)
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:0
Description: THe user slams his hands into a huge body of water and a giant object appears out of water. The object can be a fortress, castle, basketball field, a huge wall, a house ect.The object is made of condense water so its parts are increadbly hard.(harder then steel) The object can be maximumly 5000m square(which is 50m wide and 100m in leght)and its hight can be maximum of 25m.
*There must be a large source of water for this to be used
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*The bulding last only 3 turns
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing turn
~Declined~
add abit more restriction to it


Summoning: Jaws(kuchiose Jaws)
Type:Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range:Short-Long
RAnk:S
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description:The user summons a giant shark named Jaws.(clasics rock)He is 150ft(50m or so) long and 50ft(17m or so) tall. He can use water jutsu up to Srank and he does water jutsu that has the user give water from his mouth better because he has a bigger mouth. He is a really fast swimmer. He is the boss of all sharks and he has a great nose that can smel blood from miles away.His scales are hard and can deflect most tai and weapon attacks.His skin color is black and he has a large ego. He has a giant chakra reserve.(kisame is part shark and he has lots of chakra so its logical for him to have a lot of chakra)
*There must be a large source of water for him to be summoned
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*Jaws lasts only 4 turns
*It can only be summoned 1 time per battle
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~declined.


Summoning: Sgon(kuchiose Sgon)
Type:Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range:Short-Long
RAnk:S
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description:Sgon is a giant whale shark who doesnt like a lot of fighting.He is 175ft(55m or so) long and 50ft(17m or so) tall. He can use water jutsu up to Arank and he does water jutsu that has the user give water from his mouth better because he has a bigger mouth.He can swim fast but slower then Jaws.He has no teeth normally but when he fights he can extend blade like teeth from his mouth.His eye sight and nose are great.He has a giant chakra reserve (kisame is part shark and he has lots of chakra so its logical for him to have a lot of chakra) but his chakra is slightly less then Jaws.
*There must be a large source of water for him to be summoned
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*He lasts only 5 turns
*It can only be summoned 1 time per battle
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~Declined~

Water: Bullet Orb(Suiton:kyuutai Teppoudama)
Rank:S
Range:Short
Type:Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per each turn)
Damage:0
Discription: THe user creates a 1m diameter orb out of water the orb can shoot small bullets from inside of it and each bullet is as strong as Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet and 5 bullets can be shot per turn.
*It lasts for 5 turns unless taken out by a powerfull jutsu
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
~declined~
make it last three turns
and only be used 2x per battle
 
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(Kuchiyose: Leviathan) Summoning Leviathan
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons a giant sea dragon (100m approximately) known as Leviathan, the mythical sea monster. Leviathan can not only use water jutsus, but it will also raise the damage of water jutsus by 10. It can also attack using its razor sharp teeth and its enormous tail. Leviathan can be used as a defence and protects the user by wrapping itself around him, it will completely block E – C rank jutsus and reduces the damage of B – A rank jutsus by 50% while summoned.
Note: Leviathan can only be summoned once per fight and it only lasts 4 turns.

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~ -.- ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh D E C L I N E D
i made the dragon summon
 
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(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Goubatsu ) - Summoning Technique: Goubatsu ♦ Eternal Punishment
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user calls forth the king of all Reptiles - the basilisk, this creature stands at a great height (same size as gamabunta). The basilisk holds the power of emitting poison from its mouth and spewing mass amounts of venemous liquid
• Can only be summoned once per battle.

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Summoning Technique: Kitsuha ♦ [Kuchyose no Jutsu: Kitsuha]
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 50 (+10 each round is kept summoned)
Damage Points: - (-5 to the user)
Description: The user summons a giant fox, called Kitsuha.Kitsuha is approx. 20 m tall and is able to turn biped, the fox is able to use Fire Jutsus up to (and including) A-Rank, and is able to protect against any Fire Jutsu of C-Rank and under without getting harmed.When the fox dies, or gets destroyed it's body turns into fire entirely and it burns the ground under it, leaving it heated for a period of time.Kitsuha has a caring personality towards everyone, accepting almost every person that summons her, she grew fond to Reido [Itachi] while he was young.
Is weak against:

-Water Style
-Wind style. [over B-rank]

Is strong against:
-Ice Style.
-Taijutsu.

-Must possess a Fox Summoning Scroll.
-Can be teached ONLY by Reido Kira.
-Can be used only by Reido Kira.
~Approved~


Earth Style: Metal Mineral Draining ♦ [Doton: Kane Kouseki no Gesuido]

Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: -
Description: The user inserts his hand into the ground, and he starts draining all Titanium and Iron minerals from the ground and turns all the ground under him into metal, making the opponent unable to create any type of hole in the ground under the user, and also the enemy is unable to go under the user.The metal covers approx. 15 m in length.
- May be used three times per battle.
- Must be used in locations that have many minerals like metal mines.
- May be used only by Reido Kira [Itachi].

~pending~
sounds like a custom element
ask rei to check it out


Projection Clones ♦ [Debari Bunshin]
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: A very advanced version of Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, the user creates three Kage Bunshins to which the user sends much more chakra than to regular clones, making the clones able to use Kekkei Genkai, and making them much smarter and able to create strategies by themselves.They also don't go down with D or C ranks techniques and are able to use all the elements the user has, up to (and including) S-Rank techs.
-Kage Bunshin can't be used after this.
-Can't be used after Kage Bunshin.
-May create up to 3 clones.
-May be used once per battle.
-May be used only by Reido [Itachi].
~pending~
well dude i am not sure.
dont the regular shadow clones able to use kg moves?
 
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