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Type: Summon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/a
Description: Sagittarius is the archer and assasin of the cone snail family. Due to their fighting mechanism this is very important and easily places him at the top with other with special abilities due to his quickness alongside his extreme great accuracy,and eye sight. Sagittaruis is 2 feet long and 2 feet tall (The shell is included in the size), Being able to ride or attach himself to the user for mobility. His regular body is a faded black color though you can never see his full body as its attached to the shell, you can tell by his eyes as they stick out from the shell along with his mouth. His Shell is a midnight black color with small white patterns all around it with the sagittaruis symbol (
) on the side of his shell. His voice is very low but stern. He doesnt talk much unless he is talked to. The shell takes the shape of a cone and even though he is one of the smaller ones, his shell is very tough for his size giving her immunity to A rank and below elemental techniques and up to A rank Taijutsu (this does not include eig taijutsu) when he withdraws into her shell, this being his defense (This is excluding all techniques that came from below as he is vulnerable to all attacks from below due to the shell not covering the bottom half). Just like every cone snail he has a harpoon for a tongue his being the twice the size of a senbon. Allowing him to launch his harpoon (Tongue) towards an opponent with great speed twice as fast as Aquarius. Whats unique about this cone snail, is unlike all the other cone snails. His harpoon (tongue) contains no poison, but his harpoon shoots the fastest and is the strongest for its size being S rank in strength. Sagittarius is known for quick assassinations due to its incredible archer skills. He is able to track things faster then a normal shinobi (That of a tai master) , and can see twice as far as a regular shinobi. This is due to his harpoon (tongue) being able to reach long range unlike most cone snails as all of them except for one (excluding himself) reach up to mid range. His harpoon can pierce the flesh with extreme ease and like all of the cone snails. He can either hook his prey/opponent and retract his harpoon causing the opponent to retract alongside it, or not hook his opponent and retract it either way. Sagittarius tongue is extremely flexible, which wont allow his tongue to be severed unless its by strong piercing techniques (most wind, and lightning techniques (A rank and below). Kunais, Shurikens, swords, etc dont work)
Note: Can only be summoned once and can stay on the field for 4 turns
Note: The harpoon strike counts as a turn
Note: This cone snail does not contain any poison in its harpoon thus its only lethal if struck in a place such as the heart or brain.
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(Kuchiyose/Ototon Genjutsu: Magdala Curtain) Summoning/Sound Illusionary Art: Magdala Curtian
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-20 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: This sound technique dwells in the realm of illusions, tricking the opponents eyes. The user will draw blood (by biting their thumb or whatever means) and smearing it on their palm, following right after the user will clap his hands initiating a summon The opponent will see a large box/casket emerge from the ground around the user in an upright position, being the "Grave of Maria". Once the casket fully emerges, a singing lady will emerge out of the box/casket producing an hymm from her mouth inducing the opponent into the genjutsu. As the opponent hears the singing/hymm from maria, in the blink of an eye the user and whomever else the user decide will have disappeared from the opponent line of sight. This is due to the hymm producing a "barrier" around the user. Which in short, effects the opponent in two ways. Even though the opponent cant see the user, if the user was to step out of the 5 meters (The barrier covers that far only), they will become visible to the opponent once more, making the genjutsu break. Grave of Maria Though a summon, she is very durable, able to fully tank one A rank jutsu without any damage. Though S ranks will destroy her, or after 2 attacks of A rank damage. She will continue to sing long as the user pumps chakra into her. Though this technique is useless against dojutsu users, and sensors as they can still sense your location. If the opponent was to throw something out of the area (barrier), it would risk giving out their location but it will not stop the effect of the genjutsu. This technique is also used to trick the opponent into thinking they also left or even to protect a loved one.
Note: Can use twice with a 4 turn cool down
Note: Last 3 turns before it ends
Note: Can be used to make allies invisible as well
Note: No sound jutsu in the same or next turn.
Note: While active this constantly takes up one of the three jutsu per turns.
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Dropping Crown Clown If Below Is Approved
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: N/a (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: Leech is an weapon (eyepatch) created to help maintain the chakra output of the user. This concept is the same as leg weights. The user wears the legweights so much that, they feel, and walk normal with the leg weights, but when they are removed, their speed increased. The eye patch works in a similar fashion. The eye patch has what seems to be 4 mini sharp mouthes, and 4 eyes on it, which when it comes in contact with chakra, it reacts. The eye patch or leech consumes the chakra inside the users body. This takes place throughout the day, but due to the large chakra reserves of the user, the user does not notice it because the body is now used to it and recovers that chakra without noticing. This is to keep the users chakra flow steady and peaceful. The only time the user notices when their chakra is being depleted is during battle or training. This is due to the exert of extra chakra, where in that case the chakra does not recover versus normal days when they are exerting their chakra reserve. The eye patch will not only absorbs the users chakra but any foreign chakra that exist inside the users body the moment it enters it. This can be used against yamanaka clan jutsus, regular genjutsus, etc. This of course does not include sharingan jutsus, as they are in a different realm. This eye patch can not be turned on or off, so the user will always have chakra drained from them as long as they are wearing the eye patch. The chakra the eye patch absorbs does not store inside the eye patch but simply disperses once consumed.
Note: This weapon is always active, and must state so at the start or in the users bio
Note: If the eye patch consumes foreign chakra, it counts as a turn, but does not effect time frame as it is done the moment it enters the body
Note: Taking off the eye patch will not result in replenishing chakra
Note: Only obsorbs foreign jutsu A rank and below
Approved - Added note. You should of made a surge of chakra effect for when you take it off to really resemble Ken-chan
(Ensui Katatsumuri Kuchiyose: Iteza) Cone Snail Summoning: SagittariusSummon Contract Approved Here:
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(Ensui Katatsumuri Kuchiyose: Iteza) Cone Snail Summoning: Sagittarius
Type: Summon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/a
Description: Sagittarius is the archer and assasin of the cone snail family. Due to their fighting mechanism this is very important and easily places him at the top with other with special abilities due to his quickness alongside his extreme great accuracy,and eye sight. Sagittaruis is 3 feet long and 5 feet tall (The shell is included in the size), Being able to ride or attach himself to the user for mobility. His regular body is a faded black color though you can never see his full body as its attached to the shell, you can tell by his eyes as they stick out from the shell along with his mouth. His Shell is a midnight black color with small white patterns all around it with the sagittaruis symbol () on the side of his shell. His voice is very low but stern. He doesnt talk much unless he is talked to. The shell takes the shape of a cone and even though he is one of the smaller ones, his shell is very tough for his size giving her immunity to A rank and below elemental techniques and up to A rank Taijutsu (this does not include eig taijutsu) when he withdraws into her shell, this being his defense (This is excluding all techniques that came from below as he is vulnerable to all attacks from below due to the shell not covering the bottom half). Just like every cone snail he has a harpoon for a tongue his being the twice the size of a senbon. Allowing him to launch his harpoon (Tongue) towards an opponent with great speed twice as fast as Aquarius. Whats unique about this cone snail, is unlike all the other cone snails. His harpoon (tongue) contains no poison, but his harpoon shoots the fastest and is the strongest for its size being S rank in strength. Sagittarius is known for quick assassinations due to its incredible archer skills. He is able to track things faster then a normal shinobi (1 Tomoe Sharingan tracking speed) , and can see twice as far as a regular shinobi. This is due to his harpoon (tongue) being able to reach long range unlike most cone snails as all of them except for one (excluding himself) reach up to mid range. His harpoon can pierce the flesh with extreme ease and like all of the cone snails. He can either hook his prey/opponent and retract his harpoon causing the opponent to retract alongside it, or not hook his opponent and retract it either way. Sagittarius tongue is extremely flexible, which wont allow his tongue to be severed unless its by strong piercing techniques (most wind, and lightning techniques. Kunais, Shurikens, swords, etc dont work)
Note: Can only be summoned once and can stay on the field for 5 turns
Note: The harpoon strike counts as a turn
Note: This cone snail does not contain any poison in its harpoon thus its only lethal if struck in a place such as the heart or brain.
Declined - how can a 5ft snail attack to a user who is probably ony 6ft tall at most xd don't compare to the sharingan, compare it to a tai master for tracking speeds.
(Ototon Genjutsu: Magdala Curtain) Sound Illusionary Art: Magdala Curtian
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-20 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: This sound technique dwells in the realm of illusions, tricking the opponents eyes. The user will draw blood (by biting their thumb or whatever means) and smearing it on their palm, following right after the user will clap his hands. This is the induction of the genjutsu in reality. The opponent will see a large box/casket emerge from the ground around the user in an upright position, being the "Grave of Maria". Once the casket fully emerges, a singing lady will emerge out of the box/casket producing an hymm from her mouth. This is the true illusion. As the opponent hears the singing/hymm from maria, in the blink of an eye his opponent will have disappeared from his line of sight. This is due to the hymm producing a "barrier" around the user. Which in short effects the opponent in two ways. Even though the opponent cant see the user, if the user was so step out of the 5 meters (The barrier), they will become visible to the opponent once more, making the genjutsu break. Grave of Maria is simply an illusion, thus can not be physically harm, thus will cause attacks to bypass her. She will continue to sing long as the user pumps chakra into her. Though this technique is useless against dojutsu users, and sensors as they can still sense your location. If the opponent was to throw something out of the area (barrier), it would risk giving out their location but it will not stop the effect of the genjutsu. This technique is also used to trick the opponent into thinking they also left or even to protect a loved one.
Note: Can use twice with a 4 turn cool down
Note: Last 3 turns before it ends
Note: Can be used to make allys invisible aswell
Note: No sound jutsu in the same or next turn.
Note: Cant use another technique unless he technique will cancel
Declined - need to make it a bit clearer, is something actually summoned or is Maria and her song all an illusion along with the illusion blocking sight of you while by maria?
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Type: Summon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/a
Description: Sagittarius is the archer and assasin of the cone snail family. Due to their fighting mechanism this is very important and easily places him at the top with other with special abilities due to his quickness alongside his extreme great accuracy,and eye sight. Sagittaruis is 2 feet long and 2 feet tall (The shell is included in the size), Being able to ride or attach himself to the user for mobility. His regular body is a faded black color though you can never see his full body as its attached to the shell, you can tell by his eyes as they stick out from the shell along with his mouth. His Shell is a midnight black color with small white patterns all around it with the sagittaruis symbol (

Note: Can only be summoned once and can stay on the field for 4 turns
Note: The harpoon strike counts as a turn
Note: This cone snail does not contain any poison in its harpoon thus its only lethal if struck in a place such as the heart or brain.
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(Kuchiyose/Ototon Genjutsu: Magdala Curtain) Summoning/Sound Illusionary Art: Magdala Curtian
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-20 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: This sound technique dwells in the realm of illusions, tricking the opponents eyes. The user will draw blood (by biting their thumb or whatever means) and smearing it on their palm, following right after the user will clap his hands initiating a summon The opponent will see a large box/casket emerge from the ground around the user in an upright position, being the "Grave of Maria". Once the casket fully emerges, a singing lady will emerge out of the box/casket producing an hymm from her mouth inducing the opponent into the genjutsu. As the opponent hears the singing/hymm from maria, in the blink of an eye the user and whomever else the user decide will have disappeared from the opponent line of sight. This is due to the hymm producing a "barrier" around the user. Which in short, effects the opponent in two ways. Even though the opponent cant see the user, if the user was to step out of the 5 meters (The barrier covers that far only), they will become visible to the opponent once more, making the genjutsu break. Grave of Maria Though a summon, she is very durable, able to fully tank one A rank jutsu without any damage. Though S ranks will destroy her, or after 2 attacks of A rank damage. She will continue to sing long as the user pumps chakra into her. Though this technique is useless against dojutsu users, and sensors as they can still sense your location. If the opponent was to throw something out of the area (barrier), it would risk giving out their location but it will not stop the effect of the genjutsu. This technique is also used to trick the opponent into thinking they also left or even to protect a loved one.
Note: Can use twice with a 4 turn cool down
Note: Last 3 turns before it ends
Note: Can be used to make allies invisible as well
Note: No sound jutsu in the same or next turn.
Note: While active this constantly takes up one of the three jutsu per turns.
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Dropping Crown Clown If Below Is Approved
(Hiru) Leech(Oukan Doukeyakusha) Crown Clown
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: (+200 Per Activation) (-20 Per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: This weapon is actually an armor that was designed many years ago by suna ninja who specializes in cloth jutsus in the looks of a regular clothing around the users body. Asch, the 9th Kazekage looked more into this development, studying multiple ways to insert chakra, and channel small amounts of chakra overtime. The material is infused with high amounts of chakra that lays dormant until active and rare fabric to the ninja world, making it nearly impossible to rip or tear. When activated, Crown Clown acts as a body-armored weapon/armor, forming a white-hooded cowl and sleeve infused with chakra which covers his shoulders and right arm with a masquerade-style mask that is always affixed to the cowl. Normally when not active this weapon/armor is worn as more so half clothing around the body. The user will activate this weapon/armor by releasing the dormant chakra all throughout the weapon/armor into the user, replenishing a moderate amount of chakra, and can even act as a kai, causing the weapon/armor to extend around the body. The right arm of the weapon/armor will cover the right arm of the user and the mask will equip onto the users face with dark lens from the outside, in, reducing bright lights tremendously not even being phased by flashbombs of the sorts. This allows the user to fully use and activate the abilities of this weapon/armor. The user will manipulate the armor to extend and cover around his body to defend from attacks without him doing anything.This is due to the armor nullifying any chakra that comes in contact with it and even the impact, without having the user take any damage. This does not work against all type of jutsus. As Earth and water chakra can be nullified, the force would still damage the user making it useless to use against such techniques. Also it does not protect against sound techniques as it has no physical form. Anything such as fire, lightning, or wind would be negated and dispersed soon as it touches the armor of the body. The armor can only defend against B rank techniques and below and will not weaken jutsus stronger than that.
Note: This technique once active, remains active till the usage for it is used
Note: Can only defend against jutsus a max of 4 turns
Note: Each defensive move from this armor counts as a move
Note: The activation of this technique can be used as a Kai for equal or lesser rank genjutsu (Excluding MS genjutsu)
Note: Can only be active once per battle
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Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: N/a (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: Leech is an weapon (eyepatch) created to help maintain the chakra output of the user. This concept is the same as leg weights. The user wears the legweights so much that, they feel, and walk normal with the leg weights, but when they are removed, their speed increased. The eye patch works in a similar fashion. The eye patch has what seems to be 4 mini sharp mouthes, and 4 eyes on it, which when it comes in contact with chakra, it reacts. The eye patch or leech consumes the chakra inside the users body. This takes place throughout the day, but due to the large chakra reserves of the user, the user does not notice it because the body is now used to it and recovers that chakra without noticing. This is to keep the users chakra flow steady and peaceful. The only time the user notices when their chakra is being depleted is during battle or training. This is due to the exert of extra chakra, where in that case the chakra does not recover versus normal days when they are exerting their chakra reserve. The eye patch will not only absorbs the users chakra but any foreign chakra that exist inside the users body the moment it enters it. This can be used against yamanaka clan jutsus, regular genjutsus, etc. This of course does not include sharingan jutsus, as they are in a different realm. This eye patch can not be turned on or off, so the user will always have chakra drained from them as long as they are wearing the eye patch. The chakra the eye patch absorbs does not store inside the eye patch but simply disperses once consumed.
Note: This weapon is always active, and must state so at the start or in the users bio
Note: If the eye patch consumes foreign chakra, it counts as a turn, but does not effect time frame as it is done the moment it enters the body
Note: Taking off the eye patch will not result in replenishing chakra
Note: Only obsorbs foreign jutsu A rank and below
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Approved - Added note. You should of made a surge of chakra effect for when you take it off to really resemble Ken-chan
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