(Kachū Haisha) - Vortex Vanquisher
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-50 for "Nagareboshi Kiritsu")
Damage: N/A
Description: "This sharp polearm can seemingly pierce through anything. When swung, one can almost see the rift it tears in the air. "
The Vortex Vanquisher is a polearm crafted by and for Zhongli. It is roughly 2 meters in length from the shaft's end-to-end thatYou must be registered for see imagesextends by an additional half meter at it's head where a ornate blade is fixed. The blade of the spearhead is quite unique, it's shine like that of white-hot steel that never cools, yet it is not hot to the touch. The shaft of the spear is capable of retracting into itself until all that is left is the half-meter length of the spearhead, allowing for convenient and easy transportation of the weapon as needed. The polearm was fashioned out of a dense chunk of metal that was located directly next to the Ryūmyaku, or Dragon Vein, that had been harvested from the depths of the Earth's crust. The Ryūmyaku are natural chakra veins that run through the Earth itself, thus the spear contains a signature of natural chakra that perpetually flows in equilibrium throughout it's entire structure. This chakra is dormant and without much effect until the wielder of the spear chooses to form a bond with the Vortex Vanquisher, tethering their chakra reserves to the polearm and causing a steady flow of chakra to infuse into it, allowing for the spear to take on a variety of transformations in it's capable functions:
◈ Tsuchi Shukensha: "Earth Sovereign" takes effect at the moment in which the user forms a bond with the Vortex Vanquisher, stimulating the Ryūmyaku's natural chakra. Afterward, the spear's head will begin to illuminate in a bright light orange saturation. Zhongli will then, at his discretion, have the ability to pierce the head of the spear into the ground. In doing so, the aforementioned chakra infused into the spear will seek out it's former bonds with that of the leylines still present within the earth, rekindling the tether with the Ryūmyaku that it was sourced from. As a result, Zhongli is capable of harnessing the depths of the leylines, utilizing the natural chakra flowing throughout their channels to manipulate the landscape with the Vortex Vanquisher as the catalyst, scaling from minor alterations such as flattening the terrain or creating small pillars or walls of earth, to drastic proportions such as the creation of an imposing mountain of rigid stone. The capabilities are quite expansive and is left up to the limitations of the wielder's own imagination.
Note: This effect functions as a charge and counts as one of the user's 3 moves. The spear's tether lasts for up to 4 turns, allowing the user to manipulate the terrain in that time before going on a 3 turn cooldown, requiring to be recharged. This effect cannot cause damage.
◈ Nagareboshi Kiritsu: "Meteoric Order" takes effect when Zhongli forms a bond with the Vortex Vanquisher by promptly drawing blood across the blade of the spear, then channeling 50 Chakra into it. Upon doing so, Zhongli will then lift the spear in a slashing swipe skyward overhead, which will discharge a heavy shockwave that ripples out in a 5 meter radius around him. This shockwave is purely visual and has no impact on the field or others apart from the visual effect. Once this is done, an immense Space-Time Portal (similar to that of what is made in "(Doton: Otoshibuta) - Earth Release: Dropping Lid") will appear overhead in the sky, roughly 50 meters above the surface point in which the ability was activated. As the portal forms, a destructive, bellowing meteorite of Earth varying in geometric protrusions all forming a singular structure will escape the confines of the portal, dropping the full length from it's point of conjuring until making impact with a designated point by the user up to long-range, causing devastating damage to the terrain and everything encompassing the impact zone up to medium range in radius, dealing Forbidden-rank 90 damage to anything caught in it's destructive path.
Note: This ability may only be used once per fight/encounter and counts toward one of the user's 3 moves. It may not be activated if Zhongli is currently using "Earth Sovereign," and upon use, all other abilities of Vortex Vanquisher may not be activated for 3 turns afterward.
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Declined: Conceptually, this weapon is fine, but the main issue is its Meteoric Order ability. Customs involving Space-Time aren't allowed, unless the field in question actually revolves around Space-Time. Flying Thunder God, or a Space-Time MS, to name a couple. This is a smaller thing by comparison, but in regards to Earth Sovereign, there's nothing that differentiates this ability from the Earth canons that, in some way or another, alter the terrain.
- Vortex Vanquisher can only be used by Zhongli
- Must be an Earth-based specialist to use Vortex Vanquisher
Changelog:
- "Earth Sovereign"
- Added a multi-rank system to the earth manipulation mechanic.
- Added a new mechanic of "field sensory," allowing for the user to sense their immediate surroundings so long as contact is made to the earth, specifically.
- Added a new mechanic of "earth material projection/creation", allowing the use of earth chakra supplied by the user to create earthen projectiles from the spear.
- Added a 10 chakra/turn charge requirement, as well removed the previous footnote mentioning how this ability couldn't cause damage, now that new mechanics have been implemented that suggest otherwise.
- "Meteoric Order"
- Removed any reference of the use of "Space-time portals."
- Replaced Space-time portals with the utilization of a Summoning, wherein the spear is utilized as the vessel for the housing of the meteor and thus used to release the object in the described manner.
(Kachū Haisha) - Vortex Vanquisher
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-50 for "Nagareboshi Kiritsu")
Damage: N/A
Description: "This sharp polearm can seemingly pierce through anything. When swung, one can almost see the rift it tears in the air. "
The Vortex Vanquisher is a polearm crafted by and for Zhongli. It is roughly 2 meters in length from the shaft's end-to-end that
You must be registered for see images
extends by an additional half meter at it's head where a ornate blade is fixed. The blade of the spearhead is quite unique, it's shine like that of white-hot steel that never cools, yet it is not hot to the touch. The shaft of the spear is capable of retracting into itself until all that is left is the half-meter length of the spearhead, allowing for convenient and easy transportation of the weapon as needed. The polearm was fashioned out of a dense chunk of metal that was located directly next to the Ryūmyaku, or Dragon Vein, that had been harvested from the depths of the Earth's crust. The Ryūmyaku are natural chakra veins that run through the Earth itself, thus the spear contains a signature of natural chakra that perpetually flows in equilibrium throughout it's entire structure. This chakra is dormant and without much effect until the wielder of the spear chooses to form a bond with the Vortex Vanquisher, tethering their chakra reserves to the polearm and causing a steady flow of chakra to infuse into it, allowing for the spear to take on a variety of transformations in it's capable functions:◈ Tsuchi Shukensha: "Earth Sovereign" takes effect at the moment in which the user forms a bond with the Vortex Vanquisher, stimulating the Ryūmyaku's natural chakra. Afterward, the spear's head will begin to illuminate in a bright light orange saturation. Zhongli will then, at his discretion, have the ability to pierce the head of the spear into the ground. In doing so, the aforementioned chakra infused into the spear will seek out it's former bonds with that of the leylines still present within the earth, rekindling the tether with the Ryūmyaku that it was sourced from. As a result, Zhongli is capable of harnessing the depths of the leylines, utilizing the natural chakra flowing throughout their channels to manipulate the landscape with the Vortex Vanquisher as the catalyst, scaling in rank from D-S, from minor alterations such as flattening the terrain or creating small pillars or walls of earth (D-B Rank), to drastic proportions such as the creation of an imposing mountain of rigid stone (A/S-Rank). The capabilities are quite expansive and is left up to the limitations of the wielder's own imagination. As a result of this connection, the user becomes capable of sensing all that comes into contact with the earth up to short range away from the user's central position. Doubly, the Ryūmyaku chakra infused within the spear is capable of acting as a direct catalyst for earth material projection and creation, functioning similarly to how the user is capable of producing earth-based material from their own body through the use of earth chakra, such as mud. This effect can appear at the user's discretion, most commonly taking form when the user strikes with the spear, allowing for things such as stone spears or mudslides to be formed in tandem to the direction of the spear's attack. These sorts of material creations are considered freeform attacks, costing a move each time to use and will always form as B-rank and are accompanied with all the S/Ws corresponding to the basic earth element.
Note: This effect functions as a charge and counts as one of the user's 3 moves to activate, and requires 10 chakra/turn to maintain. The spear's tether lasts for up to 4 turns, allowing the user to manipulate the terrain in that time before going on a 3 turn cooldown, requiring to be recharged.
◈ Nagareboshi Kiritsu: "Meteoric Order" takes effect when Zhongli forms a bond with the Vortex Vanquisher by promptly drawing blood across the blade of the spear, then channeling 50 Chakra into it. Upon doing so, Zhongli will then lift the spear in a slashing swipe skyward overhead, which will discharge a heavy shockwave that ripples out in a 5 meter radius around him. This shockwave is purely visual and has no impact on the field or others apart from the visual effect. Once this is done, an immense plume of smoke will appear overhead, roughly 50 meters above the surface point in which the ability was activated. From the drawing blood across the spear, a summoning is performed through the release of what was sealed within the spear, resulting in the appearance of a destructive, bellowing meteorite of Earth varying in geometric protrusions all forming a singular structure will breach the iconic white smoke that had formed, dropping the full length from it's point of conjuring until making impact with a designated point by the user up to long-range, causing devastating damage to the terrain and everything encompassing the impact zone up to medium range in radius, dealing Forbidden-rank 90 damage to anything caught in it's destructive path.
Note: This ability may only be used once per fight/encounter and counts toward one of the user's 3 moves. It may not be activated if Zhongli is currently using "Earth Sovereign," and upon use, all other abilities of Vortex Vanquisher may not be activated for 3 turns afterward.
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- Vortex Vanquisher can only be used by Zhongli
- Must be an Earth-based specialist to use Vortex Vanquisher
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