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Name: Yggdrasil's Blessing
Type: Artifact
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The world tree, Yggdrasil, said to be linked with every other universe, very rarely bares any fruits or remnants of its existence. However, one man found the world tree, and from its mighty branches, took a single branch, an offering from the world tree and a reward for the man who managed to find it. From this single branch, the man forged a necklace, which was completely in tune with nature, just as the world tree was. This necklace is linked to all things nature, and as such, has two passive abilities granted to those who are also in tune with nature.

Firstly, The necklace acts as a booster. This ability is granted to users who are attempting to Enter Sage Mode for the first time in a battle. When the necklace is worn, and the user is entering Sage mode, the Necklace will forcibly take 10% more additional chakra from the user, convert it into Senjutsu chakra and add it to the users Senjutsu chakra pool. This passive will only trigger once per battle, and will only occur when the user forcibly enters Sage mode without Meditating.

Secondly, Yggdrasil's Blessing grants harmony to those who have become one with nature. Because of this, when the user is using jutsu that require senjutsu, the necklace will supplement 10 chakra points, taking natural energy from the world around them and infusing it into the technique, allowing the user to reduce the amount of senjutsu they use per technique by 10 chakra points. If, in that turn, the user does not use any jutsu that require senjutsu chakra, the necklace will instead substitute the -10 chakra cost per turn that is required to keep sage mode active, however this will only occur in the instance the user does not use any techniques that are infused with senjutsu in the turn. However, while this may be the case, the necklace is not all giving, nor is it all powerful. Being just a single branch of the world tree, the necklace is limited, and during any battle, it is only capable of substituting 150 total senjutsu chakra, before going dormant for the rest of the battle.

Any person who is not in tune with nature, and attempts to steal or wear the necklace, will have their bodies filled with unbalanced natural energy, turning them to stone. Therefore, Yggdrasil's Blessing only allows itself to be worn by those who are in tune with nature, and are capable of harboring Natural Energy inside their bodies.

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Obtained Artifact here: https://animebase.me/threads/storyboard-mission-submission.756508/page-29#post-21986102

Declined.
1. People who steal or try to use it shouldn't turn to stone. That's a defense against theft all artifacts are "stealable" unless event-related.
2. No to extending Sage Mode, especially Perfect Sage Mode as that goes against the Sage Mode rules themselves. You can try to replace this with another one, but that one won't be approved.
3. Infusing additional senjutsu chakra into a technique is fine, needs a limit though, I'd say 3 times per arc maximum, recharging at the start of a new arc. Active if you want it to also increase rank or damage. Passive if it's just a chakra increase. Substituting senjutsu cost is a no though,

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Name: Calamity Vessel
Type: Artifact
Artifact Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: N/A (up to 300 stored)
Damage: N/A
Description: Calamity Vessel is an unique artifact crafted by a group of the first Fuuinjutsu practitioners. It comes in the form of an all black chain-link necklace with a red, spiraling gem hanging from it. Specifically, the gem would be as a protection mechanism for the user against outside sealing jutsu, seeing as they specialized in such. The gem is able to be pre-stored with chakra points that it would use on its own, maxing out at 300. With the chakra fueling the gem, it is able to innately "sense" dormant or active sealing jutsu. This does not mean the user can sense the techniques though, just the artifact. Once an enemy sealing technique's abilities attempt to become actived or a dormant seal is sensed, the gem would send out an instant pulse of chakra that covers mid range, canceling said sealing technique altogether. This can only be done on sealing techniques of A-rank or lower, and would use up an equivalent amount of chakra as the seal in question is made up of; Also being able to effect numerous seals at once. Of course, if the gem doesn't hold enough chakra, it wouldn't be able to cancel a seal. This would be a passive ability, not taking up a move slot due to the artifact simply using pre-stored chakra. If the artifact was to run out of usable chakra, the user is able to restore the reserves but with a cost of a jutsu slot. 1 time per arc, the user can use the artifact on any ranked sealing technique, though the chakra cost required would be doubled.

Artifact won here: https://animebase.me/threads/storyboard-mission-submission.756508/post-21986436

Declined.
1. This is too much, and 300 chakra is way above what could be possible for this. I don't think it needs to store chakra at all.
2. This would be better if it did a single objective ( cancel fuuinjutsu ) a limited number of times ( x2 maximum )
3. Don't feel like it needs to "sense" the fuuinjutsu. It should be able to just do it, passively is okay with 1 charge, actively if you go for 2. Should recharge at the start of an arc.
4. It should only work on A-rank fuuinjutsu and below.

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( Sainan no Fune ) - Calamity Vessel
Type: Artifact
Artifact Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: N/A ( chakra equal to the seal )
Damage: N/A
Description: Calamity Vessel is a unique artifact crafted by a group of the first Fuuinjutsu practitioners. It comes in the form of an all-black chain-link necklace with a red, spiraling gem hanging from it. Specifically, the gem would be a protection mechanism for the user against outside sealing jutsu, seeing as they specialized in such. The gem is able to passively sap chakra from the user when needed. With the chakra fueling the gem, it is able to innately react to dormant or active sealing jutsu. Once an enemy sealing technique's abilities attempt to become active or a dormant seal is in range, the gem would send out an instant pulse of chakra that covers mid-range, canceling and destroying said sealing technique altogether. This can only be done on sealing techniques of A-rank or lower, and would use up an equivalent amount of chakra as the seal in question is made up of. This would be a passive ability, not taking up a move slot due to the artifact simply using chakra on its own accord. The ability of this artifact can only be used once per arc and can't be recharged until a new arc.

Approved. Check the edits, reduced it to once per arc due to being passive.

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Name: Lucky Necklace
Type: Artifact
Artifact Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A lucky necklace made by the monks in the frozen lands of the north, these monks live a hard life and often rely on what they call blessings of the universe. These necklaces are made to give travellers these blessings should the universe deign to see fit. Some believe this to be sheer superstition. This relic grants the user 10% added kumi gains to all ninja world missions bounties and events, but doesn't always do so leaving it to the checkers discretion.

Declined. Won't approve artifacts that change how much kumi or ryo one obtains.

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( Chikyū ) - Gaia
Type: Artifact
Artifact Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 20
Description: This is a basic shield from ancient times found in depths of a mine in the earth in land of water. At first it seems like a basic shield, but it's edges are extremely sharp, like that of a blade. The shield had neither rusted, nor had the straps withered. There were strange ruins over the shield but nothing anyone could understand. The shield was basic chakra metal able to block D rank and below physical attacks. The shields edges could be used to strike to deal 20 damage due to it's sharpness. Due to the sharp edges, the shield can be infused with elements that a blade or sword or sharp weapon would be infused with (spears/bisento included). Like a kunai being infused it would gain the properties in the same way without hurting the user. Over all it seemed like a simple well crafted chakra metal shield.

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Approved. Nothing much to say fits for a D-rank good job.

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Players involved: Me, Myself, and I
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Defend yourself from wild beasts (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: April 5th
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/grand-divide-110.756123/page-2#post-21929673
Additional information: Let me get an artifact please : (

Mission Passed. Artifacts are on hold for the time being. You can submit a custom one of that appropriate mission rank, however.

Pending. Leaving for someone else.
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( Akurisu no Buresuretto ) - Bracelet of Achlys
Type: Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Bracelet of Achlys is an artifact from unknown origins. The artifact carries one single passive ability, whenever the user completely changes form, such as through elemental techniques, the user's equipment and belongings would be sealed into the bracelet, protecting them from any possible side effects, or simply storing them for traveling purposes. (For instance, traveling in elemental form/in shadow form) The equipment would be stored within the Bracelet, which in itself would take whatever form the user assumes, insuring its own protection as it becomes part of the user's form. The equipment can be freely released whilst the user is in a form and would be completely released when the user returns to normal.

Approved. Cool idea.

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Name: Twin Shadows
Type: Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:
Twin Shadows is a long velvet cloak that wraps around the users back. A delicately embroidered piece of craftsmanship, this cape was presented to the Queen of the Lightning Mountains regions as a gift from one of the towns in the Frozen North in an attempt to win her favour. A deep Satin Blue with Gold Filigree, this cape has the design of a snowflake on its back.
Twin Shadows has a gold chain that connects its around the users neck, with a blue sapphire clasp. By touching this clasp, the snowflake comes to life, sending out a wave of sleet, snow and ice, causing an immediate snowstorm within the vicinity. This snowstorm occupies an entire landmark or up to long range in battle, and last for 3 turns. Due to the sheer volume of this snowstorm, naked/sharingan/rinnegan vision is limited to short range, reducing byakugan vision to mid range.
Notes:
Can only be used twice per battle/arc
Lasts 3 turns.

Declined. Only because it could infringe upon Ice Release as is.

The idea is solid and can be approvable as mist ( water ) or dust ( earth. )

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Chungsu’s Peace
Type:
Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-5 Per Transformation)
Damage: N/A
Description: Said to have once been regularly worn by the 29th Daijō-daijin, Sai Inuzuka, Chungsu’s Peace is a unique artifact made from chakra reactive metal that grants it unique transformative properties to lessen the sensory burden on individuals with enhanced senses. In its initial state, the black and white, birdlike domino mask simply serves to protect the user from blinding effects from bright lights. It’s only when the mask is transformed into one of its two forms that the passive abilities it possesses reveal themselves. The first ability grants the wearer passive immunity to all hindering sound techniques A rank and below, to include illusions triggered by sounds. The second ability grants the user passive immunity to foul stenches and strong odors, protecting them from inhaling airborne particulates such as fumes, vapors, poison gases, and airborne microorganisms that are either naturally occurring or the result of A-rank and below techniques.

Notes:
- Transforming the mask is passive and does not require a move slot.
- While in either form, Chungsu’s Peace drains 10 chakra per turn until it’s returned to its initial state.
- Chungsu’s Peace can only be activated once per arc.

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Declined. Solid idea, like it tbh but there is a problem. General immunity for each is too much when transformed. Make it something that works for a set limit. EG: It can block hindering sound waves two times per arc before returning to its normal state and recharges at the beginning of the next arc. Same with blocking gaseous poison release, or toxic elements. Twice per arc recharging at the start. It can still be passive, just needs a usage limit for each state. Having two states is fine imo as it's two sets of passives.

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(Chū Su No Heiwa) Chungsu’s Peace
Type:
Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-5 Per Transformation)
Damage: N/A
Description: Said to have once been regularly worn by the 29th Daijō-daijin, Sai Inuzuka, Chungsu’s Peace is a unique artifact made from chakra reactive metal that grants it unique transformative properties to lessen the sensory burden on individuals with enhanced senses. In its initial state, the black and white, birdlike domino mask simply serves to protect the user from blinding effects from bright lights. It’s only when the mask is transformed into one of its two forms that the passive abilities it possesses reveal themselves. The first ability grants the wearer passive immunity to all hindering sound techniques A rank and below, to include illusions triggered by sounds. The second ability grants the user passive immunity to foul stenches and strong odors, protecting them from inhaling airborne particulates such as fumes, vapors, poison gases, and airborne microorganisms that are either naturally occurring or the result of A-rank and below techniques. Once it's abilities have been used, the mask returns to its initial state.

Notes:
- Transforming the mask is passive and does not require a move slot. The mask can only take one form at a time.
- In its first form, the artifact can block A rank and below airborne particulates twice per arc.
- In its second form, the artifact can block A rank and below hindering sound waves twice per arc.
- The artifact's passive abilities recharge at the beginning of each arc.


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Name: Twin Shadows
Type: Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:
Twin Shadows is a long velvet cloak that wraps around the users back. A delicately embroidered piece of craftsmanship, this cape was presented to the Queen of the Lightning Mountains regions as a gift from one of the towns in the Frozen North in an attempt to win her favour. A deep Satin Blue with Gold Filigree, this cape has the design of a snowflake on its back.
Twin Shadows has a gold chain that connects its around the users neck, with a blue sapphire clasp. By touching this clasp, the snowflake comes to life, sending out a wave of sleet, snow and ice, causing an immediate snowstorm within the vicinity. This snowstorm occupies an entire landmark or up to long range in battle, and last for 3 turns. Due to the sheer volume of this snowstorm, naked/sharingan/rinnegan vision is limited to short range, reducing byakugan vision to mid range.
Notes:
Can only be used twice per battle/arc
Lasts 3 turns.

Declined. Only because it could infringe upon Ice Release as is.

The idea is solid and can be approvable as mist ( water ) or dust ( earth. )

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Name: Twin Shadows
Type: Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A ( 30 )
Damage:
N/A
Description:
Twin Shadows is a long velvet cloak that wraps around the users back. A delicately embroidered piece of craftsmanship, this cape was presented to the Queen of the Lightning Mountains regions as a gift from one of the towns in the Frozen North in an attempt to win her favour. A deep Satin Blue with Gold Filigree, this cape has the design of a Water Droplet on its back.
Twin Shadows has a gold chain that connects its around the users neck, with a blue sapphire clasp. By touching this clasp, the Droplet comes to life, passively sending out a wave of water, causing an immediate heavy rain-storm similar to (Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique within the vicinity having none of the sensing capabilities. This rain-fall can fill an entire landmark or up to long-range in battle, and last for 3 turns, or until blown away by A-rank or above Wind Release, or similar elements as well as something like (Shuushi Ame) - Stop Rain. Due to the sheer volume of this rain-fall, naked/sharingan/rinnegan vision is limited to short-range. However, doujutsu such as Byakugan and Tenseigan are unaffected due to their telescopic vision.
Notes:
Can only be used twice per arc recharging at the start of the following arc
The rain-fall lasts 3 turns or until dispersed


Approved. Check the edits, and if you don't like it, it can be declined and resubbed.

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Name: Joestar Apple
Type: Artifact
Artifact Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: These apples are harvested from the tree planted by Jonathan Joestar in the Alexandros Bluff landmark. The tree having been powered by the incredible energy of yang release has borne fruit capable of healing wounds and fatigue, when consumed the apples restore 25% of the users total HP and chakra, however these apples are not effective aside any medicines such as the military ration pills, they are also ineffective in battles as it would require excess time for digestion. These apples can be used freely outside of battle however and even given to others. Each person however may only eat four apples per arc, lest they become resistant to the effect of the apples.

Declined.
1. These will be a consumable, so using the artifact will use it up, similar to (Chīsai Iyakuhin Nankō) – Lesser Medicinal Salve
2. 25% of their HP is too high, give it a static number. I'd say 20 health max since the above-mentioned one does 10 and is C-rank.
3. Any individual person can eat one per arc to heal
4. It can be "traded" like any other artifact but again, single-use, consumable. like the other healing based artifacts.

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A-rank Artifact awarded: https://animebase.me/threads/storyboard-mission-submission.756508/page-32#post-21990176

[Augusuto~Usushiza no Bana] Banner of Augustus Ceasar
Type:
Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short – Long [Affecting Landmark]
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The Banner is a revered artifact from ancient times, from an empire that stretched from the Hanguri Gulf to the Aisu Bay and to the Haran Bay, an empire that spanned a fifth of the known world. It is a relic from the Legio IV Flavia Felix and has been told to have remarkable effects on the ones under its banners.

The Banner grants those that follow it [Can be affiliated with a Warring State Clan and/or a Custom Clan], with vitality and strength, as the Banner inhibits an old and powerful magic [Yang Chakra]. It distributes this energy between the ones who have sworn fealty to the banner and its clan. This causes followers to be granted with an increase in vitality, allowing them to heal minor injuries over time, such as cuts, burns, internal damage etc. However, the banner does not affect severed limbs, beheading and other major injuries [Healing 30 per post/turn in a fight].

The Banner also steels the minds of the followers, boosting their moral, willpower and strengthens the bonds between comrades. This translates to them being more resistant towards fear inducing techniques, illusions and mind controlling effects, such as but not limited to Yamanaka, Illusions and killing intent [+1 Rank to those who follow it]. All due to them being inspired by seeing the banner on the field.

Note:
  • Both abilities are passive, and constantly active in the landmark in which the banner is located.
  • It only affects members of a clan or warring states clanmen who are in the same landmark.
Declined. Too far-reaching for an artifact.
1. I'll allow the banner to do "two" things for a limited period of time. Three days at most before being consumed.
2. Permanent increases to LM defenses would need to be war prizes. They won't be approved as custom artifacts
2. The healing needs to be reduced significantly, being ten healed maximum per turn
3. Change the second one, it doesn't fit. You can replace it but it has the same three-day restriction as the other

An example of a canon artifact for reference:

(Hyōjun Kaminari-Sen Ichizoku) – Clansman’s Blitzkrieg Standard
Type: Artifact
Rank: B
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A (+10)
Description: The Clansman’s Battle Standard is a flag or banner attached to a staff or pole and placed somewhere in a landmark. It serves as a rallying banner to all those in the vicinity of it, inspiring them and augmenting their will to claim victory for their clan or group. The Freehold of Hanguri carried numerous standards in their armies during campaigns to inspire their troops, a tradition that still remains today long after the Freehold’s collapse. By planting this standard in a landmark, one can augment all their clan’s members damage by 10. This only applies to those of the same clan, not allies of a clan. This standard can only be used once and lasts for three days after it was placed in a landmark, after which it will expire and become useless

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