Storyboard Mission Submission

Vayne

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Defend yourself from wild beasts (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: April 5th
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/grand-divide-110.756123/page-2#post-21929673
Additional information: Let me get an artifact please : (

Mission Passed. Artifacts are on hold for the time being. You can submit a custom one of that appropriate mission rank, however.

Pending. Leaving for someone else.
 
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Korra.

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
- Welcome new villagers (2)

- Induct new members to the villages hospital staff (2)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/4/2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/takinomori-117.756130/page-6#post-21929777
Additional information: Keeping a small staff for other NPCs to be getting medical attention

Mission Passed.

Pending. Leaving for someone else.
 
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Zatanna

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Players: Zatanna
Rank: S rank
Element Chosen:
- Investigate the cave (5)
- Put a stop to the ritual (5)
- Survive the dangerous cave (4)
Date: 08/04/2019
Link: https://animebase.me/threads/alexandros’-bluff-185.756200/post-21930683
Addition info:

Mission Passed. With a bit of leniency given to the first custom element. I feel that at best that was an A rank element, but the third one made up for it, with its more dangerous aspect. Personally, I'd have put the "Investigate the cave" element at A rank, and the "Survive the dangerous cave" at S rank but either way it balances out.

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Korra.

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Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
- Put the Clan’s interests first (2)

- Expand the village's land (2)

- Try and not to cross the line and be peaceful (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/4/2019 - 4/8/2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/omashu-091.755909/page-2#post-21929779
Additional information: The rain was just tempoary and I know it and the clone will go away next arc. And I did edit the post just to add the color and rain jutsu as I am at work doing these missions.

Pending. Leaving for someone else.

Mission Passed – Goetia
 
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Korra.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Expand the village's land and gain new workers (3)

- Gain a Mining Area to provide materials for weapons (3)

- Install the fear of your Sage title (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/9/2019 - 4/10/2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/kuzuyama-092.755910/page-2#post-21931065
Additional information: Adding more to the grand trading route

Pending. Leaving for someone else.

Mission Passed: I feel like the first element of your mission is more deserving of being C-Rank, but you've played it out to B-Rank standards, so it's acceptable for this occasion. – Goetia
 
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Alyx

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Players involved: Myself
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
Take part in local festivities or a cultural ritual (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/11/19 - 4/11/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/fuging-030.755847/post-21931683
Additional information:

New bio, who dis?

Mission Passed.

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Korra.

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Go into a Non Village Landmark and steal people to be test subjects (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/9/2019 - 4/12/2019
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: B rank mission and forgot to add point value in starting post and didnt want to edit it in and look like I was adding on

Pending. Leaving for someone else.

Mission Passed: A little bit more detail on entering the landmark would've been nice, maybe adding more than one assailant to intercept you to spice things up, but the storyboard element is satisfied. – Goetia
 
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Howard

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Make all the necessary plans and arrangements for your Clan ( 4 )
  • Explore the history of something ( 3 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
04/05/2019
04/07/2019
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ FINISH ]
Additional information: Made plans for my clan to track down Takauji Ashikaga in the Eastern Continent and went over the shared history we have with him. Additionally delved into my bio's own history with the fact that his mother was related to the freehold by being a descendent of the Nobunaga.

Mission Passed: I like the creative approach to the second element – Goetia
 
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Howard

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Custom: Teach someone how to use an ability to completion ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
04/09/2019
04/11/2019
Relevant mission links: [ START ] [ x ] [ FINISH ]
Additional information: My clone followed up on a promise it made a few months ago to teach an NPC medical ninjutsu. This is a custom element I used previously. It tends to run long due to how I perform this type of mission, making sure that my bio plays an active part the entire time throughout the mission showing the NPC how to use the technique, explaining it, and teaching it using a more hands-on method.

Mission Passed: Definitely no lack of detail here. The length though, wew – Goetia
 
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Howard

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Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
  • Do some moderate meditation to improve focus ( 1 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
04/12/2019
Relevant mission links: [ x ]
Additional information: Just some meditation.

Mission Passed – Goetia
 
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Zatanna

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Players involved: Zatanna
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
-Meet with an important person
-Take responsibility for the actions of your clan
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
30/03/2019-15/04/2019
Relevant mission links:
First
Additional information:
Although we expected to meet the Tekikage, we were only able to meet one of the high ranking council members. After deciding that no positive talking could come from the meeting, Nana and Noctis decide to leave.

Mission Failed. For a few reasons, which I will explain further. The first being, these elements aren't S rank. There are literally A rank equivalents to these elements in the canon storyboard list. Meet with a major faction representative ( 4 ) and Take responsibility for the actions of your Clan and/or its members ( 4 ) are the ones I'm directly referring to. Secondly, there's not enough substance or any dangerous aspects here indicative of an S rank calling back to you over ranking it. Meaning even if the elements could be considered S rank, the effort and danger would fall short of the level required to pass that S rank. Finally, half of the mission is done by you using ReXii's bio for him which is strange, and I want to set a precedence. Even if this was a group mission, I personally wouldn't pass it for the way you went about completing it. This is a bit of a tangent, but the method you used defeats the purpose of a group mission, allowing one individual to take on the workload and in theory, kumi grind for everyone in the group. Group missions are meant to have each individual take an active part in the mission, performing their own portion of the mission, in a tangible and viewable way. Anyway with this being marked down as a solo mission, that leaves your part in this mission severely lacking, as mentioned prior.

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Korra.

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Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
- Put the Clan’s interests first (2)
- Expand the village's land (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/16/2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/the-threshold-093.755911/#post-21932954
Additional information: Finished the bottom part of the Badlands

Pending. Leaving for someone else.

Mission Failed: The elements are carried out, but the process of accomplishing them isn't very detailed. The task of convincing the leader of the community to ally with your clan/village should've been a little more fleshed out, as the conversation was quite brief. – Goetia
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
-Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your clan (3)
-Convince a neutral party to fight with you (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 04/16/2019
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/degarashan-019.755836/post-21933052
Additional information: The second element has more to to with "siding" with someone than fighting. Each named person is one of Astra's 6 paths. Also claiming the landmark for the clan. Also put the wrong numbers in the original post signifying the amount each element is.

Mission Passed. "You have Ashikaga to blame for “The Razing of Degarashan” as people have been calling it"
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Put clan's interest first
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 18/04/2019 - 18/04/2019
Relevant mission links: [X]
Additional information:
N/A

Mission Passed.

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Korra.

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Players involved: Korra
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
- Create a new port for the village (2)
- Conquer a landmark of a whole new world (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/19/2019
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/the-lost-shores-239.768233/#post-21933626
Additional information: Vayne had something to due in RL so I had control of his bio to move and RP purpose so don't know if he can be counted as involved

Pending. Leaving for someone else.

Mission Passed – Goetia
 
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Alyx

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Players involved: Myself
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
Fight an individual of comparable strength (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20/4/19
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/sirens-lair-210.768204/post-21933735
Additional information:
While this links isn't a part of the mission itself these are the prequels towards it:

1. https://animebase.me/threads/sirens-lair-210.768204/post-21933303
2. https://animebase.me/threads/sirens-lair-210.768204/post-21933707

Mission Passed. Good job elaborating on the fight and making it the whole focal point of the mission.

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Players involved: Jojoclaw, LoK
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

-Guard someone very important

-Facilitate a major peace agreement

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:

March 27th 2019 - April 16th 2019


Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/jarteeg-003.755819/#post-21933055
Additional information:

Pending, Leaving for Drackos because it feels like it's above my head because it involves LoK

Mission Failed: Unrelated to the actual mission content itself, but in future, please link every relevant post that takes place in the mission, not just the marker for the beginning of the mission. That being said, I'm failing this mission because it doesn't play out like an S-Rank. S-Rank missions are of the highest difficulty for the risk or danger they entail, and your bios need to actively experience this risk. There is no struggle in the process of escorting Bellatrix to the meeting with the Shimogakure ninja, the only things that could potentially be dangerous are relegated to passing, unimportant mentions. The second element fares slightly better because there is participation from multiple parties, and subsequently more detail. While the potential danger is there, the way things play out creates a mission that isn't really indicative of it being S-Rank. Things get slightly heated, but no conflict truly erupts from this exchange, even briefly. Finally, this is a group mission, meaning that participation from each person involved has to be balanced. In this mission, your bio really just tags along with Bellatrix, and doesn't actively take part in the meeting either. – Goetia
 
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Ryóma

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen: Heal someone from one of your clan's landmarks who has sustained moderate injuries (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 21/04/19
Relevant mission links: [x]
Additional information: Another custom clan storyboard element.

Mission Passed. Cool element, I personally like healing ones.

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