(Meiton: Shageki Dangan) Dark Release: Firing Bullets Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: Short - Mid Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user first requires to absorb a jutsu using the Inhaling Maw. With the chakra, the user sends it out from his lower mark onto his index finger making his finger filled with dark chakra. Before releasing it, the user shape manipulates it to form bullets and then fires it towards the opponent. The bullets if they manage to hit the opponent will cause burns and if within short range of the user the opponent may be unlucky enough to receive internal damage from the bullets. Note: Must use Inhaling Maw before using this Note: Can also fire the bullets directly from the palm rather than directing it to the index finger Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke56 ____________
-Declined- Bullet based techniques are made with countless elemental natures, shaping them like bullets and firing them, this is no exception.
Fuannai Nentou Manako| Illusionary Arts - Ignorance Of The Mind's Eye Type: offensive Rank: S Range: Short - mid Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description: This is one of the most advanced genjutsu ever created due it's simple yet effective subtlety, the user will start off by performing three handseals while making direct eye contact with the opponent, forcibly ejecting chakra into the opponents brain and putting him under the illusion. This illusion takes advantage over the opponents Scotoma, the Scotomais an area of partial alteration in the field of vision consisting of a partially diminished or entirely degenerated visual acuity that is surrounded by a field of normal – or relatively well-preserved – vision. Every normal mammalian eye has a scotoma in its field of vision, usually termed its blind spot. This is a location with no photoreceptor cells, where the retinal ganglion cell axons that comprise the optic nerve exit the retina. So truly, directly in the middle of every mammals eye is a dark spot, the brain uses its surroundings to accurately guess whats in that blind spot so everything looks filled in. This genjutsu takes advantage of the brain when its guessing whats in that blind spot causing it to not really see what is there giving it a false image tricking the brain entirely, allowing narrow attacks to make its way towards the enemy undetected. For example, once this genjutsu is placed and I throw a kunai or use a narow jutsu from directly in front of the opponent, in the scotoma area the brain won't pick up that the kunai or technique is there due to it being tricked and only seeing its environment. Another example, if a kunai is thrown from the left side of the opponent as it passes through its area of vision once the kunai makes it to the middle of the eye whee the scotoma is, it will almost 'vanish' from view until it again reaches the other side. Check spoilers for pictures so it makes more sense.
Note: This gen last 3 turns
Note: Can only be used once per turn
Note: Only Mugen Ryukyu can teach this jutsu
Note: No Gen can be used again for 2 turns.
What we normally perceive through our vision
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What is actually there due to the scotoma.
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Declined You may create an illusion of a blob in the opponents visual field, but that is neither "taking control of their Scotoma" nor is it by any means an S-Rank illusion. At best its a C-Rank. Rest is jibber jabber and actually explains this badly, like the "forcefully injecting chakra into the opponents brain" part.
Engi & Teigen | Amplification & Reduction Type: Offensive Rank: D-S Range: Short - Long Chakra: 10-40 Damage: 20-80 Description: One of the most basic and simple of sound techniques is Amplification. This allows the user to amplify or reduce anything that is a sound wave by the use a single gesture(the snapping of one fingers) and focusing of ones ototon chakra to amplify or reduce the sound. This can be used on virtually anything that is producing soundwaves or of course soundwaves themselves: from ones voice, two objects banging together, clapping. Amplifying them to large, deafening screech or to a silent whisper, but of course there is a limit, this can only be used on soundwaves that one can hear, anything above 20Hz.
Note: S-rank variant can only be used twice
Note: Can only be used 5 times in total
Note: Can only be taught by Mugen Ryukyu _______________
-Leaving for Scorps-
Declined Collides with existing techniques. Oped and Unreasonable. DNR
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gemi & Mini) Summoning Jutsu: Gemi & Mini Type: Summoning Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: N/a Description: The user will start by biting their blood and do a sequence of 2 handseals and clap their hand holding them together for 4 seconds. Once the 4 seconds has pass the user will put their hands apart causing a cloud of smoke to appear on both sides of the user with an Aye-Aye summon in each cloud of smoke. This is a special summoning to the clan as these are fraternal twins and are masters of co-op and the strongest Aye-Aye of all Aye-Aye physically when put together. . Gemi is the male Aye-Aye. His fur is all black with a Red circle on his chest with red eyes. Mini is the female Aye-Aye and the older of the two. Her fur is white with a blue circle on her chest and blue eyes. These two possess no special jutsus but are very strong and violent thus giving them the Taijutsu masters of all the Aye-Ayes. Each one stands roughly 6`4 feet and can talk Fluent English. The strength of each Aye-Aye are A rank Each and when attacking together, S Rank. They only use free form but one punch from the aye-aye is strong enough to cause 5 meter crater into the ground but together they can cause a crater the size of 10meter radius. This happens only if they are literally touching each other a little linking their chakra together. Due to their strong durability, body, flexibility, agility and speed each of them are immune to B rank jutsus. Can Evade jutsus a certain amount of times and together they can create an S rank force. These two do not separate meaning, If one gets called back, the other does as well. If one is defeated the other one will poof away.
Note: Must have signed the Aye-Aye Contract
Note: Can only use free-form taijutsu
Note: Each time they avoid a jutsu, or get out of it, it counts towards one of the user 3 turns
Note: Immune to B rank jutsus, can endure the attack of 1 A rank jutsu, causing small damage (Not enough to kill) and can tank one S rank jutsu together only if their body is touching
Note: Stays on the field for a max of 4 turns
resubmiting (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gemi & Mini) Summoning Jutsu: Gemi & Mini Type: Summoning Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: N/a Description: The user will start by biting their blood and do a sequence of 2 handseals and clap their hand holding them together for 4 seconds. Once the 4 seconds has pass the user will put their hands apart causing a cloud of smoke to appear on both sides of the user with an Aye-Aye summon in each cloud of smoke. This is a special summoning to the clan as these are fraternal twins and are masters of co-op and the strongest Aye-Aye of all Aye-Aye physically when put together. . Gemi is the male Aye-Aye. His fur is all black with a Red circle on his chest with red eyes. Mini is the female Aye-Aye and the older of the two. Her fur is white with a blue circle on her chest and blue eyes. These two possess no special jutsus but are very strong and violent thus giving them the Taijutsu masters of all the Aye-Ayes. Each one stands roughly 6`4 feet and can talk Fluent English. The strength of each Aye-Aye are A rank Each and when attacking together, S Rank. They only use free form but one punch from the aye-aye is strong enough to cause 5 meter crater into the ground but together they can cause a crater the size of 10meter radius. This happens only if they are literally touching each other a little linking their chakra together. Due to their strong durability, body, flexibility, agility and speed each of them are immune to B rank jutsus. Can Evade jutsus a certain amount of times and together they can create an S rank force. These two do not separate meaning, If one gets called back, the other does as well. If one is defeated the other one will poof away.
Note: Must have signed the Aye-Aye Contract
Note: Can only use free-form taijutsu
Note: Each time they avoid a jutsu, or get out of it, it counts towards one of the user 3 turns
Note: Immune to B rank jutsus, can endure the attack of 1 A rank jutsu, causing small damage (Not enough to kill) and can tank one S rank jutsu together only if their body is touching
Note: Stays on the field for a max of 4 turns ____________
-Pending- I don't get it, was this submitted before? because i searched for it and didn't get a result, contact me about this.
1. ( Ototon: Keisei Burukei ) Sound Release: The Siren's Bullwhip
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (+20 if used against or within a water jutsu)
Description: The user channels large amounts of Ototon chakra in their hands. The user then moves his hand as if he holding a whip and swings it at the target with great speed. There are at least three "modes of motion" that can produce the necessary speed in a whip to cause it to crack. The three are: a half wave, a full wave and a loop. These names are indicative of the shape of the bends in the whip as it is thrown. In all three, the initial motion is applied to the handle, and the resultant shape moves down the whip's body to the tip. The high speed of the tip is explained by the law of the conservation of momentum. Since momentum is a vector, it has a direction, and does not pass through any bend that reverses the direction of movement in the body of the whip − such as the one that occurs when a half wave shape moves down a whip. When the whip is thrown, the initial motion of the handle adds some amount of kinetic energy to the body of the whip. If the whip is going to crack, the handle movement must also produce one of the modes of motion that create a reversal of direction in the whip's movement. As the reversal of direction moves down the whip, the momentum and the kinetic energy in the whip, are concentrated in the segment of the whip between the tip and the moving bend. As the bend approaches the tip, the mass of the moving part approaches zero while the energy remains relatively constant. Since the momentum is the product of the mass and speed of the moving object, the smaller the mass, the higher the speed. Hence the end of the whip moves extremely fast, easily reaching the speed of sound. As this breakage of the sound barrier occurs, the point of impact suffers a great localized explosion, effectively destroying everything within short range of it. If aimed at a sentient being, due to the mixture of both liquids and solid composition, the whip crack causes the point of impact to suffer from shattered bones and muscle paralysis, causing them to be unable to move while simultaneous blasting them backwards to long range at great speeds. However, the jutsu takes a great toll on the user. useable only twice, each time it is used, the used is unable to mold Ototon chakra above B rank for 3 turns as well as having muscle and joint pain in his wrist and hand from maintaining a hold on the chakra whip as the sound cracks and "explodes, covering a short range radius. If used against a liquid, the explosion is magnified due to soundwaves traveling faster through liquids, allowing the explosion to span a mid range radius from the point of tip of the whip in the direction of motion, either outwards (half wave), directional (loop) or mid range omnidirectional (full wave), increasing the power of the explosion with an additional +20 damage, much like Echo Assault Skill.
*Can only be used once*
*After using, unable to use Ototon jutsu of A rank and higher for three turns*
*Can only be taught by Madara Uchiha*
*Unable to use taijutsu of A rank and higher next 2 turns after using and handseal speed is halved*
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2. Sealing Technique: Hermes' Reply| Fuuinjutsu: Hermes' Touben
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short (When seal is applied on the object)
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user applies a sealing formula to a case of sorts (the 'case' doesn't necessarily have to be a case. It can be a letter, door, scroll, jar, box, suitcase, etc. Anything that can be opened can have the seal applied to it. After applying the seal, it seems to disappear on the object but is still there, just no longer visible. Seemingly doing nothing, the seal allows the user to know if the object has been opened. Once the object is opened, the seal is broken and the user is mentally alerted. Using the principles of chakra taught by the second Hokage, when the seal is broken, the tiny fraction that dissipates and alerts the user, also creates a fleeing chakra signal. This can be used to attach a paper bomb to the "case" which is automatically detonated once the seal is broken ( Quantifiable as 10 damage from the explosion of a paper bomb ). This usage is supplementary, and works with 1 paper bomb placed at the same time as the seal, it serves no purpose deactivating genjutsu or enemy seals.
Approved *
3. Wind/Sealing Technique: Ouranos' Gift| Fuuton/Fuuinjutsu: Ouranos' Houtei
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user applies a sealing formula onto a paperbomb, infusing a small amount of wind chakra in it. While harmless on it's own, once the tag detonates, the burst of wind will feed the explosion, making a single tag as destructive as three, the norm being 10 damage. The seal is applied in short range, and seems to disappear afterwards. The secondary use of this seal is that, while activated, the user can, with a single handseal, release the seal, which will detonate the wind-powered tag, just like a normal tag, but, with the presence of the seal, the user is able to access it at any range, making it a perfect remote controlled bomb.
Katon: Jizenka Haishin (Fire Release: Philanthropist's Betrayal) Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: After performing five hand seals an excess amount of sperm-like shapes are released from the body of the user. The released objects would hover and linger in the air in the shape of a red fire cloud. At first impressions it would appear as if the released objects are useless and only serve aesthetic purposes. In fact, if the opponent does not react in any manner then the technique is indeed useless. However, when foreign chakra is detected on the field the objects would charge at it and attack it, and based on elemental strengths and weaknesses the technique would get weaker and eventually end. Despite it's manner of working, the technique does not attack all foreign chakra. It has a threshold, the threshold is B rank techniques. Anything below that won't get attacked, anything equal to or above B rank would get attacked. The objects created do not attack existing foreign chakra regardless of their rank. Furthermore, the created objects do not react to foreign chakra that is cast on the user(Genjutsu). The technique's usage does not stop at it's defensive abilities. In fact, it's true purpose was to be used as an attack. The user can achieve this through performing an additional hand seal and controlling the released fire. The plethora of sperm-like shapes prove to be very effective in battle, as they can split into multiple bundles and attack from various angles. The small sperm-like shapes can be combined into larger forms, in that case minor shape manipulation is used.
-Usable twice.
-If the techniques needs to be maintained over turns then a 15 chakra cost is applied.
-Lasts for 3 turns if unused. ___________
-Declined- DNR.
A descriptive word that means sperm-like seems to elude me, I am not trolling with this >_>. Al
Twin Kings Serpent Tail ( Sōō Zabimaru ) Type: Weapon Rank: A Range: Short - Mid Chakra: N/A (+ 15 chakra blade ability) (+30 Zaga Teppo (Condensed chakra gun attack) ) Damage: 50 (+ 10 per ability) Description: A gauntlet with a steel and chakra metal 3 1/2 foot blade with the handle resembling the top portion of a snake’s skull, with a cowl of red fur surrounding its base. A long, bony tail composed of vertebra-like structures protrudes from the back of the skull, this tail/ vertebra-like structure is exactly 8 feet long from beginning to end, and trails behind the user. The blade is retractable at the user's whim. Besides the normal chakra blade "mode"/ability the blade has one other. The second and final ability is that after the user focuses any chakra into the blade the weapon will focus that in the jaw like part of the weapon, the blade has to be retracted for this to work, creating a dense ball of chakra ,similar to the bijuu bomb, after this focusing is done the user will simply thrust their fist with the weapon attached in any direction and the ball of focused chakra will be released at speeds barely trackeable by the human eye on contact or signal the ball of focus energy will explode in a violent burst causing slight burns but mainly blunt force damage due to the weight and speed of the attack.
Notes/Restrictions
-Can only be used by/with permission of Sonnelion
-Zaga Teppo can only be used three times per duel with 1 turn breaks
-Chakra blade mode last 3 turns and require 1 turn breaks
-Chakra blade mode can be used infinitely
-In chakra blade mode it can cut attacks in half within reason ,but this counts as one of the three jutsu
-Retracting the blade uses no chakra whatsoever
-The tail acts as a whip at best but can be controlled with chakra to pull objects towards the user
-The arm is just that an arm that can deliver chakra enhanced blows to the opponent at anytime
-The arms blows are the equivalent of a D-ranked technique (10 chakra, 20 damage)
(Doton/Suiton: Kyoushikatei) - Earth/Water Style: Colossal Tides of Doom
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will firstly wave three handseals in order to release a large amount of chakra into the ground, and distribute it up to long distances (mid range). Then the ground will rupture and crack open, with the ground over-tearing from the user's location. rising up in sections similiar to 'Devouring Earth' however, it covers an omnidirectional area; which works as the epicenter of the technique. However, a large and rather thick pilllar will simultaneously lift the user into the air - free of harm from the upcoming invasion. After the pillar rises from the center of the technique, and the ground around the pillar overturns outwards in massive sections, which will shaken the ground vastly, throwing anything and anyone off balance. The user will then perform two more handseals. This will trigger the water part in the technique, in which boiling water will erupt from the ground, extracted from deep within the erath with use of chakra, mainly from the middle sections of the ground that has been risen, otherwise known as the pits in between earth sections. The boiling water will rise from these 'pits' and engulf the field in large tides which cover an expansive range (long range). When the technique is used again, the user can jump the earth process, as the terrain has been changed already, and simply have the boiling water rise, although they still run the risk of getting caught by it, if they aren't wary. If done like the latter version, it will only count as 1 technique.
- Usable x3 per battle.
- Cannot use S rank water/earth techniques the next 2 turns.
- Counts as 2 techniques. ____________
-Declined- Other than being Oped, boiling water is a feat of Volcanic Water CE.
(Doton: Kindachi Maisou) Earth Release: Pharaohs Burial Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense Rank: B Range: Mid-Long Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The User focuses Earth chakra into the ground then after performing a single handseal causing the ground to instantly start collapsing in on itself taking what ever stands above it down into the ground possibly penetrating the person or object with hundreds of the spikes coming out of the walls of the ground. The hole from above appears Square shaped, as you look into the hole the walls get closer together until they meet at its point, similar to a Pyramid. 304 Meters deep, the top of the hole begins at 30 Meters wide and becomes less wide the deeper you go.
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle
Note: Cant use any Earth Jutsu following turn
Note: Can only be Taught by -Supreme- ____________
-Declined- Similar techniques exist.
(Gouzen Sunappu) Roaring Snap Type: Attack/Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user focuses a large amount of elemental chakra into their middle finger and thumb while releasing some into the air then upon snapping their fingers, the following might happen depending on the elemental chakra used:
Lightning chakra: Upon snapping their fingers, a loud thunderous roar immediately emits known to cause slight disorientation and hearing loss as Lightning rapidly strikes down on the opponent. (Note: Disorientation/hearing loss only last that turn)
Wind chakra: Upon snapping their fingers, a huge blast of wind is emitted blowing the opponent away from the user as gusts of wind are constantly released decreasing the opponent displacement speed by 50%. (Note: Speed decrease only last that turn)
Fire chakra: Upon snapping their fingers, a tall pillar of fire is emitted as it then explodes creating a fire rain that covers an area of a radius of 5 meters that the user chooses.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Cant use any jutsu B-rank and above of that element for 2 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Uzumaki Naruta ___________
-Declined- DNR, just.....Yeah >_>
Senpō Mokuton: Meshi no Gaia | Wood Sage Arts: Gaia's Call
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank (Forbidden Rank)
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 (50)
Damage: N/A (-50 damage)
Description:
Upon having gained the ability to use Senjutsu, Hashirama started to consider ways to counter its limitations and downsides, namely the time needed to gather Natural Energy and the limited duration of Sage Mode once activated. The key to both was to find a way to more easily gather natural energy but also to gather it after entering Sage Mode so as to sustain it for increased lengths. The solution was Nature itself and his own unique ability, Wood Release. By using Wood as a catalyst, the user will absorb Natural energy from the environment itself directly into himself in an almost instant manner. This is done in two ways: if the user is in a dense woodland area, he can simply touch the ground, using his chakra to connect to the wood all around, and absorb Natural Energy from the environment directly or, if in an area scarce of Wood, he can touch a piece of Wood connected to the ground, namely a pillar or a tree preferably (though there are many other ways), using it as a catalyst to absorb Natural Energy from the environment all around. The effect in either cases is the same: if the user is not in Sage Mode, he will have immediately gathered enough Natural Energy to enter Sage Mode and enter it instantaneously (without time cost); if the user is already in Sage Mode, each use of the technique gathers enough Natural Energy to replenish the duration of Sage Mode by 3 additional turns. In desperation, the user can slam both hands on the ground or grip a wood connected to the ground with both hands and infuse himself with a more drastic and gigantic amount of Natural Energy to the point of withering and reducing to dust any Wood nearby or used as a catalyst. The effect is a drastic boost to Sage Mode in power. The user will effectively double its effects though reducing its duration by half and preventing the use of this ability again. In this empowered mode, due to the instability of the immense senjutsu chakra formed, the user will not be able to sustain summons or clones and once the mode ends, he'll be unable to use Senjutsu for the rest of the match.
Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note: Ultimate use can only be done once, with the user not yet in Sage Mode (thus entering it as he uses it) and counts as a Forbidden Rank, doing -50 damage to the users body and leaving him exhausted and drained after the end of Sage Mode.
Note: When used to enter Sage Mode, the user still has to post the Sage Mode technique.
Note: Usable 4 times
~Declined~
I don't really see how this jutsu is supposed to invalidate the shortcomings of SM. When collecting natural energy, you already get it from wood, trees and such if they are present. The amount of natural energy present has never been an issue in the series as far as I know. Naruto was even able to collect a large amount of NE rapidly when being in a large empty crater. The tricky parts are that you need to be completely still and that your chakra is perfectly balanced with the NE. Your jutsu does not solve that. If you're not standing perfectly still, you will not be able to absorb NE and NE is all around you. Normally you can absorb it 360° in all dimensions around you, while now you are forcing it into a bottleneck. I would even say what you are doing makes things go slower.
Panda Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Haiiro | Panda Summoning Technique: Grey
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
Haiiro is a human sized Panda, about 1.8m tall when standing on his hind legs, that, despite his race, is grey and white instead of black and white. This is likely because of his age, being over 100 years old. However, despite his advanced age, Haiiro is a very powerful warrior who carries at all times a simple Katana strapped to his back. He was one of the first to develop Genkotsu Namakemono and to fully master hand to hand combat and basic weapon combat. He is, however, quite silent and secluded as compared to other Pandas, speaking only when needed. In combat, his main ability is his close combat expertise. He cannot use any Ninjutsu apart from Panda Arts, but is a very dangerous Taijutsu and Genkotsu Namakemono user, having mastered and being able to use both to the highest degree. His physical strength is much higher than that of a normal ninja, earning him a damage bonus in all his physical techniques when compared to other users and his speed and agility are twice as high as a Kage Rank ninja. Very fierce and uncompromising as a fighter, he was once the leader and master of the Panda. Being an old fashion warrior, to summon Haiiro, the user must draw blood and do the normal sequence of handseals for a summon, either clapping his hands (to summon Haiiro in mid-long range around the user) or slamming a palm on a surface or the air (to summon Haiiro near that location, thus short range around the user).
Note: All Genkotsu Namakemono techniques he uses have +10 damage; Taijutsu techniques +15 damage.
Note: Can only be summoned once
Note: One needs to have signed the Panda Contract
~Pending~
The "twice as high as a kage rank ninja" has to go. Other than that the only thing that bothers me isn't a summoning supposed to have a time limit on how long it can be active? Other than that everything is fine.
Bari Bari no Jutsu: Jogai Kekkai | Barrier Technique: Exclusion Barrier
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: B-Rank to Forbidden Rank
Range: Short (Long if used offensively)
Chakra: 20-50 (20-50 per turn to sustain)
Damage: N/A (40 to 90 if used offensively)
Description:
An application of both sealing techniques and simple barrier techniques, the Exclusion Barrier is a technique designed to be defensive in nature yet retain some offensive applications. The user will cross his index and middle fingers of one hand (B-Rank), both hands (A-Rank) or additionally, also crossing both arms (S-Rank and Forbidden rank) triggering a simple barrier to form in front of him. The barrier is virtually transparent and, to a third party observer, seems almost made of glass, refracting in certain angles the light so as to be clearly visible. Its almost unidimensional, being quite thin (no more than 2 or 3 fingers thick) yet can have any size from as little as a 5cmx5cm squared area to a 50mx50m square area. The barrier is an excellent defense from forward attacks, easy to make and incredibly fast to deploy, but cannot defend the user from other angles. Once formed, the barrier will move with the user until control over it is released or its overpowered (in which case, it shatters and breaks, almost as if made of glass). To use it offensively the user can simply point one or both of his palms, making a pushing movement which will propel the barrier forwards in a linear path an high speeds. The barrier will possess the momentum and force as well as power of an equivalent physical technique, pushing whatever is hit backwards with might. Being a barrier, it contains all the given properties of barriers, being a field of fuuinjutsu on its own with specific applications and not simply a ninjutsu technique. Because of this, like other barriers, it can negate Ninjutsu and chakra from passing through it as well as anything. Off course, the strength of the barrier dictates the strength of its protection.
Note: S-Rank application leads to a 2 turn cold down and allows only 3 additional uses of the technique; Forbidden rank prevents further use of the technique.
Note: While sustained, the user cannot move his hands from the crossing gesture required unless its to direct the barrier forward to attack, or it will otherwise end the technique
Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
~Declined~
Too vaguely defined and explained on what its limits are. I'm not really good with barrier techs, but mangawise they are every difficult to create and use. But you just summon a barrier that can vary from B to forbidden rank, that's fast, reaches up to long range, follows your movements, does not let chakra pass, can be used to defend and to attack etc. and this all without any restrictions that are in balance with the type of jutsu this is. I mean as it is now you can even use this jutsu 3 times as an S-rank and than use it one more time as a forbidden rank tech. You say what happens when it breaks, but what is now supposed to break it, especially when you use it as a forbidden rank one? I mean your barrier could potentially stop all frontal forbidden ranked jutsu with having no drawbacks for you whatsoever other than you wouldn't be allowed to use that barrier anymore. The only thing that can be considered weak, is that it's only one side, but considering the size you can make the barriers have, even that is very relative. I also really don't get why this is B-Forbidden rank as it really isn't that kind of a jutsu. You can easily start making degrees for every existing jutsu, but then you are making them stronger and more universal then they are. I only allow something like this in jutsu that have an inherent reason to accept it can have different ranks, but in this case there is no difference, all your barriers are the same. You just added it so that you could use it in much more situations. Or you make this a lower ranked jutsu or you make this a highly restricted forbidden rank one. No one is going to use a forbidden ranked one against a B-rank jutsu, that restricts the usage of a forbidden jutsu by default, but if that jutsu has different ranks it allows you to continuously spam it.
You know the drill. Its opened for a new cycle of 3 techniques per user for one week counting from today or until the new marker is posted. One Cycle = one Week but one Week is not immediately one Cycle. Read the markers to be sure you're not bypassing the rules. Remember that you can only post between markers.
Also, I must remind members to read the rules (check the first post of this thread), read the thread and get familiar with what is approvable and is not, etc. Tons of techniques still are submitted without abiding to the template for example and that is auto decline. And its ridiculous to have a submission declined because of incorrect chakra or damage info. Be smart and make sure your submission abides the templates.
Note:The next member to submit a mythical or fictional or extinct animal contract will be banned from the thread for whatever period I deem necessary.
Yūgana Ken: Warai Doukeshi | Graceful Fist: The Laughing Court Jester Type: Offensive Rank: A-rank Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: A deceptive move for the fighting style. The user will gather fuuton chakra towards each of their hands. The user will use on of their hands, by opening their palm, and having their fingers face towards the eye of the opponent, the user will attempt to deliver a straight eye jab. The hand though, progresses at a normal pace, similar to regular ninjas. The main purpose is not to necessarily strike the eyes of the opponent but to force their attention towards the fingers. As the opponent focused towards the hand coming at their eyes, basically a little after the first hand was sent towards the opponent, the user will use their other hand to deliver a much quicker (matching the basic speed of the fighting style) and aggressive hit aiming towards the opponents chest, delivering a slash which is quite deep and a large amount of blood will begin to spill, inflicting serious pain. The opponent will surely die if they take a full hit from this attack. It becomes extremely difficult for the opponent to notice the slash due to the distraction which makes it a formidable technique, and difficult to deduce. Notes:
- Can only be used twice in battle
- Must be a practitioner of Yūgana Ken | Graceful Fist
- Must wait one turn before use again
Declined The opponent will surely die? If they don't die of being hit by a Rasengan, why would they of this? Its a bit too overstretched there. Also, considering your CFS, how does one defend from the attacking hand? If you don't wish to explain it publicly, send me a pm.
(Meiton: Mune Kurikaeshi Jajjimento) Dark Release: Pillar of Judgement Type: Offensive Rank: A-rank Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description:
The most powerful of Castiel's dark release techniques, after using Dark release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of the enemies technique. The user moves his hands around in a semi-circle before positioning his hands on top of one other. One hand has two fingers pointing down while the other has two fingers pointing up. He then releases a torrent of dark energy from his palm (that has the diamonds on it) that will travel around the users body this torrent of dark chakra is formed around the user like a tube, a vertical tube. This tube doesn't touch the users body it's one meter away from the users body so he doesn't take any damage, if the opponent is within range of this technique they will receive massive external damage, that may turn into internal damage if the damage is large enough, as well as a large vertical burn from whichever side the opponent is facing the tube.
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Notes:
- Must use Dark release: Inhaling Maw before the use of this technique.
- Can only be used twice per-match.
- Have to wait two turns before the use of this technique again.
- Can only be taught by Nathan. ____________
-Declined- Remove the internal damage part, from this kind of a technique, he would only be burned externally.
(Meiton: Mune Kurikaeshi Jajjimento) Dark Release: Pillar of Judgement Type: Offensive Rank: A-rank Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description:
The most powerful of Castiel's dark release techniques, after using Dark release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy of the enemies technique. The user moves his hands around in a semi-circle before positioning his hands on top of one other. One hand has two fingers pointing down while the other has two fingers pointing up. He then releases a torrent of dark energy from his palm (that has the diamonds on it) that will travel around the users body this torrent of dark chakra is formed around the user like a tube, a vertical tube. This tube doesn't touch the users body it's one meter away from the users body so he doesn't take any damage, if the opponent is within range of this technique they will receive massive damage.
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Notes:
- Must use Dark release: Inhaling Maw before the use of this technique.
- Can only be used three times per-match.
- Have to wait two turns before the use of this technique again.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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Approved One day you'll explain to me what is a vertical burn =_=
Sakugen | Reduction Type: Weapon Rank: S-rank Range: Short - Long (Only if the chain is used.) Chakra: 40 (+30 for every beam of chakra used.) Damage: 60 (+20 for every beam of chakra used -5 when the user absorbs raw chakra) Description:
A blade of the finest quality forged by Castiel and named for its raw chakra stealing abilities. It is exquisite in both form and use, a dual edged blade that mimicked the shape of a roaring flame, a hilt of obsidian, and a long chain hidden within the hilt which would only respond to his chakra. This blade was developed to steal the raw chakra from opponent with every connecting attack, and store them within, making it a “living” but not sentient blade. He crafted it of Crusentu, a metal darker than night and near indestructible. Due to its large size it is worn on Castiel's back and when swung it can deal both slashing damage and blunt bashing damage. With each swing that connects with the opponent chakra is taken and absorbed by the sword. Once raw chakra has been absorbed into the blade it may be used to produce beam of energy that can cut through steel and fly off the blade with each slash, increase the cutting power of the blade, or provide Castiel with chakra. Within the hilt of Sakugen is a chain that can be used to extend the range of the swings and enables Sakugen to be used as a projectile weapon that may be retrieved. The chain has a limit of extending to a distance of twenty meters, and is able to retract at a speed of half a second per meter, meaning it takes ten seconds to retract Sakugen after the chain has been extended to the maximum length which creates a large window from an opponent to counterattack.
Restrictions & notes:
- Using Sakugen and it's absorbing raw chakra both count as 1 of the 3 moves
- Sakugen is on Castiel's back at all times.
- Sakugen can't absorb anything but raw chakra.
- Can only use the absorbing raw chakra from opponent(s) ability three times per-match.
- User takes five damage when absorbing opponent(s) raw chakra.
- Chain only extends to 20 meters and takes 10 seconds to retract the chain/sword.
- Can only be wielded by Nathan and his Castiel bio.
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Jajjimento | Judgement Type: Weapon Rank: B - S Range: Short - Mid (Energy Blade) Chakra: 20 - 40 (-20 activation of shield & -5 per turn activated) Damage: N/A (Will be explained in description) Description: Judgement was the name given to the only known weapon created for a Dark release user in existence. It was created during the first ninja world war in hopes to increase the dark users powers enough to help them take control. Unfortunately before the weapon could be used the creator died in a burial of rubble where the Weapon was lost along with all the notes pertaining on how it is to be used, at least that's what was though. During a recent excavation near Konohagakure on a small island a group of diggers found the mans remains in an underground lab. He was clutching onto a small circular piece of metal and around him strung several books each titled, Judgement Part 1-5. After reading they realized the weapon was meant for a dark release user and such handed over the piece of metal and the books to Castiel, the Leaf's most known Dark release user.
Judgement is a morphing weapon which means when chakra is added to it it can change its shape. Judgement is, however limited to only 2 shapes, a shield and a sword. The weapon starts off as just a simple looking piece of circular metal weighing no more then a Kilogram. When a Dark release user channels his dark chakra into it. The shield part of the weapon comes to life growing in size to around a metre and a half high by a metre wide. Although with the large increase in size the shield isn't all that heavy. Also upon activation the shield will mould itself on the users forearm, this will depend on what hand the users dark seal is located. The shield sits on the forearm so it does no hinder hand seals.
The Shields Abilities: Activating the shield will originally cost the user 20 chakra. Once being activated the shield require the user to constantly feed it with Dark chakra so that it will no revert to its dormant state, because of this it costs the user 5 chakra each turn to keep it active. Also while activated the user is only capable of Performing 2 jutsu per turn while the weapon is active. The shield itself acts as a Absorption seal, the user is able to Block up to S rank Wind Fire and Lightning jutsu once per turn. This is a passive action, all the user has to do is put the shield between him and the jutsu and the shield will absorb it. After absorbing the First jutsu the shield will be equivalent of B rank. After the Second Jutsu the Shield will be A rank. After the Third Jutsu the Shield will be S rank. This is important as the amount of Jutsu Absorbed will depend on how powerful the sword state is. Also after 3 turns the shield will automatically morph into the sword, its rank will be defendant on the amount of jutsu absorbed during its shielded duration, this cannot be controlled by the user. If the shield does not Absorb a single jutsu in its 3 turn activation it will revert back into its dormant form but it will be able to be activated the following turn instead of the 2 turn cool down.
The shields appearance:
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The Swords Abilities: Once the user has absorbed between 1 - 3 techniques he is able to Morph the shield into a sword. The swords rank will Depend on the amount of techniques absorbed by the shield, 1 = B-rank, 2 = A-rank, 3 = S-rank. This is very important as it also drastically measures how powerful the sword will be. The sword itself has 2 Main abilities associated with it. Energy Cutting: This is the first ability of the sword, being made of Dark release and being empowered by Dark release the Sword itself holds the same Strength and Weakness' of Dark release. The Sword itself is able to protect the user from Fire, Wind, and Lightning techniques, the rank depending on the Rank of the sword. The user will Simply swing the sword into the incoming jutsu, as this happens the sword will absorb small amounts of the technique, not the entire technique. By doing this it will split the technique in half causing it to go around the user and leave him unharmed. This can be done passively but, Wielding the sword holds the same restriction where only 2 jutsu can be used while its activated. The user is able to cut through the same amount of Jutsu that where absorbed by the Shield, although the sword is Always capable of cutting jutsu the same rank as itself. Energy Blade: The second ability of the sword is its ability to create an energy blade from within itself. The energy blade can be used 2 ways. Either the user can swing the sword causing the blade to launch out from the sword in an arc which travels up to mid range. The rank of this attack can vary from B-rank to S-rank. The amount of times the user can do this is the reverse of how many techniques where absorbed. Therefore it can do 1 S-rank, 2 A-ranks and 3 B-ranks.
The Second usage of this ability is to increase the users blade size and cutting ability. By channelling the chakra to the outside of the blade it will coat it adding an extra 800mm to the blade itself. The chakra is a visible deep purple colour which matches the sword itself. The rank of this version will once again be determined by the amount of techniques absorbed. By using this method the sword will stay like this for four turns before reverting back to its original size. The blade will follow all Strengths and Weakness' meaning it can cut through B rank earth defences.
The sword itself is also very good in close combat. If the user is up against someone with a sword coated in either Wind, Fire, Lightning, or Raw chakra the sword will sap that chakra from the blade leaving it as normal steel. The sword is like a vampire in that sense that whenever it clashes with one of these elements it automatically removes enough of it to protect the user, therefore the sword cannot be broken by another sword which is using Wind, Fire, Lightning, or Raw chakra to increase its cutting ability.
The Sword will also never revert back to the metal state just by duration alone. As long as their is an abundance of chakra left inside it it will always stay in play as a sword. As stated above the user will need to physically user the chakra to either cut energy or release jutsu to cause the sword to revert. Therefore the sword is always able to be used as a simple sword as long as the user hasn't used any of these abilities. This is excluding the ability to remove small amounts of chakra from an enemies weapon, as this is fuelling the sword doing this will not cause it to revert. cutting an actual technique though will burn more chakra then it absorbs due to the amount of chakra needed to split the technique, therefore cutting Energy does cause the sword to revert after the 3 techniques cut. Both energy blade techniques and cutting energy techniques add to the total, therefore the sword is only able to use a total of 3 techniques from either group before reverting.
The blades appearance when infused with Dark release chakra:
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The sword itself will revert back to the shield after one of two things occur. The first being is the user uses the first application of the energy blade more then 3 times of any rank the sword will revert back to its shield state and will stay dormant for 2 turns before being able to absorb techniques again. If the user cuts energy with the blade he will be able to cut a maximum of 3 wind fire and lightning jutsu up to S rank before the sword reverts back to its shielded stated where it remains dormant for 2 turns before being able to be used again.
The Weapon itself is Not indestructible. It can be broken but it cannot be destroyed. If the sword or shield is broken by an Earth ranked technique higher then itself, it will automatically revert back to the small piece of metal and will Remain dormant for Four turns. After such time the user can Channel his dark chakra into it and turn it back into the shield. Notes and Restrictions:
- Although absorbing techniques and cutting energy are both passive abilities, while the weapon is activated the user will only be capable of using 2 jutsu per turn.
- The shield can only absorb a maximum of 3 techniques before it must be morphed into the sword.
- The sword can only cut 3 energy based techniques or Fire 3 energy blades of any rank before reverting back to its original shape.
- Once the sword reverts it will be unusable for 2 turns before the user may channel dark chakra into again to reactivate it, this will cost a move to reactive the shield.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
Declined Several issues:
First: no passive stuff. Defending from anything up to S-rank of those elements and energy elements passively is a no no. Specially considering how much chakra your spending to achieve it. No. It needs to count as a move and needs to spend proportional amount of chakra towards what its absorbing.
Second: Size matters. The shield is not big enough to defend and absorb an enormous technique such as Fire Majestic Anihilation for example. Take that into account.
Third: blade has too many passive stuff.
Fourth: cutting through elements has been done so many times before it cannot be considered unique regardless of the KG you're using. So find another way.
Summoning Technique: Scleria | Kuchiyose: Scleria Type: Summoning Rank: S Range: Short-Long[Summoned Short] Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description: The user will swiftly perform 4 hand seals, draw blood and slam his hand on the ground. Once done, the porcupine Scleria will be summoned. Scleria is only about 3 foot tall and 3 foot wide. As soon as its summoned it burrows itself into the ground. Due to Scleria being accustomed to burrowing through earth and using chakra to do so, A rank and below earth techniques will not affect him while he's underground. Once underground Scleria will use his second special ability, the ability to manipulate and extend his quills. Similar to the Dance of the Young Ferns kaguya technique, Scleria manipulates all of his quills and even multiplies most of them, to the point that the quills will swiftly rise all throughout the battlefield, piercing, stabbing, slicing, everything on the battlefield. Of course, because Scleria is in control of the quills it can exclude the user and even make clear paths for him to go through because Scleria has the ability to sense what's going on above the ground, similar to the hiding like a mole technique. This also helps to prevent the user from being pushed into any of the quills on accident. It can also help Scleria target the opponent even when he's extremely close to the user.
~Only lasts on the field for 4 turns
~Can only be used once
~No other S ranks in the turn its summoned
~No other porcupine summoning can be on the field at the same time
~All of its abilities count as moves and are A-Ranked (both the digging through the ground and the quill technique)
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Genjutsu: Girisha No Dai Pīnukan | Illusionary Arts: Great Fire God of Greece Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: This a powerful genjutsu that is induced on an opponent after the user strings together 5 hand seals. The user will then place the targets in an illusion. The affected targets body, in the illusion, will then begin to melt from the inside out. The bones on the inside of the target will completely melt and then begin melt through his skin and ooze out of his body. This causes a great amount of pain and while it doesn't paralyze an opponent, it greatly reduces his dexterity. The targets moves at half his base speed and is incapable of high speed movement, causing him unimaginable pain if he attempts to, he also cannot properly string together hand seal and his hand seal speed is slower as a result
~Can only be used twice
~No gen for 2 turns afterwards
~Can only be used by Cursed Prince
~Lasts for 2 turns
Declined The melting effect was done ages ago. DNR
Rippā no Gōkana Kōto | Luxurious Coat Of The Ripper Type: Defensive Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: N/A Damage: N/A Description: In appearance, the Luxurious Coat of the Ripper looks like a normal luxurious coat. It is lined with the red fur of the four tailed beast Son Goku. The Coat itself is more special than it looks, it is a weapon. The coat is made of malleable, chakra-infusible material. The user can control literally every strand of this coat with his chakra. Due to its special abilities the coat is able to be stretched and manipulated, buts its main ability is its ability to harden to a steel-like quality. The coat is able to be stretched and manipulated to the point that it seems to not even be a coat anymore. It isn't indestructible, but as long as even a fragment of it exists it can be reformed. The attacking abilities of the coat allow it to be stretched and manipulated whilst hardening to steel like quality and transforming the ends of it into scythe-like curved blades that can carve through an opponent. The user grabs and swings the ends of his coats to deliver attacks to the opponent whilst extending it and hardening it. (Counts as an S rank with the normal chakra and damage points, only usable thrice with a short-mid range)
The user is able to use its abilitys passively, hardening it and allowing it to block free-form ninja tags and bombs as well as weapons. The coat can also be reformed if it is destroyed without a move cost, and extends within short range to help him perform arduous takes such as grabbing things for him
~Only usable by Cursed Prince
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Declined I cannot approve this as it would collide with a CFS that revolves around manipulating cloth and clothes. DNR
(Raiton/Doton: Hakai no Sekai)- Lightning/Earth release: World of Destruction Type: Offense Rank: A-rank Range: Mid - Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user will gather their chakra and stomp their foot on the ground to rise a large rock section up to 10 meters long in size and 2 meters in radius, off the ground around the area where the opponent is located. The user will then charge lightning chakra through the rock section, the lightning will begin to spiral around the rock section while breaking it apart. As the lightning is spiraling apart and the rock section is being broken apart, tendrils of lightning will begin to grow in size to the point anyone close in the radial area would be pierced from the lightning as well as terribly shocked that would numb the opponent. The rock section will soon turn into rock debris that will follow with the tendrils of lightning basically creating a vortex of lightning with rocks chunks. The rocks would be released outward as projectiles and move anywhere in distance same to the lightning tendrils. The rocks and tendrils of lightning move and are sent at a unpredictable manner making it difficult to understand where they are being launched, further decreasing the possibility of an easy way of evasion.
Note: Must have Lightning Mastered
Note: Must have Earth up to B-Rank
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke56
Declined 2 elements like that = two moves. Also, its irrelevant to put in a submission's restrictions that you need X element mastered. Thats a filler restriction as thats already a given fact. To use this technique you need A-rank Lightning and A-Rank earth as its an A-Rank technique of both elements. Rest seems fine. Oh, also add the need to do 2 handseals for the lightning part of the technique.
(Katon: Karakuni)-Fire Release: Land of Nothing Type: Offense Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user will gather their katon chakra and channel the chakra towards the users mouth and release the katon chakra from their mouth while thinning the chakra out, so instead of normal fire, a flammable gas will be released. The gas is clearly visible and has a dark color. The user as they release the will be directed towards the ground and as it touches the ground it travels in a radial manner, being able to travel up to long range (25 meters). Due to how it travels in a radial manner and requires contact with the ground, the user will have to be above ground (A flying summoning as an example) or on top of a mountain or high point so they are not caught within the flammable gas. The gas will be released as a projectile, so the user will have no more control of the gas as it travels. As it travels everywhere around the terrain, the gas will act to feed up on the untouched oxygen in the air and replace the oxygen in the air with the flammable gas. Thus anything within the area below will begin to decay slowly due to the lack of oxygen for especially plants. An opponent will not be able to breathe while in the area, causing them to suffocate. If an opponent however breathes in the flammable gas, it can cause internal damage, harming their lungs making it difficult to breathe and develop a light head, over time they will faint (2 turns). Due to the density and the color of the gas, it also makes it difficult to see through the gas while also being chakra infused. (Not including certain dojutsu and sensory) The gas can also be lit on fire, with the use of a basic light or another fire jutsu to create a devastating inferno attack.
Note:Can only be used two times
Note: Can not use fire jutsus above A-Rank next turn
Note: Must have mastery of fire
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke56
Declined Colored part either makes no sense (replacing oxygen? >_>) or is simply overstretched and unreasonable.
(Katon: Hanran no Chixen)- Fire release: Chain of the Rebellion Type: Supplementary-Offense Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 (+10 every turn active) Damage: 60 Description: The user will release katon chakra outward onto the edge of their skins and begin to manipulate the shape of the katon chakra into long and wavy chains that wraps themselves around the users body starting from the hips all the way up towards their arm-pits and covering the arms as well, in a singular fashion. This chains are super heated and can be manipulated by the user with various movements by releasing them outwards and swing them towards the opponent burning them on contact or wrapping them around the opponent to cause severe burning around the body where they are placed. This chains can also be used as a defensive barrier around the body or certain body parts and can swipe away projectile weapons or certain attacks to protect the user, but with every turn kept active they drain chakra from the user. This chains are able to reach up to long range.
Note: Chains stay active for four turns
Note: Can not use fire above S-Rank while active
Note: Can not use fire above A-Rank after they are dispersed
Note: This chains can be used free-form after appearance
Note: Can only be taught by Sasuke56
Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR
(Gafui) - Gaderffii
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The Gaderffii, or Gaffi Stick, was the traditional melee weapon of the Tusken Raiders of Sunagakure. Crafted out of whatever salvage was at hand, they are very effective in close combat. The Gaderffii was of the staff-variety, on average about four feet long, with a weapon-head on each end. The right end resembled an archaic flanged mace, with each of the four or more flanges sharpened like an axe-edge. Upon the tip was a spearpoint. The opposite, or left, end of the Gaffi stick usually was bent into an L-shape, with a large and heavy club head tipped by a hook.
Note: This weapon is indestructible (against simple ninja tools and swords/staffs/etc.)
Note: Can only be held by Yānks. (me)
Note: Because it is essentially a staff and due to the weight, it must be held with two hands
Note: The user cannot use any techniques that require hand seals while wielding this
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Weapons can not be indestructible, bro. Also, give me more detail as to how this weapon might work in a fight. It seems unique, but I want to know how it would operate.
(Gafui) - Gaderffii
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The Gaderffii, or Gaffi Stick, was the traditional melee weapon of the Tusken Raiders of Sunagakure. Crafted out of whatever salvage was at hand, they are very effective in close combat. The Gaderffii was of the staff-variety, on average about four feet long, with a weapon-head on each end. The right end resembled an archaic flanged mace, with each of the four or more flanges sharpened like an ax-edge. Upon the tip was a spearpoint. The opposite, or left, end of the Gaffi stick usually was bent into an L-shape, with a large and heavy club head tipped by a hook. Due to these unique structure, even if it is broken in half, it would still prove useful as either a club that can cause blunt trama or the spear at the top that can be used to stab or potentially slice at with many flanges that reside near the spearpoint. Also, with being cut and half, it would be effective to now have two weapons instead of one, which would prove beneficial against an opponent with a single sword, axe, etc. Besides using the two endpoints as a main weapon, the user can use the hilt which is composed of steel alloys to strike an opponent's chin, face, etc.
Note: Can only be held by Yānks. (me)
Note: Because it is essentially a staff and due to the weight, it must be held with two hands
Note: The user cannot use any techniques that require hand seals while wielding this
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Declined This isn't a CW. It has no abilities. Its simply a weapon you can have. Anyone can make a mace/spear hybrid. The fact that it doesn't have any special abilities or features doesn't make it a CW.
(Futon: Enshin) - Wind Release: Centrifuge
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After weaving the necessary hand seals Bird→Dragon→Ram→Dog, the user will create an two meter tall pillar of wind. When this happens, they would then use shape manipulation to a five feet long futon vacuum tube in which they guided to be position over the target to suck in and trap their head inside. Afterwards, the arms will begin to spin rapidly around the pillar for about 5-6 seconds like a real centrifuge. Once the spinning has stopped, the user's opponent(s) would be left disoriented and induced to vomit.
Note: Must be taught by Yānks.
Note: Can only use two times per battle
Declined I simply don't understand this or the point of it...
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(Barerurōru) - Barrel Roll
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A sailing, yet effective, defensive move nonetheless. Whilst on all fours, the user will gather a bit of chakra and feed said chakra into their legs and arms. Afterwards, they would propel themselves five feet into the air to either the left or right in a very rapid, spinning manner before landing via standing up. Once off the ground, the user is able to reach up to two meters from one's original position. This technique is specifically used to quickly dodge an attack from above.
Note: Must be taught by Yānks.
Junsei Gijutsu: Houken - Holy Art: Consecration
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Suplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This requires the user to use pages of a book preferably a holy scripture as sticky tags. While wielding a holy book, he would make a page detach from the book and affix itself on anything, object, tangible jutsu, clothing, weapon, wall or perhaps the ground. More than one pages may be used depending on the user's discretion. The pages once they attach to their destination, the quickly form a barrier around it. This would fortify the object or perhaps prevent anything trapped within the object from escaping. However when used on the ground, the barrier forms on just a portion of the ground say 5m radius fortifying the ground from jutsu intrusion and extrusion though the barrier is only as strong as one rank below its rank, meaning it can only prevent any jutsu of A-rank and below. At most 3 pages of the scripture is used and each of their power is still the same as when one is used.
-The barrier prevents jutsu from entering or leaving
-Can only be overpowered by S-rank and above jutsu
-The barrier is invisible except to doujutsus
-Last 3 turns then it disperses
-Usable 3x per battle
-Must wield a bible(not custom)
-Must be taught by Priest
Declined Do you have Fuuinjutsu mastery and permission to submit S-Rank fuuin? Because this is fuuin. Sealing something through a tag is fuuin. This type of technique falls within fuuin. Its also a tad on the oped side in its applications but more importantly, it collides with existing seals.
Pitohui Kuchyose: Seth - Pitohui Summoning: Seth
Rank: S
Type: Sup
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user smears blood on their palm, makes the neccesary handseals then presses their palm on the ground or clap both hands together to summon Seth in a cloud of white smoke.
Seth is a soldier, stoic though not fearsome because of his color. As big as Sasuke's Eagle, He is rare in terms of appearance amongst other Pitohuis as his entire self is clad in white feathers, although rumor has it that the whiteness is because Seth is pure and is almost with no toxins except for his claws and beak which a scratch could cause paralysis and that Seth is the essence of lightning. He has excellent manouvreability in mid-air and can communicate to the summoner or other Pitohuis through Pitohuian language though he rarely speaks except when it matters. Abilities:
-He can use Pitohui Arts
-Seth is a lightning specialist and 1x per battle, he can turn himself completely into lightning though still taking his normal shape thus becoming intangible to physical things and immune to lightning but vulnerable to wind via elemental strenghts and weaknesses. Also he can move faster while in this form. However, he is not able to attack or convey the summoner in this form as he is intangible and touching him could cause electrical shock and total paralysis. This counts as a move and last only for 2 turns or when he abruptly turns back to tangible.
-1x per turn he can generate a flush of blinding white light that covers the whole terrain and even blinds the summoner. However, he can choose to propagate the harmless but blinding light into one direction like a beam.
-Seth is immune to A-rank and below lightning but in defense to other elements, he would discharge a focused omnidirection lightning surge(S-rank) up to short range around him, though he can only use this 1x per turn and counts as a move from the user's jutsu slot.
-1x every 2 turns, he can flap his wings to release in a widespread, hundreds of miniature golden(lightning) pitohuis that paralyses to the touch, this is A-rank and counts as a move.
NOTE
++Can only be summoned 1x
++Lasts 4 turns
++Hooded Pitohui can only be taught by Priest
++All of his abilities counts as moves from the users move count
Approved
Pitohui Kuchyose: Pitohui Jotei, Majele - Pitohui Summoning: Pitohui Empress, Majele
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Sup
Range: N/A
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A(+40 to summoner)
Description: The user smears blood on their palm, makes the neccesary handseals then presses their palm on the ground or clap both hands together to summon Majele in a cloud of purple smoke.
A magnificent feat, Majele would stand equal is size against the likes of Gamabunta. Although She doesn't want it seem that way, but she is true Elegance clad in interwoven magnificence, colors that are beautifuly interlaced on her feathers and She is very proud. She does not like to be controlled or rather can't be control and only fights at her own free will and in dire circumstances when summoned into the terrain, and if she likes she would reverse summon herself back to Modakeke. Abilities
-Majele is proud and hate to be summoned so her appearance unleashes a massive killing intent on everyone Ninjas/summons on the terrian except the summoner and Pitohuis. The pressure of Majele's killing intent is massive and would paralyse victims of the same rank with the summoner. Meaning, if the summoner is Kage ranked, Majele's Killing intent would have the power to paralyse Kage ranked victims unlike a ninja's own Killing intent that paralyses only 2 ranks below. However, victims that has ranked higher than the summoner would feel lesser killing intent which would not paralyse them but able to cause distraction on them or make them fumble a jutsu. Clones of the victim if he had made any won't be able to withstand the pressure and would disperse(only if the victim is of the same rank with the summoner and below), also summons other than Hooded Pitohuis reverses back to their world. However this makes summoning Majele counts as 2 moves.
-1x Per battle, Majele is able to spew a massive amount of purple colored neurotoxin gas(S-rank) that engulfs the whole terrain in seconds. The neurotoxin gas is extremely noxious and a simple inhalation would cause instant paralysis while a heavy dose causes heart failure and death. However this counts as a move and the gas last only for 2 turns then it diffuses.
- 1x every 2 turns, Majele is able to from existing toxin source or from her mouth, create upto 6 Replicas of herself but smaller(each has the size of sasuke's bird) entirely made of neurotoxins as they are colored in a purple hue. They would attack the opponent at her will, though not to cause physical damage but to trap the opponent in their deadly fume as they burst into purple gas on physical contact, gas that only lingers for 1 turn. This is S-rank and simple inhalation of this would cause partial paralysis(difficult movement which makes the victim slow) and joint pains while heavy inhalation causes total paralysis. Counts as a move.
-She can use Pitohui Arts
-Majele would proudly groom herself to show off her ravishing beauty, shaking her entire body vigorously causing a large tremer.
-She can use her beak or claws to smash through A-rank and Below defenses.
NOTE
++Summoning counts as 2 moves
++Summoning takes a toll on the summoner and makes him nose-bleed and recieves +40 damage for doing so.
++No other pitohui must be on field
++Majele is immune to A-rank and below attacks
++Last for 4 turns
++Can only be summoned 1x
++Summoner can't use Ninjutsu above S-rank the turn she is summoned.
++Must be taught by Priest
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Declined I don't approve Forbidden rank summons.
(Jiton: Satetsu tsume atari) l Magnetism Release: Iron claw strikes Type: Offensive Rank: B Rank Range: Short - Mid Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user creates upto 2 claw out of iron sand, to attack the opponent,
the user can manipulate the claws movements precisely. The claws strike the
opponent from a distance while the user remains back as long he keeps focus on the claws.
Note: Can only be used by Sandaime Kazekage or Sasori using the Sandaime Kazekage puppet
Note: Cannot use other jutsu's as long as claw is being used
Note: Must be taught by strawberry
Iron Sand Training:
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Declined Where does this iron sand come from?
(Raiton: sutatikku chacha) l Lightning Release: Static Disruption Type: Supplimentery Rank: C rank Range: Short- Mid Chakra: 15 Damage: n/a Description: The user releases his lightning chakra into the field around him and the enemy, forming a
type of static in the area, the user can manipulate this static lightning to cause disturbances for the enemy.
Making their hair fiz up, feeling as if someone was touching their hair. The technique doesnt do any real damage but can potentially distract them or disturb them from the task at hand, because it feels as if someone is touching their head gently.
Note: Does not affect bald opponent or one wearing a helmet/ hat
Note: Can only be taught by strawberry
Declined DNR Similar to existing things
(Raiton: ikazuchi netto) l Lightning Release: Thunder Net Type: Offensive Rank: S rank Range: Mid - Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user forms the snake handseal and channels his lightning chakra into the clouds above manipulating the present lightning in the sky and and combining with his own lightning chakra the user manipulates them into a net of lightning that crashes down from above, covering a 10m radius.
Note: Cannot be used in short range of yourself, due to risk of self harm.
Note: No other S rank Lightning this turn
Note: Can only be taught by Strawberry
Declined What lightning in the sky? Unless there are storm clouds above and enough static energy due to them, there is no lightning in the sky. Also, next time you have font formatting or other formatting other than the ones allowed in the first post of this thread, I'll DNR your submissions.
Thanks for allow me to edit
I removed all references to rl Countries and reworded it clearer. Genjutsu: Futtō araibu|Illusionary Technique: Boiling Alive
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points:60
Descriptions:This method of killing was one of the most gruesome and brutal methods of execution used in the ancient times to punish the worst of criminal and offenders, however such practices have been long abolished.The user of the technique performs the tiger-monkey and rat hand seals in quick successions and casts his opponent under a Genjutsu where he sees his body being immersed head first, upside down into a large vessel filled with boiling steaming water,the victims body is gradually and slowly being burnt and roasted until the heat exposes his body muscles causing damage to his arteries and veins.
Note: Can only be used three times a battle.
Note: Must be taught by thunderbolt to use. ____________
-Declined- Reduce it to B-rank.
Genjutsu: Mohō monkī|Illusionary Technique:Mimicking Monkeys
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points:N/A
Descriptions:This genjutsu was created mainly for the purpose of mockery and to taunt ones opponent with the aim and purpose of leading them into frustration. The user of technique performs the ox hand seal and casts his opponents under a genjutsu which creates an illusion where his sees a group of monkeys, six in number, appear before him and encircle him. The monkeys copies and mimics all his body movements including his voice patterns and facial expressions.
Note: Can only be used three times a battle.
Note: Must be taught by thunderbolt to use. ____________
-Declined- You won't lead someone to frustration with a bunch of monkeys dancing and mimicking his actions >_>
Dotonōfū hitsugi|Earth Release: Enclosed Casket
Type: Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the boar and tiger handseals in quick succesions and slams his two hands on the ground bringing forth a huge casket to rise up from the surface of the earth underneath the opponent and trap him inside.The casket is air tight, and is 5 meters long in height and 10m wide in width making it capable of trapping bigger sized opponents and targets, its main functions and primary uses are to trap the targets and suffocate them due to the lack of oxygen present and airflow present.
Note:Can Only be used Three times in battle
Note:Can only be taught by thunderbolt ____________
-Declined- Similar techniques exist.
Genjutsu: Futtō araibu|Illusionary Technique: Boiling Alive
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points:40
Descriptions:This method of killing was one of the most gruesome and brutal methods of execution used in the ancient times to punish the worst of criminal and offenders, however such practices have been long abolished.The user of the technique performs the tiger-monkey and in quick successions and casts his opponent under a Genjutsu where he sees his body being immersed head first, upside down into a large vessel filled with boiling steaming water,the victims body is gradually and slowly being burnt and roasted until the heat exposes his body muscles causing damage to his arteries and veins.
Note: Can only be used three times a battle.
Note: Must be taught by thunderbolt to use.
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Declined While he is experiences the illusion, what is happening to him in reality?
Genjutsu: Bureikingu Wheel|Illusionary Technique:Breaking Wheel
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Descriptions: The breaking wheel was once used as a gruesome means of execution and torture as victims suffering could span over a period of several hours to a day, before they eventually blēd out.The user of this genjutsu performs the horse-dog and tiger hand seals in quick successions and casts his opponent under a horrific and frightening genjutsu where he sees his limbs being tied to a large wooden wagon wheel with many radial spokes on it which is in motion has begun to move, as the wagon wheels moves and rolls with the target body tied to it he is continuously stabbed by the spokes as well as having his limbs being broken due to the rotation of the wheel as he is rolled ruggedly across the ground surface. However, in reality the user is unharmed but is frightened as result of the traumatic experience of the casted genjutsu.
Can only be used three times
Can only be taught by thunderbolt
Declined You cannot control how your opponent will react to this. Some may be afraid, others happy. Who knows? Saying they will be frightening is beyond your control. Also, this isn't in any way an A-Rank genjutsu.
Genjutsu: Mohō monkī|Illusionary Technique:Mimicking Monkeys
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points:N/A
Descriptions:This genjutsu was created mainly for the purpose of mockery and to taunt ones opponent with the aim and purpose of fooling and confusing the target through the copying of the opponent body sounds and movements. The user of technique performs the ox hand seal and casts his opponents under a genjutsu which creates an illusion where his sees a group of monkeys, six in number, appear before him and encircle him. The monkeys copies and mimics all his body movements including his voice patterns and facial expressions.
Note: Can only be used three times a battle.
Note: Must be taught by thunderbolt to use.
Declined DNR Similar to existing techniques.
(Raiton: Fugou no Kirin) Lightning Release: Mark of Kirin Type: Attack Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: To execute this technique, the user will first need to apply a special seal formula with lightning chakra simply by touching any physical surface, such as objects, basic weapons, opponents etc. The seal formula will have a bright blue glow to it, so it would be easy to spot when you're up close. After having applied an existing seal formula, the user does a tiger handseal that immediately casts down a powerful lightning strike that hits the location of the seal and destroys anything close to it, the lightning strike will hit without fail and will not stop until it hits the designated seal. The seal(s) is destroyed once struck and the user will need to apply more if he/she wants to use this technique again. The user can also summon multiple lightning strikes if he/she has multiple existing seals, however they divide in power.
-Only taught by Question. __________
-Declined- Nice one, remove the colored portion and mention what the radius of the lightning impact is, basically the area it affects around the opponent.
(Fuuton: Fūjin no Hankan) Wind Release: Fūjin's Revolt Type: Defence/Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A Description: With the concept of shape manipulation, the user forms a cylinder shaped tornado around his/her arm. By swinging his arm cross, he releases a burst of gust forward that sends anything in range flying back. These winds are blunt and don't do much damage, as the technique is mostly designed to knockback attacks/opponents or strengthen existing jutsus, however it makes up with its force and range.
-No handseals required.
-No wind jutsu in the same turn. ___________
-Declined- There's no such thing as a cylinder shaped tornado, a tornado is circular shaped, it's just a cylinder air gust, also either it's used for defense or for blowing back things in front of you, and it shouldn't do any damage whatsoever because you stated in the damage section "N/A"
(Raiton: Fugou no Kirin) Lightning Release: Mark of Kirin Type: Attack Rank: A Range: Short-Long (around 5m for the radius of lightning strike) Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: To execute this technique, the user will first need to apply a special marking formula with lightning chakra simply by touching any physical surface, such as objects, basic weapons, opponents etc. The marking formula will have a bright blue glow to it, so it would be easy to spot when you're up close. After having applied an existing marking formula, the user does a tiger handseal that immediately casts down a powerful lightning strike that hits the location of the seal and destroys anything close to it(short range radius). The seal(s) is destroyed once struck and the user will need to apply more if he/she wants to use this technique again. The user can also summon multiple lightning strikes if he/she has multiple existing seals, however they divide in power.
-Only taught by Question.
-Removed as requested and added radius of lightning strike.
Declined where does this lightning come from? the one that hits the target? Also, its A-Rank so you need to limit how many times you can use this. Its also a Fuuin technique so edit the name to a Fuuin Raiton or Fuuinjutsu/Raiton or something. I assume you have fuuinjutsu.
(Fuuton: Fūjin no Hankan) Wind Release: Fūjin's Revolt Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A Description: With the concept of shape manipulation, the user forms a tornado around his/her arm. By swinging his arm across, he releases a burst of gust forward that sends anything in range flying back. These winds are blunt and don't do damage, as the technique is mostly designed to knockback opponents or strengthen existing jutsus, however it makes up with its force and range.
-No handseals required.
-Description changed, type changed to Supplementary
Approved
(Suiton: Mizu no Goei) Water Release: Pelagic Guard Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 30(-10 per turn) Damage: 60 Description: By doing the handseals Hare>Ram, the user creates 4 water spheres(the size of bowling balls) floating above his shoulders. These water spheres can be manipulated purely from the user's will and form in shapes the user sees fit, as such a defensive wall, tendrils, spikes, arms etc.. Each of the sphere has just enough volume to reach mid range when extended as a straight line, however they cannot move away from the user. To maintain the technique, the user cannot use Water techniques higher than B-rank but a user with Water specialty can't use Water techniques higher than A-rank. The user can deactivate this anytime.
- Lasts for 4 turns.
- Wait 2 turns before use again.
- No water source needed.
Declined Collides with existing techniques. DNR
(Doton: Reikon Shurarado) - Earth Release: Ghost Shrouds Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: Mid-Long Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user builds up large amounts of Doton chakra in his whole body and performs the Ram→Snake→Tiger→Dragon→Monkey handseals. He proceeds to slam his palm on the ground, as he releases all the built up chakra through it towards the ground. As a result of this, 4 ghostly looking, solid shrouds are created in 4 different directions, i.e. East, West, North and South of the opponent at equal distances which engulf the opponent in the shape of a circle with 4 points. These shrouds release very fast moving sharp spikes OR heavy mud coated balls from their mouth. Each shroud releases 2 spikes from it's mouth, the spikes which are targeted at the opponent's heart. The user has the choice of either letting the shrouds emit spikes or mudballs, the mudballs emitted are continuous, and the shroud can emit maximum 5 mudballs at a time after which it disappears into thin air. The shrouds can endure upto C-Rank Earth techniques and C-Rank Taijutsu. Note(s):
- Can be used only twice per battle.
- Requires precise chakra control.
- Can be only taught by -Ace. _____________
-Declined- Either they release spikes or coated muddy balls, not both, also remove "very fast", and mention the size of each "shroud". Also note if you perform another technique and stop focusing on this one, you can't control them anymore unless by using the technique again and counting towards another move of your moves per turn.
(Doton: Reikon Shurarado) - Earth Release: Ghost Shrouds Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: Mid-Long Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user builds up large amounts of Doton chakra in his whole body and performs the Ram→Snake→Tiger→Dragon→Monkey handseals. He proceeds to slam his palm on the ground, as he releases all the built up chakra through it towards the ground. As a result of this, 4 ghostly looking, solid shrouds are created in 4 different directions, i.e. East, West, North and South of the opponent at equal distances which engulf the opponent in the shape of a circle with 4 points. Each shroud is 1.8 meters, i.e. 6 feet tall and 0.5 meters wide.These shrouds release sharp spikes from their mouth.Each shroud releases 3 spikes from it's mouth, and the spikes are targeted at the opponent's heart.If the user performs another technique after performing this technique, he loses focus on this technique and hence the shrouds disappear. If the user wants to use this technique again, he has to perform it again, and it also counts as a move. The shrouds can endure upto C-Rank Earth techniques and C-Rank Taijutsu. Note(s):
- Can be used only twice per battle.
- Can be only taught by -Ace.
- The shrouds endure upto C-rank Taijutsu and C-Rank Earth Techniques.
- The shrouds last for 2 turns after which they disappear.
Declined "Shroud: Shroud usually refers to an item, such as a cloth, that covers or protects some other object." This said... UH??????
New submission:
(Raiton: Kaminari Hinotori) - Lightning Release: Thunder Phoenix Type: Offensive/Defensive Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60(if used offensively)/NA(if used defensively) Description: The user gathers Raiton chakra in his hands and performs the Ram→Bird→Ox→Hare handseals and stretches his hands parallel to himself(i.e. at 90 degrees) and creates a phoenix bird completely made up of lightning. The bird is 2 meters wide and 1 meter tall. Using his chakra, he controls the movements of the bird. If he decides to use it offensively, he needs to perform an additional handseal, i.e. the Tiger handseal with his right hand, after which the phoenix emits a powerful bolt of thunder which extends upto long range, and upon contact electrocutes the opponent. Also, he has the choice of sending the phoenix bird at the opponent, which upon contact would electrocute him. If he decides to use it defensively, he needs to perform the Dragon handseal, upon which the bird would surround him, (only from the front side), acting like an armor. The bird can endure upto B-Rank lightning techniques. If the user performs another technique after performing this technique, he loses focus on this technique which causes the phoenix to disappear. If the user wants to use this technique again, he has to perform it again, and it also counts as a move. Note(s):
- Can be used only thrice per battle
- Can be only taught by Acē
- The phoenix lasts for 2 turns after which it disappears.
- The user is vulnerable from other 3 sides when performing the technique.
Declined Lightning birds already exist in more than one form. DNR
Declined 
