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Warukyūre no keshin | Valkyrie's Incarnation
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: - 5 per turn
Damage: N/A
Description: Valkyrie's Incarnation, a Ray relic passed down through time. Transcending from battlefield to battlefield; ever roaring its zealous berserker war-cry. Its feral howl forever emanating throughout the bloodshed of time, the prideful weapon crushing the wills of swine. Forged from the severed tail of a battle genius; Valkyrie, used as a replacement for her prided extremity. Upon her death the weapon was reforged, her organs containing fading life fabled to be sealed within. Thus she became reincarnated, forever to live on the battlefield. A Ray turned immortal deity, forever to march with the Rays, to transcend through antiquity. The weapon itself, a unique hybrid between a staff and a whip. But it could not simply be called a weapon for it was alive, it's bloodthirsty malice sent shivers down many a warriors spine. But beneath it's thick exterior of demented carnage, lay a vivacious personality; wise, bubbly, and filled from crest to to bottom with courage. And so the weapon fell into the hands of a person of which she favored, and thus unto it her secrets she mastered. In the hands of the user the weapons sobriquet's came to light, the Black March, The Green April, thus the weapon was further esteemed and held in delight.
Abilities:
Valkyrie, often dubbed The Green April is a two meter long weapon. At its core lies a expertly worked structure of tough, thick and strong Ray Shagreen. Interwoven into the core are numerous lengthy wires which are likewise woven into countless stingray barbs which shield the interior, around which is layered a second layer of specialized Shagreen which forms the weapons exterior. Due to the way the weapon is forged, it allows for immense versatility in terms of flexibility and tautness. The inner layer of Shagreen being tempered to a point in which it rivals even the toughest of metals, the wires confirming the integrity of the leather while adding the immense strength of the specially chosen barbs, while the exterior forms a surface that remains to be incredibly difficult to cut, and is perfect for displacing the force of attacks across a larger area; the placoid scales of the hide contributing to the toughness of the exterior surface, and while to the user it seems like smooth Shagreen, to another gripping the weapon would create an effect similar to rubbing a sharkskin the wrong way.
Valkyrie constantly drains chakra from the user to remain functional, being self capable of manipulating its unique interior so as to alter flexibility and other similar aspects. Due to Valkyrie's thirst for chakra, it seeks the user, and when not held it often wraps around the users body rather than being sheathed. Alongside adjusting her flexibility, Valkyrie can make the barbs hidden within her exterior stand upright, the spikes protruding forth from her seemingly smooth outer layer without compromising the integrity of the weapon, the new exterior being perfect for flaying and shredding. Lastly, the user and Valkyrie posses an innate ability in which the user is capable of wielding Valkyrie from range through use of chakra. While this ability costs a one time activation fee of 30 chakra, it's maintained through use of the transmitted and leached chakra, therefore the user is capable of manipulating the weapon to float, move and attack within a mid range radius, the force and speed of the weapons attacks equating to that of the users current physical capabilities to a max effect similar to that of of A-Rank Taijutsu.
The real special ability of The Green April, is that by drawing blood unto the weapon and then swinging it, the user is capable of summoning a ray while releasing an elemental wave like stream of wind or water, in which the summoned Ray rides in/on. This is a capability similar to Temari's Summoning: Quick Beheading Dance, requiring no handseals and being offensive. Other elements can be used in the summoning, but only if that element corresponds with the affinity of the summoned Ray. Alternatively, the user can summon a small swarm of basic flying vulture sized Rays which ride the wave to the target, so as to flock and consume them.
Notes:
- Summoning Wave counts as a jutsu. The wave being equivalent to A rank in power, with extra chakra sacrificed for the summon. The flock of Rays are also equivalent to A rank.
- Wave summoning can only be done 3x, after that it's simply a faster summoning process.
- Valkyrie's Incarnation is near indestructible, and can only be cut perpendicularly through use of a Forbidden ranked piercing/slicing technique.
- Valkyrie's Incarnation is sentient, it can communicate to the user, but it cannot speak, thus it communicates through an unknown method, presumably a mental/spiritual/emotional link. It is not aware of its surroundings to a human degree, but instead simply reacts to the users will.
- The barbs do not contain any poison whatsoever.
- Activation of remote manipulation counts as a jutsu.
- Can only be wielded by a signer of the Ray Contract.
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Approved I can honestly say its been months since I've checked a really amazing Custom Weapon, being the last one I think Negative Knights Kakuzu based CW. Excellent work! Really! And I don't often say this!
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Warukyūre no keshin | Valkyrie's Incarnation
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: - 5 per turn
Damage: N/A
Description: Valkyrie's Incarnation, a Ray relic passed down through time. Transcending from battlefield to battlefield; ever roaring its zealous berserker war-cry. Its feral howl forever emanating throughout the bloodshed of time, the prideful weapon crushing the wills of swine. Forged from the severed tail of a battle genius; Valkyrie, used as a replacement for her prided extremity. Upon her death the weapon was reforged, her organs containing fading life fabled to be sealed within. Thus she became reincarnated, forever to live on the battlefield. A Ray turned immortal deity, forever to march with the Rays, to transcend through antiquity. The weapon itself, a unique hybrid between a staff and a whip. But it could not simply be called a weapon for it was alive, it's bloodthirsty malice sent shivers down many a warriors spine. But beneath it's thick exterior of demented carnage, lay a vivacious personality; wise, bubbly, and filled from crest to to bottom with courage. And so the weapon fell into the hands of a person of which she favored, and thus unto it her secrets she mastered. In the hands of the user the weapons sobriquet's came to light, the Black March, The Green April, thus the weapon was further esteemed and held in delight.
Abilities:
Valkyrie, often dubbed The Green April is a two meter long weapon. At its core lies a expertly worked structure of tough, thick and strong Ray Shagreen. Interwoven into the core are numerous lengthy wires which are likewise woven into countless stingray barbs which shield the interior, around which is layered a second layer of specialized Shagreen which forms the weapons exterior. Due to the way the weapon is forged, it allows for immense versatility in terms of flexibility and tautness. The inner layer of Shagreen being tempered to a point in which it rivals even the toughest of metals, the wires confirming the integrity of the leather while adding the immense strength of the specially chosen barbs, while the exterior forms a surface that remains to be incredibly difficult to cut, and is perfect for displacing the force of attacks across a larger area; the placoid scales of the hide contributing to the toughness of the exterior surface, and while to the user it seems like smooth Shagreen, to another gripping the weapon would create an effect similar to rubbing a sharkskin the wrong way.
Valkyrie constantly drains chakra from the user to remain functional, being self capable of manipulating its unique interior so as to alter flexibility and other similar aspects. Due to Valkyrie's thirst for chakra, it seeks the user, and when not held it often wraps around the users body rather than being sheathed. Alongside adjusting her flexibility, Valkyrie can make the barbs hidden within her exterior stand upright, the spikes protruding forth from her seemingly smooth outer layer without compromising the integrity of the weapon, the new exterior being perfect for flaying and shredding. Lastly, the user and Valkyrie posses an innate ability in which the user is capable of wielding Valkyrie from range through use of chakra. While this ability costs a one time activation fee of 30 chakra, it's maintained through use of the transmitted and leached chakra, therefore the user is capable of manipulating the weapon to float, move and attack within a mid range radius, the force and speed of the weapons attacks equating to that of the users current physical capabilities to a max effect similar to that of of A-Rank Taijutsu.
The real special ability of The Green April, is that by drawing blood unto the weapon and then swinging it, the user is capable of summoning a ray while releasing an elemental wave like stream of wind or water, in which the summoned Ray rides in/on. This is a capability similar to Temari's Summoning: Quick Beheading Dance, requiring no handseals and being offensive. Other elements can be used in the summoning, but only if that element corresponds with the affinity of the summoned Ray. Alternatively, the user can summon a small swarm of basic flying vulture sized Rays which ride the wave to the target, so as to flock and consume them.
The advanced summoning ability is the result of something called Authority. A wielder of Valkyrie's Incarnation has a stronger bond with their Summoning Contract, and as a result Rays are more comfortable in their presence and will seek the users acknowledgement when attempting to return home (Doesn't alter turn restrictions). Ultimately, this prevents many Summon-Dismissive techniques from undermining the Summon - Summoner bond; in which both parties display immense loyalty and devotion to each other. At any point in time, the user can transmit and release a pulse of chakra from Valkyrie that will affect any Rays within a Long range vicinity. A Ray, coming to forced recognition of the revered heirlooms presence, will fall back into alignment with the user while being dispelled of the majority of adverse mental stimuli; such as unease, or even Genjutsu (A reflexive, Genjutsu-releasing surge of chakra is released by an affected Ray in response to the pulse). This effect counts as a jutsu (A-Rank), and any Ray affected by this technique will experience positive effects for the remainder of that turn and the next, in which they will gain a boost in morale and bonus of +10 to their techniques.
Finally, through movement Valkyrie is capable of manifesting and releasing completely intangible and life-like bestial projections of chakra. These projections are in essence, a variation of the E-Rank clone technique (And are therefore harmless but can serve distraction based purposes), being chakra projected illusions passively created through the infusion of small amounts of chakra (5 per projected beast). Traditionally used to create false images of Rays - in aims to confuse an enemy between usages of fake and real summons, this capability extends to encompass the passive illusionary production of absolutely any beast that the user is familiar with or can vividly imagine. However the requirement of motion means that Valkyrie must be in constant motion for the projections to remain active - thus projections can be forcefully dismissed by an enemy by simply halting the momentum of Valkyrie; although Valkyrie's remote control makes undermining this requirement a difficult task.
Notes:
- Summoning Wave counts as a jutsu. The wave being equivalent to A rank in power, with extra chakra sacrificed for the summon. The flock of Rays are also equivalent to A rank.
- Wave summoning can only be done 3x, after that it's simply a faster summoning process.
- Valkyrie's Incarnation is near indestructible, and can only be cut perpendicularly through use of a Forbidden ranked piercing/slicing technique.
- Valkyrie's Incarnation is sentient, it can communicate to the user, but it cannot speak, thus it communicates through an unknown method, presumably a mental/spiritual/emotional link. It is not aware of its surroundings to a human degree, but instead simply reacts to the users will.
- The barbs do not contain any poison whatsoever.
- Activation of remote manipulation counts as a jutsu.
- Chakra pulse is intangible, fluorescent and slightly visible, is extremely quick and it and its response signal create an aesthetically pleasing, yet relatively inconspicuous effect.
- Projections can be created every other turn - they move, look and seem realistic, but may variate depending on the users wishes.
- Can only be wielded by a signer of the Ray Contract.
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Ninjutsu: Hontō no Shunkan| Ninja Technique: Real Moment
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A simple technique which allows for intangible and illusionary chakra projections - such as those created by the E-Ranked clone technique to, for a moment, be made tangible. Thus an attack can be created from the unsuspecting, those which were previously distractions that would simply phase through the physical will now, for a short moment, be capable of interacting with the tangible so as to deal damage or produce a momentary defence. Again, this technique only works for the intangible chakra projected false images, and should not be mistaken as a Genjutsu compatible technique, as this technique simply grants a corporeal body to an image created by chakra. Should the subject of this technique be overlapping with a chakra infused construct due to its intangible nature, should said construct have more chakra than that of this technique, such as a higher ranking technique or a Ninja, the apparition will simply disperse, failing to become corporeal and having no effect on its surroundings.
Note:
- Can only be used 5x
- Can only be used every other turn.
- No Ninjutsu above S rank for the rest of the turn.
- Can only be taught by Scaze.
Declined I don't understand it. It does damage? Its confusing for me. Sorry, try to reword it.
(Katon: Aguni no Iki) | Fire Release: Angi's Breath
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (+20) (60)
Description: Through the rapid release of chakra, the user is capable of coating an object or weapon within their possession in a flow of pure fire chakra. Alternatively, through the formation of a single handseal, the chakra can be spewed towards a desired object - in which case it will neatly wrap around the intended target upon contact. The fire chakra can be created with two distinct properties.
The first is that the chakra can be made to radiate intense heat - all focused outwards so as to not compromise the integrity of the coated structure - with the heat allowing the structure in question to burn and melt through the opposition - adding to lethality. This usage adds +20 damage points to coated projectiles or weapons, and can be used on solids, liquids and can also be utilised to increase the temperature and thus damage of Fire.
The second usage is that, the chakra can be utilised to grant the explosive aspect utilised in some fire techniques to an object. In which case, the fire coating will have more physical substance; and upon contacting with opposition of significant resistance, or upon command, the chakra surrounding said object will erupt outwards to produce a explosion. When utilised on a weapon that the user remains in contact with, the explosions can be adjusted so that the explosive potential is either released all at once in a single, larger and stronger burst - or a bit at a time in the form of multiple, individually weaker explosions. In the case of being utilised on a object near or within the users possession, the explosion will always be angled away from the user to prevent back-fire. This usage coats objects in explosive chakra that is equivalent to 60 damage points, with damage split among multiple coated structures or explosions.
Note:
- Each usage can only be used 3x
- Same usages cannot be used on consecutive turns
- No fire techniques above S rank next turn.
- Both usages can also be applied to the human body.
- This technique is based off of the principles of Phoenix Nail Crimson - in which shurikens are coated in non-inflamed chakra to increase their lethality by manifesting the properties of fire.
- This technique occurs faster than normal when performed directly after a fire technique so as to empower it.
- Can only be taught by Scaze
Declined Was gonna approve it but there are two small issues: 1) you say it can only be used on objects or weapons which invalidates that its used in fire techniques and the use of this in fire techniques would collide with other techniques as would the use of this on wind techniques for example or most other techniques. 2) the explosion needs to be described as a sudden burst of flames and not an explosion otherwise it collides to some extent with Bakuton.
Tsuchi Tekkai ) - Earth Style 
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