[Kapuseru bōjutsu] Capsule Bojutsu
Type: Ninjutsu/Bojutsu
Background:
Capsule Bojutsu was developed by baton wielding shinobi of Kirigakure alongside those of Otogakure as a way to incorporate there natural affinity to liquid elements and sound based techniques. It was firstly developed as a way to confuse/disorientate enemies who would enter close quarters combat with the users of this style, although when picked up by the shinobi of otogakure, it was given more offensive, advantage-giving abilities when accompanied with their sound techniques. Over the years, the style has become what it is today, a perfect infusion of the many different ninjutsu that went into it's creation as it travelled around the world and was added to in every place.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style bases it's abilities around the use of hollowed out weaponry, such as batons, staffs, tonfa etc. Users of this style will manipulate liquids in order to fill or drain their chosen weapon at will. This is the base of everything else that this style has to offer and is the focal point of all its branching abilities. The two main benefits of doing so are,
1. Increasing and Decreasing the weight of your held weapon.
2. Changing the pitch of the sound the weapon makes upon contact.
A weapon with high volumes of water inside will be heavier and make lower pitched sounds upon connection with another object, lower volumes of water meaning the opposite, a lighter weapon with a higher pitched sound upon contact. Increasing and decreasing the weight of your weapon would keep your opponent on edge, every strike would feel different, every swing would have a different level of momentum behind it and would react differently to being blocked. The opponent could never feel comfortable with what they are about to defend against, unknowing of what they were being hit by.
Changing the sound that the weapon makes on contact is beneficial when paired with sound chakra as it allows the chakra to react in different ways. With a shot of sound chakra when your empty weapon connects with an object would produce a quick, high frequency sound wave which travels extremely quickly, causing whatever contacted the weapon to bounce off with great force.
A shot of sound chakra upon contact with a liquid filled weapon would cause a low frequency sound wave, a longer lasting, more spread wave that would cause the connecting object to vibrate profusely, possibly breaking its form apart or making an opponent lose his grip of a weapon. Huge impacts with this effect could conceivably break bones with the vibration, but this is only really achievable against those with enhanced strength and by shinobi capable of taking such a hit themselves. At no point does the user infuse their own weapon with sound chakra, in order to achieve these effects, the user will send sound chakra through the air and to the impact point of the weapon, the it will come into effect and gain the properties of the sound made.
Filling the weapons can be done passively with water just through the molding of suiton chakra, or with the active ability of a different liquid element. Weapons can also be made to have tiny holes in the sides or end that would allow the weapon to squirt or excrete whatever liquid is inside, this would again be done through the use of Capsule Bojutsu techniques.
Example Techniques:
Capsule Bojutsu: Excretion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage:
Description: The user can cause whatever liquid is held inside their weapon to seap out through its walls and onto the outside of the weapon, making the weapon wet with whatever was inside.
Capsule Bojutsu: Squirt!
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Allows the user to squirt whatever liquid is inside their weapon in a target direction, emptying the weapons hollow middle of liquid quickly. Liquid is squirted to the borders of short range.
Capsule Bojutsu/Ototon: Sound Spike
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Upon impact with another object, the user will send a shot of sound chakra to the impact point, enhancing the impact and creating a soundwave with varying effects based on the pitch of the sound made.
- A weapon filled with liquid will make a low frequency sound on impact, this will cause the colliding objects to vibrate greatly, making it hard to hold onto and possibly breaking it apart should it be earthen in nature.
- A weapon emptied of liquid will make a high frequency sound on impact, this will cause a fast moving, high frequency sound wave to spark from the sound chakra and thus cause the colliding object to ricochet off of the users weapon with great speed and force.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Weapons used with this are not chakra based weapon, and at no point use chakra to enhance or give them their abilities. Chakra is thread through holes in the weapon and creates liquids within the weapons shell, this is the same process when getting the water out, chakra enters the weapon and pushes the liquid outwards. Sound chakra is only ever present outside the weapons, ready to create chaos at impact point but never sitting in the weapons themselves.
✦ Declined, I like this actually. I think it's pretty cool and vaguely reminds me of an idea I once had for a Sound Kenjutsu attack. A few things, the lines about a "shot of" Sound chakra should be edited; a shot seems weird to think about and suggests a small amount. It also is a little difficult to understand at first, though I get what the concept is: Releasing Sound chakra as the weapon makes contact to alter the effect landed. The filling of Water passively part is fine as long as noted that it can only be used for this CFS and it should be noted that if used with Water or Sound chakra, then mastery of both are needed for this CFS. Besides that, it looks fine. ✦
(Attengan) Pressure Point Eye |
A core ability of the Fighting Style, the Attengan allows all Practitioners of this Fighting Style to passively locate Pressure Points on their target's body, be it an enemy, an ally, themselves, or anyone else. This is what allows every Practitioner to employ Heavenly Contact techniques, and thus, is something that all Practitioners have access to, regardless whether or not they choose to follow one of the Specialization Paths for this Fighting Style. The Attengan also gives the user increased visual perception, allowing them to pick up on even the subtlest of details or changes, as they are accustomed to diverting their attention between and focusing on specific Pressure Points, even in the midst of active combat. |
(Atsuryokuhito Hōhō) Pressurist's Way | (Senshihito Hōhō) Puncturist's Way |
The Pressurist's Way is for Practitioners who prefer the Taijutsu Style of the Fighting Style, granting them several beneficial increases to their Atsuryoku Arts. These include increased strength & durability for their fingers, primarily the middle and index, as they are the ones they will most often strike their targets with, as well as increased striking speed for their Atsuryoku Arts, making the user’s usage of the Fighting Style's techniques, as well as techniques of a similar nature, 1 Rank faster than a Taijutsu attack of their current Rank. These so-called Pressurist's have an intimate knowledge of the Atsuryoku Arts, and are far more capable than Puncturist's when it comes to performing them. | The Puncturist's Way is for the Senbon centric Bukijutsu Style of Heavenly Contact, what the Pressurist's Way is for the Taijutsu Style of the Fighting Style, granting Puncturist's similar beneficial increases to their Senshi Arts. These include increased accuracy & throwing speed with all of their Ninja Tools, not just Senbon, making their Ninja Tools easily fast enough to disrupt long or slow sequences of Hand Seals. Additionally, Puncturist's also gain the ability to pinpoint and attack Pressure Points on a fast moving targets, up to and including any speed the user can track. |
Resubmitting(Toukan Ousama Yaiba)-Frost Kings Sword
Type: Ninkenjutsu
Background: Frost kings sword is a fighting style created to go along with -Haku Yuki-'sYou must be registered for see linksThrough the frost ring members of the Yuki clan are able to create any weapon out of Wind, Water, or Ice and because of this power the ring was incredible hard to get a hold of, and after the destruction of the Yuki clan it was thought to be gone forever. However once the prejudice against the Yuki had calmed down one man returned to his old home and found the ring, he mastered the weapon and became quite adept at using it. Through his training with the ring he had created a new fighting style revolving around the three elements the ring could create.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Frost kings sword revolves around the manipulation of the weapon the user holds, from changing its shape to changing the element of the weapon mid swing. The wielder of the weapon will attack and preform several slashes as he does so he changes the shape of the weapon to become another weapon creating a combination where one hit could be a water sword slash and the final one could be a ice club to the temple. The user will focus his chakra into the weapon using shape manipulation to form the weapon into another weapon and then another, and when changing elements the user will start with a water weapon and then freeze the water, defreeze the water, or remove the weapon entirely to be replaced with a wind weapon which can also be frozen to become ice.
Example Techniques:
(San Buki Raishuu)- Three weapon attack
Type: Offensive.
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (-10 per weapon change -10 per element change)
Damage: 80
Description: After the user has created a water style brace knuckle through Toukan No wa, they will charge the enemy and begin with a punch to the left rib cage, however before the hit the rib cage they will focus chakra into the weapon reforming it into knife and will slash the ribs, from there the user will preform a 360 spin while reforming the knife into a club and slams it directly into the enemies sliced open ribs. At anypoint the user can change the water into wind or ice.
Koori, Mizu, kaze Buki Raishuu)- Ice, Water, Wind weapon attack
Type: Offensive.
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (-10 per weapon change -10 per element change)
Damage: 80
Description: The user will create a staff made of water from the Toukan No Wa and spin it above his head, he will then spin and aim the staff at the enemies neck, the user will then stop the water staff before it hits and reform the weapon into a wind glove and slam it into the jaw, from there the user will reform the wind glove into an ice spear and the user will lunge at the enemy stabbing them in the stomach
Additional effects and Restrictions: Only Yuki clan members can know
Must have mastered taijutsu
Must have mastered Kenjutsu
Users reaction speed and tracking speed is 1 rank higher due to how fast he has to move to change the shape and element of his weapon.
♪ Declined, not allowing passive boosts to tracking or movement speed. Also, you should realize that your CFS is going to abide by the same restrictions present on your CW. The reason, of course, being that it's required to be used when you use your style. The style actually isn't bad, but I'm not a huge fan of you changing the state of the weapons from Ice to water in such a small time frame, as it would make elemental S/W weird. Keep it as ice. ♪
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Yari no Michi | The way of the Bisento
Type: Ken/tai
Background:
The Bisento has been in use since before the shinobi world was created. It wasn’t a typical warrior -type halberd; Bisento was used as a longer-distance sword with an ability to cut and pierce. The original Bisento was used by infantry. The weapon was able to reach the legs of a horse carrying a samurai into battle. Before the sage of the six paths tought the world ninjutsu, there were constant wars and so with each passing year new weapons were being made for the soldiers in clan wars, they were trained to use it in a long-distance fight to protect their families and estates. The idea behind it was to pretty much have a sword on a stick, an extention to ones body.
There was one ninja that adapted the Bisento to flow with his entire body, not just seeing the Bisento as a weapon but as one with his body. He mastered it to such an extent that he was never hurt in battle even by attacks from a distance such as arrows. As the years went on, the ninja world was born as the sage of the six paths taught the way of chakra to try and bring peace but that was far from what happened. Kilik saw the fault in his style, how could as Bisento hold up against such deadly attacks while also seeing the samurai develope their own style. Kilik went on a mission to learn how to control chakra and then rather than using it to master ninjutsu, he focussed it into his bisento to create his own fighting style. The way of the bisento.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The way of the bisento is a martial artist style with a Staff with a sword type blade on the end as its weapon. The length of his Staff allows a multitude of long range attacks and accordingly Kilik is most effective at this distance. However if an opponent does manage to get very close to Kilik he does have tools to employ; the most effective of these are his fast horizontal strikes. Many of Kilik's more powerful attack strings are vertical hits that can be sidestepped if anticipated. Although linear, these powerful attacks Kilik possesses are relatively fast and deal great damage. It is for this reason that Kilik excels to a great degree more than most ignorant power hungry ninja. Kilik has a diverse array of low attacks, some slow and heavily damaging, some fast and hard to react to.
The style revolves around the user using both hands on their Bisento releasing their chakra into in to enhance their reach and power with their attacks. From a forward thrust enhanced with chakra of the elements, to keep the opponent at a range, to spinning the bisento in front of them infused with chakra to create a rapid spin, forming a shield deflecting attacks. The blade of the bisento makes it so much more versatile in combat as it's not just blunt attacks. The entire style can be seen as a ranged version of Kenjutsu, adapting that of the samurai techniques with the enhancing it with the use of chakra. It's not a complex style but one that takes a long time to master without hurting yourself.
Example Techniques:
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(Way of the Bisento: Piercing strike)
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 50
Description: The user will focus their chakra into their bisento thrusting it forwards forwards focussing their chakra into the point of the blade reaching out 2 meters infront of them, upon contact with another justu, the chakra will be released through the point of the blade like a bullet hitting glass sending several cracks of chakra out through the jutsu hitting it head on shattering a jutsu of the same rank and below. If it were to hit a fire jutsu it would cause it to explode but thanks to the reach of the bisento it would keep the user safe.
(Bojutsu: ) - Elemental rotation wall
Type: Attack/Deffence
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost:
Damage points:
Description: The user will focus one of the 5 basic elements into their Bisento. The they will begin spinning their staff, like a helecopter blade in front of them at great speeds releasing their elemental chakra. Fire/water/wind element will create a fire/water/wind sheild or blast of the chosen element in the shape of a cylinder towards the opponent. If lightning or earth chakra they create a dense sheild infront of the user, the earth style rotation will defect all solid objects, where as the lighting will destroy all earth that is coming at the user.
(Bisento art: Cartwheel kick)
Type: Attack/Deffence
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: This is a highly useful evasion or attack technique through using the way of the bisento. The user will rotate their body sideways as though they were going to do a cartwheel but with their bisento in hand they will stab that into the ground lifting themselves 3 times highter into the air going up and over and if can use the momentum and height to come down delivering two deadly kicks to their target. This can be hightly useful using the extention of the Bisento to avoid an attack.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
Can only be used through a bisento that must be mentioned in your bio.
Must have mastered basic tai as so you're in control of your body and don't end up hitting yourself with your staff.
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✦ Declined, for starters, based on what the description says, this would be a Ninkenjutsu style. Next, the actual description itself is very simple, you could submit these in the CJ thread as their own CJ. What about this is unique enough to patent as an actual CFS? You also dont mention elemental ninjutsu usage in the description but you do it in the example jutsu.I suggest adding a portion that details elemental ninjutsu usage with the bisento to make it unique enough to warrant approval ✦