Storyboard Mission Submission

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Story elements chosen: Participate in a Conqueror's End feast with a village (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/10/18
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Additional information:

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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

Win a fight without your ninjutsu. (5)
Save a large community from danger. (5)
Survive a near-death situation. (5)
Save your Clan from a major catastrophe (5)
In the darkest hour, overcome (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/16/2018 - 10/23/2018 (Got lazy and had writer's block lol)
Relevant mission links: - [ ] - [ ] - [ ] -
Additional information:

First attempt at an S-rank, so hope it's an enjoyable read. I may have dragged it on a bit longer than I should have but I really wanted to made sure I touched upon the storyboard elements. While also accounting for the period of time it took me to finally hash this one out. ^^

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
• Custom Element – Find the place the Scroll and Gem refers to (3)
• Custom Element – Save Sully from captivity (4)
• Custom Element – Fend off an assassin (4)


Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 15th of October to 22nd of October.
Relevant mission links:
(Beginning Post: 5)
(Post 3 through 5)
Additional information: This mission will mark the turning point where Nate have journeyed to investigate the scroll and gem as put forth with his new-found allies, to find out why they were searching for it and what it is.


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Players involved: Gajeel Redfox
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

- Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/10/18
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: In one of the hardest battles of his life king would fight an opponent like no other, a spartan, but their style so unique, so familiar, fighting just one is nearly the death of him, how would he ever handle... 300....

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

- Torture a suspect (3)
- Convince a criminal to confess (3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 25/10/18
Relevant mission links:
Additional information:
Pakura shows what happens to those that try and break into her "home".





Players involved: Disturbed18
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:


Terrorize a large community (4)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 25/10/18
Relevant mission links:
Additional information:

Can Pakura sit idly by after a group of men had invaded her own and terrorised her safe place? Well of course not. It was time to continue her little game with the locals ^_^

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Players Involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
~Defeat a horde of zombies without using your ninjutsu (5)
~Guard someone very important (5)
~Build something for the Clan (1)
Date of beginning, Date of conclusion: 10/28/2018 - 10/28/2018
Relevant mission Links: Begin - End
Additional information: Sorry for the formatting at the end idk wtf happened when I tried to copy and paste it over from NB and currently don't have a way to edit it.

Pending - Leaving for ZK or Drackos
~Mission Failed.
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: Help Fortify the Defences of someone else (3)
- Custom: Capture a small group of Zombies for future use (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
09/10/2018 - 11/10/2018
Relevant mission links:
Post 1
Post 2
Post 3
Post 4
Additional information:
Lena helps fortify the defences Sado had created, there is also interactions with Sado between posts. She fortifies by adding Barnacle Soldiers to the wall as a sentient defence. Conqueror's End Storyboard Element


Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: Use captured undead to bring terror to your enemy (4)
- Custom: Lament over the course of action you took (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
11/10/2018 - 12/10/2018
Relevant mission links:
Beginning
Razing of Degarashan! - Airdrop 2 & 3
Razing of Degarashan! - Regret
Additional information:
Conqueror's End Storyboard Element.


Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: Help evacuate helpless citizens from an infested town. (4)
- Custom: Defend yourself against Takauji's men & the undead horde (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
13/10/2018 - 14/10/2018
Relevant mission links:
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Additional information:
Conqueror's End Storyboard Elements . Lena has a bit of an emotional moment and chooses to help save the civilians even though she contributed to their despair. I was also aided by Salazzle (Howard's Summon) (1 & 2) and character bonded, would like to put his name forward for contributing/helping with my Mission, to the checker's discretion of course.


Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: redirect the doubt in their hearts on someone or something else(2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
15/10/2018
Relevant mission links:
The Speech
Additional Information:
Normal Mission


Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: help refugees settle into a new community (3)
- Custom: successfully help a community grow / merge (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
11/10/2018 - 12/10/2018
Relevant mission links:
1. Introduction to Shinramoto
2. A Plan to Prepare
3. A Successful Idea
Additional information:
Normal Mission


Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Meet with a major faction representative (4)
- Deal with a traumatic event from your past (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
16/10/2018 - 16/10/2017
Relevant mission links:
Reunion with Angela
Light Scuffle
Another "Diplomatic" Success
Additional information:
Lena got laid, the sequel.


Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: Threaten Someone away from your Lands (1).
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
22/10/2018
Relevant mission links:
Goodbye Bliss?
Additional information:
N/A
Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Meet with a major faction representative (4)
- Deal with a traumatic event from your past (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
16/10/2018 - 16/10/2017
Relevant mission links:
Reunion with Angela
Light Scuffle
Another "Diplomatic" Success
Additional information:
Lena got laid, the sequel.

~Mission Passed. You're also the lucky winner of an-Aranked artifact, to be posted.

Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: Threaten Someone away from your Lands (1).
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
22/10/2018
Relevant mission links:
Goodbye Bliss?
Additional information:
N/A

All Pending - Leaving for ZK or Drackos.
~Mission Passed
 
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Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Defeat a horde of zombies without using your ninjutsu (5)
Protect children from the risen dead that have escaped Chungsu (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
10-12-2018
Relevant mission links: [ ]
Additional information: N/A


Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Deal with a traumatic event from your past ( 3 )
Escort a small family to a neighboring village and protect them from wandering zombies ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
10-15-2018
10-16-2018
Relevant mission links: [ ] [ ] [ ]
Additional information: In the summary I mentioned splitting it into 2 posts, somewhere along the lines it became 3 posts to accomadate travel. I like breaking the elements up so that I do each enough ao I hope I focused on both enough individually. Hope it works out. For the first one the tramautic events were both being exiled in his youth and also the events of the Razing of Degarashan which happen in a mission above.
Conqueror's End resubs.

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Defeat a horde of zombies without using your ninjutsu (5)
Protect children from the risen dead that have escaped Chungsu (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
10-12-2018
Relevant mission links: [ X ]
Additional information: Edited link.

~Mission Passed

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Deal with a traumatic event from your past ( 3 )
Escort a small family to a neighboring village and protect them from wandering zombies ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
10-15-2018
10-16-2018
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ END ]
Additional information: In the summary I mentioned splitting it into 2 posts, somewhere along the lines it became 3 posts to accommodate travel. I like breaking the elements up so that I do each enough so I hope I focused on both enough individually. Hope it works out. For the first one, the traumatic events were both being exiled in his youth and also the events of the Razing of Degarashan which happen in a mission prior. Edited links.

~Mission Passed

New/Unposted


Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
Pull a prank or something prank-like ( 1 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
10-18-2018
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ END ]
Additional information: This was a weird exchange mainly because of the weird situation I was in OOC I didn't know how to respond while remaining in character but I assumed my character would know exactly what to do. I tried to play it off how Sado would, but obviously, as I mentioned there it was a bit strange for me so I made it jokes playing off of his immature personality.

~Mission Passed

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Meet with a major faction representative ( 4 )
Run a thorough background investigation on someone ( 2 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
10-18-2018
10-22-2018
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ x ] [ x ] [ END ]
Additional information: This one I had a lot of fun with and I want to point out that Never helped by playing an NPC for me and not only that he acted the part. For me it made the whole exchange a lot more fun because it let me act out what I believed the character would do. It became a nice back and forth that evolved into a sort of Akagi or Kaiji ( gambling animes usually about outsmarting or outplaying someone to survive ) style game that let me delve into the character. The video tags for my missions were broken so it might remove a bit of the atmosphere.

~Mission Passed

New Conqueror's End mission

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
Defeat a horde of zombies without using your ninjutsu ( 5 )
Save a large community from danger ( 5 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
10-24-2018
11-01-2018
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ END ]
Additional information: I tried to separate the elements so they could both be seen better. I hope it works. I also hope the narrative doesn't feel disjointed because of the large amount of time I took between replying. It might change the flow or something.

~Mission Failed. Your SE's kinda overlap here, which isn't by itself a huge problem, but I think you go against the spirit of the first with your use of Medjutsu. I applaud the creativity, but I think in this case you should have picked a different SE. The overlapping also means that when you're not fighting, basically, in this context, you're not really exploring your SE's. I just don't think this fulfills the criteria of an S-rank

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
  • Help a village carve pumpkins for the holidays (1)
  • Defend a village from a wandering group of zombies (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
10-31-2018
11-02-2018
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ END ]
Additional information: N/A

~Mission Passed
 
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Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Help a local trader by transporting his wares (2)
Set up a secure camp (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 21/9/18 - 21/10/18
Relevant mission links:
Additional information:

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Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Help a local trader by transporting his wares (2)
Set up a secure camp (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 21/9/18 - 21/10/18
Relevant mission links: [x] [x]

Mission Passed. Good job splitting the time between your two elements.

Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: C (between C and B so idk)
Story elements chosen: Protect children from from the risen dead that have escaped Chungsu (2)
Choose between what is right and what is easy (3)
Show the people of your landmark the merits of your Clan (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 21/10/18
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: A Conqueror's End mission.

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Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: C (between C and B so idk)
Story elements chosen: Protect children from from the risen dead that have escaped Chungsu (2)
Choose between what is right and what is easy (3)
Show the people of your landmark the merits of your Clan (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 21/10/18
Relevant mission links: [x] [x]
Additional information: A Conqueror's End mission.

Pending. Need to defer this one to ZK or Drackos.
~Mission Passed.

Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Participate in a Conqueror's End feast with a village (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/10/18
Relevant mission links:
Additional information:

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Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Participate in a Conqueror's End feast with a village (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/10/18
Relevant mission links: [x]
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed.
 
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Players Involved: Krampus
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen:
-Defend your employer from bandits. (3)
-Capture a criminal and interrogate them. (3 - Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/13/2018
Relevant Links:
Additional Information: None

Players Involved: Krampus
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen:
-Infiltrate an enemy's base (3)
-Explore the history of something (3)
-Explore a dangerous site (3)
Date of Beginning and Conclusion: 10/16/2018
Relevant Links:
Additional Information: None

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Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen:
-Defend your employer from bandits. (3)
-Capture a criminal and interrogate them. (3 - Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/13/2018
Relevant Links: The Winter and its Wolves
Additional Information: None

Mission Passed. A suggestion, for next time, try to focus all of or most of your RP upon your elements. I had to read this one a few times to make a decision because of the split between setup and element based RP but the portion dedicated to your work was enough.

Players Involved: Krampus
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen:
-Infiltrate an enemy's base (3)
-Explore the history of something (3)
-Explore a dangerous site (3)
Date of Beginning and Conclusion: 10/16/2018
Relevant Links: Den of Thieves
Additional Information: None

Mission Passed. You're really good at setting up an atmosphere.

Same verdit was provided here. Obviously the passes do not count twice.
 
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Players involved: LGeezy
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

Win a fight without your ninjutsu. (5)
Save a large community from danger. (5)
Survive a near-death situation. (5)
Save your Clan from a major catastrophe (5)
In the darkest hour, overcome (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/16/2018 - 10/23/2018 (Got lazy and had writer's block lol)
Relevant mission links: - [ ] - [ ] - [ ] - End
Additional information:

First attempt at an S-rank, so hope it's an enjoyable read. I may have dragged it on a bit longer than I should have but I really wanted to made sure I touched upon the storyboard elements. While also accounting for the period of time it took me to finally hash this one out. ^^

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Players involved: LGeezy
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

Win a fight without your ninjutsu. (5)
Save a large community from danger. (5)
Survive a near-death situation. (5)
Save your Clan from a major catastrophe (5)
In the darkest hour, overcome (5)


Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/16/2018 - 10/23/2018 (Got lazy and had writer's block lol)
Relevant mission links: Start - [X] - [X] - [X] - End
Additional information: Resubbed per site migration.

~Mission Passed. Some janky links; your third one is from Oct. 10? The chronology messed with me, but I think I figured it out. Nice narrative.
___

Players involved: LGeezy
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

  • Defeat a horde of zombies without using your ninjutsu (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/29/2018
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/dainashi-175.756190/post-21847638
Additional information: N/A

Both Pending - I'm leaving S rank missions for ZK or Drackos until I become more familiar.
~Mission Failed.
 
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Players involved: Gutsy Jiraiya
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
• Custom Element – Find the place the Scroll and Gem refers to (3)
• Custom Element – Save Sully from captivity (4)
• Custom Element – Fend off an assassin (4)


Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 15th of October to 22nd of October.
Relevant mission links:
(Beginning Post: 5)
(Post 3 through 5)
Additional information: This mission will mark the turning point where Nate have journeyed to investigate the scroll and gem as put forth with his new-found allies, to find out why they were searching for it and what it is.


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Players involved: Gutsy Jiraiya
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
• Custom Element – Find the place the Scroll and Gem refers to (3)
• Custom Element – Save Sully from captivity (4)
• Custom Element – Fend off an assassin (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 15th of October to 22nd of October.
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/dentong-006.755822/ (Post 5)
https://animebase.me/threads/tanishi-131.756144/ (Post 3-5)
Additional information: This mission will mark the turning point where Nate have journeyed to investigate the scroll and gem as put forth with his new-found allies, to find out why they were searching for it and what it is.


Mission Passed. Next time link directly to the posts. You can just click upon the post number and get a direct link.
 
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Players involved: Gajeel Redfox | Akiza
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:


- Trade with another group (Note: Trading Knowledge) (3)
-Custom Element: Kurama's introduction to the WSE? (3)


Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10.17.18 - 10.22.18
Relevant mission links:

Additional information:: This will be a meeting of Gajeel and myself through this landmark as I join the WSE and another new alliance is formed. This will also include a brief back history of and how she has reached the current destination leading up to meeting Gajeel as well as Gajeel briefly teaching Kurama his steel customs.

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Players involved: Akiza/ Nirvana
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

Custom - Investigate a rumour and find its Source(3)
Investigate the History of a Landmark (3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10.23.18 - 10.25.18
Relevant mission links:


Additional Information: This mission will be the meeting of Kurama and Kaizen and then upon hearing of some rumours they together investigate and follow the information, leading to some travellers who help understand the rumours and the history of a landmark (Tōkaidō Island 135) and then starting a chain event of missions which will involve Historia further down the line.

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Resubmitting.

Players involved: Gajeel Redfox | Akiza
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:


- Trade with another group (Note: Trading Knowledge) (3)
-Custom Element: Kurama's introduction to the WSE? (3)


Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10.17.18 - 10.22.18
Relevant mission links: start end

Additional information:: This will be a meeting of Gajeel and myself through this landmark as I join the WSE and another new alliance is formed. This will also include a brief back history of and how she has reached the current destination leading up to meeting Gajeel as well as Gajeel briefly teaching Kurama his steel customs.

Mission Passed. Next time provide links to every post individually. It makes reading through easier.

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Players involved: Akiza/ Nirvana
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

Custom - Investigate a rumour and find its Source(3)
Investigate the History of a Landmark (3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10.23.18 - 10.25.18
Relevant mission links: start end


Additional Information: This mission will be the meeting of Kurama and Kaizen and then upon hearing of some rumours they together investigate and follow the information, leading to some travellers who help understand the rumours and the history of a landmark (Tōkaidō Island 135) and then starting a chain event of missions which will involve Historia further down the line.

Mission Passed. I like these types of interactions, back and forth between clanmates. However make sure to link each post as mentioned above. Following the flow through multiple posts or even at times threads becomes harder if each post isn't accounted for. You also win a C rank artifact.

(Chīsai Iyakuhin Nankō) – Lesser Medicinal Salve
Type: Artifact
Rank: C
Range: N/A (Contact)
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A teal paste crafted by skilled healers and sold for profit in various markets throughout the world. It is stored in a small fist sized jar and can be conveniently kept in safely in a ninja pouch. The salve is soothing to the touch and brings a warm comfort to wounds it is applied to. The salve, usable once, can regenerate wounds over a short period of time and specializes in gashes and cuts on the user’s body. When applied the salve works to mend the user’s wounds over three turns, sealing up cuts of varying severity and stopping bleeding within that time. This effectively restores 5 health over three turns after it is applied. It is important to note that the salve cannot regenerate wounds like broken bones, torn tendons, lost limbs, or ligaments. It specializes in cuts and can be applied to electrical and fire-based burns. This can be used on allies.
 
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Players Involved: Goodra
Mission Rank: A
Story Elements Chosen:
Rescue children that were captured by bandits while Trick or Treating (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Oct 14th
Relevant Links:
Additional Information:
Halloween mission

Players Involved: Goodra
Mission Rank: A
Story Elements Chosen:
-Spy on someone suspected of being connected to the necromancer Phetra (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Oct 14th
Relevant Links:
Additional Information:
Halloween mission

Players Involved: Goodra
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen:
Defend a village from a wandering group of zombies (2)
Defend a marketplace from a horde of zombies (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Oct 14th
Relevant Links:
Additional Information:
Halloween mission


Players Involved: Goodra
Mission Rank: S
Story Elements Chosen:
Confront the Astral Cassander and solve a riddle (5*)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Oct 8th
Relevant Links:
Additional Information:
Halloween mission

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Mission Rank: A
Story Elements Chosen:
Rescue children that were captured by bandits while Trick or Treating (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Oct 14th
Relevant Links: https://animebase.me/threads/tairadachi-123.756136/post-21840678
Additional Information:
Halloween mission (passed with B rank artifact)

Players Involved: Goodra
Mission Rank: A
Story Elements Chosen:
-Spy on someone suspected of being connected to the necromancer Phetra (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Oct 14th
Relevant Links: https://animebase.me/threads/sasau-124.756137/post-21840753
Additional Information:
Halloween mission (passed)

Players Involved: Goodra
Mission Rank: B
Story Elements Chosen:
Defend a village from a wandering group of zombies (2)
Defend a marketplace from a horde of zombies (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Oct 14th
Relevant Links: https://animebase.me/threads/dentong-006.755822/post-21840835
Additional Information:
Halloween mission (passed with B and C rank artifact)


Players Involved: Goodra
Mission Rank: S
Story Elements Chosen:
Confront the Astral Cassander and solve a riddle (5*)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Oct 8th
Relevant Links:
Additional Information:
Halloween mission (declined, already given reward in post in landmark?)

Pending - Leaving all for ZK

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
~ Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/05/2018 - 10/15/2018
Relevant mission links: - - - - - -
Additional information: Took a while due to various activities happening in between and opted to make the Springhare homeland in another LM.

Declined - Please resubmit with proper links to animebase as per the update found here. Quote your old submission on resubmission.
Players involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
~ Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/05/2018 - 10/15/2018
Relevant mission links: Begin - x - x - x - x - x - End
Additional information: Took a while due to various activities happening in between and opted to make the Springhare homeland in another LM.

~Mission Passed. You're also the lucky winner of a B-ranked custom artifact. This can be submitted here or exchanged for the missions value in Ryo upon request.
 
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Players involved: Eos
Mission Rank: B-rank
Story elements chosen:
Fight an individual of comparable strength (3)
Convince a assassin to give up their employer (3)
Defend your employer from the assassin (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/30/2018
Relevant mission links: Start, End

Mission Passed. Luckily that blade didn't nick Kenichi's femoral artery. Wouldn't be able to claim these rewards. Good story was nice and succinct as well. @Eos
 
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

- Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your clan (3)
- Make Amends at the cost of your pride (custom) (3)?

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 17/10/2018
Relevant mission links:

Additional information:
King explains the events to the people, and begs for forgiveness, forgetting his pride and wants to make thing right. The clan gains a home, a family and potentially new allies.

Declined - Please resubmit with proper links to animebase as per the update found here. Quote your old submission on resubmission.
Players involved: Gajeel Redfox
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

- Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/10/18
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: In one of the hardest battles of his life king would fight an opponent like no other, a spartan, but their style so unique, so familiar, fighting just one is nearly the death of him, how would he ever handle... 300....

Declined - Please resubmit with proper links to animebase as per the update found here. Quote your old submission on resubmission.
Players involved: Gajeel Redfox
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

- Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your clan (3)
- Make Amends at the cost of your pride (custom) (3)?

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 17/10/2018
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/sanindō-island-136.756150/post-21841863

Additional information:
King explains the events to the people, and begs for forgiveness, forgetting his pride and wants to make thing right. The clan gains a home, a family and potentially new allies.

Mission Failed. This would be a B rank, not a C rank because 3 + 3 / 2 = 3 and for me, that's where the problem lies. I don't feel like this constitutes a pass for a B rank mission. The reason I say this is because both of your elements double up on one objective, and that objective is to convince the people your bio is speaking to, to forgive your clan for not thinking about their wants and needs. It's a heartfelt speech and your bio becomes very emotional but I didn't feel like there were any stakes or struggle. It's your bio talking at a group for the entire mission, and it isn't a back and forth between you and another faction. If you try for a mission like this again I suggest negotiating for something like land, rights, or even loyalty. Speak on what your clan can do for the NPCs and have them talk back at your bio wanting certain things from you like protection so it's a conversation and a negotiation. Another thing you could do is create a debate against an influential NPC, for example, having a person speak out against your bio to create a struggle between yourself and an outspoken NPC who wanted you to fail or lose something. For this to be a C rank mission you would have had to make the secondary element a D rank element worth 1. B rank missions are middle of the road, they're not supposed to be extremely difficult, but they're also not supposed to be too easy.

Players involved: Gajeel Redfox
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

- Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/10/18
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/south-east-kinai-island-147.756160/post-21844910
Additional information: In one of the hardest battles of his life king would fight an opponent like no other, a spartan, but their style so unique, so familiar, fighting just one is nearly the death of him, how would he ever handle... 300....

Pending - Leaving S rank missions for ZK or Drackos until I become more familiar and comfortable checking them.

~This was a close one for me, but I'm erring on the side of caution because I just don't feel like this fight alone, good as it is, is worth an S-rank. I wish you'd gone on with the 300 soldiers and explored that some more, or put an SE to your introduction and perhaps explored the landmark a little more; added some depth to the fight itself. You allude to secrets and interesting narratives coming, and I look forward to that, but I have to judge the mission by its content. Mission Failed.
 
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Players involved: Nirvana, Gajeel Redfox, Gutsy Jirai
Mission Rank: C
Story Elements chosen:
  • Custom Element - Form a Clan (2)
  • Custom Element - Help rebuild a community (2)
  • Custom Element - Establish a base (2)
Date of Beginning and Date of End: 10-10-18 / 14-10-18
Relevant Mission Links: -

Additional Information: Gajeel and Kaizen have decided to form a alliance together and create clan Historia, Gutsy also appart of the alliance, has for the time being gone on a separate adventure that is linked to the coming arc of missions that will unveil. (Gajeel has also submitted details for the Clan)

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Players involved: Nirvana
Mission Rank: C
Story Elements chosen:
  • Clan - Solve a problem for a settlement in one of your landmarks (2)
  • Clan - Train a small group (2)
Date of Beginning and Date of End: 20-10-18 / 20-10-18
Relevant Mission Links:

Additional Information: The San'indo Island community have gained a new faction of soldiers called the survey corps who work directly with the Historia clan created by King and Kaizen who effectively act as NPC Allies.

All Declined - Please resubmit with proper links to animebase as per the update found here. Quote your old submission on resubmission.

Players involved: Nirvana, Gajeel Redfox, Gutsy Jirai
Mission Rank: C
Story Elements chosen:
  • Custom Element - Form a Clan (2)
  • Custom Element - Help rebuild a community (2)
  • Custom Element - Establish a base (2)
Date of Beginning and Date of End: 10-10-18 / 14-10-18
Relevant Mission Links: start p2 p3 End

Additional Information: Gajeel and Kaizen have decided to form a alliance together and create clan Historia, Gutsy also appart of the alliance, has for the time being gone on a separate adventure that is linked to the coming arc of missions that will unveil. (Gajeel has also submitted details for the Clan)

Pending - I'm leaving this one for ZK or Drackos.

~I'm just gonna skip over the fact that Nate's carrying luggage while the rest of the crew is terraforming the place and say Mission Passed.

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Players involved: Nirvana
Mission Rank: C
Story Elements chosen:
  • Clan - Solve a problem for a settlement in one of your landmarks (2)
  • Clan - Train a small group (2)
Date of Beginning and Date of End: 20-10-18 / 20-10-18
Relevant Mission Links: The Survey Corps

Additional Information: The San'indo Island community have gained a new faction of soldiers called the survey corps who work directly with the Historia clan created by King and Kaizen who effectively act as NPC Allies.

Mission Passed. Close for me. The two elements were used for the same objective which to me felt like you could use one or the other without losing much as it doubles up on the elements but uses the same activities to accomplish them. However, you stayed on task and trained three small groups instead of a single one so I factored that into this while thinking about it. @Kaito
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Choose between what is right and what is easy (3)
  • Explore the history of something (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10-31-2018
Relevant mission links: [x]
Additional information: This mission circles around Rebekah escorting a suspect through a forest in order to get them to the prison they must be kept in. While on her adventure to the location, the suspect tries to escape and Rebekah must then choose between an easy way out or the right thing, while also learning more about this suspects history.

Mission Failed. There's nothing wrong with fighting in your mission and it even made for a good story but you need to focus mainly on the elements you choose. You took two elements but didn't start performing them until you were halfway into your mission. This means you only had half of your mission to fit in what should be at minimum two-thirds of it. So that means your mission doesn't truly start until the middle when you're done fighting and have trapped your target. You can do a lot of things in a mission if you pick the right elements and spread your time among them accordingly. For example, if you would have chosen "Fight an individual of comparable strength" and added that into the fold it would have made your opening half more on task allowing all of the opening to count toward your mission instead of just being extra text. It would have given you the wiggle room needed for a pass. Don't be discouraged though you write well, and are succinct so I feel like you won't have much trouble with the right elements.
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story Elements Chosen: - Confront Cassander and answer a riddle (5)
- Attempt to extract knowledge from Cassander about the Necromancers (5)
Date of Beginning/End: 10/17/18 - 11/03/18
Relevant Links: https://animebase.me/threads/kusasōgen-090.755908/page-3 https://animebase.me/threads/thousand-needles-077.755894/
Additional information: Cassander didn't play along, so I did what I could with an one-sided conversation.

~Mission Failed. Rewards for the riddles were provided, and although the lack of reciprocrity is my fault this just doesn't qualify for an S-rank. It should be noted that your links are just for pages, not posts.
 
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