Summoning Animal: Yin and Yang Frog Scroll Owner: Venus Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: N/A Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A Description and Background:
It is a newly discovered species, found in 2011 in Vietnam. The frog itself has striking black and white patterned eyes resembling the yin and yang symbol. This particular amphibian, Yin and Yang frogs, live in the evergreens and thrive in wet or damp environments. Little is known about the species itself so the outcome of their future is unknown due to their natural habitat being destroyed, daily.
I found some old Cj's of mine that needed to have some extra description for it to be approved (Mods I do apologize, can't seem to find the quotes)
(Doton:furui yuumon) – Earth Release: Ancient Anguish
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user will slam their foot on the ground to create 6 pillars of large stone with sharp spikes encased in the inner wall to rise up from the ground then the user makes them surround the enemy and slam into them creating a tomb for them and then finally slams the tomb into the ground engulfing the tomb completely with the spikes protruding through the ligaments and rupturing the organs.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: The user cannot use earth element next turn.
Declined, make it that their is a like several seconds before the tomb is taken into the earth to give it a weakness but makes it a strategic requirement to pull the technique off and make it that you cant use earth element for the following two turns
(Doton:furui yuumon) – Earth Release: Ancient Anguish
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user will slam their foot on the ground to create 6 pillars of large stone with sharp spikes encased in the inner wall to rise up from the ground then the user makes them surround the enemy and slam into them creating a tomb for them and then finally slams the tomb into the ground engulfing the tomb completely with the spikes protruding through the ligaments and rupturing the organs, though the tomb has several seconds before it begins it's deathly descent.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: The user cannot use earth element for two turn.
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Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
(Suiton: Charybdis) – Water Release: Charybdis
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will perform a string of hand seals and then releases their chakra into the ground to create water to rise around the enemy and then spin around creating a spinning vortex of water that completed throws the opponent off balanced and to catch the enemy into the current of the whirlpool whilst the enemy spinning around in the vortex the user clenches his fists together to cause the vortex to explode crushing the water into the enemy target.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: The user cannot perform water style next turn.
Declined, similar aspect to the above technique in that making it so the enemy is still able to attempt to escape the whirlpool and so for you to successfully pull the technique off you would need to use certain methods and make it the same that you cant use water element for the following two turns.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will perform a string of hand seals and then release their chakra into the ground to create water to rise around the enemy and then spin around creating a circular shaped vortex (like a ball of water spinning at high speed) whilst the enemy spinning around in the vortex the user clenches his fists together to cause the vortex to implode crushing the water into the enemy target.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: The user cannot perform water style for two turns.
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Declined Similar to existing techniques.
(Katon: Ares's dekobou) – Fire Release: Ares's Mischief
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: By Concentrating the fire chakra within the ground, to slowly the user then creates flames of fire rise from the ground in 4 vents around the target which are then controlled by the users hands and then whilst positioning them at the enemy, the user will suddenly release a small qualitative amount of fire chakra which causes a large uproar of fire to spiral upwards in a wavy so like pattern; this jutsu is of-course seemed to attack the opponent from below, however it's quite the opposite, the raises up from the ground to attack from them air, only suppose to catch the opponent off guard via the direct of its attack, so when this hits the enemy it pins them down and crashes on them.
Note: Can only be used once
Note: User cannot use fire element next turn
Raiton: Kanetsu Raikou |加熱 電光,(Lightning Release: Heat Lightning) Type: Offensive Rank:S-Rank Range:Mid-Range Chakra:40 Damage:80 Description: After performing a small set of handsigns, the user sends out a fast-paced lightning bolt towards the enemy, while in the air, the user infuses Fire chakra into the lightning giving it a reddish glow and also increases it's damage significantly. Being hit by this technique also leaves a severe scorch mark in the point of entry.
Requirement:
1.Only Anbu578 may teach this technique.
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Declined Read the first post of this thread.
Summoning Animal: Leopards Scroll Owner: Sagemode Jinchuuriki Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: To be created Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: To be created Description and Background: Leopards are graceful and powerful big cats closely related to lions, tigers, and jaguars. They live in sub-Saharan Africa, northeast Africa, Central Asia, India, and China. However, many of their populations are endangered, especially outside of Africa. The leopard is so strong and comfortable in trees that it often hauls its kills into the branches. By dragging the bodies of large animals aloft it hopes to keep them safe from scavengers such as hyenas. Leopards can also hunt from trees, where their spotted coats allow them to blend with the leaves until they spring with a deadly pounce. These nocturnal predators also stalk antelope, deer, and pigs by stealthy movements in the tall grass. When human settlements are present, leopards often attack dogs and, occasionally, people. Leopards are strong swimmers and very much at home in the water, where they sometimes eat fish or crabs. Female leopards can give birth at any time of the year. They usually have two grayish cubs with barely visible spots. The mother hides her cubs and moves them from one safe location to the next until they are old enough to begin playing and learning to hunt. Cubs live with their mothers for about two years—otherwise, leopards are solitary animals. Most leopards are light colored with distinctive dark spots that are called rosettes, because they resemble the shape of a rose. Black leopards, which appear to be almost solid in color because their spots are hard to distinguish.
Notes: The summoner gets a crescent moon tattoo signifying that they can summon a leopard
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This is my first time submitting a custom. Feel free to edit this if I did anything wrong
(Suiton: Hakabakashii Kasai ) Water Style: Rapid Fire Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short-Mid Chakra Cost: 30 Damage Point: 60 Description: A more advance version of ''(Suiton: Mizudeppō no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Gun Technique''. Using the Hydrification Technique, the user fires multiple amount of small water blobs that resemble bullets that shoot out from the users index finger at a fast rate. Similar to that of a automatic gun. The user must shape his hand into a shape of a gun in order for it to work. The user can also shape his other hand into a gun allowing him to fire the bullets of water from both hands.
Note:
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
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Declined This is simply an enhanced version of the cannon technique. DNR.
(Suiton: Wana Temae ) Water Style: Trapped are you? Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short Chakra Cost: 30 Damage Point: 60 Description: Once the user see's an incoming physical attack heading their way such as a punch or kick, they manipulate the water in their body causing it to gain a sticky syrup like effect similar to ''(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field''. Unknown to the opponent, when the blow lands, their limb in which the used to attack with gets stuck into the body of the user. With the opponent now stuck the user can either attack them back or manipulate the liquid in their body to engulf the trapped opponent causing them to drown. The user can also use this jutsu to engulf thrown projectiles, and throw them back at the opponent.
Note:
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
(Suiton: Wareme Sono Mizu) Water Style: Splitting of the water Type: Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra Cost: 40 Damage Point: N/A Description: The user begins by channeling a large amount of their water chakra into a water source of any shape and size Once their chakra has been channeled into the water, the user manipulates the water to split directly in the middle causing the water to separate to each side, creating a ''pathway'' directly in the middle of the water source. The user can walk along the pathway to the other side of the water source allowing easy travel. The user then releases their hold of the water causing it to reform and crash back into one large water source.
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Note:
- Can only be used 2 times per battle.
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
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Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
Fūinjutsu: Būsuto Shite Kurete Arigatō (Sealing Arts: Thanks for the Boost!) Type: Supplementary Rank: A-rank Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A (+10 to next jutsu used) Description: This seal must be pre-made (Stated on the bio) by sealing chakra into the kanji "吸収" (Absorption) on the user's palm. The user will then hold there hand out in front with their palm facing the oncoming elemental jutsu, activating the seal to form a chakra half-sphere that faces the oncoming attack. This chakra half-sphere is Short-range in diameter at it's maximum and will proceed to wrap around the oncoming jutsu and seal it back within the user. This translates the chakra in the absorbed jutsu into chakra that can be used by the wielder to boost their next jutsu/attack by 10 damage points. The chakra absorbed will always be used in the next jutsu the wielder uses and once done, the seal can no longer be activated or re-set. Notes:
- Can only be used twice per match, if the bio has been marked on both hands.
- Can only be used to absorb manifested one jutsu per hand and both seals (If two are placed) cannot be used in the same turn.
- A total of two seal can be placed on the bio, one on each palm. These must be stated on the bio itself and not just declared at the start of battle.
- Can only absorb up to A-rank ninjutsu.
- No Fuuinjutsu can be used in the same and following turns.
- Can only be taught by Shinta
Fūinjutsu: Seigen no Zōningu (Sealing Arts: Zoning Restriction) Type: Supplementary Rank: B Range: Short-Mid range Chakra: 20 Damage: N/A Description: The user will have a series of leaflets with the Kanji "停止" (Halt) inscribed upon them, that they will then toss across the battle field followed up with a kunai to pin them in place. These leaflets will cover an area mid-range around the target that will prevent them from leaving said area around them, thus restricting there movements to the marked out area around them, by way of a chakra barrier that can only be seen by doujutsu users. No harm is done to the target by touching the barrier as it is not physical in nature but instead chakra based. The user may opt to place themselves in the barrier, however since it is made from there own chakra, they may move in and out of the barrier freely. This barrier does not prevent jutsu from entering/exiting the barrier, only people and summons, including the summons of the one who placed the barrier. Notes:
- Requires Fuuinjutsu training
- Barrier lasts two turns
- No fuuinjutsu may be used on the turn of activation.
- Can only be taught by Shinta
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Declined Done before. DNR. And leaflets? Don't you mean paper tags or scrolls?
Kakusareta Waiyā no Tebukuro (Gloves of Hidden Wire) Type: Weapon Rank: S Range: Short-long Chakra: 40 (+10) Damage: 80 Description: The Kakusareta Waiyā no Tebukuro are a pair of black fingerless gloves, each one with a length of high strength, mono-filament wire produced in Amegakure that is all but invisible to the naked eye. These wires are drawn out manually through the finger opening of the gloves where they are then controlled using chakra for attack and/or defence. By channelling the users chakra through the wires and by using subtle finger movements, the wielder can manipulate the wires to slice through obstacles as dense as rock and can also be manipulated to wrap around limb to tear them off/apart. Using the combined wire from both gloves, the user can create a defensive perimeter short-range around themselves, slicing up any solid obstacle that tries to step within the boundary. This defencive ability prevents the user from performing hand seals or using complex jutsu above B-rank as well as any other wire glove based ninjutsu, and is only sustainable for two turns at a time. The extent of the users control over the wires is such that they can slice through and thus negate all weapons formed from the shadow shuriken jutsu and the Twin Rising Dragons technique. Notes:
- Any manipulation of the wires cost +10 chakra per turn though does not count towards the user jutsu slots.
- Specific attacks/abilities and defences against ranked jutsu of the wires require the use of a separate custom jutsu.
- Any wire based jutsu that usually requires shuriken, can be performed without them when using the wires from the gloves. For example, any jutsu that requires first pinning with a shuriken attached to a wire can be done by simple wrapping the wire around the target's limb instead.
- Wires are visible to those who posses a doujutsu and detectable by those who can sense chakra.
- Can only be used by those Shinta allows.
Summoning Animal: Zorilla Scroll Owner: LssJBroly Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: N/A Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
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Description and Background: The Zorilla is a small carnivorous animal which varies between 28cm - 30cm in length (not including the tail which can add an extra 20 or 30 cm to the animal's length). The Zorilla has long sharp claws on the forepaws, which are mainly adapted for digging but are also useful for climbing trees.
The Zorilla can inhabit a large variety of habitats. They are most often found in Savannas and semi-arid environments, however they can be found anywhere from coastal sand dunes to forests, high mountains and even swamps. In our world, you would find Zorilla's throughout the African continent.
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They are very efficient swimmers and climbers, however the Zorilla prefers terrestrial life and is a mostly nocturnal animal, but they have been known to forage around dusk and dawn.
When under threat, the Zorilla will growl and bark and fluff up its tail. If this does not scare off the threat, the growling rises to a high pitch scream and the Zorilla proceeds to turn around and emit a foul smelling substance from its **** glands much like a skunk does. These emissions, temporarily blind the threat and irritate the mucous membranes resulting in an intense burning sensation. These emissions are why the Zorilla is reknown for being the smelliest animal on earth, smellier than what people typically believe to be the stinkiest animal on earth; the skunk.
Additional information:
- The Zorilla is also referred to as the Striped Polecat
- The Zorilla is not a species of Skunk. [
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Declined DNR. To similar to the Skunk contract.
(Byakugan Oputikku Bimu) Byakugan Optic Beam Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: Mid Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user focuses chakra into the tenketsu near their eyes. Then they use shape manipulation to condense the chakra and make it more concentrated. The blast of chakra which is fired from the user's eyes is has enough power to penetrate the opponent's body and damage their chakra network. It can also be used to pierce the opponent if a lot of chakra is used.
Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by The JuubiGod
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Declined DNR. Don't copy other peoples techniques...
Resubmitting:
(Raiton: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Raiton Release: Blades of Honor
Rank: S
Type: Offense/supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will channel Raiton chakra into the earth, channeling it underneath the ground, and with one handseal, spears or lighting will errupt from the ground, under the opponent, stabbing him from underneath.
Note:
-Can be used up to 1 times in a battle.
-doujutsu's can see through ground and can respond to it.
-Only those who has mastered Raiton can use this.
-You can't use any other lightning jutsus in the same turn, hence it will take up all your Raiton chakra.
-In the next turn, you can't use any higher then a B-ranked lightning justu
-Can be taugh only by Dr. House Approved
(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Katon Release: Flames of Honor
Rank: S
Type: Offense/supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will channel Katon chakra into the earth, channeling it underneath the ground, and with one handseal, spears of Flames will errupt from the ground, under the opponent, stabbing him from underneath.
Note:
-Can be used up to 1 times in a battle.
-doujutsu's can see through ground and can respond to it.
-Only those who has mastered Katon can use this.
-You can't use any other suiton jutsus in the same turn, hence it will take up all your katon chakra.
-In the next turn, you can't use any higher then a B-ranked katon justu
-Can be taugh only by Dr. House
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Declined problem is that what you did with lightning was done already not only before with lightning but also with other elements all around. DNR.
(Sution: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Suiton Release: Waves of Honor
Rank: S
Type: Offense/supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will channel Suiton chakra into the earth, channeling it underneath the ground, and with one handseal, spears of blades make of suiton will errupt from the ground, under the opponent, stabbing him from underneath.
Note:
-Can be used up to 1 times in a battle.
-You can't use any other suiton jutsus in the same turn, hence it will take up all your suiton chakra.
-In the next turn, you can't use any higher then a B-ranked suiton justu
-Can be taugh only by Dr. House
(Fuuton: Yurushi no burēdo) - Wind Release: Blades of Forgiveness
Rank: S-ranked
Type: Offense / Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will stomp the ground, making a tunnel, and blows huge amounts of highly compressed air, forming blades of air into the ground, and with one handseal, blades of air will errupt from the ground, puncturing him from underneath.
Note:
-Can be used up to 2 times in a battle.
-doujutsu's can see through ground and can respond to it.
-Only those who has mastered Fuuton can use this.
-You can't use any other Fuuton jutsus in the same turn, hence it will take up all your Fuuton chakra.
-In the next turn, you can't use any higher then a B-ranked Fuuton justu
-Can be taugh only by Dr. House
-If the user uses it in mid range, it will inflict -30 damage, and if used in short range, the user dies.
(Fuuton: Yurushi no burēdo) - Wind Release: Blades of Forgiveness
Rank: S-ranked
Type: Offense / Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will channel Fuuton chakra into the earth, channeling it underneath the ground, and with one handseal, blades of fuuton will errupt from the ground, puncturing him from underneath.
Note:
-Can be used up to 1 times in a battle.
-You can't use any other Fuuton jutsus in the same turn, hence it will take up all your Fuuton chakra.
-In the next turn, you can't use any higher then a B-ranked Fuuton justu
-Can be taugh only by Dr. House
Note to checker:
-I took out the damage being inflicted to the user and took it down 1 usage per battle.
-Modified the description
You know the drill. Its opened for a new cycle of 3 techniques per user for one week counting from today.
As the one responsible for the Custom System, I must apologize to all members for the delays we've been experiencing in this thread and others. The recent staff changes but also the begining of the summer brought us new challenges and issues that delayed the checkings. In the summer, the older staff members generally get more busy in RL which translates in periods of less activity which in return delays some tasks. Hopefully it will also return to normal in the near future so please be patient and try to understand when a delay happens that is not because we are lazy, its because we simply can't get to every single thing at the same time.
Also, I must remind members to read the rules (check the first post of this thread), read the thread and get familiar with what is approvable and is not, etc. Tons of techniques still are submitted without abiding to the template for example and that is auto decline. And its ridiculous to have a submission declined because of incorrect chakra or damage info. Be smart and make sure your submission abides the templates.
Members currently banned from this thread:
Aízen; Offensive behavior
Gèckö; 4 cycles, Offensive behavior
Fusion Reborn; Not Following the rules
Crow Claw (Kuroukurou)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels raw chakra in their forarm(s) or shin(s). The user releases the chakra out and forms a scythe like blade of chakra. The user releases the chakra out of their forearms or shins and using shape manipulation, shapes the released chakra into a blade similar to a scythe. The blade is blue in color and can be as long as the user's arms. The blade is very sharp and dense enough to cut through the same rank attacks and below attacks because it is shape manipulation on another level so it is equal to A rank elemental ninjutsu jutsus. The difference between this and Chakra Scalpel for medical ninjas is that this technique does external damage and internal when slicing and can be used as a defense in some cases. Also Crow Claw can be used against elemental jutsus which Chakra Scalpel can't do.
X-Declined-X Fix the template and perhaps make this Wind release
Wind Release: Crow Claw (Fuuton: Kuroukurou)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels wind chakra in their forarm(s) or shin(s). The user releases the chakra out and forms a scythe like blade of wind chakra. The user releases the chakra out of their forearms or shins and using shape manipulation, shapes the released chakra into a blade similar to a scythe. The blade is grey in color and can be as long as the user's arms. The blade is very sharp and dense enough to cut through the same rank attacks and below attacks. The difference between this and Chakra Scalpel for medical ninjas is that this technique does external damage and internal when slicing and can be used as a defense in some cases. Also Crow Claw can be used against elemental jutsus which Chakra Scalpel can't do.
(Genjutsu: Sukuriyu Motte Temae)-Illusionary Arts: Screw With You Rank: A Type: Supplementary Range: Short-Mid Chakra Cost: 30 Damage Points: N/A Description: The user holds their hands together and releases a pulse of chakra and takes over the opponent's mind. The opponent is sent into a genjutsu where chains released from the ground and a chair comes from behind the opponent where the chains are coming from. The chains retrace into the chair and wraps around the opponent scraping him/her to the chair. The opponent then sees a clone of the user beside them. The clone holds a giant(the size Franken Stein from Soul Eater has in his head) screw in his hand. The clone starts to push the screw in the opponent's head. In reality, the opponent is bleeding from their mouth because of the pain and recieves fifteen damage.
-Only used twice per battle and only every two turns
-No other genjutsu used in the same turn and following turn
±± Declined ±± You can't make your opponent bleed without physically doing something to him. Its an illusion. It may cause mental stress, mental pain, it may fool his body into breathing faster or passing out, but it can't make him bleed in reality. That requires something that would physically harm him.
(Genjutsu: Sukuriyu Motte Temae)-Illusionary Arts: Screw With You
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user holds their hands together and takes over the opponent's mind(not literally). The opponent is sent into a genjutsu where chains released from the ground and a chair comes from behind the opponent where the chains are coming from. The chains retrace into the chair and wraps around the opponent scraping him/her to the chair. The opponent then sees a clone of the user beside them. The clone holds a giant(in the spoiler) screw in his hand. The clone starts to push the screw in the opponent's head. In reality, the opponent is immobilize. The opponent also suffer from mental pain and have their body be fooled into passing out.
-Only used twice per battle and only every two turns
-No other genjutsu used in the same turn and following turn -Immobilize for one full turn
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Drunken Fist Style: EST For Life (Suiken: Seikatsu no tame no suto)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after entering the Drunken Fist state, raises his hands in the with it in a "L" shape. The user yells out "EST For Life" and takes off towards the user by doing a jump, run(straight or around) or cutting flips(variety) or mix and match. The user once in range of the opponent, does a forward punch but also does another forward punch to the opponent with the opposite hand the user uses the first time. These punches are launched at different spots on the opponent and the last punch uses the Drunken Fist unpredictable ability and speed. The user does a headbutt to the opponent but the headbutt also knocks the user back into reality and out of the Drunk Fist state.
-Only used four times per battle
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(Suiton: Haisui Tebukuro) - Water Release: Draining Gloves Type: supplementary Rank: A Range: short - mid (short range, for making direct contact with the object) Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user manipulated water chakra in their hands and creates glove out of water. Whenever the user touches anything that contains water with the water gloves, the user removes the water of it, and it'll dry up. After the water is removed/drained, it will just fall on the ground, and if it's from a big object that contains a lot of water, e.i. a big tree, the water that is falling down, could even be used as a small water source. If this technique is used on wood, the wood would turn into earth.
-can only be taught by ~Khallil-Sama~
-the user needs to keep touching the object for removing the water from it, so the bigger the object that contains water, the longer it takes to remove fully it's water.
-If this is used on a person, you could perform it only on either the left leg, right leg, left arm, or right arm per time. So you can't fully drain the water from a person.
-The gloves can be activated for a maximum of 1 turn
-This technique could only be used twice per battle
-You can't perform handseals while this technique is activated.
-You can only use water techniques while this technique is activated.
(Fuuton: Tori no Furoa) - Wind Release: The Bird's Floor Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range:short-long Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A Description:The user performs the monkey handseal and manipulates the wind chakra in an area in the air, and created a horizontal barrier out of wind. The barrier stays on it's place and one cannot pass through it without canceling it out. The wind barrier iss like a layer in the air. The size of the wind barrier is limited by the amount of chakra spent in it. The Barrier could be placed at any (visible) height. It could prevent someone from going high into the sky somehow, or prevent someone to go down, or fall on the ground if he/she already is in the sky because of it's density, what also makes it possible to walk on it. The user can always manipulate the wind barrier, like placing it higher/lower, make it smaller/bigger, move it forwards/backwards/sidewards, create a gap in it, or close a gap or cancel it out.
-This technique can only be taught by ~Khallil-Sama~
-The user will lose 10 chakra points for every turn the barrier is maintained
-This technique lasts for a maximum of 3 full turns
-This technique could only be used twice per battle
-To control/manipulate the barrier, the user needs either to keep performing the snake handseal, or make direct contact with the barrier.
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Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR
(Katon: Muchi no īgurusu) - Fire Release: Eagles of the Whip Type: Attack Rank: S Range: short - long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description:The user will perform the Monkey>Tiger Handseals, and creates a 2 meter long thread of fire out of the fingertip and it'll act as a whip. The user swipes with the "fire whip" and hits the ground with it, while the opponent probably thinks it's meant to hit the opponent with it. When the fire whip hits the ground it'll dissolve/turn into countless small fire eagles that are sent at the opponent and attack him/her from all different angles and sides, following up with a big sized fire eagle, crashing into the opponent and burning him/her.
-This technique can only be taught by ~Khallil-Sama~
-Can only be used three times per battle
-No S rank or higher fire techniques the next turn
-No fire techniques at all in the same turn
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Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
( Ototon: Oreiasu no Hogo ) - Sound Release: Protection of the Oread
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage points: N/A (60 if hit by A-rank blast)
Description: The user would release their sound chakra around their body, allowing them to create 3 vibrating limbs of sound anywhere on their person, as well as an armour made of sound which would cover every inch of their body. The vibrating sound limbs would be clearly visible as they can be seen flickering due to the speed at which they vibrate, all whilst creating a low humming noise which can be heard by opponents short range away from the user. The limbs would have a physical presence, allowing them to counter physical attacks and deflect attacks from Kunais/Katanas with ease all whilst being able to send visible sounds of blasts (A-ranked) which would have the power to counter A-ranked Earth/Wood/Water and anything else which is able to be deflected/dispersed, however it has no affect on Fire or Lightning jutsus, and would simply phase through them. The length of the limbs can differ but they can't be made longer than 1 meter. Should the sound blasts hit the opponent, they'd be able to send the opponent flying whilst dealing blunt damage which would hinder the opponent in the battle as well as messing up their equilibrium slightly, causing them to lose their balance and their hearing. Moreover, the limbs can be used to launch punches and kicks which would let sound enter where the opponent was hit, making the nearest limb impossible to use for 2 turns as the vibrations numb the nerves and muscles surrounding the area hit. The armour would serve no defensive abilities to the user but would simply do what the limbs are capable of doing when physically hitting the opponent, which is numb the surrounding area, however with the armour, it would numb the nerves of the limb which the opponent hits the user with, whilst softening the impact slightly.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo
~ Can only be used twice; Lasts 3 turns.
~ No other sound jutsu whilst this is active
~ A-ranked Sound blasts count as one of the 3 moves per turn.
~ Must wait 2 turns after deactivation in order to be able to use the jutsu again.
(Ototon: Oreiasu no Hogo) - Sound Release: Protection of the Oread
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage points: N/A (60 if hit by A-rank blast. +20 if used in conjunction with Water)
Description: The user will begin by constantly emitting sound waves from their body and manipulating the sound to reverberate over and around every inch of their body in the form of an armor of sorts. The vibrating sound is clearly visible to the naked eye and can be seen flickering due to the speed at which they vibrate, all whilst creating a low humming noise which can be heard by opponents short range away from the user. While the sound is intangible, it has a certain ‘physical’ presence in that the sound can interact with solid, physical objects. To be more explicit, because the sound waves are constantly reverberating, they undergo compression and are capable of giving off concussive force due to accumulated sound pressure. As a result, the sound armor (A-ranked) can defend against physical attacks and easily deflect incoming weapons like kunai, shuriken and even sword strikes. Additionally, by concentrating the sound, the user can release blasts of compressed sound in the form of an (A-Ranked) projectile attack. These blasts of sound possess the power to counter Earth, Wood, Water and other solid or semi-solid attacks – basically anything that can be deflected or dispersed – of A-Rank and below. Because of their impalpable nature, the sound would have no effect on Fire or Lightning jutsu, instead phasing through them completely. Should the sound blasts impact the opponent, they’d send said person flying backwards whilst dealing blunt force damage. Enduring such a hit would also tamper with that person’s equilibrium, inhibiting hearing as well as noticeably disturbing the opponent’s sense of balance. Moreover, when the blasts of sound move through a body of water, the damage dealt is drastically increased. Just as the user can release blasts of sound in the form of projectiles, they can also physically attack the opponent in close quarters combat to deal damage, for example by punching or kicking. However, damage is dealt differently in this way. By physically hitting the opponent, the user can cause short term paralysis of the muscles and limbs in the area immediately surrounding the point of contact. This is not only because of the effect that the sound has on water, but because of how compressed the waves are at such a close range. When the user makes contact with the opponent to deal an attack, the sound waves propagate and ring throughout their body, dealing damage while disturbing the opponent’s conscious control over their own body. Attacks of this nature can only paralyze an opponent to the point that they can no longer “consciously” control their body. It does not impede any “unconscious” or automated activity - like brain and heart function – meaning that the paralysis itself is not life threatening.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo
~ Can only be used twice; Lasts 3 turns.
~ No other sound jutsu whilst this is active
~ A-ranked Sound blasts count as one of the 3 moves per turn.
~ Must wait 2 turns after deactivation in order to be able to use the jutsu again.
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Declined Sorry but this goes beyond the scope of Sound Release. How can you restrict the sound waves from going away from you to stay and form an armor? I mean, you can direct sound to a given target but sound is energy, it needs to travel from one point to another in a given medium. Thats sound. For me this is simply illogical in its basis.
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(Fūton: Shū no Yūwaku Burīzu ) - Wind Release: Shu's Tempting Breeze Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A simple jutsu used to combat against faster paced opponents, Shu's tempting breeze relies on the user to have faster moving opponents, who - once set off from their initial spot - can't control their speed and movement without effort. The user, upon seeing the opponent set off or prepare to set off would manipulate his chakra at the end of his finger tips (including thumbs) and extend multiple thin flexible 'wires' of almost transparent wind which can be manipulated to flow around the user, creating a barrier of slicing thin wind wires, making it impossible for things to bypass them as they continue to intertwine with each other. The user would be able to manipulate the wires, allowing him to not only create the barrier but also whip the wires of wnd outwards and reach for the opponent in an attempt to capture him/her whilst slicing their skin or even just pierce through their body. Although a simple move to counter, when used against faster moving opponents, the natural 'colour' of wind and the girth of the wires allows it to be extremely hard to see. Moreover, as a Wind jutsu, the user can also change the nature of the technique so that rather than its slicing abilities, the wires of wind combine to provide a large blowing force which can be used to push back enemies and summons of various sizes within reason.
~ Can only be used 2 times
~ Can only be taught by Erzo
~ Once used, must wait 1 turn before re-using.
~ No other wind jutsu higher than S-rank in same turn.
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Declined Wind Wires have been made before more than once and all follow this basic concept. Though you still have margin to come up with a different application to get away from the whole "wire" concept.
( Suiton: Pariakaka no Dākugifuto ) - Water: Pariacaca's Dark Gift
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Pariacaca's Dark Gift is a conversion jutsu which allows the user to - for a limited number of turns - give the same properties of '(Suiton: Kokuun) - Water Style: Black Clouds' to all of the users jutsus, allowing them all to turn into a black colour and become highly flammable all whilst still retaining their natural strengths and weaknesses. However, when faced against a Fire jutsu the same rank, the water would continue (at a weakened rank) whilst burning, allowing it to deal an extra 10 damage points. This damage increase can also be done by the user, if he/she manages to ignite the differently natured water themselves. The jutsu itself does not change the range or power of any water jutsus but simply converts, everything else relies on the water jutsu used during the turns this jutsu is activated. Moreover, water jutsus which may be used from behind or blind spots become easier to discover by opponent who have a good sense of smell due the smell given off by the oil-like black water. In addition to that, it also makes the user vulnerable as the water becoming flammable means he can't use jutsus which are based creating shields/armours of Water.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo
~ One used, must wait 2 turns before re-using.
~ Can only be used twice; Lasts 4 turns each time it's used.
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Declined Problem here: this would collide with Oil Release. The jutsu you're talking about supposedly makes it rain "oil" or an "oil-like" substance. By allowing you to use this you'll be essentially using all water techniques as if they were in fact oil. That cannot be allowed. DNR
(Suiton: Futago Doragon Fukushu) Water style:Twin Dragon's Revenge Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short/Mid Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 [+15 with lightning technique] Description: The user focuses suiton chakra in the palms of their hands. The user then performs the hand seals Tiger → Boar while releasing their chakra at the same time. They create a strong and fairly long stream of water extending from their palms. With their chakra, they manipulate the shape and shape the stream to a dragon (the long snake-like ones) They would have two dragon-shaped whips of water, one on their left hand and one on their right. These dragons attack with no miss, kind of like a guided missile, so any attempts to dodging this technique would be a fail. Another way of using this technique is by holding the tails, or in this case the end of the stream, and controlling it yourself. However, with this the opponent could dodge it and the success rate of this technique depends on the users accuracy. With the second way of wielding it, it could be used to hold down opponents and repeatedly whip them. Each dragon-shaped whip can extend up to mid range and about as big as your palms. The radius of the body, or the stream is about the radius of a cup. However, the radius of the body of the dragon would slowly expand as it gets longer, growing up to three feet.
Notes and restrictions:
- Can only be used three times per battle.
- Does not need a water source.
- Can not be used in the next turn.
- Can only be taught by EdwardSama
- You are able to add a lightning technique to it, increasing the damage by 15.
(Suiton: Mizu Kabe Dangan Danmaku) - Water Style: Water Wall Bullet Barrage Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 (-10 if performed underwater) Description: The user performs the Boar → Dog →Dragon handseals and concentrate their chakra in their two hands. They slam their hands on the water source, summoning two walls to come up in the left and the right of the target. The walls would be up to 15 feet tall and 15 feet wide. Each wall would count as A-ranks each, meaning that it can only be destroyed by the same way A-rank techniques are destroyed. The user can control how far the two walls are apart from the target. After the two walls made of water are in place, the user will use their chakra that was used to make the wall to make small bullets to attack the opponent. Each wall will produce up to 500 bullets for each wall, however all 1,000 will not hit because of the size of the target compared to the size of the wall. The wall will collapse after one turn because all the water used for the wall would have been used away with the bullets.
Notes and Restrictions:
- Can only be used twice per battle
- No S-rank suiton techniques in the next turn.
- Each wall counts as an A-rank suiton; meaning if one tries to destroy one of the walls, it would need to be a technique capable of destroying an S-rank
- If one wall is destroyed, the other walls bullets will only deal half the damage.
- The bullets are NOT capable of piercing like normal bullets, the damage dealt by the attacking bullets would be one like a punching feeling, but a lot more 'punches'. Like someone being repeatedely punched everywhere
- Can only be taught by EdwardSama
- Requires the target to be standing on a fairly large water source.
- This technique can be performed underwater as well, however if performed underwater, the damage will be -10 because the water underwater will slow down the speed of the bullets.
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Declined This is a copy of an earth technique already made. DNR.
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(Daburu Inferuno) - Double Inferno Type: Weapon Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 (+20 to fuse the two swords together) Damage: N/A Description: The Double Inferno is a twin sword, that when combined together, will form a double-bladed staff. It was handed down from generation to generation, until the unknown clan that had it passed away. The twin swords were forged by a master blacksmith who was well known for his weaponry, however, time passed by and information about the forger of the sword remains a mystery. The sword only cooperates with certain people who possess the will of fire and determination. Others who have tried wielding this legendary sword was killed by the two swords. The two swords act like normal swords; left one used for defending while the right one used for attacking. When you connect the two swords handles together, and release your chakra into the sword, it will go through a change where it becomes a double-bladed staff. This staff, unlike the twin swords, has the ability to release fire with its master/wielder. By exerting your chakra on the center of the staff, you would be able to perform Fire techniques using it. This sword is very sturdy and indestructible. It has a mind of its own and can somehow "speak" to its user by their chakras. By speak, i mean that they are able to warn you of incoming fire techniques because it has the ability to sense fire chakra in a persons body. In addition, this blade could pierce and destroy earth released up to B-ranks, because of the sturdiness and solidness of its blades.
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Notes and Restrictions:
- Can only be taught by EdwardSama
- Can only be in the fused form for a maximum of three turns.
- Can used fused form once per battle.
- When it is in fused form, the sword grants the user an ability to perform handseals for katon technique with one hand.
- Can do some fire techniques up to A-rank of the known element. (By some, i mean it can do fire techniques that comes out of a person's mouth, instead of the user using their mouth they channel their chakra in the sword and release it from the blades)
- The user can only use one hand to form handseals when it is in fused form.
(Daburu Inferuno) - Double Inferno Type: Weapon Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 (+20 to fuse the two swords together) Damage: N/A Description: The Double Inferno is a twin sword, that when combined together, will form a double-bladed staff. It was handed down from generation to generation, until the unknown clan that had it passed away. The twin swords were forged by a master blacksmith who was well known for his weaponry, however, time passed by and information about the forger of the sword remains a mystery. The sword only cooperates with certain people who possess the will of fire and determination. The two swords act like normal swords; left one used for defending while the right one used for attacking. When you connect the two swords handles together, and release your chakra into the sword, it will go through a change where it becomes a double-bladed staff. This staff, unlike the twin swords, has the ability to release fire techniques for its master/wielder, however, the techniques are limited. By exerting your chakra on the center of the staff, you would be able to perform some fire techniques by releasing it from the left blade. Only the left blade has the ability to perform fire techniques. This sword is very sturdy and indestructible. Lastly, the right blade in the picture is very sharp yet incredibly solid. It has the ability to destroy walls made of earth, up to A-ranks. Only the right blade has the ability of doing so
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Notes and Restrictions:
- Can only be taught by EdwardSama
- Can only be in the fused form for a maximum of three turns.
- Can used fused form once per battle.
- When it is in fused form, the sword grants the user an ability to perform handseals for katon technique with one hand.
- Can do some fire techniques up to A-rank of the known element. (By some, i mean it can do fire techniques that comes out of a person's mouth, instead of the user using their mouth they channel their chakra in the sword and release it from the blades)
- The user can only use one hand to form handseals when it is in fused form.
- After the maximum of three turns for fused form is up, you cannot use any fire techniques for one full turn.
Things i deleted from the weapon::
- Removed the communicating with the user through chakra.
- Removed the part where the weapon kills the user if they aren't compatible with them.
- Removed the ability to destroy earth releases up to B-ranks, made it more restricted.
Hopefully that took care of the too similar to existing weapons part :/
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Hakke: Fukyuu Aoikaen - Eight Trigrams: Eternal Blue Blaze
Rank: S
Type: Sup
Range: Close
Chakra: 40
Damage: 0 (+10 to Gentle Fist, +20 to Taijutsu)
Description: This follows the same principle and advanced chakra shape manipulation of gentle lion fist but instead of cladding both fist, an Hyuga would use this on a greater scale cladding his whole body in chakra.
The user after collecting great amount of his chakra into his core, spreads it while expunging a continous stream of chakra out of his whole tenketsu leaving the user claded in blue chakra that flickers with tiny bubbles at the edge. This technique allows a hyuga to expand his own tenketsus allowing easy and subtle flow of chakra in and out(Apparently the user chakra is neither created nor destroyed, meaning there is no chakra lost: "though maybe little due to bubbles" except when the user does a physical attack or a Taijutsu attack since chakra leaks out to the surface then goes back in and out, momentarily refreshing the user's chakra system every seconds) of his chakra system enhancing his body neuro-activity thus granting him double his base speed and agility.
Since the user is coated in this modified/advance chakra, if the opponent is hit by a taijutsu attack or a physical attack, Apart from the physcal damage they'll surfer, chakra from the user(the one he is coated in) would sink into them dealing internal damage in the area of impact.
While in the chakra coat, the user can form platforms of chakra at very great speed at very close proximity to his body to make quick manouvre and evasion(counts as a move), also presurrized chakra bubble can be form below the user's feet which serves as a propeller to cause a quick dash which is comparable to half Lee's speed without his wieght say 3rd gate speed(useable only twice).
The user's chakra system is automatically refreshed by the seconds due to movement of chakra to and fro the user thus is gives the user immunity against external chakra intrusion.
When the technique ends, the user is left exhausted and will have half of his base speed and agility for two turns and can only use it again once. However if he tries to use it the third time, he'll die)
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-The first usage last 4 turns with the user recieving +10 damage after technique ends, while the second usage last for 3 turns with the user recieving +15 damage after it ends.
-There is two turns of recess where the user is weak and diminished of his base speed and agility after each use
-No S-rank and Above Jyuken for 2 turns after use
-Must be an Hyuga
-Must be taught by Priest
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Declined This is nothing more than a mode for Gentle Fist... With tons of other added effects besides the added damage. Its too powerful and too over the top not to mention its exploitable.
Raiton: Ilektura - Lightning Release: Electra
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Electra is a type of lightning shadow clone which is distinct and unlike a normal lightning shadow clone, Electra is made of pure electical energy though it takes the complete form and likeness of the user or any human image the user pictures. Its distinct abilities takes to the whole properties of lightning
*Due to the fast nature, Has double the user's speed
*Can perform only and every Raiton element the user can use
*Since its made of pure lightning, it can be intagible to solid attacks, meaning physical attacks would pass through it and it would regenerate after it is struck by a jutsu that is not enough to destroy it completely. However when it wants to attack, it would condense the area it wants to use for it.(there is no visual difference in its tangible and intangible form)
*Its physical attack is equivalent to S-rank Lightning that is; its punch/kick carries an S-rank Lightning force having a paralising touch.
Electra stays on the field unless destroyed and information is distributed not only when it is destroyed into a burst of lightning energy but also while it is in the field as the user and electra shares the same field of vision.
Note:
++User can't use lightning technique while electra is on the field of play
++would reform/regenerate after taking A-rank and below damage except for wind
++Useable Twice and only one electra can be made at a time
++Leeches +5 from the user each turn it stays on field
++Electra can use only lightning element and Taijutsu/Kenjutsu
++Must be taught by Priest
Genjutsu: Maimei Hireki - Illusionary Art: Time will Tell
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Sup
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Point: N/A (+40 due to mental stress)
Description: An ageing curse. A genjutsu cast on the opponent where they feel they are far less energetic. This may be noticed when they are somewhat about to move or react to attacks and age has caught up with them with affects like having sudden back-ache when they try to bend causing their spine to snap, bone and joint pain, becoming slower when they run leaving them with severe muscle sprain, their brain functions slowly with them being unable to process things quickly thus making have low reaction time, They can lose sharpness in focus of their eyesight with things like seeing blurry images, Long and short sightedness or Astigmatism, color blindness and the likes. Others that can be felt by the victim is reduced lung capacity leaving him with increased want for air causing him to breathe heavily or gasp for air; Hearing loss making there overall hearing ability rapidly deficient and so temporarily deaf; Reduced mental and cognitive ability leaving the foe's ability to think clearly and focus drastically reduced thus them using genjutsu and jutsu that needs high chakra control is impaired; Depression and Memory loss. However there are more affects to this which shows signs of rapid ageing upon the opponent and is thus upto to the user's imagination but within reasoning.
In real life, the opponent suffers mental stress prior to the illusion and they mimics what happens to them in the illusion and with ones that hinders their movement, the opponent won't be able to move too.
NOTE
++As the illusion progresses and not broken from, Age continues to grow rapidly and at the end of 2 turns thus leading to chronic depression, High blood pressure, Hypertension and stroke making them pass out.
++Twice per conflict
++No S-rank and above genjutsu next turn
++Requires 4 Handseals Snake, Horse, Ram and Ox
++Must be taught by Priest
Genjutsu: Maimei Hireki - Illusionary Art: Time will Tell
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Sup
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Point: N/A (+40 due to mental stress)
Description: An ageing curse. A genjutsu cast on the opponent where they feel they are far less energetic. This may be noticed when they are somewhat about to move or react to attacks and age has caught up with them with affects like having sudden back-ache when they try to bend causing their spine to snap, bone and joint pain, becoming slower when they run leaving them with severe muscle sprain, their brain functions slowly with them being unable to process things quickly thus making have low reaction time, They can lose sharpness in focus of their eyesight with things like seeing blurry images, Long and short sightedness or Astigmatism, color blindness and the likes. Others that can be felt by the victim is reduced lung capacity leaving him with increased want for air causing him to breathe heavily or gasp for air; Hearing loss making there overall hearing ability rapidly deficient and so temporarily deaf; Reduced mental and cognitive ability leaving the foe's ability to think clearly and focus drastically reduced thus them using genjutsu and jutsu that needs high chakra control is impaired; Depression and Memory loss. However there are more affects to this which shows signs of rapid ageing upon the opponent and is thus upto to the user's imagination but within reasoning.
In real life, the opponent suffers mental stress prior to the illusion and they mimics what happens to them in the illusion and with ones that hinders their movement, the opponent won't be able to move too.
NOTE
++As the illusion progresses and not broken from, Age continues to grow rapidly and at the end of 2 turns thus leading to chronic depression, High blood pressure, Hypertension and stroke making them pass out.
++3x per match
++No S-rank and above genjutsu next turn
++Requires 4 Handseals Snake, Horse, Ram and Ox
++Must be taught by Priest
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Declined DNR. This is not an illusion you can cast without a Doujutsu even if we consider it an illusion. Also, never use the justify formatting code again or I won't check any submission of yours.
Summoning Animal: (Kuchiyose: Rekisen no Youhei Ekidona) - Echidna Scroll Owner: DrProof Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: N/A (not currently) Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A Description and Background: Echidnas are small, solitary mammals covered with coarse hair and spines. Superficially, they resemble the anteaters of South America and other spiny mammals such as hedgehogs and porcupines. They have elongated and slender snouts which function as both mouth and nose. They have very short, strong limbs with large claws, and are powerful diggers. Echidnas have tiny mouths and toothless jaws. The Echidna feeds by tearing open soft logs, anthills and the like, and using its long, sticky tongue, which protrudes from its snout, to collect prey. Echidnas cannot use an elemental affinity.
(Denki Senshingu) - Electro-Sensing Type: Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description: This is a passive ability granted to all Echidna, due to their unique capabilities of Electro-reception. All Echidnas can sense enemy presence distinguishing up to two people (400 electro-receptors; increases by 800 electro-receptors per bill size), but not including "how many" (due to their electro-sensors on their bills varying in size; meaning if an Echidna had 1,200 electro-receptors (medium-sized bill) the Echidna would be able to distinguish up to three people, and an Echidna in which has a long-sized bill would have 2,000 electro-receptors being able to distinguish a max of four people) Echidna's bills can only reach long-sized; 2,000 electro-receptors.
(Mamori Danryokusei) - Mamoru, The Protector Type: Defensive/Offensive Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 [To Wield] Damage: N/A Description: Mamoru meaning protect is a Shuang Gou (Hook Sword) in which was was found on the outskirts of Sunagakure. This weapon was wielded by the Shodai Kazekage, his dying words were "Protect Sunagakure". Soon after the Shodai Kazekage's death the Kanji Symbol 守る was engraved upon the blade's hilt, integrating the Shodai's Will. The second era hadn't the potential to measure up to the Shodai's Will, not even the Nidaime Kazekage could wield the blade, thus out of frustration, and loss of hope, this blade was thrown out into the hot desert of Sunagakure left there to be forever forgotten.. Constantly beat, and subjected to various wind storms, sand, debris, and the thirst quenching temperature of the desert; this allowed the blade to develop a resilient exterior, along with a few distorted features. This weapon possesses one ability, in which is triggered by the Shodai Kazekage's will.
Note: Can only be wielded by Sunagakure Shinobi.
Note: Can only be wielded by DrProof.
Note: The sword stays in play; even after the ability runs out.
Note: Elemental Affinities can't be channeled through the sword.
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Summoning Animal: Black Panther Scroll Owner: noni1997 Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
(Kchuysei- Kuroi kurohyou raitingu Thor) Summoning-Black Panther of Lighting Thor Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: Thor is a very genuine Panther. Its abilities are vast. He excel is lighting style jutsus. He has an amazing speed that when he hits his maximum speed it matches that of 4th gate. He is a rather large in length panther with a height of 200cm head to tail but is skinny. His best sense is the ability to smell out anything from a 200 meter radius. Small claws but a ferocious bite and very razor sharp teeth. Dark all around he also is a master at snick attacks at night time or when an opponent has his vision blocked. He can perform all lighting style jutsus ip to A-rank and is immune to all lighting style jutsu B-Rank or below.
- Can only be summoned 3 times in battle
- Must have completed lighting release
- Must sign the panther contract to summon
(Kchuysei- Kuroi Kurohyou mizu Amphitrite) Summoning- Black Panther of Water Amphitrite Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: Amphite is the water Panther and excels in all water jutsus. She is very powerful and intelligent. She also has amazing durability and flexibility which gives her the ability to dodge many attacks.She is small in length exactly 150 meters head to tail. Her best sense is taste, Able to taste anything in the area, she is able to figure out if there is any poison in a weapon because she is immune to most poisen and can also use her taste to find blood traces to recognize her opponent. Very dark fur giving her great ability for snick attacks also she has long claws which has a good reach in close range. She can perform all water jutsus up to A-rank and is immune to B-rank water or below.
- Can only be summoned 3 times in battle
- Must have completed water release
- Must sign the panther contract to summon
Description and Background:
They are member of the cat family. Black panthers are reported in plain areas and mountainous region or extremely hot temperatures in the Narutoverse most have been spotted either in Sunagakure or Kumogakure. They are large in body and are very dangerous, sharp claws and sharp teeth. There eye colors are either yellow or plain white. They are amazing at hunting especially through the night when they can take advantage of there fur color. There running speed have been seen to max out in 65 kilometres per hour. All have great abilities to climb trees. There height differ extremely as well, some can be as small as 90cm others at around 300cm in the Narutoverse. Panthers are keen in all 5 senses. Being able to smell from long distance , Has amazing hearing. There eye sight is also something to be hold able to pick out even the smallest prey. There sense of taste useful to find prey, and there sense of feel gives them the ability to figure out if there is enemy traces just by touching. They have a great sense in the darkness being able to move freely as if it was day due to there amazing senses.
Changes Made: I took out the animals tied to it and the boss, also added a little hint and power up for future panther summons (bolded)...That is it the description and background is left the same. The reason it was declined was because I surpassed the 3CJ a cycle limit.
Summoning Animal: Black Panther Scroll Owner: noni1997 Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: N/A Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A Description and Background:
They are member of the cat family. Black panthers are reported in plain areas and mountainous region or extremely hot temperatures in the Narutoverse most have been spotted either in Konohagakure or Kumogakure. They are large in body and are very dangerous, sharp claws and sharp teeth. There eye colors are either yellow or plain white. They are amazing at hunting especially through the night when they can take advantage of there fur color. There running speed have been seen to max out in 65 kilometres per hour. All have great abilities to climb trees. There height differ extremely as well, some can be as small as 90cm others at around 300cm in the Narutoverse. Panthers are keen in all 5 senses. Being able to smell from long distance , Has amazing hearing. There eye sight is also something to be hold able to pick out even the smallest prey. There sense of taste useful to find prey, and there sense of feel gives them the ability to figure out if there is enemy traces just by touching. They have a great sense in the darkness being able to move freely as if it was day due to there amazing senses. This is for normal panthers but there are some special panthers that can surpass the normal limit in abilities.
Ranton: ooarashi Storm Release: The Great Storm Type: Offensive-Defensive-Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: This is a core jutsu for storm release. The user with one hand seal can create walls, spikes, weapons, any other type of shape that can be used for attack or defense. This objects are made in the form of lasers for density, they can be made only short-mid range but thrown farther. The user can also control the movements of the storm constructs. Also the user can freely touch and interact with the constructs but the opponent can not and if they do touch them, will be shocked. the constructs stay on the field until they are countered or released by the user himself.
- Must Master Storm Release
- Creates only 1 item per use
Ranton: jimen no saaji Storm Release: Ultimate Ground Surge Type: Offensive-Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A Description: The user will focus storm chakra in their hand the slam both of them down on the floor. A short yet dark wide spread cloud with a electrical discharge will rise from the ground and cover the floor. The cloud is not dense enough to slow movement and it only goes up to the users knee in height. The clouds like most responds to large or quick amounts of friction. The cloud is harmless if regular speed movement occurs in it, regular sage rank running, jumping, rolling, etc. But if a high levels of movement occurs (EIG, Swift release, and other speed enhancing modes) the amount of friction that happens will enduce a short, painless but stunning electric jolt that instantly stuns the opponent towards there nervous system and slow them down back to there normal base speed. Also finally to prevent themselves from getting shocked as well they will channel storm chakra towards there legs and feet which will act as a barrier to the technique.
- Must have mastered Storm
- Can only be used 3 times in battle
- Slows the opponent down for 3 turn
- Jutsu stays active for 3 turns
- Can only use A-Rank Raiton and Suiton while the user is channeling storm chakra at there legs and feet
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All Declined Contract exists and you didn't quote the check the mod did to your previous submission where you submitted the contract. Doing that is against the rules. You're banned for one cycle.
(Suiton: Mizuchi Buresu) - Water Release: Mizuchi's Breath Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short - Long Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A Description: Through use of chakra the user is capable of rapidly materializing a swathe of mist in any desired location, provided the air not be completely arid. This mist remains to be exceptionally dense, thick and highly compressed, making it almost liquid like in composition. It's thickness playing a vital role in supporting its furthered transformation, as the mist itself remains to be exceptionally sticky. Therefore, entities that come in contact with the mist are quickly drenched in the sticky substance as the mist infests the clothes and slathers onto their body, at first resulting in inhibition, with prolonged exposure warranting complete restraint of limbs and such. Through the use of a basic hand gestures, the user is capable of granting simple, yet notably quick movement onto the mist, perhaps to follow an enemy in aims to restrict them. The size of the created mist can range from the size of a pebble, up until a size that would be capable of fully enveloping summons such as Sasuke's hawk. Despite simply being a mist, this technique at very least displays water prowess against fire techniques, being capable of withstanding and overpowering through the onslaught of A ranked fire techniques provided the mists size be suitable. Naturally the thickness of the mist greatly reduces the visibility of those caught within, especially due to its thickness.
- Can only be used x3
- No Suiton jutsu above A rank for the rest of the turn.
- Can only be taught by Vasto Lordé
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Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
(Ninjutsu: Ījisushīrudo) - Ninja Arts: Aegis Shield Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: A technique in which by releasing and compressing ones chakra, the user is capable of generating multiple hexagonal plates of chakra that layer unto their body so as to act as an armor. The plates remain to be slightly translucent, being translucent blue in color with a luminous pink stroke. The plates cover the users body in their entirety, bending and molding so as to allow the user free movement while still protecting them. The plates are comprised of highly concentrated compressed chakra and therefore are capable of standing on equal terms to Elemental Ninjutsu. Aside from the plates that cover the users body, several plates that enter a stationary orbit to the users body can be created, usually forming ring shapes and acting as an extra outer defense. Any and all of the plates can be rearranged and molded so as to create different weapons and shapes, however doing so may comprise the protection of the armor in pursuit for offensive ability. The plates can even be used as projectiles, the user being capable of firing them up to Long Range if they so wish. Any plates that are not currently active, (defending from attacks, moving according to the users wishes or being rearranged) shift their translucency to the utmost max, thus providing a near invisible armor defense.
- Can only be used x3
- No Ninjutsu above A rank for the rest of the turn
- Can only be taught by Vasto Lordé
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Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
(Genjutsu: Itazura Dearou) Illusionary Arts: Tricksters Will Type: Supplementary Rank: B-rank Range: Short - Mid Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description:
The user will bite his tongue causing it to bleed, he will then flow charka into it, this causes the wound to heal into a symbol he will also stick his tongue out. Once the seal is formed; The seal on his tongue is all part of the genjutsu; as soon as the users bites his tongue, the user has placed the opponent in the genjutsu, the user is able to employ different effects he calls tricks. One trick allows him to create an identical copy of himself, and will disappear only after it is attacked. Another trick allows him to change into animals or impersonate other people. However, he does not gain the abilities of whatever he turns into, although minor natural abilities such as flight in bird form tend to work. Despite being a genjutsu based attacks, it is near impossible to tell the difference, from a copy or if he changes form. Though what makes this jutsu dangerous is that fact he is able to use it a any time without another knowing it is in use. The opponent is left confused and minor metal damage is given.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per-match
- Can only use one of the effects at a time
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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X-Declined-X You mentioned the details really well but failed to explain how they are relevant, how is this genjutsu cast again?
(Genjutsu: Itazura Dearou) Illusionary Arts: Tricksters Will Type: Supplementary Rank: B-rank Range: Short - Mid Chakra: 20 Damage:N/A Description:
The user will bite his tongue causing it to bleed, he will then flow chakra into it, this causes the wound to heal into a symbol he will also stick his tongue out as soon as the user sticks his tongue and shows the marking on his tongue, the user has placed the opponent in the genjutsu. The user is able to employ different effects he calls tricks. One trick allows him to create an identical copy of himself, and will disappear only after it is attacked. Another trick allows him to change into animals or impersonate other people. However, he does not gain the abilities of whatever he turns into, although minor natural abilities such as flight in bird form tend to work. Despite being a genjutsu based attacks, it is near impossible to tell the difference, from a copy or if he changes form. Though what makes this jutsu dangerous is that fact he is able to use it a any time without another knowing it is in use. This genjutsu doesn't do any metal harm, as the "tricks" are well, simply tricks; but the opponent is left sightly confused on what just happened.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per-match
- Can only use one of the effects at a time
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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Declined DNR. Its a copy of effects achieved by existing genjutsu techniques.
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(Suiton: Amatsu Ketsuretsu) Water Release: Heavenly Rupture Type: Offensive Rank: S-rank Range: Mid - Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description:
After weaving the hand signals Dog → Tiger → Dragon → Monkey → Ram → Rat → Horse → Dragon, the user manipulates the as many water droplets in the atmosphere as they can, condensing the water until a gigantic sphere of water is visible in the sky. At the user's command, the water sphere rapidly spins and descends on the target at a incredible speed, shaping itself similar to a tornado. However, there is no inside vortex, which allows the technique to retain its immense water pressure. Upon making impact, the technique takes on a wave appearance and spreads in a circle. Anything struck by the wave is pinned down the ground until the flooding is over, unless they drown or were crushed first. This technique can cover a diameter of almost a kilometre and the flood can be as deep as ten feet if enough water is gathered.
This technique is powerful, but it requires an incredible amount of water, chakra, and mental focus. The best way to use this technique is before a storm or near a large body of water, where water is readily available.
Notes:
- Can only be used once per-match.
- Requires a large water source.
- No water techniques in the same turn as this.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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Declined A km? really? >_> Should I say more?
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(Fūton: Uzu no Yoroi) Wind Release: Vortex Armor Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defensive Rank: S-rank Range: Short - Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description:
The user will perform the hand seals Dragon → Monkey → Horse → Hare; This technique conjures an aura of shredding winds around the user. In actuality, this technique is a two-fold defense. First, a layer of pressurized and compressed air is "hardened" and generated around the body of the user, coating the skin. A second layer then swirls around the body at intense speed. This outer layer is the emphasis of the technique: the wind is moving and revolving at such a high speed that it effectively slices and cuts whatever it comes into contact with.
This technique can be used either defensively or offensively. In terms of defence, it offers an excellent deterrent to close quarters combat and other techniques, namely projectiles, as the winds will tear and disrupt whatever gets close. What makes it so dangerous is that the "armour" creates powerful counter-winds that are shown to be able to easily put out B-rank and below techniques fire techniques, as well as deal serious damage to the opponent. A constant stream or a larger, powerful and coordinated attack could breach the barrier. In terms of offence, this skill has good synergy with taijutsu, adding a layer of protection while lending physical strikes the devastating power of tearing winds.
Notes:
- Can only block B-rank and below fire techniques
- Can only block one B-rank
- Can only be used once per-match
- No wind techniques after the use of this
- Armor lasts for three turns unused
- Can only be taught by Nathan
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Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
(Fuuton: Manako no Shippuu) – Wind Release: Eye of the Gale
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A (+20 damage to anything which moves through the portal)
Description: The user will perform the Rat Handseal before focusing their fuuton chakra into the air at any location on the battlefield to generate a small, flat disc-shaped construct of wind, either near their location or the opponent's. A unique ability possessed by the portal of wind is any solid/liquid objects, constructs or techniques passing through it will have their cutting capabilities greatly amplified, as the disc of wind provides them with a green coating of wind chakra much like the one produced in Wind Release: Vacuum Blade. The layer of wind will amplify a construct's cutting properties to the extent, a thrown rock will become as destructive as a bullet, making this technique a very formidable weapon despite its non-offensive nature. This technique will only amplify the cutting capabilities of solid or liquid constructs e.g. rocks, kunai, bullets of water and etc, whilst only blocking/weakening any Fire/Lightning-based elements which attempt to pass through it. One disadvantage to the technique is, the opponent can also benefit from this technique if their thrown projectiles or techniques manage to pass through the portal, making this jutsu a very double-edged sword. The portal itself can have a maximum diameter of five meters and for any solid/liquid constructs to benefit from the cutting enhancement, they must be projectiles capable of fitting through it completely.
Note: Lasts for Three turns
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: Can only be used four times per battle
Note: Cool down time of two turns in between uses
Note: Does not enhance speed of projectiles/techniques
Note: Only amplifies cutting capabilities of solid or liquid constructs
X-Declined-X I get the lightning part, but Fire is natural weakness to Wind. Explain why
(Fuuton: Manako no Shippuu) – Wind Release: Eye of the Gale
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A (+20 damage to anything which moves through the portal)
Description: The user will perform the Rat Handseal before focusing their fuuton chakra into the air at any location on the battlefield to generate a small, flat disc-shaped construct of wind, either near their location or the opponent's. A unique ability possessed by the portal of wind is any solid/liquid objects, constructs or techniques passing through it will have their cutting capabilities greatly amplified, as the disc of wind provides them with a green coating of wind chakra much like the one produced in Wind Release: Vacuum Blade. The layer of wind will amplify a construct's cutting properties to the extent, a thrown rock will become as destructive as a bullet, making this technique a very formidable weapon despite its non-offensive nature. This technique will only amplify the cutting capabilities of solid or liquid constructs e.g. rocks, kunai, bullets of water and etc, whilst only blocking/weakening any Lightning-based elements which attempt to pass through it. One disadvantage to the technique is, the opponent can also benefit from this technique if their thrown projectiles or techniques manage to pass through the portal, making this jutsu a very double-edged sword. The portal itself can have a maximum diameter of five meters and for any solid/liquid constructs to benefit from the cutting enhancement, they must be projectiles capable of fitting through it completely.
Note: Lasts for Three turns
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: Can only be used four times per battle
Note: Cool down time of two turns in between uses
Note: Does not enhance speed of projectiles/techniques
Note: Only amplifies cutting capabilities of solid or liquid constructs Note: Does not affect Fire or Wind-based techniques
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Declined Ok...I understand that this would or could be used to accelerate things passed by it but I don't see how a "disk" of wind can be used to give cutting properties to something just by it passing inside it. And the result is what? an X/Wind release attack or an X release attack? This should only be used short range from you.
(Fuuton: Magunechikku Teishi) – Wind Release: Magnetic Suspension
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will perform a sequence of two handseals before focusing their fuuton chakra into the air around the opponent to generate two identical portals of wind (above and below them) similar in size to the whirlpool formed in Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion. Almost immediately, the portals will connect up to one another to form a cylindrical column-like prison of air around them. In perfect synchronization with this, the bottom portal of wind will begin pushing/blowing the opponent upwards, whilst the top one of wind sucks the opponent in with immense suction power, leaving them helplessly suspended in the air at the top of the wind tunnel. As soon as this happens, both constructs of wind will then simulatenously cease their effects (suction and repulsion) before the ground-level portal lets forth an upward barrage of slicing blades, aimed to cleanly cut through the opponent and anything which blocks their path.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: No S-Rank or above Wind in the user's next turn
Note: Upper portal of wind is created ten meters above the opponent(s)
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Declined Similar to existing techniques. DNR.
Batoidea Jutsu: Sutingā no kakudai | Batoidea Arts: Stinger Expansion
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A technique which allows the user to expand Stingers through use of chakra, allowing them to become larger in size, weight, and potency in a similar manner to the ‘Giant Shuriken Technique’. The expansion size is proportionate to the size of the targeted Stingray barbs, for instance a senbon sized barb could be expanded to reach a maximum size large enough to skewer a small summon such as Sasuke’s Hawk. Several Stingers can be targeted for this technique, or alternatively the user can target a specific area for this technique, enabling expansion for all Stingray barbs within that specific area. Naturally, this technique also expands/duplicates venom, allowing ratios to stay intact. Unfortunately, the expansion area is limited to a 3 meter radius, limiting the amount of barbs that can be expanded without having to visually single them out.
Note:
- Can be used by both Contract signers/summoners, and Stingrays. If used by a Stingray boss the size increase and expansion area can be up to 2x as large.
- Can only be used 2x by a boss, and 3x by a human/normal Ray. Can only be used a maximum of 3x regardless of the user.
- Stingers, shards can all be expanded.
