Rank: Forbidden Range: Short - Mid Type: Offensive/Defensive Chakra: 50(+10 for Defense) Damage: 90(-20 to the user) Description: The user gathers a very large amount of Raiton chakra in his hands and raises them up. He, then mutters a simple player and sends Raiton chakra toward the sky continuously, summoning a figure, which looks like the Tengu God, Sanjakubo. The figure is entirely made up of lightning. He's about 5 m tall and 3 m wide. Upon the user's command, he can attack the opponent, sending several thin, but powerful lightning streams at him from its mouth. The user can also launch it at the opponent, after performing the Ram handseal upon which he explodes into 100 small sized lightning bolts, which are enough to kill the opponent. As a defense, the figure surrounds the user when he channels additional chakra to it and weaves the Tiger handseal. It can bear up to B Rank lightning attacks. A Forbidden Rank lightning however, destroys the figure. The figure lasts only for 2 turns, after which it disappears with a bright light. Summoning the figure damages the user's hands after the jutsu is over and the user suffers 2nd degree burns on his hands. Notes:
-Can be only used by Nāruto
-The user has to maintain focus over his chakra for the figure to retain its shape and form.
-Can be only used once per battle.
-Lasts for only two turns
-Cannot use any Forbidden or S-Rank lightning jutsu for the current and next turn.
The figure looks like this, but without a sword.
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Whoa, whoa. At the bolded part. You need to emphasize, good sir. How do the lightning streams work? How many exactly and what's the nature of them? How powerful are each? Shouldn't it also count a move?
For the second ability, what do you mean by "a hundred lightning bolts?" Are they small in nature or just an explosion? How does that kill the opponent? And, can you only send him up to mid range?
Resubmitting, changes in bold. (Katon : Jōshō Taiyō) - Fire Style : Rising Sun Type: Offensive Rank: Forbidden Range: Short - Long Chakra:50 Damage:90(20 to user due to exposure to the immense heat) Description:
This is a jutsu founded during the time of the Third Hokage, but due to its side effect on the user, this technique was abandoned, over the years, after the Fourth Hokage died, Mako stole the scroll and escaped to Kumo, a user will first perform the Tiger- Boar - Snake handseal and then release their Katon chakra into the air above them creating a giant orb of flames ( 5meters radius ) much like a rising sun, this is where this jutsu gets its name, on the user's signal, the orb will release an immense heat wave concentrated on target(s) which could dry up a lake in split seconds, the heat will dry the water content in the opponent's body and at then set them ablaze similar to Pakura's scorch style, the heat of this jutsu has been seen to even increase the temperature of the air around making breathing difficult for target(s), due to the ground being a conductor and having water content, the temperature of the ground is also increased, with a final flick of the user's hand, the user can send the "sun" crashing into a target and causing it to explode up to mid range from the point of contact.
~Can only be taught by Mako.~
~After using this technique, user can't mold katon chakra in the.same and next turn~
~Can only be used once in a battle~
~Those with fire as specialty can perform the jutsu with only the tiger handseal~
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So you're saying that the "sun" can both send out a heat wave and explode on contact? Also, a heat wave is a general area of effect, wouldn't you be affected by this jutsu too given how hot it is?
Resubmitting, changes in bold. (Katon : Jōshō Taiyō) - Fire Style : Rising Sun Type: Offensive Rank: Forbidden Range: Short - Long Chakra:50 Damage:90(20 to user due to exposure to the immense heat) Description:
This is a jutsu founded during the time of the Third Hokage, but due to its side effect on the user, this technique was abandoned, over the years, after the Fourth Hokage died, Mako stole the scroll and escaped to Kumo, a user will first perform the Tiger- Boar - Snake handseal and then release their Katon chakra into the air above them creating a giant orb of flames (5 meters radius ) much like a rising sun, this is where this jutsu gets its name, the sun is created at a very high speed, on the user's mental signal, the orb will release an immense heat wave concentrated on target(s) which could dry up a lake in split seconds, the heat will dry the water content in the opponent's body and at then set them ablaze similar to Pakura's scorch style, the heat of this jutsu has been seen to even increase the temperature of the air around making breathing difficult for target(s), due to the ground being a conductor and having water content, the temperature of the ground is also increased, due to the intense heat wave, the user suffers 20 damage from the sun, or the user can decide to with a flick of his hand to send the "sun" crashing into a target at great speed causing it to explode up to mid range from the point of contact leaving a huge crater in the ground. The explosion affects the user due to the amount of heat released from the explosion.
~Only one of the two instances can be used at a.time.
~Can only be taught by Mako.~
~After using this technique, user can't mold katon chakra in the.same and next turn~
~Can only be used once in a battle~
~Those with fire as specialty can perform the jutsu with only the tiger handseal~
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Declined, has been done before. DNR.
---- (Raiton : Kaihi) - Lightning Style : Evasion Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: C Range: Short Chakra: 20 Damage: N/A( 40 if opponent comes in contact with the sparks ) Description: This is a variant of the change of body stance technique which when the user gets hit by an attack replaces his body with hundreds of small sparks of lightning hovering around the user's original position which would explode in a small radius ( 4 meters ) if target comes in contact with any of the sparks, the user will then appear any where mid range from his position.
~All rules guilding the substitution technique apply here.
~Usable only once in a battle.
~Can only be taught by Mako.
Declined, do not resubmit
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(Suiton: Shazou Kussetsu) – Water Style: Image Refraction
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user gathers his chakra and releases it as transparent water particles all around him, which refracts light to show an inaccurate location of the user’s position. The refraction operates at any angle around the user, such that anyone who attacks him will be aiming at an empty spot, except for large scale jutsus. It is best used when the opponent’s attention is caught elsewhere, like when they are already handling another jutsu, if the water molecules are hit by a jutsu capable of destroying it ( Following Elemental Weaknesses and Strengths of course ), the suiton particles will disperse stopping the attack ( Elemental Weaknesses ofc ) .
~Can only be taught by Mako.
~Needs a turn cooldown between each usage.
~Can only be used 5 times in a battle.
~Note that elemental weaknesses and strengths apply.
~Dojutsu and sensory nins can see through this technique.
Declined, do not resubmit
Yeah, this doesn't seem logical at all. I can understand if it's ice, but transparent water particles isn't going to pass.
(Ototon: Māyā no Sōzō ) - Sound Release: Māyā's creation
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Depends
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Maya's creation is a sound jutsu which falls into the Genjutsu inducing sound waves section, without it being a genjutsu itself. This jutsu would instead be used as a medium for other genjutsus under the users belt. Upon activation of this jutsu, all the genjutsus used by the user would no longer require the normal inducing factors that are described on them, but would instead be induced through the release of high frequency and low energy sound waves. This would allow genjutsus to be used at a quicker rate, however, despite this, once activated the genjutsu would take it's course as described, with no change to the speed or intensity of the illusion itself. Of course the strength of the genjutsu would not change either, nor the normal methods used to release said genjutsu.
- Can only be taught by Erzo
- Can only be used 3 times; lasts four turns each time Declined, Genjutsu need a trigger to be performed, the trigger in this jutsu being the sound waves. By creating this, you turn any genjutsu used into a sound based genjutsu and that's not going to fly. DNR
(Ototon: Tōritsu Yūsen ) - Sound Release: Inverted Priorities
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 60
Description: Seeing how handseals are usually something which are considered a hindrance in battle due to the jutsus which require them taking a longer time to perform, Roy decided to change that through the use of Hindering Sound waves. This jutsu itself require two hand seals to perform, and whilst those hand seals are being performed, the user would amplify the sound made by his fingers greatly, releasing it as high frequency and low energy sound waves which travel at quite fast speeds towards the opponent. This sound waves do no real physical damage to the opponent but instead focus on making the opponent either lose his sense of balance as his equilibrium is affected, leading to slight dizziness, disorientation and even nausea. Or increase the opponents hear rate, leading to a loss of breath, slowing down movement and reaction time. Both of these effects are temporary and are only in effect when this jutsu is activated or when hand seals are being performed. The effects last the turn that handseals are used on, and all bodily functions would return to normal and the opponent would be in the same state they were before, the turn after, assuming no hand seals are used.
- Can only be taught by Erzo
- Can be used twice; Lasts four turns each time
- Once used the user must wait two turns before using again
Declined, this is a mixing of Sound Release: Ringing Madness and Sound Release: The Whispers to the Canines.
(Mokuton: Ogakuzu no uchiwake) - Wood Release: Sawdust Breakdown Type: supplementary/offenseive Rank: S Range: short - long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description:The user channels their mokuton chakra into a wooden creation and when they perform the tiger handseal, they manipulate the mokuton chakra and cause the wooden creation to dissolve into a cloud of small wooden particles. The user can control and manipulate the sawdust (cloud) with hand gestures, similar to Gaara manipulating his sand. The user can create shapes with the cloud made out of wooden particles and when they perform the Ram handseal the wooden particles will attach to each other and the saw dust cloud will turn into a hard piece of wood again. This could be used to reshape wooden creations. But the user could also simply attack the opponent with the sawdust cloud. The more wood that has been dissolve, the bigger the sawdust cloud. The limitations of the amount of wood that'll be dissolved are set by the chakra put into the technique.
-Can only be taught by Khallil
-can be used twice only
-1 turn cooldown
-can't perform any other technique while the user controls the sawdust
-can't perform s rank wood the same turn
Declined
How the hell does sawdust attack people? Like a swam of bugs? And how long can the suer maintain this sawdust?
And what if the opponent is caught up in this sawdust and you decide to reform back into a solid?
Devil's Fist: Wrath of Apollo (Mao Genkotsu: Doki no Apollo) Type: Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: Arguably, one of the most powerful attacks in the entire style of Devil's Fist, but actually its most basic application. Simply heating the user's body. By the user entering into his standard Devil's Fist stance, a low and wide stance, in which the knees are slightly bent, and the user's hands are resting near his head. While in this stance, the user is focusing his fire chakra into his body and heating it up as much as he can without it becoming dangerous and harming him in the process. The user will then dash towards the opponent. The user then delivers a flurry of at the very least 4 blows using any part of the body. Knees, elbows, etc. The more attacks he makes, the less focused and coordinated the attacks are. For example if the user were to hit ten blows, they would be much less focused, and each indivual blow would be much less damaging than if the user were to attack with say four blows. During the course of this jutsu, the user's body would be far too hot to touch with an unguarded body part. Unguarded contact would cause severe burning of the opponents' body.
-Restrictions-
Can only be used once per battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used by someone who has mastered Devil's Fist. No fire or taijutsu above A rank next turn
Pending, leaving for Chris
Declined, did...did you even change anything? Also, don't bold the entire submission next time. Only the changes so we can actually see what you changed.
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Summoning: Ammit the Devourer (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Shokomotsu no Ammit) Type: Summoning Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description: Ammit is a large pufferfish, appearing to be about the size of an elephant when fully grown. Unlike other pufferfish, his size does not expand or contract. He can still fill his elastic stomach, but he acts as the contract's defensive summon. Ammit has a naturally blue color, but he cannot change his color like other pufferfish. He of course has toxic spikes evident in most pufferfish, but only has the generic poison found in most pufferfish. His poison infects the target, and causes painful burning to tissue. The pain is very great, actually surpassing the pain of a burn. These spines can be launched up to mid range, and are as hard as steel senbon. Launching them at the opponent counts as a move. This ability is A ranked.Ammit is a timid pufferfish, contrary to many others. Instead of fighting, he prefers to relax with some snacks. He has very low self esteem, even though he is actually a capable warrior. Ammit's body is reinforced with a layer of tough scales, underneath his toxic spikes, which can be reinforced at will (making Ammit immune to freeform taijutsu and weaponry) . This layer is extremely difficult to pass through, and would require a jutsu of C rank or above. Although, a weakness is that Ammit has an extreme weakness to raiton. Even the weakest D rank lightning attacks, will be able to easily overpower his toughened scales. He can be summoned right in front of the user to serve as a shield from such attacks. This however, is not at all or even nearly the extent of Ammit's usefulness. Ammit has a very strange stomach. By eating certain materials, his body processes them into a strange substance. A sticky syrup, similar to the kind found in Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field. This is produced when Ammit devours a water jutsu. By absorbing the water jutsu (can absorb water jutsu up to A rank), he can produce this syrup. He can use it in several unique ways as well. He can excrete it through the pores on his skin so that his body becomes covered in it, making him take up the qualities of the syrup (it's stickiness, so that objects when in contact with him will stick to him). He can fire off the syrup in the form of bullets of syrup, equivalent to the rank of the water jutsu absorbed. These bullets of syrup can travel up to mid range, and are the size and diameter of the water jutsu absorbed. In additon, they will count towards the three allowed jutsu per turn.Finally, he can also coat his toxic spines in this syrup, making them much harder to remove if they have pierced an enemy.
Restrictions:
Can only be summoned once a battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Lasts for 4 turns once summoned
No other pufferfish can be summoned in the same turn.
Approved
Excellent!
Football Arts: Curve Ball-(Shuukyu Geijutsu: Sori Butokai) Type: Offense Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user will either create a ball made up of pure chakra or use a pre-existing soccer ball (CW). They will kick the ball with the inside of their foot, while swinging their leg in a large arc with a heavy follow through. This will cause the ball to have a massive lateral spin. The ball will race towards the opponents location, but due to the heavy follow through the ball will actually pass the opponent during flight, not harming them whatsoever in this stage, but due to the massive spin and force delivered, the ball will make a sudden curve during flight, where it will change direction and had back towards the opponent, by making a circular curve, hitting them from behind. This jutsu makes for a powerful deceptive attack. The user is able to perform the kick in almost any position due to having excelled acrobatic abilities because of the fighting style, the user would just have to make sure they kick the ball correctly.
Note: Can only be used three times Note: Requires a two turn break between usage.
Note: Must be a practitioner of Football Arts
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Devil's Fist: Wrath of Apollo (Mao Genkotsu: Doki no Apollo) Type: Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: Arguably, one of the most powerful attacks in the entire style of Devil's Fist, but actually its most basic application. Simply heating the user's body. By the user entering into his standard Devil's Fist stance, a low and wide stance, in which the knees are slightly bent, and the user's hands are resting near his head. While in this stance, the user is focusing his fire chakra into his body and heating it up as much as he can without it becoming dangerous and harming him in the process. The user will then dash towards the opponent. The user then delivers a flurry of at the very least 4 blows using any part of the body. Knees, elbows, etc. The more attacks he makes, the less focused and coordinated the attacks are. For example if the user were to hit ten blows, they would be much less focused, and each indivual blow would be much less damaging than if the user were to attack with say four blows. During the course of this jutsu, the user's body would be far too hot to touch with an unguarded body part. Unguarded contact would cause severe burning of the opponents' body.
-Restrictions-
Can only be used once per battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used by someone who has mastered Devil's Fist. No fire or taijutsu above A rank next turn
Declined, has no need to be S rank, make it A.
Devil's Fist: Jet Gattling-(Mao Genkotsu: Jetto Gatoringu) Type: Offensive Rank: Forbidden Range: Short Chakra: 50 Damage: 90 (-10 to user) Description: This is perhaps the most powerful jutsu found in the Devil's Fist fighting style. The user will run up to the opponent, before concentrating his fire chakra into his arms. His arms become extremely heated, and the user begins a gigantic punching assault at the opponent at extremely high speeds. The user's arms appear as a blur, moving faster than most can people can see. This makes it appear as if the opponent is being punched dozens of times, while in reality the opponent is being punched so fast that it appears to be striking the opponent with dozens of hits at the same time. The attack is powerful enough to be able to break through S rank and below earth, and comes in as a very versatile jutsu utilizing the raw strength and speed that is evident in user's of Devil's Fist. The opponent will suffer not only from the blunt impact of the punches, but will also be severely burned after the duration of the attack. The attack is unfocused, and will (if it lands) hit a majority of the opponent's body.
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-Restrictions-
Can only be used once per battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Must be a master of Devil's Fist
No fire or taijutsu in the same turn or next turn
Leaves the user's hands extremely tired, and leaves the user unable to use handseals for the next turn. Declined, moving at speeds like that aren't within the realm of your CFS' abilities nor is it possible like that, DNR.
Despite its name, the Maned Wolf is not directly related to any other living Canid. It is not a fox, wolf, coyote, jackal or dog but a distinct Canid with it's own Genus, although previously it has been placed in the Canis and Vulpes genera based on similar physical traits to other Canid species. Its closest living relative is the bush dog but it is the only known member of the Genus Chrysocyon which means "Golden Dog". It's believed that it's a survivor from the Pleistocene Epoch, which spanned from about 2.6 million to 11,700 years ago. It is the largest known species of canine in South America which can reach up to 4ft tall on all fours and generally weighs around 50-75 pounds.
Physically the Maned Wolf looks like a large, long legged fox with it's fur's main color being red or orange, but they are known for having other fur colors, including black, brown, gray and white, while it's legs and mane are usually black and it's chin, neck and tail's tip are usually white. It has a long, pointed muzzle and large, erect ears as well as a full set of sharp fangs and claws. The Maned Wolf gets it's name from its tendency to raise its mane when it feels threatened or if it is attempting to appear intimidating, raising it's profile so to speak. The Maned Wolf is also known for it's signature odor which has granted it its unfavorable nickname, the "Skunk Wolf". The smell has been likened to cannabis or hops, both of which have a similar substance known as Pyrazine. Another nickname for the species, due to it's slim, long legs and fox-like appearance, is "A Fox on Stilts".
The Maned Wolf's main habitats are flat grasslands or forests where they have evolved with their long legs to look over tall grass for their prey. The Maned Wolf is carnivorous, but it is known to eat vegetables like sugarcane or wolf apple, they even eat insects to supplement their diet. Their general approach to hunting is to find their prey and pounce on it, killing it with their size and weight. What's most interesting about their hunting approach is the fact that they never hunt in a pack. They are monogamous meaning they only mate with one partner during their lifetime, but they live very solitary lives, only meeting for a few months a year to mate and raise their young. Despite their solitary nature, they defend their territory and share it with their mate, using their powerful smells to indicate where they have hunted or buried prey and also to ward off other predators who may try and steal their prey or hunt on their territory.
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Background and General Information in the RP:
The Maned Wolves live in a large Forest Region in the South-West of The Land of Fire. This Forest is fairly overgrown, with large tree's that allow very little sunlight into it. The general feel and appearance of the Forest is like that of the 44th Training Ground: The Forest of Death, with a massive network of branches creating an elevated platform high about the sea of flowing roots below. Because of this, rather gloomy, appearance, the Forest has been dubbed "Darkroot Forest". Another off-putting factor of the forest is the Maned Wolf's natural odor. A foul smell which has earned them disfavor from other Canine Summons and those with heightened smells, such as the Inuzuka. This has lead the Maned Wolves to become hostile to other Canine Summons and especially the Inuzuka. This is why the Maned Wolves have remained undiscovered for so long, no one has dared enter Darkroot Forest, because of it's appearance and smell. However, deep within this seemingly deadly forest lies the Darkroot Basin, the Ancestral Meeting Grounds for the Maned Wolves. The Darkroot Basin is nothing short of an oasis amongst the dark and endless roots and branches of the Forest, with plenty of open space and crystal clear waters for the inhabitants to rely on. Also hidden, deeper within Darkroot Forest, there is the Darkroot Garden where the Maned Wolves allow humans to sign their Summoning Contract. Erected in the center of the Garden is a massive gravestone, and inscribed on it, every person who has ever called on the Maned Wolves in battle and have had the courage to call them "friend".
However this is only the home of the Maned Wolves. They don't reside there permanently, when a Maned Wolf reaches a certain age they must venture into the unknown and prove their worth, either in battle or by other means, such as bringing new or valuable knowledge back to their fellow Maned Wolves. Great Warriors of the Contract have extremely distinguished Manes and title's, a sign of their power and a symbol of the respect they receive from their own kind. These Manes vary from simple decorations to more drastic physical changes, such as a Maned Wolf's Mane representing their Natural Elemental Affinity. Because of their "Coming of Age Rite", they have ventured far and wide to various Lands and learned their ways, giving the Maned Wolves great elemental diversity amongst their ranks, as every one of their kind has ventured to a different part of the world and experienced different things.
As Canids they naturally have a great sense of smell and hearing while in battle Maned Wolves can rely on their sharp fangs and claws, as well as their great agility due to their extended leg length, but this makes their legs a weak area since they are longer and skinnier than other Canine legs. Additionally Maned Wolves have their individual skills which vary from Wolf to Wolf, depending on either their Elemental Affinity or area of expertise. Possibly their most "odd" natural feature is their smell. The odor is very potent, causing people to become overwhelmed by it, especially those with a heightened sense of smell, like members of the Inuzuka Clan. The smell itself cannot be exactly likened to anything else on the earth, but has a distinctive "burning" after-scent.
Because of their overall appearance and the general opinion of them, people rarely decide to sign their Summoning Contract, but those who do decide they wish to be associated with the Maned Wolves must receive a tattoo, like all other Summoning Contracts. This will be administered at the beginning of the training session. This is the Tattoo;
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Very nice choice of animal, never heard of these before. Just a couple of things before it can be approved. Try to condense it a little, there's a lot in there and not a lot of which seems important. The story and in depth background is nice, but it could use a little shortening. Besides that the smell stuff needs to be clarified. You say it affects Inuzuka, but not to what extent. Obviously it can't be anything drastic, though I think saying it rendered their smell tracking abilities useless would be okay.
(Ninpo: Ritomasu Yubi) Ninja Art: Litmus Finger Type: Supplementary Rank: E Range: Self Chakra: 5 Damage: N/A Description: This Jutsu is based off of the special paper Senseis use to assess a Ninja's Elemental Affinity. By focusing Chakra in their hand/ finger and by performing a unique action they manifest their Chakra's nature in a primal form. For example, if the user has a Fire Affinity, they can snap their fingers and create a small flame. If the user has a Earth Affinity they can ball their hand into a fist to make a pebble and so on.
Note: Should only be used for training/ RP purposes.
Note: Can only be taught by x iiiMPerFeCT. ___________
-Approved- O___O
(Ninpō: Ritomasu Fingā) Ninja Art: Litmus Finger Type: Supplementary Rank: E-Rank Range: Short Chakra: 5 Damage: N/A
Description: This Jutsu was created using the special paper Sensei's possess to assess a Shinobi's Elemental Affinity as a basis. The user focuses Chakra in their finger/ hand and, by performing a small action that represents the Element they wish to replicate, they produce a raw/ primal form of the chosen Element. While this technique lacks any real "punch", its strength lies in the users imagination. The following is a list of basic examples from the 5 Elemental Natures, note that these are simply basic examples, and not the sole usage of the technique.
Fire: The user can snap their fingers, using the heat caused by the friction to make a "lighter" from their finger/ thumb. Other uses include low heat Fire's, such as Ash.
Wind: The user can twirl their finger around, using the rotation to create a mini-vortex on their fingertip. Other uses include basic variations of Wind, like small gusts.
Lightning: The user can rub their fingers together, using the vibration to mimic a small electrical charge. Other uses include basic variations of Lightning.
Earth: The user can ball their hand into a fist, compressing their Chakra and make a small rock or pebble. Other uses include softer or lighter variations of Earth, such as mud, dirt or dust.
Water: The user can simply draw a line of Water in the air, using free-flowing movements with their finger, creating a "stream" of Water in the air. Other uses include basic variants on the Water Element, such as syrup or oil.
Note: Can only be taught by x iiiMPerFeCT.
Since I made a few changes, instead of bolding almost the whole thing, I've listed them here.
Changed Name. "Fingā" is just a more literal translation of Finger.
Changed Range. Short Range is more accurate than "Self".
Changed overall description, including examples of all Elements, not just Fire & Earth.
Removed the first Note, as it's useless. A user will be able to tell that it has very little practical battle uses due to it's Rank and Damage, even without the note.
Removed the example image.
Approved
This will go so well when you become a senpai/sensei in the near future.
(Fuuton: Hageshii Soyokaze) - Wind Release: Tempestuous Whisk
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short (Created) - Long (Reach)
Chakra: 40 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will perform the required handseals (3) before focusing their fuuton chakra into the air at any location on the battlefield (within short range) to generate a large amount of wind, the winds will them gather into a centered body. Then, through the use of chakra control the wind will shape into a large dog-like beast composed solely of wind. Giving off a beastly form, when standing with four feet, his height was twice can be high as a normal-sized adult human. While his total body length ranges up to five meters. The beast commonly called Soyokaze has a body running through confimed wind to form it's legs body and head, while being seemingly covered in round quilt partterns, which have a more aggressive wind properties to them. As it's name and body structure imply, this beast excels in wind manipulation. It has the ability to with a single swipe of it's claws, which can slash human flesh with ease, release a three blade pattern of it's claw, roughly 1 meter in length each blade torwards the target. This can be done successively if wanted, and each 3 bladed swipe has a strength of A rank. Soyokaze's other primary ability is to 'surf' through the air, using it's wind abilities to do so, this is done by one out of 2 methods. The first method of 'surfing' is turning it's entire body into a gale of wind, which moves 25% (1/4th) faster than the user's base speed (the beast's base speed on ground is the same as the user's base). While in gale form, the beast can still manifest and solidify only selective parts of it's body if wanted, with the gole of causing damage, such as rushing torwards the target as a gale and then manifesting only a claw to slash at them. The second method of air flight/surfing was developed mainly to give the user aerial movement. Since the beasts body is solid enough to actually allow the user to place themselves on it's back. However turning itself into gale would make the user fall, because of this the beast instead turns only it's four legs into continuous streams of wind. Releasing wind into the opposite direction to carry the user on it's back, while doing this however, it cannot attack in any way. Lastly, the beast of wind can by will turn into a wave of slicing winds when wanted, carrying an S rank strength behind it, once used however, the beast ceases to exist completely. Because of this, this technique is commonly known as Final howl, needless to say, this can only be used 1 time each time Tempestuous Whisk is used. Freeform slashing or biting does not have rank strength, but it can slash and stab into human flesh, though not deep into the bone.
Note(s):
- Can only be used x3 per battle.
- Must wait a three turn cooldown before using again.
- Remains on the field four turns or otherwise ends when Final howl is used.
- Turning into gale form counts as 1 move, each time it's used. - User carrying counts as 1 move when used.
- Releasing the claw blades count as 1 move each time used. And can only be used x4 per battle.
- Due to constant chakra drain, the user cannot use S rank or higher wind jutsu while active.
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☼ Declined ☼
Way too much going on here. Its essentially a summon, that's not a summon. Tone it down.
Removed the bold in the quote above. Completely voiding the user carrying abilities. Increased number of usage, but decreased the turns it lasts on the field.
(Fuuton: Hageshii Soyokaze) - Wind Release: Tempestuous Whisk
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short (Created) - Long (Reach)
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will perform the required handseals (3) before focusing their fuuton chakra into the air at any location on the battlefield (within short range) to generate a large amount of wind, the winds will them gather into a centered body. Then, through the use of chakra control the wind will shape into a large dog-like beast composed solely of wind. Giving off a beastly form, when standing with four feet, his height was twice can be high as a normal-sized adult human. While his total body length ranges up to five meters. The beast commonly called Soyokaze has a body running through confimed wind to form its legs body and head, while being seemingly covered in round quilt partterns, which have a more aggressive wind properties to them. As its name and body structure imply, this beast excels in wind manipulation. It has the ability to with a single swipe of its claws, which can slash human flesh with ease, release a three blade pattern of its claw, roughly 1 meter in length each blade towards the target. This can be done successively if wanted, and each 3 bladed swipe has a strength of B rank. Soyokaze's other primary ability is to 'surf' through the air, using its wind abilities to do so, this is done by a certain method. The method of 'surfing' is turning its entire body into a gale of wind, which moves 25% (1/4th) faster than the user's base speed (the beast's base speed on ground is the same as the user's base). While in gale form, the beast can still manifest and solidify only selective parts of its body if wanted, with the gole of causing damage, such as rushing towards the target as a gale and then manifesting only a claw to slash at them. Lastly, the beast of wind can by will turn into a wave of slicing winds when wanted, carrying an A rank strength behind it, once used however, the beast ceases to exist completely. Because of this, this technique is commonly known as Final howl, needless to say, this can only be used 1 time each time Tempestuous Whisk is used. Freeform slashing or biting does not have rank strength, but it can slash and stab into human flesh, though not deep into the bone.
Note(s):
- Can only be used x3 per battle.
- Must wait a three turn cooldown before using again.
- Remains on the field three turns or otherwise ends when Final howl is used.
- Turning into gale form counts as 1 move, each time it's used.
- Releasing the claw blades count as 1 move each time used. And can only be used x4 per battle.
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Made it lower a rank, but removed jutsu restriction.
(Fuuton: Kuchibue kazekami) - Wind Release: Whistle of Njor
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40 (-5 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: The user does a couple of handseals, focusing their fuuton chakra into the air at a location on the battlefield to generate a slightly flat spinning whirl of vacuum wind, near their position or the target's. The vacuum whirl suspends in the air and is constantly sucking anything it is facing, aslong as within the radius of the sucking motion, the constant twirling of the vacuum creates a shallow but wooming noise, giving it's existance to be aware of to anyone nearby. Anything sucked into it is then forcefully crushed and shred through the pressure within the vacuum, or otherwise have their body partially crushed (like a hand, etc.) should they escape/counter while being sucked almost fully by the vacuum whirl. The vacuum is large enough to suck in even summonings the size of sasuke's hawk; It pulls in anything within a 10 meter radius infront of itself, and can be created no more than 12 meters apart from the user without self-destructing. The technique can otherwise be used as a defensive vacuum, given it has the ability to suck it not only solid matter (live beings), but also fire, lightning, wind or water techniques. Strong elemental techniques however will cause the vacuum to implode on itself. The sucking speed by itself is rather fast, however gives awareness to the victims appropriately before fully consuming them. It cannot be created any less than 10 feet near the target(s).
- Remains on the field two turns.
- Can only be used x3 per battle.
- Must wait a two turn cooldown prior using again.
- Can only suck A rank elemental techniques without self-destructing.
- Can only suck up to 2 A rank elemental techniques before dispersing.
- No other S rank wind techniques in the same or next turn.
- Must be taught by Loki
Declined, do not resubmit
I've seen enough Wind techniques that act as a vacuum of some sort.
(Fuuton: Wa-Shuwan ) - Wind Release: Wonsulsa
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage: -
Descrption: Wonsusla by itself is a supplementary technique, however varying according to its use it may have offensive/defensive uses. The technique revolves around the concept of wind shapeshift. The user forges wind orbs the size of a baseball, which stay adjacent to their body ("Wonsusla"). Remaining afloat through chakra fuel, with a mere thought and a charge of chakra the user can change the wind composing said orb into an object of wind. Example like 2 foot needles to hurl and pierce targets, small shields to block freeform assaults/weapon or solid plate to stand/move. The shape the wind takes depends on the user' needs, and is restricted only to imagination. However the object must follow logics, as one cannot create a large wall of wind, the size is restricted to small-medium sized objects and nothing too advanced like animals either. Objects created are maintained through use of the transmitted chakra. Thus one can manipulate the object to float, move and attack within a short range radius, or otherwise attach it to their body depending on the object. Offensive objects can reach up to mid range without popping.
- Remain four turns before popping.
- Follows Elemental strength and weakness of wind.
- Can only be used x4 per battle & create a max of 2 Wonsulsa per use.
- Aslong as the Wonsulsa is not destroyed, after being used returns to orb shape.
- Must be taught by Loki
Declined, do not resubmit
Sorry, this is way too much of a freeform for me to accept it. It can essentially do what other Wind jutsus might do with just a slight restriction.
[Raition: Men'ekisei Raikou Kemono] - Lightning Release: Immunity of the Lightning Beast
Type: Defensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Inner
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: "Raition: Men'ekisei Raikou Kemono" Is a rather uncommon technique, as it is rather different than most of the other lightning techniques if not all. Most of the other lightning techniques are about directing a lightning attack through either the air, the sky or the ground towards the opponent in order to inflict damage to him. However, this technique is nothing close to that. In this technique, the user channels his lightning chakra into his own white blood cells, giving them the ability to release lightning currents whenever they clash with a foreigner object created and inserted inside the user body, in order to get ride of these objects. Note: Must be taught by Kamishiro Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle. Note: Can't use any lightning technique in the same turn. Note: Can only use up to A-rank lightning technique in the next turn.
Declined, do not resubmit
Umm...white blood cells? Yeah, um, this isn't going to pass for a lot of reasons.
[Mokuton: Kansen Mokuton] - Wood Release: Infected Wood
Type: Supplementary
Rank/S-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 10/20/30/40
Damage: 20/40/60/80
Description: "Mokuton: Kansen Mokuton" Is one of Hashirama's favourite techniques. It is different than any other wood technique. In this technique the user channels his wood chakra in either another wood technique or a ninja tool. With which, he creates nano-seeds which would get inside the opponent(s)' body as the wood technique/ninja tool touches their body. These seeds are no ordinary seeds, they are different than the other seeds which the user creates in order to sense the presence of the others. By using these seeds, the user is able to produce wood techniques from the enemies' own body from the seeds. With this, the user is to both harm the opponent(s)' by attacking/harming them with the produced wood and also hurt their inner body(ies) as their bodies aren't used to producing wood at all, unlike wood users. Note: Must be taught by Kamishiro Note: If used with a Ninja Tool, this technique would count as one of the three techniques of the user Note: If used with another wood technique, it wouldn't count as one of the three techniques of the user, however, the other wood technique which this one is attached to, would Note: If used with another wood technique, the technique's rank would be the same rank as the other wood technique Note: If used with Ninja tools, the technique's rank would be A-rank Note: If used the S-ranked version, the user wouldn't be able to use any wood technique higher than A-rank the same or the other turn
Declined
As of currently, I can see no proper way to counter this and exactly how it gets into the other user's body.
[Mokuton: Tonchinkan Bouryoku] - Wood Release: Contradicted Violence
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is a pretty unique wood technique as it is way different than the concept Mokuton depends on. The concept about Mokuton is producing wood from either the user's body, the ground or a water source in order to be of their service during battles. However, it is up-side down here. The user first performs the snake handseal, which is pretty mandatory for most of the wood techniques if not all. Afterwards, the user focuses his Mokuton chakra in an already created Mokuton technique. However, he doesn't simply focuses chakra, he manipulate the properties of the Mokuton chakra in order to give it the ability to drain the Mokuton chakra of the other Mokuton technique, which could be done fully in which the user Mokuton chakra would drain all the Mokuton chakra, turning the Mokuton technique to either a water technique or an earth technique, or semi in which the user's Mokuton chakra would drain some of the Mokuton chakra in the Mokuton technique. This technique was originally created in order to overpower some other elements which could be stronger than Mokuton, however, weaker than it's source, which are earth and water. Note: This technique would turn a Mokuton technique whose formed from water into water again, or earth into earth again Note: With the techniques created from the user's body, the user has a free will of choosing either to turn it into water again, or earth Note: Must be taught by Kamishiro
Declined
I really like this! But it needs an usage limit. Also, needs a bit more clarification. It doesn't seem logical for every situation. Lastly, only up to A-Rank? What about an enemy's technique?
(Futon: Shou Keiteki) Wind Style: Devastating Whistle Type: Defense/Supplamentary Rank:S Range: Short Chakra:40 (-10 pr turn) Damage: N/a Description: This is a very useful jutsu to keep enemies from getting into close range, and blowing away weapons/items. The user will gather up large amounts of wind chakra into every single pore into their body. Once done, they will release it all at once, creating an immense and powerful breeze of wind from their body in every single direction up to short range. The breeze is so powerful that if one person is in short range, the wind pressure would blow them back into mid range with ease, and even then the opponent can still feel the breeze all the way up to long range (It would feel as if its simply windy from Mid-Long range) It is able to blow away objects giving them more speed (If a kunai was to be thrown at the user and this jutsu is active. It would blow the object back twice as fast due to the wind propelling the weapon backwards) This justu essentially makes it extremely hard to get within short range without being blown back violently. Luckily this jutsu does no physical damage except the small blunt impact of being blown back but that isnt strong enough to do damage. This jutsu is very unique, cause just like chidori has the chirping sound, this jutsu gives off a loud whistling noise, to give off its unique nature of a jutsu as the air currents makes the noise from the users body. This jutsu is in no way offensive so it does no damage whatsoever.
-Last a max 3 turns
-Can use 2 times max
-Cant use any fire jutsus while active or else it would backfire.
Declined
Lasts three turns? The hell? Hell no, make this a single active. I can't have you doing anything else while this is active or its a completely different situation.
(Ichi Dageki Sobou Kenshiki) One Strike Of The Harden Pride Type:Attack Rank:S Range:Short Chakra:40 Damage:80 Description: This is a unique type of taijutsu as it dwells on the earth elemental property. The user will channel mass amounts of earth chakra into his body. The user will then stomp his dominant foot on the ground sending earth chakra underneath the opponent, causing the ground to propel the opponents body upward, just enough to get his foot off the ground. The user will then channel all of his earth chakra into his dominant arm/shoulder that once the opponent is airborne the user will thrust his shoulder into the body of the opponent, sending them flying backwards with major force all the way back to long range with no footing. This taijutsu technique is enough to bust through A rank Earth techniques and even crack the ribcage if landed successfully onto the opponent.
Note: Can use twice pr battle
Note: No Earth jutsu the same turn as this
Note: Must wait 2 turns before using this again
Note: No Other Taijutsu move in the same turn as this
2:09-2:14
Declined, do not resubmit
I can see this being done with canon techniques.
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(Sakashima Yaiba: Tsuppari Hyaku seken) Reverse Blade Style: Thrust Of The Hundred Worlds Type:Attack Rank:S Range:Short Chakra:40 Damage:80 Description: This technique is one of the stronger techniques of the reverse blade style. The user will take a stance where their feet are spread slightly apart holding their sword with both hands with the tip of the sword facing outwards. The user will then apply massive earth chakra throughout their whole body, to the point where their earth chakra is so immense and powerful you could see their physical chakra resonating out of their body to where it would cause a very small crater in the ground right below the users feet to signify the major pressure and immense chakra thats being used. Once done the user will wait for an opening. Once the opening is created the user will channel every single ounce of earth chakra he gathered into the tip of the sword as it comes in contact with the opponents body powerfully blasting their body back with major blunt impact. The impact is so powerful that the impact would send a violent shockwave through the whole body, not only breaking the body part that was struck with ease but bruising the whole body. Once this technique is thrusted forward, the force would be so great the the earth from behind the user would lift up when the sword is thrusted forward (This has no affect on the technique. Its just for an epic visual)
Note: Can be done twice
Note: No other RBS techniques in the same turn
Note: Cant use a RBS technique above A rank in the next turn
2:17 - 2:23 (Visual of the stance on how he would look before he strikes)
Pending, leaving for Kurisu Declined, the colored is too vague, what constitutes an opening? Why does this powerfully blast anyone away? Earth chakra is generally used to create blunt damage on impact, not contained explosions by itself so no to the shockwave as well as the earth lifting up, even for dramatic effect. Also, if this is used, it will take two turns at least before it can be used again.
Summoning Animal:Flamingos Scroll Owner:Roju Other Users who have signed contract: Na Summoning Boss if existing:Na Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Description and Background:
these are a wading type bird with long legs similar to that of an ostirich, the color variety of these birds is numerous having very bright colors and use this to there advantage being able to change the colors of there feather's to blend into the environments this will be a natural ability of all flamingos.
flamingos are a very unique species of bird for instance they carry around a parasite called feather lice, and have the ability to disperse these lice on the field and the lice in turn can make an enemy itchy and constantly scratching themselves distracting them from simple tasks.
these birds are known flyers and can even stand in mud without sinking because of there webbed feet. being a wading type avian they spend time and are natured to water but are also very adept at flying and and strong affinity to the wind element. these birds will have a very unique taijutsu based fighting style as well because of there long legs they excel at kicking.
flamingos are very social birds being able to communicate with shinobi's and hold a conversation easily, they show very good stragetic planning as well. these birds also have a very long lifespan and aging is that of humans themselves. the older these birds are the more experienced in battle and stronger chakra and abilities they have as well. these birds are known in the ninja universe to be able to disperse shooting there feathers and regrowing them within a very short span of time.
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Note this will be my second contract for a custom summon.
Tengumaru/ Long Nosed Goblin Type: Weapon Rank: S rank Range: Short-mid Chakra: 40 Damage:Na Description:
Tengumaru is a large black Kanabo, which is the same height of the weilder and the diameter is 2 feet. it is covered in bladed protusions with a chili pepper coating which make it resemble a cactus, while the handle itself it the length of one foot. it is incredibly strong and sturdy able to withstand and block C rank elemental chakra blast by batting them out of the air(using defense called BATTERS UP)(All but Lightning). the bladed protusions have a very unique ability that they can be charged with katon chakra shot out of tengumaru while the user is holding tengumaru above there head, and forms a single one handed handsign. the protusions can explode into chili powder smoke upon contacting any object with physical form. the protusions will after being fired be replaced by a second set which come out after the other protusions are fired. the smoke upon being unleashed can only span short range of contact and leaves the enemy gasping for air filling there lungs with every breath, while also burning there eyes making them water profusely. the smoke if not countered within the first phase of the enemies turn will leave there eyes useless for one full turn unable to see. it will in all fairness be like eating hot pepper's but instead your inhaling this extreme spicy smoke. knowing that smoke user's use masks they are not affected by the lethal smoke of this chilli smoke. tengumaru is carried hanging across the user's back wrapped up like samehada.
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restrictions
: BATTERS UP can only be used once per turn and up to four turns.
: chili protusion shot can only be used two times during battle.
: being hit with tengumaru is of S rank damage from shear force and explosion of the protusions on contact
: Smoke can only be manipulated by a smoke user..
:smoke will cause blindness for one turn if not countered properly.
: can only be taught by rojuro.
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☼ Declined ☼
Getting there. Size is still a little big I think. If it was hollow like before 2 feet would be okay, but a solid metal sword with a diameter of 2 feet is going to be heavy as hell. The chili protrusion shot needs a rank (I think A would be good for it). You can't make being hit by it equivalent to S-rank damage. If someone is hit by it they just suffer the damage that would come with getting hit by a large metallic bat covered in spikes. Now if you want to add a special melee attack with that has a rank/limits, that's fine.
Revamped the entire thing making it easier to read and sectioned things to organize reading it.
Tengumaru/ Long Nosed Goblin Type: Weapon Rank: S rank Range: Short-mid Chakra: 40 Damage:Na Description: Looks description: tengumaru is a club of sorts as tall as the user but only 2 feet in diameter. this club is like that of an aluminum bat hollow inside but with a thick shell, the shell of tengumaru has spiked protusions on it that make tengumaru resemble that of a cactus with row's of spiky protusions. the hilt of tengumaru is 2 feet long to make for two handed style of gripping and swinging, it also has cloth on the hilt as well. while not using tengumaru it is wrapped up like that of samehada the 12 swordsman blade. this weapon is made of a metal called Vanadium which is a medium hard, ductile, steel-blue metal. Some sources describe vanadium as "soft", perhaps because it is ductile, malleable and not brittle which gives it good flexing ability without breaking but still very solid and nearly unbreakable in this form of weapon. when not being wielded tengumaru is wrapped up similar to how samehada is wrapped.
Batter Up tengumaru has the naturally gifted ability of being able to bat a jutsu out of the air that has solid form up to C Rank jutsu only. the only thing that it cannot bat out of the air would be anything electrical in nature as this is a metal weapon and would just transfer the electricity to the user.
Restrictions:
-Can only use this once per turn.
-Can only be used five times per battle.
- Can be used to redirect (bat)he jutsu back at the enemy.
-Cannot be used in the same turn as chili pepper protusions.
Spicy explosions The user of tengumaru also has the ability to channel fire chakra to the spiky protusions on the club which have a unique chili pepper coating, and proceed to fire them off of tengumaru while holding tengumaru above head. the user does this by forming a single handed handsign and which in turn sends fire chakra into the spiky protusions and charges them. upon contact with any jutsu or enemy, that of a any object the protusion spikes will explode and also leave a chili pepper smoke behind which clouds the battlefield. the user can also charge the protusions with fire chakra and simply hit the enemy without firing off the spiky protusions but rather making the hit a solid impact with an explosion effect. this however can slightly damage the user from the backlash of the explosion but not cause the same damage as that to the enemy. once the protusions have been fired once a new set of spikes take the old one's place
note:
- spike's used either by hitting or exploding shots are A rank in strength.
Restrictions:
- Can only be used a maximum of Two times per battle.
- Cannot use batter up and spicy explosion in the same turn.
- Cannot be used twice in the same turn.
- Smoke user's can manipulate the manipulate the chili smoke while non smoke user's cannot.
- Can only be taught by Rojuro
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☼ Declined ☼
Why'd ya have to go and add some random metal? >.<
Remove the vanadium stuff and leave it as normal everyday iron/steel or whatever they use for weapons. Also, for the batters up ability, batting things back will only work with solid objects like earth or metal. Things like fire, wind or water would simply be destroyed.
Osore Ho-Ru Kagami(Horror Hall Of Mirror's)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: this jutsu begins with a single handseal and while the enemy is moving towards you the user takes control of their visual and hearing placing them in a genjutsu. the genjutsu begins with the enemy walking through a hall of mirrors which has reflections of children in them being decapitated and dismembered. the screams are heard throughout the dimmly lit hall. the screams and cutting sounds vibrating throughout the enemies eardrums echoing and driving the man insane, upon coming to the final mirror in the hall the enemy looks and see's themself in the mirror, when all of a sudden a sword is run through them in the mirror image thus binding there psych and movements in the mirror for a few seconds. when the enemy see's this image of a sword being run threw they also see blood dripping down from it and tear's rolling down the enemies eyes. throughout all of this visual and hearing effects of this genjutsu the user is sneaking around behind the enemy in close range and proceeding to run a sword or kunai through the enemy. this jutsu can also be used with silent homicide to increase the effectiveness of getting behind the enemy quickly without causing disruption to the genjutsu and adding a quick easy kill.
restrictions:
:can only be used once per turn and three times per battle.
: no A rank or above in the same turn.
: can only be taught by Rojuro
☼ Leaving for Another Mod ☼
Declined, please work on the description, it's killing me.
Osore Ho-Ru Kagami(Horror Hall Of Mirror's)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: this jutsu begins with a single handseal and while the enemy is moving towards you the user takes control of their visual and hearing placing them in a genjutsu. the genjutsu begins with the enemy walking through a hall of mirrors which has reflections of children in them being decapitated and dismembered. the screams are heard throughout the candle light lit hall. the screams and cutting sounds vibrating throughout the enemies eardrums, echoing and driving the the enemy caught in the genjutsu insane, upon coming to the final mirror in the hall the enemy glancing at last mirror in the hall, when all of a sudden a sword is run through them in the mirror image thus binding there psych and movements in the mirror for a few seconds. when the enemy see's this image of a sword being run through their body they also see blood dripping down from it and tear's begin rolling down the enemies eyes. throughout all of this visual and hearing effects of this genjutsu the user is sneaking around behind the enemy in close range and proceeding to run a sword or kunai through the enemy. this jutsu can also be used with silent homicide to increase the effectiveness of getting behind the enemy quickly without causing disruption to the genjutsu and adding a quick easy kill.
restrictions:
: can only be used once per turn and twice times per battle.
: no A rank or above in the same turn.
: can only be taught by Rojuro
bolded the changes although you never said specifically where the problem was.
☼ Leaving for another Mod ☼
-Declined- A few things that need clarification, first, why would the screaming drive someone insane? sure it would hurt his hearing, but you can't force someone insane with a normal genjutsu, such a feat is only achievable through Sharingan genjutsu, Second, you say that his image in the mirror would be paralyzed, but does that mean that he will be paralyzed in the genjutsu which would mean he is paralyzed in reality as well? why? because of fear? it's not possible to be paralyzed this way, the only way he would be paralyzed in reality is that his mind believing that he is paralyzed in the genjutsu, like chains wrapping around his body to prevent movement..etc Also remove that whole getting behind your opponent while in the genjutsu thing, you can do that yourself after performing the genjutsu, no need for it to be there.
(Akahigi: Chika Kindachi) – Red Secret: Underground Kings
Rank: S
Type: Puppets
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Underground Kings are a series of 7 puppets owned by Sasori of the Red Sand. These puppets are a collection of grey puppets that all have gold crowns on their head and each of them have unique weaponry and techniques. Each puppet is draped in an akatsuki cloak with inverted colors(red Cloak with black clouds). Each of the puppets have a name: Rei, Ichi, Ni, San, Shi, Go and Roku. These puppets belong to the 298 puppet collection Sasori has accumulated and only uses them in dire times.
Rei: Rei is a puppet the size of a average human in height (176 cm). It is a slender puppet modeled after a female body. It has long Red synthetic hair with dark blue pupils. Rei's arms are covered in what seems to be "dragon scales" with a single command, Sasori is able to open up the compartment in a similar fashion to the chakra shield technique but in reverse direction. "Zero" is written on the flaps of the openings. Through the users chakra, She is able to release a burst of raw unfocused chakra. This blast is A rank in strength, reaches up to Mid range and counts toward the allotted moves per turn. Further into her weaponry, with one command the palm of Rei opens and releases a sharp blade that is the length of a katana at great speeds jutting out out like it was compressed by a spring.
Ichi: Ichi is a short puppet standing at 132.62 cm. Because of the puppet's small stature, it can be maneuvered quickly, moving twice as fast as any normal puppet would. Ichi is a young boy with short red hair and covered in an inverted akatsuki cloak. Ichi's arms can extend to mid range and have a flexibility towards them allowed them to be wrapped around enemies and restrain them. With the formation of one handseal, Ichi opens his mouth and reveals a pipe from his mouth with a diameter twice as wide as the pipes Sasori contains in his palms. This pipe can release a large compressed sphere of wind that can reach up to long range and deal A rank damage (This counts as one move). Much like normal puppets, his head just snaps on and can be rotated on its axis, 360 degrees.
Ni and San: Ni and San are twin puppets that function as one entity. Witnessing the kekkei genkai, souma no Kou, these puppets are summoned together under one body that can be separated into two. With the motion of a handseal the user can detach this two from each other by disconnecting their joints from each other and using his chakra strings to control these parts and form then into individual puppets. This counts as a move. These puppets,however can be summoned separated meaning if one wants to put them together it would require a move. While separated, Ni and San are rather large puppets with the bulky bodies. Their hands are plated with a thick piece of metal to increase their impact with physical hits. By focusing lightning chakra throughout the puppets, their fists become electrically charged due to the metal in their hands retaining that lightning. When the lightning chakra is focused into them, their hands give off a distinctive blue,erratic hue. These two puppets are meant to be used for close quarter combat to overpower the opponent. Their punches have enough force behind them to level a large boulder(40 damage; 60 only with lightning chakra added). Focusing lighting chakra into their fists also count as a move per turn. While combined the user cannot imbue them with lightning chakra. These puppets are large in stature standing at 193 cm.
Shi: Shi is the most unique puppet out of the Chika Kindachi. The puppet moves like a beast of burden, crawling on all its limbs much similar to Hiruko. Out of the side of the puppets body, two arms protrude from each side totaling 4 extra limbs(8 limbs in total of the whole puppet.) With the command of the puppeteer, Shi's mouth opens revealing a summoning tattoo on its mouth labeled "Explode." By channeling chakra throughout the puppet and activating that symbol, a carpet of numerous explosive tag balls are released from its mouth. All these explosive tag balls detonate at once creating a large explosion spanning up to mid range equivalent to A rank damage. This counts as a move. Much like a spider, daggers are placed in the middle of all its palms. This can be used for two applications: 1) as a defense measure to attack the opponent if they get to close. 2) The daggers can dig into the surfaces of objects and keep the puppet still securing it to that surface like a spider. These daggers can be shot at an opponent but it loses its ability to cling onto surfaces.
Go: Go is a tall slender puppet made out of black wood giving it a completely back appearance. Go does not have any facial features as he just has a blank face with no details on it; a clean slate. Much like Shi, Go has extra limbs but only found on his upper body. He has 4 arms, two on the front his his body and two on the back of his body much like the Tempestuous God of Valour. Each of these hands contain wire strings in them that can be shot out towards the enemy to bind them. As the wires are shot out, they are lubricated with a highly flammable oil that resides on the very edge of the exit. With the one movement of a chakra string, a compartment located within the wrist of the puppet. It reveals a small pipe that produces a small fire that is large enough to hit the wires and ignite them. This combo is of B rank damage and counts as a move. Once the wires wrap around their target, the puppet can firmly retract the wires to firmly grip and restrict the target(in some cases using the razor sharp wire to cut through flesh or other rather soft materials.)
Roku: Roku is a rather short puppet standing at 165.1 cm tall. Unlike other puppets, Roku's design is closely modeled after Sasori's even being the only puppet to contain a slot for Sasori's heart container. Roku is a puppet without any artificial hair on its head. He has 6 eyes two on the front, two in the back and one to either side of his head. With a flick of a chakra string, dual swords come out of his sleeves, both of them with jagged edges. A metal tail his hidden by his akatsuki cloak. It is an exact replica of the one that exists on Sasori's Hiruko puppet but the tail itself is black while the linking is gold. This tail can extend and attack the opponent from almost all ranges(Short-Mid). Focusing Earth chakra into this puppet will cause its body to harden giving it protection against A-Rank and below jutsu. This counts as a move.
Can only be taught by Daemon.
Can only be used by a Sasori bio
No other puppets can be active while these 7 are on the field(regardless of the chakra thread container Sasori has.)
They can only be summoned once per battle.
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A lot going on here, most of it is fine. My biggest issue is with Roku since he has the chamber for Sasori's heart. Protection from A-rank and below, when coupled with the rest of the puppets and their abilities, is too much. Make it B-rank and below, and make it clear the technique only lasts for one turn. I'm a little iffy on the eyes too. You'd be gaining 360 degree vision, which really should be unique to Hyuugas. You'd be going from a normal field of vision, to 360 degrees, something you're not accustomed to. It would be very difficult to focus on anything. Perhaps if you added something about the tracking ability being reduced for a certain number of turns until he can adapt to the new field of vision.
(Raiton/Doton: Hakai no Sekai)- Lightning/Earth release: World of Destruction Type: Offense Rank: A-rank Range: Mid - Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user will gather their chakra and stomp their foot on the ground to rise a large rock section up to 10 meters long in size and 2 meters in radius, off the ground around the area where the opponent is located. The user will then charge lightning chakra through the rock section, the lightning will begin to spiral around the rock section while breaking it apart. As the lightning is spiraling apart and the rock section is being broken apart, tendrils of lightning will begin to grow in size to the point anyone close in the radial area would be pierced from the lightning as well as terribly shocked that would numb the opponent. The rock section will soon turn into rock debris that will follow with the tendrils of lightning basically creating a vortex of lightning with rocks chunks. The rocks would be released outward as projectiles and move anywhere in distance same to the lightning tendrils. The rocks and tendrils of lightning move and are sent at a unpredictable manner making it difficult to understand where they are being launched, further decreasing the possibility of an easy way of evasion.
Note: Must have Lightning Mastered
Note: Must have Earth up to B-Rank
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke56
Declined 2 elements like that = two moves. Also, its irrelevant to put in a submission's restrictions that you need X element mastered. Thats a filler restriction as thats already a given fact. To use this technique you need A-rank Lightning and A-Rank earth as its an A-Rank technique of both elements. Rest seems fine. Oh, also add the need to do 2 handseals for the lightning part of the technique.
(Katon: Karakuni)-Fire Release: Land of Nothing Type: Offense Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user will gather their katon chakra and channel the chakra towards the users mouth and release the katon chakra from their mouth while thinning the chakra out, so instead of normal fire, a flammable gas will be released. The gas is clearly visible and has a dark color. The user as they release the will be directed towards the ground and as it touches the ground it travels in a radial manner, being able to travel up to long range (25 meters). Due to how it travels in a radial manner and requires contact with the ground, the user will have to be above ground (A flying summoning as an example) or on top of a mountain or high point so they are not caught within the flammable gas. The gas will be released as a projectile, so the user will have no more control of the gas as it travels. As it travels everywhere around the terrain, the gas will act to feed up on the untouched oxygen in the air and replace the oxygen in the air with the flammable gas. Thus anything within the area below will begin to decay slowly due to the lack of oxygen for especially plants. An opponent will not be able to breathe while in the area, causing them to suffocate. If an opponent however breathes in the flammable gas, it can cause internal damage, harming their lungs making it difficult to breathe and develop a light head, over time they will faint (2 turns). Due to the density and the color of the gas, it also makes it difficult to see through the gas while also being chakra infused. (Not including certain dojutsu and sensory) The gas can also be lit on fire, with the use of a basic light or another fire jutsu to create a devastating inferno attack.
Note:Can only be used two times
Note: Can not use fire jutsus above A-Rank next turn
Note: Must have mastery of fire
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke56
Declined Colored part either makes no sense (replacing oxygen? >_>) or is simply overstretched and unreasonable.
(Katon: Hanran no Chixen)- Fire release: Chain of the Rebellion Type: Supplementary-Offense Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 (+10 every turn active) Damage: 60 Description: The user will release katon chakra outward onto the edge of their skins and begin to manipulate the shape of the katon chakra into long and wavy chains that wraps themselves around the users body starting from the hips all the way up towards their arm-pits and covering the arms as well, in a singular fashion. This chains are super heated and can be manipulated by the user with various movements by releasing them outwards and swing them towards the opponent burning them on contact or wrapping them around the opponent to cause severe burning around the body where they are placed. This chains can also be used as a defensive barrier around the body or certain body parts and can swipe away projectile weapons or certain attacks to protect the user, but with every turn kept active they drain chakra from the user. This chains are able to reach up to long range.
Note: Chains stay active for four turns
Note: Can not use fire above S-Rank while active
Note: Can not use fire above A-Rank after they are dispersed
Note: This chains can be used free-form after appearance
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke56
Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR
Resubmitting the World of Destruction (Changes in bold)
(Raiton/Doton: Hakai no Sekai) - Lightning/Earth release: World of Destruction Type: Offense Rank: A-rank Range: Mid - Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user will gather their chakra and stomp their foot on the ground to rise a large rock section up to 10 meters long in size and 2 meters in radius, off the ground around the area where the opponent is located. After two hand seals the user will then charge lightning chakra through the rock section, the lightning will begin to spiral around the rock section while breaking it apart. As the lightning is spiraling apart and the rock section is being broken apart, tendrils of lightning will begin to grow in size to the point anyone close in the radial area would be pierced from the lightning as well as being terribly shocked that would result in numbing the opponent. The rock section will soon turn into rock debris that will follow with the tendrils of lightning basically creating a vortex of lightning with rocks chunks. The rocks would be released outward as projectiles and move anywhere in distance same to the lightning tendrils. The rocks and tendrils of lightning move and are sent at a unpredictable manner making it difficult to understand where they are being launched, further decreasing the possibility of an easy way of evasion.
Note: Counts as two moves in the three move jutsu slot Note: Must have Lightning up to A-Rank
Note: Must have Earth up to A-Rank
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur
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On Scorps' words. U_U
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(Raiton: Hitchihaiku) - Lightning Release: Hitch a Ride Type: Supplementary Rank: C Range: Short Chakra: 15 Damage: N/A Description: The user first channels his lightning chakra under his feet infusing it with lightning. Then he makes the said lightning chakra to expand in form of a lightning bolt which sticks to his feet enabling him to move in a certain direction as much distance he wants to cover.
Note: Can only move in one said direction
Note: A person cannot mold any chakra with the bolt active
Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur
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Yeah, I'm not even going to start on how illogical this is and how many problems it could create.
(Katon: Eikō no taiyōkō-sen) - Fire Release: Glory Sun Rays Type: Attack/Defense Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user releases powerful heat waves out of his body which soon cover part of the sun rays falling on the earth surrounding the user. Then with the sun rays within his control, he can choose to either make the rays fall on the opponent covering all sides or focus it on a single point. The heat waves carry enough heat to evaporate any water near it and can cause high burns on the opponent as the sun ray's temperature will be increased due to the the heat waves.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Requires three turns cool down
Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur
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I'm confused. "Cover part of the sun's rays falling on the user?" How do you even dictate this? You can't just control the sun. And what if it wasn't sunny, but raining? Clarify the jutsu better.
(Koyōte : Rukario)Coyote Summoning Technique: Lucario Type: Summoning Rank: S-Rank Range: Short Chakra: 40(-40 from user when Lucario absorbs some of there chakra) Damage:N/A Description: Lucario is a rare Coyote, mainly for the color of his fur. Lucario like most other Coyotes has learnt to walk on his hind legs and tends to walk on them more often than quad-leg. Lucario is the right – hand of the contract holder, regardless of who they are. Lucario is stationed in the Land of Iron were he runs his clan of Coyotes away from the main clan in the Land of Wind. Lucario is a Taijutsu expert, able to use Strong Fist (excluding EIG and related jutsu) with ease. Lucario is quite fast, moving at speeds matching a Kage Ranked Taijutsu Expert, and his raw strength allows him to create small craters with a simple kick. He as a mode unique to himself, were he focuses his chakra into his body, also absorbing some from physical contact with his summoner, and merges it into a new form. In this form he known as Mega Lucario, were his appearance changes as well. His Taijutsu is boosted due to the new amount of chakra being pulsed from his body, adding a additional +10 to his Taijutsu. To achieve Mega Form however, he most wait a full turn for the chakra to merge with his own in order to fully transform. While in the mega form, Lucario can speak telepathically with the contract holder, due to holding a special bond with them as well as having absorbed their chakra, otherwise with other signers he speaks by projecting his voice out and speaks as he is talking through his mind. Lucario stands at the height of a teenage male (5,3) when on his hind legs and 5,0 when on quad-legs
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-When summoned by a contract signer, he remains for 3 turns but when summoned by the holder, he remains for 4 instead.
-Transforming into Mega form counts as a move.
-Absorbing of chakra is passively done, but instantly makes molding chakra impossible for Lucario due to needing to wait to transform.
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( Koyōte Kuchiyose: Anubis)Coyote Summoning Techniuqe: Anubis Type:Summon Rank:S-Rank Range:Short Chakra:40 Damage: 60(with Ankh Staff) Description: Anubis is a powerful and well known Coyote in the Land of Wind. Nicknamed the Death God, Anubis isn’t exactly how people pictured him. People deemed him to be a Jackal, according to the Sunagakure Ruins, but Anubis of the Coyotes is a spiritual reincarnation of the one spoken in the waring days. Anubis is the fraternal twin to the boss summon , Quintoxe. Anubis lives in the badland areas away in the deserts with his followers, though he tends not to want anything to the main Coyote clan, he still shows respect to his brother. Anubis is a master of Fire Release and Taijutsu. Anubis’s weapon of choice would be an ankh staff which he uses quite well. He can use both Fire Release and Taijutsu up to S-Rank, showing casing his mastery of of the Fire Nin-Taijutsu arts. He moves at the speed of a Sage Ranked Taijutsu Expert . He is completely black in color, and wears traditional head gear, in respect of his previous life. He walks mostly on his hind legs and is rarely seen walking on all fours. He stands about the same height of Enma.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can use Fire Release and Taijutsu up to S-Rank
-Remains for 4 turns
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Need to straighten out a few things here. Emphasis on the Ankh staff and how he "uses it quite well." And there's no such thing as Taijutsu at S-Rank or even usable ones at A-Rank since your summon has no EIG.
(Hoshizora no Namida)Starry Tear Type: Offensive Rank: B-Rank Range:Short Chakra:20 Damage:40 Description:
Starry Tear is a quick eight combo kenjutsu attack. It begins with 3 short thrusts at the targets chest, provoking the target to raise its guard up. Although the first 3 thrusts do not deal much damage, the number of hits and their speed is overwhelming. Afterwards, the 3 thrusts are followed by 2 slashes at the target’s now undefended legs. The user then performs 2 strong jabs high and low, followed by a final strong stab at the target’s chest.
-Can be used 4 times per battle
-Normally requires a rapier but can also be used a katana
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Sounds fairly free form, good luck getting the second part of the technique through.
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Shugoshin no Haka Anubis) Summoning Technique: Guardians of the Tombs Anubis
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Description: The Guardians of the Tomb are specialized caracals within the sanctuary. They reside as the protectors of the burial grounds for the fallen caracals and are led by Anubis, one of the Sages of the caracal sanctuary. They all have a high balance of yin and are proficient in genjutsu like other caracals but their specialty is their absorption jutsu. All the caracals that serve under Anubis are skilled in the absorption jutsu and the basic E-ranked transformation that allows them to turn their bodies into weapons at the dispose of the user. Anubis has more defined skills and abilities. To summon either the guardians or Anubis the user must first right the kanji for “dead” on their hand and then slam it on the surface they wish to summon their caracal.
Guardians of the Tomb: The guardians of the tomb are a collection of several caracals all with the ability to absorb chakra. Their appearances are that of ordinary caracals with bandages around their torso, paws, snout, and tail. Some of them have unique markings and other features on their bandages. They also have the ability to transform into weapons (swords, staffs, etc.) which they can use as a means of leverage to absorb chakra. Upon contact with a source of chakra (even energy based elemental chakra) the transformed guardians can absorb it. However, these summons are the equivalent to A-ranked meaning, in their weapon form, they can only absorb equivalent to A-rank and below; if hit with anything higher, their transformation will be disrupted and they’ll disperse back into the origin of summoning. These caracals can use genjutsu B-rank and below but only when they are in their caracal form.
Anubis: He is the leader and the Guardians and one of the Sages of the Caracal Sanctuary. He’s the size of a small adolescent male lion bandaged from head to toe, however the bandages around his head give him a more jackal looking head shape. Like his subordinates he specializes in the absorption jutsu. He can also transform but his transformation technique is unique to him. In battle, Anubis can transform his entire body into bandages and use them to wrap himself around his summoner like a mummy; this is nothing more than an application of the combination transformation technique. In the mummification form, the user will appear like the God Anubis, covered in head to toe with bandages. Like his subordinates he can absorb chakra upon contact however he is a S-ranked, and he can therefore absorb S-ranked level techniques (only twice however) directly into his bandages. He can also absorb his summoner’s chakra if he so wishes or anybody else he and the summoner come into direct contact witih. In his caracal form, Anubis can cast A-ranked and below genjutsu techniques.
Note: This technique can be used 3 times per battle (summoning the guardians [one at a time]) or once per battle (summoning Anubis)
Note: The guardians stay on the field for 6 turns while Anubis can stay on for 5
Note: Their transformation counts towards the 3 moves per battle, however in their weapon forms they can passively absorb chakra and energy they come into contact with (minus natural energy).
Note: To absorb chakra directly from another being (summoner, opponent, or another summoning, etc) they must use the absorption jutsu which counts as move.
Declined No summoning animal with abilities as high as these can be summoned more than once or stay in the field more than 4 turns. Also, you need to separate these into 2 summons. The absorption aspect is undefined. You make it seem as if they can use the cannon chakra absorbing technique but that tech doesn't allow the absorption of ninjutsu, only chakra from an opponent. Anubis is also highly oped. You'd become basically a user of a technique similar to those in like Meiton users or Rinnegan users.
(Karakuru Kumite: Yuuri Kata) Caracal Combat: Phantom Form
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Caracal Kumite is the fighting style of the caracals. They use their expertise and genjutsu to aid them in taijutsu based combat. The phantom form is the first form of the caracals. Using their prowess in genjutsu the user makes use of very subtle body movements in order to induce brief and subtle visual illusions. In a taijutsu or kenjutsu the user will appear to be moving in a completely different manner than he actually is. For example; the victim may appear to see a high left punch to the face when in actuality the user has moved behind him and struck him with a blade. The technique is versatile enough to allow the user to create several different scenarios to disguise his technique. In addition, the user can appear as though he’s moving faster or slower at whim to confuse the perception of timing (within reason). This technique is a high grade genjutsu but also requires knowledge of taijutsu in order to create scenarios.
Note: Can only be used by caracal contractors and caracals
Note: For non-caracal users one needs to have mastered both genjutsu and taijutsu to use
Note: Can only be used ever other turn
Declined This is a tad unreasonable. To a normal ninja, you can easily stab them in the back in a one hit knockout without any real possible defense. Only Doujutsu or sensors can actually notice or defend from this in a viable manner. Also, why is it mid range? And you need to rank the genjutsu. This isn't a Genjutsu but part of a fighting style (which btw, could work as one) so you need to differ both aspects: physical attack which will be X damage and Genjutsu which will have Y rank.
(Koton:Seita Kuro Tori)-Steel Release:Infinite Black Birds Type:Offense Rank:Forbidden Range:Short-Long Chakra:50 Damage:90 Description:The user will perform three hand seals and raise both his hands into the air above his head.He will open three portals above the opponent(just like the one for the earth lid)forming a triangle above him.From each of the portals will fly out hundreds of small birds(pigeon sized)made out of black steel.They will circle above the opponent for a few seconds before they all dive towards him.The birds have a sharp beak and they come down at great speeds in continuous streams from all directions,breaking the opponents body when they hit.
~Note:Can be used only once per battle
~Noteue to the vast amount of chakra needed to be released at once,the user will be fatigued after using this technique being able to use only two techniques in the next turn and having his base movement speed reduced by one rank for three turns.
~Note:No above C rank techniques in the same turn this is used and no above A rank steel release techniques for the rest of the match.
Lowered the rank,updated chakra cost/damage and changed the notes. (Koton:Seita Kuro Tori)-Steel Release:Infinite Black Birds Type:Offense Rank:S Range:Short-Long Chakra:40 Damage:80 Description:The user will perform three hand seals and raise both his hands into the air above his head.He will open three portals above the opponent(just like the one for the earth lid)forming a triangle above him.From each of the portals will fly out hundreds of small birds(pigeon sized)made out of black steel.They will circle above the opponent for a few seconds before they all dive towards him.The birds have a sharp beak and they come down at great speeds in continuous streams from all directions,breaking the opponents body when they hit.
~Note:Can be used only once per battle ~Note:No above C rank steel techniques for two turns.
~Note:No Forbidden rank techniques in the same turn.
Declined
Several errors. Firstly, your last note is completely irrelevant. Secondly, why do people talk about portals like they come out of nowhere or have access to space-time ninjutsu? Earth Dropping Lid doesn't work like that, it didn't come out of a portal, the lid was formed in the sky and then dropped down on the opponent. Fix it.
(Raiton: Joushou tsuchi) - Lightning Release: Ascending Earth Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: short-mid(if channeled into a weapon) Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: A stronger version of Lightning release: roaring earth. The user forms the ram handseal and concentrates their lightning chakra all throughout their body. Once the target is within close range, the user slams one hand on the ground, releasing a significant amount electricity along the ground and is shot upward below the targets feet in the form of a much larger vertical column of electricity. The lightning upon impact, lifts the target into the air before dropping them down. If the user chooses, they can focus the technique into a weapon and throw them into the ground where the target is standing and release from there.
Restriction:
-Physical contact with the ground must be made -The user cannot use both methods on the same turn
-Can be used up to 3 times
-Can only be taught by fang
Declined
Need a few clarifications. You can form this technique into a weapon..so like a Chidori Spear?Is it usable as a weapon as of itself? Also, by saying that when you throw it onto the ground, do you mean like targeting exactly where the target is standing? So, visually speaking, you throw this at the ground, it disappears into it to form a "pillar" of electricity, and then shoots the opponent into the air? What's the radius on it? I'm sure that your opponent wouldn't allow you to even hit anything near their feet.
(Raiton: Joushou tsuchi) - Lightning Release: Ascending Earth Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: short(mid if channeled into a weapon and thrown) Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: A stronger version of Lightning release: roaring earth. The user forms the ram handseal and concentrates their lightning chakra all throughout their body. Once the target is within close range, the user slams one hand on the ground, releasing a significant amount electricity along the ground and is shot upward below the targets feet in the form of a much larger vertical column of electricity. The lightning upon impact, lifts the target into the air before dropping them down. Furthermore, instead of slamming one hand on the ground, the user can choose to focus the technique into a weapon and throw them into the ground near the target and release it from there. The weapon is not usable for close-combat and is best suited once the target is distracted or restrained. The column has a 3 meter radius and when formed into a weapon it is shaped like how Sasuke forms chidori into a spear or a blade.
Restriction:
-Physical contact with the ground must be made
-The user cannot use both methods on the same turn
-Can be used up to 3 times
-Can only be taught by fang
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I get it now. Fixed a bit of your description for clarification.
(Kirihiraki Doriru) – Excavating Drill Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short Chakra Cost: 40 Damage Points: 80 Description: The user will summon two mole warriors, appearing two feet taller than Tayuya’s Doki but having the same mass as them, with each holding two lances in hand, and serve as the bosses personal guard. The lance appears similar to the material that makes up Excadrill’s helmet and claw pieces, with the ‘head’ resembling a drill. The base is surrounded in very dense mole fur, and the top part of the lance resembles a moles head, and on the sides the paws, both brown in color. Both moles will then, proceed by coating the lance in earth chakra (similarly to Excadrill’s Drill Run technique) and thrust it forward. They can pierce through almost any defensive structure relative to earth's elemental properties (S-Rank) and after breaking through, the moles disperse.
Notes:
-Must have signed the mole contract
-Can be used twice per battle
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Fixed up a bit for better clarification. You're lucky I play Pokemon, from Yellow to X and that I get the reference. I suggest Adamant nature, EVed in speed/attack with leftovers. Moveset can vary, but of course, you would want earthquake. He works well as a physical sweeper and is slightly tanky too as there aren't any 4x weakness I can think of...okay, why am I ranting right now. <_< Competitive Pokemon days. I had him in my sandstorm team.
(Katon:Seikitai Atsusa) – Fire Style: Astral Heat
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:100 (-40 to the user)
Description: The user will gather large amounts of Katon chakra and in a short powerful burst form four gigantic wings of Katon spanning about 10 meters each , generating so much heat around the user that coming near him would easily evaporate water and burn individuals severely due to the amount of Katon beng used. The ground beneath the user will begin combusting(Scorching) and any liquids can be seen evaporating causing a steam to also be seen around the user. He will then use his large wings to zoom through the battlefield toward his opponent scorching everything along the way until he crashes through the target incinerating it. After the technique has ended the user will suffer some minor burns of his own and feel somewhat drained from the massive amount of chakra required for the technique.
Can only be used once
Can only be taught by Omega
No Forbidden rank techs during or After the turn this was used
No Katon After the turn this is used.
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Wrong Chakra/Damage info.
(Shiga-ya) – Cigar Arrow
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user smoking on a cigar will channel his chakra into to smoke and cigar and manipulate the smoke within his mouth. When the enemy is in range the user will shoot out four thin senbon like shapes of smoke at the enemies’ eyes causing them to go temporarily blind as the smoke will cause some minor burning, irritation, as will anything entering one’s eyes will. The senbons being shot at a short distance and coupled with their extremely light weight causing them to travel at great speeds makes it difficult for normal ninjas to see an attack like this coming. The smoke is also very thin and white (as most cigar smoke is) which causes this technique to almost be somewhat transparent/camflouged with the contrasting background. This process can be done fairly quickly and be used in a pinch.
Can only be taught by Omega
Only usable by Smoke Users
Must have Cigar/Pipe in bio Can only be tracked by doujutsu (including 1 tomoe Sharingan)
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You're making this sound way harder to see than it should be. At short range it would still be tough to react to, but it shouldn't be hard to see. Smoke isn't wind.
(Shiga-ya) – Cigar Arrow
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user smoking on a cigar will channel his chakra into to smoke and cigar and manipulate the smoke within his mouth. When the enemy is in range the user will shoot out four thin senbon like shapes of smoke at the enemies’ eyes causing them to go temporarily blind as the smoke will cause some minor burning, irritation, as will anything entering one’s eyes will. The senbons being shot at a short distance and coupled with their extremely light weight causing them to travel at great speeds makes it difficult to react to. This process can be done fairly quickly and be used in a pinch.
Can only be taught by Omega
Only usable by Smoke Users
Must have Cigar/Pipe in bio
Declined
Lmffaoooo, this jutsu. Need to smooth it out a bit. Add an usage limit, and how does someone spit out smoke when they have a cigar in their mouth at the same time? <_<
(Katon:Seikitai Atsusa) – Fire Style: Astral Heat
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:90 (-40 to the user)
Description: The user will gather large amounts of Katon chakra and in a short powerful burst form four gigantic wings of Katon spanning about 10 meters each , generating so much heat around the user that coming near him would easily evaporate water and burn individuals severely due to the amount of Katon beng used. The ground beneath the user will begin combusting(Scorching) and any liquids can be seen evaporating causing a steam to also be seen around the user. He will then use his large wings to zoom through the battlefield toward his opponent scorching everything along the way until he crashes through the target incinerating it. After the technique has ended the user will suffer some minor burns of his own and feel somewhat drained from the massive amount of chakra required for the technique.
Can only be used once
Can only be taught by Omega
No Forbidden rank techs during or After the turn this was used
No Katon After the turn this is used.
Pending, leaving for another checker
Iffy on this one. ✦ Declined, has been done before, this is just a more powerful version of it DNR ✦
(Doton:Rekishichizu) –Earth Style|Atlas
Rank:S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: One of the most terrorizing and feared Earth jutsu's imaginable. The damage done to the terrain of a battlefield is immense. The user will channel chakra into the earth below the enemy mid-long range and slam his hands on the ground. The user cannot use this short range as he could get caught in the attack and end up buried. Once the user slams his hand on the ground, the ground will begin to violently start inverting on itself after the user makes it just a little more soft so the process may be completed, in almost an instant, turning itself inside out in a manner of speaking, dragging surface below while pushing its depths to the top. Everything ontop of the surface or 30 meters below the surface is to be crushed during this process meaning everything 30 meters or above will be completely buried underground as well. The violence in which the earth is inverted intraps and injures the enemy severly as they are carried during the process of inversion. The inversion process only takes a couple of seconds to be completed, and this can also be used to get rid of water sources or even earthen constructs on the ground.
No S rank and above Earth during or after this turn
Can only be used once
Must be taught by Omega
(Suiton: Fudou mizu suteppusu)- Water Release: floating water steps
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user jumps into the air and gathers & focuses suiton chakra in his feet and as he takes steps in the air small floating water steps the size of his foot form under his feet allowing him to stand and move in the air.
Note - The user can only use 2 jutsus while on a step
Note - The user can only use water techniques while standing on a step
Note - The user Can only use jutsu on a step if suiton is mastered
Note - The steps lasts for 3 turns.
Note - Can only be taught by Copy ninja Hatake Kakashi
Declined, do not resubmit
Done before.
Bure-do no Arashikage | The Arashikage Blade
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range: Short
Chakra:N/A
Damage:N/A
Description: A blade that was once used by the beloved Hard Master of the former "Arashikage clan". The blade had been locked away for years because the current Grand master saw that no human was worthy of wielding this blade. After defeating Storm Shadow, the Grand-master saw that Snake eyes possesed the skills and was worthy of this blade and its power and so he gave it to him. The blade is made of the legendary black Arashikage steel with a simple wooden handle made from the great White Oak tree. right above the handle you can spot the legendary red marking of the former Arashikage clan. Note: Since the blade is made of black Arashikage steel it is unbreakable and can even resist attacks from weapons with an element mixed with them.
Note: The blade has to be passed down person to person meaning two people can't have the blade at the same time.
Note: The blade itself can only be wielded by its owner, meaning if an enemy tries to grab it, the handle will draw chakra from him and the handle will get hot in a matter of seconds, causing third degree burns on the bearers hand(s)
Declined
Emphasize on the bolded.
Summoning Animal: Dhole Scroll Owner: copy ninja hatake kakashi Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: none for now Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none for now Description and Background: Real life description of the Animal: The Dhole is a species of canid native to south asia. The Dhole is a very social animal that lives in large clans wich, during hunting splits up into small packs. The Dhole has very high stamina and mostly hunts medium sized ungulates by tiring them out and then disemblowling them. Unlike most social canids (but similar to African wild dogs), dholes let their pups eat first at a kill. Dhole packs are fearfull of human but bold enough to attack larger and more dangerous animals like water buffalo's, wild boars and even tigers.
the etymology of the animal remains unclear but it may have come from Kannada. Dholes are more related to jackals then wolves and one theorie has Dholes becoming social animals as an adaptation to living with tigers and leopards. the largest of the subspecies is the Ussuri dhole. with a long, narrow face and a skull measuring 189 mm long on average. The winter fur's general tone is intense rusty-red. The top of the head and the outer ears are brownish-rusty with black-brown highlights. The shoulders and upper surface of the back is brownish-rusty with black-brown highlights. The outer sides of the legs are rusty brown, while the inner sides of the legs and lower sides of the body are yellowish.
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RP backround and information:
The Dholes Live in a large, deep, forest right on the boarders between the land of fire and the land of rivers. These brave and fearless Dholes live in a large clan and they are feared by the other creatures in the forest, even the tigers. No other predator dares go close to their territory for small packs always monitor the borders. The Dholes are very social and they share everything farely amongst the people of their clan. The Dhole has a great sense of smell and great eyes, being predators that usually attack on the night. those humans the Dholes are associated with receives the Tatto of the dholes on their left arm and by pouring blood over it the human is able to summon the Dholes to them.
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Declined, do not resubmit
Variant of a wolf, it's been done too many times.
Ginrei Kojaku Type: Weapon Rank: S Range: N/A Chakra: N/A Damage: N/A Description:
Ginrei Kojaku is a portable composite bow made out of chakra enhanced steel that is indestructible, able to withstand powerful attacks. The weapon first takes an appearance of a pentacle-like necklace. It is abnormally large, able to match the size of a man's palm. By squeezing it, it expands into giant, unusually shaped bow reminiscent of blue flames. The bow is a cross between a Spider Web and a Pentagram. It extends out into 4 extensions, the width being 1.75 meters long and the height being 2 meters. It is connected by several curved structures which is the primary foundation that holds everything in place. The handle has two hollow semi circles next to it, in which the object(s) are projected. Even though it may not look like, it is very flexible, bending backwards when the string is pulled back with great force, making it function like a Slingshot in some cases. The string is joined together, attached at the top and bottom of the bow's extension. The hollow sides near the handle allow for greater accuracy when shooting the arrows, by narrowing down and aligning the hollow sides with the target.
Declined
Um, so just a normal bow without expanding on its abilities? I was looking further down hoping you'd give me a bit more on this beautiful weapon of yours'.
(Doton: Gojira's Gekido) - Earth Release: Godzilla's Wrath Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Mid-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description:
Forming 5 hand seals, the user will manipulate the ground in front of them, molding a dragon with a face of Godzilla, a famous kaiju throughout Japan's film history. The dragon is a huge monster, reaching from 20 meters in length. The stone dragon will rise to the air before descending down into the opponent with speed. Once feet away from the opponent, the stone dragon will release multiple tendrils of earth that creates a prison like dome, trapping the opponent with the dragon's face right inside, inches away from the opponent. In mere moments, the stone dragon releases a sort of mud-like liquid mixed with sharp rocks. The mud is fast and powerful, able to create a deep hole into the ground. Notes:
Can only be used thrice per battle
Declined
I'm a bit confused. So, firstly, this dragon bursts out of the ground and flies toward the opponent, in some kind of arc to acquire momentum, then you state "once feet away from the opponent". o_o The heck? Is this some kind of typo? Also, do those tendrils of earth come out of the dragon's mouth or something? I'm trying to visualize it and it ain't going so well.
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Mikazuki no Serperior) - Summoning Jutsu: Serperior of the Crescent Moon Type: Summon Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description:
Mikazuki no Serperior is a personal summoning of Reborn and one of his strongest summonings by far. Serperior is a massive snake, towering the heights of 100 meters, dwarfing almost any summoning he encountered. By wiping blood onto the user's tattoo and waving 5 hand seals, the user will summon the huge serpent. Serperior is unique both his abilities and appearance. His body is mostly composed of green, dark green and yellow. He shows many earthly features such as his leaf like skin. Serperior is a powerful snake, having the affinity of using Doton. Having mastered the element, Serperior is able to perform Doton jutsus without the need of hand seals. He also has the unique ability to manipulate his tail and form a dagger-like blade made from hard, sharp rock. This enables Serperior to perform all kenjutsu techniques. Notes
Can perform all Doton Jutsus
Can only be summoned once
Stays in the battle for 3 turns
Can perform all Kenjutsu Techniques
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Declined
*checks watch* And that's...the third Pokemon summoning I've seen so far. 100 meters tall? Hell no. Not even logical. And how does that thing perform Kenjutsu techniques when some of them require you to use a bit of Taijutsu too?
(Faiyāmasutā no ha) - Blade of the Fire Master Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: Forged in the mountainside caverns of the now extinct TaiyōGakure, the Village Hidden in the Sun, the Blade of the Fire Master was the last sword forged by legendary sword maker Hattori Hanzo, and by far his finest work. The sword was slowly made over the course of an entire year. The blade is the length of a standard Katana blade with a square black hilt, the steel ot the Blade is slightly darker than normal, approximately 1 meter long with a black leather handle which has a wire attached to it mid range in length wrapped around the base to retrieve the sword if knocked out of the users hand. The sheath is made of a dense wood also black in color with the kanji for "Fire" in red on it. Inscribed on the blade are the words "If god should cross it's path, he himself would be cut down!" , a dedication to the sheer strength and sharpness of this blade as it was said the special chakra enhanced steel was hammered and folded over 9000 times using nothing but Katon chakra for the heat, the chakra painstakingly imbued by Hattori himself, a Fire specialist amongst Fire specialists, and a step above his brethren in the art who went into hiding while making the Blade. From the manor it was created, this swords metal is extremely reactive to the users Katon chakra, and can be used as a medium for Katon jutsu's allowing the wielder to use them without the need for seals while holding. The sword itself would be no more than a standard sword in the hands of a Non Fire specialist.
Abilities:
-Ability to use Katon without seals can be done 6 times per match, and the sword must be drawn and in the users hand to use
-When the Blade is filled with Katon chakra, a slash attack with the sword will deliver S rank damage, slicing thru and cauterizing wounds from the excessive heat, and is hot enough to slice thru Earth and Steel release of A rank and below within reason. This ability counts towards the 6 times Katon can be used without seals
-2 times per match, the sword itself can be used to create a barrier of A rank Katon chakra from residual chakra in always in the metal, which surrounds the user in short range, delivering A rank damage to those caught in it, but needs 1 turn cool down between uses. This can be done by simply touching the handle channeling chakra into the sword to activate and does not require the wielder to unsheathe the Blade.
-Once per match, the user can grasp the sword with both hands while channeling extremely large amounts of chakra into the Blade to use a Forbidden ranked attack at the expense of the Blade's abilities, rendering it useless for the rest of the match:
(Katon Kenjutsu: Honō no senshi no tamashī o moyasu) -Fire Release Sword technique: Burning Soul of the Fire Warrior Type: Offensive/Defensive Rank: Forbidden Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 50 Damage: 90 Description: This is the Ultimate attack created by the Blade of the Fire Masters creator, and is only unlocked upon mastering it's usage. The user begins by grabbing the swords handle with both hands, concentrating and channeling large amounts of Katon chakra into the Blade, mixing with the residual Katon chakra already in the Blade while raising the sword high in the air, then pointing the Blade downwards, driving it into the ground violently with both hands. The chakra is then released into the ground, which spreads outwards immediately erupting upwards 2 meters around the user and extends up to mid range in a fiery explosion of flames. This leaves the ground area scorched except the 2 meter radius around the user
~Notes~
-Must posses the Blade of the Fire Master and be a Fire Specialist taught by -Vegeta to use
-The user of this jutsu will suffer minor burns to the hands and will be unable to use hand seals for 2 turns after using
-No Katon jutsu the next turn after use, and only A rank and below for 1 turn after that
-Counts as 2 moves in the 3 move limit per turn due to the time to gather such a large amount of Katon chakra into the Blade which will have a fiery aura around the Blade when fully charged
-Using this attack renders the Blade unusable for the rest of the battle
~Notes~
-Must have Katon as a main affinity (1 seal) to wield the Blade of the Fire Master
-Can only be wielded by -Vegeta and those he teaches
-Because of the heat generated by the sword, the user will start to suffer fatigue if using the sword for more than 3 turns in a row and would need a 2 turn cool down to use its abilities again
-All abilities count towards the 3 move limit per turn
-The Blade and sheath are indestructible within reason
Pending, leaving for another mod ✦ Declined, too many abilities for one. CW that releases waves of an element have been done countless times, and jutsu with no seals is a no-no. The jutsu it creates will need to be resubmitted as it's own cj. And the underlined: What? ✦
(Futon: Ima no shūryō) - Wind Release: The End of Now Type: Offensive Rank: Forbidden Range: Mid Chakra: 50 Damage: 90 (-30 to user's hands) Description: The user of this jutsu begins by forming the Ox->Ram->Tiger seals, gathering large amounts of Futon chakra into his chest, and puts both hands out aimed towards the sky behind the enemy while channeling the chakra from their chest down both arms, exiting the hands and imbuing the sky behind the enemy (long range) with the futon chakra which immediately strikes as a large dense spear of wind chakra 1 meter in diameter at the enemy from a 45 degree angle from behind, piercing thru whatever is in its path and leaving a hole in the ground in front of the user 5 meters deep.
~Notes~
-Because of the nature of futon, the user will suffer slicing damage to their hands while the chakra exits them. Because of this, no futon above A rank can be used the next turn, and no hand seals for 2 turns. A Wind specialist will not suffer as much damage, and will not be able to use seals for 1 turn
-Attack occurs as soon as chakra is imbued into the sky and cannot be set up before hand
-Can only be used on a target who is Mid ranged from the user
-Once aimed at a target, the trajectory cannot be altered
-Must be taught by -Vegeta
Declined
Doesn't seem like a F-Rank to me. Also, if you create this wind long range behind your opponent, why is this mid range?
(Guile's Sakuryaku) - Guile's Gambit Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user begins by enhancing their feet with chakra as they bend down to a low position, spring boarding quickly upwards doing a forward motioned back flip, the chakra on their feet forming a blade of chakra that creates a vertical circle around the user following the arc of the flip, causing slicing and blunt force damage to anyone caught in the attack. This attack is best used on an air bound opponent.
~Notes~
-Must be taught by -Vegeta -Can only be used 3x per battle
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Declined 
Declined, has been done before. DNR. 
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Summoning Animal: Maned Wolf
