[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[TheGreyFox]

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Wind blast(kaze bakufuu)
Rank: C
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short/mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description:The user gathers the wind curents around the arm and sends a powerfull blast of wind the has a inpack that will knock the target back

Wind dome(Kaze enchou)
Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: This technique will infuse wind-based chakra into a curent of wind that covers the user in wind all around(Note this jutsu is like nejis rotation)

Bolt Rush(boruto sattou)
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical curent all thru the user body then dashes twords the target with a electrical charge(Note if hit the target will be perlized for 1 turn)


±± All Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Plenty of Cannon techniques that do everything you just tried to achieve with this.

 

[Shady Doctor]

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Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi) Godric
Rank- A
Range-Short
Chakra Cost-30
Chakra Damage-60
Description- The user cuts his palm till blood drips. Once that is done, he then does 5 hand seals and slams his/her hands on the ground.. Godric (My summon) Will Appears in mid air (short range) above the user circling him/her..Like other birds of Paradise Godric's appearance is beautiful to most, having all red feathers and yellow feathers covering his tail. He can fly at high speeds (= to Sasuke's Hawk).and his Beak is Incredibly Strong. This summon is the same size as Sauske Hawk. so easy rideable. All the Lesser birds of Paradise can talk, so can this one. Once summoned, Godric starts to release invisible toxins that quickly spreads around the area. Once the toxins are inhaled by someone they fall victim to an optic illusion. Up and down, left and right as well as forward and backwards are opposite. It is not just the sense of direction that is changed, the persons eyesight, direction of incoming attacks and injury location seem to be inverted in the illusion. Countering the damage from the invert directions simply by processing it all within the mind is not possible. No matter how powerful the opponent even if one is accustomed too fighting in that particular way, their body will not adapt and will continue to fight by reflex, which causes it to continuously succumb too the powers affects. The biggest flaw of using these toxins is that who it affects cannot be controlled, therefore if the summoner inhales the toxins he will also fall victim to the optic illusion.


-Only Taught By William24
-Only can stay on turn for 3 Turns
-User Cant Use Genjutsu while bird is in play
-Dosent need to use handseals too release the toxins
- the bird counts as 1 move every turn its in play.


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±± Declined ±± Birds of paradise, last time i checked, didn't exude toxins through their skins... It goes against the normal logic of the summoning animal and against its principle.

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

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I understand this may not be entirely possible, as there have been many rule changes since I've been on, but I was one of the first, if not the first, person on here to have a sword that changed shape as it's niche. I'd like to be able to keep that ability, if at all possible. I'm trying to balance the power of my sword between it's current form and its original form which was...well, vastly more powerful.

Upgrading:

(Mikomi no Yaiba: Mythos Jinsei no Sāberu) Blade of Hope: Mythos, the Life Sabre
Rank: N/A
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: +10 to Kenjutsu
Description: After using the first Mikomi no Yaiba, this blade’s predecessor, for years, Keotsu decided it was time to forge his own blade. Keotsu took the ancestral Mythril blade and used its shape-shifting ability to transform it into an ore that he could smelt and form his own sword with. Using a process from his home, Keotsu spent three straight days forging the blade, infusing it with his chakra and life-force as he did so. On the dawn of the forth morning, the blade gleamed in the early morning light, and was completed. Infused with the powers of the previous Mikomi no Yaiba, this blade retained the ability to change its shape, but not its mass, by responding to the wielder’s chakra manipulation – and due to this ability to change its shape, the godly edge that the previous blade held was still present after this re-forging, shown when Keotsu plunged the blade into a sheer rock face and withdrew it, the weapon unscathed. Keotsu’s re-forging had an adverse effect effect on the blade: it allowed Keotsu to amplify the chakra he used for his Kenjutsu technique, boosting their strength. Due to the legendary metal from which it is forged, Mikomi no Yaiba: Mythos’s edge will never dull, and the weapon is indestructible, and the weapon's scabbard -also imbued with Mythril -changes to fit the blade.
*The user can manipulate the blade’s form during battle at any time, but it costs 35 chakra to do so, and also counts towards one of that turn’s three allotted moves.
*Can only be wielded by Keotsu. When someone else tries to hold the blade, it will reject their chakra and increase its density exponentially, making it to heavy to be lifted. However, it reverts to its original density when Keotsu is holding it.

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(Ten'notsurugi: Mythos, Jinsei no Sāberu) Astrum Sword: Mythos, Vita Saber
Rank: N/A
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: +30 to Command Arts, +20 to Kenjutsu
Description: "The Blade of Heaven...Mythos the Life Sabre. One of the Ten Shinning Weapons." When Keotsu returned to the known continent from his journey to regions unknown, he returned with his blade Mythos in a new form; some secret event took place which reconfigured the blade and created a powerful connection between Keotsu and the sword. The Mythril blade retained its ability to change it's shape, but not it's mass when subjected to Keotsu's chakras, as did the scabbard of the weapon, though the two were no longer explicitly linked. A few improvements were noted by Keotsu, though: the blade seemed to resonate better than before, boosting his powers in battle; second, the blade came to reject energies that were foreign to Keotsu - that's to say, for example, if an enemy tried to use Nagashi after grabbing the blade, the energy would stop completely due to the nature of the blade's composition. This particular power comes about from the blade's new found synergy with Keotsu, in an effort to prevent it from being used against him. Retaining all the properties of the metal it was forged from, Mythos is indestructible and will never dull, in any of its forms.
*The user can manipulate the blade’s form during battle at any time, but it costs 35 chakra to do so, and also counts towards one of that turn’s three allotted moves.
*Can only be wielded by Keotsu. When someone else tries to hold the blade, it will reject their chakra and increase its density exponentially, making it to heavy to be lifted. However, it reverts to its original density when Keotsu is holding it.

~ Bold all changes, please. ~

 

[Emperor]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

~ Thread Closed for checking.

Apologies for the inconvenience, but we have been having RL things to do; Scorps is on vacation, I'll be travelling more often nowadays; and so on. We will try to open it as soon as possible.

 

[Scorps]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

±± New Cycle of Submissions ±±

Ok, I've worked through my vacations to clean the thread but it took a bit longer than i anticipated. However, a new cycle is hereby available. The cycle will start today, the 25th of June and end on sunday, the 1st of July. As always you can only submit 3 techniques within the markers.

One personal notice though. Its a shame to see members ripping peoples customs back and forth and I'm being forced to take harsher actions towards those issues. We have a Cannon Jutsu List of 300+ techniques so if you can't submit customs of your own imagination, don't. Theres no need. Also, just because you can, doesn't mean you should post customs. I see young members posting useless customs all the time or customs that if we approve, will basically be a waste of space on your Customs Thread. Be mindful of that and try to be smart about it for your own good and the clean working of the CJ thread.

One final note. Each Custom Summoning contract can only have 10 summoning animals... This is 10 summoning animals all together and not 10 per signer. Be smart about this as you all know, dropping customs isn't currently allowed.


Thank you!!! Scorps :scorps:​

 

[Alyx]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Link to approved CFS:

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Satan Flame:Lucifer's Flame Ignition
Rank:B
Type:Attack/Defense/Supplemenatary
Range:Short{Self}
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:The user channels fire chakra to any part of their body. The part becomes in golfed in flames. The user taijutsu is increased by +5.
~Must know Satan Flames~
~Can only be taught by XxFallenUchihaxX

Satan Flame:Lucifer's Heart
Type:Defensive,Supplementary,Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short{Self}
Chakra:30{-10 per turn active}
Damage:{+10 Taijutsu}
Description:The User will channel all of there fire chakra though out there body and create a flaming armor around there body.It is nearly impossible to get near the user due to the intense heat around the users body.While in this is active the user can do several air karate chops unleashing fire chakra waves equal to C-Rank jutsus at the enemy.The muscles on the users body will become more dense they can even brake though A rank Earth techniques.S-Rank and higher Water jutsus can extinguish the flames but the user can unleash a sudden burst once per battle to boil the water into evaporated particles.
~Last 3 turns~
~Must know Satan Flames~
~Must be taught by XxFallenUchihaxX~

Wind Style:Sky Dragon Wing Smash
Type:Offensive
Rank:C
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damage:30
Description:*The user jumps into the air, focusing massive amounts of Wind chakra in the arm's, and then she creates two sharp spiraling wind around there arms,then slashes the enemy in the face causing cuts to appear making mild bleeding.

~ All declined, similar techniques exist ~

 

[Smirk]

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(Doton: Izumi Wana) Earth Release: Spring Trap
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The uses performs two quick handseals, which brings up a stone pillar in front of the opponent(s), charging them. Causing them to re-act by jumping backwards, and then two large spikes raise from the ground with such speed, they penetrate the opponents back(s) without warning.
-If the opponent(s) do not move out of the way of the stone pillar, they'll be pushed into the spikes-
-If the opponent(s) manages to jump either to the left, right, or up, they'll be able to avoid the spikes-
-Do to the sound of the pillar rising from the ground, the rising spikes behind the opponent(s) remain undetectable-
-Can only be used twice per Opponent-
-Taught by Smirk-


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(Suiton: Henteko Shio) Water Release: Strange Tides
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a thick water vortex, either around them self for defense, around them self and the opponent(s) to limit the opponents movements, or around the opponent(s) only, to trap them. The huge vortex has many smaller vortex's inside of it, allowing the user to attack the opponent with them. Do to the density and rapid speeds of movement in the water vortex, if anyone were to directly try to go through it, they will take massive damage, possibly drown.
-Cannot use any S-rank water jutsu for Two turns-
-Needs a water source-
-Taught by Smirk-


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(Raiton: Raikou Shindou Mizu Gen'ei) Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Water Illusion
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User spits out water chakra , creating a desirable woman made of water, appearing to be reaching out for the opponent. The Opponent believes their in some kind of genjutsu, disrupting their focus. While the user strikes the opponent(s) with a Lightning bolt from behind.
-Opponents with B-rank to Mastery level of genjutsu can tell that it is not a genjutsu-
-Taught by Smirk-


±± All Declined ±± As stated countless times before: no formatting apart from bolding the title of the technique and bolding the changes on resubmissions.

Resubmitting The First jutsu [I changed the rank from S to B]

(Doton: Izumi Wana) Earth Release: Spring Trap
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: B
Range: All
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user performs two quick handseals, which brings up a stone pillar in front of the opponent(s), charging them. With two large spikes raising from the ground behind the opponent with such speed, they penetrate the opponents back(s) without warning.
-If the opponent(s) do not move out of the way of the stone pillar, they'll be pushed into the spikes.
-Due to the sound of the pillar rising from the ground, the rising spikes behind the opponent(s) remain undetectable.
-Can be used three times per battle.
-Taught by Smirk-

~ Charging them ? What ? ~

(Doton: Fuketsu Kouji) Earth Release: Dirty Decoy
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: All
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs one hand, releasing earth chakra into the ground, causing the ground in front of the opponent(s) to suddenly explode, instantly pushing a cloud of dirt and rocks into the air blocking the opponents view of the user, entirely.
-Can be used once every two turns
-The exploding ground doesn't physically affect the opponent
-Taught by Smirk-

~ Declined, similar techniques exist ~

(Stoner Yakuin) Stoner Staff
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: +20/+40 [Each time a special ability is used, Ability 1/2]
Damage: 80
Description: The Stoner, is a stone made staff, with some of the Earths strongest rock materials, while the staff is exceptionally light for greater mobility. The user inserts chakra into the staff, to access the staffs special abilities. Special abilities consist of "Staff protection", where if the user is occupied or needs a last second defense, the staff can grow/change into different shapes to shield and protect the user. The second special ability is "Earths communication", where the user sends chakra into the Stoner staff and then certain amounts of chakra is released from the staff itself into the air then directly into ground, the earth itself can then communicate with the staff which inserts chakra waves into the user informing the user on whats going on around them, to heightened their awareness.
-"Staff Protection" defenses protect up to A rank attacks.
-"Earths communications" isn't a chakra sensing ability, the users chakra that is sent into the Earth by the staff becomes "one" and reads vibrations made by things on the ground, also wind vibrations, touching any surrounding tree's due to the tree's being rooted from under the ground.
-Once each ability is activated, they remain activated, also taking their respective amount of chakra each time the ability is used [ability 2 can be active but the user can choose to accept or decline the incoming chakra from the staff].

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~ The staff's abiity infringes on existing custom sensing techniques ~

 

[ZK]

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(Fūinjutsu: Nanzen Koki o Tenpu) Sealing Technique: Many Thousand Exhalations of the Heavenly Father
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user performs two handseals and does a simple gesture. At the sign of the gesture, two great sealing arrays will appear, one ten meters above the opponent, extending to mid range around the area it’s made, and one below the opponent, which extends short range around the area it’s made on. The arrays can, alternatively, emanate an eerie glow and hum immediately upon activation. As the arrays appear, beams, seemingly made of light, will extend from both arrays with great speed and connect, giving the structure a cage-like appearance, but not affecting the target or user in anyway. The lower array will, as the beams connect, immediately lock anything above it in suspended animation, making a great kanji for ‘halt’ appear in the middle of itself. The top one will, as the beams connect, fire a great hurricane of weapons towards the area beneath it, covering a wide range very quickly. The hurricane itself will consist of thousands of weapons of all shapes, sizes and origins.
-The target stays paralyzed for one (1) turn.
-Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
-The user cannot use B-ranked and above Fūinjutsu during the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

(Fūinjutsu: Tanren no Moudan) Sealing Technique: The Forging of a Hasty Conclusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per creation)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user claps his hands together, causing numerous seals to appear on his/her body, all of whom are linked to two main-seals on both of the users’ palms. The numerous seals all act as converters and conveyors for chakra. Tanren no Moudan is essentially the creation of temporary weapons and armor, all created from different types of elemental or raw chakra. Like the Water Walking Exercise, the user of this technique will emit ever-changing streams of chakra from different points on their bodies, using extremely basic shape-manipulation to alter the chakra into the needed form. The seals will then, at a mental command from the user, convert the raw chakra into any accessible type of elemental chakra. Using this simple trick, elemental weapons and armor can be accessed at a moment’s notice. Of course, the technique has its limitations. Every piece of elemental armor or weaponry is B-ranked in terms of strength, while raw chakra equipment is C-ranked in strength. Any product of this technique takes one of the three moves allowed per turn to create, but every piece of equipment is created extremely quickly because of the simple concept and the assistance of the seals. The seals allow the elemental equipment to exist while the user performs other techniques, since he/she merely needs to maintain the chakra-flow to uphold the equipments existence.
-One cannot use any Ninjutsu related to whatever element is used to create equipment with this technique, with the exception of constructions made of raw chakra.
-One can create multiple pieces of equipment using multiple elements, but the same restrictions apply to the new elements.
-After creating a piece of equipment, one must wait two (2) consecutive turns before creating another piece using the same element.
-With the exception of anything Fūinjutsu-related, this technique is classified as a general skill, since it is simply an advanced form of the Water Walking Exercise.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

(Amebuyou: Shin'youshuu) Rain Dancing: Collection of Mythology
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 per creation)
Damage points: 60
Description: The user smears blood over his hands and forms a single handseal. At the sign of the handseal, the user extends energy outwards and infuses all existing sources of rain with chakra. This technique does not affect an opponent’s technique. Shin'youshuu allows the user to use simple gestures to form creatures and shapes out of the rain itself. By using short and precise gestures to knead the chakra in the rain, the user is able to slightly increase the size of the individual raindrops and make them light up because of the chakra inside them. As such, this technique does not shape moving creatures, it merely sets up a frame that moves from raindrop to raindrop to create the illusion of movement. While this method is just as efficient as actually creating the creatures, it is infinitely many times simpler. Since no actual creature is created, the shapes of Shin'youshuu cannot be used to ram into the target. Instead, the chakra inside the raindrops simply turns unstable in nature, causing shockwaves of rain and chakra to hit the target, and everything in his near vicinity, when detonated.
- All shapes must be created at least five (5) meters away from the target.
-Can only be used trice (3) per battle.
-No S-ranked Rain techniques may be used during the following turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

Oh, yeah, I'm dropping all the approved customs in this post:

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±± All Declined ±± Resubmit when you get out of detention

Resubmitting. I have made no changes in the techniques, except adding a single space, seperating 'any' and 'way' in the first technique.

(Fūinjutsu: Nanzen Koki o Tenpu) Sealing Technique: Many Thousand Exhalations of the Heavenly Father
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user performs two handseals and does a simple gesture. At the sign of the gesture, two great sealing arrays will appear, one ten meters above the opponent, extending to mid range around the area it’s made, and one below the opponent, which extends short range around the area it’s made on. The arrays can, alternatively, emanate an eerie glow and hum immediately upon activation. As the arrays appear, beams, seemingly made of light, will extend from both arrays with great speed and connect, giving the structure a cage-like appearance, but not affecting the target or user in any way. The lower array will, as the beams connect, immediately lock anything above it in suspended animation, making a great kanji for ‘halt’ appear in the middle of itself. The top one will, as the beams connect, fire a great hurricane of weapons towards the area beneath it, covering a wide range very quickly. The hurricane itself will consist of thousands of weapons of all shapes, sizes and origins.
-Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
-The user cannot use B-ranked and above Fūinjutsu during the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
~Approved~ Removed the paralysis part. It's unnecessary. Otherwise, nice.

(Fūinjutsu: Tanren no Moudan) Sealing Technique: The Forging of a Hasty Conclusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per creation)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user claps his hands together, causing numerous seals to appear on his/her body, all of whom are linked to two main-seals on both of the users’ palms. The numerous seals all act as converters and conveyors for chakra. Tanren no Moudan is essentially the creation of temporary weapons and armor, all created from different types of elemental or raw chakra. Like the Water Walking Exercise, the user of this technique will emit ever-changing streams of chakra from different points on their bodies, using extremely basic shape-manipulation to alter the chakra into the needed form. The seals will then, at a mental command from the user, convert the raw chakra into any accessible type of elemental chakra. Using this simple trick, elemental weapons and armor can be accessed at a moment’s notice. Of course, the technique has its limitations. Every piece of elemental armor or weaponry is B-ranked in terms of strength, while raw chakra equipment is C-ranked in strength. Any product of this technique takes one of the three moves allowed per turn to create, but every piece of equipment is created extremely quickly because of the simple concept and the assistance of the seals. The seals allow the elemental equipment to exist while the user performs other techniques, since he/she merely needs to maintain the chakra-flow to uphold the equipments existence.
-One cannot use any Ninjutsu related to whatever element is used to create equipment with this technique, with the exception of constructions made of raw chakra.
-One can create multiple pieces of equipment using multiple elements, but the same restrictions apply to the new elements.
-After creating a piece of equipment, one must wait two (2) consecutive turns before creating another piece using the same element.
-With the exception of anything Fūinjutsu-related, this technique is classified as a general skill, since it is simply an advanced form of the Water Walking Exercise.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
~Leaving for Scorps or Emperor~ I'm really not sure on this one.
~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Amebuyou: Shin'youshuu) Rain Dancing: Collection of Mythology
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 per creation)
Damage points: 60
Description: The user smears blood over his hands and forms a single handseal. At the sign of the handseal, the user extends energy outwards and infuses all existing sources of rain with chakra. This technique does not affect an opponent’s technique. Shin'youshuu allows the user to use simple gestures to form creatures and shapes out of the rain itself. By using short and precise gestures to knead the chakra in the rain, the user is able to slightly increase the size of the individual raindrops and make them light up because of the chakra inside them. As such, this technique does not shape moving creatures, it merely sets up a frame that moves from raindrop to raindrop to create the illusion of movement. While this method is just as efficient as actually creating the creatures, it is infinitely many times simpler. Since no actual creature is created, the shapes of Shin'youshuu cannot be used to ram into the target. Instead, the chakra inside the raindrops simply turns unstable in nature, causing shockwaves of rain and chakra to hit the target, and everything in his near vicinity, when detonated.
- All shapes must be created at least five (5) meters away from the target.
-Can only be used trice (3) per battle.
-No S-ranked Rain techniques may be used during the following turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
~Declined~ I'm not seeing what your point is with this technique. What's the point of changing the shapes to creatures and then saying the creatures aren't actually created and cannot hurt the opponent. If your goal is the detonation of the raindrops, then the majority of the description is superfluous. Rewrite it and be clear about the effect of the technique damage-wise.

 

[CleverMonkey]

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Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi) Suzuran

Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Chakra Damage: 80
Description: The user wipe some of his blood on the summoning tattoo. Once that is done he does 5 hand seals and slam his palms to ground. Once the user has done this, Suzuran (my summon) will appear flying above the battle field (Short range above me). Suzuran speaclizes in A rank Lightning thus no need to do handseals for the ones that need handseals. The lightning jutsus will also be released from Suzurans beak or mouth. (Jutsus like chidori are from the beak). Suzuran can travel at very high speeds, and rush straight into the oppenent with its beak, causing major damage.This summon is the same size as Sauske Hawk, so the summon can be rode on .All Lesser birds of paradise can talk . So can this one. Suzuran can also drop his feathers, which will harden and be as sharp as kunais. These feathers are toxic, derived from their insect prey, so the body part that get's hit from one of the feathers will go numb.
-The summon can stay for 4 turns
-The user can't use any lightning jutsus while summon is active
-Can be used once per battle
-All techniques used by Suzuran count towards the user's 3 moves
-The summon can only use up to A-rank lightning techniques
-Can only be used by Clevermonkey AND General Phaze
-Permission From General Phaze to make the summon

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(Feel Free to take out the toxic feathers if you must. The bird does contain toxins in it so i based that off a real fact)

±± Declined ±± Yeah...toxins in a bird of paradise? No.

Resubmitting

Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi) Suzuran

Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Chakra Damage: 80
Description: The user wipe some of his blood on the summoning tattoo. Once that is done he does 5 hand seals and slam his palms to ground. Once the user has done this, Suzuran (my summon) will appear flying above the battle field (Short range above me). Suzuran speaclizes in A rank Lightning thus no need to do handseals for the ones that need handseals. The lightning jutsus will also be released from Suzurans beak or mouth. (Jutsus like chidori are from the beak). Suzuran can travel at very high speeds, and rush straight into the oppenent with its beak, causing major damage.This summon is the same size as Sauske Hawk, so the summon can be rode on .All Lesser birds of paradise can talk . So can this one. Suzuran can also drop his feathers, which will harden and be as sharp as kunais.
-The summon can stay for 4 turns
-The user can't use any lightning jutsus while summon is active
-Can be used once per battle
-All techniques used by Suzuran count towards the user's 3 moves
-The summon can only use up to A-rank lightning techniques
-Can only be used by Clevermonkey AND General Phaze
-Permission From General Phaze to make the summon

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(I took away the toxic feathers part)
~Declined~ Incorrect chakra cost and damage. Also, how big are these feathers and how many can be released?

 

[Priest]

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RESUBMITTING... REWROTE THE DESCRIPTION

(Raiton: Kibaku jirai) - Lightning Release: Exploding Land mine
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs chidori nagashi first then channels raiton chakra through his legs into the ground below him then compresses it to form a lightning sphere that covers a 10meter radius area underground. The user then spread some of his raiton chakra on the surface of the ground which is connected to the sphere then upon attack from the target, the user jumps away from his position to which if the targets step on the leaking chakra which is invisible, triggers the underground lightning sphere which immediately becomes unstable causing a massive explosion which catches up with the user also but can't hurt him because of the lightning armor covering him. The user can make a hand seal to trigger the explosion when the target is in range.
-Must have mastered raiton
-Last for 2 turns
-Can only be used 3times in a battle
-Can only be used by Mist01
~Declined~ What? You lost me at the last three sentences.
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(Bo no Elendil) - Bow of Elendil

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Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-40 if splited)
Description: Bow of Elendil is a 70" metallic chakra bow made of adamantium with up to 35" draw length. it has a reddish color with body frame like that of a dragon's scales. It also has sharp spikes all over the curves except for the hilt in the middle which serves as the handle. the string is made of a thing metallic spring that draws chakra from the users hand thereby forming an arrow made of thick dense pure chakra as the user pulls it. the arrow that it shoots been mainly pure chakra is fast and precise and can pierce through any form of defense except shields of metal which the bow itself was made(adamantium).
Abilities:
+-the spikes can be used to slash and pierce opponent in close range.
+-because of its metallic composition, it is indestructible
+-can fire upto 3 arrows at once but the power is halfed for each arrow
+-can be combined with fire and lightning element(+10 damage)
Restrictions:
+-can't use elemental techniques when using this since the wielder won't be able to do handseals except its elemental combinations which can only come as projectiles.
+-can only be wield and only listen to Mist01
~Declined~ Restrict it's usage period.
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(Doton: Shuriken buyou) - Earth Release: Shuriken dance
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels doton chakra to the ground then lift small rocks using shape manipulation to turn the rocks to shurikens which he sends at the target at high speed from different angles.
-the user can only send up to 10 shurikens at a time.
-Can only be used 4times in a battle
-Can only be taught by Mist01
~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists

Rewrote the description of the first jutsu---and--added restriction for the weapon

(Raiton: Kibaku jirai) - Lightning Release: Exploding Land mine
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu requires the usage of the Chidori Nagashi. While spreading the lightning chakra outwards, the user will infiltrate some of it underground, creating a large lightning orb beneath the surface. The orb will be attached to a chakra net above the ground, undetectable without a chakra sensory or doujutsu of the same or higher rank as the user. When any opponent or animal summon/companion (Something with a chakra system) steps on the net, the orb of condensed lightning will explode, at a radius of 5 meters. Otherwise, the user may choose to perform 1 jutsu(a hand seal) and detonate it or keep it from detonating at will, this is to make sure the user is out of the explosion range before detonation.
-The Nagashi does not suffer from the usage of this technique, as it has it's own chakra cost.
-Last for 2 turns
-Can only be used 3times in a battle
-Can only be used by Mist01

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Bo no Elendil) - Bow of Elendil

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Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-20 if splited)
Description: Bow of Elendil is a 70" metallic chakra bow made of adamantium with up to 35" draw length. it has a reddish color with body frame like that of a dragon's scales. It also has sharp spikes all over the curves except for the hilt in the middle which serves as the handle. the string is made of a thing metallic spring that draws chakra from the users hand thereby forming an arrow made of thick dense pure chakra as the user pulls it. the arrow that it shoots been mainly pure chakra is fast and precise and can pierce through any form of defense except shields of metal which the bow itself was made(adamantium).
Abilities:
+-the spikes can be used to slash and pierce opponent in close range.
+-because of its metallic composition, it is indestructible
+-can fire up to 3 arrows at once but the power is halved for each arrow
+-can be combined with fire and lightning element(+10 damage)
Restrictions:
+-can't use elemental techniques when using this since the wielder won't be able to do hand seals except its elemental combinations which can only come as projectiles.
+-Usable up to 5times only per battle.
+-can only be wield and only listen to Mist01

~ Similar weapons exist ~

Summoning technique: Turion
Rank: S
Type: Supplementay
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The user uses his/her own blood and wipes it on the tattoo on his/her right forearm to summon Turion. Turion is a big Lesser Bird of Paradise in the size of sasuke's hawk. Turion has a rare blue color which allows here to blend with the sky traceable by doujutsus only. Turion has strong light wings which allows her to move at a very fast speed and she can travel through dense wind which makes her immune to any wind attacks. Turion can use wind upto A-rank which can be exhale from her mouth of by flapping her wings.
-Turion can only be summoned when there are no more than one bid of paradise summoned
-Turion can only use wind jutsu up to A-rank.
-each jutsu counts as one out of the jutsus per turn.
-Last on the battle field for 5 turns or if released by the summoner.

~ Immune to wind, no ~

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[Akuma]

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(Katon: Kaen Taiyou) - Fire Release: Blazing Sun
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: Forbidden-Rank
Range: Mid/Long Range
Chakra: 50 Chakra
Damage: 90 Damage
Description:
The user performs the needed hand seals (rat→snake) and channels a Massive amount of Fire chakra into his dominant hand, with use of shape manipulation the user creates in the palm of his hand a small version of the Sun with huge amount of compressed fire within it, the user then proceeds to supress it in his fist, he then opens his hand and release it along with the ccompressed fire into a huge concentrated beam of blazing fire, covering the range a tailed beast bomb covers, however do to its amazing heat, the user's hand is heavily burned as a result of not being able to use it anymore. Due to this the user is un-able to perform hand seals for the rest of the fight.

~ May only be used 1 time per fight.
~ May only be used my Mugetsu and those who he may allow.
~ Must have mastered Fire Release.

(Jyuken: Rokuogan) - Gentle Fist: Six King Gun
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description:
The user places both his/her fists right in front of the target (chest or stomach) and launches a devastating amount of Chakra, causing massive internal injuries. If the user manages a clean hit it causes the target to cough up blood and come close to death.

~ May only be used by Mugetsu and those Hyuuga he may Allow.
~ Must have Gentle Fist training up to atleast A rank to use.
~ Only Usable by Gentle Fist users.
~ Usable only 2 times per battle.
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(Doton: Hae Rokku) - Earth Release: Levitating Rock
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: 40 Damage
Description:
The user channels a good amount of earth chakra into the earth beneath him, then forms the ram hand seal and makes the earth under him rip from the earth in a round shape, that with use of the user's chakra levitates with the user on top, giving the user the ability to fly and move the rock with the user on top, around the battlefield, for a short period a time.

~ May only be used by Mugetsu and those who he may Allow.
~ Can last 2 turns with the user on it.
~ Usable only 2 times per battle.
~All Declined~ Do not Resubmit

 

[Kuro Tamashi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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Boseki Buredo (Tombstone the Blade)
Type: Weapon (Sword)
Rank: Highest useable rank of user up to S Rank
Range: Close/Mid
Chakra: 0
Damage:
Description: Boseki Buredo is a sword thatwas forged by Kuro Tamashi in hopes of increasing his skill as a shinobi. Since he was born in the mist he was aware.of the power that the seven swordsmen held. He himself wanted a sword that could be considered for the acceptance if such organization. So he forged Boseki. Boseki Buredo is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki Buredo has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki Buredo was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy. This sword was made for use by only Kuro Tamashi, due to his size and the size of the sword he can use it with ease.

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~Boseki Buredo can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki Buredo after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~

edit if need. ^^

Consider these only if above custom weapon gets approved.

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Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Close
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponent causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponent to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attack the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponent can see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confusion.

~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
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Boseki Buredo Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 0
Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki Buredo can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki Buredo is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the opponent uses chidori for example the Boseki Buredo can not absorb it).

~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).


±± All Declined ±± First step to make something approvable... FOLLOW CORRECT TEMPLATE. Read the first post of this thread and look at what i bolded.

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Boseki Buredo (Tombstone the Blade)
Type: Weapon (Sword)
Rank: B Rank
Range: Close
Chakra: 5 without infused chakra/20 with chakra infused
Damage: 10 Without infused chakra/40 with chakra infused
Description: Boseki Buredo is a sword that was forged by Kuro Tamashi in hopes of increasing his skill as a shinobi. Since he was born in the mist he was aware of the power that the seven swordsmen held. He himself wanted a sword that could be considered for the acceptance if such organization. So he forged Boseki. Boseki Buredo is named such because of its appearance and size. Boseki is 6 feet long and 3 feet wide. So it looks like a tall tombstone. Boseki Buredo has the ability to manipulate wind chakra up to the rank of the user. Boseki Buredo was made for two reasons, quick kills and disabling the enemy from attacking. It has an edged side for the kill, and a blunt side for knocking around the enemy. He also made this weapon to replace the use of a fan that Temari uses for her wind jutsu. This sword was made for use by only Kuro Tamashi, due to his size and the size of the sword he can use it with ease.

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~Boseki Buredo can only be used by Kuro Tamashi (V1nC3N7 V1c10U5)~
~This is a custom weapon, so can be used anytime in battle~
~This weapon is the equivalent of Temari's Fan for Kuro Tamashī~
~In order to use in battle the user must put this description of the weapon in first attack and that counts as one jutsu for that turn. Any use of the Boseki Buredo after that is no longer considered a jutsu.~
~Declined~ Why make a sword that's just a copy of Temari's fan. There isn't enough detail into the enhancements this sword gives.

edit if need. ^^

Consider these only if above custom weapon gets approved.

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Fuuton: Akuma Boseki (Wind Style: Demon Tombstone)
Type: Weapon
Rank: B
Range: Close
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will focus fuuton chakra into the blunt side of Boseki and slam it into the shoulder of the opponent causing the shoulder to dislocate and that arm to become unusable. This attack can also be used on the hip region to cause the opponent to be flung to the side at high speeds. In order to preform this attack the user must be hidden before hand. If the opponent can see or sense you the it can be dodged. Best used with 5 sense confusion Or any jutsu that hides your presence from the enemy..

~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
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Boseki Buredo Raiton Dõtai (Tombstone Lighting Style Conductor
Type: Defensive/Attack/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Close
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40(under certain curcumstances)
Description: The user uses Boseki as a conductor in order to absorb up to one higher rank than what the user can use. (If user is Chuunin then Boseki Buredo can only absorb up to B rank lighting). Sense Boseki Buredo is a wind element sword then lighting is nullified by it. This defense can only be used on mid-long range attacks. And its must be lighting attacks that travel.( If the opponent uses chidori for example the Boseki Buredo can not absorb it). If Boskei asorbs a B or lower rank lighting jutsu it can be combined with a wind jutsu to give it two elemental attributes. (i.e.-> You absorb a lighting ball, then you use Wind Spinning Blade Technique then use the attack tribute of this jutsu with it. It will be come a wind and lighting based attack. Lighting Style Conductor->Weapon Wind Attack->Lighting style conductor. This combo being one move. And two of your four uses.)

~Can only be used 4 times a battle.
~This attack can only be used with Boseki Buredo, or any other wind based weapon.
~Must be taught by Kuro Tamashi ( V1nC3N7 V1c10U5).
~Both Declined~ Until the weapon is approved.

 

[Illyasviel]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton:Chanku Batsu)-Earth Release:Chunk Bullets
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The user will stomp the ground with his foot and that will cause around 20 chunks of earth to rise infront of the user.Some will be very small and the largest should be the size of coconuts.The user will then perform a single hand seal and the pieces of earth will be launched at the opponent at high speeds.
~Note:Can be used three times per battle.

(Doton:Tsuchi Kansei)-Earth Release:Earth Trap
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Range:Short
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will slam his hands to the ground and at that point a hole will appear the user will then channel his chakra through the hole and expand the hole underground making it about 5m long and 2m wide and 2m deep.Above the expanded hole a thin layer of earth only 1cm thick will be left,hiding the hole.The thin layer is not enough to hold a person standing on it and it will collapse.
~Note:Can be used three times per battle.

(Doton:Chika Meiro)-Earth Release:Underground Labyrinth
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will perform a sequence of seven hand seals and push his hands to the ground while releasing his chakra into the ground.It will cause a massive circular labyrinth,covering a radius of 75m to appear arround the opponent.The labyrinth consists of many narrow corridors with walls 3m high and a roof asweel.The walls and roof are coated with the users chakra and are wery hard to break.There is also a small chamber where the user will stand and from there he can trigger spikes of earth to shoot out of the labyrinths walls at the place of the users will.The user can exit the labyrinth any time he wants but then he can't trigger the spikes.
~Note:Can be used only once.
~Note:No A rank and above earth for the next turn.
~All Declined~ Do Not Resubmit

 

[Rozzy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Technique: Randit | Souseiki Harinezumi: Randit
Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user bites his thumb to draw blood and swipes it in mid air to summon Randit, a large puffin about 2.5 meters in height and has a wing span of about 6 meters. Randit is capable of carrying one person on his back and is a fast agile bird. His razor sharp talons can deal great damage if swiped or struck by.

Note: Can only summon if user has signed the puffin contract.
Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle
Note: Can only stay active for 3 turns
~Declined~ Specify the bird's abilities. How much damage can the talons do, and are there any other abilities one should know about?

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[Tsuna...]

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Summoning Animal: Badger
Scroll Owner: Me and my Rasengan
Other Users who have signed contract: No one else has signed the contract
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: The European badger is a social, burrowing animal which lives on a wide variety of plant and animal foods. It is very fussy over the cleanliness of its burrow, and defecates in latrines. Although ferocious when provoked, a trait which was once exploited for the blood sport of badger-baiting, the European badger is generally a peaceful animal, having been known to share its burrows with other species such as rabbits, red foxes and raccoon dogs. They've signed a summoning contract with Me and my Rasengan because he had risked his life on more than one occasion to save them from being caught in the middle of the blood sport know as Badger-baiting.


±± Declined ±± Contract already exists.

 

[Ushiro]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Suiton: Ekitai Seigen) - Water Release: Liquid Restriction
Rank: A-S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30 (40 if S rank)
Damage points: 60 (80 if S rank)
Description: The user performs the Dog -> Boar -> Ram handseals and creates a semi-solid wall of water from a water source. Several strong belts of water shoot out from the wall that can swiftly bind an opponent movements by wrapping around his body or attack by lashing out with the belts. A lightning jutsu can be used to electrify the wall and shock anyone in contact with it. Because of this, if an opponent attempts to break free of the belts using Chidori Nagashi, he will only be shocked with his own jutsu. This jutsu can be performed on a greater scale while utilizing a large water source which increases the strength of this jutsu to S-rank. The amount of water needed for the S-rank version is similar to what is created from the Waterfall Basin and Exploding Water Colliding Wave techniques.
-Usable 4 times per battle but the S-rank version costs an extra use.
-No S-rank water techniques next turn

~ Approved ~

(Kuchiyose: Netsu) - Summoning: Netsu
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Netsu, an orange-brown locust 4 meters in height known as the flame locust. With a fire affinity he can perform fire jutsu the summoner knows up to B rank that do not require handseals. By rubbing his legs against another part of his body Netsu may produce a genjutsu inducing sound that makes opponents feel like they are surrounded by raging flames that obstruct their vision.
-Can be summoned twice per battle
-Can stay for 4 turns
-Any techniques used count towards the summoner's 3 moves per turn.
-Must have signed the locusts contract

~ Specify that the genjutsu also counts as one of the moves per turn ~

(Kuchiyose: Hado) - Summoning: Hado
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Hado, a dark brown locust 4 meters in height known as the earth locust. With an earth affinity he can perform earth jutsu the summoner knows up to B rank that do not require handseals. By rubbing his legs against another part of his body Hado may produce a genjutsu inducing sound that makes opponents see a dome of earth suddenly form around them, leaving them in complete darkness and cut off from outside sounds.
-Can be summoned twice per battle
-Can stay for 4 turns
-Any techniques used count towards the summoner's 3 moves per turn.
-Must have signed the locusts contract

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(Kuchiyose: Netsu) - Summoning: Netsu
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Netsu, an orange-brown locust 4 meters in height known as the flame locust. With a fire affinity he can perform fire jutsu the summoner knows up to B rank that do not require handseals. By rubbing his legs against another part of his body Netsu may produce a genjutsu inducing sound which makes opponents feel like they are surrounded by raging flames that obstruct their vision and make it difficult to hear.
-Can be summoned once per battle
-Can stay for 4 turns
-The genjutsu is B-rank and mid-ranged and can only be used 4 times per battle
-Fire jutsu and genjutsu count towards the summoner's 3 moves per turn.
-Must have signed the locusts contract

±± Approved ±±

(Kuchiyose: Hado) - Summoning: Hado
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Hado, a dark brown locust 4 meters in height known as the earth locust. With an earth affinity he can perform earth jutsu the summoner knows up to B rank that do not require handseals. By rubbing his legs against another part of his body Hado may produce a genjutsu inducing sound that makes opponents see a dome of earth suddenly form around them, leaving them in complete darkness and cut off from outside sounds.
-Can be summoned once per battle
-Can stay for 4 turns
-The genjutsu is B-rank, mid-ranged and can only be used 4 times
-Earth jutsu and genjutsu count towards the summoner's 3 moves per turn.
-Must have signed the locusts contract

±± Approved ±±

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(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Buruzuai)- Sniper Art: Bullseye
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 each turn)
Damage: N/A (+10 to kyujutsu and Sniper techniques, -10 to other ninjutsu)
Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which manifests a web-like crosshair in front. It acts as a barrier against frontal attacks and strengthens arrows shot from the bow with once they pass through the one-sided barrier.
-Usable once per battle
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Can protect the user from 3 C-rank, 2 B-rank, or 1 A-rank attack
-Only 2 jutsu per turn may be used while this is active excluding the turn it was used

To this:

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Buruzuai)- Sniper Art: Bullseye
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short (Mid for trap)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A (+15 to kyujutsu and Sniper techniques)
Description: The user imbues large amounts of chakra into his bow which causes it to glow and manifest a spherical barrier around the user with him at the center. As the user moves the barrier will move with him. The barrier is one-sided, meaning the user can be protected from outside attacks while objects can leave the barrier freely. When the user aims his bow, a crosshair appears on the surface of the barrier and the arrows that pass through it are strengthened. A variation of this technique is performed by aiming the user's bow at a target and creating the barrier around them instead in a reversed state so he can be trapped inside while the user attacks him from outside. The barrier remains stationary when trapping a target.
-Usable twice per battle
-Lasts for 3 turns
-The barrier can be destroyed by 3 C-rank, 2 B-rank, or 1 A-rank attack

I removed a few unnecessary restrictions like the jutsu per turn limit and the decrease in ninjutsu strength.


±± Declined ±± Any technique from a CFS can only be submitted by the owner of the CFS.

 

[Toku]

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(Katon- Bāningu Mashingan Panchi o Funshutsu) Fire release- Erupting Burning Machine Gun Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short- Long
Chakra cost: 50
Attack points: 90
Description: the user focuses fire chakra on his fist after performing “Earth release- Earth Gun Punch” and launches a barrage of punches releasing multiple bursting fire gloves to be sent in the direction of the opponent causing tremendous damage to the opponent and incinerating the area around him from the inferno cause by the bursting fire. The bursting of fire from the user’s hands burns them causing damage to the user.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: The exhertion of fire chakra severely damages the users hand, slowing his hand seal speed for 2 turns or until healed.
*Note: Cant use any Fire jutsu next turn or any S-rank Fire and above the turn after that.

~Declined~ Seems too generic. Several other techniques do essentially the same thing. Also, why is Earth Gun Punch required?

(Katon- Bāningu Mashingan Panchi o Funshutsu) Fire release- Erupting Burning Machine Gun Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short- Long
Chakra cost: 50
Attack points: 90
Description: the user focuses fire chakra on his fist after performing “Earth release- Earth Gun Punch” and launches a barrage of punches releasing multiple flaming rock gloves to be sent in the direction of the opponent causing tremendous damage to the opponent and incinerating the area around him from the inferno caused by the bursting fire of the rock gloves leaving the area as a pool of lava. The bursting of fire from the user’s hands burns them causing damage to the user.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: The exhertion of fire chakra severely damages the users hand, slowing his hand seal speed for 2 turns or until healed.
*Note: Cant use any Fire jutsu next turn or any S-rank Fire and above the turn after that.


±± Declined ±± Sorry but i don't see this as a Forbidden Rank. Its more like an S-Rank.

 

[Necron]

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(Raiton: Seiteki hyōmen) Lighting Release: Static Surface
Type: Supplementary
Rank:B
Range: Short
Chakra:30 [+10 per turn active]
Damage: N/A
Description: The User will focus lighting chakra in front of him, and make it dence enough to support his weight. Then, he will shape the chakra into a disk, and step on it. If the user's skin does not make direct contact with the chakra, it will not electrocute him (for example, wearing shoes). The user can then manipulate the chakra under him, to fly on it. One can only fly for up to 3 turns. Can fly as fast as a regular flying summon can.
-Can only be used up to 2 times per battle.

(Raiton: Kage sakusei) Lighting Release: Shadow Creation
Type: Supplementary
Rank:B
Range: Short
Chakra:30
Damage: N/A
Description: By following the same process to create a lighting shadow clone, the user will only create weapons out of his raiton chakra (just like the weapons of the Lighting shadow clone). By performing the tiger hand seal, the user can make the weapons burst into lighting, powerfull enough to paralyze the opponet for several seconds (aplicable only after throwing the weapon to the opponet, or the user will get paralyzed too).

±± Both Declined ±± First one has been down countless times before. Second one needs further explanation. How big the weapon you can create? Whats its limits? Also, like the Lightning Shadow clone, that technique would paralyze on impact, not when you do a hand seal. The idea isn't half bad though.


(Raiton: Kaminari no Ōbundōmu) Lighting Release: Thunder Oven Dome
Type: Attack/Suplementary
Rank:Forbiden
Range: Long
Chakra:50
Damage: 120
Description: By performing 32 hand seals, the user will first create a giantic dome of lighting around the battlefield. The dome is as big as Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave. By the time they create it, they have 3 seconds before the lighting starts striking. The user can only defend by using the Plasma ball (though, the user will still be harmed, it will prevent him from hetting killed). After 3 seconds, lighting bolts will start striking in all directions in the dome, generated by all the walls, constantly for 2 turns.
-After using this jutsu, the user can only use up to B-rank raiton for 3 turns
-Cannot swich chakra natures wile the dome is still in play


±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.

 

[Kato.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ryuujin Raiden Tsuin) Twin Thunder Dragons
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakra: 20
Damage: 60
Description: Ryuujin Raiden Tsuin are two large black katana, with a dragon design on the guard and the scabbard. Ryuujin Raiden Tsuin is a legendary sword, built by a master swordsmith that can absorb and manifest both lightning and fire chakra. When this sword absorbs lightning or fire chakra, from the wielder or an opponents jutsu, it produces a black flame that coats the blade and adds 10 damage to kenjutsu attacks. Also this sword is indestructible so it is great for blocking strikes

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- Can only be wielded by Kato Rokuemon
- Can absorb A Rank lightning projectiles
- Can absorb A Rank fire projectiles
- Absorbing jutsu counts as one of the three jutsu in a move
- +10 to kenjutsu strikes when absorbed a jutsu (lasts three turns)

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(Kenjutsu: Moeagaru ) Sword Arts: Flamming Hurricane
Type: Offence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will manifest both fire and wind chakra into their sword, creating a flamming hurricane around the blade. The flamming hurricane can either be used to enhance the damage done by the blade or 'thrown' as a projectile that can reach up to mid range. By thrown I mean the user will slash their sword and release the flamming hurricane from the blade.

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Summoning Technique: (Kane Tori) Jin
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Chakra Damage: 80
Description: The user draws blood and wipes blood on their summoning tattoo. Once that is done they then perform 5 hand seals and palms the ground. Once the user slams his palm the ground Jin appears in mid air above them. Jin is one of the smaller birds within the Lesser Birds of Paradise, around half/three quarters the size of sasuke's hawk. Jin's skeleton is made of a sturdy lightweight metal which makes Jin almost indestructible, Jin can also harden his feathers to a steel like quality (strength wise). Jin can travel at great speeds and is one of the fastest of the Paradise Birds. This summon can fire feathers that take the steel-like quality and act as daggers from his wings.

Jin's Techniques

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(Hagane Hane Danmaku) Steel Feather Barrage
Type: Offence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Jin will flap his wings and send a barrage of feathers that take a steel-like quality and act as kunai

(Earodainamikkusu Bin) AeroDynamic Flight
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Jin will streamline his body, reducing the wind resistance on him allowing him to achieve ultimate speed with his flight

- Stays on the field for 5 turns
- Can only be summoned once
- All techniques used by Jin counts towards the users three moves

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[Shinta]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Denkou Kabe ) Lightning Release: Lightning Wall
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (if opponent touches it)
Description: By placing five kunai charged with raiton chakra in a pillar, one at the bottom, one at the max height you want the wall (must state where so the height of the wall can be know) and the rest evenly dispersed in between. Five kunai must be placed at corresponding spots on a nearby pillar with the top an bottom kunai at approximately the same height that are also charged with raiton chakra. To release the wall the user will make the monkey → boar hand seals which will release the lightning chakra causing them to emit a weave of lightning between the corresponding points thus making a wall. The jutsu works by embedding negatively charged raiton into one set of kunai and positively charged raiton into the other pair of kunai.
Note:
- The max height of the wall is five meters and the max width between the two points is three meters,
- The pillars can be trees or any other structure fitting the above point,
- In the case that there are no pillars some may be made using an earth technique, though this counts as one of you three moves per turn,
- Must be set up properly at least the turn before it is used,
- The kunais only maintain enough charge for one use and new one must be placed/thrown into place in order for the wall to be used again.
- The wall is designed to stop one b-rank jutsu or under, except for wind and earth release in which case it can stop one c-rank for wind and a-rank for earth or under.
- Kunais remained charged for three turns,
- Can be used twice per battle,
- Can only be taught by Shinta.

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Edited in the creation of earthen pillars, edited some grammatical errors and restrictions/notes.

(Raiton: Denkou Kabe ) Lightning Release: Lightning Wall
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (if opponent touches it)
Description: The user will begin by first using (Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique to summon two pillars of earth, no further than three meters apart and five meters high. The user will then place five kunai charged with raiton chakra in one of the pillars, one at the bottom, one at the max height you want the wall (must state where so the height of the wall can be know) and the rest evenly dispersed in between. Five kunai must be placed at corresponding spots on a nearby pillar with the top and bottom kunai at approximately the same height that are also charged with raiton chakra. To activate the wall the user will make the monkey → boar hand seals which will release the lightning chakra causing them to emit a weave of lightning between the corresponding points thus making the wall of lightning. The jutsu works by embedding negatively charged raiton into one set of kunai and positively charged raiton into the other set of kunai.
Note:
- The max height of the wall is five meters and the max width between the two pillars is three meters,
- Must be set up properly at least the turn before it is used,
- The kunais only maintain enough charge to block one attack and as such the jutsu will have to be set up and used again as per the description,
- The wall is designed to stop either; One A-rank ranged earth jutsu or one similarly weak to lightning, one c-rank wind jutsu or one similarly strong againt lightning, and one b-rank of any other elemental jutsu,
- This wall can also block any taijutsu of a-rank or lower,
- Kunais remained charged for three turns before they must be activated or else the charge is lost, nullifying the jutsu,
- After the jutsu is used the earth pillars are destroyed from the effects of the lightning wall,
- Can be used twice per battle,
- Can only be taught by Shinta.


±± Approved ±± But just so you know, this technique is useless in battle and there is no way that you have time to pull this off against any opponent. The time it takes to prepare this is too long for it to be useful.