Raiton with Selendrile

[Noni]

close range.

 

[Selendrile]

close range.

It can go up to mid-range.

Next..

(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

Run up to my clone, landing a series of punches on his upper body and facial area. The last hit should propel him up, into the air. When he is airbourne, perform the chidori technique, and then jump and thrust it into his back. Of course, this can be achieved with freeform, but techniques are so much more fun!

-Creates clone-

 

[Noni]

Advantages: Great for close range, Taijutsu type attacks. Because he is in the Air he has very little to do because it impossible physically to move around mid-air.
Disadvantages: If the opponent is far then you can't use this jutsu.

I sprint towards the clone, When I reach him I begin to deliver a many blows and kicks direct all over his body. I hit him so hard to make sure he is propelled in the air. I begin to make the chidori. I perform the hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, Then I focus and concentrate on a major portion of my chakra. I begin to channel the chakra into my right palm and start to hold it with my left arm. I condense the chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into visible lighting. I hear chirping noises meaning that its ready.
I see the clone descending down I then use the chidori to pierce him in the back, damaging him and technically killing him.
"Hey sensei, You think I might ever do this move on you ...:snick:

 

[Selendrile]

Advantages: Great for close range, Taijutsu type attacks. Because he is in the Air he has very little to do because it impossible physically to move around mid-air.
Disadvantages: If the opponent is far then you can't use this jutsu.

I sprint towards the clone, When I reach him I begin to deliver a many blows and kicks direct all over his body. I hit him so hard to make sure he is propelled in the air. I begin to make the chidori. I perform the hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, Then I focus and concentrate on a major portion of my chakra. I begin to channel the chakra into my right palm and start to hold it with my left arm. I condense the chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into visible lighting. I hear chirping noises meaning that its ready.
I see the clone descending down I then use the chidori to pierce him in the back, damaging him and technically killing him.
"Hey sensei, You think I might ever do this move on you ...:snick:

Don't hurt me pls. :T_T:

Next..

(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

Pick up this sword, and run towards my clone. As you run towards him, perform an upward slash any way you like, in order to send him airbourne. Sheathe the sword quickly, perform a chidori again, and then jump and appear on top of the clone. Slam the chidori into his gut, smashing him hard into the ground.

-Creates clone-

 

[Noni]

Advantages: Since the opponent is in the air he can not dodge physically.
Disadvantages: You must be in close range of the opponent.


I pick up the sword, and sprint towards the clone. I slash him with the sword upwards through his body. This cuts him but also propels him high up the air. While he is in the air I perform the chidori.I perform the hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, Then I focus and concentrate on a major portion of my chakra. I begin to channel the chakra into my right palm and start to hold it with my left arm to control it. I condense the chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into visible lighting. I hear the famous chirping noise from the chidori and lighting all over. I then jump high and reach the clone in the air. I then slam him back down towards the clone with a hit from the chidori piercing him.

 

[Selendrile]

Advantages: Since the opponent is in the air he can not dodge physically.
Disadvantages: You must be in close range of the opponent.


I pick up the sword, and sprint towards the clone. I slash him with the sword upwards through his body. This cuts him but also propels him high up the air. While he is in the air I perform the chidori.I perform the hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, Then I focus and concentrate on a major portion of my chakra. I begin to channel the chakra into my right palm and start to hold it with my left arm to control it. I condense the chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into visible lighting. I hear the famous chirping noise from the chidori and lighting all over. I then jump high and reach the clone in the air. I then slam him back down towards the clone with a hit from the chidori piercing him.

//
What hand do you hold the sword with, and where do you strike him on his body?

 

[Noni]

I hold it with my left hand because I use my right hand for the chidori.
I strike him upwards from his stomach up to the shoulder.

 

[Selendrile]

I hold it with my left hand because I use my right hand for the chidori.
I strike him upwards from his stomach up to the shoulder.

Much better.

(Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

Pull out your sword, and strike my clone into the air with it. After striking him into the air, jump after him, continuing to strike him with punches and kicks. Then quickly get back to ground level, where you perform a chidori, and slam it into his back as he falls injured to the ground.

-Creates clone-

 

[Noni]

Advantages: A very powerful and quick attack. Little to nothing an opponent to do in the air.
Disadvantages: Must be in short range.

I pull out my sword and hold it in my left hand and dash to the clone, I slash him upwards from his stomach up to the shoulder, The clone is propelled up into the air, I jump high towards the clone and begin to give him a beating from the air, Punching and Kicking him all over. I then stop and while falling I perform the hand seals required and focus on my chakra. I land on to the ground and channel my lighting chakra to my right hand, I here the chirping noises and know that it is ready. I see the clone falling back down towards me, I slam my chidori on the back of the clone. Killing him.

 

[Selendrile]

Advantages: A very powerful and quick attack. Little to nothing an opponent to do in the air.
Disadvantages: Must be in short range.

I pull out my sword and hold it in my left hand and dash to the clone, I slash him upwards from his stomach up to the shoulder, The clone is propelled up into the air, I jump high towards the clone and begin to give him a beating from the air, Punching and Kicking him all over. I then stop and while falling I perform the hand seals required and focus on my chakra. I land on to the ground and channel my lighting chakra to my right hand, I here the chirping noises and know that it is ready. I see the clone falling back down towards me, I slam my chidori on the back of the clone. Killing him.

Now, what's the disadvantage/negative about these freeform-esque techniques that involve multiple steps to complete?

 

[Noni]

I knew that was gonna be bad lol

Disadvantages: Well you must have a sword, You must get close which if the opponent is good at taijutsu or is fast might be a problem. Since their is many steps to this attack it is easy for your opponent to block or at least evade on of them. if your opponent is able to lose your concentration or just makes you distracted in any way it can ruin the technique and leave you defenseless.

 

[Selendrile]

I knew that was gonna be bad lol

Disadvantages: Well you must have a sword, You must get close which if the opponent is good at taijutsu or is fast might be a problem. Since their is many steps to this attack it is easy for your opponent to block or at least evade on of them. if your opponent is able to lose your concentration or just makes you distracted in any way it can ruin the technique and leave you defenseless.

Exactly correct. xD

(Raiton: Raiun) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Use your chakra, and direct it into a cloud in the sky. As you focus your chakra into it, it should become a thundercloud. Then shower my clone with lightning bolts as you release and direct the bolts down onto him.

-Creates clone-

 

[Noni]

Advantages: You can direct the lighting where ever you want and use it for many different things. You can strike down the opponent or damage the terrain badly in your favor though.

Disadvantages: A cloud has to be present to perform the jutsu. Since its coming from a cloud the opponent can just use wind techniques to blow the cloud away.

I look up and notice a cloud, I channel my chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into lighting. I then send the lighting chakra towards the cloud. I begin flooding the cloud with more chakra, making the cloud increase in size and get darker to form a storm cloud. I manipulate the cloud to go underneath the clone you made. I release all the lighting from the storm cloud, Showering the clone with lighting bolts.

 

[Selendrile]

Advantages: You can direct the lighting where ever you want and use it for many different things. You can strike down the opponent or damage the terrain badly in your favor though.

Disadvantages: A cloud has to be present to perform the jutsu. Since its coming from a cloud the opponent can just use wind techniques to blow the cloud away.

I look up and notice a cloud, I channel my chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into lighting. I then send the lighting chakra towards the cloud. I begin flooding the cloud with more chakra, making the cloud increase in size and get darker to form a storm cloud. I manipulate the cloud to go underneath the clone you made. I release all the lighting from the storm cloud, Showering the clone with lighting bolts.

Very nice. ^^

(Raiton: Denko Sekka) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Focus raiton chakra into your hands, and then release it in bursts. Each burst should form into an electrical ball, which should spread out over the battlefield around you. After they go around the battlefield, use your chakra and connect the orbs, shocking my clone who is in the "orb cage". Position the orbs around his position.

-Creates clone-

 

[Noni]

Advantages: Can attack more then one target, basically anyone that is in the orb cage. When released it is almost impossible to dodge because of the lighting speed, and Also because of the wide range attack.

Disadvantages: If the opponent is to damage just one of the orbs it will ruin the jutsu, Since the Jutsu needs all the orbs to be position correctly for it to work. ( At least I think)

I concentrate chakra into my hands, I use nature manipulate to turn the chakra into lighting. Then I release the lighting chakra from my into bursts. I begin to form the bursts into electrical balls. I then send the balls all around the area where the clone is standing. I use chakra to connect the orbs together and release the lighting, Shocking the clone.

 

[Selendrile]

Advantages: Can attack more then one target, basically anyone that is in the orb cage. When released it is almost impossible to dodge because of the lighting speed, and Also because of the wide range attack.

Disadvantages: If the opponent is to damage just one of the orbs it will ruin the jutsu, Since the Jutsu needs all the orbs to be position correctly for it to work. ( At least I think)

I concentrate chakra into my hands, I use nature manipulate to turn the chakra into lighting. Then I release the lighting chakra from my into bursts. I begin to form the bursts into electrical balls. I then send the balls all around the area where the clone is standing. I use chakra to connect the orbs together and release the lighting, Shocking the clone.

Great, now A-ranks are finished! Perform a 3 technique move using 2 lightning techniques we have learned. Mid-range.

 

[Noni]

I don't want to fight a weakling, But I have no choice.

I begin to focus on my chakra. I start to manipulate the chakra by using nature transformation and turn the chakra into fire chakra. I take a inhale deeply getting ready to blow the flame towards the opponent. I blow out a stream of flames, the flames are aimed towards my opponent. Due to the massive heat of the Jutsu my opponent begins to feel light headed and distracted.

Spoiler

( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.

My opponent is off guard but now I need to stop his movements completely, I concentrate on my chakra, I begin to use nature manipulation to turn my chakra into lighting. I send the chakra onto the edge of my body, I then begin to channel it around the edge's of my body. I release the lighting chakra, Lighting begins to shoot out all over my body hitting my opponent stopping his movements.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Now, I will finish you.

I perform the hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, Then I focus and concentrate on a major portion of my chakra. I send the chakra to my right hand. I condense the chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into visible lighting. I hear chirping noises meaning that my chidori is complete. I point it towards the hopeless opponent and release the lighting forward and shaping it as a spear. It pierces the opponent through the heart, Finishing him off.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

 

[Selendrile]

I don't want to fight a weakling, But I have no choice.

I begin to focus on my chakra. I start to manipulate the chakra by using nature transformation and turn the chakra into fire chakra. I take a inhale deeply getting ready to blow the flame towards the opponent. I blow out a stream of flames, the flames are aimed towards my opponent. Due to the massive heat of the Jutsu my opponent begins to feel light headed and distracted.

Spoiler

( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.

My opponent is off guard but now I need to stop his movements completely, I concentrate on my chakra, I begin to use nature manipulation to turn my chakra into lighting. I send the chakra onto the edge of my body, I then begin to channel it around the edge's of my body. I release the lighting chakra, Lighting begins to shoot out all over my body hitting my opponent stopping his movements.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Now, I will finish you.

I perform the hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, Then I focus and concentrate on a major portion of my chakra. I send the chakra to my right hand. I condense the chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into visible lighting. I hear chirping noises meaning that my chidori is complete. I point it towards the hopeless opponent and release the lighting forward and shaping it as a spear. It pierces the opponent through the heart, Finishing him off.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

Your first technique wont reach, and the burst of Chidori Nagashi only goes up to short range. If you channel it through something, it can reach mid. Re-try.

 

[Noni]

Ok how about this then....

I see my opponent standing mid-range, Without hesitating I focus my chakra. I channel the chakra to my mouth. I begin to use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into water. I release the water out of my mouth and begin to manipulate it into a fast rotating sphere, I aim it not exactly towards the opponent but a little ahead of him to make the area around him soaked in water.

Spoiler

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water release: Water Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A large sphere of rotating water that is spit out of the users mouth that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

The area is soaked in water and this is when I use Nature manipulation to turn my chakra into lighting. I channel the lighting towards the palm of my right hand and release the lighting from my hand, I manipulate the shape to form a Lighting ball.I aim the ball towards the area where my opponent is standing and also since the area is soaked it travels fast towards him and shocks him badly but also paralysis him, leaving himself defenseless and unable to move.

Spoiler

(Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
Rank: D
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

I perform the hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, Then I focus and concentrate on a major portion of my chakra. I send the chakra to my right hand. I condense the chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into visible lighting. I hear chirping noises meaning that my chidori is complete. I point it towards the hopeless opponent and release the lighting forward and shaping it as a spear. It pierces the opponent through the heart, Finishing him off.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

 

[Selendrile]

Ok how about this then....

I see my opponent standing mid-range, Without hesitating I focus my chakra. I channel the chakra to my mouth. I begin to use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into water. I release the water out of my mouth and begin to manipulate it into a fast rotating sphere, I aim it not exactly towards the opponent but a little ahead of him to make the area around him soaked in water.

Spoiler

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water release: Water Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: A large sphere of rotating water that is spit out of the users mouth that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

The area is soaked in water and this is when I use Nature manipulation to turn my chakra into lighting. I channel the lighting towards the palm of my right hand and release the lighting from my hand, I manipulate the shape to form a Lighting ball.I aim the ball towards the area where my opponent is standing and also since the area is soaked it travels fast towards him and shocks him badly but also paralysis him, leaving himself defenseless and unable to move.

Spoiler

(Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
Rank: D
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

I perform the hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, Then I focus and concentrate on a major portion of my chakra. I send the chakra to my right hand. I condense the chakra and use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into visible lighting. I hear chirping noises meaning that my chidori is complete. I point it towards the hopeless opponent and release the lighting forward and shaping it as a spear. It pierces the opponent through the heart, Finishing him off.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

There's a stronger/faster B-rank lightning technique that can be used to infuse water.