Storyboard Mission Submission

[Rust]

Players involved: Rust
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself [5]
Survive a near-death situation [5]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/28/2018 - 8/28/2018
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Mission Failed. Your summary, while it had no impact on the result of the mission, was hardly a summary. The elements, proportionally to the entire mission, did not suffice in detail to the level of an S-Rank mission.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
Custom: Build or rebuild a large community ( 5 )
In the darkest hour, overcome ( 5 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
08-28-2018
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Mission Failed. The opposite of a storyboard element does not necessarily mean it is of the same difficulty. Overall, the conflict in this mission was not to the level of S-Rank; if anything I would call this a B-Rank mission at best. The clan storyboard element used here was not appropriate for the context of this particular mission.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
Save a large community from danger (5)
Defend against or attack another group ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
08-17-2018
09-04-2018
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Additional information: Narratively it's a bit long.

Very nice. Mission Passed.

 

[Never]

Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
- In the darkest hour, overcome (5)
- Custom: Repel the Attack made by Takauji Ashikaga (5)
- Custom: Survive the Battle of Shinramoto (5)
- Custom: Save a large community from complete destruction (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
17/08/2018 - 05/09/2018
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Not a clan mission, used first storyboard element cause i thought it was suitable. Howard's parts are above.

~Mission Passed. Good work, you two.

 

[Priest]

Players involved: Priest
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Prepare one of the landmarks you own for immediate or future attacks (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
09-06-2018
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Continuing from my last mission and gradually adventuring into other landmarks. Would I be able to effect the landmark change officially?

Mission Passed. If you want to officially alter the landmark, submit it as an update in the Landmark Updates thread.

 

[RuckenTM]

Players involved: Rucken
Mission Rank: D Rank Plus
Story elements chosen:
Mission: D-rank


Explore a landmark
Gather resources from the land
Do a good deed
Do a bad deed
Take part in local festivities or a cultural ritual
Set up camp
Finish a chore using Ninjutsu
Do some moderate meditation to improve focus
Pull a prank or something prank-like



Mission: C-rank


Set up a secure camp
Perform a moderate workout routine
Build technology
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
20180809
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Additional information:
N/a

Declined...for now? I'm not really sure what I'm looking at here. Is this two different missions? Where's the link for the first one? Resubmit with a better submission template.

 

[Priest]

Players involved: Priest
Mission Rank: A
(3+4)/2=3.5
Story elements chosen:
- Custom: Overcome a problematic situation (3)
- Defend against or attack another group (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
09-09-2018
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Having set out to the sea, Medusa and her crew would face another predicament which they battle on their way.

Mission Passed. I'd love to see your character face a bit more adversity for these high-ranked missions though. I was mulling it over for a while, but ultimately, even though your custom SE is painfully generic (though that's their trademark) you still apply it specifically, and quite clearly spend time on both of them. Good enough for me

 

[Sasori]

Players involved: Sasori
Mission Rank: S (5)
Story elements chosen:
Assassinate the enemy commander (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
07/14/2018 - 09/09/2018
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Additional information: Sasori kills the battle commander.

Players involved: Sasori
Mission Rank: S (5)
Story elements chosen:
Destroy a large community (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
07/14/2018 - 09/10/2018
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Both Missions Passed. In the future, break them up with paragraphs more :|.

 

[SaintCelestine]

Players involved: Akalii
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Do some light meditation
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Mon 10th Sept
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information:[/B]

Mission Passed

 

[Ryóma]

Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Babysit someone much younger than you (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/09/18
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Additional information: My first solo mission u-u

Mission Passed. Cute.

 

[Zaphkiel]

Players involved: Zaphkiel

Mission Rank: S

Story elements chosen:
- Fight an individual of comparable strength (3)
- Save a large community from danger (5)
- Guard someone very important (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
8/30/18 - 9/11/18

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Additional information: No NPC techniques this time, just unique 'traits' that make for interesting story telling.

Mission Passed

 

[RuckenTM]

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Players involved: Rucken
Mission Rank: D Rank Plus
Story elements chosen:
Mission: D-rank


Explore a landmark
Gather resources from the land
Do a good deed
Do a bad deed
Take part in local festivities or a cultural ritual
Set up camp
Finish a chore using Ninjutsu
Do some moderate meditation to improve focus
Pull a prank or something prank-like



Mission: C-rank


Set up a secure camp
Perform a moderate workout routine
Build technology
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
20180809
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Additional information:
N/a

Declined...for now? I'm not really sure what I'm looking at here. Is this two different missions? Where's the link for the first one? Resubmit with a better submission template.

Sorry, I was out in the field just used my phone ^^

Players involved: (Solo Mssion) Rucken
Mission Rank: D-rank & C rank (D-C rank)
Story elements chosen:

-D-rank Elements-
Explore a landmark (1)
Gather resources from the land (1)
Do a good deed (1)
Do a bad deed (1)
Take part in local festivities or a cultural ritual (1)
Set up camp (1)
Finish a chore using Ninjutsu (1)
Do some moderate meditation to improve focus (1)
Pull a prank or something prank-like (1)

-C-rank Elements-
Set up a secure camp (2)
Perform a moderate workout routine (2)
Build technology (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20180809
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Additional information: N/a

Mission Passed, please read below:

Just to be clear, there's only ever 1 rank for a mission. There's no D-C rank. It's either D or C. In this case, it is D-Rank.

 

[SaintCelestine]

Players involved: Akalii
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: make a secure campsite
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: wed 13th Sept
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Mission Passed

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Help a friend ( 2 )
Custom: Save a life ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
09-08-2018
09-14-2018
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Mission Passed

 

[Zatanna]

Players involved: Zatanna
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Marked for Death
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 15th of 9th - 16th of 9th
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Additional information:
Faction mission

Mission Passed

 

[Eos]

Players involved: Eos
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Gather resources (samples) from the land (1)
Explore an abandoned site (2)
Defend yourself from wild beasts (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9/16
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Additional information: First mission be gentle.

Mission Passed

 

[Pyro NB]

Players involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
~Meet with a major faction representative (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9/15
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Additional information: N/A

~Mission Failed. See below.

Players involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
~Meet with a major faction representative (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9/16
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Mission Failed. I don't feel like this really constitutes an A-rank. It's a simple exchange with no points of friction, just a quick agreement on terms. Your story just feel empty. I can't fault you for the approach, but in this instance I think you're out of reach.

 

[Zatanna]

Players involved: Zatanna
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: -Guān Yáo (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 18th Sept
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Additional information:
Faction mission

~Mission Failed. This was a close one for me, but there's just a bit too little to work with here for a B-rank. You just spend too little time working towards your objective. It would have been different if this was a C-rank, or if your intro had been about gathering information to do the job, or somehow working towards the end goal. Spending that time accepting the mission in the first place does not really do that..

 

[Korra.]

Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Custom: Build a trading post with another clan ( 3 )
- Strengthen your alliance with another clan (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 9/15/2018 - 9/17/2018
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Additional information: Sado left a note for Fu and Korra about it
I will submit the landmark changes this weekend

You need to link specific posts, not pages, and this does not meet the requirements for a B-rank. Mission Failed.

 

[Ryóma]

Players involved: Ryóma
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Leave a place/event without being detected (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20/09/2018
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Additional information: Custom-made element. I hope it's suitable as C-Rank.

~Mission Failed. You spend too little time on leaving any place without being detected. That isn't what this story is about. If you want to tell a different story, you should pick different (and more) storyboard elements.