Storyboard Mission Submission

[Imperfect]

Players involved: Imperfect
Mission Rank: A-Rank (4).
Story elements chosen:

Forge a God Slaying Tool. (4)​

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 06/ 10/ 2023
Relevant mission links: Here.
Additional information: Forging God Slaying Tool for Nefarian.

Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (71)​

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[Skorm]

Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

• Establish control over a hostile area

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 06/10
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (16)
(Mukō: Haretsu no Hikari) – Void: Burst of Light
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Activated at the cost of a move and a single Void Infusion; unleashes radiant light from the user, though not capable of blinding, and heals all allies within its range for 80 health.
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Landfall]

Players involved: Landfall
Mission Rank: C rank
Story elements chosen:
-(Custom) Recover from the battle (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/10/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/the-necropolis-a.778855/post-22129847
Additional information:
Using this mission to be 'void touched' for a void seer biography

Mission Passed.
The storytelling here was really well done and I appreciate that you're aiming at developing the depth of your biography through your missions, such as what abilities they end up getting. However, something I want to point out relating to missions is the focus on your storyboard element. In this particular mission, you spent a lot of time going through your bag and exemplifying the results of the injury you suffered, which was great for reading, but it didn't have a significant amount to do with "Recover from the battle" until the second-to-last paragraph where you finally found bandages, but then simply slapped them over the wound and moved on. In any rank of mission, the first and foremost focus should be on the storyboard element. Because looking for things to heal yourself is arguably part of the process of recovery, I'm giving this a pass without a fail, but in the future, please keep this in mind and be cautious not to leave your element too far out of focus as you're writing your mission. If you were to do a similar mission as this in the future, my recommendation would be to maybe expand upon what you do with the bandages after you find them. Do you take the time to examine your injury more, perhaps you utilize a fire technique to heat a kunai and cauterize the wound closed so you stop the bleeding and potentially eliminate whatever "infection" you might believe is festering in the wound. Little details like this can help draw out the depth and emphasis of your element and ultimately help minimize any risk of downgrading or failing of a mission.
No Artefact was Awarded. (63)
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Ryóma]

Players Involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: C
Story Elements Chosen: Examine the Depleted Crystalline Apotheotic Shard
Date of Beginning & Conclusion: 07/10/2023
Relevant Mission Links: [x]
Additional Information: N/A

Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (79)​

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[Landfall]

Players involved: Landfall
Mission Rank: C rank
Story elements chosen:
-Do some moderate meditation to improve focus (1)
-Perform a moderate workout routine (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/10/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/the-necropolis-a.778855/post-22129888
Additional information:

Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (49)
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Skorm]

Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

• Further explore the depths of Irkalla (Custom, B-rank)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/10
Relevant mission links: 1 | 2
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (99)
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Skorm]

Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

• Traverse onwards on the bridge and get to the end (Custom, B-rank)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/10
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (46)
(Mukō: Fuyu no Shukufuku) – Void: Winter’s Blessing
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A Void Infused Artifact Accumulator that is activated passively; upon activation the user instantly gains a single Void Infusion. It can be activated twice per battle, once every four turns.
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Skorm]

Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

• Save and retrieve hostages from the heart of the void (Custom, B-rank)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/10
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (35)
(Mukō: Yūryō) – Void: Charged
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: B
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A Void Infused modification that does not act as an Accumulator or Spender; rather, it passively increases the user’s maximum Void Infusion cap by 1. This can be stacked with other Charged Void Infused Artifacts, including itself if the user owns multiple copies.
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Ryóma]

Players Involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: C
Story Elements Chosen: Gather useful information (2)
Date of Beginning & Conclusion: 09/10/2023
Relevant Mission Links: [x]
Additional Information: N/A

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (5)
(Mukō: Meisō) – Void: Meditation
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Remaining within a single landmark and meditating for three turns (or three posts separated by 45 minutes) grants the user a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion.​

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[Landfall]

Players involved: Landfall
Mission Rank: A rank
Story elements chosen:
-Explore a dangerous site (3)
-Deal with a problem in a tactical manner, instead of through direct confrontation (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/10/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/fields-of-suffering-b.778856/post-22130049
Additional information:

Mission Passed.
Just something to point out, when tackling multi-element missions like this one, be careful not to let the ranks of the elements differentiate too far apart. In this case, you submitted a B-rank and A-rank element together, which in order to receive the A-rank value of it, you would have to ensure that the A-rank element is the majority focus of your element, on top of requiring the same depth and scope for an A-rank. Just keep that in mind any time you write a multi-ranked, multi-element mission.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (12)
(Mukō: Ikari Wasure San) – Void: Wrath of the Forgotten One
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: B
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 80
Description: Activated at the cost of a move and a single Void Infusion; unleashes a torrential maelstrom of natural flames from the user’s position up to mid-range. Inflicts 80 damage, but can be increased by 40 additional damage if the user applies a second Void Infusion to it.
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Antares 2]

Players involved: Hazure
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Recover a Depleted Crystalline Apotheotic Shard from the Moon Isle (188), site of a gigantic violet crystal emerging from the earth (C-Rank Mission).
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11 Oct 2023 - 11 Oct 2023 (date on post)
Relevant mission links: Mission Link
Additional information:

Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (57)​

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[Alternative]

Players involved: Alternative
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

• Recall an old memory (1)
• Grieve the loss of a friend (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/12/2023
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/fenchuch-084.755902/post-22130182
Additional information: I'm not sure on the rank if its classed as C or D, but just wanted something simple to start off

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (26)
(Mukō: Meisō) – Void: Meditation
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Remaining within a single landmark and meditating for three turns (or three posts separated by 45 minutes) grants the user a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion.​

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[Alternative]

Players involved: Alternative
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

• Fight an individual of comparable strength (3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/13/2023
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/fenchuch-084.755902/page-2#post-22130252
Additional information:

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (47)
(Mukō: Hōfuku Jūyōdenai) – Void: Spiritual Riposte
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user is successfully placed in a Genjutsu this Void Infused Artifact grants the user a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion. Can be activated once every two turns.​

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[Imperfect]

Players involved: Imperfect
Mission Rank: S-Rank (5).
Story elements chosen:

Explore the veil between life and death. (5)​

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 14/ 10/ 2023
Relevant mission links: Here.
Additional information: N/A.

Mission Passed.
Mission was downgraded to A-rank. The explore and understanding wasn't as life threatening as S-rank standards are expected to be. The danger had already come that led to this situation. Right now it's more test and understand the situation rather than a constant danger.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (11)
(Mukō: Yūryō) – Void: Charged
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: B
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A Void Infused modification that does not act as an Accumulator or Spender; rather, it passively increases the user’s maximum Void Infusion cap by 1. This can be stacked with other Charged Void Infused Artifacts, including itself if the user owns multiple copies.​

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[El Alucard]

Players involved: El Alucard
Mission Rank: S- Rank
Story elements chosen:

• Survive the boss creature.

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 15/10/23
Relevant mission links: [Link 1]
Additional information:

Mission Passed.
Mission was downgraded to A-rank. While the criteria of the element chosen was covered, the overall pacing of this mission was quite narrow in all respects; from conflict introduction and exploration down to the conclusion. The conflict itself enters from the beginning as an extension from a previous mission, which in itself is fine, but the overall complexity of contesting with the "Boss Monster" accounted for maybe the first quarter of the mission, before you handedly took back control of the fight and proceeded to spend the rest of the mission soundly defeating the opponent, countering its attacks or avoiding them entirely with ease after one technique that granted you stat boosts, which carries the essence of more a "fight someone of comparable strength" which fits more of an A-rank mission.
No Artefact was Awarded. (83)
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Zaphkiel]

Players Involved: Zaphkiel
Storyboard Element(s) Chosen: Vanquish a large horde of Void Beasts within the Necropolis (S-rank).
Relevant Links: https://animebase.me/threads/the-necropolis-a.778855/post-22130312
Dates of Beginning & Conclusion: 15/10/23
Additional Information: Gathering 10 Void Energy for the Depleted Apotheotic Shard.

Mission Passed.
Mission was downgraded to B-rank. The element was adequately covered in this mission, but to be clear, you not just handedly defeated your opposition throughout this mission, you practically steamrolled the majority of them with a single technique. Any damage you supposedly sustained was superficial, such as your arm that was removed was phantasmal in nature to begin with and despite describing it as being a "set back," did little to stunt the flow of your capabilities for the remainder of the mission. All and all, even A-rank missions require some degree of competition toward a successful outcome that resembles the essence of "fight someone of comparable strength" at the least, while S-ranks are naturally even higher difficulty than that in nature. In this case, they weren't even comparable strength; merely a large pack of them that you basically just blended up at the end in a massacre, which follows more the standards of a B-rank mission wherein you are showing off the strength of your bio.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (48)
(Mukō: Hōfuku Jūyōdenai) – Void: Spiritual Riposte
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user is successfully placed in a Genjutsu this Void Infused Artifact grants the user a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion. Can be activated once every two turns.
As a result of the Lost Gods arc, the landmark in which this mission was conducted has granted a 30% kumi bonus! ​

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[Antares 2]

Players Involved: Hazure
Storyboard Element(s) Chosen: Examine the Depleted Crystalline Apotheotic Shard (C-Rank Mission).
Relevant Links: MISSION LINK
Dates of Beginning & Conclusion: 16/10/23
Additional Information: N/A

Mission Passed.
Just as a friendly recommendation, in the future you might want to spend more time working through the process of exploration in your element. While you did what was technically required for the element itself, the overall attention and pacing of the writing throughout was rather minimalistic and lacked much depth. While C-ranks aren't necessarily expecting too great of detail, this was certainly pushing the limits of minimal, which isn't exactly great for any mission, but especially for missions that have fixed rank requirements in order to proceed like this one. If this were to get downgraded, you would have to repeat the mission before you could continue with the questline, which wouldn't be much fun. So better to take your time and make sure you cover it with a decent amount of time and attention to each step of the process next time.
No Artefact was Awarded. (96)​

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[Lucidus]

Players Involved: Kirikoe
Mission Rank: C
Storyboard Element(s) Chosen: Custom - Demonstrate your skill with the flute
Relevant Links: https://animebase.me/threads/moon-isle-188.756203/post-22130442
Dates of Beginning & Conclusion: 16/10/23
Additional Information: N/A

Mission Passed.
Mission was downgraded to D-rank. While I can appreciate the inclusion of some creative flare to the introduction of your character and their auxiliary talents such as flute playing, I can't exactly imagine that as a C-rank element, especially when nothing even remotely meaningful occurred as a result. Fun to read and I'm sure it was fun to write, but certainly not anything higher than a D-rank element, fundamentally.
No Artefact was Awarded. (89)​

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[Antares 2]

Players Involved Hazure
Storyboard Element(s) Chosen Gather information from the locals at the port on Moon Isle (Custom D-Rank)
Relevant Links MISSION LINK
Dates of Beginning & Conclusion 18/10/23
Additional Information N/A

Mission Passed.
Congratulations! You've Received an Artefact! (5)
(Mukō: Chikara Chūnyū) – Void: Energy Infusion
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user successfully restores at least 10% of their maximum chakra pool in a single turn they have a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion. ​

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[Lucidus]

Players Involved: Kirikoe
Mission Rank: C
Storyboard Element(s) Chosen: Custom - Explore the City of Moon Isle
Relevant Links:

Moon Isle (188)

Coming from here Recover a Depleted Crystalline Apotheotic Shard from the Moon Isle (188), site of a gigantic violet crystal emerging from the earth (C-Rank Mission). Arriving on the island on his ink bird in style, Ryuu stayed atop the creation in order to get a birds eye view of the island...

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Dates of Beginning & Conclusion: 18/10/23
Additional Information: N/A

Mission Passed.
No Artefact was Awarded. (69)​

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