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Asuma. I'll be nice. You may make the ninth and maybe tenth chapter of the story. But keep it on the same storyline as I have it. And make them long and add lots of detail.
The end of the Uchiha
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Ok. Just thought like letting a reader make some of the story.
" Chapter Nine: The fate of Konoha"
When Naruto returned he went to Tsunade right away and demanded she tells him about Ryo. And she does.
Fore infromation on Ryo read Chapter 10.
"Chapter Ten:The history of Ryo Uzamaki"
Ryo Uzamaki was born a wekk after Naruto Uzamaki was born. Like Naruto he was shuned because Naruto had the Nine Tailed Fox sealed inside him. At age eight Ryo had enough of it. He left Konoha and in the process killed half of the Anbu forces. He arived in the Soun Village where he met Orochimaru and Kimimaro. He asked if Kimimaro would train him. Kimimaro agreeded to this and Ryo trained under him. Bu at soon Ryo got even more powerful then Kimimaro. When he tried to leave the Sound Village Kimimaro fought him. Ryo and Kimimaro's keki genkai are the reason he was hospitalitized. Ryo servely hit Kimimaor's throat causing a reaction. Soon he entred the Sand Acadamy and became a jonin at the age of fourteen. Once again he left and went to the Waterfall village where Kakazu trained him untill Kakazu left for Akatsuki. Since then Ryo was an assian, untill he found out about Sasuke Uchiha killing Deidara who was his Uncle. This made him want revenge. So Ryo set out to find Sasuke. When he did they both fought, and Ryo made a clay clone that took over. Sasuke thought he killed him but in reality he didnt. Ryo then went on and killed Suigetsu. At the moment his current age is 16 and is with Tobi planning to kill Sasuke.
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"Chapter Eleven: The lost of a great shinobi"
After that an explosion occurs from Tusnade's home. Sai and Naruto both excort her out but waiting for them is Ryo Uzamaki.
"Long time no see brother." Ryo tells Naruto.
"Naruto this is your brother?" Sai asks.
"Yea" Naruto answers.
"Naruto take Lady Fifth to safety, I'll handle him." Sai proclaims.
Naruto goes silent but nods his head. He and Tsunade go off and find a shelter and enter. Inside he finds Hinata and Sakura in there. Naruto sits next to Hinata as Tsunade sits next to Sakura.
Meanwhile Sai and Ryo are using sword in the fight at the moment. Ryo at the moment has the advantage because at the start while Sai used his paintings, Ryo sent two summoned Wolves at Sai and one of them bit his hand off and one clawed his left arm. Sai is only using his right arm. Sai suddenly starts spinning his sword and using his feet draws a dragon fused with a snake and dog. This attack hurt Ryo badly.
" Your not so bad Sai" Ryo tells him as throwing ten kunai.
" Thanks.. I think..." Sai answers while blocking with his sword.
At the shelter the battle can be felt as jutsus and weapons fall." Sai will win." Sakura says. "Idk about that Sakura.. my brother seems tough..." Naruto says discouragly.
At the very moment Sai is slamed into his house and is blasted from wind jutsus.
They both un;leash the final attakcs.
When everyone comes out, they find Sai on the ground, dead.
After that an explosion occurs from Tusnade's home. Sai and Naruto both excort her out but waiting for them is Ryo Uzamaki.
"Long time no see brother." Ryo tells Naruto.
"Naruto this is your brother?" Sai asks.
"Yea" Naruto answers.
"Naruto take Lady Fifth to safety, I'll handle him." Sai proclaims.
Naruto goes silent but nods his head. He and Tsunade go off and find a shelter and enter. Inside he finds Hinata and Sakura in there. Naruto sits next to Hinata as Tsunade sits next to Sakura.
Meanwhile Sai and Ryo are using sword in the fight at the moment. Ryo at the moment has the advantage because at the start while Sai used his paintings, Ryo sent two summoned Wolves at Sai and one of them bit his hand off and one clawed his left arm. Sai is only using his right arm. Sai suddenly starts spinning his sword and using his feet draws a dragon fused with a snake and dog. This attack hurt Ryo badly.
" Your not so bad Sai" Ryo tells him as throwing ten kunai.
" Thanks.. I think..." Sai answers while blocking with his sword.
At the shelter the battle can be felt as jutsus and weapons fall." Sai will win." Sakura says. "Idk about that Sakura.. my brother seems tough..." Naruto says discouragly.
At the very moment Sai is slamed into his house and is blasted from wind jutsus.
They both un;leash the final attakcs.
When everyone comes out, they find Sai on the ground, dead.
Thanks. Your one of my best friends here.
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This is absoultly amazing! i love the fighting and the story line!
I'm addicted man you are truly and amazing writer!
I'm addicted man you are truly and amazing writer!
XUchihaAvengerX
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Thanks mna.This is absoultly amazing! i love the fighting and the story line!
I'm addicted man you are truly and amazing writer!
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"Chapter Twelve: The last stand of a jonin"
After Sai's funeral, most of Konoha started to train for the attack from Tea, Hawk. Naruto and Sakura were depressed because for a second time they had lost a Cell Number Seven member. Yamato and Kakshi spent days training. Oneday Kakashi and Yamato decided to go find Team Hawk and end them. But Kakashi knew Sasuke was the leader of the team and would be harder to fight. "Kakashi if we have to I'll fight Sasuke for you." Yamato tells him.
"It's ok. I'll fight my former student." Kakashi proclaims.
When they think they found the hideout, the walk inside looking around, knowing an attack ould happen at anytime. But the place was deserted except for a few snakes slithering around. They knew Sasuke must have made these. Soon they were in front of a door. They opened it and walked in the room. All of a sudden torches were lit and someone was sitting in a chair. They were wearing an Akatsuki cloak and had oarnge hair and many piercings. It was Pein.
" Why hello there Konoha jonin." Pein said calmly.
" Well Pein it's time your die." Yamato said and after that charges foward.
Pein jumps up and summons two of his bodies. The bodies atk Yamato grabbing him and slaming him intomthe grnd. One of the bodies then starts to pulls twin katana's out and starts to run at Kakashi. Kakashi summons four dogs and has them attack the body. But the body attacking him summon the fat one and it doesn't take a single scratch. The fat body turns into a ball and rolls towards Kakashi. Meanwhile the real Pein is standing on the ceiling watching. Yamato then sends Katon: Gokakyu No Jutsu at him. The real one jumps down but his left arm and leg are burned badly.
" Surender Pein it's no use." Yamato declares.
" Fools." Pein answers. then his body and the other two explode. The real body is outside. The entire building colapses on the two Konoha jonin. Yamato get us first and then Kakashi does.
At that moment he summons all five of his bodies. They atk three to Yamato and three to Kakashi. The battle goes on for a long period. Kkashi has used the mangekyou sharingan to much and is almost outa chakra. Yamato has taken bad slashes and burns.
"Time to end this" Kakashi says.
He preforms handsigns and a chidori(1000 birds appears). but using his other hand he splits it in two creating a second chidori. He charges at the real Pein. Pein draws his long katana and ges in to kill Kakashi. But Yamato takes the hit. Yamato dies and Pein dissapears.
The fneral is long and Yamato is burried next to Sai's grave.
mEANWHILE tEAM hAWK IS PREPARING TO LEAVE.
After Sai's funeral, most of Konoha started to train for the attack from Tea, Hawk. Naruto and Sakura were depressed because for a second time they had lost a Cell Number Seven member. Yamato and Kakshi spent days training. Oneday Kakashi and Yamato decided to go find Team Hawk and end them. But Kakashi knew Sasuke was the leader of the team and would be harder to fight. "Kakashi if we have to I'll fight Sasuke for you." Yamato tells him.
"It's ok. I'll fight my former student." Kakashi proclaims.
When they think they found the hideout, the walk inside looking around, knowing an attack ould happen at anytime. But the place was deserted except for a few snakes slithering around. They knew Sasuke must have made these. Soon they were in front of a door. They opened it and walked in the room. All of a sudden torches were lit and someone was sitting in a chair. They were wearing an Akatsuki cloak and had oarnge hair and many piercings. It was Pein.
" Why hello there Konoha jonin." Pein said calmly.
" Well Pein it's time your die." Yamato said and after that charges foward.
Pein jumps up and summons two of his bodies. The bodies atk Yamato grabbing him and slaming him intomthe grnd. One of the bodies then starts to pulls twin katana's out and starts to run at Kakashi. Kakashi summons four dogs and has them attack the body. But the body attacking him summon the fat one and it doesn't take a single scratch. The fat body turns into a ball and rolls towards Kakashi. Meanwhile the real Pein is standing on the ceiling watching. Yamato then sends Katon: Gokakyu No Jutsu at him. The real one jumps down but his left arm and leg are burned badly.
" Surender Pein it's no use." Yamato declares.
" Fools." Pein answers. then his body and the other two explode. The real body is outside. The entire building colapses on the two Konoha jonin. Yamato get us first and then Kakashi does.
At that moment he summons all five of his bodies. They atk three to Yamato and three to Kakashi. The battle goes on for a long period. Kkashi has used the mangekyou sharingan to much and is almost outa chakra. Yamato has taken bad slashes and burns.
"Time to end this" Kakashi says.
He preforms handsigns and a chidori(1000 birds appears). but using his other hand he splits it in two creating a second chidori. He charges at the real Pein. Pein draws his long katana and ges in to kill Kakashi. But Yamato takes the hit. Yamato dies and Pein dissapears.
The fneral is long and Yamato is burried next to Sai's grave.
mEANWHILE tEAM hAWK IS PREPARING TO LEAVE.
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" Chapter Thirteen: The day of ruining"
On the morning of October 31st, Team Hawk left there base knowing they may never see it again. Sasuke first stoped at his parents graves alone to say goodbye. He also put on the graves Itachi's and his headbands. He smiled and htey reappeared beside Jugo. They set out to the Uchiha fortress in the Final Vally forest.
At the same time Tobi and Ryo had arrived there.
" So Tobi where do I need to be?" Ryo asked.
" Take care of the team but leave Sasuke for me." Tobi explained.
" Alright." Ryo answered.
Tobi went into the main room and waited. Ryo was in the main hallway. They both wated for the fight to begin.
Meanwhile in Konoha every shinobi was posted all over the city. Naruto was with Sakura, and Kakashi. They all knew that Sasuke wouldn't hold back.
"Kakashi sensi...." Naruto spoke up. He looked over at Kakashi.
Kakashi then answered while reading the newest Make out book." Yes"
" I'll take care of Sauske for you." Naruto proclaims.
" Alright" Kakshi says.
Soon Team Hawk arrives at the base. The enter ready for an ambush. Whn they enter the main hallway, Ryo is there.
" Welcome to ur doom." Ryo tells them
Karin and Jugo step foward.
On the morning of October 31st, Team Hawk left there base knowing they may never see it again. Sasuke first stoped at his parents graves alone to say goodbye. He also put on the graves Itachi's and his headbands. He smiled and htey reappeared beside Jugo. They set out to the Uchiha fortress in the Final Vally forest.
At the same time Tobi and Ryo had arrived there.
" So Tobi where do I need to be?" Ryo asked.
" Take care of the team but leave Sasuke for me." Tobi explained.
" Alright." Ryo answered.
Tobi went into the main room and waited. Ryo was in the main hallway. They both wated for the fight to begin.
Meanwhile in Konoha every shinobi was posted all over the city. Naruto was with Sakura, and Kakashi. They all knew that Sasuke wouldn't hold back.
"Kakashi sensi...." Naruto spoke up. He looked over at Kakashi.
Kakashi then answered while reading the newest Make out book." Yes"
" I'll take care of Sauske for you." Naruto proclaims.
" Alright" Kakshi says.
Soon Team Hawk arrives at the base. The enter ready for an ambush. Whn they enter the main hallway, Ryo is there.
" Welcome to ur doom." Ryo tells them
Karin and Jugo step foward.
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"Chapter Fourteen: Karins power"
"Guys what are you doing?" Sasuke asked in surpise.
" Were protecting you. Dont u care?" Jugo answers.
" In that case.." Ryo snaps his fingers. Sasuke is now in a cage with spikes."Since he wont fight I'll keep him there. So who's first?" Ryo asks.
" Me" Karin replies.
Karin and Ryo jump into the air and unleashs eath jutsus. Ryo uses earth style rock avalanche jutsu and Karin uses earth style mud blaze jutsu. They both hit each other and they fly back. Karin jumps up and combines earth tyle rock barrage and fire style dragon flame. The attack speeds towards Ryo. Ryo counters using a piec of the wall and hurls it at the blazing rock. Ryo flash steps behind her and slams her into the ground and pulls out kunai raming them into her arms.
"You are so weak. Why Sasuke hierd you I don't know?" Ryo tells her.
" I'm going to win and prove I have strengh." Karin gers up and preforms handsigns.
"What the..." Ryo stutters.
"Katon: Hsenka No Jutsu" Karin yells.
Flames erupt and hit Ryo burning him nadly on the legs and hands. He jumps bk but not able to jump a lot. He then throws wave after wave after wave of gigantic rocks at Karin. She avoids most of them. One hits her right in the forehead and legs breaking her legs. she falls down almost defeated put is holding a scroll with blood over it.
"Your to late loser." Ryo claims as he draws a sword to finish her off.
A pupet grabs him and throws him into a wall and the pupet left blood everywhere. The battle continues with pupets and kunais. But soon Karin grows weak and tired. Ryo makes the most and cuts her in half with a giant shuriken.
"Goodbye.. Sas..sasuke..." after that she dies.
"Guys what are you doing?" Sasuke asked in surpise.
" Were protecting you. Dont u care?" Jugo answers.
" In that case.." Ryo snaps his fingers. Sasuke is now in a cage with spikes."Since he wont fight I'll keep him there. So who's first?" Ryo asks.
" Me" Karin replies.
Karin and Ryo jump into the air and unleashs eath jutsus. Ryo uses earth style rock avalanche jutsu and Karin uses earth style mud blaze jutsu. They both hit each other and they fly back. Karin jumps up and combines earth tyle rock barrage and fire style dragon flame. The attack speeds towards Ryo. Ryo counters using a piec of the wall and hurls it at the blazing rock. Ryo flash steps behind her and slams her into the ground and pulls out kunai raming them into her arms.
"You are so weak. Why Sasuke hierd you I don't know?" Ryo tells her.
" I'm going to win and prove I have strengh." Karin gers up and preforms handsigns.
"What the..." Ryo stutters.
"Katon: Hsenka No Jutsu" Karin yells.
Flames erupt and hit Ryo burning him nadly on the legs and hands. He jumps bk but not able to jump a lot. He then throws wave after wave after wave of gigantic rocks at Karin. She avoids most of them. One hits her right in the forehead and legs breaking her legs. she falls down almost defeated put is holding a scroll with blood over it.
"Your to late loser." Ryo claims as he draws a sword to finish her off.
A pupet grabs him and throws him into a wall and the pupet left blood everywhere. The battle continues with pupets and kunais. But soon Karin grows weak and tired. Ryo makes the most and cuts her in half with a giant shuriken.
"Goodbye.. Sas..sasuke..." after that she dies.
