[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

Illyasviel · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Andrej said:
(Futon:Hensa Hei)-Wind Releaseeflection Wall
Type:Supplementary/Defense
Rank:C
Range:Mid
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will channel his chakra into the air in a desired area of a 1 meter diameter,maximum.Using his chakra,he will make a small wind current in that area that constantly flows in a "C" like shape,from the bottom to the top and vice versa.As a projectile gets caught in the wind current it will be sent backwards in the direction the current is pointing at with a small speed boost like if it was infused with wind charka.For example if the opponent throws a shuriken at the user,and he creates this current in front of himself,the shuriken will be sent backwards at the opponent.
~Can be used three times per battle.
~Can create up to 3 currents at a time.
~It can deflect up to D rank,small scale earth and water attacks as well.
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-Declined- If it's made short range of you then okay, but not when it's made Mid range around the opponent.

Resubmitting,just edited the range as instructed.
(Futon:Hensa Hei)-Wind Releaseeflection Wall
Type:Supplementary/Defense
Rank:C
Range:Short
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will channel his chakra into the air in a desired area of a 1 meter diameter,maximum.Using his chakra,he will make a small wind current in that area that constantly flows in a "C" like shape,from the bottom to the top and vice versa.As a projectile gets caught in the wind current it will be sent backwards in the direction the current is pointing at with a small speed boost like if it was infused with wind charka.For example if the opponent throws a shuriken at the user,and he creates this current in front of himself,the shuriken will be sent backwards at the opponent.
~Can be used three times per battle.
~Can create up to 3 currents at a time.
~It can deflect up to D rank,small scale earth and water attacks as well.

 Declined  There is a cannon technique that does exactly this already. DNR

New:

(Koton:Barike-do Kei)-Steel Release:Barricade System
Type

efense
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will channel his chakra towards his dominant foot and after that stomp the ground with the same foot,releasing the previously gathered chakra into the ground.He will then manipulate the chakra so it forms a series of walls made out of black steel beneath the ground.The walls must be at lease three meters away from each-other and they are created only in the direction the user stomps his foot.The walls are three meters high and 30 centimeters thick,each having A rank steel strength.They lay just a few inches beneath the ground,just so the opponent doesn't notice them.They can be raised directly upwards for protection making an almost instant defense.
~Note:Can be performed three times per battle.
~Note:No above B rank steel release techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:If the user creates the walls and keeps them underground for more than three full turns,without using them,he will no longer be able to control them.

 Declined  an undefined number of series of A-Rank walls? >_> no. Make this something you use to defend from a technique in that moment, not something that lays dormant.

(Koton:Bekuru Sara)-Steel Release:Vector Plate
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C-B
Range:Short
Chakra:15-20
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will channel his chakra into the ground beneath him and create a plate of black steel beneath his feet.Beneath the plate,connected to the ground will be a tightly compressed spring of black steel on the user's command,the spring will release,launching the user into the air,in the chosen direction up to one range.Another,stronger variant of the jutsu,allows the user to create up to seven plates around the opponent,the user will then launch himself from one plate to another,moving around the opponent,doing damage to him as her desires.
~Note:Can be performed five times per battle.
~Note:The B rank application can be used only once per battle and after it,not even the C rank application can be used anymore.

 Declined  Not only is this beyond the elements scope as it has been done before, attempted countless times as well. We all saw Soul Eater but there is only one variation or application of Vector Plate that can still be made and I won't say which is it. DNR

Omega · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

omega5 said:
(Boko)-Hollow
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:(-10 )
Damage:20
Description: This sword was built precisely for smoke users so they could battle efficiently. This sword has the elements of a wrist launcher mechanism attached to its base which can be operated through chakra to produce smoke and shoot smoke bombs. It’s main special is its ability for the bladed area to separate into shards and reattach itself. Also initiated by the users chakra. When activated the blade will seperate into many shards as the smoke is released from within the blade to surround them. The shards from that blade will move about within the smoke surrounding them to slash and strike everything that comes in contact with the smoke. Moreover, the shards work well with smokes lack of physical presence by traveling in the path the user wants the smoke containing the shards to go in. The shard will reattach in the orginal form of the blade when the user stops this ability.

-Can only be used by Smoke bios
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-Declined- The ability needs a rank, a usage limit and a range, also mention how big are the shards detached from the sword.

( Doton: Gaia ) – Earth Release: Gaia
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short - Long (Made short range-long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu represents a mastery over Earth and takes great skill to learn. The user will perform the Snake handseal and slam their hands on the ground causing a Massive Earthen being to rise. The Earthen construct is made in the form of a beautiful, nimble yet strong, female warrior with three faces all with different emotions. An expressionless face, a face full of sadness, another face full of anger and hate. She has 6 arms and each arm contains a Large Earthen axe that she uses to attack the enemy in all ranges. Having multiple limbs makes the Earthen being more destructive and versatile in battle. Despite being created in large size she is able to strike and move fairly fast. Only masters of Earth can perform this technique successfully. When the user is not controling the creature with their chakra it merely becomes a statue as an earthen construct unable to move unless the user is connected to it or the ground.

-Must have mastered Earth
-Can only be used once per battle
-Must be taught by Omega5
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-Declined- With the one usage per battle, if you perform another technique other than this you lose control and it becomes a motionless piece of rock, and you can't use it once more because if you attempt to use it again you have to spend a technique, and you can only use it once, you get the idea, also you need to mention the size of the technique.

(Boko)-Hollow
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:(-10 to activate ability)
Damage:20
Description: This sword was built precisely for smoke users so they could battle efficiently. This sword has the elements of a wrist launcher mechanism attached to its base which can be operated through chakra to produce smoke and shoot smoke bombs. It’s main special is its ability for the bladed area to separate into shards and reattach itself, which is also initiated by the users chakra. When activated the blade will seperate into many shards as the smoke is released from within the blade to surround them creating a B rank smoke ninjutsu based attack against the enemy. The shards from that blade, which are each about the size of a small shuriken will move about within the smoke surrounding them to slash and strike everything that comes in contact with the smoke up to mid range of the user. Moreover, the shards work well with smokes lack of physical presence by traveling in the path the user wants the smoke containing the shards to go in. The shard will reattach in the original form of the blade when the user stops this ability.

-Can only be used by Smoke bios
-The ability is only usable 4 times per battle
-The ability of this sword is B rank
-Ability only extends to Mid range.

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( Doton: Gaia ) – Earth Release: Gaia
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short - Long (Made short range-long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40 (-30 per turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu represents a mastery over Earth and takes great skill to learn. The user will perform the Snake handseal and slam their hands on the ground causing a Massive Earthen being to rise. The Earthen construct is made in the form of a beautiful, nimble yet strong, female warrior with three faces all with different emotions. An expressionless face in the front, a face full of sadness on the left, another face full of anger and hate on the right. She has 6 arms and each arm contains a Large Earthen axe that she uses to attack the enemy in all ranges. Having multiple limbs makes the Earthen being more destructive and versatile in battle. Despite being created in large size as she is about two heads (relative to the Golemn head size) taller than the Great Earthen Golemn in height, she is able to strike and move fairly fast as she is smaller in mass being about 2/3 of its width. Only masters of Earth can perform this technique successfully. When the user is not controlling the creature with their chakra it merely becomes a statue as an earthen construct unable to move. To control it, the user must be in contact with it and spending chakra, therefore not being able to use other elements at the same time.

-Must have mastered Earth
-Must be taught by Omega5
-Can only be used twice and has a 3 turn coldown period

 Approved 

( Raition: Nagareboshi Ranpu Danmaku) – Lightning Release: Meteor Light Barrage
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will jump in the air while channeling large amounts of Raition chakra into their dominate hand. A large blue electrical sphere of electricity the size of a big ball Rasengan will envelop their hand while electicity sparks around them due to the amount of Raition being gathered. The user, using his free hand, will perform the Ram handseal and thrust his dominate hand forward with the Raition, releasing smaller orbs of Raition stemming from the singular large sphere created, that swiftly scatter and rain down across the battlefield setting off smaller scale electrical explosions that collectively destroy everything in its range.

Can only be taught by Omega5
-Only usable two times per battle
-No other S rank Raition the turn this is used.

 Declined  DNR. Done before

-Jiraiya- · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Earth Release: Iron fist (Doton: Airon genkotsu)
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage: 60 (When used to attack)
Description: The user will perform the Snake hand seal and focus his earth chakra in his both arms and cover his each hand (from fingers up to wrist) with gloves made of earth. The earthen material is created out of user's own hand. Alternatively the user can also place his hands on the earth to cover his hands with the earthen gloves after performing the hand seal.
The earthen gloves are made from individual stone tiles covering their hands thus permitting normal motion of the joints at wrist, palm and fingers.
These gloves can be used in several ways.
1. The user can make a fist with the gloves on and using his earth chakra he can launch the gloves at high speeds, like projectiles to perform long-range attacks, thus enabling the user to throw stone punches at the opponent/target. These projectiles can only travel in straight lines and once launched their flight path cannot be controlled.
2. Using his earth chakra the user can launch these gloves like projectiles aimed at the opponent's body and as these gloves hit the opponent's body they'll tightly grip the target's hand or leg or other body parts and hold on to them and continue to squeeze them causing severe pain. Once the gloves grasps the opponent's body part or his clothes, the user can pull the glove towards him using his earth chakra thus pulling the opponent towards himself.
3. Since the gloves are made of several earthen tiles they can also be rearranged as soon as the gloves make contact with the opponent's body part (if the user desires so) and the user can make a solid mold of earth around the opponent's body(arms, legs, neck, etc) and can tightly squeeze the earthen mold producing pain. This can also be used to bind the arms, legs of the captives.
3. A glove's individual tiles can be shot like darts, with enough force for each to embed itself into walls.
4. The strength of the glove can withstand direct attacks from ordinary (non chakra infused) swords, shuriken and kunai.
5. The user can also use their earth chakra to bond the gloves with stone walls or other earthen material, allowing him to climb steep walls/mountains with ease.
Notes:
- Can be used only two times per battle and lasts for 3 turns.
- Can only use earth jutsus while wearing the gloves.
- Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
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When used to bind opponent

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 Declined  This is simply a stronger version of existing earth techniques. DNR

Resubmitting Illusionary technique: Acid rain (Genjutsu: Sui ame) & Wood release: Allergy (Mokuton: Arerugi) . Changes made are in bold.

-Jiraiya- said:
Resubmitting last 2 jutsus. Changes made are in bold.

Illusionary technique: Multiple dislocation (Genjutsu: Maruchipuru dakkyuu)
Type: Supplementary / Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (Due to stress)
Description: The user performs two hand seals and puts the opponent under an illusion in which the opponent sees and feels that several ropes or chains or any bendable material created by the user in the illusion erupts at great speed from the ground/surroundings from around him and binds him at the his both shoulder joints, elbow joints, wrist joints, knee joints and ankle joints simultaneously. This makes the opponent to become motionless in real world.
The user then quickly snaps his fingers which quickly tightens the grip of the illusionary rope/chain around the above mentioned joints which begins to pull his joints away from his body.
This makes the opponent to feel that his joints becomes dislocated, all at once, with a distinct knocking/breaking/crunching sound, due to the intense pull of the joints. As the joints are dislocated in the illusion, the opponent perceives a severe excruciating pain. The damage is due to the mental stress due to intense illusionary pain.
Notes:
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- If the illusion is successful, the opponent will be motionless only for that single turn when the genjutsu is used and in the next turn the opponent's movements will be clumsy and he will not be able to perform fast/sudden movements like jumping, running.
- Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
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-Declined- Way too many illusion technique already made that involve using chains to bind the opponent, DNR.

Wood release: Allergy (Mokuton: Arerugi)
Type: Supplementary / Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (If pollens contacts the opponents)
Description: By utilizing the ability to make the trees to flower, the user focuses his wood chakra while performing the snake hand seal and creates a forest of flowering trees. The maximum size of the forest that can be created is about 30 meters anywhere within the range.
As created, the flowers release a type of pollen which is infused with the user's chakra into the air. This chakra infused pollen has severe allergy inducing potential to the living things(humans and animals) other than its creator(as they are made of user's own chakra).
The pollen itself possess an inherent irritant property which when comes in contact with the skin or mucus membrane (like mouth, nose, eyes) of the opponents will produce allergic reaction.
Sneezing, severe itching, redness of the skin, watering from nose & eyes occur immediately on contact with the pollen dust. Continuous sneezing due to the irritation of nose may impair the opponent's ability to execute jutsus via their mouth/nose properly.
Late reacions include itchy blisters over the skin(in the following turns if the pollens are not countered by then) and aggravation of existing allergic reactions.
Notes:
- Can be used 3 times per battle.
- Capable of affecting multiple opponents within range. The user is immune to the pollens as the pollen is made of the user's own chakra.
- Once created, the flowers release pollens in that turn only but their effects last until the opponent gets rid of the pollens on his body and his surroundings by any valid means.
- The effects of the pollen last as long as they're in direct contact with the opponent's body.
- Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
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-Declined- 30 meters is way too big for a B-rank technique, also reduce the effectiveness of the allergy, it's also too much for a B-rank, also you have to put a note that only Hashirama and Madara can use it, because they are the only ones who can use the flower variation of wood release.

Resubmitting the last jutsu. Changes made are in bold.

Illusionary technique: Acid rain (Genjutsu: Sui ame)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (Due to mental stress because of pain)
Description: The user performs the Tiger -> Snake hand seal and puts the opponent(s) under illusion where they'll see and perceive that dark rain clouds gather above in the sky and starts pouring rain which is corrosive to their flesh. The user can control the range and density of the rainfall within the illusion.
Thus in the illusion the opponent(s) feel severe burning pain as the acid rain falls over their body and chars their body producing smoke which smells of their burning flesh. Eventually their flesh starts to melt down as the rain continues to fall over them exposing their bones and produce very severe burning pain. The damage is due to stress on the brain due to severe pain produced in the illusion.
Note(s):
- Capable of affecting multiple targets within range.
- Can be used 3 times per battle.
- Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
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-Declined- No to affecting multiple people, also you need to explain what happens in reality, does this illusion distort his reality? in other words, does he only see the clouds and can't see what's happening around him, in case what happens around him is techniques or projectiles being thrown..etc.

Wood release: Allergy (Mokuton: Arerugi)
Type: Supplementary / Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: By utilizing the ability to make the trees to flower, the user focuses his wood chakra while performing the snake hand seal and creates a forest of flowering trees. The maximum size of the forest that can be created is about 15 meters anywhere within the range.
As created, the flowers release a type of pollen which is infused with the user's chakra into the air. This chakra infused pollen has severe allergy inducing potential to the living things(humans and animals) other than its creator(as they are made of user's own chakra).
The pollen itself possess an inherent irritant property which when comes in contact with the skin or mucus membrane (like mouth, nose, eyes) of the opponents will produce a local reaction.
Sneezing, severe itching, watering from nose & eyes occur immediately on contact with the pollen dust. Continuous sneezing due to the irritation of nose may impair the opponent's ability to concentrate and as the turns pass, the feeling is more uncontrollable and severe
Notes:
- Capable of affecting multiple opponents within range. The user is immune to the pollens as the pollen is made of the user's own chakra.
- Once created, the flowers release pollens in the form of a yellowish cloud which affects the opponents upon contact; if the technique ends and the pollen is removed from the field, the effects last one more turn before disappearing
- Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
- Can be used only by Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara bios.

 Approved 

Illusionary technique: Acid rain (Genjutsu: Sui ame)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (Due to mental stress because of pain)
Description: The user performs the Tiger -> Snake hand seal and puts the opponent under illusion where he will see and perceive that dark rain clouds gather above in the sky and starts pouring rain which is corrosive to their flesh and the surroundings like grass, plants, etc which gets charred as well. The user can control the range and density of the rainfall within the illusion.
In the illusion as the acid rain pours over the opponent and the surroundings, a greyish white smog forms seemingly due to the reaction of the acid rain with the things on ground including the opponent himself and eventually covers the entire area with greyish white smog which gets thicker and thicker as the time passes by leaving the opponent with zero visibility due its thickness.
Also in the illusion the opponent will also see that the user's entire body glows blue just as the rain begins to pour like as if the user has gathered his chakra all over his body & emitting it and stays unharmed from the acid rain.
Thus in the illusion the opponent feels severe burning pain as the acid rain falls over his body and chars his body producing smoke which smells of his burning flesh and blinded by the smog. Eventually their flesh starts to melt down as the rain continues to fall over them exposing their bones and produce very severe burning pain. The damage is due to stress on the brain due to severe pain produced in the illusion.
Because of the increasing smog within the illusion, in reality the opponent progressively loses his real eyesight as the illusion carries forth and starts to create the smog. He is, however, not paralyzed or hindered and can easily move both in the illusion and reality, both actions mimicking eachother. This stands so as a visual illusion, despite affecting other senses.
Note(s):
- Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

 Approved 

Shady Doctor · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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Chishi Shindou: Fatal Impact

Type: Boomerang Ninjutsu

Background:
Fatal impact is a fighting style developed by Two young ninja by the names of Shady and Seventeen, They traveled across the entire world searching for a fighting style that fit them both, they searched for years and never found the right one, So one day they got tired of searching and decided to create one that was unique to in itself. They remembered the boomerang they used to play with as kids growing up, a toy of there's that they used to also use as a means for target practice. They knew they weren't kids anymore, but elite shinobi, so they worked many years together in order to create a deadly style based off of there childhood toy.. And they named the style Fatal Impact once they mastered their created style.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The fatal impact style mainly revolves around the infusion of chakra into boomerangs and wielding them as weapons, whether its close or long range use. Once the boomerangs are infused with chakra they can be used in numerous of deadly and versatile ways. The basic skill of using fatal impact is infusing ones chakra into a boomerang(s) and allowing them to use it in many different ways depending on the chakra used. This allows one to use the fatal impact techniques whilst using several boomerangs at once if needed by using specific jutsu (will make jutsu for this). The controlled boomerangs can be altered for several different situations, such as using chakra to gift the boomerangs slicing abilities, defensive abilities, or even blunt attacks. The duo also found a way to expand their boomerangs to larger sizes or even make them smaller, allowing them to use the boomerangs efficiently in different situations.(Will have jutsu to alter boomerangs). An advanced usage of the fatal impact style is infusing element chakra into boomerangs, thus producing a mass amount of affects from the boomerangs. Some basic skills could easily be used with each element, such as using earth to make boomerangs more powerful in blunt attacks, or making the boomerangs lighter to move at many times faster than their base speed (fast as the users base speed). One could use lightning and wind for cutting properties and fire for burning affects. Those are just examples but there will be techniques created for different abilities. The user has his own specific boomerangs that will be specified in the bio, such as metal, large boomerangs, wooden boomerangs, plastic boomerangs etc etc..

Example techniques

Chishi Shindou: souran Fatal Impact: Altered Size
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: User's of Fatal Impact have the ability to reduce or increase the size of their boomerangs by doing the snake hand seal and molding the boomerang(s) with chakra, This can be used on a maximum of 10 boomerangs at a time. The boomerangs size can be altered to be various sizes, ranging from the size of a shuriken/Kunai or becoming up to 10 meters in length. The greater the size of the altered, the greater Its mass, but the smaller the size the smaller the mass.
- Can be used 5x per battle

Fatal Impact: Ever changing defense
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user aligns his boomerangs into various formations as he applies chakra to them whilsts making them spin propeller-like. The rapid spinning of the boomerangs can be used to align a boomerang in front of an attack and intercept and disperse a technique outward, but only up to A-rank though.
- Can only use up to 3 boomerangs for this technique, thus allowing one to defend against up to three techniques.

Chishi Shindou: shidō Fatal Impact: Wind cutter
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: User's of Fatal Impact
Infuse sharp wind into a single or several boomerangs, thus granting the boomerangs A-rank cutting potential.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

- Can only be taught by Shady Doctor

- Users of this Style must carry a Boomerang of any size, and can passively control them

- Must be Sannin rank, Mastered Ninjutsu and at least 3 elements to learn or use the style.

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P a t e n t C e r t i f i c a t e

Shady Doctor, our loyal member, gave on the 19th of December, 2013 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style Chishi Shindou: Fatal Impact. I, Madāra Uchiha of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Caliburn, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;

Chishi Shindou | Fatal Impact
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Chishi Shindou: souran Fatal Impact: Altered Size
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: User's of Chishi Shindou have the ability to reduce or increase the size of their boomerangs near instantly by doing the snake hand seal and molding the boomerang(s) with chakra. This can be used on a maximum of 5 boomerangs at a time. The boomerangs size can be altered to be various sizes, ranging from the size of a shuriken/Kunai or becoming up to 10 meters in length. The greater the size of the altered, the greater Its mass, but the smaller the size the smaller the mass.

- Can only be used by users of Chishi Shindou
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-Declined- A boomerang with 10 meters in length is too much.

Chishi Shindou: souran Fatal Impact: Altered Size
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: User's of Chishi Shindou have the ability to reduce or increase the size of their boomerangs near instantly by doing the snake hand seal and molding the boomerang(s) with chakra. This can be used on a maximum of 5 boomerangs at a time. The boomerangs size can be altered to be various sizes, ranging from the size of a shuriken/Kunai or becoming up to 5 meters in length. The greater the size of the altered, the greater Its mass, but the smaller the size the smaller the mass.

- Can only be used by users of Chishi Shindou
- Can only be taught by Ares

 Approved 

Ares said:
( Chishi Shindou: Erementaru Shindou ) - Fatal Impact: Elemental Impact
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
This is a simple, yet affective technique which increases the killing potential of a chosen boomerang(s) by using elemental chakra within them. There are 5 forms of using this ability, each form pertaining to a selected element. The 5 forms of elemental use in Chishi Shindou is as followed:

Sandā Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Thunder Impact' form. The user channels raiton chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the lightning. Upon activation of this form, lightning envelops the entire boomerang, violently swirling and twisting around the shape of the boomerang, similar to a tornado of cutting lightning coating the[/COLOR] due to the properties of the lightning element. The lightning itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to cut straight through any rank of earth, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course. Due to the lightning being S-rank, if the lightning is stopped with the same rank element (or A-rank wind) the lightning will be stopped, but the boomerang will continue as normal.

Kasai Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Flame Impact' form The user channels fire chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the fire. Upon activation of this form, fire envelops the entire boomerang, violently swirling and twisting around the shape of the boomerang, similar to a tornado of blazing flames coating the boomerang. This allows the boomerang to increase in both power and killing potential due to the properties of the fire element. The fire itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to power straight through any rank of wind, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course. Due to the fire being S-rank, if the fire is stopped with the same rank element (or A-rank water) the fire will be stopped, but the boomerang will continue as normal.

Nami Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Wave Impact' form The user channels water chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the water. Upon activation of this form, water envelops the entire boomerang, violently swirling and twisting around the shape of the boomerang, similar to a tornado of cutting water coating the boomerang. This allows the boomerang to increase in both power and killing potential due to the properties of the water element. The water itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to cut straight through any rank of fire, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course. Due to the water being S-rank, if the water is stopped with the same rank element (or A-rank earth) the water will be stopped, but the boomerang will continue as normal.

Uzu Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Vortex Impact' form The user channels wind chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the wind. Upon activation of this form, wind envelops the entire boomerang, violently swirling and twisting around the shape of the boomerang, similar to a tornado of cutting wind coating the boomerang. This allows the boomerang to increase in both speed and killing potential due to the properties of the wind element. The wind itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to cut straight through any rank of lightning, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course. Due to the wind being S-rank, if the wind is stopped with the same rank element (or A-rank fire) the lightning will be stopped, but the boomerang will continue as normal.

Tsuchi Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Earthen Impact' form The user channels earth chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the earth. Upon activation of this form, the boomerang(s) are coated with a thick layer of earth and take on a darker look, very similar to Kakuzu when using his earth technique. This allows the boomerang to increase in both power and killing potential due to the properties of the earth element making the boomerang gain more mass, thus more impact power. The earthen shell itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to cut straight through any rank of water, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course. Due to the earth being S-rank, if the earth shell is stopped with the same rank element (or A-rank lightning) the earth will be broken, but the boomerang will continue as normal.

One of the greatest strengths of this technique is a basic ability of even a Normal boomerang. The user can indirectly attack a target by throwing the boomerang(s) in a given direction and allowing them to arc and attack from a different direction. Or if an opponent so happens to dodge the boomerang it will curve back around and hit the target from the opposite direction, thus making each attack unpredictable.

- Usable 3x
- Only usable by users of Chishi Shindou cfs
- only can be taught by shady doctor
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-Declined- Remove that the boomerang will continue after being stopped by a technique in all the variations, and also mention the size of the coating that's around the boomerang. Keep in mind that it follows the arc it was thrown at, you can't use your chakra to divert it's trajectory.

( Chishi Shindou: Erementaru Shindou ) - Fatal Impact: Elemental Impact
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
This is a simple, yet affective technique which increases the killing potential of a chosen boomerang(s) by using elemental chakra within them. There are 5 forms of using this ability, each form pertaining to a selected element. The 5 forms of elemental use in Chishi Shindou is as followed:

Sandā Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Thunder Impact' form. The user channels raiton chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the lightning. Upon activation of this form, lightning envelops the entire boomerang, violently swirling and twisting around the shape of the boomerang, similar to a tornado of cutting lightning coating it due to the properties of the lightning element. The elemental coat itself surrounds the boomerang exactly 1m away from the boomerang. The lightning itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to cut straight through any rank of earth, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course.

Kasai Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Flame Impact' form The user channels fire chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the fire. Upon activation of this form, fire envelops the entire boomerang, violently swirling and twisting around the shape of the boomerang, similar to a tornado of blazing flames coating the boomerang. This allows the boomerang to increase in both power and killing potential due to the properties of the fire element. The elemental coat itself surrounds the boomerang exactly 1m away from the boomerang. The fire itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to power straight through any rank of wind, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course.

Nami Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Wave Impact' form The user channels water chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the water. Upon activation of this form, water envelops the entire boomerang, violently swirling and twisting around the shape of the boomerang, similar to a tornado of cutting water coating the boomerang. This allows the boomerang to increase in both power and killing potential due to the properties of the water element. The elemental coat itself surrounds the boomerang exactly 1m away from the boomerang. The water itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to cut straight through any rank of fire, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course.

Uzu Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Vortex Impact' form The user channels wind chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the wind. Upon activation of this form, wind envelops the entire boomerang, violently swirling and twisting around the shape of the boomerang, similar to a tornado of cutting wind coating the boomerang. This allows the boomerang to increase in both speed and killing potential due to the properties of the wind element. The elemental coat itself surrounds the boomerang exactly 1m away from the boomerang. The wind itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to cut straight through any rank of lightning, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course.

Tsuchi Shindou -
Or better known as the 'Earthen Impact' form The user channels earth chakra into a held or thrown boomerang in order to alter its abilities through the use of the earth. Upon activation of this form, the boomerang(s) are coated with a thick layer of earth and take on a darker look, very similar to Kakuzu when using his earth technique. This allows the boomerang to increase in both power and killing potential due to the properties of the earth element making the boomerang gain more mass, thus more impact power. The elemental coat itself surrounds the boomerang exactly 1m away from the boomerang. The earthen shell itself is S-rank in strength, thus being able to cut straight through any rank of water, and S-rank and below of other basic elements, if logical of course.

One of the greatest strengths of this technique is a basic ability of even a Normal boomerang. The user can indirectly attack a target by throwing the boomerang(s) in a given direction and allowing them to arc and attack from a different direction. Or if an opponent so happens to dodge the boomerang it will curve back around and hit the target from the opposite direction, thus making each attack unpredictable, though in no way can the user change the trajectory of the boomerangs via chakra.

- Usable 3x
- Only usable by users of Chishi Shindou cfs
- only can be taught by Ares

 Declined  1 meter is too much. Its an elemental coating. Make it reasonable.

( Fuuton: Fūryoku ryūshi bīmu ) - Wind Style: Wind Particle Beam
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to the user)
Description:
This technique is a simple yet powerful wind technique which focuses purely on destructive power. The user draws blood from his and like a summoning technique then weaves together three hand seals (Tiger - Dragon - Snake) whilst gather a massive amount of chakra directly in the center of his chest. When the three hand seals are finished the user moves his hands from out of the path of his chest and releases from the chest a condensed circular beam of glowing wind chakra. The beam begins as a circular, 3 foot in radius beam until it reaches five meters away from the user. Once it leaves close range the chakra can no longer be controlled and it suddenly expands outwards into a large half dome like explosion that moves outwards 30m in every direction except back at the user. The concentrated wind expanding so quickly leaves everything in its path cut up on a small scale, so being hit with it is Certain death. The aftermath of the attack is very identical to that of the mini tbb that the 4tails naruto did when fighting Orochimaru, though due to so much powerful wind chakra being blasted from the users chest, it leaves his chest cut up with 1inch deep cuts that leaves him bleeding moderately.

- Usable one time
- No wind techniques in the same or next turn
- The user can't use A-rank or lower Tai for 3 turns due to the body being worn out
- Cannot use techniques above S-Rank for 2 turns afterwards

 Approved 

Korra. · Mar 6, 2014

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Blake Belladonna said:
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(Houraieso Kuchiyose: Zetsubō no Mure) - Viperfish Summoning: Swarm of Despair
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long (summoned short range of the user)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Cost: 40
Description: After the user does the required summoning jutsu hand seals, the user will summon a swarm of 100 regular size viperfish that swarms the opponent and attacks, binds, and bites them. This summoning can be done in a lake or ocean or even be combine with big enough water jutsus like Crashing Wave, Exploding Wave, etc. so that the viperfish will be able to survive in water. If done in conjunction with a water jutsu it only takes a couple a seconds to to combine the viperfish with the water jutsu. The viperfish can only survive 2 turns being outside of water before being desummoned.
Note: Can be used/summoned 3 times a battle with a 2 turn gap between uses.
Note: Viperfish stay on the field for 4 turns and if not summoned inside a water source can only be on the field for 2 turns before be desummoned.
Note: Must know the Viperfish Summoning.
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-Approved-

(Suiton/Baipāātsu: Baipā Fūjikome) - Water Release/Viper Arts: Viper Containment
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will do the Tiger sign and by using a near by water source or spitting water from their mouth they will release a stream of water that is connected to their arm that wraps around the opponent and then pressurizes the water to the point that it makes the opponent hard to move or escape. The will then release multiple ( up to 7) Viperfishes from the sleeve arm ,of which the water is connected to, into the water and has the viperfishes attacks and binds the opponent.
Note: Must have signed the Viperfish contract
Note: Usable 4 times a match
Note: Needs a water source or be spit out of the user's mouth
Note: Must be taught by Blake Belladonna
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-Declined- If you want this it will have to count as 2 moves, the water and summoning.

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(Hebi Kuchiyose: Milotic) - Snake Summoning: Milotic
Rank: S
Type: Offence/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Once the user bites their thumb and smears it on his tattoo and slams their hand on the ground they will summon Milotic a snake thats big as Manda. Milotic is a personal snake of Blake Belladonna and is able to use to use Water Ninjutsu up to S rank (counting towards the users move count). Milotic is the fastest snake in the water able to swim at great speeds while in the water and is also able to go into great depth of any ocean. Milotic is able to take no damage from B rank jutsus and below and is unaffected by A rank water jutsus that affect the water she swims in.
Note: Has to be taught by Blake Belladonna
Note: She stays for 4 turns.
Note: Can be summoned once a battle
Note: Must have signed snake contract
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-Declined- Reduce the size, no immunity to water techniques, and mention the speed it swims at, same thing to moving on solid ground.

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(Suiton/Baipāātsu: Baipā Fūjikome) - Water Release/Viper Arts: Viper Containment
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will do the Tiger sign and by using a near by water source or spitting water from their mouth they will release a stream of water that is connected to their arm that wraps around the opponent and then pressurizes the water to the point that it makes the opponent hard to move or escape. The will then release multiple ( up to 7) Viperfishes from the sleeve arm ,of which the water is connected to, into the water and has the viperfishes attacks and binds the opponent.
Note: Must have signed the Viperfish contract
Note: Usable 4 times a match
Note: Needs a water source or be spit out of the user's mouth
Note: This counts as two moves
Note: Must be taught by Blake Belladonna

 Approved 

(Hebi Kuchiyose: Milotic) - Snake Summoning: Milotic
Rank: S rank
Type: Offensive/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Once the user bites their thumb and smears it on his tattoo and slams their hand on the ground they will summon Milotic a snake that is slightly smaller than Aoda. Milotic is a personal snake of Blake Belladonna and is able to use to use Water Ninjutsu up to S rank (counting towards the users move count). Milotic is the fastest snake in the water able to swim at great speeds ,which are just a bit slower then Lee without weights, while in the water and is also able to go into great depth of any ocean. On land Milotic can move just as fast as a normal giant snake summoning. Milotic is able to take no damage from B rank jutsus and below.
Note: Has to be taught by Blake Belladonna
Note: She stays for 4 turns.
Note: Can be summoned once a battle
Note: Must have signed snake contract

 Approved 

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(Hebiātsu: Hebi no Norowareta Niwa ) - Snake Arts: Cursed Garden of Snakes
Rank: S rank
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will stomp their foot onto the ground and uses their chakra to create multiple tunnels through out the ground underneath the user and the opponent throughout the entire terrain. The user will then do the snake sign and have a snake come out of their sleeve and goes underground and travels throughout the tunnels laying snake eggs throughout the tunnels. The snake eggs will quickly hatch and release many different sized snakes to come out of under the ground and attack the opponent and covering the entire terrain. The snake sizes can vary going from small baby snakes to large size anacondas. As snakes come from out of the ground attacking the opponent the first snake that the user release will keep going throughout the tunnels laying more eggs to keep more and more snakes come out of the ground. The snakes all poses a basic venom that when they bite the opponent they cause numbness right away and after turns if the snakes are still biting the opponent will cause paralysis.
Note: Must be able to summon snakes
Note: Usable twice with a 3 turn cool down between uses.
Note: All the snakes last for 2 turns.
Note: Must be taught by Blake Belladonna

 Declined  The process of this...doesn't it feel increadibly complex and lenghty? because I don't feel its something you can simply use and it happens. It would take at least one full turn for it to happen. I also don't like the aspect that the snake keeps creating eggs... I think she should lay the eggs, they take some time and then they hatch and thats that.

Method · Mar 6, 2014

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Method said:
Shikotsumyaku: Nejire sutemu no odori |Dead Bone Pulse: Dance of the Twisting Stem
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (+10 each turn)
Damage: -
Description: A kaguya technique that works the same as those with Hyper-mobility (double jointed). It allows the user to drastically increase their flexibility by channeling chakra across the joints of their entire skeletal structure. This allows the joints to stretch further than normal, granting the user the ability to twist & turn their body in almost any desired position otherwise impossible for an average person. The workings are similar to those of "Drunken Fist" but keeping the user in a controlled state of both body & mind; cautious of their surroundings & well aware of their own actions. The user is able to effectively evade or counter & also deliver devastating strikes in an erratic manner. Due to the unique steel-like bone density of the kaguya clan & the form in which this technique allows the user to maneuver in, they are able to combine those seemingly fluid movements with devastating strikes in quick succession. It may also be used to dislocate certain joints, making it easier for the user to break free from a trapped or uncomfortable position or even perform handseals without the opponent being aware by motioning both arms in a way to avoid their focus, all dependable on both the user & opponent's position (a common example being behind the user's back). The user can maintain this state for a select amount of time, but prolonging this state causes the user to suffer in movement due to the strain left on their body. The user suffers no strain within a period of three turns. The fourth turn the user is unable to perform Ninjutsu of S Rank & above. The fifth turn the user is unable to perform either Ninjutsu or Taijutsu of A Rank & above. After this technique has ended the user is unable to perform Taijutsu or Kaguya techniques of A Rank & above & is somewhat restricted in movement, maneuvering at a slightly slower pace than normal, for one turn. The user can willfully end this technique if ever needed. The user gains no speed boost, but due to the fluid & sudden motions performed, can make it difficult for the opponent to keep clear track of those movements.
- Lasts 5 turns
- Can be used 3 times
- Taught by Method
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-Declined- Nice technique, however, 5 turns with 3 usage times is way too much, only 1 usage with 4 turns duration is the maximum of what i'm going to allow, also you need to put damage points, in case you use it for offensive taijutsu strikes.

Shikotsumyaku: Nejire sutemu no odori |Dead Bone Pulse: Dance of the Twisting Stem
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (+10 each turn)
Damage: 60
Description: A kaguya technique that works the same as those with Hyper-mobility (double jointed). It allows the user to drastically increase their flexibility by channeling chakra across the joints of their entire skeletal structure. This allows the joints to stretch further than normal, granting the user the ability to twist & turn their body in almost any desired position otherwise impossible for an average person. The workings are similar to those of "Drunken Fist" but keeping the user in a controlled state of both body & mind; cautious of their surroundings & well aware of their own actions. The user is able to effectively evade or counter & also deliver devastating strikes in an erratic manner. Due to the unique steel-like bone density of the kaguya clan & the form in which this technique allows the user to maneuver in, they are able to combine those seemingly fluid movements with devastating strikes in quick succession. It may also be used to dislocate certain joints, making it easier for the user to break free from a trapped or uncomfortable position or even perform handseals without the opponent being aware by motioning both arms in a way to avoid their focus, all dependable on both the user & opponent's position (a common example being behind the user's back). The user can maintain this state for a select amount of time, but prolonging this state causes the user to suffer in movement due to the strain left on their body. The user suffers no strain within a period of three turns. The fourth turn the user is unable to perform Ninjutsu of A Rank & above. After this technique has ended the user is unable to perform Taijutsu or Kaguya techniques of A Rank & above & is somewhat restricted in movement, maneuvering at a slightly slower pace than normal, for one turn. The user can willfully end this technique if ever needed. The user gains no speed boost, but due to the fluid & sudden motions performed, can make it difficult for the opponent to keep clear track of those movements.
- Lasts 4 turns
- Can be used once
- Taught by Method

 Declined  Ok, you're a Kaguya so you can grow bones. Ok, thats fine. How does that translate into growing and manipulating ligaments and muscles? Because the movement of a joint has more to do with that than the bones that are part of it.

Shikotsumyaku: Surasshingu ne no odori |Dead Bone Pulse: Dance of the Thrashing Root
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: By manipulating their skeletal structure the user is able to alter their rib cage & control several ribs to emerge from their body & travel toward the opponent, acting as whips to perform various tasks. The user can allow up to six whips to emerge from their body, allowing them, on contact, to either constrict the opponent entirely, leaving them unable to perform handseals or simply certain parts of the body, such as arms, legs, neck & the waist of the opponent. Once wrapped around the opponent, the whips are able move them across a certain radius, from either side to side or back & forth from the user. This also allows to lift the opponent up form the ground when using two or more of the ribs. The user must maintain a certain degree of focus & continuously feed chakra to the whips in order to keep them active & the user is able to break apart form them at anytime. Due to the inherent ability of the kaguya clan the bones have a steel like density, making it near impossible for the opponent to break free from the whips by normal means. They can reach up to seven meters from the user & to allow for greater flexibility are connected by joints rather than a single bone, while also having a pointed tip served for a piercing affect. The user is unable to perform other chakra related techniques other than those of the kaguya clan while maneuvering the whips. If the user does so, the whips simply fall to the ground as lifeless tools which can be used for later actions by reinserting chakra into them (this jutsu would need to be posted in that case & counts as a move). The whips are slightly thicker than a piece of rope.
- Jutsu lasts two turns
- Can be used twice
- Taught by Method

 Declined  How can a bone be a whip? One thing is to use something like the spine to create a similar structure which you can whip using and enhanced the articulations that exist there already. Another is to say that one bone can be a whip. Kaguya doesn't allow that.

Shikotsumyaku: Shi sutorōku |Dead Bone Pulse: Death Stroke
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user manipulates their phalanges bones in both or either hand, extending them up to a length of 15cm. They form up by two joints allowing for more flexibility, are sharply tipped & so finely shaped that the entire claw itself is able to cut into objects, used when swiping them across a target rather than piercing through. Being of the kaguya clan the claws are of a steel like density, allowing them to hold well against bladed weapons. Due to the slender shape & size of the claws, they are not suited against blunt melee weapons of equal density, namely hammers. This technique can also enhance the effects of "Ten Finger Drilling Bullets" by using the entire claw(s) rather than the tip as normal. The claws travel at the same speed as the original technique & as they travel they rapidly rotate, creating a drilling like effect on impact. The user must post said technique while this one is active. The damage of the enhanced "Ten Finger Drilling Bullets" would be that of a B Rank (totaling all the claws together). Being used as projectiles, the claws can reach a distance of up to long range.
- Can be used 3 times
- Taught by Method

 Declined  Do these enlarged bones pierce through the skin and manifest outside the body?

Beifong · Mar 6, 2014

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(Kōton: Ya no ame) - Steel Release: Rain of Arrows
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: 40 Damage
Description: The user will release very fine particles of steel in the air that can't be seen by naked eyes and by using steel chakra the steel dust will condense into up to 30 arrows made of steel. the user can make up to 5 arrows in the same instant. an arrow is 20cm tall and able to penetrate a steel sheet of 2cm thickness. this jutsu stays active till all 30 arrows are used and won't affect the jutsu slots of the following turns.
note: can be used 4 times per battle
note: the user must wait 1 turn after finishing the 30 arrows to use the jutsu again
note: only FeeLPaiN can teach this jutsu

 Declined  The invisible steel isn't going to fly. Nor have you explained exactly what you do once you form the arrows.

Vegeta · Mar 6, 2014

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-Vegeta said:
(Hachimitsu No Jutsu: ) - Honey Bee Technique: Apamin Swarm
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long (due to the bees traveling to the opponent)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user summons a multitude of bees from their sleeves that race out towards the opponent stinging them. After stinging the opponent the main part of the Bee's body explodes causing moderate damage to the opponent leaving behind the small stinger and it's venom sac. The venom sac continues to pump into the opponent a powerful neurotoxin called Apamin. In normal bee venom Apamin is a neurotoxin that makes up roughly 2-3% of the venom itself however the bees summoned with this technique have been specifically bred to have much higher concentrations of the peptide in their venom nearly 50-75 percent of the venom is made up of the neurotoxin Apamin. Which in small doses can cause varying problem with the opponent's nervous system and their organs.
Apamin easily passes the blood-brain barrier allowing the neurotoxin to find it's way into organs and the nervous system even effecting the brain to some degree. The first thing the opponent will notice are the local effects: feelings of burning or stinging pain that radiate throughout the stung area/s spreading quickly throughout the entirety of the body as well as swelling of the effected area in noticeable ways. Even if the opponent removes the stinger the neurotoxin will have made it's way into their system. These feelings are almost immediate and happen as soon as the opponent is stung even before the bee itself explodes. After a few moments the severe systemic reactions begin to take hold of the opponent's body swelling of the tongue and throat happen in a few seconds followed by difficulty breathing and talking as well as difficulty forming rational thoughts.
Lastly after the course of two full turns the opponent begins to lose their vision due to optic neuritis swelling of the optic nerves they also begin to have growing chest pain caused by the venom due to atrial fibrillation basically irregular heart palpitations due to the sheer power of the venom. The venom can also cause a cerebral infarction (stroke) or in severe cases an acute myocardial infarction (a mild heart attack).
~Notes~
-If only one bee is successful in stinging the opponent only the first and second set of reactions will happen. If two or more bees sting the opponent there is enough venom for the final reactions to happen.
-The full effects take two turns to happen.
-Can only be used once per battle
-All the bees explode even if they don't sting the opponent
-Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan
-Can only be taught by -Vegeta
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-Declined- OP, and the technique is composed of 2 techniques, the explosion and venom, reduce the effects.

-re-submission- removed the bolded and added some restriction

(Hachimitsu No Jutsu: ) - Honey Bee Technique: Apamin Swarm
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long (due to the bees traveling to the opponent)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user summons a multitude of bees from their sleeves that race out towards the opponent stinging them causing moderate damage to the opponent leaving behind the small stinger and it's venom sac. The venom sac continues to pump into the opponent a powerful neurotoxin called Apamin. In normal bee venom Apamin is a neurotoxin that makes up roughly 2-3% of the venom itself however the bees summoned with this technique have been specifically bred to have much higher concentrations of the peptide in their venom nearly 50-75 percent of the venom is made up of the neurotoxin Apamin. Which in small doses can cause varying problems with the opponent's nervous system and their organs.
Apamin easily passes the blood-brain barrier allowing the neurotoxin to find it's way into organs and the nervous system even effecting the brain to some degree. The first thing the opponent will notice are the local effects: feelings of burning or stinging pain that radiate throughout the stung area/s spreading quickly throughout the entirety of the body as well as swelling of the effected area in noticeable ways. Even if the opponent removes the stinger the neurotoxin will have made it's way into their system. These feelings are almost immediate and happen as soon as the opponent is stung. After 2 turns the severe systemic reactions begin to take hold of the opponent's body, swelling of the tongue and throat happen in a few seconds followed by difficulty breathing and talking as well as difficulty forming rational thoughts.
Lastly after the course of 3 full turns the opponent begins to lose their vision due to optic neuritis swelling of the optic nerves they also begin to have growing chest pain caused by the venom due to atrial fibrillation basically irregular heart palpitations due to the sheer power of the venom, severely hindered reaction times and reduced speed along with random muscle spasms that make fighting a lot harder. In severe cases, the venom can also cause a cerebral infarction (stroke)
~Notes~
-If only one bee is successful in stinging the opponent only the first and second set of reactions will happen. If two or more bees sting the opponent there is enough venom for the final reactions to happen.
-The full effects take 3 turns to happen.
-Can only be used once per battle
-Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan
-Can only be taught by -Vegeta

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 Declined  Where is the rest of the japanese name? Also, you're over stretching the abilities and taking it to a level where it won't be approved. Make it simpler, and don't overstretch.

-Vegeta said:
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kingu Beegeta) Summoning Technique: King Beegeta
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
King Beegeta is a giant sized bee, a few meters longer/taller than the Giant Bee, and has 4 black stripes in it's mane. Its anatomy slightly differs from normal bees by having a jaw of razor sharp teeth, a deadly stinger capable of piercing thru A rank defenses, and powerful wings capable of pushing back enemies(B-Rank ability up to Mid range), which makes this insect a difficult opponent much like the Giant Bee. It can also spit a massive amount of honey from its mouth to trap and ensnare its victims. Its honey attack is S-Rank and has a Long range reach. It can only be destroyed by S rank jutsu's, or a combined attack of S rank level (within reason). It can also fly up to 4 people on it's back swiftly and can understand basic communication. Once per match, King Beegeta can flaps his wings in a rhythmic manner lulling the enemy into an A-rank Genjutsu where as the enemy see's any and all Bee's on the field converge on them at once, even bypassing their defenses as the Bee's begin stinging them mercilessly from all sides, making the stung area's swell up and causing intense pain and paralyzation. In reality the enemy will first swat at the air frantically spinning around screaming, then is immobilized and would experience mental pain and anguish from the helpless feeling of being attacked by a swarm of manga context sized Bee's
~Notes~
-Can only be summoned once
-All its abilities count as moves
-It's Special Genjutsu attack can only be done once per battle
-Cannot be summoned if Giant Bee is on the field
-Stays on the field for 4 turns
-Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan
-Must be taught the summonings by -Vegeta
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-Declined- Too much abilities stacked here, for one, the pushing back enemies is what? wind waves from it's wings? mention the radius of the honey attack, and how does it approach the opponent? in a wave? also no genjutsu ability.

-re-submission-

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kingu Beegeta) Summoning Technique: King Beegeta
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
King Beegeta is a giant sized bee, a few meters longer/taller than the Giant Bee, and has 4 black stripes in it's mane. Its anatomy slightly differs from normal bees by having a jaw of razor sharp teeth, a deadly stinger capable of piercing thru A rank defenses (Short ranged). It can take up to A rank attacks and remain unharmed(within reason). It can also fly up to 4 people on it's back swiftly and can understand basic communication. King Beegeta is proficient at Katon jutsu, and as such can perform Katon jutsu's up to S rank without the need for seals. Twice per match, a member of the Kamizuru clan can activate King Beegeta's special attack, Galick Gun, spewing it's B rank honey attack in a stream or a more spread out pattern (Short-Long ranged, See Giant Bee) and using S rank Katon chakra to heat the honey almost to a boiling point, increasing the strength of the honey attack to S rank and causing burns to the enemy before cooling and binding them in place.
~Notes~
-Can only be summoned once
-Has the same abilities as the Giant Bee summons
-All its abilities count as moves
-Galick Gun can only be used twice per match, with 1 turn cool down before re-using
-Cannot be summoned if Giant Bee is on the field
-Stays on the field for 4 turns
-Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan and learned the Giant Bee summons
-Must be taught this summoning by -Vegeta

 Declined  Too many abilities for a summon and with those abilities its even immune to A-Ranks without any reason as to why that is. One more go then its DNR

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(Katon: - Shakunetsu no puraido!) - Fire Release: - Scorching Pride!
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100 (40 to the user)
Description: After performing Fire Release: Scorching Rage the user will knead high levels of Katon chakra thru out their body, concentrating the levels of chakra to a high degree, and release the kneaded chakra thru out their body into an violent explosive blast of fire that explodes spiraling outward from the user shaped like a dome that reaches 15 meters in height, it's solid-like concussive power leveling anything in it's path in a 360* radius and leaving in it's wake a crater with the user as the epicenter. The attack will cause collateral physical damage when used, slowing down movement by 2 ranks the following 2 turns as well as affecting chakra molding abilities for a short period
~Notes~
-Scorching Rage must be posted the turn this is used
-May only be used once per battle
-Cannot mold chakra above A rank the following turn, and no Katon chakra for 1 turn
-Full damage only dealt Short range, damage decreases to S-rank damage at Mid range, A-rank damage at Long range
-Must be taught by -Vegeta and must know my Scorching Rage

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 Declined  Wrong damage info. We don't check it if the template is wrong. But its DNR because "omniblasts" of fire and all other elements have been done and there is nothing special in this one.

Bloo · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Bloo said:
(Kamigoroshi Keta) God Slayers Beam
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user while holding his sheathe in either hand with the sword drawn will begin to channel their chakra into the sheathe itself. While fighting in close, the user will point their sheathe at their opponent. The user will then release a beam of chakra. The beam is only has big as hole in the sheathe. The beam will pierce the skin of the opponent but won't go all the way though. The beam will also push the opponent back one meter. The beam can also be used in three short bursts. The bursts won't pierce but will still have the knock back except much weaker.

- Can be used three times
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-Declined- How fast is the beam when released? also either one burst or 3 consecutive ones, you choose >_>

(Mokuton: Kamigoroshi Jaaku Naegi ) - Wood Release: God Slayers Wicked Sapling
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will first perform the snake hand. Then using their mokuton chakra they will create a sapling. The sapling has a round body with a stalk going from its head. Attached to the stalk is on solitary leaf. The body has four protrusions which act as hands arms and legs. It only stands at one and a half meters. The sapling also has two round hollow eyes and always has a mischievous smile. Once grown the sapling will then proceed to find the nearest opponent and lock on to it. Once found the sapling will rush towards the target, and when it reaches its target it will explode. The explosion isequal to that of four explosive tag. The user may also create four smaller saplings and when they explode they produce the explosion is equal to that of an explosive tag.

-Usable three times.
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-Declined- How exactly would they "find" the nearest opponent? You are the one who is controlling them, when you stop your control, they simply can't move anymore, also same as above, either 4 small saplings or a big one >_>

Resumbitting

Reworded the whole thing.

(Kamigoroshi Keta) God Slayers Beam
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user, with their sword drawn, holds their sheath by their side. They then begin to channel chakra into the sheath, filling it with their chakra. While in close range to the target, the user will point the open end of the sheath at their intended target, releasing up to a maximum of 3 small blasts, or "beams" of chakra. These beams travel at a moderately fast pace and, like most basic Kenjutsu Techniques, can be tracked by the naked eye, for example, (Suraisu Shinku no Nami) Slicing Crimson Wave. They have enough force to push back or halt the intended target, this can be a person's limbs, weapon, tools or any other desired target.

- Can be used three times per battle.
- Can only be taught by Bloo.

 Declined  DNR. Chakra beams exist already. Too much so.

(Mokuton: Kamigoroshi Jaaku Naegi ) - Wood Release: God Slayers Wicked Sapling
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will first perform the snake handseal, if the handseal is stopped the sapling stops moving and will explode. Then using their mokuton chakra they will create a sapling. The sapling has a round body with a stalk going from its head. Attached to the stalk is on solitary leaf. The body has four protrusions which act as hands arms and legs. It only stands at one and a half meters. The sapling also has two round hollow eyes and always has a mischievous smile. Once grown the sapling will then proceed to find the nearest opponent and lock on to it, of course the user has to have vision on the target, or some form of sensing, for the sapling to find them. If not the user can have the sapling run to where he wants it to and then have it explode.. Once found the sapling will rush towards the target, and when it reaches its target it will explode. The explosion is equal to that of four explosive tag.

-Usable three times.

 Declined  Rewrite the description, its a mess. Also, how does sap explode just like that? Does it simply burst outwards?

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(Gama Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Toxicroak) Toad Summoning Jutsu: Toxicroak
Type: Summon.
Rank: S.
Range: Short.
Chakra: 40.
Damage: N/A.
Description: The user performs the Summoning Jutsu, and fulfills the necessary blood sacrifice to summon Toxicroak. Toxicroak is a humanoid Poison Dart Frog, an amphibian that secretes a deadly poison through specific points on it's skin. Its head bears a gently- upward curling spike which seems to be a part of the skull. Its eyes are bright yellow, sinister and intimidating, with a small snake-like pupil. Its mouth gives an appearance of a mouth-guard, with its red upper lip curling upward at the ends in a very intimidating manner. Underneath its chin is a bulbous red vocal sac. It has three fingers and one large red claw on the back of each hand. These claws on the backs of their hands can channel poison. Its forearms have two black rings encircling them. Its legs are muscular and seem to be adapted for speedy attacks. It has three toes on its feet, with a red middle toe on each foot, and a sharp spike which juts out of its heels. Underneath the pelvic area is two white horizontal lines. Thick black lines run down the sides of its body and surrounding its limbs, making them seem as if the limbs are detachable. The black lines go up into its face and surround the eyes before meeting in the middle of its snout, just above the upper lip. Toxicroak has two fang-like formations protruding out of it's forearms, which it uses like blades. These bones are primarily where Toxicroak administers it's poison. A small scratch from these sharp blade-like bones will cause uncontrollable irritation to the affected area. A large wound will start to affect the victim's respiratory system to the point it will shut down. Toxicroak is highly skilled in Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, due to the "blades" on it's arms. This makes Toxicroak a deadly close quarter combat fighter.

Note: Requires Toad Contract.
Note: Remains on the field for up to 4 turns.
Note: Can only be summoned once per turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Bloo.

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 Declined  While all toads are frogs, not all frogs are toads. The contract is for toads, not frogs. DNR

Summer · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

[ suiton suetto saikou kagai] water style sweat pores assault
Type: offensive/defensive
Rank: B rank
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: the user of this jutsu developed the idea behind using suiton with there sweat glands while training very endlessly and sweating prefusely. the user make's a single handsign and proceeds to focus on the sweat glands a steady flow of suiton chakra. this enhances the sweat glands and allows the user to make use of the glands releasing trace amounts of sweat and large amount's of water from the sweat glands in a full body surge. the user sends out water from all the sweat glands located on the front of his body and proceeds to release a full body like figure of himself produced from water and quality amounts of sweat. the figure of the user is sent out directed towards the enemy it looks like a training dummy of water running at the enemy. the user can also focus on just certain sweat glands say for instance the arms the user can make a full extention of water arms with hands to punch and grab the enemy with, and or legs and feet for kicking an enemy. these methods of sweat assault are released very fast and are quite agile especially the body extension method. the last note of using this jutsu is that the user has the ability to coat themselves in a suiton sweat coating and thus increases the user's ability to deflect incoming taijutsu attacks against the user, the coating is transparent in color and will likely only be noticed by doujutsu users.

notes:
give off disgusting smell of body odor.
when heated the body odor will be quite a bit more potent.
restrictions:
: does not require a water source only sweat glands.
: can only be used 4 times during battle.
: must form a single handsign for either method of using this jutsu and only one method per usage of the jutsu.
:can only deflect taijutsu of C rank Regular taijutsu.
: can only be taught by rojuro.

 Declined  DNR

Rojuro said:
Doton musha bisha (Earth warrior bisha)
Type: summon
Rank: A rank
Range: Short- long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:
this meerkat has a very particular vision called the binocular vision it is a large peripheral range that can be enhanced to even greater distances by utilizing there chakra with there eyes they can track the earths movements fast from any range. being that meerkats are normally earth based animals while utilizing the chakra points at there feet the meerkat can notice any changes in there earthen surrounding, should an enemy channel chakra into the earth in the meerkat will instantly feel the changes upon there paws. that being known meerkats are able to form handsigns and use earth chakra greater then shinobi can. a well known species for tunneling throughout the earth they can easily slip into the ground and cover vast distances faster than above the ground. there ear's are very special that they can close while underground to avoid dirt blocking there ear's. while underground searching for an enemy the meerkat can differentiate between the weights of objects in the surroundings on the ground above them. like any animal meerkats can communicate normally with shinobis and or use there regular meerkat signals such as waving there tail's, hand gesture's or different cries. meerkats have very sharp claw's and teeth and will eat almost anything while foraging for food from lizards to fungi, and even snakes. they have been known to be immune to some deadly venoms such as scorpion venoms and snake venoms.

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restrictions
: can only be summoned once per battle but remains on the field until killed or five turns
: can form any earth jutsu requiring handsings with half the handsigns.
: can only use up to A rank Earth jutsu's
: can only see fast moving objects up to long range such as distinguishing that of a headband is simple.
: must have signed meerkat contract.
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-Declined- You spent half of the submission talking about the Meerkat abilities and forgot about the summon's specifications, size and special abilities, also this binocular vision wouldn't allow a meerkat to track things moving inside the earth, and no to detecting enemies chakra in the earth, and up to 4 turns max on the field.

Doton musha bisha (Earth warrior bisha)
Type: summon
Rank: A rank
Range: Short- long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: this meerkat is regular height and size to any normal meerkat, it's destinctive colours and striping are as shown in the spoiler.( 3 feet tall with slim build)this meerkat has a very particular vision called the binocular vision it is a large peripheral range that can be enhanced to even greater distances by utilizing there chakra with there eyes they can track the enemies movements fast from any range( that of one tomoe tracking). being that meerkats are normally earth based animals while utilizing the chakra points at there feet the meerkat can notice any changes in there earthen surrounding, should an enemy attack using earth the meerkat will instantly feel the changes upon there paws however they cannot sense an enemy in the ground. that being known meerkats are able to form handsigns and use earth chakra greater then shinobi can. a well known species for tunneling throughout the earth they can easily slip into the ground and cover vast distances faster than above the ground. there ear's are very special that they can close while underground to avoid dirt blocking there ear's, by channeling chakra to the ear's they can pin point an enemy above ground. Utilizing retractable nails on there hands and feet for digging. like any animal meerkats can communicate normally with shinobis and or use there regular meerkat signals such as waving there tail's, hand gesture's or different cries. meerkats have very sharp claw's and teeth and will eat almost anything while foraging for food from lizards to fungi, and even snakes. they have been known to be immune to some deadly venoms such as scorpion venoms and snake venoms.

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restrictions
: can only be summoned once per battle but remains on the field until killed or 4 turns
: can form any earth jutsu requiring handsigns with half the handsigns.
: can only use up to A rank Earth jutsu's
: can only see fast moving objects up to long range such as distinguishing that of a headband is simple.
: must have signed meerkat contract.

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 Declined  DNR. No summon with makeshift Doujutsu.

BusinessManTeno · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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(Ensui Katatsumuri Kuchiyose: Otomeza) Cone Snail Summoning: Virgo
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: (N/a)
Description: Virgo is considered the most beautiful and one of the strongest cone snails of them all. She is considered the mother of them all thus making her one of the 2 boss summon. She stands roughly stands 7 feet High, and 7 feet long (The shell is included in the size), only wide enough to carry one person on her shell. Her regular body is gray though you can never see her full body as its attached to the shell, you can tell by her eyes as they stick out from the shell along with her mouth. Her Shell is a deep water blue color with white streaks all down her shell with the virgo symbol () on the side of her shell. She has a very soothing voice said to be as calm as the ocean, allowing her to speak fluent english. The shell takes the shape of a cone and is very sturdy, giving her immunity to A rank and below elemental technique when she withdraws into her shell this being her defense.. The user is able to withdraw into the shell as well, if the timing is right. Just like every cone snail she has a harpoon for a tongue. Allowing her to launch her harpoon (Tongue) towards an opponent with great speed (Only up to mid range). The poison with this cone snail is one of the weaker ones, as it does not harm to the body physically .Once the harpoon attaches inside the opponent the poison inside the harpoon will release causing the opponents body to shut down for 1 whole turn causing the opponent not able to even mold chakra or even open their mouth. Depending where the harpoon is shot it can be lethal (Piercing through the head, or heart). Virgo can then withdraw the harpoon bringing the opponent with it, or release the the body from the harpoon and bring it back in (This is considered her way of fighting).Virgo does not have an elemental affinity but does have something unique to the cone snail family. Once pr summoning she is able to absorb the affinity of one element (Excluding Earth due to it being a harden material) by coiling into her shell while giving her shell a draining property. This not only defends from the technique but turns the shell into that specific element. By doing this, she is eligible to use a jutsu from that elemental affinity

Note: Stays on for 4 Turns max
Note: Can Only Defend Once A Turn & It counts as one of the users 3 turns
Note: Can only attack once a turn & it counts as one of the users 3 turns
Note: Once The Shell is broke, she is no longer able to fight and gets reverse summoned
Note: Can only use the elemental special ability of hers once a battle and it stays active until the snail uses the specific element, then the shell goes back to normal
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-Declined- Max B-rank immunity through the shell, no drawing you into it, it's not possible, also no to the absorption ability, and how exactly would the opponent's body "shut down"? Scorps said you need to explain how the poison works in the template of the submission, that's not an explanation.

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(Sakashima Yaiba: Enko Boushi Roze) Reverse Blade Style: Arc Of The Rotating Rose
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is one of the main "Evade >> Strike" technique as this attack is only initiated when the opponent does a frontal, vertical ,or horizontal attack with their hands or a weapon. When the opponent comes into range with an attack The user will quickly duck down to avoid the attack with their sword in their dominant hand, and rotate around in a full 360 degree angle lifting up at the last moment while channeling earth chakra into the sword thus causing the sword to be coating in earth chakra, while swinging the sword into the back of the opponents neck causing high moderate pains to the opponent sending them flying to the side.

Note: Can be used thrice pr battle
Note: Can only be used against taijutsu and kenjutsu and up to B rank only
Note: Can use once every 2 turns
Note: Due to the attack on the neck, after the attack has landed the opponent neck will be stiff not allowing him to move his head to the side without feeling minor pains, if the attack lands another time, It will slightly crack the neck causing major pains when moving the head.
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-Declined- How would you duck down to evade a vertical strike when it's coming downwards? That whole defensive part of the technique is flawed, as it would depend on the situation, so i can't approve this technique with this mentioned in it.

(Ensui Katatsumuri Kuchiyose: Otomeza) Cone Snail Summoning: Virgo
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: (N/a)
Description: Virgo is considered the most beautiful and one of the strongest cone snails of them all. She is considered the mother of them all thus making her one of the 2 boss summon. She stands roughly stands 7 feet High, and 7 feet long (The shell is included in the size), only wide enough to carry one person on her shell. Her regular body is gray though you can never see her full body as its attached to the shell, you can tell by her eyes as they stick out from the shell along with her mouth. Her Shell is a deep water blue color with white streaks all down her shell with the virgo symbol (

) on the side of her shell. She has a very soothing voice said to be as calm as the ocean, allowing her to speak fluent english. The shell takes the shape of a cone and is very sturdy, giving her immunity to B rank and below elemental techniques and up to A rank Taijutsu (Excluding EIG Techniques) when she withdraws into her shell this being her defense.. Just like every cone snail she has a harpoon for a tongue. Allowing her to launch her harpoon (Tongue) towards an opponent with great speed (Only up to mid range). The poison with this cone snail is one of the weaker ones, as it does not harm to the body physically .Once the harpoon attaches inside the opponent the poison inside the harpoon will release from the tooth (Harpoon) and spread inside the opponents body with extreme haste attacking every organs and nerves besides the ones that allow the opponent to live causing the opponents body to shut down for 1 whole turn causing the opponent not able to even mold chakra or even open their mouth. Depending where the harpoon is shot it can be lethal (Piercing through the head, or heart). Virgo can then withdraw the harpoon bringing the opponent with it, or release the the body from the harpoon and bring it back in (This is considered her way of fighting).Virgo does not have an elemental affinity but does have something unique to the cone snail family. Once pr summoning she is able to cause the blue streaks on her shell to blink on and off. By doing this it releases soothing toxins through the eyes of the opponent that will slowly hypnotize them to sleep. This is not to be confused with a genjutsu, as this does not include chakra inserting the brain but causing the brain to slow down in a relax state.

Note: Stays on for 4 Turns max
Note: Can Only Defend Once A Turn & It counts as one of the users 3 turns
Note: Can only attack once a turn & it counts as one of the users 3 turns
Note: Once The Shell is broke, she is no longer able to fight and gets reverse summoned
Note: Takes 1 Full Turn To Induce The Sleeping ability
Note: Can Only use the sleeping ability Once

 Declined  Poison part is simply way too much.

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(Sakashima Yaiba: Enko Boushi Roze) Reverse Blade Style: Arc Of The Rotating Rose
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is one of the main "Evade >> Strike" technique as this attack is only initiated when the opponent does a frontal, or horizontal attack with their hands or a weapon. When the opponent comes into range with an Horizontal Or Frontal attack The user will quickly duck down to avoid the attack Using the small opening that was created by dodging with their sword in their dominant hand, and rotate around in a full 360 degree angle lifting up at the last moment while channeling earth chakra into the sword thus causing the sword to be coating in earth chakra, while swinging the sword into the back of the opponents neck causing high moderate pains to the opponent sending them flying to the side.

Note: Can be used thrice pr battle
Note: Can only be used against taijutsu and kenjutsu and up to B rank only
Note: Can use once every 2 turns
Note: Due to the attack on the neck, after the attack has landed the opponent neck will be stiff not allowing him to move his head to the side without feeling minor pains, if the attack lands another time, It will slightly crack the neck causing major pains when moving the head.

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 Declined  Description is giving me a headache. I can't understand it at all.

(Sakashima Yaiba:Yofun shisshi berugu) Reverse Blade Style: Rage Of The Jealous Mountain
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is one of the powerful techniques for the reverse blade style. The user will channel large amounts of earth chakra into the sword making it even harder then steel. The user will then swing the reverse blade sword in a vertical manner with remarkable strength towards the ground. Once the sword strike hits the ground it will cause the earth infront of the user to burst outwards in a straight line traveling all the way up to long range that is 5 meters wide enough to damage the opponent when struck. This is caused by the blunt force and strength of the attack striking the ground causing the earth to literally rip apart in a straight line due to the massive strike If this technique was to hit somebody directly without coming in contact with the ground it is strong enough to break the body part that was struck with slight ease.

Note: Can use twice.
Note: Must wait 3 turns before using it again
Note: No Other Reverse Blade Style Techniques In the Same Turn

34:28 - 34:33

 Declined  How is this a Close quarter combat technique? Thats the point of a CFS

Never · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Shadoukirā) - Shadow Killer
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
Similar to "Hiding in Shadow Technique", the user can conceal various weapons within their shadow if they so wish, from kunai to spears - when the weapon is recalled it will rise from the shadow slowly so that the user can use it, or it can be fired from the shadow at a certain angle to attack a target.

A More advanced use of this being able to hide smaller tools within shadows of their body, though the problem is the user has to make sure the shadow isn't destroyed or else the kunai (or whatever is hidden will reveal itself). The user can also seem to catch a thrown kunai or shuriken and making it disappear, though it will actually be hidden within the shadow of their palm - only as long as they slightly close their hand into a fist. To reveal it again the user just needs to open is hand out and the kunai will fire from their hand at the same force it was thrown.

-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin
-Can only be used by Nara Clan Bios.

 Approved  Nice

(Yami no furaito) - Shadowy Flight
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
If the user is passing over the opponent in the air their shadow that is underneath them will be travelling along the floor as they are flying through the air. So when they pass over their opponent, their shadow with their shadow chakra will pass through the target's shadow below, at that moment the target is caught and as the user continues to fly over the target's shadow will stretch as the user passes over until he lands, looking like a normal Shadow Possession with the shadow stretched from the target to the user - taking full control over their movements.

-When the target below is caught from above they cannot move until the user lands where they will take full control.
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

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 Declined  Please rewrite. I couldn't understand this at all.

(Futon : Gurē no kaze) - Wind Release : Grey Wind
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-20 for every arrow)
Damage Cost: 80
Description:
The user makes the Tiger → Snake hand seals and manipulates the wind in his hand to form into a bow and arrow of wind which they can shoot at their opponent, the arrow will spin rapidly and turn into a large torrent of wind the size of a person that will blast their target away. The user can keep the bow as a weapon for the battle but must sacrifice their chakra to make a new arrow of wind to fire at their opponent, though not many other jutsu can be used whilst the bow is active as a lot of chakra is needed to use it.

-Each Arrow shot counts as one of their three moves and is A - Ranked
-No other Ninjutsu except C-Rank Wind can be use whilst this is active
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin
-Can only be used twice per battle

 Declined  Similar to existing techniques. DNR

Frozenstein · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ninjutsu: Katsu Kire Kasui) - Ninja Arts: Ripped Cloth Spikes
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a set of 3 hand seals and send his chakra inside the opponent's clothing. He then first uses his chakra to suddenly tear the opponent's full clothing apart into several little slits, make him/her get completely naked and then change the structures of these slits, make them stronger and finally shape them into several smaller-bigger spikes. These spikes thanks to the user's manipulation are rock hard and are able to pierce the opponent's body easily, especially since he doesn't wear anything. While these spikes are being formed, the user can make them float around the opponent using his remaining chakra and when they are finished, he can attack and stab the opponent with them. However he can just let them fall to the ground and not do anything with them, or even form them only on the ground and attack from that position. The technique also has a strong psychological attack, since who in his right mind would make the opponent get completely naked. Due to this sudden stripping, the opponent may lose focus on the technique he/she is currently using, canceling it thanks to that, or even miss the hand seals he/she is forming and fail to finish the technique.
- can be used on regular clothing, armors or generally on everything the opponent may wear, but not on special items like CWs and such
- stripping the opponent makes him/her lose his/her ammo pouches too or weapons attached to his/her body via straps and such
- stripping the opponent may make him/her become extremely ashamed and cause him/her to fight with much more less enthusiasm
- works extremely good on naturally shy characters
- size of the spike depends on the size of the slit it was made from
- can only be used 4 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

 Declined  DNR

Kung Fro · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Shikotsumyaku: Futago no Churippu Ha|Dead Bone Pulse: Twin Tulip Teeth
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A technique developed by the kaguyas utilizing the ulna bone in each arm. Mimicking the skeletal structure of the clematis vine, the user manipulates the skeletal structure of each forearm bone to extend out of the forearm where the palm and wrist meet. Each 'tendril' that is extended from the arm is identical to the clematis vine, with segmented portions of 2inches in length with a connecting joint and small spikes capable of extension on contact if the user maintains the physical link. However, these tendrils are not as wide as the clematis vine and each one maintains a width of 2inches and has more of a rounded structure for increased flexibility. The tendrils do not occupy the hands and are connected at the wrist and palm. They can be extended up to mid-range and the user is capable of detaching as many segments as he wishes but to re-extend them costs a move. The purpose of this technique is to use the flexible tendrils for lashing, restricting and certain supplementary uses.
Note: Usable 4 times

 Approved 

Futon/Doton: Tabe Kingyo no Downshaft | Wind/Earth Style: Downshaft of the Devouring Goldfish
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: When a group of projectiles are incoming, the user will channel futon above them and cause them to stab into the ground below. Once the projectiles are either laying on the ground or stuck, the user will absorb the projectiles into the earth utilizing his Doton chakra. Once stored in the earth, the user will form a hand seal and cause the projectiles to launch out of the earth at the intended target.
- Can only be used three times per battle

 Declined  Launch out from anywhere? What projectiles? Basic weapons or something more? Its essentially 2 moves, thus it needs to count as two moves.

Shikotsumyaku: Oodama Okani Rasengan Bakuda |Dead Bone Pulse: Big Ball Bone Spiral Sphere Bomb

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will form a Large Rasengan, (Oodama Rasengan) - Big Ball Spiral Sphere, and once the Rasengan is made and maintained, the user will extend bones out of his fingers on the opposite hand and mix them with the rasengan, grinding up the bones and leaving extremely sharp micro-fragments of bones in the rasengan, capable of entering the opponents body and getting in the bloodstream. The user has the option of slamming the rasengan into the opponent or throwing it at them, up to mid-range.
- Can only be used twice per battle.

 Declined  No rasengan variations. Though this is a good idea. DNR

Vex · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Vēx said:
CFS Approved
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Devil's Fist: Wrath of Apollo (Mao Genkotsu: Doki no Apollo)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Arguably, one of the most powerful attacks in the entire style of Devil's Fist, but actually its most basic application. Simply heating the user's body. By the user entering into his standard Devil's Fist stance, a low and wide stance, in which the knees are slightly bent, and the user's hands are resting near his head. While in this stance, the user is focusing his fire chakra into his body and heating it up as much as he can without it becoming dangerous and harming him in the process. The user will then dash towards the opponent, appearing as a blur. The user then delivers a flurry of at the very least 4 blows using any part of the body. Knees, elbows, etc. The more attacks he makes, the less focused and coordinated the attacks are. For example if the user were to hit ten blows, they would be much less focused, and each indivual blow would be much less damaging than if the user were to attack with say four blows. During the course of this jutsu, the user's body would be far too hot to touch with an unguarded body part. Unguarded contact would cause severe burning of the opponents' body.

-Restrictions-

Can only be used once per battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used by someone who has mastered Devil's Fist.
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-Declined- Remove the appearing as a blur part .-.

Football Arts: Gouenji's Legacy (Shuukyuu Geijutsu: Izou no Gouenji )
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user begins dribbling the ball, and suddenly kicks it high into the air and jumps. As he jumps, he surrounds his leg with fire chakra, and at the same time spins creating a flame tornado. Using the momentum, the user kicks the ball as hard as he can, transferring the fire chakra to the ball so that it is on fire and flies forward at the opponent.
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-Approved- LOL reminded me of the Shaolin Soccer movie xD

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Devil's Fist: The Red Storm of Set (Mao Genkotsu: Niiro Arashi no Set)
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will concentrate fire chakra into any part of his body, and when the opponent attacks the user, the limb that they used to attack will be burned. This is because of the user using Devil's Fist in order to heat his skin up to an insane tempreature for the duration of the opponent's attack. If the opponent was to grab the opponent, the effect would be even greater due to prolonged contact with the user's skin. This jutsu may cause severe burns upon the opponent's body located on the point of contact with the user's fire enhanced limbs. However, if the opponent were to attack the user with a wooden weapon, the user would indeed take damage, from the impact. Although, the wooden staff itself would ignite due to the heat of the user's body. This applies for weapons of a highly flammable material as well.

Restrictions:

Can only be used 3x per battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used by those taught in Devil's Fist.
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-Declined- Remove the igniting of the wooden staff and highly flammable materials, pure heat doesn't cause fire, what causes fire is growing heat in addition to friction (high vibration ratio), and given that wood is a poor heat conductor, it wouldn't really do any effect to it, that also applies for flammable material, but metallic weapons is a different issue, but i doubt that you can cause a sword to melt without your body suffering effects >_>

CFS Approved
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Devil's Fist: Wrath of Apollo (Mao Genkotsu: Doki no Apollo)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Arguably, one of the most powerful attacks in the entire style of Devil's Fist, but actually its most basic application. Simply heating the user's body. By the user entering into his standard Devil's Fist stance, a low and wide stance, in which the knees are slightly bent, and the user's hands are resting near his head. While in this stance, the user is focusing his fire chakra into his body and heating it up as much as he can without it becoming dangerous and harming him in the process. The user will then dash towards the opponent. The user then delivers a flurry of at the very least 4 blows using any part of the body. Knees, elbows, etc. The more attacks he makes, the less focused and coordinated the attacks are. For example if the user were to hit ten blows, they would be much less focused, and each indivual blow would be much less damaging than if the user were to attack with say four blows. During the course of this jutsu, the user's body would be far too hot to touch with an unguarded body part. Unguarded contact would cause severe burning of the opponents' body.

-Restrictions-

Can only be used once per battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used by someone who has mastered Devil's Fist.

Declined Your restrictions are lacking and need to be expanded on more. No Fire jutsus of A rank and above next turn, and taijutsu above A for two turns are a good start.

Knuckle Ball-(Fushi Butoukai)
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will either create a ball made up of pure chakra or use a pre-existing soccer ball (CW). The user will simply deliver a powerful kick aiming towards the middle of the ball but the leg will swing in a low arc, quickly recoiling his leg back after making contact with the ball, this also means there is little to no follow through after the kick. This causes the ball to race towards the opponent in a very awkward and confusing motion, with the ball seemingly moving from all directions in a short direction as it makes its way towards the opponent, this makes it very difficult for the opponent to predict where the ball is heading or where the user aimed, but as it goes close to the opponent it will make a sudden curve and head straight towards the opponent (about 2 meters within the opponents range) which will knock the opponent back and inflicting blunt force damage. The user is able to perform the kick in almost any position due to having excelled acrobatic abilities because of the fighting style, the user would just have to make sure they kick the ball correctly. If used with a CW soccer ball, this can be added with wind release to match its unpredictable movement and even slice through the opponent.

Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Must be a practitioner of Football Arts
Note: Must have wind release mastered to perform the skill with the CW

Devil's Fist: The Red Storm of Set (Mao Genkotsu: Niiro Arashi no Set)
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will concentrate fire chakra into any part of his body, and when the opponent attacks the user, the limb that they used to attack will be burned. This is because of the user using Devil's Fist in order to heat his skin up to an insane tempreature for the duration of the opponent's attack. If the opponent was to grab the opponent, the effect would be even greater due to prolonged contact with the user's skin. This jutsu may cause severe burns upon the opponent's body located on the point of contact with the user's fire enhanced limbs. However, if the opponent were to attack the user with a metal weapon, the weapon would not be melted, although the heat from the user's body would transfer onto metal, and then onto the user. This is because metal is a very good conductor of heat, and it would burn the opponent, most likely causing him to drop the weapon.

Restrictions:

Can only be used 3x per battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used by those taught in Devil's Fist.

✦ Both Approved ✦

Noni · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Noni said:
(Ranton: Bachi no Kami)- Storm Release: Punishment of the Gods
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel chakra below the opponent. The user will release the storm chakra under the opponent which will moisten the ground slightly, then clouds with electricity charged around them will rise all around the opponent, lifting them into the air. This jutsu can also be done on a water source as well, by using the water as a medium to rise up while sending lightning chakra to infuse with the water creating the storm cloud that will capture the opponent. The set up of the jutsu remains the same though, and so does the length of the performance (which is at a normal pace). The storm clouds begin to form around the opponent and acts as a orb which cuts away oxygen and the pressure of the water in the orb as well as the lightning portion which will shock and paralyze the opponent while inside the orb will prevent them from moving physically whatsoever while being being inflicted with numbing pain. After the opponent is caught in the orb, with one hand seal, the user will then have hundreds of bright blue lasers appear around the orb and direct them to skew the orb with the opponent inside. The lasers won't act to pierce the opponent but it will release a deadly shock from the lasers which can severely harm the opponent. Even if the opponent is not caught in the storm clouds, the electrical property it has will numb the opponent if touched by the clouds of storm and reduce their speed. If they are caught or touched heavily by the clouds then they will be paralyzed completely. The orb can be as large as the user commands it, the most it can go is 15 meter radius, so more then one opponent can be caught or relatively small summons can also be captured within the orb. This jutsu requires constant control and focus, if the user was to release control the jutsu will break apart and be released.
- Can only be used 3x in battle
- Must have mastery of Storm
- Can not use Storm jutsus above S-Rank next turn
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-Declined- Other than being a bit OP, i don't like leaving the size up to you to think of and a 15 meter radius is too big, it has to have a definite size, also how would the ground below the opponent be moist? what exactly would it affect the cloud's electric abilities or the opponent? also it's impossible to cut off oxygen like that, the lasers part makes it two moves in my eyes, what pressure? Storm release is a water/lightning energy, it's not a solid element, the technique is a mess >_>

(Ranton: Bachi no Kami)- Storm Release: Punishment of the Gods
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel chakra below the opponent. The user will release the storm chakra under the opponent which will moisten the ground slightly the user will also generate the lightning chakra towards the moist ground, this is simply an indication of preparation for the jutsu, then clouds with electricity charged around them will rise all around the opponent, lifting them into the air. This jutsu can also be done on a water source as well, by using the water as a medium to rise up while sending lightning chakra to infuse with the water creating the storm cloud that will capture the opponent. The set up of the jutsu remains the same though, and so does the length of the performance (which is at a normal pace). The storm clouds lightning portion which will shock and paralyze the opponent while inside the orb will prevent them from moving physically whatsoever while being being inflicted with numbing pain. After the opponent is caught in the orb, with one hand seal, the user will then have hundreds of bright blue lasers appear around the orb and direct them to skew the orb with the opponent inside. The lasers won't act to pierce the opponent but it will release a deadly shock from the lasers which can severely harm the opponent. Even if the opponent is not caught in the storm clouds, the electrical property it has will numb the opponent if touched by the clouds of storm and reduce their speed. If they are caught or touched heavily by the clouds then they will be paralyzed completely. The orb can be as large as the user commands it, the most it can go is 5 meter radius, so one opponent can be caught or relatively small summons can also be captured within the orb. This jutsu requires constant control and focus, if the user was to release control the jutsu will break apart and be released. Also because storm release has a water portion, we have seen techniques that are able to create spheres or traps for the opponent while staying still (Water release: Gushing Water Imprisonment).

Note: Can only be used 3x in battle
Note: Must have mastery of Storm
Note: Can not use Storm jutsus above S-Rank next turn

‡ Declined ‡ this is a lightning/water combo to me not an actual storm release technique, also there are more than enough techniques that create clouds around the opponent or allow manipulation of clouds. DNR

(Fuuton: Gizagiza no Uzu)- Wind release: The Jagged Vortex
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will wave their hand in a arc formation and generate outwards upfront of themselves a gust of wind chakra in the color of a palish green. The wind chakra begins to manipulate itself to spiral inward, in a clockwise formation with the gust of wind shaping into a disk-like form with a large hole. As it spirals inwards the disk begins to release many tendrils with sharp tips (up to 8 tendrils) on the edge of the disk, facing up spiraling along with the disk. The user will then take a deep breathe with their mouths towards the disk of wind, sucking the wind disk inward producing a vacuum effect similar to ( Futon: Shinkūdama ) - Wind Release: Vacuum Bullet this will force the opponent off balance and force them dragging towards the disk. As the user is breathing/sucking the disk in and forcing the opponent towards the disk, it will begin to shape in an acute angle because of the same effect, at this state the one time, shaped disk will now be formed into a cone with the tip facing towards the user where he is sucking the disk in and the surface of the disk will face towards the opponent. The tendrils which where on the edge of the disk will now face towards the opponent straight at them as the user is sucking in the disk, the tentacles will act to pierce the opponent straightforward. This is a streaming jutsu in a sense so it will require the opponent to evenly release the chakra to manipulate the disk.

Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can not use Fuuton above S-Rank next turn

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 Declined  This is a suicide move. If your opponent throws a simple explosive tag or a B-Rank or above fire technique at you, you'll be inhaling in your death basically. If you are sure you want this, resubmit it and I'll take another look.

(Katon: Taitan Name) Fire release: Titan's Wave
Type: Defense-Offense-Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will gather their katon chakra and channel it towards the edge of their skins and release from the pores of their skin a very thick coating of extremely hot ash outwards in the direction the user needs. The ash has no real shape and is sent as a cloud almost to say, grayish in color as well. This jutsu is used mainly as a defensive mechanism, if the opponent comes into close range or tries to blind side the user, the ash can be released to not only burn the opponent halting them from the attacks but the ash will remain on the field as it is released away from the users body, the user can set the ash on fire to cause an explosion. Due to the thickness of the ash clouds it can hinder the opponents eyes and the ash is released as a projectile so the user can easily move away or send a second attack making this jutsu formidable in close range battle. The ash at most can travel 15 meters away from its initial release before it completely wears out. This jutsu though can also be considered a double-edge sword. If the ash is set on fire close range of the user they can also be caught in the explosion as well as the fact as when the ash is released and away from the body it becomes a separate construct so if the user so happens to touch the cloud of ash after being released from the body it can also harm the user.

Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can not use fire jutsu above S-Rank next turn

 Declined  Its just an omniburst of fire in this case the sub release ash. It collides with countless stuff. No hand seals. etc etc.

Mudo · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Mudo said:
(Murushierago, Kakomare te i masu Koutsubasa no Shinseidesu) - ☪ Murciélago, Enclosed Highblade of the Hallowed ☪
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Murushierago, Kakomare te i masu Koutsubasa no Shinseidesu is a katana said to have been forged within the Land of Iron by a legendary sword-smith named Gorō Nyūdō Masamune. It is said to have kept the ruling Shogun in power for hundreds of years by making them invincible in battle, however; the beauty of the sword rests not in its appearance, but in the way it was originally forged. A hammered and folded blade, comprised of millions of layers of steel with a carbon content that's off the charts, each layer only atoms thick. It was lost in history for decades and the incomplete blade was discovered within a dig site in Ekō Shima, an island located northeast of Kirigakure no Shima. The High Officials of Kirigakure no Shima then decided to offer the sword to the Land of Iron's presently ruling Shogun in a ceremony until it was stolen from the embassy where it was being housed before the presentation. At the time, Murushierago was being stored without a piece critical to its construction: the tsuba, a disk shaped guard between the blade and the handle which was not found within the Ekō Shima dig site, but was known to have been in the possession of an antiques dealer in Hābāairando, a harbor located westward of Kirigakure no Sato. The tsuba was then presented to the Sogun as a symbol of peace between the Water Country and the Land of Iron. Half a decade later, the curator of a museum recognized the sword that had been presented to the Land of Iron as the mate to the tsuba in the museum's collection and offered to reunite the two pieces at the gifting ceremony that was going to take place. The tsuba was brought to Kirigakure's ANBU building for safe keeping until the ceremony. When implosions struck the building and the ceremony was cancelled, the tsuba was scheduled for return to the museum before the pieces could be reunited. The tsuba was eventually recovered and reunited with the blade at Umi no Shima, an island southwest of Kirigakure no Shima. Rumor has it that the blade is so perfectly forged that its balance and alignment make it possible for light to split in its path and go around the person holding it, rendering them invisible.

Murushierago embodies the typical structure of a katana, with a signature curved, single edged blade. The scabbard is an emerald green with a gold tribal design wrapped around it and its guard is an emerald green as well. The grip has an emerald green braid with gold rayskin and the ornament at the bottom of the the grip depicts the head of Mizuchi, a river dragon and water deity in Japanese mythology.

Abilities:

Helios' Muffled Silence - Murushierago's main ability; The blade's unique design is the result of Masamune's copious studies in relation to the refraction of light. The master sword-smith understood that in order for refraction to occur light would not only have to pass the boundary between two media, but that the boundary must also be created in oblique angles. Along these lines, as Masamune tempered the millions of layers of steel he would intricately fold them at precise angles so that the incoming light-waves would be able to propagate around the wielder of the sword entirely. Furthermore, in order to satisfy the second media required Masamune reasoned that raw chakra could easily be manipulated by the wielder to guide the light, and that, most importantly, the wielder would have the capability to inflect the chakra consistently in order to attain the desired effect. The pinnacle of covert abilities, invisibility is often considered to be the supreme form of camouflage, as it does not reveal to the viewer any kind of vital signs, visual effects, or any frequencies of the electromagnetic spectrum detectable to the eye. Thus, following a similar effect to that of the Hiding with Camouflage Technique, the user's shadow, scent and chakra are suppressed, although the opponent may still distinguish deviations around their environments to perceive the user's location through the sound of footsteps and air current disturbances. The most prominent downside to this skill is the inability to use any elemental techniques whatsoever; Whereas raw chakra simply requires the mixture of both spiritual and physical energy, elemental chakra, which involves the altering of the chakra's properties and characteristics, disrupts the user's inflection competency. Should the user so much as begin channeling any elemental chakra the refraction ceases and the user's visibility is returned once again. It is because of this that the sword is deemed more suitable for samurai and not shinobi, as non-elemental based kenjutsu and taijutsu do not impede the sword's ability to refract the light around the user.

Indestructibility - The sword's strength comes from the folding of millions of layers of steel, masterfully forged with an extremely high carbon content, with each layer only atoms thick. As such, the sword has been deemed indestructible.

Restrictions:
Note: Light Refraction counts towards one of the three move slots, costs forty chakra to activate and ceases at the end of every turn.
Note: Refraction ability may only be used thrice per battle
Note: No elemental chakra can be channeled or formed while refraction occurs.
Note: The light refraction is short range, and can only provide invisibility to the wielder.
Note: May only be wielded by an Ulquiorra biography, and may only be passed down by Mudo and those he allow.
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-Declined- Ok, i get why you are invisible, but why exactly is your chakra and scent suppressed? the refraction of light and usage of raw chakra won't allow that feat.

-Removed the chakra and scent suppression

(Murushierago, Kakomare te i masu Koutsubasa no Shinseidesu) - ☪ Murciélago, Enclosed Highblade of the Hallowed ☪
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Murushierago, Kakomare te i masu Koutsubasa no Shinseidesu is a katana said to have been forged within the Land of Iron by a legendary sword-smith named Gorō Nyūdō Masamune. It is said to have kept the ruling Shogun in power for hundreds of years by making them invincible in battle, however; the beauty of the sword rests not in its appearance, but in the way it was originally forged. A hammered and folded blade, comprised of millions of layers of steel with a carbon content that's off the charts, each layer only atoms thick. It was lost in history for decades and the incomplete blade was discovered within a dig site in Ekō Shima, an island located northeast of Kirigakure no Shima. The High Officials of Kirigakure no Shima then decided to offer the sword to the Land of Iron's presently ruling Shogun in a ceremony until it was stolen from the embassy where it was being housed before the presentation. At the time, Murushierago was being stored without a piece critical to its construction: the tsuba, a disk shaped guard between the blade and the handle which was not found within the Ekō Shima dig site, but was known to have been in the possession of an antiques dealer in Hābāairando, a harbor located westward of Kirigakure no Sato. The tsuba was then presented to the Sogun as a symbol of peace between the Water Country and the Land of Iron. Half a decade later, the curator of a museum recognized the sword that had been presented to the Land of Iron as the mate to the tsuba in the museum's collection and offered to reunite the two pieces at the gifting ceremony that was going to take place. The tsuba was brought to Kirigakure's ANBU building for safe keeping until the ceremony. When implosions struck the building and the ceremony was cancelled, the tsuba was scheduled for return to the museum before the pieces could be reunited. The tsuba was eventually recovered and reunited with the blade at Umi no Shima, an island southwest of Kirigakure no Shima. Rumor has it that the blade is so perfectly forged that its balance and alignment make it possible for light to split in its path and go around the person holding it, rendering them invisible.

Murushierago embodies the typical structure of a katana, with a signature curved, single edged blade. The scabbard is an emerald green with a gold tribal design wrapped around it and its guard is an emerald green as well. The grip has an emerald green braid with gold rayskin and the ornament at the bottom of the the grip depicts the head of Mizuchi, a river dragon and water deity in Japanese mythology.

Abilities:

Helios' Muffled Silence - Murushierago's main ability; The blade's unique design is the result of Masamune's copious studies in relation to the refraction of light. The master sword-smith understood that in order for refraction to occur light would not only have to pass the boundary between two media, but that the boundary must also be created in oblique angles. Along these lines, as Masamune tempered the millions of layers of steel he would intricately fold them at precise angles so that the incoming light-waves would be able to propagate around the wielder of the sword entirely. Furthermore, in order to satisfy the second media required Masamune reasoned that raw chakra could easily be manipulated by the wielder to guide the light, and that, most importantly, the wielder would have the capability to inflect the chakra consistently in order to attain the desired effect. The pinnacle of covert abilities, invisibility is often considered to be the supreme form of camouflage, as it does not reveal to the viewer any kind of vital signs, visual effects, or any frequencies of the electromagnetic spectrum detectable to the eye. Thus, following a similar effect to that of the Hiding with Camouflage Technique, the user's shadow and body are suppressed, although the opponent may still distinguish deviations around their environments to perceive the user's location through the sound of footsteps and air current disturbances. The most prominent downside to this skill is the inability to use any elemental techniques whatsoever; Whereas raw chakra simply requires the mixture of both spiritual and physical energy, elemental chakra, which involves the altering of the chakra's properties and characteristics, disrupts the user's inflection competency. Should the user so much as begin channeling any elemental chakra the refraction ceases and the user's visibility is returned once again. It is because of this that the sword is deemed more suitable for samurai and not shinobi, as non-elemental based kenjutsu and taijutsu do not impede the sword's ability to refract the light around the user.
Indestructibility - The sword's strength comes from the folding of millions of layers of steel, masterfully forged with an extremely high carbon content, with each layer only atoms thick. As such, the sword has been deemed indestructible.

Restrictions:
Note: Light Refraction counts towards one of the three move slots, costs forty chakra to activate and ceases at the end of every turn.
Note: Refraction ability may only be used thrice per battle
Note: No elemental chakra can be channeled or formed while refraction occurs.
Note: The light refraction is short range, and can only provide invisibility to the wielder.
Note: May only be wielded by an Ulquiorra biography, and may only be passed down by Mudo and those he allow.

 Declined  I get how the blade may be invisible but you forgot to explain how that will "spread" to the user. I also think this comes with a few problems: it can only be countered if the enemy has a doujutsu or sensing ability in 95% of the situations. We normally don't approve stuff that requires a specific ability to be countered and this would be the case. I have dubious feelings about this. You can essentially kill most enemies without them knowing or doing much. Hum... Remove the ability to use any and every technique while sustaining the effect and I'll consider it.

NightKiing · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(katon:torunêdo ken)fire realease: tornado fist
Type: supplementary
Rank: b rank
Range: short
chakra cost:20
damage: N/A(40 if sent towards target)
description: the user builds up their katon chakra and then throws their fist at the ground or the target,when the fist is directed at the ground the user realease a tornado of fire which propels him upwards fast enough to dodge an attack, when the fist is directed towards the target the user realease a tornado of fire that goes towards the target burning them to ash and the force pushes the user 2meters in the opposite direction
Note: can only be used 2 times
Note: can only be thought by me
Note: must have completed fire training to learn

 Declined  DNR. Similar to existing stuff.

Name: (hi no ringu:fiery ring)
Type: weapon
Rank: s rank
Range: self(objects created goes up to mid range)
Chakra: 40(to activate) 40(for each object created)
Damage: 80(when objects created comes in contact with target)( 5 to all fire jutsu performed when ring has been activated)
Description: The fiery ring is a ring which was created by sokka after he studied rings, the ring(which is worn on the middle finger) is activated by sending katon chakra into it,when chakra has been sent into it, it allows the user to realease the chakra and shape and nature manipulate it to katon to form almost anything the user can imagine (except guns and cars) the object created can be linked with the ring to change its direction and it might just be created and then sent towards the target, the user can also form shields to protect himself from incoming attacks, the ring can also help user to break A rank genjutsu and below by simply passing back the chakra sent into it(that is if the rounds for the ring has not ended) back to the user when it stops receiving orders from the user.
Note: can only be used by shino500 and those he allows to
Note: can only be used 2x per battle
Note: it lasts 4 rounds after activation
Note: breaking genjutsu counts as users move and also deactivates the ring(that is if the genjutsu is A rank but if it is below it doesnt deactivate the ring)
Note: every object created is equal to srank fire and counts as users move
Note: to use this ring one must be sclass and must have completed fire training
Note: it adds 5 damage to all fire jutsu after it has been activated
Note: while ring is active user can only perform water jutsus up to b rank and all other thing up to the rank user has trained to

 Declined  This is a copy of an existing CW just made for Fire instead of its original element. I know because I made that CW for someone ages ago. DNR

(raiton: raiton tori)lightning realease: lightning birds
Type: attack
Rank: b rank
Range: short to mid
chakra :20
damage:40
description: the user builds up their raiton chakra into their dominant hand and then waves it infront of them realeasing a slash of lightning towards the target as the slash moves towards the target the user makes the tiger hand seal and shape manipulates the slash into two birds(same size with with a normal falcon) which moves straight towards the target as the birds hits the target the bird paralyzes the target and shocks them and burns them a little
note: can only be used twice
note: can only be thaught by me
note: no a rank lightning and above in the same turn
note: requires two turn cooldown before re use
note: stunning effect lasts for two turns
note: it doesnt kill the target it only burns them a little

 Declined  DNR. Similar to existing techniques.

Smirk · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Za Kindachi Kyuui) The Kings Peace
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Thousands of years ago, there was a lone some village in the Land of Eki, where all the villagers to a vow of peace. Never to fight even if their own life is endangered, the only exception was the protection of family and loved ones. Kids were taught this from an early age, meditation was also practiced at minimum 4 times a day to keep everyone at one with themselves. Within this village were great craftsmen throughout out all the land, that made tools with the heart for defending. Other bigger Villages and tribes with well over a thousand people wanted these craftsmen and their creations to in attempt to become rulers of the entire land of Eki. The village hidden in Ketsueki, the biggest in all the land and by far the most powerful, came to the lone village destroying everyones homes and killing the people of the village in search for the craftsmen and what they seen as "weapons". One of the Five craftsmen gave his son a pair of Gold earrings with what appears to have aqua colored diamonds[from chakra being stored within them] after the son put the earring on they became one with him. The intruders eventually found the last craftsman and his family hiding within a tunnel built under their home, each being pulled and executed, the son being the last one pulled from the tunnel, when they tried to kill him a barrier of chakra appeared reflecting theyre jutsu. This son with the only tools ever found, made by the legendary craftsmen , after 20 years went on to become King of all the land of Eki, finally bringing Peace. The earrings became known as "The Kings Peace", and their abilities are known to Block and/or Reflect nearly anything threatening the holder.

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Note: The earrings can activate without the holders awareness but will always cost a move and drain proportional chakra to the technique defended from, preventing the user from molding his chakra at the same time for another technique.
Note: Only works with offensive Ninjutsu techniques (elemental or not) travelling towards the user.
Note: Blocking [right earring] is the ability through which the earings bring forth a shield of chakra, shy of 50cm from the user, in the path of an incoming technique, just enough to block it from damaging the wearer and Reflection[left earring] is the ability to bring forth a dampening shield of chakra, in the path of an incoming technique, which diverts the attack's path and sends it back towards its origin, albeit weaker by half (B-Rank becomes C-Rank for example).
Note: Each ability can only be used once every 3 turns and can only defend against up to B-Rank. By sacrificing the ability to reuse one of the applications, the user is able to forcefully will the earings to defend from a technique up to S-Rank. However, in this case, that application becomes unusable for the rest of the match and they need conscious control from the user to perform said defense.
Note: Have to be taught how to use the earrings abilities by Smirk

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Ndlovu · Mar 6, 2014

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Ndlovu said:
Doton/Raiton - Seidenki no Kyōka | Earth/ Lightning Release – Electrostatic Reinforcement
Type:Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (+5 to mould earth techniques.)
Damage: N/A (+5 Earth Techniques)
Description: Similar to the electrical charge given to the earth pillars in (Doton/Raiton: Denki Iwabashira) - Earth/Lightning Release: Electric Rock Pillar. The user will add raiton to the earth granules in the doton techniques he uses, making them electrically charged so that they can emit lightning bolts up to short range from the technique. The bolts will not do actual damage but shock/stun the user for a few moments upon contact. The charged earth will be more destructive and sharper in most cases than regular earth techniques.

Note: This technique lasts for three turns
Note: After this technique ends the user cannot use doton for the next turn.
Note: This can only be taught by Ndlovu

Declined
Not specific enough, and earth can not conduct electricity for long periods of time, making it illogical to "cover" all of your Earth jutsus. Be more specific on the types of Earth jutsus it can affect and the duration of the Lightning.

Doton/Raiton - Seidenki no Kyōka | Earth/ Lightning Release – Electrostatic Reinforcement
Type:Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (+5 to mould earth techniques.)
Damage: N/A (+5 Earth Techniques)
Description: Similar to the electrical charge given to the earth pillars in (Doton/Raiton: Denki Iwabashira) - Earth/Lightning Release: Electric Rock Pillar. The user will add raiton to the earth granules in the doton techniques he uses, making them electrically charged so that they can emit lightning bolts up to short range from the technique. The bolts will not do actual damage but shock/stun the opponent for a few moments upon contact. The charged earth will be more destructive and sharper in most cases than regular earth techniques. The effect of the lightning varies depending on the type of technique performed. Due to earths low conductivity certain techniques do not react the same when charged, these can be split into three categories.

Density: This refers to soild earth techniques that are more solid and compounded, slabs, boulders and moulded rock. When charged it will make the solid earth sharper while emitting bolts short range from the technique, in various angle. The charge on techniques like this can stay for up to three turns. An example of a technique that works with this is: ( Doton: Shōnyūseki ) - Earth Release: Stalactite

Viscosity: This refers to how the electrical charge works with all forms of mud and adhesive techniques. When charged these techniques will solidify slightly losing a small amount of it's viscosity but give off bursts of visable omnidirectional static charges to short range. Due to the nature of the technique it only lasts for a turn and reverts to it's natural non-charged state. This technique can only stay charge for a turn. An example of a technique that works with this is: (Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique.

Granules: This refers to how the electrical charge works with all techniques that involve users chakra with earthen sand, granules and particles. The total technique will be electrically charged making the particles very sharp on contact, but because of their size the lightning cannot emit current. Instead it simply remains electrically charged therefore shifting the destructive effect it has on objects. This does not apply to earth molecules that are separated, a collective group of earth is what allows it to stay charged and is destructive on regular earth. This charge can only last up to one turn on a technique. An example of a technique that works with this is: (Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique

Self armouring techniques that use doton on or through the skin and submerging techniques like: (Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor and (Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique do not work with this technique.

Note: This technique lasts for three turns
Note: This technique can only be used twice
Note: After this technique ends the user cannot use doton for the next turn.
Note: This can only be taught by Ndlovu

 Declined  You'd need Y/Y mastery for this. DNR

Doton/Katon - Tekutonikku Kanbotsu Ana | Earth/ Fire Release - Tectonic Sinkhole
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: A highly destructive technique utilising the users mastery of katon and doton. The user will form three handseals then either stomp or slam his hand on the ground inserting his chakra into the earth. This will cause a deep disturbance in the earth by it's tectonic plate creating large amounts of natural magma to be forced onto the field. Large amounts of pressure and shifting will create a deep sinkhole in the center of the battlefield pulling the earth around it. Waves of molten rock breaks through the earth at a distance of at least mid range from the sinkhole and funnels back to the center of the sinkhole. The sinkhole has a circumference of short range distance similar to the antlion technique, but leads downwards with a large amount of pulling force to the magma like depths of the earth. The user will flush katon into the rising waves of earth while the hole is forming making it unbearably hot. The heat that is put into the earth creates a humid haze that could hinder perception and movements if the opponent is too close. This attack works in a cycle fashion. The waves will rise around and be pulled towards the sinkhole refilling it until reaches a state of stability, neutralising itself. By performing an additional handseal in a moment with chakra manipulation the user can reduce the size of the wave by making it spread out, which will increase it's velocity. This jutsu like most can harm the opponent if he gets caught in it. This jutsu does tire the user due to using such a large amount of chakra in a short amount of time.

The earth waves will look like this when enhanced with katon:

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Note: This jutsu can only be used once
Note: This jutsu lasts for two turns until stabilizing
Note: The user cannot perform Earth or fire techniques above A-Rank next turn
Note: This counts as two techniques
Note: The user takes - 15 damage due to fatigue and strain of large chakra manipulation
Note: This technique can only be taught by Ndlovu

Mastered Doton here:

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 Declined  You'd need Lava KG for this. DNR

Genjutsu - Musubi Kadou | Illusionary Art - Ending Vortex
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: A - Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will form two handseals placing their opponent under a genjutsu that deceives his five senses. Once placeed under the illusion the opponent will witness the user either release, summon or create a ball of light or darkness. This ball will move according to the users choice. Then in a point in time during the illusion, the ball will rapidly begin to make all forms of matter gravitate towards it including the opponent. This will appear to effect everything including the user, summons and techniques that happen destroying them.(Water will rise, fire will have a chemical shift which will turn it to gas because the lighter molecules will appear to rise splitting it, earth will rise, etc.) This experience and sensation creates a traumatic experience and the sensations that go with it cause a large amount of mental distress to the opponent. This can also be seen sometimes by a petrified expression on the opponents face as his body becomes overwhelmed with the sensations creating an opening for the user to strike.

Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Ndlovu
Note: This genjutsu last for three turns unless it reaches full effect.
Note: This can only be used twice
Note: No genjutsu above A-rank the following turn

 Declined  Why would this do damage? The ball appears and starts sucking up stuff. So what? Also, you're making what is in essence something that your opponent will not be able to figure out is an illusion in 90% of the cases. And you didn't explain what happens to the target in reality. The last sentence of the description is also well beyond the scope of Genjutsu as you cannot control what happens.

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