Players involved: ChihayaPlayers involved: Chihaya
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10-31-2018
- Choose between what is right and what is easy (3)
- Explore the history of something (3)
Relevant mission links: [x]
Additional information: This mission circles around Rebekah escorting a suspect through a forest in order to get them to the prison they must be kept in. While on her adventure to the location, the suspect tries to escape and Rebekah must then choose between an easy way out or the right thing, while also learning more about this suspects history.
Mission Failed. There's nothing wrong with fighting in your mission and it even made for a good story but you need to focus mainly on the elements you choose. You took two elements but didn't start performing them until you were halfway into your mission. This means you only had half of your mission to fit in what should be at minimum two-thirds of it. So that means your mission doesn't truly start until the middle when you're done fighting and have trapped your target. You can do a lot of things in a mission if you pick the right elements and spread your time among them accordingly. For example, if you would have chosen "Fight an individual of comparable strength" and added that into the fold it would have made your opening half more on task allowing all of the opening to count toward your mission instead of just being extra text. It would have given you the wiggle room needed for a pass. Don't be discouraged though you write well, and are succinct so I feel like you won't have much trouble with the right elements.
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Torture a suspect (3)
- Explore the history of something (3)
- Choose between what is right and what is easy (3)
Relevant mission links: Click
- Additional information: Rebekah is torturing a suspect for information on stolen scrolls. She gains information and history on the scrolls and in the end has to choose between what is right and easy.
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