After some rest obito quickly started planning his next attack and started running towards his opponent as soon as he got into mid range, he took his sword with his right hand and aimed it towards opponent hitting him in right shoulder with simple diagonal motion
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@Bold: Too unspecific. You dont mention how you aim it towards me, neither do you tell me the direction of your swing.
But, I said no more diagonal attacks. Use something else. We will not move onto techniques until you can give me one perfect description without error.
Obito started to attack his sensai once again but this time he was more careful he took his bokken with right hand and ran towards sensai once he got into short range he quickly moved his sword from right to left attacking his opponent with vertical motion most likely hitting his stomach
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@Red: Good job! Mentioning the direction and where it starts is something you should always include.
@Bold: Vertical is up and down. Horizontal is sideways. You would've wanted to use horiztonal instead.
@Underline: So there is a chance you would hit my... foot?
Fix this description.
Obito messed up cause he thought vertical was sideways but instead it was from up to down but he couldn't give up so he continued attacking sensai first he ran towards him then he took his bokken with his right arm and moving it from right to left in horizontal motion hitting enemys chest
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Any questions before we go on to techniques?
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Okay.
-removes a scroll, unseals a huge table full of weaponry-
First up..
(Ken Rendan no Jutsu) - Sword Barrage Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 25
Description: With this technique, the user will make a sequence of slashes with their sword and finishes with a powerful final slash dealing liberal damage to their enemy.
One of my favorites because it gives you complete freedom in how you attack! Probably the best technique on the entire list of basic ken.
Obito quickly perfomed this technique and started to run towards dummy but this time he had real sharp sword as soon as he got into short range he moved his sword from right to left perfoming one slash then moving from left to right perfoming second one and then finishing it off with powerfull slash wich was aimed from right to left in a horizontal motion
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@Blue: How are you holding it? Left hand, right hand, both?
@Bold: Specify how. Horizontal, diagonal?
@Red: Good description.
Obito quickly perfomed this technique and started to run towards dummy but this time he had real sharp sword in his right hand as soon as he got into short range he moved his sword from right to left perfoming one horizontal slash then moving from left to right perfoming second horizontal slash and then finishing it off with powerfull slash wich was aimed from right to left in a horizontal motion
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Good. Remember to mention where you make your slash (chest, neck, gut, legs, etc). The rest of the description was accurate.
(Ikari Nomikomu no Jutsu) - Fury Swallow Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 25
Description: The user punches the opponent a few times and finishes them with two final slashes with their blade or sword.
Do as the technique says, the process is left up to you.
Obito started perfoming this technique with gathering some chakra, as soon as he did that he ran towards enemy and deliverd powerfull several punches in stomach and his face, after that he took his sword into his right hand and moved it from right to left perfoming horizontal slash hitting his right hand plus stomach, following with another powerfull slash wich was aimed from left to right in a horizontal motion hitting his stomach
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@Bold: You need to specify these punches.. what arm, what type of punch, etc.
@Red: Do something else besides a horizontal slash. You've done plenty of those.
Obito started perfoming this technique with gathering some chakra, as soon as he did that he ran towards enemy and raised his right arm forward, moving it from right to left and delivering powerfull several punches in his face, after that he took his sword into his right hand and moved it from bottom right to left perfoming diagonal slash hitting his right hand plus stomach, following with another powerfull slash wich was aimed from above to bellow in a vertical motion hitting his head
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@Bold: That sounds like "hook" punch, so rewrite it again with saying you use a right hook.
@Underline: If you draw the sword with your right hand, you would be striking from your bottom left to top right, not the other way around.
The vertical slash is done well, good job.
Obito started perfoming this technique with gathering some chakra, as soon as he did that he ran towards enemy and raised his right arm forward, moving it from right to left and delivering powerfull several right hook punches in his face, after that he took his sword into his right hand and moved it from bottom left to right perfoming diagonal slash hitting his left hand plus stomach, following with another powerfull slash wich was aimed from above to bellow in a vertical motion hitting his head
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Looks good now.
( Enjin Ranbu ) - Circular Wild Dance
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 25
Description: The user spins with his tantō, hitting the target several times.
So a tanto is a short blade, similar to the thing Kakashi used when he was young (the gift from his father or w/e). So use that, spin a few times while holding it to cut through your target. You can either be moving and use it, or be stationary and spin around on the same spot.
Obito catches this tongo and holds it with his right hand while slowly starting to spin whilst holding this tongo aiming it towards dummy now obito was spinning from left to right allowing him to hit enemy into stomach several times
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I must've been gone longer than I thought... because that's not the quality I have expected from you. U_U Use detail like we have been doing for two months.