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I focus on chakra and channel it towards my mouth while using nature manipulation to turn the chakra into water. I start to thin out the water and release a mist out of my mouth that begins to cover the area. While doing so I channel chakra towards my feet preventing my opponent to hear my foot steps.
While in the mist I send chakra around my body and turn the nature of the chakra into lighting. I release the lighting chakra forward and begin to mold it into looking like me in physical traits thus creating a lighting style clone. I leave my clone inside the mist and then I had outside the mist.
I sense where my opponent is in the mist and make sure to get behind him in short range, Chakra is still in my feet so he can't hear me.I perform the hand seals Ox β Rabbit β Monkey β Dragon β Rat β Bird β Ox β Snake β Dog β Tiger β Monkey, and then release lighting chakra out of the palm of my hand and condense it revealing my chidori. My opponent uses a wind technique to blow the mist away and revealing my lighting clone but he thinks its really me. He attacks my clone, but my clone when hit disappears, I from behind stabs him from the back through his heart with my chidori.
(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dΕjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dΕjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source
While in the mist I send chakra around my body and turn the nature of the chakra into lighting. I release the lighting chakra forward and begin to mold it into looking like me in physical traits thus creating a lighting style clone. I leave my clone inside the mist and then I had outside the mist.
(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
I sense where my opponent is in the mist and make sure to get behind him in short range, Chakra is still in my feet so he can't hear me.I perform the hand seals Ox β Rabbit β Monkey β Dragon β Rat β Bird β Ox β Snake β Dog β Tiger β Monkey, and then release lighting chakra out of the palm of my hand and condense it revealing my chidori. My opponent uses a wind technique to blow the mist away and revealing my lighting clone but he thinks its really me. He attacks my clone, but my clone when hit disappears, I from behind stabs him from the back through his heart with my chidori.
(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox β Rabbit β Monkey β Dragon β Rat β Bird β Ox β Snake β Dog β Tiger β Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox β Rabbit β Monkey β Dragon β Rat β Bird β Ox β Snake β Dog β Tiger β Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
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Selendrile
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@Red: Be more specific on what direction you are heading towards.
@Blue: How are you sensing him?
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I will do some rewriting in the area you mentioned.
I notice my opponent ahead of me mid range. I focus on chakra and channel it towards my mouth while using nature manipulation to turn the chakra into water. I start to thin out the water and release a mist out of my mouth that begins to cover the area. While doing so I channel chakra towards my feet preventing my opponent to hear my foot steps.
While in the mist I send chakra around my body and turn the nature of the chakra into lighting. I release the lighting chakra forward and begin to mold it into looking like me in physical traits thus creating a lighting style clone. I leave my clone inside the mist and then I had outside the mist by going towards my right side.
After remembering where I last saw my opponent before hiding in the mist. I make sure to get behind him in short range, Chakra is still in my feet so he can't hear me.I perform the hand seals Ox β Rabbit β Monkey β Dragon β Rat β Bird β Ox β Snake β Dog β Tiger β Monkey, and then release lighting chakra out of the palm of my hand and condense it revealing my chidori. My opponent uses a wind technique to blow the mist away and revealing my lighting clone but he thinks its really me. He attacks my clone, but my clone when hit disappears, I from behind stabs him from the back through his heart with my chidori.
Was that any better?
I just fixed the stuff you mentioned.
I notice my opponent ahead of me mid range. I focus on chakra and channel it towards my mouth while using nature manipulation to turn the chakra into water. I start to thin out the water and release a mist out of my mouth that begins to cover the area. While doing so I channel chakra towards my feet preventing my opponent to hear my foot steps.
(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dΕjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dΕjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source
While in the mist I send chakra around my body and turn the nature of the chakra into lighting. I release the lighting chakra forward and begin to mold it into looking like me in physical traits thus creating a lighting style clone. I leave my clone inside the mist and then I had outside the mist by going towards my right side.
(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
After remembering where I last saw my opponent before hiding in the mist. I make sure to get behind him in short range, Chakra is still in my feet so he can't hear me.I perform the hand seals Ox β Rabbit β Monkey β Dragon β Rat β Bird β Ox β Snake β Dog β Tiger β Monkey, and then release lighting chakra out of the palm of my hand and condense it revealing my chidori. My opponent uses a wind technique to blow the mist away and revealing my lighting clone but he thinks its really me. He attacks my clone, but my clone when hit disappears, I from behind stabs him from the back through his heart with my chidori.
(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox β Rabbit β Monkey β Dragon β Rat β Bird β Ox β Snake β Dog β Tiger β Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox β Rabbit β Monkey β Dragon β Rat β Bird β Ox β Snake β Dog β Tiger β Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Was that any better?
I just fixed the stuff you mentioned.
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I'm unsure about the chakra in the feet to muffle sounds too. But meh.
@Red: You cant say what technique your opponent will use, that's god-modding/metagaming. People freak out when you do that. xD
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My senpai who is teaching me water release told me that.
I know if I was to use that in real battle it would be dumb lol
But I'm sure when ever the mist is set the first thing most opponents would do it blow it away.
I'm trying to assume what my opponent would do.
I know if I was to use that in real battle it would be dumb lol
But I'm sure when ever the mist is set the first thing most opponents would do it blow it away.
I'm trying to assume what my opponent would do.
Selendrile
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They could escape the mist, evaporate it with fire, or simply not blow it away. You can't control their character in your moves, only they can do that.
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I'm guessing you want me to do another attack. well here it is then XD
I focus chakra and begin to channel it under the ground, I use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into water and send the water underneath my opponent's feet. I release the water upwards imprisoning my opponent and preventing his movements.
I then immediately focus chakra around my body then quickly use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into lighting. I release the lighting on the edge's of my body and then I release the chakra all around and manipulate the lighting towards my opponent through the ground for a mid-range attack. This shocks but also paralysis the opponent leaving him for me to finish off.
For the finishing blow I perform the hand seal Snake, I channel my lighting chakra towards my right hand, I release the gathered lighting and form it into looking like a very long sharp spear. I throw it forward at my paralyzed opponent stabbing him and killing him
I focus chakra and begin to channel it under the ground, I use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into water and send the water underneath my opponent's feet. I release the water upwards imprisoning my opponent and preventing his movements.
(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source
I then immediately focus chakra around my body then quickly use nature manipulation to turn the chakra into lighting. I release the lighting on the edge's of my body and then I release the chakra all around and manipulate the lighting towards my opponent through the ground for a mid-range attack. This shocks but also paralysis the opponent leaving him for me to finish off.
(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.
For the finishing blow I perform the hand seal Snake, I channel my lighting chakra towards my right hand, I release the gathered lighting and form it into looking like a very long sharp spear. I throw it forward at my paralyzed opponent stabbing him and killing him
(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.