Inton: Ixcariot no Kaiha - Yin Release: Ixcariot's CommunionInton: Ixcariot no Kaiha - Yin Release: Ixcariot's Communion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
Using the ability to change the state of matter. This techniques gives the user the ability to merge two already existing techniques together in order to become one. The merged techniques would become a composite nature of both techniques, taking the size, range, appearance of the larger jutsu and becoming a composite jutsu with properties from both jutsus. This would however not increase the damage but take the highest damage between the jutsus. Once the techniques are merge, it takes on the longest time limit out of the two also as a drawback, employs the highest limitation/restriction period like resting time etc, between both techniques.
Usable in the same timeframe as another technique
Usable 3x per battle
Declined
This is really broad, if you can combine any two techniques and keep the properties of both techniques it could present some problems. Should be A-rank as well. Need to give a bit more description on how this would work and maybe an example-Reborn
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description:
Using the ability to change the state of matter. This techniques gives the user the ability to merge two already existing techniques together in order to become one. This can be achieved in a variety of ways that even for normally immiscible matters, the yin energy is able to change the state of matter to make them compatible and combinable. The user is able to combine fire with lightning to form a brighter and golden energy able to shock and burn at the same time. Same with physical element; combining iron with a slippery soapstone would give a slippery metallic alloy of unknown nature. Interaction between energy and solid matter may prove difficult but the yin energy could change the state of both matter into liquid so that they are able to combine and probably leave it at that or make the mixture solidify. At the end the mixture becomes homogeneous. Some heterogeneous mixtures may be formed, only if plausible. For example, a mixture of wind and sand would form a sand storm though the sand itself must be an existing technique and not dormant sand. The merged techniques would become a composite nature of both techniques, taking the size, range, appearance of the larger jutsu and becoming a composite jutsu with properties from both jutsus. This would however not increase the damage but take the highest damage between the jutsus. Once the techniques are merged, it takes on the longest time limit out of the two also as a drawback, employs the highest limitation/restriction period like resting time etc, between both techniques.
Usable in the same timeframe as another technique
Usable 3x per battle
Declined. No, I'm not allowing you to combine properties of techniques and use the damage of the highest one.
Seven Sins: Avarice - Nanatsu no Tsumi: Don'yoku
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 50(-15 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user would channel his yin chakra into his body, linking himself to any one of his yin familiars that may be present on the field. This would make him take the form of the familiar, though restricting himself to only what the familiar is able to use and elemental techniques. The user is able to move and traverse the same way as the familiar though his size, speed and reactions remains the same. By taking a yin form, the user is able to sense all spiritual and ethereal life forms, likewise can he be sensed in the same way.
Last 3 turns or whenever the user ends it, which ever is shorter.
Usable once every two turns
Usable 3x per battle
Declined. Lots of problems here; I'm not even sure I'll approve this and I'll get to that later. Restrictions? You want a Yin Release technique that lets you assume a familiar's abilities, use it thrice per battle, and potentially have it last indefinitely depending on whatever abusive familiar you combine it with? Yeah, I know that little trick. Put on some meaningful restrictions on this.
Second off, you're not using elements in this state. You'd only have spiritual techniques, nothing more. You're converting yourself into a spiritual being, and you'll be subject to the restrictions that it carries.
But even if you fix those issues I don't know if I'll allow this at all. This is basically turning yourself into Yin Release and I've discussed this before with staff and how that would work in the past, it didn't seem to fly.
Yang Release: Fallen - Yoton: Ochi
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 70(15 per turn)
Damage: 100
Description:
A sister technique to Yin Release: Fallen.
This Fallen is a white translucent corporeal and sentient familiar which is made entirely of Yang energy and shaped according to the user's taste. Since it is corporeal in nature, it can take the form of any figure that can physically traverse from one place to another and can physically be affected by matter that are only physical in nature. Fallen has great physical strength and durability which is equivalent to its strength.
Fallen has a passive ability called "Eternal Grace" which enables him through the use of "Change into Hell", " Power of the Sun" and White Tiger", convert physical energy mixed water molecules in the air into rain. This yang infused rain falls up to long range and depending on who it touches, different affects occur. Eternal grace affects the user and his allies different than an enemy. The user and allies while constantly being touched by the rain would continuously have yang energy surging through their system until the rain ends. They would also be augmented physically, gaining 3x their normal speed, passive healing of 15 damage per turn, B-rank resistance to physical damage and +30 to Taijutsu. Anyone perceived as enemy however, upon touching the rain, would be infused with potent yang energy that would cause yang energy imbalance in their body, causing them to momentarily lose control of sustained techniques and modes though this would unfortunately work effectively in breaking them out of genjutsu. However, they would also become weak physically. Their physical techniques and strength suffers a -40 damage decrease and their speed halves. The rain is particularly detrimental to enemy techniques and scientific tools/weapons that uses any type of chakra, dampening them, making enemy techniques decrease by a rank and tools/weapons take 3x more time to execute a task. This means, a tool that is supposed to perform a task in one turn, would now take 3 turns to perform that task.
Actively, the familiar can use yang techniques that the user is able to use while siphoning chakra from its owner to use them. Fallen is able to retreat into the user, merging with him or a technique of his that is currently present so as to hide in plain sight. However, destroying the user or the technique would end Fallen. An advantage of merging however is that the presence of Fallen in an object will cause an opponent be affected by the properties of Eternal Grace when they make contact with that object. This means if Fallen merges with the user and the user makes direct contact with an opponent, they would be affected by the properties of Eternal Grace.
Requires six handseals to create Fallen.
Rain only falls for 3 turns
Usable twice per battle
While Eternal Grace is in play, the user is unable to conjure Yin techniques of any rank.
User can not use Yin techniques, Yin-Yang techniques in the same turn as creating Fallen and the next turn.
Declined. Its first ability, like with how Ring of Hell works, needs a limit on how many allies it can passively effect. The debuff is WAY too potent (half speed reduction AND -40 damage to physical techniques?) That's crazy for something that happens passively. Adjust this.
Fuinjutsu: Tsuihō - Sealing Art: BanishmentUpdating both Banishment and Sacred
Removing the "can only be used at the beginning stuff as its moot and hinders their overall usage. Also some other changes.
Adv/S/Forbidden rank Fuin in my inventory
Fuinjutsu: Tsuihō - Sealing Art: Banishment
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
A sister technique to Sacred. This is a simple fuin tag that is in the form of a mark around the user's tool, weapon, objects that are NOT metallic in nature. Notable tools that falls into this category are clothing, paper tags, umbrella, crucifix etc. Because most of this non-metallic tools are also prone to be manipulated by someone who has affinity for jutsu which makes them heavy, move without the user willing it or even turn them into something else, the user would have all his tools of this nature be inscribed with the mark "Banish". However, the sealing formulae inscribed only serve to protect the non-metallic tool/object by reacting to and sealing foreign chakra meant to infuse the said object or traverse through it. In other words, the seal blocks and absorbs chakra that is designed to take control or permeate through the tool. This would however, not stop a normal technique from hitting or affecting the tool if its a technique that is not doing the aforementioned effect.
The seal is instantly active upon being applied to a single non-metallic tools/object/weapon, costs a move slot and the seal activates only 1 time to seal an infusion then the sealing formulae vanishes from the tool. This however, only blocks S-rank and below foreign infusion if its elemental, F-rank if it's non-elemental chakra.
Technique can be used twice every 3 turns
Note: Would not apply to weapons/tools created by the weapon clone jutsu
Declined: The usage restriction is confusing imo, I'd personally make it usable once every two turns, 3x per battle. Edits are in colored text for the next submission.
Fuinjutsu: Shinsei - Sealing Art: Sacred
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a simple fuin tag that is in the form of a mark around the user's tool, weapon, objects that are metallic in nature. Because most of this metals are prone to be manipulated by someone who has affinity for them, e.g: Kunai made of steel or iron would be able to be manipulated by someone who has the iron or steel kg. Thus the sealing formulae inscribed with the kanji "Sacred" only serve to protect the metallic tool/object by reacting to and sealing foreign chakra meant to infuse the said object. In other words, the seal blocks and absorbs chakra that is designed to take control of the weapon.
The seal can be applied to each and every metallic tools/object/weapons the user has at the beginning of the battle or/and in the middle of a battle. This can be done in the same timeframe as other techniques and cost a move slot. The seal activates only 1 time to seal an infusion then the sealing formulae vanishes from the tool. This however, only blocks S-rank and below foreign infusion if its elemental, F-rank if it's non-elemental chakra.
Technique can be used twice every 3 turns
Note: Would not apply to weapons created by the weapon clone jutsu.
Declined: Same as in the above check
♞ All Pending. Leaving for someone else. ♞
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
A sister technique to Sacred. This is a simple fuin tag that is in the form of a mark around the user's tool, weapon, objects that are NOT metallic in nature. Notable tools that falls into this category are clothing, paper tags, umbrella, crucifix etc. Because most of this non-metallic tools are also prone to be manipulated by someone who has affinity for jutsu which makes them heavy, or move without the user willing it, the user would have all his tools of this nature be inscribed with the mark "Banish". However, the sealing formulae inscribed only serve to protect the non-metallic tool/object by reacting to and sealing foreign chakra meant to infuse the marked object or traverse through it to elicit either of the aforementioned effects. In other words, the seal blocks and absorbs chakra that is designed to take control or permeate through the tool. This would however, not stop a normal technique from hitting or affecting the tool if its a technique that is not doing the aforementioned effect, nor would the foreign chakra be sealed. The seal is instantly active upon being applied to a single non-metallic tools/object/weapon, costs a move slot though can be applied in the same timeframe as another jutsu and the seal activates only 1 time to seal an infusion then the sealing formulae vanishes from the tool. This however, only blocks S-rank and below foreign infusion.
Technique can be used once every 2 turns
Usable 3x per battle
Note: Would not apply to weapons/tools created by the weapon clone jutsu
Fuinjutsu: Shinsei - Sealing Art: Sacred
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a simple fuin tag that is in the form of a mark around the user's tool, weapon, objects that are metallic in nature. Because most of this metals are prone to be manipulated by someone who has affinity for them, e.g: Kunai made of steel or iron would be able to be manipulated by someone who has the iron or steel kg. Thus the sealing formulae inscribed with the kanji "Sacred" only serve to protect the metallic tool/object by reacting to and sealing foreign chakra meant to infuse the said object. In other words, the seal blocks and absorbs chakra that is designed to take control of the marked weapon. This would however, not stop a normal technique from hitting or affecting the tool if its a technique that is not doing the aforementioned effect, nor would the foreign chakra be sealed. The seal can be applied to each and every metallic tools/object/weapons the user has at the beginning of the battle or/and in the middle of a battle. This can be done in the same timeframe as other techniques and cost a move slot. The seal activates only 1 time to seal an infusion then the sealing formulae vanishes from the tool. This however, only blocks S-rank and below foreign infusion.
Technique can be used once every 2 turns
Usable 3x per battle
Note: Would not apply to weapons created by the weapon clone jutsu.
Both Approved: Made some wording edits to make the effects clearer – Goetia
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