EL MAGNIFICO
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
HELLO EVERYBODY!!!!!!!
Well, to say that this is my FanFic would be totally untrue. At best, this is one of my dreams, here at Narutobase lol! People here on NB, some of them are so wonderful, helped me a lot. I would like to thank them all, and in particular:
Hinata020: My editor and friend who enlightened me on the basics and always encouraged me.
Basegirl: Amazing friend here on NB, who read the FF and encouraged me.
Serenaandrosie: She told me that I have the potential to keep it up!!!
Sharingdork-san: His FF awards have always inspired me…
And last but not the least, it is only when one write something; one realizes the true power of MSWord, from grammar checks to replace-alls. It is simple – without this software, this FF would not b written. Thank you Mr. Bill Gates and Microsoft Corp!
THE STORY UNTOLD
FIRE COUNTRY FOREST
A shinobi was running and he had something in his hands, it was wrapped up in some old clothes...
After he had been running for awhile he stops to look around …..And then he enters the cave that is in front of him ….
Inside the cave, there were ninja tools, some bottles and medicines, a hanging cloth bed and some photos on the table
He then put the wrapped thing on the table … and yelled
KUCHIYOSE NO JUTSU!!!!!!!!!!!!
(A giant weasel appears )
Kama (weasel): u look tense...what's the matter ?
Hiroshi: I need u to give this message to Money as soon as u can ….
Kama: right! What’s that, on the table?
(Kama looks at the table curiously )
Hiroshi: have a look …
Kama looks at the wrapped thing ….
Kama: so it’s true eh?
SCENE CHANGES ….KONOHA
Meanwhile in Konoha a boy, with grey uncombed hair was training with his sensei under a tree….A girl and another boy were there sitting on the tree….
Sensei: Do it again!
Boy: alright sensei!
SHADOW CLONE JUTSU
10 shadow clones appear …..
Boy: Did u see that sensei??
(Boy asks with enthusiasm)
Sensei: u can do better! Try to focus and create more clones with less amount of chakra …..
(The boy's enthusiastic face quickly grew into one of discouragement.)
Boy: its almost 3 hour’s sensei….can’t we eat something sensei?
(SFX: grrrrgrrr ….sound from boy’s stomach)
Sensei: you know the rules……no dinner until you make 10 clones with effective use of chakra ….
Girl (was already sitting on the tree): It’s a miracle that you made it this far!
Boy: shut up you flat che…
Sensei: enough both of you …..
With discontent, the boy then continued on with his training
An hour later
SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!!!!!!!
Boy: How was it this time sensei?
Sensei: better ….lets have dinner
The boy looks at the girl ………..
Girl: what??
????: What’s for the dinner Money?
(A voice from the bushes comes)
Everybody turn around except the sensei
Sensei: it’s been a long time Kama…..
Boy: what’s this sensei?
(boy looks curious)
Sensei: Kama these are my students ….Jiraiya, tsunade and orochimaru…
Kama: Brilliant indeed ……by the way ….hiroshi asked me to give this to you ….
Kama then hands an envelope to hiruzen
Hiruzen: so it’s true eh?
Kama: looks like it
Jiraiya: what’s going on sensei?
(Confused)
Hiruzen: we are going to meet someone …………
(With sparkled eyes and a glow on his face)
THANK U FOR READING !! PLEASE COMMENT
HELLO EVERYBODY!!!!!!!
Well, to say that this is my FanFic would be totally untrue. At best, this is one of my dreams, here at Narutobase lol! People here on NB, some of them are so wonderful, helped me a lot. I would like to thank them all, and in particular:
Hinata020: My editor and friend who enlightened me on the basics and always encouraged me.
Basegirl: Amazing friend here on NB, who read the FF and encouraged me.
Serenaandrosie: She told me that I have the potential to keep it up!!!
Sharingdork-san: His FF awards have always inspired me…
And last but not the least, it is only when one write something; one realizes the true power of MSWord, from grammar checks to replace-alls. It is simple – without this software, this FF would not b written. Thank you Mr. Bill Gates and Microsoft Corp!
THE STORY UNTOLD
Lie deep within the heart of mysteries
The story of a young prodigy
Yet faded away from the books of histories
Like a river in the sea, it’s a tragedy
He was last of his clan
And without any plan
That guy named Dan
Sacrificed all that he can
He was everywhere extolled
But he lost his family, no one consoled
There are some secrets yet to unfold
As we begin to read “THE STORY UNTOLD” ……………
THIS IS SET 42 YEARS BEFORE THE START OF THE SERIES ‘NARUTO’…….The story of a young prodigy
Yet faded away from the books of histories
Like a river in the sea, it’s a tragedy
He was last of his clan
And without any plan
That guy named Dan
Sacrificed all that he can
He was everywhere extolled
But he lost his family, no one consoled
There are some secrets yet to unfold
As we begin to read “THE STORY UNTOLD” ……………
FIRE COUNTRY FOREST
A shinobi was running and he had something in his hands, it was wrapped up in some old clothes...
After he had been running for awhile he stops to look around …..And then he enters the cave that is in front of him ….
Inside the cave, there were ninja tools, some bottles and medicines, a hanging cloth bed and some photos on the table
He then put the wrapped thing on the table … and yelled
KUCHIYOSE NO JUTSU!!!!!!!!!!!!
(A giant weasel appears )
Kama (weasel): u look tense...what's the matter ?
Hiroshi: I need u to give this message to Money as soon as u can ….
Kama: right! What’s that, on the table?
(Kama looks at the table curiously )
Hiroshi: have a look …
Kama looks at the wrapped thing ….
Kama: so it’s true eh?
SCENE CHANGES ….KONOHA
Meanwhile in Konoha a boy, with grey uncombed hair was training with his sensei under a tree….A girl and another boy were there sitting on the tree….
Sensei: Do it again!
Boy: alright sensei!
SHADOW CLONE JUTSU
10 shadow clones appear …..
Boy: Did u see that sensei??
(Boy asks with enthusiasm)
Sensei: u can do better! Try to focus and create more clones with less amount of chakra …..
(The boy's enthusiastic face quickly grew into one of discouragement.)
Boy: its almost 3 hour’s sensei….can’t we eat something sensei?
(SFX: grrrrgrrr ….sound from boy’s stomach)
Sensei: you know the rules……no dinner until you make 10 clones with effective use of chakra ….
Girl (was already sitting on the tree): It’s a miracle that you made it this far!
Boy: shut up you flat che…
Sensei: enough both of you …..
With discontent, the boy then continued on with his training
An hour later
SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!!!!!!!
Boy: How was it this time sensei?
Sensei: better ….lets have dinner
The boy looks at the girl ………..
Girl: what??
????: What’s for the dinner Money?
(A voice from the bushes comes)
Everybody turn around except the sensei
Sensei: it’s been a long time Kama…..
Boy: what’s this sensei?
(boy looks curious)
Sensei: Kama these are my students ….Jiraiya, tsunade and orochimaru…
Kama: Brilliant indeed ……by the way ….hiroshi asked me to give this to you ….
Kama then hands an envelope to hiruzen
Hiruzen: so it’s true eh?
Kama: looks like it
Jiraiya: what’s going on sensei?
(Confused)
Hiruzen: we are going to meet someone …………
(With sparkled eyes and a glow on his face)
THANK U FOR READING !! PLEASE COMMENT
