[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Gutsy]

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Hishou Shukumei Kunai (Flying Destiny Kunai)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Flying Destiny Kunai (Hishou Shukumei Kunai) are custom-made kunai. They differ from a standard kunai in that they have three thin blades instead of one and the blades (which is thicker than normal) is hollow, carrying different ninja tools inside the hollow kunai. These tools can be anything from; Senbon, smokebombs, tags, flashbombs etc. They are also slightly heavier than normal kunai, which also makes them more lethal in melee fighting. The mechanism behind the kunai is that, when the kunai strikes any surface or is stop in mid air, it will detach the end of the blade and release the hidden weapon inside the kunai. The mechanism can also be activated by simple weaving the tiger hand sign. These kunai can also be utilised in close combat and therefor they have a special ability to when, the wielder inserts his chakra into the kunai it will extend a small chakra blade onto it's original blade making it longer and more lethal in combat.
Abilities:
- Wielder can use any weapon related jutsu through these kunai
- Cannot use Kenjutsu through the kunai (Kunai are not big enough)
- Wielder can engulf the kunai in fire chakra making it more lethal
- The kunai can emit a small blast of fire around the wielder when struck into the ground for defensive purpose (Can defend against C-rank earth and stop an enemy from closing in on you)
Restrictions:
- All techniques used through the kunai count towards the move count
- All techniques used through the kunai does not need hand seals
- Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya
~Leaving for Scorps~

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±± Declined ±± How many kunais are these? To much going on to be honest.

- Resubmitting -

(Hishou Shukumei Kunai) Flying Destiny Kunai
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Flying Destiny Kunai (Hishou Shukumei Kunai) are custom-made kunai. They differ from a standard kunai in that they have three thin blades instead of one and the blades (which is thicker than normal) is hollow, carrying different ninja tools inside the hollow kunai. These tools can be anything from; Senbon, smokebombs, tags, flashbombs etc. They are also slightly heavier than normal kunai, which also makes them more lethal in melee fighting. The mechanism behind the kunai is that, when the kunai strikes any surface or is stop in mid air, it will detach the end of the blade and release the hidden weapon inside the kunai. The mechanism can also be activated by simple weaving the tiger hand sign. These kunai can also be utilised in close combat and therefor they have a special ability to when, the wielder inserts his chakra into the kunai it will extend a small chakra blade onto it's original blade making it longer and more lethal in combat.
Abilities:
- The kunai can emit a small blast of fire around the wielder when struck into the ground for defensive purpose (Can defend against C-rank earth and stop an enemy from closing in on you)
Restrictions:
- All techniques used through the kunai count towards the move count
- All techniques used through the kunai does not need hand seals
- The user can carry up to 15 of these special kunai
- Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya

Changed the abilities, restrictions & put a limit of Kunai's carried

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Summoning Animal: Secretary Bird
Scroll Owner: Gutsy Jiraiya
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: The Secretary Bird is a large, terrestrial bird of prey. The Secretary Bird has an eagle-like body on crane-like legs which increases the bird's height to as much as 1.3 meters in height. This bird has an eagle-like head with a hooked bill, and it has rounded wings. When in the air the Secretary Bird looks more like a crane than a bird of prey, the tail has two elongated central feathers that extend beyond the feet during flight. It's flight feathers and thighs are black, while most of the coverts are grey with some being white. The adults have a featherless red face as opposed to the yellow facial skin of the young.

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Summoning Technique: Shuji Tori Kingu Shen (Secretary Bird King Shen)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across his left hand, slamming his hand upon the ground, summoning The King of the Secretary Birds, Shen. Shen is the largest of the Secretary Birds, he is the same size as Gamabunta. He is the only Secretary bird whom have mastered wind release. Shen has red skin and grey and white feathers all over his body except for his back which is entirely black. He has mastered wind release to such an extend he is capable of absorbing the powers of a wind release jutsu and strike back with equal force upon the enemy. He is one of the fastest birds of his kind, and capable of dodge attacks head on.
Note: Must have signed the Secretary Bird contract
Note: Can only summon once per battle
Note: Can only absorb Fuuton up to 3 times per match
Note: Fuuton counts as a move
Note: Absorbing Fuuton counts as a move
Note: User can not use Fuuton during this summon
Note: No other Secretary Birds can be in play during this summon

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[PandaMan.]

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Summoning Animal: Philippine Eagle
Scroll Owner: PandaMan.
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: yet to be added
Description and Background:

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The birds are capable of human speech and are far more intelligent. They have tremendous strength and speed. Their society is set upon a hierarchy and they tend to not like other living creatures besides those who are friends with them.

Requires Bio to have a Summoning Tattoo:

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±± Declined ±± Requires permission from the eagle contract owner

 

[Axle]

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(Ittō-ryū Tsuka Shotto) - One Sword Style Hilt Shot
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 50
Description: Based off the style of the "quick draw" sword technique, where you unsheathe the sword in a quick motion, cut your target and resheathe it, this technique is similiar. Instead of totally drawing the sword, the user gets in the same stance as the "quick draw" technique making the opponent thinking that's what they're going to do, but in reality, the user quickly pulls out the hilt in one powerful shot, this shot is strong enough to stun the opponent and even knock them off balance. Also this technique is quickier than the "quick draw" because the user is not drawing the full sword and attacking, but instead is quickly pulling on the hilt in a quick motion. If the opponent's mid-section is open at the time, it's almost 100% certain that the attack will make contact.
Note: Can only be taught by Axle

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Genjutsu: (shujutsushitsu) - Surgery
Rank: S
Type: supplementary
Range: short - Mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: N/A
Description: The user casts a genjutsu on their opponent, causing the opponent's limbs to be in the user's control. The user can disassemble the opponent's body anyway he'd like. He can even reassemble anyway he'd like, like putting the opponent's foot in place of their head, or putting their arm where their leg goes. Because the opponent thinks this is real, he will be trying to move his body in reality that way.
Note: can only be dispersed by pain
Note: can only be taught by Axle

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±± Declined ±± incorrect chakra info, no restrictions and every genjutsu can be dispersed by other means other than pain except ms ones.

(Kuro Tama) - Dark Sphere
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 80
Damage: N/A
Description: The user holds their hands in the shape of a circle, causing a black circle to form around the opponent, this circle opens and closes on the user's command however, in order to maintain the circle, the user has to keep his hands in the form of the circle. Because the circle is totally closed off, air cannot get in, leaving the opponent with a limited air supply.
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: must have Sealing mastery
Note: can only be used by Axle
Note: cannot be taught

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±± Declined ±± incorrect chakra info, this is forbidden why? by definition forbidden techs need to give damage to the user...thats why they are forbidden. Also, what is this? sealing technique? then its name is wrong. also, if its a sealing technique don't bother resubmitting.

 

[Pervyy]

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(Genjutsu/Fuuinjutsu: Kusari Baindingu Fuu) - Illusion Sealing art: Chain binding seal
Type: supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is a fuuin based genjutsu. The user will start by touching an object such as a weapon or a rock or anything solid really, releasing the seal onto the object, much like Minato's Flying Thunder God seal. This seal remains on the object until the object is destroyed, or the seal is removed. The user can then perform one handseal at any point releasing the seal which will bind everyone on short range in a genjutsu where they see chakra chains shoot up from the ground behind them binding their entire body tightly so that they can't move and their arms are bound to their sides. As long as the oppenents are in range of the seal (short range) they will keep being bound in this genjutsu until the object is destroyed or they move out of range. The reason this jutsu is short-long range, is because if they user is long range from the seal, they can activate it still, but it will only effect someone in short range. If the user used this 3 times in the same turn, placing 3 seals, he can activate all the seals at the same time.

Note: The seal only stays active for 2 turns tops once activated before it runs out of chakra.
Note: Useable 3 times
Note: No genjutsu in the same turn the seal is activated.
Note: Placing the seal is classed as the jutsu, activating it is like activating an explosive tag.

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±± Declined ±± for this to work the seal would need to release sound or something that the enemy could smell or light/color to induce the genjutsu. A seal can't mold chakra to form a genjutsu on release. You can, however, make the seal release something that would trigger the genjutsu. If its sound, you need sound training. If its smell then you need to explain it quite thoroughly specially since we have Lili's Perfume CE. As for light, if such, the rank needs to be smaller.

 

[-Avenger-]

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(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Sin kitahankyuu Kaze no ousama) Summoning Technique: Sin King of Northern Winds
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons Sin a giant bustard and King of the Northern winds and one of the oldest bustard. He is 25 feet tall and is capable of using wind element up to A rank, and one S rank jutsu per battle. The user can fly on his back at fast speeds with great manouverbility providing the user with good aerial skills and making them a hard target to hit. Sin is also the fastest among all bustards. Sin is also capable of summoning a strong current of wind up to A rank power by flapping his wings and send the blast at the opponent(s). He is also capable of using his wings, beak and his long legs as extra means of attacks.

Note: Wind Current can only be used 2 times per battle.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Lasts for 5 turns max.
Note: Any other techniques used by Sin count towards the users move count.
Note: Can carry only one person on his back as a result of his fast speed.

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(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Tiamat Umi no Megami) Summoning technique: Tiamat The Sea Goddess
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Tiamat is a white with sea greenish feathered bustard. The color of her feather is due to her affinity towards water element and hence called as Sea Goddess. She is capable of using water element up to the user's rank(The user requires to waive hand seals, if any for her). She is capable of shooting blasts of water bullets at the enemy (equivalent to A rank) from her mouth. She has also trained herself to use her beak and legs for attacking her opponents (and other summons).

Note: Can be summoned once.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
Note: Her abilities can only be used 3 times.
Note: Tiamat's techniques count towards the users move count.
Note: Can carry two persons on her back.

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±± Declined ±± same as above

(Kuchoiyse no jutsu: Nisroch & Ninlil) Summoning Technique: Nisroch & Ninlil
Type Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short- mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A(60 for feather Strike)
Description: The user summons the two twin Bustards Nisroch & Ninlil, who are known for their teamwork. Being twin brother and sister, they are of exactly the same size i.e. 12 feet in height and fly with great manouverbility. Nisroch specializes in fire and Ninlil in wind, and they both can use up to B rank jutsu. They have trained themselves to use their attacks in combination with each other. Also they both are able to shoot feathers infused with their respective chakra at high velocity from their fingered wing tips that can even pierce through rocks.

Note: can be summoned twice and lasts for 4 turns.
Note: Can only shoot feathers 3 times per battle.
Note: The summons cannot use feather strike and elemental techniques in same turn.
Note: can carry one person each.

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±± Declined ±± why mid range?

 

[-Cobalt-]

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Wood Release: Wooden Bullet Gun | Mokuton: Mokusei Dangan Hou
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user focuses his Moku chakra in his mouth creating between 1 to 5 large wooden bullets in his mouth. He then proceeds to spit them out over an expansive range making it a difficult technique to dodge. The technique can protrude A-rank and below Earth and Water techniques (within reason).
Note: Must have a Wood bio.
Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
Note: Cannot be used in two consecutive turns.

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[Icemyster]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Jiton: yokoki teppou) Magnetic Release: Rail Gun
Rank-A
Type-Offensive/Supplementary
Range-Short/Long
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description-In a simple throwing motion, the Magnetism user charges a kunai with a positive/negative charge, and just as it is about to be released from the user's hand, the user gives his throwing hand the same charge, causing the kunai to be repulsed out of the users hand, much faster than a normal kunai with speeds similar to that of a bullet. When it comes into contact with an object, it gives whatever it touches the same charge it was given.
-Can only be used three times
-Charge given lasts three turns

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(Jiton:burabo-panchi)Magnetism Release:Bravo Punch
Rank-B
Range-Short
Chakra-25
Type-Offensive/Supplementary
Description-
The user charges his fist with a negative/positive charge, and once it makes contact with the opponent the gain the same charge, and gets repulsed from the user, flying a few feet away from a simple punch. If the opponent already has a charge, the user may use the opposite charge, and pull the opponent into the punch, causing more damage than normal blow before switching polarities and sending them away.
-Can only be used by Magnetism users
-Charges last three turns

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(Suiton:satsujin kiri) Water Release:Murder Mist
Rank-A
Range-Mid/Long
Type-Offensive
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description-
The user makes a single handseal, summoning a very large amount of water around the opponent in a mist form. The water clings to the opponent, causing any raiton used by the opponent to be spread out into the air around them by means of conduction through the water in the air, to shock the user. The mist is very visible, and the opponent feels the mist clinging to him. If the user is within the same area, he is also shocked by the mist.
-Can only be used once

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±± Declined ±± similar to a multitude of techniques that basically do the same

 

[Nagato..]

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The Pervy Sage gave me permission to re-submit this jutsu that was just like his for my own. Removing the sage mode stuff


Ninjutsu: Kami Shōgekiha | Ninja Art: Divine Shockwave
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (-60 For the pulse)
Damage Points: 80
Description: Before the battle, the user will have stored up massive amounts of chakra into their body making their energy reach a critical peak. As they did, they would have have gathered 100 chakra points worth of energy into themselves. The user will then perform one quick handseal thrusting their hands outwards releasing it all. Upon doing so, they will release the large blast of chakra energy outwards in all directions from their body.

(See video below)

Note: Useable once
Note: Must be placed on bio or stated at the begining of the battle.
Note: No Ninja Arts for 3 Turns
Note: Can only be used by those who have mastered Ninjutsu
Note: This takes up two of the users 3 jutsu for the turn.
Note: This acts purely as a blast of energy with no added characteristics.



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±± Declined ±± similar to a multitude of "omni blast" techniques.

 

[-Blade-]

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Summoning Contract: Lions Of Pride Rock

Origin: These lions hail from Pride Rock. Each has its own unique abilities and looks. Some posses more stats than others such as speed, agility, strength, etc...

General Description: Lions are very good predators thy stalk their prey with ease. They can hide in most grassy areas undettected

Summon General Abilities: Lions from Pride Rock are all very powerful. They can speak and each has a unique ability and affinity of their own.

Summoning: The person who signs the Lions of Pride Rock Contract will get a tattoo. Whoever has the scroll or the tatto is able to summon Lions of Pride Rock and the Lions can summon their summoner. When the user performs a succesful summoning will call an average size Lion or Lioness with an elemental affinity or a special skill, if theres an unccesfull summoning the user will call for a baby cub or a normal Lioness with nothing special of it.

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[Mephistopheles]

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Summoning Animal: Octopus (Tako)
Scroll Owner: Nemo..
Other Users who have signed contract: -
Summoning Boss if existing: (will follow when approved)
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none yet
Description and Background: Octopus(Tako) or Giant octopus (kyotako) are sea creatures Octopuses have two eyes and four pairs of arms, An octopus has a hard beak, with its mouth at the centre point of the arms. Octopuses have no internal or external skeleton (although some species have a vestigial remnant of a shell inside their mantle), allowing them to squeeze through tight places. Octopuses are among the most intelligent and behaviourally flexible of all invertebrates.
Octopus are useful summons capable of aiding the user on land and on sea. Their tentacles are composed of powerful suckers which when attached to a victim can’t be pulled out by means as simple as strong force, these suckers can also be used to hold air pockets and propel them at great speeds while underwater. They also possess glands that produce inks. Giants Octopus generally use these to create smokescreens in water, they are also capable of using chakra to manipulate their produced ink the ability often passed down to the users of the summoning as well. Most octopus are water release users they are capable of secreting huge amount of water from their body using nature transformation and manipulating its shape with great precision. Despite being water creatures, octopus are mostly resistant to lightning release techniques a lot are found to be lightning users. In comparison, fire release does more damage to an octopus then lightning ever could. Being exposed to too much heat dries an octopus’s bodily fluids.

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[Elmage G Ace]

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(katon: nenshou gekido) fire release: burning rage
Type:Attack/defend
Rank: A rank
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user channels his chakra around his body and his body become engulfed in powerful flames that can be used to break his opponent/attacking the opponent directly, or to defend him self from incoming
attacks.

~can only be activated twice
~once activated it last for two turns
~only fire jutsus can be used during the time
~once deactivated, i cannot be activated for another two turns
~can only be taught by elmage

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(katon: jigoku doragon) fire release: hell dragons
Type: B rank
Rank: attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: the users hands becomes covered with dragon head shaped fire which he can use to strike the opponent or can be shot at the opponent

~can only be used twice
~cannot use fire in that same turn
~can only be taught by elmage

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[Alyx]

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(Hikaru raito)Lambent Light
Type:Weapon
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:+10 Kenjutsu and Seasonal Dances
Description:Lambent Light is a special one handed Raiper owned by Asuna Yuuki.Lambent Light has a rounded sky blue guard,hilt and a silver-white blade.Only Asuna can hold the raiper as it has a special self trigger that when an enemy tries to hold it,it induces a C-ranked chakra surge that shockes there hands forcing them to release it.Asuna can channel chakra into Lambent Light to increase its cutting power also giving it bright glow hence the name Lambent Light.Asuna being a master of the Seasonal Dances only performs them with this special raiper that they actually gain a small boost.The raiper can only be held in one hand due to hilt only having space for one hand.The blade was forged by a blacksmith that had been hired by Asuna's mother as her weapon of choice over the traditional katana of Samurai.Asuna can also place the raiper's blade into the ground and releasing chakra into the ground forward causing the earth to tire up as she releases it more that it can even throw a giant summon off balance.

Restrictions
-Can only be used by Izuna..
-Releasing chakra into the ground counts as a move.
-Can only be held in one hand.
-Can only be used with Samurai,Kenjutsu and Seasonal Dance related jutsus.
-No elemental kenjutsu can be used unless Harmony is activae.

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Rank the bolded ability in order to give a better idea of it's strength and if it can really throw a giant summon off balance, add a restriction on the amount of times it can be used

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(Hikaru raito)Lambent Light
Type:Weapon
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:+10 Kenjutsu and Seasonal Dances
Description:Lambent Light is a special one handed Raiper owned by Asuna Yuuki.Lambent Light has a rounded sky blue guard,hilt and a silver-white blade.Only Asuna can hold the raiper as it has a special self trigger that when an enemy tries to hold it,it induces a C-ranked chakra surge that shockes there hands forcing them to release it.Asuna can channel chakra into Lambent Light to increase its cutting power also giving it bright glow hence the name Lambent Light.Asuna being a master of the Seasonal Dances only performs them with this special raiper that they actually gain a small boost.The raiper can only be held in one hand due to hilt only having space for one hand.The blade was forged by a blacksmith that had been hired by Asuna's mother as her weapon of choice over the traditional katana of Samurai.Asuna can also place the raiper's blade into the ground and releasing chakra into the ground forward causing the earth to tire up equal to a S-Rank Technique in power,as she releases it more that it can even throw a giant summon off balance.

Restrictions
-Can only be used by Asuna
-Releasing chakra into the ground counts as a move.
-Can only be held in one hand.
-Can only be used with Samurai,Kenjutsu and Seasonal Dance related jutsus.
-No elemental kenjutsu can be used unless Harmony is activae.
-Can only release the chakra once per battle

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(Fūdoāto: ! Batānaifuasaruto!)Food Arts!:Butter Knife Assault!
Type:Offensive
Rank:D-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra:10(if chakra is used)
Damage:20(+5 if chakra boost is used)
Description:This is a rather simple technique where the user will grab a butter knife and tosses it at full speed towards there targets head causing minor head injuries towards them.The user can also use a sample amount of chakra to increase the power of the attack.Since a butter knife is rather dull bladed the target cant be cut by the knife.

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[McRazor]

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Hyouton: Furosutoburesu | Ice Release: Frost Breath
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: While fighting in a close range combat, the user gathers hyouton chakra in his mouth and exhales a very cold breath towards his opponent. The breath looks like a small, concentrated, white-ish cloud made of very small ice particles. If the opponent inhales it, his lungs start slowly freezing and finally collapsing after two turns. If the opponent doesn't manage to stabilize the temperature in his lungs, after the first turn he will start heavily breathing, fighting for every breath. His reactions will be slow and he will struggle, while his skin turns blue-ish due to the lack of oxygen.
Note: No S rank or above Ice jutsus same and/or next turn
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

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Explain the consequences of lung failure. If you're referring only to exhaustion, chest pain or difficulty breathing and such, it's fine. If it includes coma or death, remove that. State for how many turns this lasts on the opponent's lungs

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Hyouton: Paudāsunō | Ice Release: Powder snow
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: With a string of two handseals the user will create a powerful gust of wind in front of him, which he will infuse with ice shards and snowflakes. Due to the constant rotation as the gust is going towards the opponent, its temperature is very low, which is also caused by the ice shards and snowflakes. When he gust hits the opponent it will create numerous cuts on the opponent, due to the ice shards, and the snowflakes will start accumulating around his feet, burying him and preventing from moving.
Note: Usable three times per battle
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

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Note that the fact of the ice shards and snowflakes accumulating around the opponent's feet and preventing him from moving obviously isn't instantaneous. It takes some time for that.

Hyouton: Khione no saikuron | Ice Release: Khione's Cyclone
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: After the user performs a string of 15 handseals and releases a massive amount of hyouton chakra around the battlefield, he creates a massive tornado all around it. The tornado consists of nothing more than a massive wind current and snow. The wind carries the snow in a cyclic motion at very high speeds, which makes the snow act as a wall/barrier around the battlefield, cold enough to freeze anything that passes through it. Due to the rotation speed and the basic principle of hot-cold air, everything within it freezes in the 3rd turn after using the jutsu. As the tornado spins around the battlefield hot air moves upwards and cold air makes the battlefield freeze violently. In the 3rd turn, everything that is caught withing it dies from instant freezing.
Note: Usable only once per battle
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

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-Declined-
Restrictions? And it needs some serious ones. State the approximated size of the hurricane (40metres diameter? 50? etc) Also 3 turns is too short. Change it to 4. Like i said, you need serious restrictions, not only because it covers the ''entire battlefield'', meaning you must get caught on it too, but also because you need huge amounts of chakra to keep things thing for 4 turns.

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[Ushiro]

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(Suiton: Ekitai Tojikome) - Water Release: Liquid Imprisonment
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user claps his hands together and materializes about four thousand dense water cubes around the target. The cubes are 4 feet wide and are all linked together with cords of water. On command the user can make the cords retract and pull all of the cubes towards each other, crushing anyone caught between them. The cubes may be spread over a wide range to target multiple opponents This jutsu can also be used to create a defensive wall.
-Usable twice per battle
-No other water jutsu on the same turn

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±± Declined ±± not enough restrictions and needs you to specify and develop the description a bit more.

(Himitsu Kassō Hōhō) - Secret Gliding Method
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15 (+5 each turn active)
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu gets its basis from the technique a shinobi uses to walk across the surface of water. To perform it the user must emit a constant stream of chakra from the bottom of his feet which will make him hover just above the surface of the ground. The user then proceeds to emit stronger chakra streams from any side of his feet to act as a propellant and allow the user to seemingly skate across the ground. This can be done without moving but the user can gain speed faster by moving his body in a similar fashion to an ice skater. While on a level surface, the user can reach sprinting speed in 8 seconds if only propelled by chakra. Of course, this technique works on water as well.
-Lasts up to 5 turns

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[Ryūjin]

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(Sōdō) - Rebellion
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+ 30 for blocking each fire attack)
Damage: (20 base attack for normal use) (+15 damage to every fire based jutsu)
Description: the Rebellion sword is made out of a special metal that is able to use the user's fire chakra , it has a large white blade with a silver skull shaped handle ,it's worn on the user's back like Kakashi's sword when he was young , when the user channels his fire chakra into the blade, a fire Aura surrounds the white blade making the sword more lighter and enhancing the user with faster reactions and turning the blades color into bloody red, as long as the user is wielding the blade he can perform any fire technique with the use of only a single handseal, also by adding the +30 fire chakra of the user to the blade , the blade can block fire techniques up to A-rank negating the fire and absorbing it but still receives a certain amount of damage from the attack.
Note: Cannot be used without mastering the fire element.
Note: User takes -10 damage when absorbing a fire technique.
Note: Can only block fire techniques 3 times per battle.
Note: Can only be wielded by Dante..

(Sōdō Gējutsu: Kōsu Jōshō) – Rebellion Art: Rising Chaos
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Ponts: 80
Description: When Rebellion is in the user's hand, he infuses Rebellion with a Large amount of Fire chakra as he stabs Rebellion into the ground, causing large Swords that looks exactly like Rebellion to rise out of the ground beneath the opponent in order to impale them, however these swords are bigger than Rebellion and has it's blades surrounded by Fire flowing around it and the blades of the swords look like they are set a blaze, to make it easier for impaling the opponent, the swords are connected to one another leaving no room in between them and rise at diagonal and vertical angles, the user can use this technique in a defensive way in which he causes the Swords to come out around him with the user in the middle protecting him from incoming attacks of A-rank and below elemental techniques, the Sword is made of strong metal and thus it works as a lightning conductor as well, lastly the Fire that's released from the swords heat up the area surrounding it however not to the point of harming the user or the opponent and is released, once the user takes Rebellion out of the ground the Swords retract back to the ground.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: No S-rank Fire techniques in the same turn.

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(Fūinjutsu: Kitā Kekkei) – Sealing Technique: Gaseous Barrier
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is an advanced Sealing technique, triggered by a Seal that's located on the left arm of the user's body that's written with a large Kanji letter "Absorption" this seal has some of the user's chakra already infused in it which is a medium for triggering the Seal using this chakra the seal sends pulses of chakra around the user within Short range from him, once there's an invisible gas/wind with chakra infused in it that's near the user, the Seal glows in a bright yellow color and activates, quickly forming an invisible barrier of chakra around the user's body, this barrier absorbs the invisible gas or invisible wind making it harmless to the user's body, another aspect to this technique is that when the barrier absorbs the invisible gas or wind, the opponent wouldn't have any control over the gas that's being absorbed, meaning he cannot reshape it or cause it to explode due to the user's chakra being around it, this Seal can only absorb 3 technique up to S-rank and only works on the invisible Wind/Gas techniques, however it isn't able to regular wind techniques that can be seen with the normal eyes, the user is also unable to use A-rank and above Fūinjutsu techniques in the same turn.

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(Ninpō: Kōdo Ichi no Jutsu) – Ninja Art: Advanced Tracking Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is an advanced form of the original "Ninja Art: Tracking Technique" however instead of hands the user concentrates chakra into his whole body, increasing the sense of feeling vibrations by his body, like the parent technique this allows user to find his opponent's location and how many are there as well as their skill and if there were Shadow clones or not, however for that to work, this technique will be activated over a certain period of time, however to find the opponent's location and all other aspects that the technique is capable of doing the user must be in a stationary position and standing still "not walking/running..etc" however he's able to perform handseals or move his hands at the same time, another useful aspect to this technique is that it grants the user's body a keen sensing of vibrations, so much that he's able to feel the faint vibrations released when his chakra circularity system is disturbed whenever in a genjutsu, and therefore allow the user to know when he's under a genjutsu.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Lasts 4 turns when activated
Note: Can only be used by Minato Namikaze and Tobirama Senju biographies.

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[Gitanshu]

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Hyouton hyouketsu sono - Ice Release freeze them.
Type:Supplementary.
Rank:S
Range:Short long.
Chakra:40.
Damage:N/A
Description:A very simple yet a useful technique which requires the use of a single hand seal,The user releases his chakra into the air around his opponent and uses it to compress the water molecule in the air to form a transparent sheet of freezing cold ice[just like ice disk technique] which is 6*6 meter in dimension and stays levitated in the air above the opponent and maintains a distance of 5 meter from the ground, It works by gradually cooling the surrounding and basically the air around the opponent and thus gradually decreasing his reflexes and reaction time and after a certain point of time completely restricting his movements, If opponent makes a direct contact with the ice then he suffers a frost bite in that selected body part and is no longer able to use it.
Effects-
1st turn- No significant changes are seen but the opponent movement's require more energy and his speed is decreased slightly
2nd turn- The opponent reflexes are decreased significantly, his speed and body movements are decreased by one rank [ex Kage-Sannin], The opponent is also not able to perform high rank taijutsu due to shivering feeling. [A rank above]
3rd turn- The opponent is sent in a state of hypothermia and is no longer able to move his body parts on his will thus completely paralyzed.
4th turn- The opponent it completely unconscious and if no medical support is provided soon he has a great risk to his life.

Note: The sheet is completely transparent and hovers in air just like the Ice disk technique thus a Doujutsu is required to see it.
Note: The user can not use any Ice technique in the same turn it is used
Note: The user can not use S rank above water and Wind technique in the same turn it used.
Note: It's effect is increased by one turn [2nd turn effect will happen in 1st turn and so on] if the ground is covered with Ice/Snow or there is a water source nearby, If the climate or the terrain itself is cold.
Note: It's effect are postponed by one turn if the opponent is a Ice user as they are habitual to low climatic condition.
Note: Usable twice
Note: Only Gitanshu can teach it.

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Genjutsu osore - Illusionary Arts Phobia.
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description:The user performs a single hand seal and induces a phobia in the mind of his opponent regarding a certain object or thing and for battle purposes regarding a certain element,or certain battle items etc. and he also alters with his child memory and insert some unpleasant thoughts in it which makes the gen even more real, Upon being effected by the gen the opponent starts to tremor in fear and is thus not able to think properly, he also is not able to control his body movements properly and is also subjected to a great mental pressure and if the gen is not dispelled by the end of the second turn the opponent will faint due to immense mental pressure and fear of his phobia.

Note:Can be used 3 times per battle
Note:No genjutsu in the same turn
Note:Only Gitanshu can teach it.

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[Rune]

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(Kuchiyose: Kixyodai na ga no jixyoushi: Yuudai) - Summoning: Giant Silkworm Moth Boss: Yuudai
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: After the user has performed the Tiger-Rat-Ram handseal, the thumb is bitten and the blood is smeared across the Summoning Tattoo on the user's writst, resulting in Yuudai, the Giant Silkworm Moth Boss, being summoned. He is about as big as Gamabunta. He has the ability to use Fuuton jutsus up to A rank and is also very skillfull in using his long tongue in battle to hit and restrain enemies. He also releases a powder from his body, which he directs towards the enemy by flapping his wings, which interferes with the opponent's vision for one turn. Yuudai is able to carry the summoner on his back.

- Must have signed the Giant Silkworm Moth contract and accepted tattoo on wrist.
- Stays on the field for 3 turns.
- Can only be summoned once per battle.
- Any Wind jutsu Yuudai uses count for the summoners 3 jutsus.
- No other summons of the user can be on the field.
- Can only be taught by Rune.

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(Kuchiyose: Kixyodai na ga : Tamotsu) - Summoning: Giant Silkworm Moth: Tamotsu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing the necessary Tiger-Ram handseal, the user bites his thumb and slams his hands on the ground, which summons Tamotsu. Tamotsu is a Giant Silkworm Moth caterpillar and is about three quarters the size of Lady Katsuyu. His whole body is covered with poisoned hairs, which causes a burning and numbing sensation in the affected area, which lasts for one turn. Tamotsu has the ability to launch these poisoned hairs at his opponents at short to mid range. He is also a skilled Taijutsu user and carries two katanas strapped to his body, just behind his neck.

- Must have signed the Giant Silkworm Moth contract.
- Stays on the field for 3 turns.
- Can be summoned twice per battle.
- Poisoned hairs can be used only twice in a battle.
- Any Taijutsu or poisoned hair attack counts as one of the summoner's 3 moves.
- No other summons of the user can be on the field at the same time.
- Can only be taught by Rune.

X-Declined-X How is a silkworm moth able to use taijutsu and kenjutsu without being humanoid? And are you affected by the poison's toxin yourself?

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(Kuchiyose: Raikou) - Summoning: Raikou
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will bite their thumb and wipe the blood drawn on their summoning tattoo, this will summon Raikou. Raikou is a small male Paradise bird with blue and black feathers covering his body. He is about 5ft in size and has the ability to transform into a sword. Whilst in sword form Raikou has the ability to absorb lightning chakra up to A-Rank. After absorbing the chakra Raikou has the option to send the jutsu back to the opponent.

-Each time Raikou absorbs lightning chakra it counts towards the users three jutsu per move
-User needs to have signed the Lesser bird of Paradise
-Stays on the field for 5 moves when summoned

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(Fuuton: Gengetsu Handou) Wind Style: Crescent Moon Kick
Type: Offence
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will send wind chakra into one of their legs the perform any type of kick, releasing a crescent moon-shaped blade of wind.

-Can only he taught by Kato.

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(Fuuton: Geppo) Wind Style: Moon Step
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Whilst in the air the user will focus their wind chakra into the air around them, they will then kick of the sections of chakra mixed with the air, allowing them the jump around in the air (so to say).

-Can only be used 3x per battle
-Can only be taught by Kato.

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(Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user extend his shadow then perform the Rat hand seal to divide his shadow path become two way right and left moving toward the opponent in arc motion making a full big circle size when reach the opponent shadow making them unable to move, the shadow way causing the opponent hard to choose which one to counter as it extend in two different path.

Note :
-Usable 3 times per battle
- Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
- Can only be taught by Oasis Nara

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(Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
Damage points: 80
Description: This is the advance and even greater of shadow impersonation jutsu which Shikaku gather a massive amount of his shadow chakra on every part of his body thus causing his body emanate a blurry dark shadow, then he slam his hand onto the ground causing tendrils of shadows spout out from his body and similar like shadow impersonation, Shikaku shaped the shadow tendrils like a black dark monster called Shadow Dark Warrior, his size are double size of a normal human size 6 feet tall with shadow tendrils all around his body, this shadow tendrils able to extend more faster than usual to long range facing the opponent and stab the opponent body while also bind the opponent shadow, shadow Dark Warrior able to shape the shadow tendrils like a human fists of shadow to punching and slashing the opponent with his sharp black nails look alike. Shadow Dark Warrior hass the ability to block Water, wind and earth jutsu up until S-Rank with great Effort while he put together his shadow tendrils in front of him as shield but vulnerable with strong light and fire, shadow dark warrior shall forming in front of Shikaku while his shadow still attach with Shikaku’s shadow.

Note:
- Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
- Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
- Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
- Can Only be use twice
- Last only 5 turns then auto vanished
- Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
- While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
- After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.

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(Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user extend his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move.

Note :
-Usable 3 times per battle
- Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
- Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
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(Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
Damage points: 80
Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form a monster called Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW can block water, wind and earth up to S rank if he uses the tendrils to create a shadow shield, in front of him. However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the users shadow.

Note:
- Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
- Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
- Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
- Can Only be use twice
- Last only 5 turns then auto vanished
- Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
- While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
- After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.

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X-Declined-X Its a Shadow. One, you're making it tangible be more reasonable of how you do it? I'll give it a go considering shadow tendrils are used to stab opponents. Two, its oped. Three, blocks matter based elements despite being a shadow. Four, Lasts too many turns.
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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Folklore ability is able to deflect any bright light which the opponent releases and causing the bright light to turn back blinded the opponents. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire .

Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

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Bōfūkoromo - Storm Mail
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 0
Description: This technique gets initiated by the user crossing his hands above him. This prompts many air currents to gather around him, creating an hurricane surrounding his entire body. While clad in this "armor", users destructive power is boosted, allowing him to go into melee to perform wind-enhanced blows capable of shattering rock. Predictably, his defense is also increased exponentially, with the currents moving around him being strong enough to repel enemies and prevent them from nearing him.
-Can only be used once
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Wind Release increased +10
-Taijutsu increased +10
-Techniques below B rank doesn´t work

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Hōrī Nova - Holy Nova
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 60
Description: The user pulls their fist back and begins charging a large amount of Fire chakra. When enough has been charged, the user runs forward, quickly punching their opponent with all the stored chakra, creating an explosion upon impact, further augmenting the damage taken capable of dealing second-degree burns.
-Can be used twice

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Fuuton: Bōfūkoromo - Wind Style: Storm Mail
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 0
Description: This technique gets initiated by the user crossing his hands above him. This prompts many air currents to gather around him, creating an hurricane surrounding his entire body. While clad in this "armor", users destructive power and speed is boosted, allowing him to go into melee to perform wind-enhanced blows capable of shattering rock. Predictably, his defense is also increased exponentially, with the currents moving around him being strong enough to repel enemies and prevent them from nearing him.
-Can be used once
-Lasts 4 turns
-Taijutsu increase +5
-Speed level equals a taijutsu specialist
-B rank and below taijutsu have no effect

X-Declined-X How speed is boosted? By what value is it boosted? Also add that you're weak to fire while in this state, i realize the Fairy Tail reference.

Katon: Hōrī Nova - Fire Style: Holy Nova
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 60
Description: The user pulls their fist back and begins charging a large amount of Fire chakra. When enough has been charged, the user runs forward, quickly punching their opponent with all the stored chakra, creating an explosion upon impact, further augmenting the damage taken capable of dealing second-degree burns.
-Can be used twice

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Senbonzakura - Thousand Cherry Blossoms
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 0
Damage: 0
Description: A regular katana, with a simple cross guard, which is a simple open frame, much like a four-pane window. It has a bronze guard with lavender hilt-wrapping and white sheath.
-Almost indestructible

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