[WIND] with Selendrile sensei (completing)

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I swear my heart raced when I saw @bold!!! I'm in trouble aren't I.:(

Urm what i'm thinking is that, let's saw you and I are in a spar, and then we are short range from each other, I start to perform this technique, now you seeing me bring my hands together would like to react, you form a single hand seal and release lightning which travels extremely fast, due to us being at short range, your could have performed your hand seal and released the lightning when i'm probably at my 3rd hand seal, what i'm saying is, I require four hand seals and you require one, you can intercept my formation of hand seals anytime.
That is what we call a time-frame breach. If the wind was your first technique, there is no way I could release the lightning before you release the wind, because your first technique always has to happen before I can use mine.
 

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That is what we call a time-frame breach. If the wind was your first technique, there is no way I could release the lightning before you release the wind, because your first technique always has to happen before I can use mine.
Yes sensei your are right sorry I left that part out., if the ind jutsu was used as the first then your counter is invalid. But if the wind jutsu is used as asecond or third jutsu, think ypur counter have a chance. Don't you think?
 

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Yes sensei your are right sorry I left that part out., if the ind jutsu was used as the first then your counter is invalid. But if the wind jutsu is used as asecond or third jutsu, think ypur counter have a chance. Don't you think?
That's very situational, so I couldn't really say with any sense of certainty.
 

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Lmao. Okay sensei. You've cleared it up, are we ready to move on?
No. >_> We aren't. >_>

(Fūton: Sebeti Otoshi) - Wind Release: Tornado Drop
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will create a tornado of wind to trap their target/s and then by controlling with their fan cause the tornado to crush them down into the ground.
Note: Must have a Fan

Focus chakra into your fan, and then release a tornado from it. When it hits my clone, swing your fan in an arc above you, around to the opposite direction to control the tornado to crush my clone into the ground.

-Creates clone-

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(Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. The user will use the following hand seals to activate the technique Tiger → Snake → Rat → Snake → Tiger. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.
 

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:shy: go-me-na-sai. :T_T: please sensei forgive Meh!!!

How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, using the fan that his sensei had given him before, sasuke channels his chakra to his hands and through to the fan, sasuke then prepares to swing the fan horizontally from his left to right, he then focuses on the chakra he channeled to The fan, using nature manipulation he transform it into wind, sasuke then does the swing releasing the wind chakra, right before its released sasuke uses shape manipulation to form the wind into a tornado, as the wind tornado heads towards the clone sasuke focuses on it, as it hits the clone, with his(sasuke) hands still on the fan sasuke swings the fan in an arc vertically from down to up, after that he turns to the opposite direction and then swings the fan vertically downward, this crashing the clone that was trapped in the tornado on the ground crushing him in the process causing him to poof.
Advantages
It traps the victim, which means that once the victim is hit by this jutsu I don't think he can perform any other jutsu until this one is over.
Disadvantages
I can really see a disadvantage, its a swing of the fan and a tornado is released, no hand seals to slow It up or make openings. But the disadvantage here is that not everyone, have a fan. :p
your counter
Your counter is...absolute. A pure defense against this wind technique, its practically a wall of water which the tornado will hit, the water would prevent the tornado from getting close to you.
The Speed Rate
I would rate this technique as fast, its basically a swing of the fan and a wind tornado is released.
 

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:shy: go-me-na-sai. :T_T: please sensei forgive Meh!!!

How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, using the fan that his sensei had given him before, sasuke channels his chakra to his hands and through to the fan, sasuke then prepares to swing the fan horizontally from his left to right, he then focuses on the chakra he channeled to The fan, using nature manipulation he transform it into wind, sasuke then does the swing releasing the wind chakra, right before its released sasuke uses shape manipulation to form the wind into a tornado, as the wind tornado heads towards the clone sasuke focuses on it, as it hits the clone, with his(sasuke) hands still on the fan sasuke swings the fan in an arc vertically from down to up, after that he turns to the opposite direction and then swings the fan vertically downward, this crashing the clone that was trapped in the tornado on the ground crushing him in the process causing him to poof.
Advantages
It traps the victim, which means that once the victim is hit by this jutsu I don't think he can perform any other jutsu until this one is over.
Disadvantages
I can really see a disadvantage, its a swing of the fan and a tornado is released, no hand seals to slow It up or make openings. But the disadvantage here is that not everyone, have a fan. :p
your counter
Your counter is...absolute. A pure defense against this wind technique, its practically a wall of water which the tornado will hit, the water would prevent the tornado from getting close to you.
The Speed Rate
I would rate this technique as fast, its basically a swing of the fan and a wind tornado is released.
Looks good.

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(Fūton: Fūjin no Jutsu) - Wind Release Dust Cloud Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the Bird hand seal the user creates a stream of high velocity wind combined with scouring dust. The completed technique is directed through overlapping hands.

Focus your chakra, and then perform the bird hand seal. After doing so, release a stream of wind from your mouth that will pick up dirt from the ground to make it more deadly. Then send it forward at my clone by overlapping both of your hands.

-Creates clone-

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(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.
 

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How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, channeling it to his mouth, sasuke then performs the bird hand seal, while he focuses on the chakra he sent to his mouth,using nature manipulation to transform the chakra into wind, sasuke then opens his mouth and release the wind chakra in form of a stream through the use of shape manipulation, the wind that sasuke spits out picks of tiny materials(dirt) from the ground, sasuke then brings his hands together to overlap them and then he sends the wind to the made clone.
Advantages
It can also cause temporary blindness due to dust particles it picked up. It can also be mixed with fire to increase it damaging capabilities(I think)
Disadvantages
It picks up dirt/dust particles, which when mixed with the ferocious wind, it can reduce the users vision range, in order words the opponent cannot be seen, also making the user to not know what the opponent is doing. Since he cant see him.
your counter
Your counter is good. Saving yourself from the wind technique, you are able to appear behind me and do some damages to me, cause since the wind pick up dust/dirt I won't have a clear vision of you, so I wouldn't know when you would have used the hiding like a mole technique and you are free to attack me from behind.
The Speed Rate
Its fast, after the formation of one hand seal, the user releases wind by overlapping his hands. That's all.
 

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How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, channeling it to his mouth, sasuke then performs the bird hand seal, while he focuses on the chakra he sent to his mouth,using nature manipulation to transform the chakra into wind, sasuke then opens his mouth and release the wind chakra in form of a stream through the use of shape manipulation, the wind that sasuke spits out picks of tiny materials(dirt) from the ground, sasuke then brings his hands together to overlap them and then he sends the wind to the made clone.
Advantages
It can also cause temporary blindness due to dust particles it picked up. It can also be mixed with fire to increase it damaging capabilities(I think)
Disadvantages
It picks up dirt/dust particles, which when mixed with the ferocious wind, it can reduce the users vision range, in order words the opponent cannot be seen, also making the user to not know what the opponent is doing. Since he cant see him.
your counter
Your counter is good. Saving yourself from the wind technique, you are able to appear behind me and do some damages to me, cause since the wind pick up dust/dirt I won't have a clear vision of you, so I wouldn't know when you would have used the hiding like a mole technique and you are free to attack me from behind.
The Speed Rate
Its fast, after the formation of one hand seal, the user releases wind by overlapping his hands. That's all.
Lovely.

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(Fūton: Renkuudan) - Wind Style: Drilling Wind Bullet
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Originally Gaara's technique, different characters will need to perform handseals in order to imbue the large amount of chakra needed into thier lungs. The user will then pound thier stomach to increase the pressure as they release a huge spiraling sphere of wind, which is strong enough to do major damage to even a Summoning like Gamabunta.

Focus your chakra into your lungs, and then perform some random hand seals. Then after the chakra is focused, pound on your stomach to increase the pressure placed on the chakra. Then release a huge spiraling sphere of chakra from your mouth, aimed directly at my clone. It should hit and fling him back a long ways.

-Creates clone-

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( Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.
 

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How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, focuses it into his lungs, sasuke then performs some random hand seals, and as he performs it, he uses nature manipulation to transform the chakra into wind, sasuke then uses his right hand to pound his gut building pressure on the wind chakra that's in his lung, as it is then forced through to his mouth, aiming for the clone, sasuke opens his mouth and let's pressured and forced wind chakra to be released at the clone, but right before its released sasuke uses shape manipulation to form the wind into a sphere.
Advantages
It travels fast once released. The user can release more than one sphere of the wind bullet.(using how shukaku used it in its fight againt naruto),
Disadvantages
I don't know if there is a disadvantage here. Cause it says perform some hand seals, it could be 2,3 or 4. Maybe more. But if its more then it can be a disadvantage, but if it Isn't, well I don't know if there is a disadvantage
your counter
I don't think your counter can work. First the ranking , second I think that the wind would push back the flames at you or rather get ignited by the fire jutsu and travel back at you. And it would either nullify the shuriken in the fire, or also Send them back at you.
The Speed Rate
I would say fast. Form some handseals then Pound your stomach and a wind bullet is released. Seems simple hence why I said its fast.
 

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How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, focuses it into his lungs, sasuke then performs some random hand seals, and as he performs it, he uses nature manipulation to transform the chakra into wind, sasuke then uses his right hand to pound his gut building pressure on the wind chakra that's in his lung, as it is then forced through to his mouth, aiming for the clone, sasuke opens his mouth and let's pressured and forced wind chakra to be released at the clone, but right before its released sasuke uses shape manipulation to form the wind into a sphere.
Advantages
It travels fast once released. The user can release more than one sphere of the wind bullet.(using how shukaku used it in its fight againt naruto),
Disadvantages
I don't know if there is a disadvantage here. Cause it says perform some hand seals, it could be 2,3 or 4. Maybe more. But if its more then it can be a disadvantage, but if it Isn't, well I don't know if there is a disadvantage
your counter
I don't think your counter can work. First the ranking , second I think that the wind would push back the flames at you or rather get ignited by the fire jutsu and travel back at you. And it would either nullify the shuriken in the fire, or also Send them back at you.
The Speed Rate
I would say fast. Form some handseals then Pound your stomach and a wind bullet is released. Seems simple hence why I said its fast.
Rank wise, my counter would work. B-rank fire cancels out against A-rank wind. Also, the size of the techniques have to be considered. Yours is a large wind blast that has enough power to push large summons. Mine is simply shuriken with fire on them. Additionally, it's more of a medium to slow technique, than a fast one.
 

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Rank wise, my counter would work. B-rank fire cancels out against A-rank wind. Also, the size of the techniques have to be considered. Yours is a large wind blast that has enough power to push large summons. Mine is simply shuriken with fire on them. Additionally, it's more of a medium to slow technique, than a fast one.
Okay I understand, so the size of the wind bullet would cancel out your fired shuriken???

:shy: my last reply was horrible!!! Kill me now! Should I redo the technique?
 

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Okay I understand, so the size of the wind bullet would cancel out your fired shuriken???

:shy: my last reply was horrible!!! Kill me now! Should I redo the technique?
Not cancel out, but the size of the fire would not be sufficient to defend against the wind. As long as you understand what part of your description was wrong, you don't have to rewrite it.
 

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Not cancel out, but the size of the fire would not be sufficient to defend against the wind. As long as you understand what part of your description was wrong, you don't have to rewrite it.
If it won't cancel out, then would the fired shuriken be over powered by the wind due to its size?

And yeah I understand my wrong areas, forst the speed should have been slow, due to the formation of some hand seals and then again pounding on one's stomach. I shouldn't have based the counter on ranking, once again I forget about elemental chakra strengths and weaknesses, I should have based it on its size. Am I wrong?
 

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If it won't cancel out, then would the fired shuriken be over powered by the wind due to its size?

And yeah I understand my wrong areas, forst the speed should have been slow, due to the formation of some hand seals and then again pounding on one's stomach. I shouldn't have based the counter on ranking, once again I forget about elemental chakra strengths and weaknesses, I should have based it on its size. Am I wrong?
Yes, the size of fire technique is not adequate to defend from the wind. You are correct with the rest. :p
 

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Marvelous. May we continue?
No, we cannot. :|

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(Fūton: Kakeami no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Cast Net Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user using a giant folding fan or giant fan will swing it towards the enemy summoning a gust of wind that then takes the form of a net and slices through the opponent. A standard user can perform this technique by using a sequence of 5 hand seals.

Focus your chakra, and then perform a sequence of five hand seals. Then release a gust of wind that takes the form of a net. Direct this net of wind at my clone, cutting him when it makes contact with him.

-Creates clone-

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(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.
 

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How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, channeling it to his mouth from his gut, sasuke then forms 5 hand seals while simultaneously transforming the chakra into wind, sasuke takes aim at the clone and then opens his mouth the release the gust of wind, as its released an heads towards the clone, sasuke makes use of shape manipulation to form gust of wind into a net, with the net being extremely sharp that once in contact with th clone the clone is sliced into bits and poofed
Advantages
It very good, the next will trap the target just like all other nets, but this one can also cut the target due to the wind.
Disadvantages
The formation of 5 hand seals(if used as a secondary jutsu, your opponent can intercept it, preventing you from finishing the forming of the hand seals and the creation of the technique).
your counter
Your counter is funny. In a situation where by i'm the first to attack and I use this wind jutsu, due to you too forming hand seals I believe that your counter wouldn't work, or rather it would work right before you die from the wind net, I believe that your aim is to blind me, this making me to not see where I aim/release the net. But if I already took aim before you use your lightning technique, I believe that you would be cut by the wind once I release it, as far as you didn't leave your previous position. But if I use this jutsu as a second technique, your counter would work, being that if we both form hand seals t the same time, yours is four and mine is 5, you would be able to blind me, before I use this technique, due to being blinded by the light I believe that i'll have to grab my eyes or block my eyes from the light, causing me to not finish the technique, or if I do finish it, it won't be aimed properly.
The Speed Rate
The speed of this technique is medium or that's what I would rate it. Formation of 5 hand seals and then releasing wind which the user will then form into a net.

OOC: Damn auto-correct.
 

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How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, channeling it to his mouth from his gut, sasuke then forms 5 hand seals while simultaneously transforming the chakra into wind, sasuke takes aim at the clone and then opens his mouth the release the gust of wind, as its released an heads towards the clone, sasuke makes use of shape manipulation to form gust of wind into a net, with the net being extremely sharp that once in contact with th clone the clone is sliced into bits and poofed
Advantages
It very good, the next will trap the target just like all other nets, but this one can also cut the target due to the wind.
Disadvantages
The formation of 5 hand seals(if used as a secondary jutsu, your opponent can intercept it, preventing you from finishing the forming of the hand seals and the creation of the technique).
your counter
Your counter is funny. In a situation where by i'm the first to attack and I use this wind jutsu, due to you too forming hand seals I believe that your counter wouldn't work, or rather it would work right before you die from the wind net, I believe that your aim is to blind me, this making me to not see where I aim/release the net. But if I already took aim before you use your lightning technique, I believe that you would be cut by the wind once I release it, as far as you didn't leave your previous position. But if I use this jutsu as a second technique, your counter would work, being that if we both form hand seals t the same time, yours is four and mine is 5, you would be able to blind me, before I use this technique, due to being blinded by the light I believe that i'll have to grab my eyes or block my eyes from the light, causing me to not finish the technique, or if I do finish it, it won't be aimed properly.
The Speed Rate
The speed of this technique is medium or that's what I would rate it. Formation of 5 hand seals and then releasing wind which the user will then form into a net.

OOC: Damn auto-correct.
Very nice. ^^

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(Futon: Shinkūzan no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Vacuum Slash technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user waves his hand and creates multiple blades of wind, emerging to a single scythe of sharp air. The scythe was powerful enough to stop Susanno's movements, but wasn't able to break trough its defence.

Focus your chakra, and wave your hand towards my clone. Release multiple blades of wind as your hand is waved. Then combine the multiple blades into a single one, where it'll cut entirely through my clone.

-Creates clone-


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(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to A rank normal ninjutsu but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.
 

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How i performed it
Sasuke starts to build his chakra, channeling it to his right hand, he then makes use of nature manipulation to change the chakra into wind, sasuke retracts his right hand to his left chest area, aiming at the clone he then swings it horizontally in arc from his left chest area to his right side, as the wind is released sasuke then used shape manipulation to form the wind into multiple blades of wind, still using shape manipulation sasuke gathers the multiple blade of wind at one point and forms a scythe which then hits and cut right through the clone, poofing it.
Advantages
Its a very good technique, a swing of the arm, and multiple blades are first released, then it forms into a scythe, which can slice through someone.
Disadvantages
I don't see any disadvantage,(if spot any please let me know)
your counter
A good counter you did, but you'll be damaged from being thrown back by the wind jutsu.
The Speed Rate
I would rate this technique as fast, its just a swing of the arm after multiple blades of wind, eventually a wind scythe is released. Nothing more to it
 
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