Custom Element's Jutsu Submission

[ReXii]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

(shimo: shiryu no hoko) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Roar
Rank: S
Type: Offence/Affliction
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first inhales, gathering frost chakra in his/her mouth, and then releases an enormous vortex of Frost in the direction of their opponent, creating a large, maelstrom of frost crystals and wind which damages and causes numbing effects and slow frostbite to his foes. This technique is performed without handseals instead it involves the user putting his hands in front of his mouth in a pose resembling that of a trumpeter before releasing his frost chakra, prompting it to be expelled between his fingers. The frost produced by this version start out as a very thin line, enough to be fit between the user's fingers, before suddenly enlarging to strike the opponents. The other, simpler and seemingly faster way simply has the user gather frost and then shoot it out, with no seeming stance required, and a much wider blast of frost being produced directly from the user's mouth, albeit at a reduction of range, reaching only mid range.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit or surrounded at any point by the frost dragons roar they will suffer a reduction in speed equivelant to one rank on the speed chart for two turns.
-Must know Frost Release

(shimo: shiryu no tsume) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offence/Affliction
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges their feet with frost and proceeds to assault the opponent with a powerful frost-enhanced kick, with the ensuing frost granting the attack more power and speed. He can also create frost on the feet, enhancing speed and allowing the user to jet-propel in any direction he wishes. This allows the user to rapidly get close to opponents to engage in melee, even while preparing another technique.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit at any point by the frost dragons claw they will suffer a slow build up of frostbite on the targeted area, this culminates in three turns causing the closest affected limb to seize up and stop working entirely.
-The effects of frostbite can't be cured with fire chakra it must be an actual heat source.
-Must know Frost Release

(shimo: shiryu no fo-su) Frost Release: Frost Dragon Force
Rank: F
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: +20 to all frost techniques
Description: When a Dragon Slayer enters Dragon Force, they effectively turn into a humanoid Dragon, gaining reptile-esque scales and traits, such as further elongated, and sharper, through the use of frost release this is emulated, with the user gaining scales made of frost, along with an aura of frost that surrounds there body, protecting them from all C ranks except lightning release ones, along with this the user gains a considerable increase in the power of his frost techniques, and a small increase in movement speed using the power of the speed of the swirling frost in a slipstream manner.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for three turns, or until it is destroyed.
-The effects of frostbite are all boosted in this form, taking one less turn to culminate.
-Must know Frost Release

(shimo: touketsu haikibutsu aisuoukan) Frost Release: The Frozen Wastes Of Ice Crown
Rank: F
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100 (-40 to user)
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to there body, this only allows them to use two techniques per turn for two turns, at the end of these two turns the technique is fully charged, allowing the user to snap his fingers, causing all air on the battleground to become frigid and blistering, the effect of this wind is powerful, causing not only instant frost damage when it activate's but also culminating hoar frost on the opponents body over two turns, if the opponent is unable to escape or block the frigid power of the wind in two turns there organs are highly likely to seize up completely.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed.
-Must know Frost Release

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 All Declined  You are submitting techniques for a CE and you don't even get its name straight? Embarrassing... Next time you fail to provide a feasible and decent submission, its DNR.

(Shimoton: shiryu no hoko) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Roar
Rank: S
Type: Offence/Affliction
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first inhales, gathering frost chakra in his/her mouth, and then releases an enormous vortex of Frost in the direction of their opponent, creating a large, maelstrom of frost crystals and wind which damages and causes numbing effects and slow frostbite to his foes. This technique is performed without handseals instead it involves the user putting his hands in front of his mouth in a pose resembling that of a trumpeter before releasing his frost chakra, prompting it to be expelled between his fingers. The frost produced by this version start out as a very thin line, enough to be fit between the user's fingers, before suddenly enlarging to strike the opponents. The other, simpler and seemingly faster way simply has the user gather frost and then shoot it out, with no seeming stance required, and a much wider blast of frost being produced directly from the user's mouth, albeit at a reduction of range, reaching only mid range.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit or surrounded at any point by the frost dragons roar they will suffer a reduction in speed equivelant to one rank on the speed chart for two turns.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  Didn't know there was an affliction type of technique...

(Shimoton: shiryu no tsume) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offence/Affliction
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges their feet with frost and proceeds to assault the opponent with a powerful frost-enhanced kick, with the ensuing frost granting the attack more power and speed. He can also create frost on the feet, enhancing speed and allowing the user to jet-propel in any direction he wishes. This allows the user to rapidly get close to opponents to engage in melee, even while preparing another technique.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit at any point by the frost dragons claw they will suffer a slow build up of frostbite on the targeted area, this culminates in three turns causing the closest affected limb to seize up and stop working entirely.
-The effects of frostbite can't be cured with fire chakra it must be an actual heat source.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  Same as above

(Shimoton: shiryu no fo-su) Frost Release: Frost Dragon Force
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: +20 to all frost techniques
Description: When a Dragon Slayer enters Dragon Force, they effectively turn into a humanoid Dragon, gaining reptile-esque scales and traits, such as further elongated, and sharper, through the use of frost release this is emulated, with the user gaining scales made of frost, along with an aura of frost that surrounds there body, protecting them from all C ranks except lightning release ones, along with this the user gains a considerable increase in the power of his frost techniques, and a small increase in movement speed using the power of the speed of the swirling frost in a slipstream manner.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for three turns, or until it is destroyed.
-The effects of frostbite are all boosted in this form, taking one less turn to culminate.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  DNR.

(Shimoton: touketsu haikibutsu aisuoukan) Frost Release: The Frozen Wastes Of Ice Crown
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100 (-40 to user)
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to there body, this only allows them to use two techniques per turn for two turns, at the end of these two turns the technique is fully charged, allowing the user to snap his fingers, causing all air on the battleground to become frigid and blistering, the effect of this wind is powerful, causing not only instant frost damage when it activate's but also culminating hoar frost on the opponents body over two turns, if the opponent is unable to escape or block the frigid power of the wind in two turns there organs are highly likely to seize up completely.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  Incorrect damage info.

(Shimoton: yougu shimo) Frost Release: Tools Of Frost
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is used to create tools of frost from the wind itself, by infusing water chakra in to the wind around the area, these tools can be incredibly varied, such as spheres, kunai, blades of frost.
Although none of these weapons lack total tangibility so pillars or stepping stones can't be created, they are capable of inflicting damage to an opponent along with frostbites long term effects.
Note:
-Can only be used four times per battle.
-Must know Frost Release
- The effects of frosbite for this technique culminate in four turns.


-Note- I missed ton from the submission my bad, but saying a DNR over a spelling error in the title would suck, i shall be more careful.

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 Declined  DNR. Collides with existing Ice techniques.

 

[Serpent]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

(Taruton: Suihoukitai) Tar Release: Toxic Gas Bubble
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (20 for Tar Droplets)
Description: The user will focus their Chakra into a Tar source while making a 3 handseals "Tiger-Snake". This will quickly form a bubble within the Tar source. This bubble can then be popped by the user with the "Snake" handseal sending small amounts of Tar droplets that can burn anyone within close range and catch flammable cloth on fire, however it does not effect gas like substances. When the bubble pops, a toxic gas is released that quickly consumes a Mid-ranged area. This Gas causes anyone who breaths it in, pain in there chest as well as blurred vision.
Note:
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Requires a Tar Source
-Effects last 2 turns.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

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 Declined  Ok...blue part I don't understand. I don't also understand why this is A-Rank. The gas part is a bit too much. Its a small bubble...how can it cover such a large area? Color of the gas? and you need to define it a bit more.

(Taruton: Sawa) Tar Release: Swamp.
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (60 upon contact with Tar.)
Description: A basic technique that will allow the user to bring forth tar around the battlefield. By making the fallowing handseals (Tiger-Ox-Monkey-Snake) the user will convert up to 80% of the battlefield up to a Long Range radius around himself into Molten Tar. This will leave large rocks around for the user to move about by leaping from rock to rock and provide the user with a large source in which to use Tar Jutsu that require a Tar Source. Like all Tar, It is extremely hot and can catch flammable cloth on fire, however it does not effect gas like substances.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

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 Declined  The part i colored is a bit over the top don't you agree?

(Taruton: Suihoukitai) Tar Release: Toxic Gas Bubble
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (20 for Tar Droplets)
Description: The user will focus their Chakra into a Tar source while making 2 handseals "Tiger-Snake". This will quickly form a bubble within the Tar source. This bubble is five meters in radius and can be popped by the user with the "Snake" handseal sending small amounts of Tar droplets that can burn anyone within close range and catch flammable cloth on fire, however it does not effect gas like substances. When the bubble pops, a gray smokey like toxic gas is released that quickly spreads and consumes a Mid-ranged area. This Gas causes anyone who breaths it in, pain in their chest as well as blurred vision for two turns, gradually decreasing the effects as the turns progress, for a maximum of 4 turns. The user will also feel the effects of the gas if he breaths it in.
Note:
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Requires a Tar Source
-Gas lasts one turn on the field
-Effects last up to 4 turns.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.
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The Bubble is fairly large, about 5 meters in size so when it pops the gas would spread like normal gas/smoke.

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 Approved 


(Taruton: Sawa) Tar Release: Swamp.
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (60 upon contact with Tar.)
Description: A basic technique that will allow the user to bring forth tar around the battlefield. By making the fallowing handseals (Tiger-Ox-Monkey-Snake) the user will convert tar chakra into the ground causing it to shake violently then Molten tar will seep out of the ground around the battlefield covering up to 60% of the battlefield up to a Long Range radius around himself into Molten Tar. This will leave large rocks and platforms for the user and opponent(s) to move about by leaping from rock to rock and provide the user with a large source in which to use Tar Jutsu that require a Tar Source. Like all Tar, It is extremely hot and can catch flammable cloth on fire, however it does not effect gas like substances. Beneath the created Tar, normal earth still exists, about 5 meters below the tar surface. The tar eventually cools down and solidifies into an inactive rubbery form. Once inactive it cannot be used for Tar techniques.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Tar remains liquid and hot 5 turns before cooling down and becoming inactive.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.
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I was wanting the technique to be similar to "Swamp of the Underworld" but what I didn't take into account is the fact that the swamp doesn't cause damage and this technique does, because of this it shoudln't be as fast of a delivery so I reduced the amount of Tar formed and made it shake the ground and seep out from it previding time for an opponent to evade.

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 Approved  made a small edit because of the fact that Tar is not a harmless product and can easily damage those who touch it. Also, since you don't keep fueling the technique with chakra, its logical that eventually it will cool down and become harmless. If you don't like the changes, resubmit.

 

[-Jiraiya-]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

Re-submitting. Changes made are in bold.

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Phosphorus craft technique (Rinton shugi no jutsu)
Type: Offense/Defense/supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses his phosphorus (earth+fire) chakra and creates phosphorus from the existing earth or from the user's body to create spikes, pillars, shield, tools, wall or weapons. The user can also spit or shoot balls or spikes of phosphorus from his mouth and hands with good accuracy. This a versatile jutsu and is only limited by the user's imagination. The created structures can be ignited using the user's fire chakra by performing a confrontation hand seal and the ignition counts as a move. When the phosphorus is burned, it will also release a dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact. If the smoke comes in contact with the eye it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes difficulty in breathing making the enemies unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.

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 Declined  Restrictions? Not even a single one. Abilities? tons... This is a mishmash of various techniques into one...

Phosphorus release: Guided missile (Rinton: Sendatsu misairu)
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates up to 5 vertically placed earthen tubes closed at the pointing end each measuring about 3 feet height, 20 cm diameter with a central hollow portion filled with phosphorus. After creating these, the user ignites the base using his fire chakra by performing a confrontation seal which burns the phosphorus in closed space creating propulsive effect and earthen tube travels like a missile and hits the target(s) producing massive explosion alongside dark black/grey colored smoke each leaving behind a crater of 4 feet deep.
Note(s):

• Can be used only 2 times per battles.
• While in mid air, the missiles together can be guided only once towards a desired target and this counts as a move.
• As the missiles detonate, they will also release a dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact. If the smoke comes in contact with the eye it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes difficulty in breathing making the enemies unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.

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 Declined  >_> Come on... DNR.

Phosphorus release: Hell's inferno (Rinton: Jigoku no inferuno)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user places his hands on the ground and creates a compete dome of phosphorus around the opponent and the circular ground area over which the dome is created also turns into phosphorus to few centimeters. Once the dome is erected, the user can ignite it with explosive tag or fire jutsu which produces a massive explosion causing severe third degree burns along with the release of dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact.
If the smoke comes in contact with the eye it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes difficulty in breathing making the enemies unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.

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 Declined  For something that does so much damage, its interesting that it has N/A damage points :sy:

Phosphorus Release: Craft technique (Rinton shugi no jutsu)
Type: Offense/Defense/supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses his phosphorus (earth+fire) chakra and creates phosphorus from the existing earth or from the user's body to create spikes, pillars, shield, tools, wall or weapons. The user can also spit or shoot balls or spikes of phosphorus from his mouth and hands with good accuracy. This a versatile jutsu and is only limited by the user's imagination. The created structures can be ignited using the user's fire chakra by performing a confrontation hand seal and the ignition counts as a move.
Note(s): Can only be used 5 times per battle.

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 Approved  In terms of scale though, never forget this is an A-Rank technique. ok?


Phosphorus release: Hell's inferno (Rinton: Jigoku no inferuno)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user places his hands on the ground and creates a compete dome of phosphorus around the opponent and the circular ground area over which the dome is created also turns into phosphorus to few centimeters. Once the dome is erected, the user can ignite it with explosive tag or fire jutsu which produces a massive explosion causing severe third degree burns along with the release of dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact.
If the smoke comes in contact with the eye it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes difficulty in breathing making the enemies unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.
Note(s): Can only be used 3 times per battle.

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 Approved 


New submissions:

Phosphorus release: Land of Hades (Rinton: Rando Yomi)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs a set of 3 hand seals and slams his hand on the ground and spreads his Phosphorus chakra into the ground turning the regular earth into phosphorus. As the ground turns to phosphorus the user will then use an explosive tags or fire jutsus or channel his fire chakra over the created phosphorus to ignite it.
When the opponents comes directly in contact with the ignited phosphorus covered ground, they'll suffer severe third degree burns.
Further the combustion releases a large amount of dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact.
If the smoke comes in contact with the opponent's eyes it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes intense burning pain inside the chest and results in difficulty in breathing leaving the opponents unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.
Note(s):

• Can be used 3 times per battle with at least one turn apart.
• The user can't perform any other S rank phosphorus jutsus in the same turn and the next turn.
• Channeling fire chakra to ignite counts as a move.

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 Declined  Do you become able to basically transform any patch of earth in range into phosphorus? Or does the transformation spread from your hand onwards towards your target?

Phosphorus release: Wall Extermination (Rinton: kabe bokumetsu)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs 2 hand seals and creates a circular wall made of phosphorus to erupt out of earth around the opponent trapping him within. The circular wall is 3 meters tall and 1.5 feet thick and can span up to short range all around the opponent.
Once created, the user can channel his fire chakra to ignite the wall from inside out which then violently erupts with the opponent inside, causing massive burn damage to him. Alternatively the user can use an explosive tag or fire jutsu to ignite it.
Note(s):

• Can only be used twice per battle.
• Must wait 2 turns before using again.
• The user can't use any other A rank or above phosphorus in the same turn.
• Channeling fire chakra to ignite the wall counts as a move.

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 Approved  Although this is basically the same as your B-Rank technique you submitted above except this one is a wall, opened on top, and the other a dome-like prison.

 

[The_Empire]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

-Silicone Release Technique (Shirikon no Jutsu)
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 30
Description: The user uses existing or drawing silicone sand from the ground to make the following: orbs, shurikens, spears, pillars, kunais, needles made of compressed(solid) silicone sand.
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-Approved-

Silicone Release Technique (Shirikon no Jutsu)
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user uses a silicone sand source and shapes the source into various things the user would like to make. This is a basic jutsu for the whole Silicone sand element and the first technique everyone using Silicon sand learns. The source is shaped into various things but has its reach as in length, height and width. The max of length, height and width are three feet max. The shapes the user can make is the following: spikes(max: 6), Orbs(max: 3), Weapons(variety) (max: 4), Platforms(max: 2).
-Must have a silicon sand source already on the field.

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 Declined  Remove red part. Blue part doesn't make sense.

Updating

Silicone Release Technique (Shirikon no Jutsu)
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user uses a silicone sand source and shapes the source into various things the user would like to make. This is a basic jutsu for the whole Silicone sand element and the first technique everyone using Silicon sand learns. The source is shaped into various things(weapons, spikes, orbs, and platforms). The max of the length, height and/or width is three feet max.
-Must have a silicon sand source already on the field.

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 Approved 

Silicone Release: Body Shield (Shirikon: Bodi Toku)
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (30 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user raises silicone sand over their body. The user can make the sand over the body, look like a knights armor or a different shape of armor(if the user makes a knights armor it will have flexibilty so the user can move still). It looks like the user is wearing a white(color of silicone sand) armor and it also weights down the user because it weights 75 lbs and lowers the user`s speed one rank.
-It can protect against B rank and below ninjutsu(elemental also) and B rank and below taijutsu.
-Only lasts four turns
-Only used three times per battle
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-Approved-

Silicone Release: Body Shield (Shirikon: Bodi Toku)
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (30 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user cover silicone sand over their wholebody. The user can make the sand over the body, look like he/she isn't wearing any armor at all. This technique also weights down the user because of its weight and this lowers the user`s speed, one rank. When the armor is attack and enough damage has been done to it, anyone can see the armor true color and where it is.
-It can protect against B rank and below ninjutsu(elemental also) and B rank and below taijutsu(first gate or anything that has the strength is able to crack and pill it and second gate or anything that has the strength can completely destroy it).
-Only lasts as long as the user has chakra to keep it up
-Only used three times per battle

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 Update Declined 

Silicone Release: Body Shield (Shirikon: Bodi Toku)
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (-20 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user cover silicone sand over their whole body. The user can make the sand over the body, look like he/she isn't wearing any armor at all. This technique also weights down the user because of its weight and this lowers the user`s speed, two rank. When the armor is attack and enough damage has been done to it, anyone can see the armor true color and where it is.
-Silicon sand can only be used if it has no chakra or the user chakra only
-It can protect against B rank and below ninjutsu(elemental also) and B rank and below taijutsu
-Only lasts five turns
-Only used three times per battle

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 Declined  Let me be clear: you are trying to make this mimic gaara's technique for regular sand and thats a no no. It has to be noticeable to others.

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

(Keigakuton: Hageshī Ōja) - Abyss Release: Raging King -
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self/Short
Chakra Cost: 30(+15 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A (Abyss +20)
Description: Unlike normal Abyss techniques, this one is used on the user himself. This technique allows the user to freely manipulate his body into Abyss chakra via releasing his abyss-affiliated chakra throughout his body, manifesting the element with his very being. Entering the state & once active, the user's body gets covered in the pitch black abyss chakra, his facial features are hidden but his eyes remain visible. A halo of Abyss chakra materlizes above his head, along with two spheres which rotates around him free for use as he pleases, working as ''Melschee's Door''(A-ranked). Due Abyss Release's nature, the user naturally gains flight ability when in this form. When a physical object interacts with the user, due the composition of his body allows the user to stay unharmed by any physical substance, like a kunai or a weapon. Not only is this technique suitable for offensive tactics but also defensive; as stated, the user is immune to physical interaction but this does not only apply for ninja weapons but also for elements such as water, fire & earth or other 'solid'-based elements. Not only that, but as Abyss is not affected by temperature elements producing heat or frost have no effect on the user. While in this state, the user is limited to what elemental chakras he can utilise, mainly because of the constant release of abyss chakra; because of this, the user is unable to ultilize his basic five elemental affinities, untill the user exits the state. The transformation itself also functions as a sort of cleansing technique, as upon transformation any form of foreign object/vapour/poisonous toxic(Basically anything that would affect the body in an unusual way.) would be excluded therefore having it exit the body without further ado. Techniques that would essentially devour, make impact canceling out the abyssal chakra would cause the user to revert back to his normal-self.
~ Can be used three times per battle
~ Two turns cooldown
~ Last three turns
~ Manipulation of the two spheres counts as a move
~ Visual presentation

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 Declined  Ok, the very last sentence needs definition. This consumes chakra, doesn't add it. +20 to abyss techniques? why? you can't use any elemental technique? ok...be sure to add a note saying that. The cleansing part? No. Only to things that aren't yet affecting you. Once they are, without medical mastery, you cannot do that with your ce and its nature. Its not designed for that. Flight? why?

Abyss is not affected by gravity, thus why it gains natural flight ability. Not only that, but if there was no flight, I would the moment I transform simply seep into the ground as I the abyssal chakra would simply 'devour' it. Left it in there.

If you wish I could remove the boost, and keep the five elementals at my disposal? It's to compensate.

For the cleansing part, I merely found it logically that if I had bullet struck in my arm, and I then turn, the bullet wouldn't turn with me, but be devoured by the abyssal chakra. When I would revert, I would only be having the wound. That was my train of thought, I don't believe that would require any medical mastery? (In my defense, I'm a medical student!)

Added the notes.

(Keigakuton: Hageshī Ōja) - Abyss Release: Raging King -
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self/Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-35 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A (Abyss +20)
Description: Unlike normal Abyss techniques, this one is used on the user himself. This technique allows the user to freely manipulate his body into Abyss chakra via releasing his abyss-affiliated chakra throughout his body, manifesting the element with his very being. Entering the state & once active, the user's body gets covered in the pitch black abyss chakra, his facial features are hidden but his eyes remain visible. A halo of Abyss chakra materlizes above his head, along with two spheres which rotates around him free for use as he pleases, working as ''Melschee's Door''(A-ranked total, Long range, doesn't receive damage boost). Due Abyss Release's nature, the user naturally gains flight ability when in this form albeit in a limited and slow application, which allows him to rettain a movement speed slower (about 3/4) than his base speed. The reason is that since Abyss is not affected by Gravity, momentum, friction and kinetic interactions become very limited and unable to produce normal movement and speed. When a physical object interacts with the user, due the composition of his body allows the user to stay unharmed by any physical substance, like a kunai or a weapon. Not only is this technique suitable for offensive tactics but also defensive; as stated, the user is immune to physical interaction but this does not only apply for ninja weapons but also for elements such as water, fire & earth or other 'solid'-based elements. Not only that, but as Abyss is not affected by temperature elements producing heat or frost have no effect on the user. While in this state, the user is limited to what elemental chakras he can utilize, mainly because of the constant release of abyss chakra; because of this, the user is unable to ultilize his basic five elemental affinities, untill the user exits the state. However, while in this state, the user is rendered very vulnerable to Lightning and Wind attacks, following elemental weaknesses and strenghts. The defensive abilities of the technique allow it to be able to defend against up to forbidden rank of elements weak to it or A-Rank of elements strong towards it. In any case, to completely cancel out the technique, the enemy needs to use a technique that completely overpowers the defensive force of the technique (less than a complete overpowering clash only leads to the technique regenerating itself right after), at which point the user returns back to his normal form, in the same state he was when he activated the technique. Because the user transforms his whole body into a raw manifestation of abyss, his abyss techniques become stronger and upon entering the state, any physical injury or otherwise physical illness (or similar state), is put on hold. As the body lacks now an organic form, the organic or physiological injuries or processes affecting the user such as poisons, low stamina effects, wounds, etc, etc are put on hold and not affecting the user, as if paused.
~ Can be used once per battle
~ Last four turns
~ Manipulation of the two spheres counts as a move
~ Once it ends, the user is left unable to use Abyss techniques for 3 turns and unable to use any technique above A-Rank in that turn, above S-Rank in the next.
~ The user is unable to perform any of the five basics while in this state
~ User is immune to water, fire & earth or other 'solid'/temperature-based techniques
~ Visual presentation

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 Approved  Edited. Check it and if you don't like it, you can always resubmit. To have the "cleasing" effect without entering medical jutsu areas and taking into account the nature of your element and its properties, in logic, you could only achieve what I added. Note that while it may appear I limited the technique, I actually powered it up and defined it to avoid confusions. +20 to an element while having immunity to 3/4 of all the elements and CEs around is one of the most powerful things I ever approved. Specially taking into consideration what abyss really is.

 

[Selendrile]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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(Awaton: Gunakadeit no kōun tatchi)- Foam Release: Gunakadeit’s Lucky Touch
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: An advanced foam technique made in order to battle against other elements with more ease than usual. This foam technique allows the user to materialize thin and barely noticeable droplets of water everywhere in the battlefield from where they simply linger in the area, having no effect on both the user the opponent until a jutsu is used which the user of foam can add wind chakra to the droplets, creating foam which can battle against other elements in specific ways. For example, the moment the wind chakra is added, the droplets of water would gather to the specific area from which the opposing jutsu is forming and clump together, forming a sphere of foam which quickly douses the opposing jutsu preventing it from continuing in growing in both strength and size, completely stopping the formation of the jutsu as the Foam droplets continue to clump together to form a bigger body of foam than the opposing jutsu being created. This jutsu acts quick and once activated douses jutsus on the users will, whilst allowing the user to perform other techniques simultaneously. Moreover, due to the waters natural ability to materialize out of thin air, even when blown away or removed by any other method, prior to being converted to foam, the water droplets are able to reform with the help of the users chakra and their aforementioned ability to materialize.
- Usable twice per battle
- Lasts four turns

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 Declined  An automated defense that cancells out virtually anything the enemy creates of your choice while still allowing you to use techniques at the same time and without a real restriction, all of which for 8 turns during battle? OPed.

(Fuuinjutsu/Awaton: Haidora Tsuba)- Sealing/Foam Release: Hydra Spit
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user concentrates foam chakra onto any point of his body, and then releases several tennis ball sized spheres of foam. Each foam sphere has a kanji formula inscribed upon them. Upon contact with an opponent(s), the sealing formula activates and spreads quickly on their body. Using the slippery variation of foam, the foam on the opponent(s) body makes complicated and/or sudden physical movement almost impossible. The hands of the opponent become so slippery that they are unable to grasp objects or hold onto those already wielded by them. The actual sealing formula spreads on contact as well, sealing the opponent’s ability to utilize any sort of wind or water techniques for the duration that the seal is active.
- Usable three times per battle
- Seal lasts three turns

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 Declined  Why is this a fuuin and what is the rank of this fuuin? You can already achieve this with your own CE.

(Awaton: Haidora Tsuba)- Foam Release: Hydra Spit
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user concentrates foam chakra onto any point of his body, and then releases several basketball ball sized spheres of foam. If the foam makes contact with the opponent(s) body, it makes complicated and/or sudden physical movement almost impossible. The hands of the opponent(s) become so slippery that they are unable to grasp objects or hold onto those already wielded by them. In turn, this can be used to affect inanimate objects such as weapons or landmarks on the battlefield to make them useless for battle. The foam used in this technique follows the regular strength and weaknesses of the element.
- Usable three times per battle

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 Approved 

 

[ReXii]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

(Shimoton: shiryu no hoko) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Roar
Rank: S
Type: Offence/Affliction
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first inhales, gathering frost chakra in his/her mouth, and then releases an enormous vortex of Frost in the direction of their opponent, creating a large, maelstrom of frost crystals and wind which damages and causes numbing effects and slow frostbite to his foes. This technique is performed without handseals instead it involves the user putting his hands in front of his mouth in a pose resembling that of a trumpeter before releasing his frost chakra, prompting it to be expelled between his fingers. The frost produced by this version start out as a very thin line, enough to be fit between the user's fingers, before suddenly enlarging to strike the opponents. The other, simpler and seemingly faster way simply has the user gather frost and then shoot it out, with no seeming stance required, and a much wider blast of frost being produced directly from the user's mouth, albeit at a reduction of range, reaching only mid range.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit or surrounded at any point by the frost dragons roar they will suffer a reduction in speed equivelant to one rank on the speed chart for two turns.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  Didn't know there was an affliction type of technique...

(Shimoton: shiryu no tsume) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offence/Affliction
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges their feet with frost and proceeds to assault the opponent with a powerful frost-enhanced kick, with the ensuing frost granting the attack more power and speed. He can also create frost on the feet, enhancing speed and allowing the user to jet-propel in any direction he wishes. This allows the user to rapidly get close to opponents to engage in melee, even while preparing another technique.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit at any point by the frost dragons claw they will suffer a slow build up of frostbite on the targeted area, this culminates in three turns causing the closest affected limb to seize up and stop working entirely.
-The effects of frostbite can't be cured with fire chakra it must be an actual heat source.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  Same as above

(Shimoton: shiryu no fo-su) Frost Release: Frost Dragon Force
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: +20 to all frost techniques
Description: When a Dragon Slayer enters Dragon Force, they effectively turn into a humanoid Dragon, gaining reptile-esque scales and traits, such as further elongated, and sharper, through the use of frost release this is emulated, with the user gaining scales made of frost, along with an aura of frost that surrounds there body, protecting them from all C ranks except lightning release ones, along with this the user gains a considerable increase in the power of his frost techniques, and a small increase in movement speed using the power of the speed of the swirling frost in a slipstream manner.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for three turns, or until it is destroyed.
-The effects of frostbite are all boosted in this form, taking one less turn to culminate.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  DNR.

(Shimoton: touketsu haikibutsu aisuoukan) Frost Release: The Frozen Wastes Of Ice Crown
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100 (-40 to user)
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to there body, this only allows them to use two techniques per turn for two turns, at the end of these two turns the technique is fully charged, allowing the user to snap his fingers, causing all air on the battleground to become frigid and blistering, the effect of this wind is powerful, causing not only instant frost damage when it activate's but also culminating hoar frost on the opponents body over two turns, if the opponent is unable to escape or block the frigid power of the wind in two turns there organs are highly likely to seize up completely.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  Incorrect damage info.

(Shimoton: yougu shimo) Frost Release: Tools Of Frost
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is used to create tools of frost from the wind itself, by infusing water chakra in to the wind around the area, these tools can be incredibly varied, such as spheres, kunai, blades of frost.
Although none of these weapons lack total tangibility so pillars or stepping stones can't be created, they are capable of inflicting damage to an opponent along with frostbites long term effects.
Note:
-Can only be used four times per battle.
-Must know Frost Release
- The effects of frosbite for this technique culminate in four turns.


-Note- I missed ton from the submission my bad, but saying a DNR over a spelling error in the title would suck, i shall be more careful.

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 Declined  DNR. Collides with existing Ice techniques.

(Shimoton: shiryu no hoko) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Roar
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first inhales, gathering frost chakra in his/her mouth, and then releases an enormous vortex of Frost in the direction of their opponent, creating a large, maelstrom of frost crystals and wind which damages and causes numbing effects and slow frostbite to his foes. This technique is performed without handseals instead it involves the user putting his hands in front of his mouth in a pose resembling that of a trumpeter before releasing his frost chakra, prompting it to be expelled between his fingers. The frost produced by this version start out as a very thin line, enough to be fit between the user's fingers, before suddenly enlarging to strike the opponents. The other, simpler and seemingly faster way simply has the user gather frost and then shoot it out, with no seeming stance required, and a much wider blast of frost being produced directly from the user's mouth, albeit at a reduction of range, reaching only mid range.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit or surrounded at any point by the frost dragons roar they will suffer a reduction in speed equivelant to one rank on the speed chart for two turns.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined 


(Shimoton: shiryu no tsume) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges their feet with frost and proceeds to assault the opponent with a powerful frost-enhanced kick, with the ensuing frost granting the attack more power and speed. He can also create frost on the feet, enhancing speed and allowing the user to jet-propel in any direction he wishes. This allows the user to rapidly get close to opponents to engage in melee, even while preparing another technique.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit at any point by the frost dragons claw they will suffer a slow build up of frostbite on the targeted area, this culminates in three turns causing the closest affected limb to seize up and stop working entirely.
-The effects of frostbite can't be cured with fire chakra it must be an actual heat source.
-Must know Frost Release


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 Declined 


(Shimoton: touketsu haikibutsu aisuoukan) Frost Release: The Frozen Wastes Of Ice Crown
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 120 (-20 to user)
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to there body, this only allows them to use two techniques per turn for two turns, at the end of these two turns the technique is fully charged, allowing the user to snap his fingers, causing all air on the battleground to become frigid and blistering, the effect of this wind is powerful, causing not only instant frost damage when it activate's but also culminating hoar frost on the opponents body over two turns, if the opponent is unable to escape or block the frigid power of the wind in two turns there organs are highly likely to seize up completely.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined 


Note: I'm using the originally approved frost jutsu as a template, and that has affliction as it's damage type, due to the frostbite portion, but whatever, i suppose in a few weeks i will be alerted to a different mistake, maybe i forgot to underline something i dunno.

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 Note  Incorrect damage info pertains to the fact that a forbidden rank has 90 damage and costs 50 chakra points. Nothing more. You have to follow template and abide by the rules of submission. Using an old template or a new one is none of my concern. Its your job to produce viable and feasible submissions, mine is to check them, not to fix them for approval. Also, I talked to Caliburn about Frost because your submissions of CEJs for it have been colliding with Ice techniques already in existance and were likely to continue to do so. After we analyzed the CE and its application, the following was our reasoning: its basically cold blasts or inducing cold on contact. Its the ability to decrease temperature, essentially and mainly of water molecules. It doesn't allow you to manipulate anything solid or constructs or anything. In a more specific way, its like having a "Cold Wind" element which has some "on contact" application, like that of the original approved technique. Nothing more, nothing less. So, taking into account this new information, resubmit the above techniques. Also note that this thread is also under the blue rule.

 

[ReXii]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

(Shimoton: shiryu no hoko) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Roar
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first inhales, gathering frost chakra in his/her mouth, and then releases an enormous vortex of Frost in the direction of their opponent, creating a large, maelstrom of frost crystals and wind which damages and causes numbing effects and slow frostbite to his foes. This technique is performed without handseals instead it involves the user putting his hands in front of his mouth in a pose resembling that of a trumpeter before releasing his frost chakra, prompting it to be expelled between his fingers. The frost produced by this version start out as a very thin line, enough to be fit between the user's fingers, before suddenly enlarging to strike the opponents. The other, simpler and seemingly faster way simply has the user gather frost and then shoot it out, with no seeming stance required, and a much wider blast of frost being produced directly from the user's mouth, albeit at a reduction of range, reaching only mid range.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit or surrounded at any point by the frost dragons roar they will suffer a reduction in speed equivelant to one rank on the speed chart for two turns.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined 


(Shimoton: shiryu no tsume) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges their feet with frost and proceeds to assault the opponent with a powerful frost-enhanced kick, with the ensuing frost granting the attack more power and speed. He can also create frost on the feet, enhancing speed and allowing the user to jet-propel in any direction he wishes. This allows the user to rapidly get close to opponents to engage in melee, even while preparing another technique.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit at any point by the frost dragons claw they will suffer a slow build up of frostbite on the targeted area, this culminates in three turns causing the closest affected limb to seize up and stop working entirely.
-The effects of frostbite can't be cured with fire chakra it must be an actual heat source.
-Must know Frost Release


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 Declined 


(Shimoton: touketsu haikibutsu aisuoukan) Frost Release: The Frozen Wastes Of Ice Crown
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 120 (-20 to user)
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to there body, this only allows them to use two techniques per turn for two turns, at the end of these two turns the technique is fully charged, allowing the user to snap his fingers, causing all air on the battleground to become frigid and blistering, the effect of this wind is powerful, causing not only instant frost damage when it activate's but also culminating hoar frost on the opponents body over two turns, if the opponent is unable to escape or block the frigid power of the wind in two turns there organs are highly likely to seize up completely.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined 


Note: I'm using the originally approved frost jutsu as a template, and that has affliction as it's damage type, due to the frostbite portion, but whatever, i suppose in a few weeks i will be alerted to a different mistake, maybe i forgot to underline something i dunno.

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 Note  Incorrect damage info pertains to the fact that a forbidden rank has 90 damage and costs 50 chakra points. Nothing more. You have to follow template and abide by the rules of submission. Using an old template or a new one is none of my concern. Its your job to produce viable and feasible submissions, mine is to check them, not to fix them for approval. Also, I talked to Caliburn about Frost because your submissions of CEJs for it have been colliding with Ice techniques already in existance and were likely to continue to do so. After we analyzed the CE and its application, the following was our reasoning: its basically cold blasts or inducing cold on contact. Its the ability to decrease temperature, essentially and mainly of water molecules. It doesn't allow you to manipulate anything solid or constructs or anything. In a more specific way, its like having a "Cold Wind" element which has some "on contact" application, like that of the original approved technique. Nothing more, nothing less. So, taking into account this new information, resubmit the above techniques. Also note that this thread is also under the blue rule.

(Shimoton: shiryu no hoko) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Roar
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first inhales, gathering frost chakra in his/her mouth, and then releases an enormous vortex of Frost in the direction of their opponent, creating a large, maelstrom of blistering wind which damages and causes numbing effects and slow frostbite to his foes. This technique is performed without handseals instead it involves the user putting his hands in front of his mouth in a pose resembling that of a trumpeter before releasing his frost chakra, prompting it to be expelled between his fingers. The frost produced by this version start out as a very thin line, enough to be fit between the user's fingers, before suddenly enlarging to strike the opponents. The other, simpler and seemingly faster way simply has the user gather frost and then shoot it out, with no seeming stance required, and a much wider blast of frost being produced directly from the user's mouth, albeit at a reduction of range, reaching only mid range.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Cannot use Frost Release techniques higher than A-rank same and next turn

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 Approved 

(Shimoton: shiryu no tsume) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges their feet with frost and proceeds to assault the opponent with a powerful frost-enhanced kick, with the ensuing frost granting the attack more power and speed. this pertains to releasing blasts of frigid wind to assault the opponent, or move quickly in various directions by using the frigid wind to propel himself in various directions.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit at any point by the frost dragons claw they will suffer a slow build up of frostbite on the targeted area, this culminates in three turns causing the closest affected limb to seize up and stop working entirely.
-The effects of frostbite can't be cured with fire chakra it must be an actual heat source.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  No on the speed part or propelling you with frost.

(Shimoton: touketsu haikibutsu aisuoukan) Frost Release: The Frozen Wastes Of Ice Crown
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20 to user)
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to there body, this only allows them to use two techniques per turn for two turns, at the end of these two turns the technique is fully charged, allowing the user to snap his fingers, causing all air on the battleground to become frigid and blistering, the effect of this wind is powerful, causing not only instant frost damage when it activate's but also culminating hoar frost on the opponents body over two turns, if the opponent is unable to escape or block the frigid power of the wind in two turns there organs are highly likely to seize up completely.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  OPed. No handseals? Tremendous scale and offensive effects? Too much. Tone it down.

Note: Thank you for the explanation, i resubmitted the techniques, they will be using blasts of frigid wind, the culmination of hoar frost is an application of such, as hoar frost is directly created by frigid winds, thats actually why i used hoar frost and not the other tangible variants of frost, as it would never leave someone in the situation where they need to use a jutsu to break any frost on the body, but the lasting internal damage of frost requires a heat source, and the frigid wind can be blocked the same as any wind technique, with a powerful fire element technique.

 

[Selendrile]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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(Awaton: Gunakadeit no kōun tatchi)- Foam Release: Gunakadeit’s Lucky Touch
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: An advanced foam technique made in order to battle against other elements with more ease than usual. This foam technique allows the user to materialize thin and barely noticeable droplets of water everywhere in the battlefield from where they simply linger in the area, having no effect on both the user the opponent until a jutsu is used which the user of foam can add wind chakra to the droplets, creating foam which can battle against other elements in specific ways. For example, the moment the wind chakra is added, the droplets of water would gather to the specific area from which the opposing jutsu is forming and clump together, forming a sphere of foam which quickly douses the opposing jutsu preventing it from continuing in growing in both strength and size, completely stopping the formation of the jutsu as the Foam droplets continue to clump together to form a bigger body of foam than the opposing jutsu being created. This jutsu acts quick and once activated douses jutsus on the users will, whilst allowing the user to perform other techniques simultaneously. Moreover, due to the waters natural ability to materialize out of thin air, even when blown away or removed by any other method, prior to being converted to foam, the water droplets are able to reform with the help of the users chakra and their aforementioned ability to materialize.
- Usable twice per battle
- Lasts four turns

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 Declined  An automated defense that cancells out virtually anything the enemy creates of your choice while still allowing you to use techniques at the same time and without a real restriction, all of which for 8 turns during battle? OPed.

(Awaton: Gunakadeit no kōun tatchi)- Foam Release: Gunakadeit’s Lucky Touch
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: An advanced foam technique made in order to battle against other elements with more ease than usual. This foam technique allows the user to materialize thin and barely noticeable droplets of water everywhere in the battlefield from where they simply linger in the area, having no effect on both the user the opponent until a jutsu is used which the user of foam can add wind chakra to the droplets, creating foam which can battle against other elements in specific ways. For example, the moment the wind chakra is added, the droplets of water would gather to the specific area from which the opposing jutsu is forming and clump together, forming a sphere of foam which quickly douses the opposing jutsu preventing it from continuing in growing in both strength and size, completely stopping the formation of the jutsu as the Foam droplets continue to clump together to form a bigger body of foam than the opposing jutsu being created. This jutsu acts quick and once activated douses jutsus on the users will, whilst allowing the user to perform other techniques simultaneously. Moreover, due to the waters natural ability to materialize out of thin air, even when blown away or removed by any other method, prior to being converted to foam, the water droplets are able to reform with the help of the users chakra and their aforementioned ability to materialize.
- Usable twice per battle; Lasts three turns
- Cooldown of two turns after deactivation is required
-Can only counter one technique per turn while active.
- Unable to use Foam techniques above A-rank while this technique is in play

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 Approved  Going on a leap of faith here. Editted slightly.

 

[Korra.]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

My CE was approved here

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(Nirro Suna: Yougu) Red Sand Release: Tools
Type: Attack
Rank: A rank
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user can form strong tools out of Red Sand, these include; kunai, swords, pillars, shields etc. The tools will be able to repel water and the sand is heated slightly giving them a burning property.
Note: Usable 4 times a match

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 Declined  Where do these tools come from? Why is this Mid-Long Range? Define the burning property

(Nirro Suna: Sunaarashi) Red Sand Release: Sabels
Type: Attack
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user forms a small cyclone of Red Sand in his dominate hand and then releases it out towards the opponent. The user performs a single hand seal (Tiger) and the sand storm grows much larger taking on the properties of a large sand storm throwing sand around and whipping the opponent around thrashing him about. The sand storm is enough to throw the opponent back and can cause severe damage to anyone caught inside of it or hit by it the sand is also heated to an immense temperature enough to create third degree burns to the opponent or anyone hit by it. The sand storm repels any water jutsu that is thrown against it. If an opponent tries to counter using a water jutsu the Red Sand will over power it.
-If the user is caught in the sand storm he is effected to.
-Will repel up to S rank water within reason
- Usable 4 times a match

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 Approved 

(Nirro Suna: Shūkai) Red Sand Release: Gathering
Type: Supplemantary
Rank: C rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will channel either already existing Red Sand or their chakra into the ground to change the ground into a fine sand like dust quality, then use their chakra to make sand/dust in the ground turn into Hydrophobic Sand so the user will have more to use in a battle.

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 Declined  Limits? Define this...it seems you can simply turn the whole field into red sand...No handseals? No nothing? Is this sand hot and burning?

 

[-Jiraiya-]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

Re-submitting. Changes made are in bold.

Phosphorus release: Land of Hades (Rinton: Rando Yomi)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs a set of 3 hand seals and slams his hand on the ground and spreads his Phosphorus chakra into the ground turning the regular earth into phosphorus. As the ground turns to phosphorus the user will then use an explosive tags or fire jutsus or channel his fire chakra over the created phosphorus to ignite it.
When the opponents comes directly in contact with the ignited phosphorus covered ground, they'll suffer severe third degree burns.
Further the combustion releases a large amount of dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact.
If the smoke comes in contact with the opponent's eyes it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes intense burning pain inside the chest and results in difficulty in breathing leaving the opponents unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.
Note(s):

• Can be used 3 times per battle with at least one turn apart.
• The user can't perform any other S rank phosphorus jutsus in the same turn and the next turn.
• Channeling fire chakra to ignite counts as a move.

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 Declined  Do you become able to basically transform any patch of earth in range into phosphorus? Or does the transformation spread from your hand onwards towards your target?

Phosphorus release: Land of Hades (Rinton: Rando Yomi)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs a set of 3 hand seals and slams his hand on the ground and spreads his Phosphorus chakra into the ground turning the regular earth into phosphorus up to a maximum of 8 meters radius around the target. As the ground turns to phosphorus the user will then use an explosive tags or fire jutsus or channel his fire chakra over the created phosphorus to ignite it.
When the opponents comes directly in contact with the ignited phosphorus covered ground, they'll suffer severe third degree burns.
Further the combustion releases a large amount of dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact.
If the smoke comes in contact with the opponent's eyes it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes intense burning pain inside the chest and results in difficulty in breathing leaving the opponents unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.
Note(s):

• Can transform any patch of natural earth into phosphorus within the range with the exception of patches being used or used by other techniques.
• Can be used 3 times per battle with at least one turn apart.
• The user can't perform any other S rank phosphorus jutsus in the same turn and the next turn.
• Channeling fire chakra to ignite counts as a move.

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 Approved 

New jutsus.
Phosphorus release: Kamikaze beasts (Rinton: Kamikaze kemono)
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user takes 2 explosive tags, one in each hand and places them on the ground and creates two monsters made of phosphorus out of earth while simultaneously inserting the explosive tags into the monsters. The monsters are created in the short range of user and can reach up to long range.
The monsters are shaped like Chinese stone lions about 1 meter in length and height and proceeds running towards the target with the speed of ninja hounds and they can jump up to 3 meters into air or on the ground.
Once near the target, the user will perform a confrontation seal and ignites the explosive tag which was embedded within the monsters making them explode creating a crater of 3 meters each (each produces B-Rank damage).
Note(s):

• Can only be used 2 times per battle and the monsters can stay for 3 turns.
• The beasts' movements can be controlled by the user to avoid or jump small obstacles/pits within logic and reasoning.
• Performing confrontation hand seal to ignite the explosive tags counts as a move

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 Approved 

 

[Scorps]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

Hijutsu Ibiton no Fuuin: Beel-Zebub no Sākasu | Secret Decay Release Sealing Art: The Circus of Beel-Zebub, the Lord of Flies
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50 (-50 per turn to sustain, enemy loses 100 chakra per turn inside)
Damage: 90 (90 per following turns while inside, -20 to the user per turn to sustain)
Description:
A pinnacle of Decay Release, the Circus of Beel-Zebub is one of the strongest offensive techniques known in the Ninja World. By focusing decay chakra throughout his whole body, the user will glow in a progressively brighter yellow/gold-ish light to then suddenly explode into countless real sized flies, made out of raw decay chakra. These small elemental familiars fly around the field faster than other insects and real flies and exhibit a black color with a light golden hue, reminiscent of the combination of the main, specific and advanced releases of Ibiton, with a bright yellow kanji for "play" on their backs and the ability to replicate themselves freely with no apparent limit. As they fly around the field, they aggregate into 5 copies of the user within range, whose size will be proportional to that of the target (bigger target, bigger entities). These, however, are not clones (they are simply intangible aggregates of "flies" made of decay) but the user himself, separated into five equal entities. These entities will materialize themselves around the target, forming a pentagram or five pointed star of kanji inscriptions, with a circle of Kanji linking the points of each ends of the stars. As the 5 entities open their arms, a strong spherical Forbidden Rank Sealing Barrier erects itself around the target, both above and beneath the surface. The barrier has the ability to repair itself unless its fully overpowered/neutralized. Inside the barrier, a vortex of decay flies manifests itself, increasing in number and power as they fly around in a mayhem vortex pattern, causing everything to start to decay and wither away. The user has full control over what is affected or how it decays, a perk given by specific release of Ibiton. However, normally enemies will have their chakra zapped away and start to "burn" (following the damage defined in the CE's description), the earth will turn to dust, the water will seemingly evaporate, etc etc. Inside the barrier, even gravity decays, as everything inside becomes locked into a "stasis field", affected by the vortex of flies. The damage is so immense that enemies will have trouble acting and defending from the damage. Forming handseals is hard and slowed down due to the chakra draining and the hinderance caused to movement from the interference with gravity. The technique makes use of a barrier to contain the immense decay chakra from damaging the rest of the area or from pouring out and causing undesirable effects but also serves the purpose of containing the enemy and preventing him from escaping the technique. As such, the technique acts by creating what seems to be an "oven" of chakra in which everything eventually is returned to dust by the little flies. The technique can be sustained for a limited amount of time and can be cancelled at any time. Once the technique ends, the flies will disaggregate and reform into the original user once more. If the enemy somehow manages to attack these entities or produce a counter, he'll need to use a technique that can either protect him from its effects, that overpowers the barrier causing the technique to go berserk (though in this case, he might still face its effects) or that contains or destroys every single fly on the field. If at least one fly survives, the user will reform from it and unless almost all flies are destroyed, countered or contained, the technique can still be fully triggered. Although complex, from the moment it initializes to the moment its fully setup, no more than a few moments pass, as the flies are fast and the barrier erects itself nearly instantly once the entities are positioned, with the technique rapidly progressing from that point on.
Note: Usable once and counts as two moves
Note: The barrier is a self repairing Forbidden Rank Sealing Barrier Technique, with a size dependent on the users will and chakra reserves.
Note: Can be sustained for up to 2 turns, after which anything inside is reduced to dust
Note: After the technique ends or if its deactivated once its fully triggered, the user will not be able to use decay techniques in that turn and the next and will be left unable to use Taijutsu above C-Rank for 2 turns due to physical exhaustion. His speed, during that time, is reduced in 3 ranks unless he is healed.
Note: Since the user splits into countless entities made out of decay, losing his physical body, he cannot use techniques other than the technique that is being used.
||Pending||

 

[Howard]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

(Ekitai: Baindo) Oobleck Release: Bind
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user molds a mixture of water chakra and earth chakra forming a mass of Oobleck in the persons gut. He then performs 1 hand seal (Boar) and moves the mixture from his gut to his mouth. He can then expel the Oobleck from his mouth forming it into projectiles, nets, or small tools/weapons. As he expels the mixture he coats it in chakra giving it shape and making it retain a form until impact with a target where the Oobleck loses it's solid properties covering the opponent in a thick gooey liquid that can impede movement making the opponent slowed due to the excess weight of the Oobleck as well as it's sticky properties.
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~Approved~
Edited with the proper rank-damage correlation.

(Ekitai: Baindo) Oobleck Release: Bind
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user molds a mixture of water chakra and earth chakra forming a mass of Oobleck, or takes hold of an already formed source of Oobleck he then performs 1 hand seal (Boar) allowing him to form the source of Oobleck into projectiles, nets, waves, tools or weapons. As he manipulates the Oobleck he coats it in chakra giving it shape and making it retain a form until impact with a target where the Oobleck loses it's solid properties covering the opponent in a thick gooey liquid that can impede movement making the opponent slowed due to the excess weight of the Oobleck as well as it's sticky properties. The user can also manipulate the Oobleck to constrict the opponent.
Notes:
-The user can only form four constructs with a use of the jutsu

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 Declined  Takes hold? How? I mean, do you want to use this to simply reshape an already active technique? Because the "takes hold" leads to misconceptions as to you literally needing to touch or "grab" the target Oobleck source to use it. Rest seems ok to me.

 

[ReXii]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

(Shimoton: shiryu no hoko) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Roar
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first inhales, gathering frost chakra in his/her mouth, and then releases an enormous vortex of Frost in the direction of their opponent, creating a large, maelstrom of blistering wind which damages and causes numbing effects and slow frostbite to his foes. This technique is performed without handseals instead it involves the user putting his hands in front of his mouth in a pose resembling that of a trumpeter before releasing his frost chakra, prompting it to be expelled between his fingers. The frost produced by this version start out as a very thin line, enough to be fit between the user's fingers, before suddenly enlarging to strike the opponents. The other, simpler and seemingly faster way simply has the user gather frost and then shoot it out, with no seeming stance required, and a much wider blast of frost being produced directly from the user's mouth, albeit at a reduction of range, reaching only mid range.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Cannot use Frost Release techniques higher than A-rank same and next turn

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 Approved 

(Shimoton: shiryu no tsume) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges their feet with frost and proceeds to assault the opponent with a powerful frost-enhanced kick, with the ensuing frost granting the attack more power and speed. this pertains to releasing blasts of frigid wind to assault the opponent, or move quickly in various directions by using the frigid wind to propel himself in various directions.
Note:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit at any point by the frost dragons claw they will suffer a slow build up of frostbite on the targeted area, this culminates in three turns causing the closest affected limb to seize up and stop working entirely.
-The effects of frostbite can't be cured with fire chakra it must be an actual heat source.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  No on the speed part or propelling you with frost.

(Shimoton: touketsu haikibutsu aisuoukan) Frost Release: The Frozen Wastes Of Ice Crown
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20 to user)
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to there body, this only allows them to use two techniques per turn for two turns, at the end of these two turns the technique is fully charged, allowing the user to snap his fingers, causing all air on the battleground to become frigid and blistering, the effect of this wind is powerful, causing not only instant frost damage when it activate's but also culminating hoar frost on the opponents body over two turns, if the opponent is unable to escape or block the frigid power of the wind in two turns there organs are highly likely to seize up completely.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed.
-Must know Frost Release

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 Declined  OPed. No handseals? Tremendous scale and offensive effects? Too much. Tone it down.

Note: Thank you for the explanation, i resubmitted the techniques, they will be using blasts of frigid wind, the culmination of hoar frost is an application of such, as hoar frost is directly created by frigid winds, thats actually why i used hoar frost and not the other tangible variants of frost, as it would never leave someone in the situation where they need to use a jutsu to break any frost on the body, but the lasting internal damage of frost requires a heat source, and the frigid wind can be blocked the same as any wind technique, with a powerful fire element technique.

(Shimoton: shiryu no tsume) Frost Release: Frost Dragons Claw
Rank: B
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges their feet with frost and proceeds to assault the opponent with a powerful frost-enhanced kick, with the ensuing frost granting the attack more power and speed. this pertains to releasing blasts of frigid wind to assault the opponent, or to move in various directions by using the frigid wind to propel himself in various directions.
Note:
-This technique can not be used to avoid any jutsu, even if used to move.
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Should the opponent be hit at any point by the frost dragons claw they will suffer a slow build up of frostbite on the targeted area, this culminates in three turns causing the closest affected limb to seize up and stop working entirely.
-The effects of frostbite can't be cured with fire chakra it must be an actual heat source.
-Must know Frost Release

I changed the movement function of the technique so as to not avoid jutsu using it, hoping this is okay like so.

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 Declined  Like I told you, no movement using Frost.

(Shimoton: touketsu haikibutsu aisuoukan) Frost Release: The Frozen Wastes Of Ice Crown
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20 to user)
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to there body and making six handseals, this only allows them to use two techniques per turn for two turns, at the end of these two turns the technique is fully charged, allowing the user to snap his fingers, causing all air on the battleground to become frigid and blistering, the effect of this wind is powerful, however it does not cause instant frost damage but culminates hoar frost on the opponents body over two turns, if the opponent is unable to escape or block the frigid power of the wind in two turns there organs are highly likely to seize up completely, as they suffer the 90 damage caused by the technique at this point.
Note:
-The opponent if caught in this technique his speed is decreased by two speed levels for the duration, culminating in total paralysis after two turns.
-Can only be used once per battle and upon it's end no more frost jutsu can be used in the battle.
-This technique lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed.

Changed the above technique to not cause instant damage but instead function as a damage over time technique.

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 Declined  Still too much. Its a forbidden rank damage that can't be easily countered with any cannon technique and bares little to no risk for you.

(Shimoton: Funiku no karasu - tengu no tōketsu enkai) Frost Release: Karasu-Tengu's Frozen Banquet Of The Carrion
Rank: S
Type: Offence/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user of this technique begins by focusing chakra in to the air around either them or the opponent, then by forming two quick handseals, the user is able to cause a huge drop in the temperature of the air, and from this frigid air, crows seem to form, being created from Hoar frost, these crows of hoar frost then spin wildly around the opponent or user shrieking loudly, if around the user the crows merely defend him as a blockade of frigid wind and hoar frost, however around the opponent the crows dive at the opponent, spattering on his body as lumps of hoar frost, slowing him down and causing lasting frost damage if not quickly removed.
Note:
-The opponent if caught in this technique his speed is decreased by two speed levels for the duration.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-The crows vary in number as the user is able to keep creating them until his focus is broken or the air is heated up.

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 Declined  We already told you: Frost is cold wind... How can you create a Crow of Frost? Or do you mean, blasts of frost shapped like crows? Also, please use correct punctuation. Its really hard to understand what you mean when you only use commas. and Srhiking? why?

(Shimoton: Furīzā no reitō no Lotus tantō) Frost Release: Frozen lotus charge of articuno
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user surrounds their entire body with a huge aura of frost, that takes on the shape of a gigantic dragon, with several tails. The user then propels themselves toward the target, leaving behind a long wake of frost, and hits them with a devestating headbutt, coated in an aura of frost causing considerable damage, and culminating hoar frost on the opponents body over a single turn located on the opponents body where the head struck at first then spreading over the body covering them.
Note:
-The opponent if hit by this technique has his speed decreased by three speed levels for the duration that the hoar frost remains on him.
-Can only be used once per battle.

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 Declined  No speed chart references. Also, propels? Again... No propelling. It leads me to believe you're trying to use Frost as a way to move fast... No. Reword. The rest is confusing and badly written. This is also pretty useless. You'd be dead the moment you surround yourself with such a technique and rampage forwards to headbutt your opponent. But your funeral...not mine.

(Shimoton: Rei-ō no yūgaina haaku) Frost Release: Malefic grasp of the Lich king.
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is similar in function to the wind technique tearing beast palm, however it works entirely in reverse, the user of this begins by focusing on heavily dropping the temperature around his enemy, causing hoar frost crystals to form, making a partially tangible hand of swirling cold wind and frost crystals that surrounds the opponent holding him in place, then from the hand an arm of frigid wind forms, seeking out the creator and attaching to his own hand allowing him to complete this binding hand, at this point he gains the ability to manouver the arm of frost as if it was his own, throwing or atttempting to squash his opponent.
-Note- when the arm of frost reaches the user the opponent is stricken with a build up of Hoar frost over two turns, that will lead to frostbite and immobilization.
-Note- Usable twice.

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 Declined  DNR. Sorry but I can't allow this.

(Shimoton: Tairyū no tatchi) Frost Release: A touch of Convection
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is used on any small water source, or any object containing a small water source, by directly controlling the water of the object the user is capable of flash frosting the water via the use of convection frost, this can cause plants or the like to have there stems and roots crack open causing themselves to seemingly become covered in frost, this technique is also able to directly chill an opponent if he has water on his body, this however can only effect fairly small water sources directly, or objects containing water, up to a size of around a bathtub of water in volume. This technique is used by merely snapping ones fingers after concentrating on the area in question for a moment.
-Note- Usable thrice
-Note- if the frost comes in to contact with a human body they suffer a minor frostburn causing the nearest limb to seize up for two turns, but no lasting frostbite.

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 Declined  DNR. Oped and unreasonable.

 

[Selendrile]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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(Awaton: Yōhō-Ka o Melusine )- Foam Release: Melusine the Beekeeper
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user focuses his chakra within any water/foam on the battlefield, whether it be a small droplet, a big puddle or even a large reservoir, and uses it to create small insects made of foam within the source by adding their wind chakra. The insects of foam are small enough to be indistinguishable by the naked eye. They appear as nothing more than small bubbles within the source to those who do not have the ability to sense them (whether through normal sensory techniques or doujutsu). The insects can them latch themselves onto the opponent by flying towards them (at the speed of an average wasp), or if the opponent makes contact with the source. This allows the bugs to enter into any orifices (eyes, nose) or open wounds. The user will then perform the Tiger hand seal, expanding the foam bugs once they are inside of the opponent’s body, soaking up all of their blood and drowning their internal organs. However, the insects would become visible the moment they are out of the source as they swarm the enemy in large numbers, creating what appears to be a small cloud of foam traveling through the air. The user can also expand the insects as they travel towards the opponent, each individual insect being the size of Akamaru before the time-skip, but they will be unable to enter the target's body, and are only capable of blunt-force damage.
- Usable twice per battle
- No Foam techniques above B-rank the same turn
- Cannot be used on an opponent's active water technique

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 Declined  >_> Need I say anything Ancalagon? Just to be sure though, I'll say it: oped. REALLY OPED! >_>

(Awaton: Yagiza no Kaisō Sōgen)- Foam Release: Capricorn’s Seaweed Meadow
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will begin by focusing their chakra, and then releasing it into the ground via a stomp, or the slamming of the hands onto the ground. This creates a large pool of foam chakra underground that covers short range under and all around the user. Immediately, numerous strands of foam chakra erupt from the ground, creating a thick patch of seaweed composed foam that reaches nearly to the user’s knees. Using the foam seaweed, the user can control and extend each individual strand so that it lashes out up to short range from the foam source, whether it be to extinguish an incoming technique or attack the opponent directly. Additionally, the user can launch the individual strands from the source, sharpening them into weapons (spears, arrows, etc) in order to attack the target at long range equivalent to an A-rank attack. The foam underneath the ground replenishes any foam used by the user.
- Usable twice per battle
- Remains active for three turns
- No foam techniques above A-rank the same and next turn

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 Declined  Ok...what is foam seaweed? I don't understand what you mean unless somethng is escaping my understanding. Also, these strands can stop techniques...each one...how many are there and whats their individual power?

 

[Howard]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

(Ekitai: Baindo) Oobleck Release: Bind
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user molds a mixture of water chakra and earth chakra forming a mass of Oobleck, or takes hold of an already formed source of Oobleck he then performs 1 hand seal (Boar) allowing him to form the source of Oobleck into projectiles, nets, waves, tools or weapons. As he manipulates the Oobleck he coats it in chakra giving it shape and making it retain a form until impact with a target where the Oobleck loses it's solid properties covering the opponent in a thick gooey liquid that can impede movement making the opponent slowed due to the excess weight of the Oobleck as well as it's sticky properties. The user can also manipulate the Oobleck to constrict the opponent.
Notes:
-The user can only form four constructs with a use of the jutsu

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 Declined  Takes hold? How? I mean, do you want to use this to simply reshape an already active technique? Because the "takes hold" leads to misconceptions as to you literally needing to touch or "grab" the target Oobleck source to use it. Rest seems ok to me.

(Ekitai: Baindo) Oobleck Release: Bind
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user molds a mixture of water chakra and earth chakra forming a mass of Oobleck, or manipulates an already existing source of Oobleck he then performs 1 hand seal (Boar) allowing him to form the source of Oobleck into projectiles, nets, waves, tools or weapons. As he manipulates the Oobleck he coats it in chakra giving it shape and making it retain a form until impact with a target where the Oobleck loses it's solid properties covering the opponent in a thick gooey liquid that can impede movement making the opponent slowed due to the excess weight of the Oobleck as well as it's sticky properties. The user can also manipulate the Oobleck to constrict the opponent.
Notes:
-The user can only form four constructs with a use of the jutsu

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 Approved  Good tech.

 

[Korra.]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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(Nirro Suna: Yougu) Red Sand Release: Tools
Type: Attack
Rank: A rank
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user can form strong tools out of Red Sand, these include; kunai, swords, pillars, shields etc. The tools will be able to repel water and the sand is heated slightly giving them a burning property.
Note: Usable 4 times a match

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 Declined  Where do these tools come from? Why is this Mid-Long Range? Define the burning property

(Nirro Suna: Sunaarashi) Red Sand Release: Sabels
Type: Attack
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user forms a small cyclone of Red Sand in his dominate hand and then releases it out towards the opponent. The user performs a single hand seal (Tiger) and the sand storm grows much larger taking on the properties of a large sand storm throwing sand around and whipping the opponent around thrashing him about. The sand storm is enough to throw the opponent back and can cause severe damage to anyone caught inside of it or hit by it the sand is also heated to an immense temperature enough to create third degree burns to the opponent or anyone hit by it. The sand storm repels any water jutsu that is thrown against it. If an opponent tries to counter using a water jutsu the Red Sand will over power it.
-If the user is caught in the sand storm he is effected to.
-Will repel up to S rank water within reason
- Usable 4 times a match

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 Approved 

(Nirro Suna: Shūkai) Red Sand Release: Gathering
Type: Supplemantary
Rank: C rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will channel either already existing Red Sand or their chakra into the ground to change the ground into a fine sand like dust quality, then use their chakra to make sand/dust in the ground turn into Hydrophobic Sand so the user will have more to use in a battle.

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 Declined  Limits? Define this...it seems you can simply turn the whole field into red sand...No handseals? No nothing? Is this sand hot and burning?

(Nirro Suna: Yougu) Red Sand Release: Tools
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user can form strong tools out of Red Sand either by creating a source with this jutsu or manipulating an already existing source, these include; kunai, swords, pillars, shields etc. The tools will be able to repel water and the sand is heated slightly giving them a burning property. The heat from the tools are enough to cause third degree burns to human skin on contact and cause deep searing wounds. The user himself doesn't directly touch the tools therefor he is unaffected by the heat of them. The tools can only be created Short Range from the user if the technique is used to create its own source of red sand.
Note: Usable 4 times a match

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 Approved  Editted. Taking into account its scolding hot sand, I cannot allow you to create this from anywhere. You could use this to potentially attack an enemy in a way from a blind side where he would have no actual escape or defense possible and would end up severely burned and damaged.

 

[-Jiraiya-]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

Phosphorus Release: Illusion Explosion Realm (Rinton: Genkaku bakuhatsu kokudo)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will slam their hands on the ground and turn the ground surrounding the opponent into phosphorus and channel fire chakra into it. Once done a small stream of chemical gas will come out the ground inducing the opponent into a genjutsu once the chemical smoke is inhaled. In the illusion the opponent will then see large amounts of chemical gas emerge all around him over the battle field. He will then see the user perform the tiger hand seal, causing the whole area around him to explode inward, from periphery towards the opponent, meaning he will see the ground explode from long range around him traveling to his location. Giving him no place to travel except upwards. The explosions are very large and cause huge craters into the ground. The user of this technique inside the genjutsu does not disappear as it just looks like the opponent has done a regular jutsu. Though in reality the opponent body is simply paralyze the opponent is inhaling massive amount of chemical gas from the phosphorus, restricting his breathing, damaging his lungs, disabling him to do any jutsus from his mouth for 3 turns once(If) the opponent gets out of the genjutsu.
The damage is due to the mental strain from the illusionary explosion and inhaling of the chemical smoke produced by burning phosphorus in real world.
Notes:

• Can be used only 2 times per battle.
• Genjutsu last for 2 turns unless dispelled.
• The user cannot use any other Genjutsu in the same turn and in the next.
• No other Phosphorus A rank or above jutsus in the same turn.

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 Declined  Your CE doesn't have Genjutsu inducing abilities. DNR.

Phosphorus Release: Comet shower (Rinton: Suisei hitoame)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels his chakra into the ground and shoots out a earthen block (4 feet size) filled with phosphorus high into the air. Once the block is in the air, the user can time his move and perform a Tiger hand seal as the block descends and ignite the phosphorus which will cause the disintegration of the earthen block in the mid air releasing many chunks of rocks varying in size mixed with burning molten phosphorus to rain down over the ground covering up to mid range around the target.
In addition the damage produced by raining stone chunks, the burning molten phosphorus will ignite any combustible material and will fall on the ground and continue to burn releasing a dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact.
If the smoke comes in contact with the eye it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes difficulty in breathing making the enemies unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.
Notes:

• Can only use this jutsu 3 times per battle.
• Igniting the earth block counts a move.
• No S rank and above Phosphorus jutsus in same turn.
• The burning molten phosphorus continues to burn over the ground for next 1 turn.

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 Declined  The effects of the smoke are a bit too much. I'd remove the whole difficulty breathing and what not. I think the technique could serve another purpose as a smoke screen of sorts adding to the normal irritation and etc of the smoke. But not to that extent.

Phosphorus Release: Holy Bahamut (Rinton: Seinaru doragon)
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user performs the Ram -> Tiger -> Snake hand seals and creates a pure white phosphorus dragon out of the earth. This Dragon is roughly 5 times larger than a human, that Can stand on both hind legs, or 4 legs if it so wish, The wing span of the dragon spans up to short range.
The dragon can also shoot out 12 Inch Spiked Balls of phosphorus or 5-7 sharp projectiles made of phosphorus from its mouth equivalent to A rank jutsu in quick succession. Its body is way to heavy to be supported by the wings meaning he can not fly. By flapping its both wings, the dragon can release a barrage of feathers made of phosphorus with a sharp tip which is equivalent to A rank(attack from both wings combined).
By performing a Snake hand seal and maintaining it, the user can manipulate this dragon up to 5 turns and the user can reform a part of dragon's damaged body using any existing phosphorus left from previous jutsus.
While manipulating the dragon, the user can focus his fire chakra and produce slow and controlled ignition inside the dragons body from its belly up to its head while compressing its tail part forward and can make the dragon spit out a shower of burning molten phosphorus up to short range in front of its head and then the dragon totally burns down by crashing over the target producing severe burns.
The burning molten phosphorus which was spat by the dragon will ignite any combustible material and will fall on the ground and continue to burn releasing a dark gray-black chemical smoke from the reaction of burning phosphorus with air causing chemical irritation to eyes, throat, mucus membranes, lungs, etc upon contact.
If the smoke comes in contact with the eye it will produce intense irritation, burning sensation, blurring of vision along with watering until it has been cleared from the eye. If the fumes are inhaled, it causes difficulty in breathing making the enemies unable to use jutsus via their mouth (which requires inhalation & exhalation) for one turn.
Notes:

• Can only be used 1 time per battle and can stay on the battle field for 5 turns.
• Can shoot out balls or sharp projectiles from its mouth and wings made of phosphorus up to 2 times each and its usage counts as a move.
• The phosphorus dragon can be reformed by grazing over any existing phosphorus on the ground.
• Igniting the phosphorus dragon from inside using fire chakra counts as a move.
• The user can perform other jutsus which doesn't require hand seals while manipulating the phosphorus dragon.
• No other A rank and above phosphorus jutsus as long as the jutsu is active.

Image of the phosphorus dragon:
It's more lengthier in the middle part of body than shown in he pic.

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 Declined  Problem with this is that its not a technique but actually a summon disguised as a technique. Dragons like this are part of hells contract. Without his permission I cannot allow you to submit this.

 

[Korra.]

Re: Custom Element's Jutsu

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(Nirro Suna: Yougu) Red Sand Release: Tools
Type: Attack
Rank: A rank
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user can form strong tools out of Red Sand, these include; kunai, swords, pillars, shields etc. The tools will be able to repel water and the sand is heated slightly giving them a burning property.
Note: Usable 4 times a match

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 Declined  Where do these tools come from? Why is this Mid-Long Range? Define the burning property

(Nirro Suna: Sunaarashi) Red Sand Release: Sabels
Type: Attack
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user forms a small cyclone of Red Sand in his dominate hand and then releases it out towards the opponent. The user performs a single hand seal (Tiger) and the sand storm grows much larger taking on the properties of a large sand storm throwing sand around and whipping the opponent around thrashing him about. The sand storm is enough to throw the opponent back and can cause severe damage to anyone caught inside of it or hit by it the sand is also heated to an immense temperature enough to create third degree burns to the opponent or anyone hit by it. The sand storm repels any water jutsu that is thrown against it. If an opponent tries to counter using a water jutsu the Red Sand will over power it.
-If the user is caught in the sand storm he is effected to.
-Will repel up to S rank water within reason
- Usable 4 times a match

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 Approved 

(Nirro Suna: Shūkai) Red Sand Release: Gathering
Type: Supplemantary
Rank: C rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will channel either already existing Red Sand or their chakra into the ground to change the ground into a fine sand like dust quality, then use their chakra to make sand/dust in the ground turn into Hydrophobic Sand so the user will have more to use in a battle.

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 Declined  Limits? Define this...it seems you can simply turn the whole field into red sand...No handseals? No nothing? Is this sand hot and burning?

Cant edit my other post any more


(Nirro Suna: Shūkai) Red Sand Release: Gathering
Type: Supplemantary
Rank: C rank
Range: Short - Mid (10 meter radius), Mid Range in depth
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will do the snake sign channel either already existing Red Sand or their chakra into the ground to change the ground into a fine sand like dust quality, then use their chakra to make sand/dust in the ground turn into Hydrophobic Sand, in a short to mid range with a 10 meter radius, while also being Mid Range in depth, so the user will have more to use in a battle. This is like when Gaara uses his sand to create more sand from the ground for his use.
Note: Usable 5 times a battle

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 Approved 

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(Nirro Suna: Oni Ken) Red Sand Release: Devil's Fist
Type: Attack
Rank: F
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: The user concentrates doton chakra into his dominant hand, quickly striking the opponent with a closed fist releasing the doton chakra into the opponent's body leaving a mass of ambient doton chakra. He then immediately follows up by concentrating katon chakra into his off hand and striking the opponent again in roughly the same spot releasing the katon chakra. He then molds the doton and katon chakra together to form a dense sand inside the opponent's body. Lastly the user pulls off one final strike to the opponent's body using both his right and left hand concentrating fuuton chakra forcing it to adhere to the grains of sand inside the opponent's body with this final blow all the Red Sand blasts backwards out of the opponent's body causing searing wounds to the internal organs and burning and tearing the flesh severely.
Note: Usable 1 times a match
Note: No other Red Sand jutsu can be used this turn
Note: The user's hand suffer damage and cant do hand signs for 2 turns

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 Declined  DNR. Ridiculous level of "opness". Creating Red Hydrophobic sand inside an opponents body? No. Also, there is no such thing as Rank F. Its forbidden rank.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

( Meromeroton: Aibo ) Perfume Release: Mémoire

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Allows the user the change one's scent, through the usage of perfume, to mimic any known scent, and/or simply to remove oneself's. This allows for such a strong and influential change that the user is able to incite certain illusions on a target, considered external illusions, A rank in strength, which enhance or subdue the general mood of a person, greatly improving genjutsu and other psique-altering situations by 1 rank. For example, the user could add a pungent scent of blood alongside the scent of a loved one, to incite a sense of despair if the target is already prone to feel so. One could add scents of woodland and flowers or scents of heat and sand, to go along with illusions that alter the terrain, enhancing the experience and adding a layer of scent to previously total-visual techniques. Likewise, the user can change the scent to specifically attract a target/species, thus enhancing the inherit luring property of Perfume by 1 rank.
Genjutsu specialists or characters from scent/taste specialized clans are able to spend less chakra, cutting down to half ( 15 chakra).
*Lasts 3 turns, suffering a 2 turn cool down before being able to change scent again*

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 Declined  I have a problem with Genjutsu that controls your emotions. Thats something that is beyond Genjutsu. Genjutsu controls your senses. You can induce the scent you say (blood+known loved one) but you forget that he is free to be in despair or not. To fall apart emotionally or be indifferent. You cannot control how he'll feel, only present the situation in front of him.