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Hōgyoku / Breakdown Sphere
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (-10 per turn of transformation process, -40 per transformation, -20 for Divino)
Damage: N/A (-10/-20/-30 per activation based on each form, -30 per Divino)
Description: Born from a union between science and chakra, the Hōgyoku is just like in the case of Samehada, a parasitic organism, but different from many we have seen prior. The organism is trapped into a hardened layer of itself, in a spherical shape, looking almost as a gem stone, shining blue. This organism is implanted in the user’s chest, connected via medical jutsu to the different chakra network channels. The Hōgyoku was projected to read the different kinds of wavelength of the chakra released. We have seen in the series that the chakra has a very deep connection to the emotional cases of the user, so the moment when the chakra requires or needs more power, it will project that very desire into the chakra itself, being read by the weapon. The Hōgyoku is capable of growing at will and since it is implanted into the user’s chakra system and body, due to the connection it has to the blood vessels it can travel across the body of the ninja or shinobi to different locations, making its true purpose shine. The Hōgyoku can at will, grow at different parts of the users body, creating a very monstrous shape, working as a both outer and inner armor, which leaks out of the pores and forms, keeping the skin and muscle tissue of the person inside these inner created layers. The Hōgyoku will be able to form a very special cover around very specific wounds, keeping the body together, but not in any way healing them. This organism is a parasitic one who helps the user, but does not heal him, so as the turns continue, the damage would get worse and more infected, but still work, due to the effect of the organic material Hōgyoku is made out of. As for the transformations, due to the extensive and complex process of molecular restructuring and transformation, the subject must wait one turn after each transformation before beginning another. All changes to the subject are irreversible, and permanently active unless an area unprotected by the membrane armor has been attacked. The Hōgyoku will passively recover from any damage sustained to its organic material proportionate to its durability, while any membrane armor that sustains damage from one rank higher than its durability can only be recovered from once.
First Fusion: Crisálida
After 1 turn, the first transformation will complete, which will be marked by the release of a massive discharge of purple energy that can potentially harm any that are too close. Upon transforming, the user will emerge with a phantom-like appearance, consisting of a white cloak which is split in four sections near the waist. There is a cross in the middle of the cloak, showing where the Hōgyoku is embedded in the subject. The subject's attributes will be boosted, being able to hit harder and endure more physically (+5 on all subject's Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, -5 from all techniques where damage is physical or concussive), and their techniques will be more powerful than before (+5 damage on all normal and elemental Ninjutsu). In response to attacks of at least C-Rank, the white cloak appears to crack and fold, and is able to be broken, at which point the user's actual body is exposed, with additional physical changes being observable; their eyes turning grey with purple sclera and longer hair.
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Second Fusion: Evolucionar
The subject may not begin another transformation process until one turn after the completion of the first transformation. Upon which, the subject may then begin the next. The transformation process requires 2 turns to complete, during which the same abilities regarding attribute increases apply. After the transformation process completes, the subject will emerge from an explosion of energy similar to that of the last transformation. The subject will have undergone an even more drastic physical change: the subject has a hole in the center of their chest with a cross in the middle of it. The form-fitting white robe which enveloped the subject in the previous form lengthens, and flares out at the ends. In this form, the subject's irises vanish, as well as their eyebrows. Embedded in their forehead is a diamond-shaped object. The most distinguishing feature of this transformation is the 3 sets of butterfly-like wings of B-Rank durability which can be used to cover short-range distances at rapid speeds when flapped (use of the wings counts as a move). With this transformation, the user stacks the same ± (plus/minus) attribute boosts by an additional 5 points from their previous form (in total, +10 on all subject's Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, -10 from all techniques where damage is physical or concussive, +10 damage on all basic and Elemental Ninjutsu). In this transformation, the membrane armour covers all parts of the body except for the head.
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Final Fusion: Divino
Upon completion of the second transformation, the subject must wait one turn until they can begin their next and final transformation. After the transformation process completes, which takes 3 turns, the subject will enter their final transformation stage. The subject will take on a very demonic appearance, the diamond-shaped point has broken open, revealing a vertical black third eye upon the center of the subject's forehead, and the skin on the face splits open down the middle and pulls back around the sides of the head to reveal a blackened, demon-like skull. The subject gains three holes running vertically down his chest, the Hōgyoku standing at the center of the top hole. Additionally, the subject's feet become single claws, and their hands and feet become blackened. The butterfly-like wings change into a set of six sheet-like wings, now of A-Rank durability, with eyes set upon the center, adorned with demonic skulls, and trailing into tendrils. The user will stack an additional ±5 points for a cumulative total of ±15 points by this stage, in addition to the same utility of wings as the previous form granted. This is the most offensively oriented form that the Hōgyoku grants the subject, as the small skulls on the wings now have attack capability. Each of them can fire off a small, compressed ball of Fire chakra that will detonate on impact and create a large explosion (each fireball is of A-Rank strength, an individual usage counts as a move, and can reach up to mid-range). In addition, by drawing on the subject's chakra, the Hōgyoku can fire an extremely powerful blast of a bluish-purple colour of S-Rank that can reach up to long-range with a diameter of 7 inches, and counts towards the move limit. The membrane armour covers the whole body in this transformation.
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With each of the forms, the user will lose a total of 10 – 20 – 30 health at the moment each form is activated. upon each activation as the lasts form itself will absorb up to 20 chakra points per turn and 20 health as well. Under a larger influence of the said weapon in its Divino form, since the organism is in a blooming phase, it will affect his emotional and mental state, slowly, making the change irreversible and overtaking the user itself. This form would indicate the total mental death of the user, leaving him as a slaughtering monster. The last form can last a total of 5 turns before this would happen.
Notes
- The shockwave, for all intents and purposes, is of B-Rank strength and is short-range
- Attribute bonuses are passive, but will not apply when an unprotected area is struck
- Each transformation counts as a move during the turn the process begins
- Can only be used by Rᴜʀūsʜᴜ
‡ Declined ‡ This was written very well and while I like the general concept, I have a few problems with this. The boosts and abilities are too generic. The 2nd form is basically Curse Mark Level 1. Take away the reduced damage you take while this is active. The weapon should have a set durability and you need to clearly state this. Since it essentially covers you completely like an armour, it's durability will need to be lower or it shouldn't be capable of regenerating from insufficient damage. The latter would essentially give you an equal or greater damage immunity than the 3rd Raikage and I can't allow that. Basically you just need to base the abilities around something else e.g. the Dark Release KG.
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Hōgyoku / Breakdown Sphere
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (-10 per turn of transformation process, -40 per transformation, -20 for Divino, x amount per chakra conversion in each transformation)
Damage: N/A (-10/-20/-30 per activation based on each form)
Description: Born from a union between science and chakra, the Hōgyoku is just like in the case of Samehada, a parasitic organism, but different from many we have seen prior. The organism is trapped into a hardened layer of itself, in a spherical shape, looking almost as a gem stone, shining blue. This organism is implanted in the user’s chest, connected via medical jutsu to the different chakra network channels. The Hōgyoku was projected to read the different kinds of wavelength of the chakra released. We have seen in the series that the chakra has a very deep connection to the emotional cases of the user, so the moment when the subject requires or needs more power, it will project that very desire into the chakra itself, being read by the weapon. In response to this, the Hōgyoku will begin to forcibly modify and restructure the subject's structural and physical composition, using the subject's chakra. It is capable of growing at will and since it is implanted into the subject’s chakra system and body, due to the connection it has to the blood vessels it can travel across the body of the ninja or shinobi to different locations, making its true purpose shine. The Hōgyoku can at will, grow at different parts of the users body, creating a very monstrous shape, which leaks out of the pores and forms, keeping the skin and muscle tissue of the person inside these inner created layers. The Hōgyoku will be able to form a very special membrane cover around very specific wounds, keeping the body together, but not in any way healing them. This organism is a parasitic one who helps the user, but does not heal him, so as the turns continue, the damage would get worse and more infected, but still work, due to the effect of the organic material Hōgyoku is made out of. As for the transformations, due to the extensive and complex process of molecular restructuring and transformation of the subject's body and chakra, the subject must wait one turn after each transformation before beginning another. The membrane produced by the Hōgyoku will progressively strengthen as the transformations continue, eventually reaching a final form where the membrane will be at its most potent. The turn of transformation initiation counts as the first of the allotted turns to transform. Every extra appendage and material produced by the Hōgyoku has the same resistance proportionate to the transformation. Attacks and techniques which are tangible (e.g. Water and Earth) will break through the coating where affected by the attack, leaving the area vulnerable. The main strength of the membrane is not its ability to protect wounds, but its ability to passively absorb chakra from energy-based techniques (e.g. Fire, Lightning and Wind) of any kind, and from direct contact with beings that possess chakra as well, similarly to Inhaling Maw. Because the Hōgyoku is a parasitic organism, it requires chakra to activate and remain in a state of activity. As such, it will passively drain chakra from the user every turn at a set amount, to fuel the transformation. Even when the process of transformation is not being undergone by the subject, the Hōgyoku is still active, siphoning small portions of the user's chakra and converting it into Dark chakra for the subject's use at a 1:1 ratio once per turn, which also applies to direct absorption from beings with chakra (e.g. 10 normal chakra points → 10 Dark chakra points), which varies between forms (in its pre-transformation state, -5 points will be passively siphoned and converted to Dark chakra for the subject), transformation costs and penalties are exempt and are not converted into Dark chakra. All changes to the subject are irreversible, and permanently active unless an area unprotected by the membrane has been attacked. If the whole membrane armour is completely destroyed or otherwise removed, the subject will resume their previous features prior to transforming. Beside it's absorption capabilities, the armour is immune to C-Rank and below techniques of a physical nature (e.g. Earth or Water). This also renders it immune to freeform and unranked damage such as the explosions from paper tags. Anything above the stated threshold or anything which exceeds the Hōgyoku's capacity for absorption will destroy the armour and continue onwards to strike the user's body. It will be capable of taking one B-Rank technique (without the user sustaining harm to their body) but in doing so, the armour will be shattered and neutralized in the process.
First Fusion: Crisálida
After 1 turn, the first transformation will complete, which will be marked by the release of a massive discharge of purple chakra that can potentially harm any that are too close, pushing them to mid-range and dealing blunt-force damage. Upon transforming, the user will emerge with a phantom-like appearance, consisting of a white cloak which is split in four sections near the waist. There is a cross in the middle of the cloak, showing where the Hōgyoku is embedded in the subject. The membrane is able to passively absorb energy-based techniques up to and including B-Ranks at this stage. In response to being shattered by a B-Ranked physical attack, the white cloak appears to crack and fold, and is able to be broken, at which point the user's actual body is exposed, with additional physical changes being observable; their eyes turning grey with purple sclera and longer hair. In this form, the Hōgyoku will siphon -10 chakra points from the subject per turn, which will then be converted to Dark chakra immediately for use.
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Second Fusion: Evolucionar
The subject may not begin another transformation process until one turn after the completion of the first transformation. Upon which, the subject may then begin the next. This transformation process requires 2 turns to complete, during which the same abilities regarding attribute increases apply. After the transformation process completes, the subject will emerge from an explosion of chakra similar to that of the last transformation. The subject will have undergone an even more drastic physical change: the subject has a hole in the center of their chest with a cross in the middle of it. The form-fitting white robe which enveloped the subject in the previous form lengthens, and flares out at the ends. In this form, the subject's irises vanish, as well as their eyebrows. Embedded in their forehead is a diamond-shaped object. The most distinguishing feature of this transformation is the 3 sets of butterfly-like wings which can be used to cover short-range distances at rapid speeds when flapped (use of the wings counts as a move). With this transformation, the user gains a stronger membrane covering compared to their previous form (energy-based techniques up to and including A-Rank can be passively absorbed). In this transformation, the membrane covers all parts of the body except for the head, with the wings counted as part of the membrane. In this form, the passive chakra siphon of the Hōgyoku increases to -15 per turn, and will return 15 points of Dark chakra.
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Final Fusion: Divino
Upon completion of the second transformation, the subject must wait one turn until they can begin their next and final transformation. After the transformation process completes, which takes 3 turns, the subject will enter their final transformation stage. The subject emerge from the resultant chakra explosion with a very demonic appearance, the diamond-shaped point has broken open, revealing a vertical black third eye upon the center of the subject's forehead, and the skin on the face splits open down the middle and pulls back around the sides of the head to reveal a blackened, demon-like skull. The subject gains three holes running vertically down his chest, the Hōgyoku standing at the center of the top hole. Additionally, the subject's feet become single claws, and their hands and feet become blackened. The butterfly-like wings change into a set of six sheet-like wings with eyes set upon the center, adorned with demonic skulls, and trailing into tendrils. The user's membrane covering will reach its ultimate point (energy-based techniques up to S-Rank can be passively absorbed) in addition to the same utility of wings as the previous form granted. This is the most offensively oriented form that the Hōgyoku grants the subject, as the small skulls on the wings now have attack capability. Each of them can fire off a small, compressed ball of Dark chakra that will detonate on impact and create a large explosion (each ball is of A-Rank strength, an individual usage counts as a move, and can reach up to mid-range). In addition, by drawing on the subject's chakra, the Hōgyoku can fire an extremely powerful blast of S-Rank power Dark chakra that can reach up to long-range with a diameter of 7 inches, and counts towards the move limit. The membrane covers the whole body in this transformation. In this form, the chakra siphoned is -20 points, with 20 points of Dark chakra being returned).
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With each of the forms, the user will lose a total of 10 – 20 – 30 health at the moment each form is activated, and the last form itself will absorb up to 20 chakra points per turn and 20 health per turn as well. Both Crisálida and Evolucionar can remain active indefinitely but Divino will last a maximum of five turns before it deactivates. This will revert the weapon to it's dormant state and render it unusable for the rest of the battle. When Divino ends, the user will also become incapable of using techniques above A-Rank for three turns.
Notes
- The shockwave, for all intents and purposes, is of B-Rank strength and is short-range
- Chakra conversion and transformation cost penalties stack
- Passive absorption counts as a use of Inhaling Maw for techniques which require absorption
- Membrane properties are passively active, but will not apply when an unprotected area is struck
- Each transformation counts as a move during the turn the process begins
- Can only be used by Rᴜʀūsʜᴜ
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‡ Approved ‡ Made edits to the weapon.
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