Letters...
- Thread starter Aki
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Your second letter was a total shock to me :S
It is like you were talking about me and a special person in my life.
someone i lost and now i can't stop missing him.
Thank you Aki, for putting words to my thoughts.
The man you love so much is very very lucky and i hope for his shake that he knows that already.
It is like you were talking about me and a special person in my life.
someone i lost and now i can't stop missing him.
Thank you Aki, for putting words to my thoughts.
The man you love so much is very very lucky and i hope for his shake that he knows that already.
ok i'll post them in spanish too
wow i never thougth the my letters coulda have such an impoact on ppl
I like this one it relates to me.okies here it goes:
Eres un ser muy especial, cada ves que te miro siento mariposas en el estomago, cuando estoy cerca de ti siento que mi vida esta completa, me olvido de todo lo bueno y malo de este mundo.
Cuando nuestras miradas se cruzan, por segundos siento que tu sientes lo mismo que yo y que te gustaria tanto hablarme como a mi me gustaria hablarte y ademas de hablarte me gustaria abrazarte y que el tiempo se detuviera para siempre y asi nunca tendriamos que separarnos.
Cuando siento que me miras me sonrojo y me pongo nerviosa, pero al mismo tiempo me pongo a pensar: "sera que piensas que soy bonita?"
Me gustaria mucho que pensaras en mi como yo pienso en ti desde que te vi por primera ves.
Espero que algun dia te pueda confesar mis verdaderos sentimientos.
Con amor,
Carolina
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Response to "Friends":
I thought it was very relatable to anybody who was in a similar position, and plenty of people have. I enjoyed the uncertainty of the letter. The girl has to first discover herself and what all this means to her before she can decide on a course of action. This letter is like a small window, glimpsing a short, yet important timeframe in the life of a young woman. The best part about it, is that it is a cliffhanger. You have led the readers on, enticing them to read more of your work, and to find out what happens to the woman.
Excellent work, I liked how it was essentially a photograph in time.
I thought it was very relatable to anybody who was in a similar position, and plenty of people have. I enjoyed the uncertainty of the letter. The girl has to first discover herself and what all this means to her before she can decide on a course of action. This letter is like a small window, glimpsing a short, yet important timeframe in the life of a young woman. The best part about it, is that it is a cliffhanger. You have led the readers on, enticing them to read more of your work, and to find out what happens to the woman.
Excellent work, I liked how it was essentially a photograph in time.
This is a sad one...
Do you know? I thougth you were a great person, that you could fill the hole in my heart, i thought you were the one for me, but sadly i realize that you're not the great person i dreamt about, that it was just a mask, and that mask hides a bad person. I never thougth that you could be that kind of person, because your looks didn't tell me that.
Now your looks don't bring me the joy and happiness that they used to, now your looks bring me sadness and sorrow, not sadness for not having you, but sadness and sorrow for wasting my time loving you.
Now, i don't wanna talk to you or hold yo, the only thing i want to do now is to forget that one day you ment so much to me, much more than my own life.
I realize that you're not essential in my life, that i don't need you, that you didn't deserve my love, because you don't, before all this, when i said you were the best in the whole world, i put all my feelings for you in a letter, i didn't give it to you because i was scared of your reaction, i regreted that ta first, but now i don't regret it at all, now that letter is waiting for a really good person that loves me the way i am.
the last thing i want to say to you is don't worry, i don't hate you, i just feel pity that behind those beautiful eyes there aren't the nice and warm feelings that i thougth,
Carolina
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Do you know? I thougth you were a great person, that you could fill the hole in my heart, i thought you were the one for me, but sadly i realize that you're not the great person i dreamt about, that it was just a mask, and that mask hides a bad person. I never thougth that you could be that kind of person, because your looks didn't tell me that.
Now your looks don't bring me the joy and happiness that they used to, now your looks bring me sadness and sorrow, not sadness for not having you, but sadness and sorrow for wasting my time loving you.
Now, i don't wanna talk to you or hold yo, the only thing i want to do now is to forget that one day you ment so much to me, much more than my own life.
I realize that you're not essential in my life, that i don't need you, that you didn't deserve my love, because you don't, before all this, when i said you were the best in the whole world, i put all my feelings for you in a letter, i didn't give it to you because i was scared of your reaction, i regreted that ta first, but now i don't regret it at all, now that letter is waiting for a really good person that loves me the way i am.
the last thing i want to say to you is don't worry, i don't hate you, i just feel pity that behind those beautiful eyes there aren't the nice and warm feelings that i thougth,
Carolina
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Oh Aki
this was so sad...
still since you have spoken from your heart it is also beautiful ...
Thank you for sharing this.
this was so sad...
still since you have spoken from your heart it is also beautiful ...
Thank you for sharing this.
make another post like this and you will get an infraction.
too true too often
Too often we don't realize
What we have until it is gone
Too often we wait too late to say
"I'm sorry - I was wrong."
Sometimes it seems we hurt the ones
We hold dearest to our hearts
And we allow foolish things
To tear our lives apart.
Far too many times we let
Unimportant things into our minds
And then it's usually too late
To see what made us blind.
So be sure that you let people know
How much they mean to you
Take that time to say the words
Before your time is through.
Be sure that you appreciate
Everything you've got
And be thankful for the little things
in life that mean a lot.
Too often we don't realize
What we have until it is gone
Too often we wait too late to say
"I'm sorry - I was wrong."
Sometimes it seems we hurt the ones
We hold dearest to our hearts
And we allow foolish things
To tear our lives apart.
Far too many times we let
Unimportant things into our minds
And then it's usually too late
To see what made us blind.
So be sure that you let people know
How much they mean to you
Take that time to say the words
Before your time is through.
Be sure that you appreciate
Everything you've got
And be thankful for the little things
in life that mean a lot.
