[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Excālibur1]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Eikō no taiyōkō-sen) - Fire Release: Glory Sun Rays
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user releases powerful heat waves out of his body which soon cover part of the sun rays falling on the earth surrounding the user. Then with the sun rays within his control, he can choose to either make the rays fall on the opponent covering all sides or focus it on a single point. The heat waves carry enough heat to evaporate any water near it and can cause high burns on the opponent as the sun ray's temperature will be increased due to the the heat waves.

Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Requires three turns cool down
Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur

Declined
I'm confused. "Cover part of the sun's rays falling on the user?" How do you even dictate this? You can't just control the sun. And what if it wasn't sunny, but raining? Clarify the jutsu better.

Resubmitting the above technique

(Katon: Eikō no taiyōkō-sen) - Fire Release: Glory Sun Rays
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user releases powerful heat waves out of his body into the air directly above him. Then when the sun rays start falling on the said heat, it gets amplified to a higher temperature which the user can manipulate it in such a way that he could send the heat in a concentrated manner towards his opponent or just send it in a wide manner making it very hot. The heat waves carry enough heat to evaporate any water near it and can cause high burns on the opponent in case the concentrated rays are used

Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Requires three turns cool down
Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur

Declined - similar to a really old cj

(Genjutsu:Haipā sando) - Illusionary Arts: Hyper Acidity
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a series of two hand seals and channels his chakra into the brain of his opponent and alters his sense of feeling in such a way that the opponent would suddenly start feeling something eating away inside of his stomach. He would feel like as if his acidic secretion of his stomach had increased and because of this, suffers through all the side effects of acidity. He would have a headache and would feel like puking. As time goes, the pain keeps increasing until he passes out under the mental stress.

Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur
Note: Can only be used thrice in a battle
Note: The opponent passes out in 2 turns

Declined - similar to existing gen

 

[Leathercandle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting:
(Kenjutsu: Senshi no supiritto) - Kenjutsu: Warrior's Spirit
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 0
Description:
The user focuses their mind on their swordsmanship and sword, letting their warrior instincts take over. The user channels chakra through all of their body, creating a visible layer of it on their skin, before it extends to their sword. A bright flash of light goes off which has similar effects to that of a flash bang once the chakra finishes covering the sword and body, yet it is unable to cause any damage/effect the user or their allies. From then on, arms made of chakra holding swords made of chakra (exactly the same properties as a normal sword) can spurt out from anywhere on the user, and can preform kenjutsu techniques that the user knows. The arms appear passively, though the techniques they preform cost a move. The user can sustain up to 3 extra arms and swords at once. The blades wielded by these arms can phase through the user, leaving them unharmed. These arms can also throw their sword at a target up to mid range away.
-Must be taught by Leathercandle
-Can be used twice per battle
-The user may sustain up to 3 arms at once
-Over the course of a battle, the user can create a maximum of 6 arms
-The effects of this technique last 3 turns unless released early
-This technique is self-sustaining, meaning the user can preform other techniques while the arms and swords are in existence

Declined - stabbing through yourself and going unharmed doesn't make sense.

Resubmitting:
(Kenjutsu: Senshi no supiritto) - Kenjutsu: Warrior's Spirit
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 0
Description:
The user focuses their mind on their swordsmanship and sword, letting their warrior instincts take over. The user channels chakra through all of their body, creating a visible layer of it on their skin, before it extends to their sword. A bright flash of light goes off which has similar effects to that of a flash bang once the chakra finishes covering the sword and body, yet it is unable to cause any damage/effect the user or their allies. From then on, arms made of chakra holding swords made of chakra (exactly the same properties as a normal sword) can spurt out from anywhere on the user, and can preform kenjutsu techniques that the user knows. The arms appear passively, though the techniques they preform cost a move. The user can sustain up to 3 extra arms and swords at once. These arms can also throw their sword at a target up to mid range away.
-Must be taught by Leathercandle
-Can be used twice per battle
-The user may sustain up to 3 arms at once
-Over the course of a battle, the user can create a maximum of 6 arms
-The effects of this technique last 3 turns unless released early
-This technique is self-sustaining, meaning the user can preform other techniques while the arms and swords are in existence
- The arms are not able to perform elemental kenjutsu attacks

Approved - added the note

(I removed the bit about the swords being able to phase through the user)


(Burasutobūtsu) - Blast Boots
Type: Weapon, Supplementary, Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
Blast Boots are, as made clear in the name, a pair of boots. These boots have multiple compartments in them for different uses.

Ninja tools/technology in the boot
The sole of the bottom of the boot has a small compartment in the center of it which can slide open and release small senbon about the length of a nail. 20 of these senbon are loaded in each boot. The left and right sides of the bottom of the boot (facing outwards) can release smoke or mist canisters which can flood all of mid range with whatever was released. One mist and one smoke canister is loaded on each side of each boot, for a total of 4 smoke and 4 mist. The toe of the bottom of each boot can slide open, revealing a sharpened piece of metal which can be shot forwards up to mid range, or kept in the boot sticking out to create potentially lethal kicks. Each piece of metal can be retracted back into the boot if it was only revealed and not shot out. The entire boot is fireproof, and despite the wide array of tools in the boot, the base weight of it before all of that is so light that it is about the same weight as the average shoe.

How chakra plays in:
The user can channel wind or fire chakra into the boot, allowing it to catch fire or be covered in sharp raging winds. They can also channel raw chakra into a specific location or all around it to give off a blast of chakra that can be used offensively or to blast the user off the ground or in a certain direction. If said blast of chakra hits someone, it does B ranked damage. The blast is so strong that it can push the user up to 20 meters in the air, through mud, dirt, and other obstacles if need be.

-Can only be taught to use by Leathercandle
-The blast from the boots can be used 5 times per battle, and cannot be used twice in the same move

Declined - the first part of the abilities is fine, just say they abilities cost a move per turn. The second part is actually a combination of 3 cj that i own, Power of the fire dragon, power of the wind dragon, and fire stream. Just used in your boots.

(Raiton: Harukusumasshu) - Lightning Style: Hulk Smash
Type: Offensive
Rank: F
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description:
The user channels lightning chakra through their arms and hands, forcing them to vibrate slightly and visibly give off small stray bolts of lightning here and there (purely aesthetic unless someone is within a food of the user, where it will give them painful zaps and numb them). The user then clasps their hands together, and slams them down onto a foe from above. The lightning chakra added into it has enough voltage to numb and paralyze things as large as entire elephants and whales. The danger of this technique is attributed to the impact of the hands though. The lightning chakra enters the user's muscles and stimulates them, increasing their size dramatically momentarily, which creates the power. The lightning chakra also enhances the speed of this attack, as the muscles are so developed which allows greater control over them. It could also be attributed to the general truth that lightning techniques are often of very high speeds due to the way the chakra in them works. This attack can shatter entire skeletons by having the skull smash down into the opponent's body, and destroy their ribs and spine, and then bones below. With so much excess lightning chakra running through the user's body after this technique is preformed, the user becomes immune to B ranked and below lightning techniques for one turn.
-Can only be taught by Leathercandle
-Can only be used twice per battle, and requires a two turn cool down to use again
-The user suffers 30 damage after using this due to so much chakra running through them violently

Declined - you do know this is pretty much what the raikage's armor does? xd

 

[Zaphkiel]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fūton: Shingan no Dai Sanji) - Wind Style: God Eye Calamity
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A/S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30/40
Damage: 60/80
Description: A highly effective and difficult technique involving one's Fūton chakra, God Eye Calamity is just as dangerous as its name suggests. However, depending on the user's mastery of the element Shingan no Dai Sanji can actually have adverse effects. The style is divided into two ranks for adepts and novices of Fūton release. The first variant of A ranked allows someone without a Fūton specialty to channel their chakra into their head and neck area. From there they will have their eyes focus on a target within mid ranged of their vision while amassing the chakra into the forehead region right above both eyes. Once the target is set the user will fire a highly condensed tubular shape of wind about an inch thick and slightly translucent, with similar appearance to the Wind Blade, at said target. This tube of wind will act like a lance, able to pierce through objects and people like a high caliber round. It's a projectile attack rather than stream and as noted before, is A ranked in strength. The charging sequence doesn't take long and behaves just as fast any other chakra molding technique and the firing is just as fast as any other wind technique. However, for those who possess exceptional control over Fūton they have access to the higher ranking side of the technique, the 'Calamity' side per say. This S ranked version requires the formation of the hand seals (Ram and Boar) to properly guide the chakra through the user's body and have it culminate in the head area safely. Once this is done the user will release a blindingly white beam of condensed wind and chakra which is 4 feet thick as opposed to its weaker variant. This version is a stream type and can be prolonged so long as the user keeps fueling chakra (-20) to keep it active. This S ranked version can reach up to long ranged and is able to grind away structures and people to nothing like an eraser beam. Both A and S ranked attacks are able to adopt a slight curve in their trajectories to hit targets that may be hiding but this curve has to be initiated at launch and cannot be sharper than a ninety degree turn.
Note(s):
- A ranked version can be done 3x, with a turn cool down.
- S ranked verison can only be done 2x and requires a Fūton affinity to perform, with a two turn cool down.
- After the S ranked version is used the user is restricted to A ranked Fūton during the turn performed and the next.

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Declined - pick a single rank O_<

New concept, didn't mind to bold all.

(Fūton/Katon: Shingan no Dai Sanji) - Wind & Fire Style: God Eye Calamity
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A highly effective and difficult technique involving both one's Fūton & Katon chakra, God Eye Calamity is just as dangerous as its name suggests. However, depending on the user's mastery of the aforementioned elements Shingan no Dai Sanji can actually have adverse effects. The style is divided into two parts. The first component begins with the molding of one's Fūton specialty to channel their chakra into their head and neck area. From there they will have their eyes or any other extra sensory means focus on a target within mid ranged of their vision (or range of whatever sensory the user is capable of) while amassing the chakra into the forehead region right above both eyes. Once the target is set the user will fire a highly condensed tubular shape of wind about an inch thick and a meter long and slightly translucent, with similar translucent appearance to the Wind Blade, at said target. This tube of wind will act like a lance, able to pierce through objects and people like a high caliber round. It's a projectile attack rather than a stream one and is A ranked by individually. Once this wind lance is fired the user will form the Seal of Confrontation and focus his Katon chakra within the tube of wind and have both chakra natures co-exist without irritating the other, think of water running through a pipe. The Katon chakra serves as the real killer side to the technique as once the wind tube connects with a solid object the wind is uncontrollably blown from shape which in turn agitates the Katon chakra and causes a dense and powerful deflagration which stretches up to short range. I say deflagration instead of explosion because, the resulting detonation has just the right amount of Katon and Futon chakra that it rages with pure wind/fire might that sends slight shock waves of heat and wind throughout impact area (short ranged) that can affect opponents that weren't even directly hit by the attack, and then it all dies out in less than a second. That translated into the time frame logic means its quick, hot, and powerful, but also very fast (the explosion, not the projectile) and can be over before it was even realized. The Katon chakra inserted into the Futon tube is A ranked in strength which in turn makes the technique and overall S rank. Shingan no Dai Sanji is also able to adopt a slight curve in its trajectory to hit targets that may be hiding but this curve has to be initiated at launch and cannot be sharper than a ninety degree turn.
Note(s):
- Can only be used 2x
- Requires a turn cool down
- No Futon or Katon techniques above A ranked next turn.

Declined - two chakra natures requires Y/Y even if the wind is a projectile. If not, use the basic wind blade jutsu of some sorts and have a fire jutsu that ignites it.


(Kōan Genjutsu: Jōmyō Inin)- Koan Illusion: Mortal Dictata
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Jōmyō Inin or "Mortal Dictata" is a Genjutsu developed by a skilled Uchiha during one of his episodes of meditation. The nature of the illusion was a paradox placed on his mind that tampered with how he perceived opportunity and misfortune. He later recorded these feelings and became able to replicate them in the minds of others through chakra, making it a Genjutsu. The technique begins with a Ram hand seal and placing the chakra on the opponent(s)' mind. The illusion has two parts; fortune or misfortune, and will be highlighted below.

Fortune | Kōun: This side of the illusion tampers with the opponent's visual cortex where it completely changes the appearance of the user and his techniques. The user will appear gravely injured and weak in the opponent's eyes. This can be anything from missing limbs to profuse bleeding. Again, this is a visual illusion is does not actually tamper with the opponent's cognitive perception of the user, it only provides visual stimuli that would lead him/her to believe the opponent is actually injured. The second use to this side of the technique is how it affects the visual information of the user's jutsu as well. In other words, a grand fireball from the user may appear like a measly fireball to the opponent.

Misfortune | Fukō: This the second side of the illusion changes the opponent(s)' visual perception of the user and his techniques so that they appear much more superior to theirs. The user may appear godlike, in their peak condition and appear very capable of combat. This also applies to the techniques where a simple wave of water may appear even more devastating, like tsunami level. Of course the illusion doesn't actually change the rank and damage of the user's techniques, it only changes the appearance.

Both sides, Kōun & Fukō, can be used simultaneously, but on different minds. Meaning, the user may place Fukō on one opponent and Kōun on another at the same time they activate this technique. This can lead to incoherence between allies and further aid the user. However, it is impossible to cast both sides of the illusion on one person at the same. However, if this double use is used the technique is used twice and hence can't be used again. But if the user applies one at a time he may wait a while before using it again. ime.

Note(s):
- Can only be used 2x.
- Kōun & Fukō lasts 2 turns each on the opponent(s), with a three turn countdown between each individual use.
- No Genjutsu above B ranked for a turn after the illusion times out.


Declined - It's an S rank gen with hardly any restrictions, this would take and F rank surge to break so i wont approve stuff like this lightly. Now the fact that you say it makes your jutsu look godlike, how does this work, Godlike to me is light and shiney all holy power, where as a small fireball getting bigger is a different sotry, but tit wouldn't just be an illusion on the jutsu it would effect all the surroundings around the jutsu also, if create awave of water with this jutsu, then use the second effect to make it look bigger and stronger it would also desimate the terrain as it goes, taking alot of skill and concerntration to keep up such an illusion, you'd have to constantly maintain a high level of chakra control which would limit what you could actually do while this is active.

(Suiton/Raiton: Kamisori no ejji de) - Water/Lightning Release: On The Razor's Edge
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs a series of two hand seals and channels his chakra in to a water source of any type in the vicinity or in to the falling rain, should the user know rain release. Once they have done so they will exert control over the water forming a spiraling vortex around the opponent. The vortex is self sustaining once formed around the opponent and will continue to shrink close to them each moment that passes, at which time the user now free to attack once more due to the nature of the vortex will make one more handseal using an ability similar to the fangs of lightning technique, he will cause bolts of lightning to strike the edges of the vortex, before finishing with a final handseal that uses shape manipulation to take control of the lightning shaping it in to a multitude of razor sharp spikes similar to Chidori senbon, this happens as the vortex reaches the opponent, crushing and impaling them inside it's powerful shell.
Note(s):
- Can only be used once in a battle
- The height of the vortex is a grand total of 30 meters with a total diameter of only 3 meters. Making it very difficult to escape by going upwards.

Declined - similar to existing jutsu.

 

[Mellow]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ototon Genjutsu: Ro-ringu Ikazuchi)- Sound Release Illusionary Art: Rolling Thunder
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: By releasing their sound chakra into the atmosphere, the user would be "feeding" the clouds sound energy to be used for the jutsus purpose. Which is the ability to magnify the effects of thunder. The sporadic thunder noises upon areas that match this jutsus necessity become the jutsus vocal point and source for this jutsu to take effect (these weather patterns may be man-made, or natural) . The user then uses the high resonance and amplitude of the thunder's noise as a medium for casting genjutsu. The effects of the genjutsu would be to simply cause an unbearable amount of pain which would feel as if the opponent's brain was repeatedly being beaten into, giving the effects of thunder and vibrations "stuck" in the opponents head, believing to feel these intense effects on their brain. With this intense throbbing within the victims head, it would nullify advance cognitive ability and quick thinking for physical reaction. Along with the pain distorting the opponent's ability to mold chakra effectively (won't be able to perform S-Ranks and above) due to this intense pain occurring inside one of the important chakra points of the body; the brain.

Note: This jutsu can only be used if clouds are present.
Note: Can only be used once every 3 turns
Note: The thunder is continuous until the clouds are blown away
Note: Can only be taught by LaserCircus

Declined - similar to existing genjutsu

 

[Venom]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Seiryoku no Toride)- Earth Release: Might of the Fortress
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A (+10 to chakra cost to techniques)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user activates an ability that increases the hardness of their earth-based techniques (including KG/CE) to solely increase their defensive abilities. This technique employs the same hardening as that seen in Earth Release: Earth Spear (Kakuzu’s signature technique). Techniques affected by this jutsu look much darker on creation, with the earth very nearly becoming black in appearance. While this technique doesn’t boost the damage of techniques, it allows them to defend against boosted attacks of most kinds (still following elemental S/W). This hardening grants the technique the ability to defend against techniques with 20 more damage points than usual. Activating this ability does not require any time whatsoever and is instant. This is because it does not do anything when used independently, and its effects are only realized when another earth-based technique is used. This ability can only be applied to jutsus that are solid and have their own physical form. This technique cannot be used on anything that deals damage directly (the damage part of the technique must be “N/A” or zero). Simply put, this technique is purely defensive in usage.

Notes:
Lasts for four turns
Can only be used twice per battle
Will not work on mud or sand-based techniques
Elemental S/W remains unchanged

Declined - seems like a copy of Erzo's jutsu but using earth instead of wind.

 

[Matt]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Doton: Gifuto bāto | Earth Release: Gift Bad
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
Gifuto bāto is a technique based directly from the added weight techniques used from Iwagakure, though with this variant the user applies the affects to a specific area. To be exact, the user fills the ground within a short range radius around himself with Doton chakra to create a dark circular zone which holds the affects of the technique. Anyone/anything that steps into the darkened area would suddenly have their weight increased substantially, forcing them to the ground from the weight + gravity pulling them down. The newfound weight of the victim(s) would be enough to even break the ground, essentially burying them into the rock as they're pinned down. The affects don't stop at just the person/thing the weight is applied to, but also everything on that person. This means if a Shinobi wielding weapons and such were to step into Gifuto bāto, not only would their bodies be affected by the weight change, but any weapon directly connected would also be weighed down. Though very affective for detaining people, this technique has its flaws and openings just as any other. The affects are only applied if someone touches the darkened area, thus objects/people/animals flying over it wouldn't be affected unless they landed. This leaves openings for projectiles or airborne opponents to reach the user without being affected.

Note: Lasts 3 turns
Note: Usable 2 times
Note: No Jutsu above S-rank while active
Note: Can only be taught by BlackCrow

Declined - love the idea, reminds me of FT, but make it so i can only be active for 4 turns in total, takes up one of your moves per turn while active and state how many X it increases their weight. Lastly just describe you infuse your chakra into the ground 5m around you and when they step on it the chakra is released up through their legs first increasing their weight and into the rest of their body, bringing them down to the ground.

 

[Corazon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ototon: Levicorpus) - Sound Release: Levicorpus
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A rather weak Sound jutsu, this is used to cause a foe small annoyance by lifting him in the air. This works by the user speaking a Sound (Levicorpus) and causing a set of waves to form around the opponent's leg, isolating the lower leg with a powerful wave. The purpose of this isn't to deal damage, however; after forming the wave, the user then causes it to move, the isolated leg moving with it, flipping him upside down in the process. Causing no damage, this hindering Sound jutsu is used to cause annoyance to the opponent as it lifts him into the air, slowly hoistering him higher and higher. This is ideal to use against an opponent as they perform handseals, interrupting them and forcing a momentary pause in their actions as they are flipped upside down. The user must also accompany this phrase with a jerking movement, done with their hand or a held item.

‡ Declined ‡ Uh....

 

[Negative Knight]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

‡ New Cycle ‡ ​

The new cycle starts on 24/03/2016 (at 16:00 GMT +1) and ends on 30/03/2016. The thread will be closed up to a week so we can check any remaining submissions and then it will be re-opened.

Rules of all upcoming cycles
1) Checking will happen throughout the week rather than at the end. Only make your submission when its complete as its liable to being checked there and then. No need to rush like crazy to submit your stuff since as you've seen, I check things in a random order.

2) To avoid clutter you're only allowed to make one post. This means if your post is checked and it only contains one technique, you cannot make another post to submit additional techniques. If you wish to submit the full three techniques, I suggest you post them all in one post when all of them are ready.

3) Of course this means resubmissions in the same cycle are no longer allowed.

4) You cannot edit your post if even one of your techniques has been checked by a moderator.

5) Techniques I deem too long for no reason will be declined automatically.

6) If you get a decline don't VM, PM or IM any mods about it. We've been pretty relaxed with the red rule but a lot of people have been taking advantage lately.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Ekitai Haretsu) Water Release: Liquid Rupture
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:This technique employs the real-life phenomenon of inertial cavitation, the sudden collapse of voids within a mass of water, to enhance the power of the user's Water techniques. During the creation of a water technique, the user will form the Bird handseal, allowing them to create throughout the mass of water several "voids," which are essentially several pockets of air throughout the mass of water. The pockets are created through intricate shape manipulation of the water, manipulating the water to move around within itself to form these pockets, though this process occurs near instantly. This technique enhances the damage done by the water jutsu through the collapse of these pockets once the water technique strikes a target; the collapse of the pockets, the inertial cavitation, releases a tremendous amount of pressure(A-rank), causing tremendous damage to those caught within the water technique. Liquid Rupture, as the name implies, can only be induced into water techniques in liquid form; mists or ice would not be compatible.
-Can only be taught by Riker
-Must have mastered Suiton
-Can only be used three times per battle
-Can only be induced on S-rank and below techniques

‡ Declined ‡ This is cool but McRazor already has this techinique.

(Genjutsu: XO/Hosuto)Illusionary Arts: XO/The Host
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:This technique is a double layered Genjutsu, with each layer being A-rank due to their complexity. The user will form the Tiger-Hare handseals and induce the illusion, with first layer immediately taking effect. The first layer, XO, affects the target's memories and moods. XO causes the target to believe and remember their life to be extremely depressing, with details of their life being changed to one of extreme poverty, isolation, and with the threat of eviction looming over them. The sudden replacement of memories for these depressing ones cause the target to become emotionally shut down, immobilizing them as their minds become to numb to will them to move.

Should the XO layer be broken, the second layer, The Host, kicks in. The Host causes a trance-like state of euphoria to fill the target's body, similar to the effects of an intense drug high. This intense euphoria enhances, rather than hinders, the target's five senses, but is in no way beneficial. Sensations that the target perceives become multiplied and compounded onto each other. For example, when the target hears a sound, it will appear to be coming from multiple places at once, echoing off of each other and create a cacophonous mess. Vision and touch would similarly be hindered, with images the target perceives being multiplied and compounded onto each other, with sensations of touch feeling as though they are coming from all over the user's body. Essentially, The Host ruins the target's ability to perceive their environment by causing the mind to believe the potency of their five senses have increased to a point where the sensations they pick up become indecipherable and confusing. This causes extreme disorientation to the target, making movement extremely difficult and leaving them dangerously vulnerable if not countered.

-Can only be used once per battle
-Technique takes up to of the user's move slots when used
-No Genjutsu of any kind in the following turn
-Technique lasts for four turns total (unless countered)

‡ Declined ‡ Lol at the first part. Not allowing it. I like the 2nd part but it's too powerful as it is. Mainly the sense of sight. I'm fine with the other senses being they way they are but tone down the sense of sight.



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(Fuuinjutsu: Negasonic Jūdai no Dantō)Sealing Arts: Negasonic Teenage Warhead
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will form the Dragon-Tiger-Snake handseals and release from their bodies several red, transparent barriers. The barriers are extremely condensed and malleable, giving the appearance of several "streaks" or "bands" that surround the user's body in a spinning motion. Three created in total, one of the barriers circulate around the user horizontally and two of them diagonally(one clockwise and one counterclockwise). The barriers are all spaced three feet apart, with the one closest to the user located a foot away from the user's body, covering a total area of four feet. The velocity and strength of the three barriers causes them to resonate off chakra, with the rapid speed causing these resonations to overlap and appear to meld together into a force field. The three spinning barriers offer protection to the user, preventing any objects or techniques of lesser rank from penetrating through and touching the user. The technique also offers offensive usages, as any persons that make contact with the barriers would be met with damage through the concussive force of the barriers slamming into their bodies at high speed, sending them flying backwards from the damage. Due to being transparent, the barriers do not impair the user's vision.
-Can only be taught by Riker
-Must have mastered basic Fuuinjutsu
-Can only be used twice per battle with a two turn cooldown between usages. Each usage lasts for 3 turns.
-The barriers are capable of moving with the user, remaining in their perspective positions. As they are manifested around the user's body and are self-sustaining(due to being barriers), he is free to perform other techniques while it is active.

‡ Approved ‡

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](Genjutsu: XO/Hosuto)Illusionary Arts: XO/The Host
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:This technique, induced through the Tiger-Hare handseals, causes a trance-like state of euphoria to fill the target's body, similar to the effects of an intense drug high (but this confined to the opponent's senses rather than their state of mind). This intense euphoria enhances, rather than hinders, the target's five senses, but is in no way beneficial. Sensations that the target perceives become multiplied and compounded onto each other. For example, when the target hears a sound, it will appear to be coming from multiple places at once, echoing off of each other and create a cacophonous mess. Vision and touch would similarly be hindered. Images the target perceives become multiplied; what the target sees will become fractured and askew, aligning themselves similar to a kaleidoscope, making it hard to accurately tell the size, position, speed, etc. of what the target sees(cuts tracking by two).Sensations of touch will feel as though they are coming from all over the user's body. Essentially, XO/The Host ruins the target's ability to perceive their environment by causing the mind to believe the potency of their five senses have increased to a point where the sensations they pick up become indecipherable and confusing. This causes extreme disorientation to the target, making movement extremely difficult and leaving them dangerously vulnerable if not countered.

-Can only be used twice per battle with a two-turn cooldown between usages.
-No Genjutsu of any kind in the following turn
-Technique lasts for four turns total (unless countered).

‡ Approved ‡ Awesome technique. Lightened one of the restrictions to allow for layering.

 

[The_Empire]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Removed: Mist poison and biting used as a move which took that part out because biting should be passive just like throwing a punch

Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gokudere) Summoning Technique: Gokudere
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Gokudere is a snake from Ryuchi Cave who is the same size as Aoda. He is a dark purple color with a white bottom. Gokudere is one of the Sages from Ryuchi Cave that can use Senjutsu and even poison. His senjutsu abilities him to use all snake jutsus and Senpō: Muki Tensei ) - Sage Art: Inorganic Reincarnation. Now he has three perfect abilities that makes him a great partner and ally. He can transfer natural energy to his summoner to allow breaking of a genjutsu(A rank and below) or even entering or increasing Snake Sage Mode by two turns. This can be all be possible with Chakra Transfer Technique. The next ability is to use poison which he can send out as a bite. The poison is slow and painful which would lead to death. The poison attacks the nervous system and the poison makes the person's vision blurry, vomiting, and breath heavy. The poison takes three turns to complete its course to death for respiratory failure. This would count a jutsu slot to use either of the poison methods. The final ability is he can shrink to the average size of an adult diamond back rattle snake passively. With its large size he can still move around with twice the speed of a normal kage rank shinobi and is resilience to damage of A rank and below Taijutsu and B rank and below Ninjutsu(elemental and raw chakra included).
-Only used once per battle
-Last four turns
-Chakra Transfer jutsu required to send chakra to the summoner and the summoner only. This would allow Gokudere to send natural energy to release from genjutsu, enter Snake Sage Mode, or increase duration for Snake Sage Mode by two turns
-Can only be used by those who has learned senjutsu since he is a Sage himself. He would only like to be summoned by those who has the same abilities(senjutsu) as him.

Declined - The more i think about this, it's so OP, having a summon that can use senjutsu as a custom, i know most if not all existing senjutsu cj and know how OP they are, to have a custom snake use it is too much. Gathering and transfering the sage chakra i'll allow. Or maybe limit it to 1 Sage jutsu S rank below?



Senpo: Burasuto Jutsu) Sage Art: Blast Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long(length it is thrown)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user while in Sage Mode the user channels senjutsu chakra into an inanimate objects and can either throw the object or leaving it on a surface(ground, table, dresser etc). With a object hitting the inanimate object or the user perform the Seal of Confrontation, the channeled senjutsu chakra is released out into a small blast similar to that of Deidara's C-1 explosions so the radius of the blastis one meter around the object. The blast releases all the senjutsu chakra out in a 360 degrees pushing force of but would cause the air to push away and would be seen by none senjutsu users as a wind jutsu. The force is enough to destroy B rank and below elemental and raw ninjutsu jutsus.
Note: Would reduce Sage Mode by one turn
Note: Can be used by other users that has access to senjutsu but not Sage Mode
Note: Can be used three times per battle

Declined - That doesn't make sense to me? Do you mean to say it can be used by any who know how to control senjutsu without entering sage mode?

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gokudere) Summoning Technique: Gokudere
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Gokudere is a snake from Ryuchi Cave who is the same size as Aoda. He is a dark purple color with a white bottom. Gokudere is one of the Sages from Ryuchi Cave that can use Senjutsu and even poison. Being a snake from Ryuchi he can use all normal snake jutsus and having the ability to use senjutsu he can only use Senpō: Muki Tensei ) - Sage Art: Inorganic Reincarnation. Now he has three perfect abilities that makes him a great partner and ally. He can transfer natural energy to his summoner to allow breaking of a genjutsu(A rank and below) or even entering or increasing Snake Sage Mode by two turns. This can be all be possible with Chakra Transfer Technique. The next ability is to use poison which he can send out as a bite. The poison is slow and painful which would lead to death. The poison attacks the nervous system and the poison makes the person's vision blurry, vomiting, and breath heavy. The poison takes three turns to complete its course to death for respiratory failure. This would count a jutsu slot to use either of the poison methods. The final ability is he can shrink to the average size of an adult diamond back rattle snake passively. With its large size he can still move around with twice the speed of a normal kage rank shinobi and is resilience to damage of A rank and below Taijutsu and B rank and below Ninjutsu(elemental and raw chakra included).
-Only used once per battle
-Last four turns
-Chakra Transfer jutsu required to send chakra to the summoner and the summoner only. This would allow Gokudere to send natural energy to release from genjutsu, enter Snake Sage Mode, or increase duration for Snake Sage Mode by two turns
-Can only be used by those who has learned senjutsu since he is a Sage himself. He would only like to be summoned by those who has the same abilities(senjutsu) as him.

Approved

Removed from the below jutsu: Note: Can be used by other users that has access to senjutsu but not Sage Mode

Senpo: Burasuto Jutsu) Sage Art: Blast Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long(length it is thrown)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user while in Sage Mode the user channels senjutsu chakra into an inanimate objects and can either throw the object or leaving it on a surface(ground, table, dresser etc). With a object hitting the inanimate object or the user perform the Seal of Confrontation, the channeled senjutsu chakra is released out into a small blast similar to that of Deidara's C-1 explosions so the radius of the blast is one meter around the object. The blast releases all the senjutsu chakra out in a 360 degrees pushing force of but would cause the air to push away and would be seen by none senjutsu users as a wind jutsu. The force is enough to destroy B rank and below elemental and raw ninjutsu jutsus.
Note: Would reduce Sage Mode by one turn
Note: Can be used three times per battle

Approved

 

[Zaphkiel]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

New concept, didn't mind to bold all.

(Fūton/Katon: Shingan no Dai Sanji) - Wind & Fire Style: God Eye Calamity
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A highly effective and difficult technique involving both one's Fūton & Katon chakra, God Eye Calamity is just as dangerous as its name suggests. However, depending on the user's mastery of the aforementioned elements Shingan no Dai Sanji can actually have adverse effects. The style is divided into two parts. The first component begins with the molding of one's Fūton specialty to channel their chakra into their head and neck area. From there they will have their eyes or any other extra sensory means focus on a target within mid ranged of their vision (or range of whatever sensory the user is capable of) while amassing the chakra into the forehead region right above both eyes. Once the target is set the user will fire a highly condensed tubular shape of wind about an inch thick and a meter long and slightly translucent, with similar translucent appearance to the Wind Blade, at said target. This tube of wind will act like a lance, able to pierce through objects and people like a high caliber round. It's a projectile attack rather than a stream one and is A ranked by individually. Once this wind lance is fired the user will form the Seal of Confrontation and focus his Katon chakra within the tube of wind and have both chakra natures co-exist without irritating the other, think of water running through a pipe. The Katon chakra serves as the real killer side to the technique as once the wind tube connects with a solid object the wind is uncontrollably blown from shape which in turn agitates the Katon chakra and causes a dense and powerful deflagration which stretches up to short range. I say deflagration instead of explosion because, the resulting detonation has just the right amount of Katon and Futon chakra that it rages with pure wind/fire might that sends slight shock waves of heat and wind throughout impact area (short ranged) that can affect opponents that weren't even directly hit by the attack, and then it all dies out in less than a second. That translated into the time frame logic means its quick, hot, and powerful, but also very fast (the explosion, not the projectile) and can be over before it was even realized. The Katon chakra inserted into the Futon tube is A ranked in strength which in turn makes the technique and overall S rank. Shingan no Dai Sanji is also able to adopt a slight curve in its trajectory to hit targets that may be hiding but this curve has to be initiated at launch and cannot be sharper than a ninety degree turn.
Note(s):
- Can only be used 2x
- Requires a turn cool down
- No Futon or Katon techniques above A ranked next turn.

Declined - two chakra natures requires Y/Y even if the wind is a projectile. If not, use the basic wind blade jutsu of some sorts and have a fire jutsu that ignites it.


(Kōan Genjutsu: Jōmyō Inin)- Koan Illusion: Mortal Dictata
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Jōmyō Inin or "Mortal Dictata" is a Genjutsu developed by a skilled Uchiha during one of his episodes of meditation. The nature of the illusion was a paradox placed on his mind that tampered with how he perceived opportunity and misfortune. He later recorded these feelings and became able to replicate them in the minds of others through chakra, making it a Genjutsu. The technique begins with a Ram hand seal and placing the chakra on the opponent(s)' mind. The illusion has two parts; fortune or misfortune, and will be highlighted below.

Fortune | Kōun: This side of the illusion tampers with the opponent's visual cortex where it completely changes the appearance of the user and his techniques. The user will appear gravely injured and weak in the opponent's eyes. This can be anything from missing limbs to profuse bleeding. Again, this is a visual illusion is does not actually tamper with the opponent's cognitive perception of the user, it only provides visual stimuli that would lead him/her to believe the opponent is actually injured. The second use to this side of the technique is how it affects the visual information of the user's jutsu as well. In other words, a grand fireball from the user may appear like a measly fireball to the opponent.

Misfortune | Fukō: This the second side of the illusion changes the opponent(s)' visual perception of the user and his techniques so that they appear much more superior to theirs. The user may appear godlike, in their peak condition and appear very capable of combat. This also applies to the techniques where a simple wave of water may appear even more devastating, like tsunami level. Of course the illusion doesn't actually change the rank and damage of the user's techniques, it only changes the appearance.

Both sides, Kōun & Fukō, can be used simultaneously, but on different minds. Meaning, the user may place Fukō on one opponent and Kōun on another at the same time they activate this technique. This can lead to incoherence between allies and further aid the user. However, it is impossible to cast both sides of the illusion on one person at the same. However, if this double use is used the technique is used twice and hence can't be used again. But if the user applies one at a time he may wait a while before using it again. ime.

Note(s):
- Can only be used 2x.
- Kōun & Fukō lasts 2 turns each on the opponent(s), with a three turn countdown between each individual use.
- No Genjutsu above B ranked for a turn after the illusion times out.


Declined - It's an S rank gen with hardly any restrictions, this would take and F rank surge to break so i wont approve stuff like this lightly. Now the fact that you say it makes your jutsu look godlike, how does this work, Godlike to me is light and shiney all holy power, where as a small fireball getting bigger is a different sotry, but tit wouldn't just be an illusion on the jutsu it would effect all the surroundings around the jutsu also, if create awave of water with this jutsu, then use the second effect to make it look bigger and stronger it would also desimate the terrain as it goes, taking alot of skill and concerntration to keep up such an illusion, you'd have to constantly maintain a high level of chakra control which would limit what you could actually do while this is active.

Took the advice on the simple ignition thing

(Fūton/Katon: Shingan no Dai Sanji) - Wind & Fire Style: God Eye Calamity
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A highly effective and difficult technique involving both one's Fūton & Katon chakra, God Eye Calamity is just as dangerous as its name suggests. However, depending on the user's mastery of the aforementioned elements Shingan no Dai Sanji can actually have adverse effects. The style is divided into two parts. The first component begins with the molding of one's Fūton specialty to channel their chakra into their head and neck area. From there they will have their eyes or any other extra sensory means focus on a target within mid ranged of their vision (or range of whatever sensory the user is capable of) while amassing the chakra into the forehead region right above both eyes. Once the target is set the user will fire a highly condensed tubular shape of wind about an inch thick and a meter long and slightly translucent, with similar translucent appearance to the Wind Blade, at said target. This tube of wind will act like a lance, able to pierce through objects and people like a high caliber round. It's a projectile attack rather than a stream one and is A ranked by individually. The Katon chakra serves as the real killer side to the technique as once the wind tube connects with a solid object the wind is uncontrollably blown from shape in the form of a localized wind explosion reaching up to short ranged from the impact area. Then, in the millisecond as the wind explosion happens the user will flash the Seal of Confrontation and have his Katon chakra ignite the explosion to form a raging fire which changes the nature of the detonation to a deflagration which stretches up to mid ranged of the impact area. I say deflagration instead of explosion because, the resulting detonation has just the right amount of fire and air that it rages with pure might that sends slight shock waves of heat and wind throughout impact area (short ranged) that can affect opponents that weren't even directly hit by the attack, and then it all dies out in less than a second. That translated into the time frame logic means its quick, hot, and powerful, but also very fast (the explosion, not the projectile) and can be over before it was even realized. The Katon chakra inserted into the Futon tube is A ranked in strength which in turn makes the technique and overall S rank. Shingan no Dai Sanji is also able to adopt a slight curve in its trajectory to hit targets that may be hiding but this curve has to be initiated at launch and cannot be sharper than a ninety degree turn.
Note(s):
- Can only be used 2x
- Requires a turn cool down
- No Futon or Katon techniques above A ranked next turn.

Pending - i need to speak with NK about this. Last time we fought he used fire jutsu which Ignites stuff, so to have it part of a wind projectile jutsu that explodes in a gust of wind, i'd rather clarify with him first.

Edit - Approved

(Kōan Genjutsu: Jōmyō Inin)- Koan Illusion: Mortal Dictata
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Jōmyō Inin or "Mortal Dictata" is a Genjutsu developed by a skilled Uchiha during one of his episodes of meditation. The nature of the illusion was a paradox placed on his mind that tampered with how he perceived opportunity and misfortune. He later recorded these feelings and became able to replicate them in the minds of others through chakra, making it a Genjutsu. The technique begins with a Ram hand seal and placing the chakra on the opponent(s)' mind. The illusion has two parts; fortune or misfortune, and will be highlighted below.

Fortune | Kōun: This side of the illusion tampers with the opponent's visual cortex where it completely changes the appearance of the user and his techniques. The user will appear gravely injured and weak in the opponent's eyes. This can be anything from missing limbs to profuse bleeding. Again, this is a visual illusion is does not actually tamper with the opponent's cognitive perception of the user, it only provides visual stimuli that would lead him/her to believe the opponent is actually injured. The second use to this side of the technique is how it affects the visual information of the user's jutsu as well. In other words, a grand fireball from the user may appear like a measly fireball to the opponent.

Misfortune | Fukō: This the second side of the illusion changes the opponent(s)' visual perception of the user and his techniques so that they appear much more superior to theirs. The user may appear godlike (as in vastly superior in strength and not looking all shiny and golden), in their peak condition and appear very capable of combat. This also applies to the techniques where a simple wave of water may appear even more devastating, like tsunami level. Of course the illusion doesn't actually change the rank and damage of the user's techniques, it only changes the appearance and will go as meticulous enough to alter the terrain to compliment the false powered jutsu. Such as the trees being flung about from the water waves to houses being decimated.

Both sides, Kōun & Fukō, can be used simultaneously, but on different minds. Meaning, the user may place Fukō on one opponent and Kōun on another at the same time they activate this technique. This can lead to incoherence between allies and further aid the user. However, it is impossible to cast both sides of the illusion on one person at the same. However, if this double use is used the technique is used twice and hence can't be used again. But if the user applies one at a time he may wait a while before using it again.

Note(s):
- Can only be used 2x.
- Kōun & Fukō lasts 2 turns each on the opponent(s), with a three turn countdown between each individual use.
- No Genjutsu above B ranked for a turn after the illusion times out.
- Cannot be layered with another Genjutsu
- While active the user is restricted to two techniques per turn.




Declined - Too much for an S rank gen. With not enough restrictions. Need to take into account what it takes to break S rank gen.

 

[Hell Autarch]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Beruzebubu no Asento) - Lightning Release: The Ascent of Beelzebub
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs two hand seals, generating a stream of lightning that surrounds the users body. The stream of lightning is subsequently shaped into hundreds of high-density bird-like creatures, resembling hummingbirds. These creatures are entirely composed of lightning, one inch in length, and possess an extended beak, which acts as 'stinger' for piercing purposes. These creatures, each possessing the capability to fly can be commanded by the user to attack the opponent using their beaks, though stings by these creatures cause only minor damage and numbness, the effect can be drastically increased when they attack and successfully sting the opponent in large numbers. The user can alternatively command these creatures to cover up his entire body, forming a layer over his body which can not only serve defensive purposes by utilizing the high density composition of these creatures, but can also be used offensively, in conjunction with Taijutsu, capitalizing on these creatures ability to sting upon the enemy upon contact. The manipulation of these creatures can be exploited to a high level, as they can be commanded to establish pincer formations, being used as a platform to 'fly', or a defensive wall; this being entirely dependent upon the user.
Note: They can remain on the field for a maximum of two turns during which the user cannot use S Rank or above techniques from another element. Doing so would result in these creatures dispersing.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch


Declined - reduce it to twice per battle, say you can only use lightning while it's active, and remember all these little birds add up to one S rank, so to numb someone a quater of them would have to hit at the same time. Otherwise it would just be like a Nat bite xd

Changes in bold

(Raiton: Beruzebubu no Asento) - Lightning Release: The Ascent of Beelzebub
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 to maintain after initial turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs a single hand seal, generating a stream of lightning that surrounds the users body. The stream of lightning is subsequently shaped into hundreds of high-density bird-like creatures, resembling hummingbirds. These creatures are entirely composed of lightning, one inch in length, and possess an extended beak, which acts as 'stinger' for piercing purposes. These creatures, each possessing the capability to fly can be commanded by the user to attack the opponent using their beaks, though stings by these creatures cause only minor damage and numbness, the effect can be drastically increased when they attack and successfully sting the opponent in large numbers. The user can alternatively command these creatures to cover up his entire body, forming a layer over his body which can not only serve defensive purposes by utilizing the high density composition of these creatures, but can also be used offensively, in conjunction with Taijutsu, capitalizing on these creatures ability to sting upon the enemy upon contact. The manipulation of these creatures can be exploited to a high level, as they can be commanded to establish pincer formations, being used as a platform to 'fly', or a defensive wall; this being entirely dependent upon the user.
Note: Commanding these creatures counts as one of the three jutsus per turn, regardless of the extent of their manipulation in a single turn.
Note: A quarter of these creatures (B Rank) are enough to completely cover up the body of the user or the opponent.
Note: These creatures collectively add up to a single S Rank. Therefore, a quarter of these creatures would be equal to B Rank, and half of these creatures would be equal to A Rank.
Note: These creatures can only disperse if they're destroyed, the user deactivates the technique or if the user performs a technique from another element. Manipulation of these creatures for offensive or supplementary purposes does not make them get used up.
Note: The user cannot use any technique from any element other than Lightning, as long as this technique is active. Doing so would result in these creatures dispersing. The only case or scenario where this is not applicable is when the user has mastered Yin and Yang.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch
Note: No lightning above B rank for two turns after

Approved - added blue

(Katon: Hephaestus Hono Buritt) - Fire Release: Hephaestus's Burning Blade
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs a single (Tiger) handseal and spews out a single large kunai shaped projectile of fire. The kunai is really dense thus allowing it to penetrate through most defenses as well. At any point after the kunai is released, the user can perform a single hand seal causing the single kunai to explode, releasing a large number of normal sized kunai in the direction in which the large kunai had been heading, The large number of normal sized kunai would then in turn explode on contact releasing a lot of heat as well as a bright light. The light can lead to temporary blindness for the oponent if he sees it.
Note: In case the user does not perform a single hand seal for the large kunai to split, the single large kunai would then simply explode releasing heat and a bright light just like how the normal sized kunai would
Note: The single larged kunai is the same size as the large shuriken used by Toroi
Note: The normal sized kunai spread over an area of 5m when the large one explodes into smaller ones
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch

Approved

Changes in bold. I've also fixed some spelling mistake and bolded them.

(Katon: Hephaestus Hono Buritt) - Fire Release: Hephaestus's Burning Blade
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short -Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs a single (Tiger) handseal and spews out a single large kunai shaped projectile of fire. The kunai is really dense thus allowing it to penetrate through most defenses as well. At any point after the kunai is released, the user can perform a single hand seal causing the single kunai to explode, releasing a large number of normal sized kunai in the direction in which the large kunai had been heading, The large number of normal sized kunai would then in turn explode on contact releasing a lot of heat as well as a bright light. The light can lead to temporary blindness for the opponent if he sees it.
Note: In case the user does not perform a single hand seal for the large kunai to split, the single large kunai would then simply explode releasing heat and a bright light just like how the normal sized kunai would
Note: The single large kunai is the same size as the large shuriken used by Toroi
Note: The normal sized kunai spread over an area of 10m wide when the large one explodes into smaller ones
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch

Declined - changed it to S rank without added any restrictions to it? xd

(Doton: Muki Disutōshon) - Earth Release: Inorganic Distortion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique primarily works with the user weaving the Snake handseal and infusing his chakra with earth surrounding him, 8m in all directions with the user himself being the epicenter of this 'circle'. This technique leaves the top layer of the earth, only a few centimeters unaffected, with a layer of chakra-infused mud layer 5m deep, directly below it. Because the top layer of earth is only a few centimeters deep, movements that take place upon it are easily felt in the chakra-infused mud layer and hence allow the user to sense the presence of any object or person within 'circle', as long as contact with the earth is maintained. This technique also prevents the opponent from generally performing any Earth technique that involves manipulation of the earth, due to the presence of the 5m deep chakra-infused mud layer that prevents the opponent from manipulating the earth. The chakra-infused mud layer is composed of the same material used in Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop.
Note: If the opponent were to destroy the top earth layer around him, he would naturally sink right into the chakra-infused mud.
Note: Can be used thrice per battle
Note: After the first turn, the usage of this techniques becomes passive until the mud-layer is either destroyed or the user chooses to deactivate the technique.
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch

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Declined - yard has this cj, think it's preasure sensing. and other part is OP

 

[Kamishiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[Mokuton: Douzen Sutamina] - Wood Release: Natural Energy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Using the natural structure of wood, Hashirama developed a way to gather his natural energy without the hassle of him gathering. Although he is capable of performing techniques while gathering natural energy unlike other Sage Mode users, against strong enemies like Madara, that is a hassle in itself. That is why, Hashirama had to figure out another way. Since the wood is in a rhythm with nature, since it is considered nature in itself, even if it was created by ninja, the wood would gather natural energy without any disturbance, it would be even more perfect than a ninja would do. Then, the gathered natural energy is either given to Hashirama if the wood used to gather natural energy was attached to his body, or the wood would transport the gathered natural energy through it's roots which would extend to Hashirama's feet passively in order to pass the natural energy to him.
-It is much like the shadow clones, where the user can let the wood gather natural energy and fight, that also means that there would be no exhaustion after the SM ends
-This is treated as the Wood version of Amphibian technique
- The user can make up to one construction (i.e tree, pillar, root, flowers) in order to gather natural energy
-Can only be used twice per battle
-It takes two turns for the construction to gather the natural energy after which it is transported to Hashirama in either of the two ways (directly if the construction is attached to his body or indirectly through roots if it is made remote from him)
-The technique gives 4 additional turns to SM


Declined - To keep it fair i wont allow this to work with roots or flowers, they can be too hidden or small leaving no chance for the opponent to stop it. Wood sm is the strongest anyway. Also add a note that scorps can never learn this O_<
Edited the restrictions with the instructed notes, feel free to make any needed adjustments :3

[Mokuton: Mokuton Torappu] - Wood Release: Wood Trap
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Deffensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A technique mainly inspired from the Nara clan. Seeing how the Nara clan uses basic ninja tools and traps in order to make deadly attacks, with which it is regarded as one of the strongest clans in Konoha and the smartest shinobis ever, this technique was developed to take on the concept of traps, and putting a lot of wood tweaks to it. By using the Snake handseal, the user would release his Mokuton chakra through his feet, transporting it into the ground below him. The chakra would be focused in a spot that is decently away from the surface, so no vibration could be felt by either the opponent or the user. The user would create a large layer of wood that would cover any distance from short to long range to him. This layer of wood would act as a source from which several roots would emerge and travel upwards, reaching up to 1 meter from the ground. The roots would also emerge quietly and move slowly in order to make no vibrations or sound whatsoever. As the roots reach this far from the surface of the ground, several small branches gets out of it and slowly pierces the ground. Due to the size of the branches, it would be really hard for the opponent to see it, unless he really concentrated on it, and it would also depends on the terrain (i.e it would be impossible to see it in a grassy terrain.). These small branches exists for one purpose, and one only, which is acting as a trigger. Once the opponent steps on them (or in case they emerge from below the ground, once the opponent touches them) the roots would rapidly emerge out of the ground and bind, impale or restrict the opponent. The user can make one extra handseal to wrap explosive tags around the roots while underground, the same way it is done in the Hidden Explosive Tags Technique, but that would count as a jutsu.
-Can only be used twice per battle
-The user can choose whether to trigger the roots after a time limit (i.e after two turns) or just as the user steps on the small branches
-Since the roots emerge slowly and without sound, it takes one turn to fully be formed
-The user can still make techniques as it is formed but still needs to maintain the Snake handseal in order for it to fully setup just like SM
-Can't use Mokuton techniques higher than A-rank the same turn

Declined - remove the explosive tags bit and tone it down a bit, maybe make it A rank. It can be quite OP as it stands.

[Raiton: Douzen Sutamina] - Lightning Release: Lightning Construction
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A/S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30/40
Damage: 60/80
Description: An advanced lightning techniques that requires a high level of shape manipulation, unlike any other technique and that is due to how condensed lighting would be. This technique could be used in one of the three ways. One, the user would focus his lightning chakra into the ground in any spot he desires. After that, the user would shape his lightning chakra into any construction he desires, roots, pillars, tables, swords, spears etc.. meanwhile condensing the lightning chakra. This condensation would make the lightning lose it's normal form, and turns it into a semi-solid form which permits making such structures. The other method is to apply the same pressure into the chakra, but while creating the chakra from his body which allows him to create such structures form his body. In such case, the user can detach the construction, or let it attached to his body for a certain use. The last method is by making the weather cloudy and creating the constructions out of the clouds. But that is not all. This technique had another purpose, which may or may not be regarded as better than the three mentioned before. Due to the nature of this technique, the user can use other lightning techniques as a source for these lightning structures (i.e creating lighting roots from lightning bullets etc...). The affects of such structures are also different than normal lightning techniques. Due to how condensed the lightning is, it doesn't payalze when it hits the opponent, but rather, it burns as well as numbs the respective area the constructions hits.


-The A-rank can only be used thrice while the S-rank can only be used twice
-Can't use any lightning technique higher than A-rank the current turn or S-rank the following

If you still don't allow it to be two ranks, then please make it S-rank as well as removing any necessary restrictions :3

Declined - effects are too similar to existing jutsu

[Mokuton: Douzen Sutamina] - Wood Release: Natural Energy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Using the natural structure of wood, Hashirama developed a way to gather his natural energy without the hassle of him gathering. Although he is capable of performing techniques while gathering natural energy unlike other Sage Mode users, against strong enemies like Madara, that is a hassle in itself. That is why, Hashirama had to figure out another way. Since the wood is in a rhythm with nature, since it is considered nature in itself, even if it was created by ninja, the wood would gather natural energy without any disturbance, it would be even more perfect than a ninja would do. Then, the gathered natural energy is either given to Hashirama if the wood used to gather natural energy was attached to his body, or the wood would transport the gathered natural energy through it's roots which would extend to Hashirama's feet passively in order to pass the natural energy to him.
-It is much like the shadow clones, where the user can let the wood gather natural energy and fight, that also means that there would be no exhaustion after the SM ends
-This is treated as the Wood version of Amphibian technique
- The user can make up to one construction (i.e tree, pillar) in order to gather natural energy
-Can only be used twice per battle
-It takes two turns for the construction to gather the natural energy after which it is transported to Hashirama in either of the two ways (directly if the construction is attached to his body or indirectly through roots if it is made remote from him)
-The technique gives 3 additional turns to SM
Note: Cannon be used by Scorps


Approved - as you can use it twice i changed it to 3 turns added, so 6 turns in total for sage mode.

Removed the flowers part, it is up to you to decide whether Scorps would learn them or not xD


[Mokuton: Mokuton Torappu] - Wood Release: Wood Trap
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Deffensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A technique mainly inspired from the Nara clan. Seeing how the Nara clan uses basic ninja tools and traps in order to make deadly attacks, with which it is regarded as one of the strongest clans in Konoha and the smartest shinobis ever, this technique was developed to take on the concept of traps, and putting a lot of wood tweaks to it. By using the Snake handseal, the user would release his Mokuton chakra through his feet, transporting it into the ground below him. The chakra would be focused in a spot that is decently away from the surface, so no vibration could be felt by either the opponent or the user. The user would create a large layer of wood that would cover any distance from short to long range to him. This layer of wood would act as a source from which several roots would emerge and travel upwards, reaching up to 1 meter from the ground. The roots would also emerge quietly and move slowly in order to make no vibrations or sound whatsoever. As the roots reach this far from the surface of the ground, several small branches gets out of it and slowly pierces the ground. Due to the size of the branches, it would be really hard for the opponent to see it, unless he really concentrated on it, and it would also depends on the terrain (i.e it would be impossible to see it in a grassy terrain.). These small branches exists for one purpose, and one only, which is acting as a trigger. Once the opponent steps on them (or in case they emerge from below the ground, once the opponent touches them) the roots would rapidly emerge out of the ground and bind, impale or restrict the opponent.
-Can only be used twice per battle
-The user can choose whether to trigger the roots after a time limit (i.e after two turns) or just as the user steps on the small branches
-Since the roots emerge slowly and without sound, it takes one turn to fully be formed
-The user can still make techniques as it is formed but still needs to maintain the Snake handseal in order for it to fully setup just like SM
-This technique can be associated with the hidden explosive technqiue to wrap explosive tags around it.
-Can't use Mokuton techniques higher than S-rank the same turn
- Lasts for 4 turns max

Approved - changed it two twice and added last note.

Made it A-rank and removed the explosive tags part, made it that it can be associated with the Hidden Tags technique instead. If you still don't want that, feel free to remove it.

[Senpo: Waikyoku Zennou no Sennin] - Sage Mode: Torture of the Almighty Sage
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Using the same principle as "Ice Release: 1000 Needles of Death" the user would focus his natural energy all around his opponent. Once done, the user would materialize the the natural energy into hundreds of small sized needles which surrounds all directions and angles of the opponent. At the user's will, the needles would all attack the opponent at once, piercing him from all angles. It could also be done at several enemies, but the number and power of the needles would be split according to the number of enemies. The needles need to be created at least one meter away from any opponents.

-Uses 2 turns on SM
-Can't use SM technique higher than A-rank the same turn
-Can't use SM technique higher than S-rank the following turn
-Can only be used once per battle

‡ Approved ‡

 

[Anbu Kirito]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Elucidator
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40 for moonlight empowerment
Damage:N/A
Description:
The Elucidator is a night-black sword which can be wielded using one or two hands. It is double edged, is a standard 67 centimeters in length, and weighs 4.5 pounds. The handle and hilt of the sword are also black, with the cross guard taking the form of a single sided gear-like object. In theory, the blade appears to be a somewhat odd looking, but relatively simple, sword. The sword is actually quite the opposite. It actually has multiple unique abilities, each different from the last.

The Sword:

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Abilities of the Elucidator:


Immortal Object:
The Elucidator's metal is one currently unknown to anybody except the sword's creator. All that is known about it is that even when hit by some of the most powerful weapons, techniques, and even natural disasters, the sword has never maintained so much as a scratch over its 300 year lifespan, therefore being defined as an immortal object, being completely indestructible. The sword itself can cut through defenses of hardness equal to that of doton or lower of B-Rank or lower. Any harder than Doton, and the sword can only cut through C-Rank of it.

Flawless Cut:
The Elucidator's edges are sharp enough to cut a human being and draw blood if they so much as tap the blade. This makes the sword especially unaffected by air resistance, as it is able to flawlessly cut through the air surrounding the blade during a strike. This means its cuts are extremely quick, almost 1.5x that of a standard katana being used by a warrior of similar power to the wielder of the blade.

Moonlight Empowerment:
The moonlight pulse is the Elucidator's most powerful ability. By surging their chakra into the blade, the user will cause the sword to brightly glow in a sky blue shade. This is a sign that the blade is charging power. When using this, the blade will gain access to it's special technique (to be posted), and will gain +20 damage to other kenjutsu, dealing larger cutting and impact damage when being used, as well as gaining strike speed. This effect lasts a single turn, and costs a move to activate.
Note:
-Must be taught by AnbuKirito
-Moonlight Empowerment costs a move to use, and can only be used 2 times a match.

Declined - as soon as you mention an unknown metal that creates a new element of sorts so you need to change that to chakra metal or just not mention it. I don't approve indestructable weapons sorry. Cutting through justu is still fine though at that level. I can't allow weapons that boost either. so remove the +20. If you want some weapon ideas, drop me a vm and we can work through one.

CW Jutsu:
Bukijutsu: Vorpal Strike | Weapon Technique: Vorpal Sutoraiku
Type:Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
A person wielding Elucidator will activate it's moonlight empowerment ability. Then, when the opponent swings a weapon of their own, the user will parry it, then will duck and begin a clockwise spin while slashing diagonally downwards to the right with the blade. As the spin ends with the user on the floor, they will then push upwards off of the ground and deliver a similar spinning strike, this time while moving upwards and delivering it in a directly horizontal fashion. They will then follow up with a two handed thrust, following with another reverse one handed spin attack. The user will then freeze, and will not follow through after delivering the final strike. Due to the speed at which the moves are performed and at which the blade moves, 4 sky blue crescent blades will appear to blast out from the target, signifying the combo's completion. These blades are really just compressed air currents, each representing one of the slashes performed.This attack will almost certainly kill an opponent if 1 or more of the strikes make contact, as the speed at which the hits are delivered becomes nearly immeasurable due to the gained momentum throughout the combo. The combo can also be started without the parry, simply by initiating the attack the way one normally would.

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Notes:
-Can be used twice
-Must be taught by AnbuKirito
-Must be wielding Elucidator
-When used, the Moonlight Empowerment mode instantly expires.

declined - weapon wasn't approved.

Kuchiyose: Kuranon | Summoning: Kuranon
Type:Summoning
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:
Kuranon is a very small crab, about half the size and height of a human being, and has a white coloration instead of the usual brown shell. This is because he actually has an underdeveloped shell. Because of this, a single A rank attack can cause him to disperse. This means that if he takes two B ranks, 4 C ranks, or 8 D ranks, he will disperse. He however, because of this lack of defense, is absolutely blazingly fast. He appears as a blur to the average eye and uses this to his advantage. How he does this? Taijutsu. Kuranon is one of the very few crabs able to use effective taijutsu. His form of taijutsu is rather different though. He uses a special style of taijutsu known as Crab Kenpo (techniques to be posted.). In this style, he will deliver attacks through use of his pincers, by closing them, making them act as fists. He also has two large legs at the back of his body, similar in shape to his normal ones, except larger and usable for kicking attacks. Kuranon, of course, like all other crabs also has the ability to use water release attacks up to the s rank.
Note:
-Can only be summoned once
-Lasts 4 turns
-Must be a signer of the Crab Contract
-Must be learned from AnbuKirito
- This crab had 1.5 x the users base speed

Appoved - made edits.

Made edits discussed over VM with mod who checked customs
Resubmitting:

Elucidator
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40 for moonlight empowerment
Damage:N/A
Description:
The Elucidator is a night-black sword which can be wielded using one or two hands. It is double edged, is a standard 67 centimeters in length, and weighs 4.5 pounds. The handle and hilt of the sword are also black, with the cross guard taking the form of a single sided gear-like object. In theory, the blade appears to be a somewhat odd looking, but relatively simple, sword. The sword is actually quite the opposite. It actually has multiple unique abilities, each different from the last.

The Sword:

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Abilities of the Elucidator:


Immortal Object:
The Elucidator's metal is a powerful chakra steel. It can take up to S-Rank damage before being destroyed. Or rather, dispersed. The sword actually acts somewhat like a summon, returning to a sheathe on the user after being destroyed. However, even if it is not broken, the sword cannot be drawn until the next battle if it is dispersed. The sword itself can cut through defenses of hardness equal to that of doton or lower of B-Rank or lower. Any harder than Doton, and the sword can only cut through C-Rank of it.

Flawless Cut:
The Elucidator's edges are sharp enough to cut a human being and draw blood if they so much as tap the blade. This makes the sword especially unaffected by air resistance, as it is able to flawlessly cut through the air surrounding the blade during a strike. This means its cuts are extremely quick, almost 1.5x that of a standard katana being used by a warrior of similar power to the wielder of the blade.

Moonlight Empowerment:
The moonlight pulse is the Elucidator's most powerful ability. By surging their chakra into the blade, the user will cause the sword to brightly glow in a sky blue shade. This is a sign that the blade is charging power. When using this, the blade will gain access to it's special technique (to be posted), and will have their kenjutsu with the sword empowered, dealing larger cutting and impact damage when being used, as well as gaining strike speed, becoming even faster than it usually is. This effect lasts a single turn, and costs a move to activate.
Note:
-Must be taught by AnbuKirito
-Moonlight Empowerment costs a move to use, and can only be used 2 times a match.

Approved

Bukijutsu: Vorpal Strike | Weapon Technique: Vorpal Sutoraiku
Type:Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
A person wielding Elucidator will activate it's moonlight empowerment ability. Then, when the opponent swings a weapon of their own, the user will parry it, then will duck and begin a clockwise spin while slashing diagonally downwards to the right with the blade. As the spin ends with the user on the floor, they will then push upwards off of the ground and deliver a similar spinning strike, this time while moving upwards and delivering it in a directly horizontal fashion. They will then follow up with a two handed thrust, following with another reverse one handed spin attack. The user will then freeze, and will not follow through after delivering the final strike. Due to the speed at which the moves are performed and at which the blade moves, 4 sky blue crescent blades will appear to blast out from the target, signifying the combo's completion. These blades are really just compressed air currents, each representing one of the slashes performed.This attack will almost certainly kill an opponent if 1 or more of the strikes make contact, as the speed at which the hits are delivered becomes nearly immeasurable due to the gained momentum throughout the combo. The combo can also be started without the parry, simply by initiating the attack the way one normally would.

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Notes:
-Can be used twice
-Must be taught by AnbuKirito
-Must be wielding Elucidator
-When used, the Moonlight Empowerment mode instantly expires.

Declined - needs more restrictions as it's S rank, remove the part about it killing them, an S rank cut has that implied.

Lightning Release: Archangel Soul | Lightning Release: Tenshi No Tamashii
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Self-Long
Chakra:40 (-20 Each Turn)
Damage:N/A
Description:
Kirito Uchiha surges lightning chakra throughout his body. So much so that one can even see the lightning crackling around his body. Suddenly, he will begin jettisoning it in massive quantities, resulting in a massive column of light of appear. After the light fades, Kirito is left standing with Light Blue Hair instead of his usual Black color. This is because the lightning actually begins to affect the keratin in his hair, changing its color due to the chakra's influence. During this state, because he is jettisoning chakra from his body in such quantities, it takes a form of its own. When being viewed with any form of dojutsu or chakra vision, the chakra will appear to take the form of a pair of wings, made of lightning. This effect is similar to that of the nine tailed fox in the chuunin exams, how to neji, he saw the outline of the fox and felt it's presence. Everybody else could only feel it's presence. The same is for this jutsu, people who cannot see the wings will simply feel a massive presence of lightning chakra, causing their hairs to stand on end. The main effect of this technique is not cosmetic however. It connects Kirito to the static field in the air around him and his opponent up to long range, allowing him to feel and control it at will. The technique does this with the initial flash of light, as the flash is Kirito's chakra simply be sent out into the area around him, connecting him to the static field. This means Kirito becomes Hyper-Aware of his surroundings, feeling whatever his opponent feels, as the sense of touch is stimulated by static. This could be a rock, or the air around them, meaning this gives Kirito a "Perfect" 360 sensory field. Kirito can anticipate attacks, and essentially feels everything around him, living or non-living. But this state has two flaws. First, he cannot use Sharingan while under this state due to the stress this causes on his body, and the chakra control needed. The state does not enhance his reactions, meaning he cannot react to things he physically isn't fast enough to dodge. Unlike the sharingan, which slows things down, Kirito simply feels things at the speed they happen, meaning he only gains knowledge of attack type and direction. The state also lasts only 4 Turns, having a one use policy. The jutsu's final ability is it's greatest. As the sense of touch is enabled by contact with static fields, causing a neuron to fire, simulating feeling depending on texture, Kirito can manipulate the field of static around his opponent, causing them to lose their sense of touch. How? He simply manipulates the static so it gives a positive charge, disabling it's ability to give a response to another positive charge, which is what the body uses to feel. This ability costs a move however, and takes up a move slot each turn it is active. The final drawback of the technique is that the user cannot use any tangible elemental technique types while it is active, such as earth, or any solid KG element/CE. They also cannot use wind abilities due to the conflicting chakra natures and the level of Elemental Affinity required to perform this technique.
Note:
-Lasts 4 Turns
-Can be used once
-Can be used by Kirito Uchiha, or those Taught By AnbuKirito.
-User will be exhausted after the technique wears off, losing half his physical prowess for two turns and being unable to mold chakra A rank or higher for two turns.
-Cannot use sharingan or any dojutsu while active
-Must have lightning specialty

Declined - sensing being used with magnetic fields like this has been done by Yusei with his custom weapon so you'd need his permission.

 

[RuckenTM]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon, Raiton Ken Doton: Nōburu chikyū fantazumu, babiron no shinigami no jigoku-mon)- Fire, Lightning and Earth Release: Noble Earth Phantasm, Reaper's Hell Gate of Babylon
Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid (Long if, item launched outwards bubble/barrier)
Chakra Cost: 50 (-20 per turn to sustain)
Damage Points: 90 (-10 per turn to user's health, also those within Bubble/barrier)
Description: The user will gather enormous amount of Lightening chakra throughout their body, surge it outward continuously on the edge of the users skin all at once much like (Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current. This enormous release of raiton will shock and numb all entities caught across it's path outwards, by manipulating their raiton chakra, they'd generate a non-focused electricity filled barrier-like bubble (S-ranked) that's sustained by the user. Within this created space of flowing electricity, the user and victims will be under a constant electric shock every-moment, numbing number-less parties upon first interaction. Even though they're within the bubble, they'll still feel normal air breezes and such regularities. The reason being that is that everything within the bubble is constantly covered in the user's raiton chakra, which acts like Static electricity upon everything in the user's radiance limited to mid-range. The user will then proceed to create portals that appear in dark stormy-like wave forms from where-ever they can precisely perceive their targets or desire as long as within the bubble/barrier. These portals being much like those from (Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid, allow the user earthen-like artifacts, granted to him/her access of all the world's treasures that he/she can recall through being alive during his/her life, which include prototypes of other shinobi's custom weapons, and s/he can launch them as through as the strongest arrows towards his/her opponents. While s/he may sometimes choose to wield them as regular weapons, its preferred to use mainly for fights like by raining down an infinite amount of weapons on his/her opponents. The weapons can ignite in a flame explosion relative to (Katon: Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Mist Blaze Dance Technique (due to the forming of the mud-gassed harden tools within portal) as long as they're within the bubble/ barrier upon user's will (mentally or verbally). This doesn't add to Taijutsu but gives a more unique pain and method of attack, numbing on first contact of barrier/bubble and shocking inwards of prolonged stay within vacancy of it. Metal/ conductive stuff, entries, or subjects will be electrified within the bubble/barrier as well. The user can ready numerous weapons, letting their hilts stick out when s/he is waiting and instantly showing the weapons when about to fight. They move and take aim at the target according to the user's will, allowing him/her to fire without having to even touch them. Defensively/ Offensively, prototypes launched could be of any size ranging from boss summon sizes to ant sizes. When sent towards a subject, they'll always move at Kage-rank speed and the solidity of the prototypes will always be the same (being A-ranked). They can also release chains to hold down a summon, though only fully earthin made-like substances will be able to head through the portals. The portal will always open within the bubble as stated, they summon items directly into their hand, pull out weapons from directly behind them, or prepare numerous weapons in the air, loaded like arrows. These weapons are coating is static charge with upon impact the locked up gas within the weapons will ignite to create an explosion (being C-ranked). The user can create as many regards to quality vs quantity constructs at most (with the use of one hand motions) with the power of this technique being split accordingly. D-rank: They can send forth number-less items toward their targets. C-rank: From 30 to 20 about, items sent. B-rank: 10 to 5, items sent. A-rank: 2 to 1 items sent. While active, the user can only use non-elemental abilities. The user will be able to deactivate it mentally with no time wasted. Due to the stress of the electricity the user will be unable to use Taijutsu above A-Rank for three turns, only applicable when Gate was active for all 5 turns.

Note: Lasts five turns and can only be used twice per battle
Note: Must be a lightning specialist to unitize this jutsu, Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if successful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary no-less Lightning Specialty.
Note: Barrier isn't much visible to the naked ,only after shocking or keen observation, could the victim notice difference in the area being statically charged.
Note: On afterwards choice of launch, they'll need another 1 turn after to launch another bunch of item(s) (includes chain-like launches also), weapons laid on the field; will crumble if new launch (when a new set/bunch of portal opens) is chosen after. The user can also use up to 2 move slots, to sent out to different types of launches, i.e one A-rank and D-rank launch, one B-rank and C-rank launch, for say etc.
Note: At choice the user can change the direction or halt the item (mentally or verbally), if allowed they can perceive it.

‡ Declined ‡ You really need to fix the formatting since as it is, this is unreadable.

(Raiton: Sandārūtsu chikyū shīru ) - Lightening Release: Thunder Roots-Earth Seal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/a (Short - Long)
Chakra Cost: 40 (-20 per turn)
Damage Points: N/a (80)(+10 to Suiton in-conjunction with this jutsu)
Description:
The user molding enormous raiton chakra within their body, which generates non-focused electricity from their body. Then they slam their dominate hand(s) onto the ground releasing the chakra into the ground and the non-focused electricity, manipulating the chakra to form into lightening roots that spread through the ground cracking rocks and softening the soil with electricity. These roots start from 15 inches deep as they head through the ground around in a radiance from the user, reaching as deep within the earth's mesosphere mantle. This jutsu's main advantage is it's very aspect of canceling doton from ever starting as it runs through the deep grounds simply ending the doton jutsu in its tracks. While active, their body which generates non-focused electricity the will keep them surging chakra streaming right into the ground through her/his feet to sustain the jutsu altogether. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique.
Notice:
>User cannot leave the ground as they must have connection to the ground at all times to sustain the jutsu.
>The generate non-focused electricity from their body cannot can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons or other conductive mediums but the ground.
>Technique lasts for 4 turns

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‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

(Ninjutsu: Reiauto no chien) - Ninja Art: Layout Delay
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: N/a
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/a
Description:
An activation type Jutsu that can be utilized before a release of a another jutsu. The user will gesture the Snake hand seal or include it in the row of hand seals required for said Jutsu. This will delay of the oncoming of their own first jutsu, making them release a double version of the same jutsu as one, must be the exact same jutsu only.

Note: They'll need to preform both techniques, one that was delayed and one which wasn't.

‡ Declined ‡ Not sure what this is supposed to do.

 

[Six Paths]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Kigen no Yokushin) - Earth Release: Awakening of Avarice
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+5 chakra to affected techniques)
Damage Points: N/A
Description The second ability is symbolic of "his malice" and acts as a testament to the tortured mockeries of human beings he created in life through grotesque experimentation. The user activates an innate ability of his that affects his earth techniques for the next four turns. It makes it so sentient creations constructed from Earth Release can be made with additional features, body parts or limbs such as wings capable of flight or prehensile tails. The added features can be anything from conventional limbs such arms and legs or they can be body parts exhibited by animals/summons such as horns, claws, tentacles, tendrils, spiked protrusions, scales and so on. The size of these added features will be proportional to the size of the sentient creation. The extra bodily enhancements can be made from solid rock or they can be made purely from sticky mud. Tentacles, tendrils and any structures which aren't rigid/sturdy by nature must be constructed from mud rather than solid rock. If more than one creature is created, then every creature will be made with the added feature. Activating and applying this ability to techniques is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this ability's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only realized when the user utilizes another jutsu.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle

Declined - remember, with the jutsu above, you can only control the arms and legs as it mimics your movements. If you make a tail or winds they will be inanimate, so if you take control of say a stone golem with the first jutsu, then make wings with this jutsu, the wings would be useless through your own controlling method, unless you want to reword it. Also also it can't be instant say they grow and form fast like earth spikes do or something.

(Doton: Shouri no Soushi) - Earth Release: Conquest of Creation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+5 chakra to affected techniques)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The third and final ability is symbolic of "his will to dominate all life" and acts as a testament to the hordes of "living weapons" he assembled in life. This ability makes it so every earth technique the user uses becomes a "sentient creation" (much like the Stone Golems or the Earth Dragon). Now with most techniques, this added sentience doesn't really provide anything due to their structure e.g. Rock Scale Slab will just remain a cuboid slab of rock incapable of doing anything more. However, combining this ability with Awakening of Avarice will make it so the earthen creation will develop limbs/body parts, granting it the capability to move around and act on its own. For example a slab of rock can grow arms and legs, dropping lid can grow writhing tendrils, destructive rising rock pillars can grow smaller thorn-like spikes from the main body of the spiked pillars, etc. Through mental commands alone, the user can freely govern the actions of their earth techniques. Activating and applying this ability to techniques is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this ability's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only realized when the user utilizes another jutsu. Sentient creations (such as the Stone Golems) used while this is active are maintained passively rather than actively for this jutsu's duration.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Sentience lasts as long as this technique is active

Declined - Now, i'd rather you make all this into one jutsu with three abilities. Each one taking up a move per turn and that it can only be used on one thing at a time. So with this one jutsu i'll give you an example:

You create an earthen lid:
You then use one move to take control of it
Second move to grow tendrils as it drops that you use as arms to pull them back under the lid. Have it as a mode of activation and while using any of the three effects you can't perform any other jutsu, it's almost like a elemental puppetry jutsu if you will with broken down effects to control, mimic and grow.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.

As for you NK, i can see why you left it <_<

They don’t form instantly, they form with the technique (e.g. the Great Stone Golem forms with two extra arms). This is used prior to the technique it’s used with.

(Doton: Kigen no Yokushin) - Earth Release: Awakening of Avarice
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+5 chakra to affected techniques)
Damage Points: N/A
Description The second ability is symbolic of "his malice" and acts as a testament to the tortured mockeries of human beings he created in life through grotesque experimentation. The user activates an innate ability of his that affects his earth techniques for the next four turns. It makes it so sentient creations constructed from Earth Release can be made with additional features, body parts or limbs such as wings capable of flight or prehensile tails. The added features can be anything from conventional limbs such arms and legs or they can be body parts exhibited by animals/summons such as horns, claws, tentacles, tendrils, spiked protrusions, scales and so on. The size of these added features will be proportional to the size of the sentient creation. The extra bodily enhancements can be made from solid rock or they can be made purely from sticky mud. Tentacles, tendrils and any structures which aren't rigid/sturdy by nature must be constructed from mud rather than solid rock. If more than one creature is created, then every creature will be made with the added feature. Activating and applying this ability to techniques is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this ability's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only realized when the user utilizes another jutsu.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Only two of this set of techniques can be active at any given time (Shackles of Servitude, Awakening of Avarice and Conquest of Creation).

I feel like a mode would reduce their usefulness so instead I added the last note.

(Doton: Shouri no Soushi) - Earth Release: Conquest of Creation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+5 chakra to affected techniques)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The third and final ability is symbolic of "his will to dominate all life" and acts as a testament to the hordes of "living weapons" he assembled in life. This ability makes it so every earth technique the user uses becomes a "sentient creation" (much like the Stone Golems or the Earth Dragon). Now with most techniques, this added sentience doesn't really provide anything due to their structure e.g. Rock Scale Slab will just remain a cuboid slab of rock incapable of doing anything more. However, combining this ability with Awakening of Avarice will make it so the earthen creation will develop limbs/body parts, granting it the capability to move around and act on its own. For example a slab of rock can grow arms and legs, dropping lid can grow writhing tendrils, destructive rising rock pillars can grow smaller thorn-like spikes from the main body of the spiked pillars, etc. Through mental commands alone, the user can freely govern the actions of their earth techniques. Activating and applying this ability to techniques is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this ability's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only realized when the user utilizes another jutsu. Sentient creations (such as the Stone Golems) used while this is active are maintained passively rather than actively for this jutsu's duration.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Sentience lasts as long as this technique is active
Note: Only two of this set of techniques can be active at any given time (Shackles of Servitude, Awakening of Avarice and Conquest of Creation).

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.

Both Approved

 

[Beifong]

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(Koton: Bouei no Percival) – Steel Release: Protection of Percival
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Before performing their next doton technique that emerges from the earth, the user infuses the ground below with their koton chakra to create a layer of black steel just beneath the surface. As the earth technique rises, the layer of steel will morph around it to encase it in the form of a coating of black steel scales. The size of the layer will always be proportional to the scale of the technique about to be used. The result is the original technique once fully surfaced technique being completely enveloped in a chassis of glossy metal. It could be said that the technique is "wearing an armour" as the coating boosts the defensive abilities of the technique considerably. The armour of scales "worn" by the technique is the equivalent of an A-Ranked Steel technique and is purely defensive in usage (meaning it will not boost the damage techniques can inflict). Affected techniques do not become dual-elemental, simply layered. For example, using this on a B-Rank Earth technique will make it so the exterior is an A-Rank Steel technique and the interior is a B-Rank Earth technique. Destroying the exterior of metallic scales will expose the underlying rock and this will leave a B-Rank Earth technique. While seemingly powerful, an S-Rank Lightning technique would destroy an S-Rank Earth technique coated with this A-Rank Steel armour and still continue onwards. The main purpose of this technique is to make the user's own earth techniques superior to that of the opponent's. It is still vulnerable to Lightning. Formation of this metallic armour is passive and does not result in the premature termination of earth techniques which require maintenance such as the Earth Dragons and the Stone Golems. The usage of this technique and the one succeeding it (the jutsu that will be clad in the steel) occur in the timeframe of a single technique.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Does not work with KG/CE variants
Note: Cannot be used on Forbidden Rank Techniques
Note: Cannot be used with mud or sand-based techniques

Declined - this is a brilliant idea and i see why NK left it for me <_< Would of been nice on Gajeel but either way. The decline is because i can't have this working on S ranks. and due to it's nature make it only twice per battle.



Above technique is mentioned in the jutsu below

(Koton: Shutten no Arthur) – Steel Release: Authority of Arthur
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 chakra every turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases his koton chakra from every chakra point on his body to unleash countless wires of steel (similar to Lances of Lamorak but on a much greater scale). These metallic cords wrap around his body to encase him head to toe in a chassis of black steel (excluding his eyes, nose and mouth). The shape of the armour is entirely up to the wishes of the user. Due to the flexibility of the wires, they don’t restrict his movement in the slightest and their weight isn’t significant enough to reduce his speed either. The wires can be extend up to mid-range and can be used to attack as well as defend against techniques and will regenerate within a turn if struck with an attack that isn’t strong enough to destroy it in its entirety. The metallic strings can also be used for several supplementary purposes such as using them to walk rather than using one's own feet (think Doctor Octopus) or reshaping them into additional tools, constructs and limbs. The wires also have the added benefit of acting as a “Lightning Rod” for the user. If the opponent tries to conduct lightning along the armour, the wires act as a lightning rod (similar to Sword Technique: Lightning Rod) and ground the lightning by harmlessly conducting them into the ground, preventing the user from being paralyzed or damaged. However while this technique is active, the user can only use Steel, Fire, Earth, any KG/CE combination of the aforementioned elements and non-elemental abilities.

Note: Lasts until deactivated
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No S-Rank or above Steel techniques on the turn this is deactivated
Note: No Fire or Earth techniques above S-Rank on the turn this is deactivated

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.

Declined - Needs a turn limit. Extending, reforming, creating addition limbs needs chakra cost, turn per move, make it once per battle if you want it as an S rank. Just tone it down.

(Koton: Bouei no Percival) – Steel Release: Passion of Percival
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Before performing their next doton technique that emerges from the earth, the user infuses the ground below with their koton chakra to create a layer of black steel just beneath the surface. As the earth technique rises, the layer of steel will morph around it to encase it in the form of a coating of black steel scales. The size of the layer will always be proportional to the scale of the technique about to be used. The result is the original technique once fully surfaced technique being completely enveloped in a chassis of glossy metal. It could be said that the technique is "wearing an armour" as the coating boosts the defensive abilities of the technique considerably. The armour of scales "worn" by the technique is the equivalent of an A-Ranked Steel technique and is purely defensive in usage (meaning it will not boost the damage techniques can inflict). Affected techniques do not become dual-elemental, simply layered. For example, using this on a B-Rank Earth technique will make it so the exterior is an A-Rank Steel technique and the interior is a B-Rank Earth technique. Destroying the exterior of metallic scales will expose the underlying rock and this will leave a B-Rank Earth technique. While seemingly powerful, an S-Rank Lightning technique would destroy an A-Rank Earth technique coated with this A-Rank Steel armour and still continue onwards. The main purpose of this technique is to make the user's own earth techniques superior to that of the opponent's. It is still vulnerable to Lightning. Formation of this metallic armour is passive and does not result in the premature termination of earth techniques which require maintenance such as the Earth Dragons and the Stone Golems. The usage of this technique and the one succeeding it (the jutsu that will be clad in the steel) occur in the timeframe of a single technique.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Does not work with KG/CE variants
Note: Cannot be used on F Rank or above Techniques
Note: Cannot be used with mud or sand-based techniques
Note: Lasts for 4 turns per use and works on one jutsu only

Approved, added the blue

(Koton: Shutten no Arthur) – Steel Release: Authority of Arthur
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 chakra every turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases his koton chakra from every chakra point on his body to unleash countless wires of steel (similar to Lances of Lamorak but on a much greater scale). These metallic cords wrap around his body to encase him head to toe in a chassis of black steel (excluding his eyes, nose and mouth). The shape of the armour is entirely up to the wishes of the user. Due to the flexibility of the wires, they don’t restrict his movement in the slightest and their weight isn’t significant enough to reduce his speed either. The wires can be extend up to mid-range and can be used to attack as well as defend against techniques and will regenerate within a turn if struck with an attack that isn’t strong enough to destroy it in its entirety. The metallic strings can also be used for several supplementary purposes such as using them to walk rather than using one's own feet (think Doctor Octopus) or reshaping them into additional tools, constructs and limbs. The wires also have the added benefit of acting as a “Lightning Rod” for the user. If the opponent tries to conduct lightning along the armour, the wires act as a lightning rod (similar to Sword Technique: Lightning Rod) and ground the lightning by harmlessly conducting them into the ground, preventing the user from being paralyzed or damaged. However while this technique is active, the user can only use Steel, Fire, Earth, any KG/CE combination of the aforementioned elements and non-elemental abilities. The extension of the wires costs 10 chakra and costs a move. Reforming the armour costs 20 chakra and counts a move (but it doesn’t need to be initiated, it simply occurs and the user is free to perform other techniques while it occurs, though can only reform once). Creating additional limbs/constructs/tools costs 30 chakra and counts as a move and can only be done once per turn

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: No S-Rank or above Steel techniques on the turn this is deactivated
Note: No Fire or Earth techniques above S-Rank on the turn this is deactivated

Approved, changed the blue.

(Koton: Yuuki no Bedivere) – Steel Release: Bravery of Bedivere
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases his koton chakra throughout his body and seemingly explodes into thousands of steel shards that move at the speed of a shot arrow. This allows the user to evade attacks that would have otherwise landed or close the gap between an opponents at mid or long range. The shards come together as quickly as they erupted but their reformation is an audible process even at a long-range distance (it sounds like thousands of nails scratching against each other). However, the time of reformation is significant enough to allow the opponent to react to the user’s next attack regardless of the distance between them. That combined with the technique being easily heard by anyone means this technique’s nature isn’t intended to be offensive in any way but rather more defensive and supplementary.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Cannot be used on consecutive turns

Declined - can't approve this sorry.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.

 

[Bloo]

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(Mayu) - Cocoon
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will use the special ability granted to them by the spider and shoot up to three balls of silk. These balls of silk are fist sized and are compacted enough to be as hard as steel. Once the silk comes into contact with a solid object they explode into a mass of silk. The silk will cover whatever it comes into contact with, if a person it restricts there movement entirely.

-Can only be taught by Bloo

Declined - wrong chakra for C rank

(Gumo Shin'en) - Spider Abyss
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will perform one hand seal, after biting their thumb. The user will then slam their hands on the ground and summon a huge hole below the opponent, the hole extends up to short range all around the opponent. The opponent doesn't immediately fall into the abyss but instead are left standing on a web of silk that stretches across the top of the hole. The web will adhere to the opponents feet stopping them from moving. From within the abyss a giant spider will emerge to attack the trapped victim, the spider is big enough that he fills up most of the hole.

-Usable once
Can only be taught by Bloo.

Declined - so you're using earth to create the hole, and silk to make the web, then summoning a spider too, and this is all only A rank and has no restrictions?

 

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( Senpō: shinzō no myakuhaku ) | Sage Art: Pulse Of The Sage's Heart
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
shinzō no myakuhaku Is a NinTaijutsu type technique that focuses on the use of Pulsating Senjutsu in conjunction with physical attacks. It is a simple concept, yet can become very useful if used properly. Whenever the user chooses to, he can release from his limbs (Arms or legs) a wave of Senjutsu that acts as a pulse in a chosen direction. The pulse is simple with its affects, simply being able to bluntly push away objects and cause damage with the force. Though a simple trick, the user can use it for not only offensive strikes, but to supplement his movements or even defend. The technique can be used to stop Ninjutsu of the same rank or lower, by causing a pulse of Chakra to push it away. Of course, they'd cancel each other out if the same rank, but if the pulse is stronger it will push the technique away. An example of it supplementing the user's movements would be like them being mid air and kicking in a given direction, using the pulse to push their own body away.

Note: Can only be used by those who have Mastered SM (any variant)
Note: Can only be used 4 times
Note: Pulses can reach Mid range or Push the user Mid range.
Note: The Supplementary usage adds no speed or power to the user, moving him at his current speeds.

Declined - too similar to existing sage jutsu which i am able to use. DNR.

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( Hebi Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hikagi ) | Snake Summoning: Shady
Type: Summon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
Shady is one of the 5 Guardian Elemental Snakes. These Snakes each specialize in one of the 5 basic elements and are the Manda special minions. Shady has Mastery over the Wind element, being capable of performing all wind techniques up to and including S-rank. To Summon Shady, the user would have to draw blood and wipe it on his Snake Tattoo or do the generic summoning, bringing forth the great wind beast. Shady is an all white snake that is half the Size as Manda and carries all the natural features of a Burrowing Asp. Along with the ability to use Wind, Shady has the 1 special ability that all Guardian snakes have. He's able to convert his body into a breeze of wind, abling himself to evade techniques, Albeit still clearly visible as a white hue. This counts as an A-rank move and can only be used once.

Note: Can only replace once
Note: All his moves and techniques count towards the normal 3 limit per turn of the user
Note: Can only be summoned once
Note: Last 4 turns

Declined - the breeze of wind technique exists in many forms, i own that, so remove it, lok has a cj like that too so can't have it as part of the summon.

( Hebi Kuchiyose: Ōkui no hebi ) | Snake Summoning: Snakes of Gluttony
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
Ōkui no hebi is a special summoning technique made to call forth a unique group of Snakes from Ryuchi Cave. By drawing blood and clapping ones hands together, one would summon several dozen Snakes of Gluttony. These particular snakes are very small, nearly unable to be perceived by the untrained eye. They'd be summoned directly onto the user, where they'd slither around his body awaiting to be used. These snakes have 2 basic abilities that help them cope with the user in battle. The first is the passive ability to link their Senjutsu with the user's, making it possible for them to blend in and hide within the user's techniques without being directly harmed by them. Once they've enabled themselves capable of blending with the users techniques, they'd infuse their stomachs and mouths with Senjutsu also. This way, when enemy techniques collide with techniques the snakes are hidden within, their defensive capabilities come into play. The snakes are able to converge onto the said technique whether it is solid or energy, and begin eating at it. The Senjutsu present in their mouths and stomachs are violent by nature, ripping apart what comes into contact with it, thus making it a simple task for the snakes to eat almost anything of the same rank or lower. Even though the snakes can be hidden within the user's techniques, they can also defend from and eat techniques directly attacking the user seeing as they are present on his body already.

Note: Can only be used once and lasts 3 turns total.
Note: Counts as a move to eat a technique, and can only eat up to and including A-rank techniques
Note: Can only be used by Masters of Snake Sage Mode

Declined - first blue, cover your body in fire it will burn them, you can't just have them immune to that. As for the technique overall, you're covering yourself with snakes that eat oncoming jutsu, which i wont allow either.

 

[Summer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Dropping this if approved:

Spoiler

Fuji Kujaku Toku(Wisteria Peacock Shield)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 40
Damage:80 (+10 to taijutsu
Description:
This hand held shield is made of chakra metal which makes it so the shield can resonate with the user's chakra, be it elemental or regular chakra. This shield is shown as whatever colour the user deems fitting for his style. It has taken years of training to perfect utilizing a shield in battle and taijutsu combat with the shield, but well worth the effort put into it. This particular style and fabricated shield weighs no more then that of a two samurai's katana This shield is round in shape and covers close to half the user when blocking attacks, it also has a strap on the backside for carrying purposes. The strap has built in holder's for three kunai, or three scrolls(similar to a gun strap holding bullets) making for easy access to kunai or scrolls in place securely. The offensive ability behind this shield is usable once every two turns the user is able to infuse the top of the shield with Wind based chakra and by rotating the wind on the face of he shield it boosts the throwing speed and power Rotation of the shield upon contact with a target. The user even has the ability to make the edge of the shield like a saw blade with wind chakra adding a slicing and cutting ability to the wind natured shield. The shield is returned to the user by either attaching a chain of wind that is near invisible or by ricocheting off of things. The user of the shield must catch the shield by its strap which slightly hangs down while being thrown, many shinobi have said that this was the true form of Rasenshuriken. While in wind state shield mode the user can use it in close combat as well smash the enemy in the face or chest with extra force due to the wind chakra on the face of the shield.
It also has the ability to block explosive kunai's and up to C rank Taijutsu, while also adding a +10 boost to damage while using the shield in conjunction with taijutsu and any shield developed taijutsu made at into Freeform or actual jutsu's.

Restrictions:
+shield throw is S rank in power when fused with wind chakra.

+once per two turns the elemental shield throw and only three times per battle.

+no S-Rank or above wind techniques on the turn after the shield throw is used

+can only hold three Kunai or three scrolls

+user must state at the start of battle or summon the shield

+only usable by Juha and those taught to.

Maghilda
Type:Weapon
Rank: S rank
Range:short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description
This giant hammer was passed down from a woman named Nora Valkyrie. It is a long handled hammer with a big head and a long haft(handle) the length of 5 feet, and weighs in at 20lbs. The head of the hammer is round and flat on the front side and on the back side it comes to an Spike like point . The user can channel wind chakra into the head of the hammer, and use it to propel the backside of the hammer. This gives it a burst of speed that is harder to visually time an attack. This release of wind will help to propel the hammer swings and or rotational swings of the hammer.
The boosting speed is similar to that of a jet stream of wind released from its backside. Having a speedy swing will give extra momentum for crushing blows. Due to the size of the hammer the user can place a foot on the head of the hammer, while it is upside down. The user holding the haft and standing on the head will be able to release the wind from the spike end. This will propel you through mid air combat by jetting you around on the hammer. As seen in the video the she was able to lift herself into the air or around mid air on the battlefield.

Extrovert

Using earth chakra with the hammer and seining it into the ground. A person can create a wave of undetectable tremors throughout the ground up to long range. This will stop any forming of a Jutsu in the earth. And or breakdown any earth Jutsu that are already being controlled in the earth, making them fall apart( up to A rank but not including A ranks).



Restrictions:

+ wind burst requires a full turn cool down between usage.

+ earth wave disruption can only be used twice per battle.

+ earth wave disruption lasts for two turns.

+ weight change can only be used four times per battle, and at the end of the last turn the hammer stays in normal weight.

+ can only be used by Juha and those he allows.
Declined - too much for one weapons and description needs work and remove the boosting.





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Kuchiyose Tsuki Doton Sennin - Meerkat Summoning Moon Earth Sage
Type: summoning
Rank: A rank
Range: Short- long range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: this young meerkat regular in size 3 feet tall and can stand on two legs and use hand signs Tsuki is a earth sage and able to change his body into the earth and take control of the earth in the perimeter of short range of the summoner. this makes it so the meerkat has control of the earth directly under the summoner for the duration of four turns. This allows the meerkat to block A rank and below earth Jutsu the are used through the ground. He also has the ability to feel vibrations across the ground meaning that if an enemy begins using earth and or even just moving across the battlefield. This means that he is able to feel even the slightest of pressure that is applied on the earth's surface. He also can utilize vibrations from his paws. By placing them on the ground breaking down earth based making the enemies earth jutsu's crumble apart once per turn by enhancing and sending more power into the earth with a vibrating paw touch ( raw chakra Vibrating at high speed).
Tsuki is able to use up to A rank Doton jutsu's only when he is above ground and not when he is fused with the ground. he is even able to use doton jutsu that require handsigns.

restrictions
+can only use vibrations ability once per turn and three times per battle. With a one turn cool down.

+ once he is melded with the ground he must stay that way during the summoning duration.

+stays on the field for four turns.

+can only be summoned twice per battle.

+must sign meerkat contract learn

Declined - you have an A rank summon under you. If i were to use an S or F rank earth jutsu from below you it would overpower your summon. This can't stop the opponent from using earth like this.

Bolder changes and reorganized the weapon. Removed earth aspects.
Dropping this if approved:

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Fuji Kujaku Toku(Wisteria Peacock Shield)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 40
Damage:80 (+10 to taijutsu
Description:
This hand held shield is made of chakra metal which makes it so the shield can resonate with the user's chakra, be it elemental or regular chakra. This shield is shown as whatever colour the user deems fitting for his style. It has taken years of training to perfect utilizing a shield in battle and taijutsu combat with the shield, but well worth the effort put into it. This particular style and fabricated shield weighs no more then that of a two samurai's katana This shield is round in shape and covers close to half the user when blocking attacks, it also has a strap on the backside for carrying purposes. The strap has built in holder's for three kunai, or three scrolls(similar to a gun strap holding bullets) making for easy access to kunai or scrolls in place securely. The offensive ability behind this shield is usable once every two turns the user is able to infuse the top of the shield with Wind based chakra and by rotating the wind on the face of he shield it boosts the throwing speed and power Rotation of the shield upon contact with a target. The user even has the ability to make the edge of the shield like a saw blade with wind chakra adding a slicing and cutting ability to the wind natured shield. The shield is returned to the user by either attaching a chain of wind that is near invisible or by ricocheting off of things. The user of the shield must catch the shield by its strap which slightly hangs down while being thrown, many shinobi have said that this was the true form of Rasenshuriken. While in wind state shield mode the user can use it in close combat as well smash the enemy in the face or chest with extra force due to the wind chakra on the face of the shield.
It also has the ability to block explosive kunai's and up to C rank Taijutsu, while also adding a +10 boost to damage while using the shield in conjunction with taijutsu and any shield developed taijutsu made at into Freeform or actual jutsu's.

Restrictions:
+shield throw is S rank in power when fused with wind chakra.

+once per two turns the elemental shield throw and only three times per battle.

+no S-Rank or above wind techniques on the turn after the shield throw is used

+can only hold three Kunai or three scrolls

+user must state at the start of battle or summon the shield

+only usable by Juha and those taught to.

Maghild
Type:Weapon
Rank: S rank
Range:short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description
This giant hammer was passed down from a woman named Nora Valkyrie. It is a long handled hammer with a big head and a long haft(handle) the length of 5 feet, and weighs in at 20lbs. The head of the hammer is round and flat on the front side and on the back side it comes to an Spike like point . Seen as how this hammer is quite a big and heavier weapon then most it is normally stored in a scroll unless the user states at the beginning of battle that they are carrying it.


+Tempest strike
The user can channel wind chakra into the head of the hammer, and use it to propel the backside of the hammer. This gives it a burst of speed that is harder to visually time an attack. This release of wind will help to propel the hammer swings and or rotational swings of the hammer.
The boosting speed is similar to that of a jet stream of wind released from its backside. Having a speedy swing will give extra momentum for crushing blows.

+Talley Hoooo!
Due to the size of the hammer the user can place a foot on the head of the hammer, while it is upside down. The user holding the haft and standing on the head will be able to release the wind from the spike end. This will propel you through mid air combat by jetting you around on the hammer. As seen in the video the she was able to lift herself into the air or around mid air on the battlefield.


+Behemoth
This hammer has a unique trait that while swinging it and using wind to boost the speed of the swing. The user can manipulate a portion of wind propelling the hammer to envelop around the head. Doing this the user can enlarge the size ( double the size) of the hammers head coating it with wind to increase its close combat range. When used in conjunction with tempest strike the user will have to use two slots to use behemoth with tempest strike.







Restrictions:

+ every time an ability is used it uses a Jutsu slot.

+behemoth can only increase the size of the hammer head twice per battle.

+ tempest strike requires a full turn cool down between usage. This also gives a +5 damage boost.

+ Talley Hoooo can only be used twice in the same turn.

+ Talley hoooo requires a full turn cool down after the two usages.

+ can only be used by Juha and those he allows.

Declined - the wind size bit, is too much like one of the swords of the mi


Contract:

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Meerkat chimeiteki youryou - Meerkat Arts Lethal dose
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: after summoning any A rank meerkat. The animal is then able to form two hand signs and release a special dander that is imbedded with fire chakra. This dander has condensed fire chakra that once it touches you it burns the skin. This cloud of dander will be bright orange when release and will linger in the air for two turns or until dispersed. The cloud can reach into the up to 8 feet high.

With an extra Handseal the summon can transform the fire dander into a clone of itself that can be sent out at the enemy or used as a type of diversion. This form however is slightly different as it will engulf and surround on touching anything solid.

restrictions
+can only be used twice per battle.

+ can only use once per turn .

+must sign meerkat contract learn

Declined - declined, not going to let you make a fire/fur/clone with the second part xd