[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchyose no Jutsu: Ame Kyuu) - Summoning Techique: Rain Globe

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a globe, similar to the snow globes but with water instead of snow. This globe is infused with the user's chakra and to work, the user first needs to send his chakra to the clouds and connect it with the globe. Once done, the user can use it. The user can inser this chakra into the globe to manipulate the water inside of it, and will shake it, then, the rain that is falling will move according to how the user shake it and will take shape according to the shape the user gave to the water inside of the globe. Can only be summoned once and must be rainning.

-explain please: what would happen if you fuse it with other elements? for example raiton?-

(Kuchyose no Jutsu: Ame Kyuu) - Summoning Techique: Rain Globe

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a globe, similar to the snow globes but with water instead of snow. This globe is infused with the user's chakra and to work, the user first needs to send his chakra to the clouds and connect it with the globe. Once done, the user can use it. The user can inser this chakra into the globe to manipulate the water inside of it, and will shake it, then, the rain that is falling will move according to how the user shake it and will take shape according to the shape the user gave to the water inside of the globe. Can only be summoned once and must be rainning. The user cannot mix elemental chakra on the sphere.

I added that bold part. It wasnt supposed to infuse elemental chakra but since ppl can think i can do so, i added that

Rain globe? How big is the globe, does it trap opponent? More detail please.

 

[Ace]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton: Gogyou Kata’s (Water Style: Water Kata’s)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Range: Close
Description: Best used when in close combat, the user builds up the surrounding moisture around their fist, and at the last second they unleash the water into a razor sharp water jet. This attack gives the user the upperhand in that it is unexpected, and it gives extra leverage in taijutsu.

-limit it to 3 times per battle-

Suiton: Gogyou Kata’s (Water Style: Water Kata’s)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Range: Close
Description: Best used when in close combat, the user builds up the surrounding moisture around their fist, and at the last second they unleash the water into a razor sharp water jet. This attack gives the user the upperhand in that it is unexpected, and it gives extra leverage in taijutsu.
Note:Can only be used 3 times a battle.

How is it unexpected? No handsigns are needed?

 

[Kiwii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Genjutsu: Ombrophobia ( Ame Osore )

Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Note: Requires Rain
Description: Ombrophobia is the fear of Rain or being rainned upon. This genjutsu will make the opponent suffer the symptoms of this phobia. Being rainned uppon will start to make the opponent enter in a panic state with disabling shaking. The user will not be able to stand on his feet. The damage of this genjutsu will be caused by the feeling that the opponent has of being constantly hit by needles, wich go deeper and hurt even more as the time passes. Soon enough, the needles turn into acid, and will give the user the feeling of having is flesh desintegrated, and that they're just bone.
*this jutsu is not avoidable by chakra. The opponent must feel a great physical pain (not just stab himself or break a finger) or hurt the user*
*Can only be used by Amegakure ninjas*
Resubmit
-Make S rank, but Bijuu chakra still is enough to break genjutsu-

 

[Kiwii]

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Genjutsu: (Kaunta-TeHan: Rou Gobugari) Handseals Counter: Wax Depilation

Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: As the opponent intends to preform handseals or concentrating, the user casts a genjutsu where the opponent feels like all of his hairs have been waxed. This will make him feel a spasm of pain at the surface of his skin, and he will stop preforming handseals in a suden. If the opponent is 2000 post bellow the user won't be able to notice this is a gejutsu and will have a spasm everytime he does handseals.
*After 3 times he will notice, exept if he is really stupid*

xD
|Approved|

Genjutsu: ShapeShift (Tatazumai Shifuto)

Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This will change the image that the opponent has of himself. The user can change anything, from giving disabling wounds or amputating several limbs to transforming the opponent on another being.
The victim will not be able to sense what is gone and will feel any extra changes. This is limited to 2 parts of the body per turn (Hand, Arm, Shoulder and one chest, Neck and Sternum, Rib Cage, Belly, Censorated, Butt, Lower back, Upper back, Head, Leg and finnaly Foot.) This jutsu rans off when the user wants and can only be released with someone own means, wich means no 3rds chakras or pain caused by others. If the user losses concentration caused by a mental of physical pain, the genjutsu is off aswell.
*No Kai*

|declined|

Genjutsu: Senses Manipulation ( Gokan Manipyure-shon)

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will be able to be in charge of a person's senses. This is a very raw genjutsu, but it has a tremendous downside: The user will only be able to trick one sense, meaning the others will still remaning the same.
The opponent can only escape the genjutsu by causing the user to feel extreme Physical or Mental pain.
Vision: You can control anything the opponent sees. Turning existing objects and beings invisible, bend and re-shape them or even create new things with motion.
Sound: Creates new sounds or manipulates existing sounds.
Smell: Can atract or repulse the opponent to extremes. It can also make some smells go.
Taste: There's not many applications for this sense in battles, but it can repulse the opponent so that he looses concentration.
Touch: This is what gives the damage to the jutsu. Can make the opponent feel anything at any part of his skin, being burns, smashes, cuts, penetrations or simple pressions, or even take away those, in order to prevent him from sensing vibrations.
*This jutsu can be used 3 times, after the effects run off (meaning that it can't be used while the other is still in effect) with the exeption of Touch, wich makes the jutsu be only used once per battle*

Ex: First I use Sound. After it rans off I can use 2 other jutsus and choose other or the same sense, but I can't choose Touch.

|Declined|
Oped.

 

[anbu kakashi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Majestic Mirror (Soudai Kikan)

Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close
Damage Points: N/A (if absorbed) (-5 to user)/ Same amount (if one absorbed) (-10 to user) or Total amount (if multiple absorbed) (-20 to user)
Chakra Cost: 50
Description: The user concentrates their focus straight ahead creating a transparent round film just a few feet from where the user’s vision focuses. With this transparent film, any incoming ninjutsu attack would be absorb. If one type of ninjutsu was to be absorbed, the user can fire off the absorbed attack back at the opponent with the same damage points and effect. But if absorbed by multiple elemental ninjutsu, the absorbed attack would be fired off as a non-elemental blast that would match the same attack powers of all the absorbed ninjutsu.
Note: Must have Sharingan activated
Note: When absorbing an attack(s), it can saved to use the following turn but if not used the following turn the absorbed attack(s) would be gone and not be able to fire off unless absorbed again; but if used to attack the following turn it would still count as a move
Note: Can only be absorb and fire off three times each
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi

|Declined|
Kind of Oped.

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Hoshiki Segari- Dan (Blue –Armor Dragon Bullet)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User Fires off a bullet that summons a powerful Dragon that can protect the user from 1-Srank attack or 2 A-ranks. Then It can Attack afterwards. Swallowing the opponent whole.
(Usable twice per battle)
(Takes 2 turns to create otherwise no other jutsu may be used that turn.)
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)
(Sword TO Gun Jutsu Cant Be Used For 2 Turns Afterwards)

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|Declined|
Oped

Name: Gose Rimido-Dan (Furious Dragon Bullet)
Rank: S
Type Attack
Range: Entire Arena
Chakra: 40
Damage: 70
Description: Turns any wall into a dragon.
(Takes 1 turn to create)
(No Other Dragons can be cast on the field while this is in play.)
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)
(Sword To Gun Jutsu Can't Be Used 2 turns)

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|Declined|
How does it turn any wall to a dragon...

Name: TeggaHorin- Dan (Iron-Fanged Cannon Dragon bullet)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage:80
Description: User Fires off a bullet that spawns a Dragon who shoots Earth bullets From its head. It can separate these heads to fire off multiple bullets or into one full head to fire off a cannon blast.
(Usable once per Battle)
(Takes Two turns to create or otherwise no other jutsu may be used.)
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)

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|Approved|

Name: Basada-Dan (Binding Chain Snake Bullet)
Rank:C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: User Fires off a bullet that becomes a Snake Made of Chain that cand bind a opponent.
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)

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|Approved|

Name: Doton: Doshinrido-Dan ( Earth Style: Dragon Wrath Quake)
Rank: A
Type: Defense/ Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 20 above ground 100 below
Description: Spawns a Dragon that when cause a massive earth quake. When Grouped together 5 of these dragons can Collapse a whole Mountain.
(Only usable with Sword to Gun Conversion)

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|Declined|
Re-Submission Of These Jutsu.
These May Seem As if They are Summons But They Aren't, They Serve there Purpose and Disappear like any other Jutsu. So Please Dont Decline. Its Comes From a Manga From Called Kurohime.
Plz VM or PM if More Information Is Needed.
And If Images Cant be Seen Plz Let Me Know. I really Want Theses Jutsu..

 

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Taijutsu Puppet [Taijutsu no Ningyou]

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Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15 (+10 every turn it's active)
Damage Points: 30
Description: The puppet user connects all his body parts to his puppet, and the puppet starts copying all of his moves.
-The Puppet can only copy Taijutsu techniques, and it cannot perform Ninjutsu.
-The user cannot perform any type of Ninjutsu Technique either during the time when he is connected to his puppet.
-May be used only by Reido Kira[Mitcheru]

I added another restriction on this jutsu[just in case a mod saw this before it got declined/approved so you guys won't think it's OP]

Iron Armor [Tetsu no Yoroi]

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary.
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: - (+10 Damage to every attack the puppet does)
Description: The user's puppet gets covered into an almost impenetrable Iron Armor, that lowers his speed, but increases the puppets hit strength and it's defence.
-May be used only by Reido Kira[Mitcheru]

|Make S rank, limit twice per battle|


Lightning Style: Lightning Speed Release [Raiton: Raikou Chisoku no Kaihou]

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Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: --
Description: The user covers himself in pure lightning, similar to an armor, that increases his speed greatly if he concentrates the lightning chakra into his feet, to the speed of lightning, it also gives him the ability to do very high jumps.
-Lasts 2 turns.
-May be used only by Reido Kira.

|Declined|

 

[Kiwii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Genjutsu: Ombrophobia ( Ame Osore )

Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Note: Requires Rain
Description: Ombrophobia is the fear of Rain or being rainned upon. This genjutsu will make the opponent suffer the symptoms of this phobia. Being rainned uppon will start to make the opponent enter in a panic state with disabling shaking. The user will not be able to stand on his feet. The damage of this genjutsu will be caused by the feeling that the opponent has of being constantly hit by needles, wich go deeper and hurt even more as the time passes. Soon enough, the needles turn into acid, and will give the user the feeling of having is flesh desintegrated, and that they're just bone.
*this jutsu is not avoidable by chakra. The opponent must feel a great physical pain (not just stab himself or break a finger) or hurt the user*
*Can only be used by Amegakure ninjas*
Resubmit
-Make S rank, but Bijuu chakra still is enough to break genjutsu-

Genjutsu: (Kaunta-TeHan: Rou Gobugari) Handseals Counter: Wax Depilation

Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: As the opponent intends to preform handseals or concentrating, the user casts a genjutsu where the opponent feels like all of his hairs have been waxed. This will make him feel a spasm of pain at the surface of his skin, and he will stop preforming handseals in a suden. If the opponent is 2000 post bellow the user won't be able to notice this is a gejutsu and will have a spasm everytime he does handseals.
*After 3 times he will notice, exept if he is really stupid*

xD
|Approved|

Genjutsu: ShapeShift (Tatazumai Shifuto)

Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This will change the image that the opponent has of himself. The user can change anything, from giving disabling wounds or amputating several limbs to transforming the opponent on another being.
The victim will not be able to sense what is gone and will feel any extra changes. This is limited to 2 parts of the body per turn (Hand, Arm, Shoulder and one chest, Neck and Sternum, Rib Cage, Belly, Censorated, Butt, Lower back, Upper back, Head, Leg and finnaly Foot.) This jutsu rans off when the user wants and can only be released with someone own means, wich means no 3rds chakras or pain caused by others. If the user losses concentration caused by a mental of physical pain, the genjutsu is off aswell.
*No Kai*

|declined|

Genjutsu: Senses Manipulation ( Gokan Manipyure-shon)

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will be able to be in charge of a person's senses. This is a very raw genjutsu, but it has a tremendous downside: The user will only be able to trick one sense, meaning the others will still remaning the same.
The opponent can only escape the genjutsu by causing the user to feel extreme Physical or Mental pain.
Vision: You can control anything the opponent sees. Turning existing objects and beings invisible, bend and re-shape them or even create new things with motion.
Sound: Creates new sounds or manipulates existing sounds.
Smell: Can atract or repulse the opponent to extremes. It can also make some smells go.
Taste: There's not many applications for this sense in battles, but it can repulse the opponent so that he looses concentration.
Touch: This is what gives the damage to the jutsu. Can make the opponent feel anything at any part of his skin, being burns, smashes, cuts, penetrations or simple pressions, or even take away those, in order to prevent him from sensing vibrations.
*This jutsu can be used 3 times, after the effects run off (meaning that it can't be used while the other is still in effect) with the exeption of Touch, wich makes the jutsu be only used once per battle*

Ex: First I use Sound. After it rans off I can use 2 other jutsus and choose other or the same sense, but I can't choose Touch.

|Declined|
Oped.

Genjutsu: Ombrophobia ( Ame Osore )

Rank: S
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Note: Requires Rain
Description: Ombrophobia is the fear of Rain or being rainned upon. This genjutsu will make the opponent suffer the symptoms of this phobia. Being rainned uppon will start to make the opponent enter in a panic state with disabling shaking. The user will not be able to stand on his feet. The damage of this genjutsu will be caused by the feeling that the opponent has of being constantly hit by needles, wich go deeper and hurt even more as the time passes. Soon enough, the needles turn into acid, and will give the user the feeling of having is flesh desintegrated, and that they're just bone.
*this jutsu is not avoidable by chakra. The opponent must feel a great physical pain (not just stab himself or break a finger) or hurt the user*
*Can be broken by Bijuu Chakra*

- Edited

Genjutsu: ShapeShift (Tatazumai Shifuto)

Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This will change the image that the opponent has of himself. The user can change anything, from giving disabling wounds or amputating several limbs to transforming the opponent on another being.
The victim will not be able to sense what is gone and will feel any extra changes. This is limited to 2 parts of the body and only once for the entire jutsu (Hand, Arm, Shoulder and one chest, Neck and Sternum, Rib Cage, Belly, Censorated, Butt, Lower back, Upper back, Head, Leg and finnaly Foot.) This jutsu rans off when the user wants and can only be released with someone own means, wich means no 3rds chakras or pain caused by others. If the user losses concentration caused by a mental of physical pain, the genjutsu is off aswell.
*No Kai*
*can only be used once per battle*
*takes 10 damage points to the user*

- Restricted - Only 2 parts can be changed and once for the entire jutsu. Can only be used once per battle. And it damages the user.

Genjutsu: Senses Manipulation ( Gokan Manipyure-shon)

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will be able to be in charge of a person's senses. This is a very raw genjutsu, but it has a tremendous downside: The user will only be able to trick one sense, meaning the others will still remaning the same.
The opponent can only escape the genjutsu by causing the user to feel extreme Physical or Mental pain.
Vision: You can control anything the opponent sees. Turning existing objects and beings invisible, bend and re-shape them or even create new things with motion.
Sound: Creates new sounds or manipulates existing sounds.
Smell: Can atract or repulse the opponent to extremes. It can also make some smells go.
Taste: There's not many applications for this sense in battles, but it can repulse the opponent so that he looses concentration.
Touch: This is what gives the damage to the jutsu. Can make the opponent feel anything at any part of his skin, being burns, smashes, cuts, penetrations or simple pressions, or even take away those, in order to prevent him from sensing vibrations.
*This jutsu can be used 2 times, after the effects run off (meaning that it can't be used while the other is still in effect) with the exeption of Touch, wich makes the jutsu be only used once per battle*

Ex: First I use Sound. After it rans off I can use 2 other jutsus and choose other or the same sense, but I can't choose Touch.

-Restricted - Only twice per battle. this is restricted enough, being that you can only manipulate 1 sense. This makes very fake genjutsus if not used carefully. I don't see it as overpowered as many jutsus around here.

|Over weeks limit|

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu:Taiyou Enjin Kiwa) Illusion Technique: Solar Ring Edge
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will activate the sharingan and will create flaming rings that will fly towards the oppponent, the user will then gather the rings into a huge ring that will surround the opponent, the user then will let their sharingan spin and then make the huge ring spin to the opponent, as it spins the opponent will feel dizzy and unable to perform jutsus for 3 turns. The opponent will only realise of this genjutsu is when they try to attack and fail.
Note: Can Only Be used 3 times per battle
Note: Must be taught by SinRival or Uchiha Kaito
Note: Must have sharingan

|Declined|

(Genjutsu:Kuro Mira-Burikka-Jiten) Illusion Technique: Dark Mirror - Flicker Spin
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will gather chakra into there sharingan eyes and by concentrating hard, they will appear as if the sharingan is spinning, the opponent will see a reflection of themselves in these spinning eyes, and will start to see many mirrors around them and the user will seem to flicker inbetween these mirrors, while the opponent is seeing there reflection in the user's eyes. When all this is happening the opponent will feel dizzy, and unable to battle. This jutsu can be stopped if the user closes there eyes or the opponent closes there eyes and covers there ears. The opponent will not know how to stop this at first, and will be hearing echos as this is jutsu is happening.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: User must have sharingan
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~

|Declined|

(Suiton:Hitoshirezu Kumo)Water Style: Hidden Cloud
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user focuses chakra into a mist/smoke and makes it bigger, that look like small clouds, then the user will release more chakra into the mist making it bigger, and then the user will make the chakra and transform the cloud into a cloak of smoke/mist and it can hide the user in the mist/smoke cloak. If the opponent attacks the cloak with any attack other than wind, it will hurt the user but not destroy the cloak, if wind jutsus are used, this cloak will be destroyed by the forces of wind.
Note: Can be used three times per battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~
Note: Must have mist/smoke in the air

|Approved|

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

First Submission :

Yomi no Rairin : Ashikiri ( Presence of Hell : Corrupted Mist )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30 ( + 5 each turn )
Damage: N/A
An advanced version of the Hidden Mist Technique, this creates a mist that is extremely dense ( since chakra upto that of an A rank is used instead of D rank level chakra ) and is completely merged with the user's fire chakra, which resists the opponent's efforts to blow the mist away ( fire is stronger than wind ), or even use a wind technique. The mist is hot as a result. Since the user's fire chakra is completely merged with the mist, the user can sense where the opponent is inside the mist - on the other hand, since the mist is thicker than the normal mist no normal ninja nor Sharingan users can see through it. Also, since the user's fire chakra is completely with the mist, no chakra or heat sensing ability will work correctly. The opponent cannot manipulate this mist with their jutsus that manipulate mist. The mist completely covers the arena and the opponent cannot get above the mist, though they can go underground.
Notes:
- Since the user's fire chakra is completely merged with the Mist, the user cannot use any Fire Techniques while this mist is active.
-While the user can use wind techniques, the corresponding rank/damage of wind techniques used is reduced by one rank.
- Byakugan users can see through the mist.
- User takes 5 damage each turn due to the strain of maintaining the mist.

|Declined|
Merging that much fire chakra would cause the mist vapor to evaporate.

Second Submission :

Doton : Hangurichidou no Jutsu ( Earth Release : Hungry Shrine Technique )
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30 ( + 5 each turn )
Damage: N/A normally, 60 if the opponent goes underground.
A technique where the user forces their Earth Element Chakra into the ground, and forms a layer of spikes so that the opponent, on going underground, is stabbed by the spikes. If the opponent changes the terrain ( for example, by creating an Earth Plateau ) the spikes grow under the surface of the Earth Plateau as well, so the opponent cannot go underground there.
Notes:
- The user may not go underground either.
- The technique does no damage unless the opponent goes underground.

|Approved|

Third Submission :

Akuma Ninpou no Rokubi : Soukeisenmetsu ( Demonic Arts of the Six Tails : Complete Annihilation )
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
The Jinchuuriki of the Rokubi draws upon the chakra of the Rokubi, and begins to collect it all into a small sphere in their palm. When every single bit of chakra ( except that which is necessary to keep the Rokubi alive and formed ) of the Rokubi is collected, the user slams their hands together, creating a column of blue chakra around the user. The column then spreads out into a huge wave , engulfing the whole of the battlefield in a blaze of pure chakra, containing nearly the entire power of the Rokubi itself.
Notes:
- The user loses 60 health from channeling so much of the Rokubi's power.
- The user cannot use any other S Rank technique till the end of the battle.
- The user cannot go into Demon Cloak form, or use even one tail of the Rokubi's power till the end of the battle.
- Can only be used once per match.
|Declined|

Fourth Submission :

Akuma Ninpou no Rokubi : Mugendai ( Demonic Arts of the Six Tails : Infinity )
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
A cut, or a multitude of small cuts appears on the palm of the Jinchuuriki of the Rokubi. The chakra of the Rokubi then leaks out, fast enough to be almost instantaneous, since the blood, which contains the user's chakra is exposed to the air and acts as a focal point for the chakra.
If one cut forms, then the energy blasts forward in a widening beam. If a multitude of cuts form, then a barrage of small spheres flies forward.
The chakra of the Bijuu is highly dangerous to any other person, since the foreign chakra of the Rokubi could poison the person's chakra system, as well as the blast of energy rending their skin and bones apart.
Notes:
- The user loses 10 health from channeling so much of the Rokubi's power.
- The user's palm becomes raw, limiting their Taijutsu capabilities
- The user's blood will not clot, whatever is used, even to the highest of medical techniques and the cuts will always bleed.

|Declined|

 

[Lord of Kaos.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Multi-Advanced Puppet Control ( taju koudo Kugutsu)
Rank:A
Type: Supplemantry
Range:short-mid
Chakra Cost:30 (-10 per turn that its active)
Damage: 0
Description: The user makes many threads out of chakra and attaches them to puppets to control more puppets and control each with better ability making the puppets faster and more flexible. The amount of puppets controled depends on rank
Jonin: 3 with great ability 4 with average abilty
S-rank:4with great ability 5 with average abilty
Sanin: 5 with great ability 7 with average abilty
Kage and higher:7 with great ability 8 with average abilty
*Can only be used by puppet users
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan

-declined: too many puppets and you are not Sasori, not your chakra supply is sufficient enough to keep these many puppets in the battlefield.-

Rising Needle Strike (joushou hari atakku)
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Long-Mid- Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The users puppet implants hundred needles into the ground and a they instantly come out of the ground going everywhere except where the user stands. The needles are wrapped around paper bombs.
*The user needs to be a puppet user
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
*Can only be used 1 time per puppet and max of 3 times.

-declined: OP for A rank-

Reposting some

Multi-Advanced Puppet Control ( taju koudo Kugutsu)
Rank:A
Type: Supplemantry
Range:short-mid
Chakra Cost:30 (-10 per turn that its active)
Damage: 0
Description: The user makes many threads out of chakra and attaches them to puppets to control each with better ability making the puppets faster and more flexible.
Note: Unlike the normal Puppetry Tech where you use the jutsu 1 time for every puppet you can control at the same time it (ex. you can control 2 puppets at once you have to use the puppet jutsu 2 times as well)just by using this jutsu 1 time you can control every puppet you can control at the same time.(ex. you can control 3 puppets at once you only have to use this jutsu 1 time to control all 3 of the puppets)

|Approved|
No more than 3 puppets can be controlled at once.


Needle Strike (hari atakku)
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Long-Mid- Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The users puppet sends hundred needles out of its mouth to attack the opponant with great accuracy and power(better then Hidden Needles). Also the needles are wrapped around paper bombs.
*The user needs to be a puppet user
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
*Can only be used 1 time per puppet and max of 3 times.
|Declined|

Water Chakra Distubance(Suiton:chakra disuta-bu)
Rank:A
Type:Supplemantry
Range: Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage:0
Description:The user sends his chakra through water and the part of the water where the users enemy is standing gets filled with chakra and breaks the enemys chakra which he uses to stand on water. Shortly:the users opponant cant stand on water and falls in the water.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
*Can only be used 3 times
*Can only be used if both the user and the enemy are standing on water
*Can only be used by wave ninja


Make C rank
Water:Twin Water Dragons(Suiton:tsuin Suiryuudan)
Rank:A
Type:attack
Range:short-long
Chakra cost:30
Damage:60
Description:The user creates a giant rushing water projectile in the shape of a dragon that can level anything in its path just like the water dragon but when the twin dragon opens its mouth an other smaler dragon appears.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
*Can only be used 3 times
*Can only be used by wave ninja
|Declined|

Water:Summoning Clone(Suiton:kuchiose bunshin)
Rank:A
Type:Supplemantry
Range:short
Chakra cost:30(+7 per turn)
Damage:0
Description:The user creates a water clone of the enemys summoning.If the summonning is too big(bigger then 75feet the clone apperas as a smaller version thats 75 feet also gamabunto is 100 feet) The clone cant use any jutsu and dissapears if hit 3 times or 1 time with a strong jutsu.The clone is weaker then the orj and if the orj summonning disseapears so those the clone.Only 1 clone can be made with this jutsu.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
|Declined|
*Can only be used 2 times
*Can only be used by wave ninja
*Lasts 3 turns

 

[Shig]

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Fire Style: Fire Insertion [Katon:Houka no Sounnyu]

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Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user's puppet reveals a metal insertion, inside it's mouth from which it can shoot a large amount of fire.
-May be used only by Reido Kira[Mitcheru]

|Approved|

Summoning Technique: Ancient Imperial [Kuchyose no Jutsu: Amatsufurui]

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: Probably the strongest puppet in Mitcheru's arsenal, that is used as a last resort.Amatsufurui resembles a tall man, his face completely covered in white, except his light, blue eyes resemble a pale skin, his kimono resembles one of a Japanese Noble's, thus not complete.Under his Kimono he has a thick silver armor, and under it there is an arsenal of weapons that the puppet can shoot at the user's will, also Amatsufurui has the ability to use up to two elements of the user's choice, and can use of that element up to B rank[including costums that are dedicated for him/other puppets in Mitcheru's arsenal].Amatsufurui isn't able to use poison, nor is he able to defend properly against elemental combos, and since the puppet is very heavy due to it's armor, and high weapon arsenal it moves very slow, in comparison to other, lighter puppets.
-The elements Amatsufurui can use in a battle must be specified when he gets summoned, in order to not create confusion.
-May be used only by Reido Kira[Mitcheru].

|Declined|
Specific which elements it can use here!

 

[Alucard]

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(Kuchyose no Jutsu: Ame Kyuu) - Summoning Techique: Rain Globe

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a globe, similar to the snow globes but with water instead of snow. This globe is infused with the user's chakra and to work, the user first needs to send his chakra to the clouds and connect it with the globe. Once done, the user can use it. The user can inser this chakra into the globe to manipulate the water inside of it, and will shake it, then, the rain that is falling will move according to how the user shake it and will take shape according to the shape the user gave to the water inside of the globe. Can only be summoned once and must be rainning. The user cannot mix elemental chakra on the sphere.

I added that bold part. It wasnt supposed to infuse elemental chakra but since ppl can think i can do so, i added that

Rain globe? How big is the globe, does it trap opponent? More detail please.

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O________O is just a globe like the snow globes but with water instead xD

(Kuchyose no Jutsu: Ame Kyuu) - Summoning Techique: Rain Globe

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a small globe, similar to the snow globes but with water instead of snow, it has only 15cm diametre. This globe is infused with the user's chakra and to work, the user first needs to send his chakra to the clouds and connect it with the globe. Once done, the user can use it. The user can inser this chakra into the globe to manipulate the water inside of it, and will shake it, then, the rain that is falling will move according to how the user shake it and will take shape according to the shape the user gave to the water inside of the globe. Can only be summoned once and must be rainning. The user cannot mix elemental chakra on the sphere.

|Approved|

(Kaoriwaza: Kaori Kassha) - Olfactic Arts: Paralyzing Aroma

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will use his chakra to amplify his odor, this will turn it to a pleasent aroma. Once the opponent smells this scent, the user's chakra will act on the opponent's nervous system, paralizing him for 1 turn

|Pending|
Get either rei or Hells approval as well.
Hellsbadass: Declined. this jutsu is based on medical jutsu. The reason is bcz my man of love jutsu is almost as similar to this. The only reason it got approved because i have to use medical jutsu methods to increase and release the pheromones thats in my body
Rei: I agree with Grim about this. You need to be able to control your inner system up to that point. Also, to be more accurate about it, everyone has already their own scent and sound, we manage to smell or hear it after years of meditation practice and it is not paralyzing. It is a state so hard to achieve that I am not even dreaming about it yet.

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( 100,000 kengeki gachin )- 100,000 weapons clash


Type:Attack, defence
Rank: b
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:50
Description: by releasing the seal of the 100,000 weapons on your armor , clothes .. etc , the 100,000 ninja weapons slashs the opponent like an raining storm ( could be powered with lightening attacks ) , or you can use them to protect yourself as an storm like dancing weapons all around you

|Declined|

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

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(Doton: Sou Jukusei Toburai) Premature Burial
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakara Cost: 40
Damage: None( -10 to the user each time used)
Description: The user will send chakara secretly into the ground, eventually the 10 meter area will become infused with the chakara of the user without the opponents notice. Then the earth around the opponent will start to slowly pull the opponent into the ground and bury them in the earth quietly without the opponent knowing but for this to work the opponent must physically step on the ground infused with the user's chakara once stepping on the ground the opponent will be caught there and cannot move anymore as they are being dragged down, the user is also able to chose the depth and the pressure that is exerted on the opponent's body. Because the user uses his own chakara to drag the opponent down the earth will not be able to be broken out of. Can only be used 3 time per battle.

-how can he not know after a while? O_O and you also need physical limits, like the "area" you are creating how long can it be?-

(Soshi Taijutsu) Elemental Taijutsu
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium
Chakara Cost: 40
Damgae: +15 to all Taijutsu(-5 per turn active)
Description: By focusing on the different elemental chakara's the user is able to manipulate them to fight in hand to hand combat while using their power. This jutsu is considered to be taijutsu and not ninjutsu.
Fire: The user hands and feet become fiery and burn with intense heat, giving the user flaming strikes. And can fire blast of fire opponent.
Wind: The users hands and feet become covered in wind chakara and gain immense cutting power. And can fire wond blast at the opponent.
Water: The user hands and feet become covered with water and now have cutting power and have the user's hands have the abilty to handle immense heat. And can fire blast of water at the opponent.
Lightning: The user's hands and feet become covered with lightning and can use this to cut stronger, shock the opponent, and can send blast of lightning.
Earth: The user's hands and feet become much harder and give a stronger impact when meeting contact and allow the user to fire needles or rocks of earth at the opponent.
~This jutsu does not have a time limit itself for its not a just a jutsu but a method of fighting. It can be activated at any period of time and released at any period of time. As long as its active the user is damaged in small amounts. The user can switch between elements, but the user cannot use jutsus of that element they are controlling~

approved
|This shouldn't have been approved, it seems to be a copy of my zatoichi taijutsu... =/|

(Raiton Roddo) Lightning Rod
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakara Cost: 40
Damage: +60 to whatever jutsu it redirects (-25 to the user)
Description: The user will focus lightning chakara all around their body. When there is an incoming lightning jutsu coming towards the user the use will redirect all the lightning into their body and then immediately redirect it towards anywhere the user wishes. Because the lightning is being redirected and not absorbed the user can redirect any amount. The lightning jutsu will be sent back with more power than it has regularly, giving it more power and speed. This jutsu will send back any rank lightning jutsu that is used, but after the jutsu is completed the user will not be able to use lightning jutsu for 3 turns. This jutsu can only be used 2 times per battle.

-declined: you are not immune to lighting to absorb it and then re direct it-

(Doton: Sou Jukusei Toburai) Premature Burial
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakara Cost: 40
Damage: None( -10 to the user each time used)
Description: The user will send chakara secretly into the ground, eventually the 10 meter area around the user will become infused with the chakara of the user without the opponents notice. Then the earth around the opponent will start to slowly pull the opponent into the ground and bury them in the earth quietly without the opponent knowing until they step on the ground, they will be caught there and cannot move anymore as they are being dragged down by the earth, the user is also able to chose the depth and the pressure that is exerted on the opponent's body. Because the user uses his own chakara to drag the opponent down the earth will not be able to be broken out of. Can only be used 3 time per battle.
|Declined|
Still seems a bit Oped.

(Raiton Roddo) Lightning Rod
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakara Cost: 40
Damage: +60 to whatever jutsu it redirects (-25 to the user)
Description: The user will focus lightning chakara all around their body. When there is an incoming lightning jutsu coming towards the user the lightning will reflect off the user into any direct he wishes. The lightning is never absorbed but instead reflected off by the lightning chakara on the users' body because the lightning is being redirected and not absorbed the user can redirect any amount. The lightning jutsu will be sent back with more power than it has regularly, giving it more power and speed. This jutsu will send back any rank lightning jutsu that is used. But after the jutsu is completed the user will not be able to use lightning jutsu for 3 turns. This jutsu can only be used 2 times per battle.
|Declined|

Noob Arts: Intense Insanity (Shinmai Bugei: Kyooretsu Fuuten)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakara cost: 40
Damage: 80(-10 to the user)
Description: The user begins to say and do things of complete insanity that no regular member would do, as soon as the opponent see or hears a single piece of noob material they will become paralyzed with confusion and will begin to damage themselves because of the noob material. The opponent will become unable to move or even think and will remain that way for one entire turn. The user will only be able to use 1 other jutsu on the the same turn this jutsu is used. This jutsu is not a genjutsu or can be avoided by someone who believes they are immune to noob material, because they are not.
|Declined|

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Gamasui)- Toad Acid
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80(+10 if the opponent gets Hit with The toad acid)
Description: The user Spits out Acidic Bodily fluids That can Severely Burn The Opponent.The User can manipulate the Chakra in the Acidic Fluid to make a Shield to defend against an in coming attack.
Note: can Only Be Three times Per battle
Note: Can Only Be used By Minato1
Note: This Justu cannot harm the user at all by all means necessary.
|Declined|[/B
Acid is a CE.]

(Kyojingama Ganma-Rei Heki)- Giant Toad Gamma-Ray Burst
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range:Long
Chakra Cost: 40(+20 When the Giant Toad Explodes)
Damage: 80
Description: The user Creates a A giant toad made out of the user's Chakra.When the user performs a Specific Hand sign(Dog)the Giant Toad Sets of a 10km Explosion that destroys everything in its path.The explosion looks like A Gamma-Ray explosion in Space.

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Note: can Only Be Once Per battle
Note: Can Only Be used By Minato1
Note: This Justu Cannot Harm the User even if he is in range of the blast.
*This Justu can Nearly Cause death because of the chakra expense of this justu*
Note: The User can't use any Toad Related justu Next turn.
|Declined|Oped and doesn't fix criteria for forbidden jutsu.

 

[Sora.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: kyojin Shuriken)-Water Style: Giant Shuriken
Type: Attack
Rank:B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description: Using a water source, the user creates a giant shuriken that are thrown at speeds and can be avoided by earth or fire jutsus of the same rank or higher.

*can only be used by Hiroki
*can be used upto 5 times per battle
*can only be taught by Hiroki
|Approved|

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

kuchiyose nu jutsu (summoning jutsu)
rank: S
type: supplementary
range: short-lomg
chakra: 40
damage: n/a
description: the user will summon forth a huge warrior of any given element (fire/water/lightning/wind/earth only made of 1 element though) the warior will be about this size

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and looks like that just made of an element

the warrior has a sword of the element and armor of that given element on top of his body so the opponent first has to destroy the armor then destroy the warrior
NOTES
1 time per battle
lasts 4 turns
in order to control the warrior (it is controlled sorta like a puppet)
if the warrior is 5 meters or more away from the user the user wont be able to control it
|Declined|

summoning: white tiger cubs (kuchiyose howaido tora kabu)
names: sora and shirohoshi
rank: S
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 40
damage: n/a
description: the user will summon two tiger cubs (about the size of an over large bull dog) the cubs hold a special swords in there mouths that have two blades (blade handle blade) and where a strong armor that is very hard to crack they also where an extremely sharp spike at the tip of there tails with paralyzing poison on it as well they are exceptionally fast amongst tigers and have very strong chakra control they can use different techniques to sharpen/extend there blades (to be posted)
NOTE even though they hold the swords in there mouths the can still open there mouths wide enough to bite someone (though they wont make huge cuts)
|Pending|

raiton: cero (lightning style: zero)
type: attack
rank: A
range: short long
chakra: 30
damage: 60
description: the user will create a small ball of lightning the lightning will then shoot forward like a huge lazar and incinerate anything in its path
|Declined|

raiton: gran rey cero (grand king zero)
rank: S
type: attack
range: short long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: a bigger and faster and more powerful version of cero
|Declined|

 

[Hokage]

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(Kuchiyose: Fawkes) Summoning Fawkes
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons a giant phoenix (100m approximately) and is the Lord of phoenixes. Fawkes can not only use fire jutsus, but it will also raise the damage of fire jutsus by 10. It can also attack using its big razor sharp talons and its powerful beak. Fawkes can be used as a defence and protects the user with its enormous wings, it will completely block E – C rank jutsus and reduces the damage of B – A rank jutsus by 50% while summoned.
Note: Fawkes drains a huge amount of charka from the user as it has various abilities, it can only be summoned once per fight and it only lasts 4 turns.
|Declined|
Remove the highlighted. One element per summon.

is it ok now?

 

[Gatsndshanks]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Nami Hijutsu: Issen Shigai - Wave Secret Arts: Thousand corpse

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Rank: S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 1 (Each striking body)
Description: The user draws out water from the earth to create a mass amount of bodies which attack the opponent recklessly, although despite their appearence, these bodies are fragile, thus after dealing a hit - the body liquifies.

|Declined|
Stick to the jutsu outline chart.

Nami Hijutsu: Rekisuu - Wave Secret Arts: One's Fate

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Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra:40
Damage: 80
Description: Sending immense water chakra into the ground, massive spikes erupt around the user in a circular formation which spreads along the entire field.

|Declined|
Previously existing jutsu.

Nami Hijutsu: Gekirin - Wave Secret Arts: Imperial wrarth

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Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: From underneath the foe, tendrils of water shoot out on a mass scale, whirling around the opponent and creating a catastrophic whirlpool

|Approved|

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