Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Also changed a restriction.
(Doton: Funjin bijon no jutsu) - Earth Release: Dust Vision Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user exhales air that naturally contains dust, then infuses the dust particles with his doton chakra. as he exhales the air, the dust carries a stream of his chakra allowing him to control more dust within range, and control the movement of the dust particles.
After the infused particles spread a stream of the user's chakra throughout the the area of reach, the user will gain the ability to identify his surrounding environment without the need for eyesight, this is done by causing the particles to move around while observing and noticing any objects that block the particles' movement path, which will allow the user to visualize the environment in which the particles are flouting in.
It is also notable that the air entering the infused dust's reach will also be carrying dust, thus won't move the area of reach.
Note:
-The user cannot solidify doton while this jutsu is in affect, he can only use techniques that fragment rocks into dust/mud but not the other way around.
-The user can't keep this technique active for more than five turns
-This jutsu does not increase the amount of dust in the air, thus cannot affect visibility
X-Declined-X Is it a complete dust cloud or just minute amounts of dust within the air? If minute, perception wont be that great. If a cloud it will be visible to the opponent. Pick one.
Made some changes following the checker's notes.(Doton: Funjin bijon no jutsu) - Earth Release: Dust Vision Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user exhales air that naturally contains dust, he then infuses the dust particles with his doton chakra. as he exhales the air, the dust carries a stream of his chakra allowing him to control more dust within range.
After infused particles spread a stream of the user's chakra throughout the the area of reach, the user will gain the ability to identify his surrounding environment without the need for eyesight. It is also notable that the air entering the infused dust's reach will also be carrying dust, thus won't move the area of reach.
Note:
-The user cannot solidify doton while this jutsu is in affect, he can only use techniques that turn rocks to dust/mud but not the other way around.
-The user can't keep this technique active for more than five turns
-The user can't use S-rank jutsu or higher while this jutsu is in effect or the turn in which it loses its effectiveness.
-Declined-
Give a better explanation on how you're able to identify the environment around you. Is it by sensing chakra? is it through the touch of the particles on your surroundings?
Also changed a restriction.
(Doton: Funjin bijon no jutsu) - Earth Release: Dust Vision Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user exhales air that naturally contains dust, then infuses the dust particles with his doton chakra. as he exhales the air, the dust carries a stream of his chakra allowing him to control more dust within range, and control the movement of the dust particles.
After the infused particles spread a stream of the user's chakra throughout the the area of reach, the user will gain the ability to identify his surrounding environment without the need for eyesight, this is done by causing the particles to move around while observing and noticing any objects that block the particles' movement path, which will allow the user to visualize the environment in which the particles are flouting in.
It is also notable that the air entering the infused dust's reach will also be carrying dust, thus won't move the area of reach.
Note:
-The user cannot solidify doton while this jutsu is in affect, he can only use techniques that fragment rocks into dust/mud but not the other way around.
-The user can't keep this technique active for more than five turns
-This jutsu does not increase the amount of dust in the air, thus cannot affect visibility
X-Declined-X Is it a complete dust cloud or just minute amounts of dust within the air? If minute, perception wont be that great. If a cloud it will be visible to the opponent. Pick one.
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