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Mission Rank: A
Story Elements Chosen:
  • Explore the history of something (3)
  • Experiment with very advanced ninjutsu (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/12/2018 - 05/12/2018
Relevant Mission Links: One
Additional Information: N/A

~Mission Passed. Lots of history exploring and experimenting. I like it.
 
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Mission Rank: C rank
Story elements chosen:
  • Defend yourself from wild beasts

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/12/18-7/12/18
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/feodosia-203.756218/#post-21870859
Additional information: Arriving in Feodosia, Grimmjow wastes no time heading towards the coast to cross into the land of fire. However, on the way, he stumbles onto a rather strange animal, that has the ability to use basic ninjutsu.

Mission Passed.
 
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Mission Rank: B-Class Rogue Ninja Bounty,
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Orders: A former company of soldiers, the 7th Company of the Hangurian Army, has nested itself in the abandoned military barracks and camps located in Shaohai. From there this company has exercised numerous raids on villages in Haesu, including our own at Blackwater. Please hunt these men down and bring them to justice, dead or alive. Life in the post-Freehold world is already grim and difficult enough.

Wanted For: Banditry.

Bounty: We are offering 2,000 Kumi to the person(s) that capture or defeat the 7th Company.

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 2/12/18 - 6/12/18
Relevant mission links:
1. Accepting the mission
2. The journey begins
3. Travel post
4. Travel post (2)
5. Arrival at 25
6. Pyke / zeref Dialogue
7. The plan
8. Zeref attacks (he fights 10 of the group)
9. Pyke attacks (he fights the remaining 10)
10. Zeref rejoins pyke and collects the bodies then travel
11. Arrival at black water, hand over to official

@Drackos , we were told you at you with mission completion. Is there anything more for us to do or what we need to know before moving on?


[This Bounty Mission]

Additional information: Zeref and Pyke take on the bounty to test their new alliance and try and earn a reward and reputation for themselves.

Bounty Completed
 
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Mission Rank: C Rank
Story elements chosen:
  • Help a friend
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/14/18 – 12/14/18
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/fuging-030.755847/post-21875489
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Mission Passed. This was on the edge of a fail. This is because you summarize a lot of your actions and in turn reduce the difficulty making the NPC the focal point of the mission. However, I can see the back and forth between your character and the friend NPC as your character explains chakra and how to use it. I feel like that struggle could have been played up raising the difficulty for your character. There was enough for a C-rank though and that's why I'm passing it but in a higher ranked mission summarizing like that may end in a failure in the future.
 
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The Pervy Sage

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Mission Rank: C Rank
Story elements chosen:

Explore an abandoned site (2)
Defend yourself from wild beasts (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/16/18
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Hearing rumours, Zeref decides to investigate an abandoned site

>>>What happened next would be even more exciting.
EVEN MISSIONS HAVE BECOME CLICKBAIT!

Approved though, because nice mission and what happened next actually WAS even more exciting.
 
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Mission Rank: B-Class Rogue Ninja Bounty
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  • Orders: Capture the target and return her alive to our village in the Hinterlands to face judgement before the village.
  • Wanted For: Patricide and banditry. Maradeim strangled her father in his sleep one evening for reasons unknown, looted their home, and then fled the village.
  • Bounty: We are offering 1,550 Kumi to the person(s) that capture this individual.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/17/18 - 12/18/18
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Was informed to @Drackos when the [bounty] is completed.

Bounty Completed
 
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Mission Rank: B -Rank
Story elements chosen:
Assist in saving survivors from an environmental devastation (3)
Defeat abomination(s) left over from the conquer's event (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20181219
Relevant mission links: Page 1, Page 2, Page 3, Page 4, Page 5
Additional information: N/a

Pending.
~Mission Failed. I'm just not feeling this for a B-rank, even though you split the story you have just fine between you. The fact is that once you trim the intro and outro off of this narrative there's very little left. I need to see more for a two-man mission like this.
 
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Story elements chosen:
> Disperse a Mob (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12-19-2018
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: In this mission, it gets a bit gruesome and crazy. My character, Rebekah, is from a vampire tv show, so I allude to that during the mission.

Pending.
~Mission Passed. You are also the lucky winner of a A-ranked custom artifact, which can be swapped for the missions' value in Ryo.
 
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Players involved: Krampus
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Fight an enemy stronger than yourself (4)
  • Convince an enemy to fight with you (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12-20-2018 to 12-22-2018
Relevant mission links: The Abominable Snowman | Resolve
Additional information: The Wolves have freed Thamur from his icy tomb with the hopes that this deity of theirs would bring life back to the frozen wastes of the North. Their hopes were short lived, dying with their leader under the beast's rage filled fists. Nicholas and the Wolves were forced to join forces to battle the beast.

Mission Passed. You also win an A-rank custom artifact. It can be submitted here or exchanged for the mission value in Ryo.
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Choose between what is right and what is easy (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24th/12th/2018 - 25/12/2018
Relevant mission links: 1st 2nd
Additional information:
The choice of what is right and what is easy is about whether she could stay dead and hidden and live a new life alone, or whether she gets back up and continued to keep to her word.

Mission Failed. I don't think there's enough effort for a B-rank mission here especially a single element one.
 
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

- The path to becoming a sage, the true path. The way of Ashura. (custom)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 26/12/18
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/thousand-needles-077.755894/post-21888244
Additional information: Sin learns that he doesn't need his ninjutsu to get stronger, there are more strengths than those of a shinobi.

Pending. Leaving for someone else.
~Mission Failed. So, I understand how 'the way of Ashura' fits into the context of your mission, but your storyboard elements really need to be actual, relatively concrete things for you to do. Your mission lack parameters, for a lack of better words. The SE's just can be abstract like this.
Doesn't change that it was a good story, but there it is.
 
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Players involved: The Pervy Sage
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

- Teach a man to fish...
- Become part of a community

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 26/12/18
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/thousand-needles-077.755894/post-21888722
Additional information: Sin teaches the people how fish, introduces them to the man that fed him, and began honing his skills.

Mission Passed.
 
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Players involved: Smirk [Came across Pyro NB & Chihaya along the way as we fought a common enemy]
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
-Guard someone very important
-Save a large community from danger
-Assassinate the enemy Commander

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 19/12/18 - 26/12/18
Relevant mission links: [Meeting] x [Travel] x [First Encounter] x [Alice VS The Commander] x [Arrival]

Additional information: Alice provides protection of an important child, comes across a powerful enemy along the way and helps save a community from their dangerous ways by assassinating the armies Commander.

Pending. Leaving for someone else.
~Mission Passed. Yeah, that works. That's a heck of an effort you put into that fight. Kudos. You're also the lucky winner of an A-ranked custom artifact, which can be exchanged for its value in Ryp upon request.
 
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Players involved: The Pervy Sage
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:

- Become a leader
- Prove your worth, commitment and selflessness

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 27/12/18
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/thousand-needles-077.755894/post-21888957
Additional information: Sin finds himself in a role he didn't expect

Mission Passed. The Gnoll bit honestly felt weird, but you put enough work into building up the mission.
 
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Mission Rank: S

Story Elements Chosen:
  • Save a large community from danger (5)
  • Win a fight without your ninjutsu (5)
  • Meet with a major faction representative (4)
Date of beginning and date of conclusion: 28/12 - 2018
Relevant link: https://animebase.me/threads/northern-namhae-061.755878/#post-21889714
Information: Varian and his knights arrive at the harbor of considerably large and population area, where they will find the people in distress as their town is being pillaged, Varian and his knights will fight to help the town and free them from their troubles.

Mission Passed. Ahem. Mak’gora forbids the use of body armor U_U Varian cheated. Lok'tar Hovnank.
 
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Mission Rank: D

Story elements chosen:

Explore a landmark (1)
Set up camp (1)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/28/2018

Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/northern-namhae-061.755878/#post-21890068

Additional information: Kurama and Tigrerra enter Landmark 61 – Northern Namhae, coming from Landmark 52 - The Southern Mire, where they explore the new landmark, and reconnect further in their travels, but suddenly they see a great change in the landscape from afar, and, unable to approach, enter, or even see the new topography, decide to set up a camp near where the change had taken place and wait it out to see if anything new comes out afterwards that may interest them....

Mission Passed.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:

Make all the necessary plans and arrangements for your Clan ( 4 )
Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks ( 3 )

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
12/05/2018
12/29/2018
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ x ] [ x ] [ x ] [ x ] [ END ]
Additional information: Went really long especially toward the end since it was back and forth, and as I mentioned in a previous mission I like replying to everyone. Was trying to get everything established though. I tried to involve my villagers and council members in the process of starting everything. Meaning asking them for physical tangible ideas and goals that could be worked toward and accomplished to create a more stable entity. Creating a cohesive organization instead of a fractured mass. These plans ended with the agreeance on building a hospital, increasing the security of the landmarks through the formation of defenses, as well as the gathering of information and knowledge of the outside world. The preparing a landmark for future attack was just because I wanted to screw around with Yang-... Enter, Dwayne "the Rock" Johnson the autonomous border guard. I feel like even the jokes made later builds into the "Prepare a landmark" aspect since the clone and the golem are patrolling the border.

~Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
-Save a large community from danger
-Destroy a large group or settlement
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/01/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/sister-isles-187.756202/post-21891986

Pending. Leaving for someone else.
~Mission Passed.
 
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