[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[House]

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(Hakke Shīru no hōfuku) 8 Trigrams Seal Retribution
Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Himself
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Once foreign chakra had entered the user's body, he may hold his finger up to wherever the foreign chakra resides/takes affect, thus letting out a sharp condensed chakra into the chakra point through the chakra system, around the area in order to discharge the foreign chakra out of the body/to disturb the chakra flow in the area for two turns. As this happens, the chakra points on the opposite side of the limb/body will discharge the foreign chakra. This jutsu is also good if the foreign chakra has entered the user's body, but if the user has a direct contact with the enemy, he may discharge this foreign chakra back into the opponent.
Note:
~Can be done 3x in a battle.
~Harmless to the opponent
~Can be taught by Dr. House
~No S-rank or higher elemental chakra for the following turn

±± Declined ±± Why would you want to do this? Because , if its for Genjutsu, you do know this wouldn't dispel genjutsu right? Not with the concept it currently has


(Hakke Kakureta sainō) 8 Trigrams Hidden Talents
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the abilities where a hyuuga member is able to emit a sharp chakra line through his palms, he'll be able to access one's chakra system. As this sharp chakra line had impaled one's body, the user will be able to access the enemies' chakra system as the chakra from the chakra line has infected the system, by sending chakra/going through the paths of his chakra system. As the chakra spread through the chakra system, it will completely stun his body/disturbing chakra flow for a turn, or ti'll the user is connected to the opponent.
Note:
~It won't hurt the opponent, only paralyze him for a turn or ti'll the user is connected to the opponent.
~The chakra line is just as fast as hinata shown using it to create a barrier.
~Can be used 2x in a battle.
~Dr. House may teach it.
~No S-rank or higher elemental chakra for the following turn

±± Declined ±± OP


(Hakke Shatā tamashī) 8 Trigrams Soul Shatter
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Himself
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 in each turn)
Damage Points: N/A (+10 Ninjutsu / +10 Taijutsu)
Description: The hyuuga member will focus his chakra throughout his body, thus using his excellent chakra control over his body, turns his whole body into raw chakra. In this state, he is able to be one with his jutsus and is able to take any physical damage. While active, the appearance of the user's chakra system can be seen and the shroud of chakra which makes up the body. The user may use his elemental chakra affinity while this is active. The elemental chakra affinity can only be used in the way of shaping the raw chakra which makes up the user's body. To go into more deeper, the user won't be able to make any techniques which is only the affinity the user has, but only to use it as a shape manipulator of the raw chakra.
Note:
~Can only use his elemental affinity and no other elemental techniques.
~Two jutsus in every turn while this is active
~Only kages or higher
~Can be taught by Dr. House
~Useable once per battle
~Lasts 4 turns
~When this ends, user may only use elemental chakra up to A-rank for the next 3 turns.


±± Declined ±± OP and the description has serious flaws.

 

[~Rihan~]

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(Genjustu: irixyu-jon) Genjustu Style: Kyōka
Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short- Mid Range
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user activates their third tomoe sharigan, and looks the enemey in the eye's putting them in a genjustu. The genjustu distorts an enemy's perception of him by creating an illusion akin to an afterimage, making him think someone's there when they're really no one there but a illusion
- Requires Third Tomoe
- Can only be use 3 times
- Last 3 Turns


(Genjustu: kanchi) Genjustu Style: Meikyō Shisui
Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short- Mid Range
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user activates the thrid tomoe sharigan, and looks the enemy in the eye's. And when they've made eye contact, the user's pressence complete disseapers. Making the enemy unaware of his presence, even if they were looking straight at him
- Requires Third Tomoe
- Can only be used 3 times
- Last 3 Turns



(Genjustu: kaonajimi) Genjustu Style: Love & Pain
Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short- Mid Range
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user activates their third tomoe sharigan, and look into the enemy's eye's and once they've made eye contact. The user perception and hearing is changed, so enemy's look like friend while friend looks like enemy. Making the enemy attack them, thinking they're enemy's and even if they try to convince him through word it wont work because they're voice sound like the enemy's
- Requires Third Tomoe
- Can only be used once
- Last 3 turns

~ None of them deserve to be an S-rank. ~

 

[McKnockout]

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(Futon: Migoto Inmetsu) - Wind Release: Beautiful Destruction
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (+15 per turn)
Damage Points: 90 (+15 if ignited by fire)
Description: The user concentrates his Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding his opponent which allows him to manipulate the air around his opponent. By using their mastery of chakra control and Fuuton Release, the user is able to create up to two dozen of highly pressurized air bubbles (about the size of tennis balls) that glisten in the light and have a prismatic rainbow effect on any light that passes through each bubble (this is just for cosmetic effects and allows the opponent to recognize the jutsu). Each bubble will detonate on contact with the target or at the user's will. That is, each of these bubbles contain a humongous amount of pressurized air within them and when the film of chakra enclosing them is disrupted, the pressurized air is violently released outwards in a large explosion (to fill the void created by the pressure gradient i.e. the pressurized air inside the bubbles rush outwards into the atmosphere to balance out the difference in air pressure). The pressure/force resulting from each detonated bubble is enough to blow a significant hole out of a large building. However this jutsu requires a very large amount of chakra to be used which has unwanted effects on the user.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: User takes 25 damage due to chakra and mental strain.
*Note: The user's speed is reduced in half for 3 turns after activation.
*Note: No technique above S-Rank for 3 turns after usage.
*Note: No S rank or above wind techniques the same and next 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

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-Declined-
Amount of hand seals you need to perform? Add that the spheres appear at 10 meters distance from the opponent and that you need to perform one more hand seal to detonate them. Remove the +15 damage caused by a fire technique. Define that mental strain. Which is the radius of the explosion of each sphere?

(Futon: Migoto Inmetsu) - Wind Release: Beautiful Destruction
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (+15 per turn)
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user performs three handseals (Tiger -> Hare -> Ram) and concentrates his Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding his opponent which allows him to manipulate the air around his opponent. By using their mastery of chakra control and Fuuton Release, the user is able to create up to two dozen of highly pressurized air bubbles (about the size of tennis balls) that glisten in the light and have a prismatic rainbow effect on any light that passes through each bubble (this is just for cosmetic effects and allows the opponent to recognize the jutsu). The bubbles can only be created at a minimum distance of 10 meters from the opponent. Each bubble will detonate on contact with the target or at the user's will (which would require the user to perform an additional handseal). That is, each of these bubbles contain a humongous amount of pressurized air within them and when the film of chakra enclosing them is disrupted, the pressurized air is violently released outwards in a large explosion (to fill the void created by the pressure gradient i.e. the pressurized air inside the bubbles rush outwards into the atmosphere to balance out the difference in air pressure). The pressure/force resulting from each detonated bubble is enough to blow a significant hole out of a large building; with the radius of each explosion to be roughly several metres. However this jutsu requires a very large amount of chakra to be used which has unwanted effects on the user.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: User takes 25 damage due to chakra and mental strain (due to the high amount of mental concentration required in order to perform and maintain such precise charka control).
*Note: The user's speed is reduced in half for 3 turns after activation.
*Note: No technique above S-Rank for 3 turns after usage.
*Note: No S rank or above wind techniques the same and next 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout
~Declined~ You still did not clearly specify the explosion range of the bubbles, "Several meters" is too vague. As far as restriction goes you pretty much sugar coated them. You and I both know 25 damage to the user in our RP is nothing, neither is stating that mental concentration. If you can't utilize techniques above S rank for three turns after usage, why did you include that last note of not being able to perform S rank or above wind techniques for the next two turns when you weren't going to be able to either way?Sugar coating isn't going to work on such ranked techniques.

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(Genjutsu: Kanchi O-ba-ro-do) - Illusionary Arts: Perception Overload
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs two handseals (Horse -> Monkey) to use Kanchi O-ba-ro-do.
Kanchi O-ba-ro-do is a powerful and surprisingly simple technique which allows the user to alter the target's ability to sense external stimuli in quite a unique manner. Under normal circumstances a person is unable to detect a stimuli until it has reached a certain intensity referred to as the absolute threshold. It is the body's natural mechanism to allow a person to block out unnecessary stimuli that would otherwise be distracting and preventative to accomplishing a focused goal. As such the body constantly sends a multitude of sensory signals that aren't registered by the brain. That is, the absolute threshold is the lowest intensity at which a stimulus can be detected; stimuli with intensities lower than this threshold are not registered by the brain. This technique effectively removes the mind's ability to block out these sensations i.e. removes the absolute threshold. This means that target(s) under its effect has all of their senses magnified/sensitized to all stimuli in and around him to the point that it clouds/completely engulfs their mind's ability to focus on anything but what they are sensing. In most cases this will immediately cause a target to fall into a comatose-like state due to the mass of information that is being channeled from every single one of their nerves. However, these effects are only temporary as the target's mind will eventually reestablish the sensory limitations over the course of roughly five minutes.
*Note: Can only be used twice.
*Note: No genjutsu in the same turn.
*Note: Must wait two turns to use again.
*Note: No technique above S-Rank in the same turn.
*Note: The target must counter/release this genjutsu in his countering turn or he'll lose consciousness at the beginning of the users following turn (from the pain and mental strain).
*Can only be taught by McKnockout
-Leaving both for other mod-
~ Both Declined. Both your Genjutsu actually affect his mind and beliefs. For a Gen, this is impossible. It cannot actually lower his absolute threshold. Five MINUTES ? That's an insta-win, when battles change in seconds. ~

(Genjutsu: Kanchi O-ba-ro-do) - Illusionary Arts: Perception Overload
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs two handseals (Horse -> Monkey) to use Kanchi O-ba-ro-do.
Kanchi O-ba-ro-do is a powerful and surprisingly simple technique which allows the user to alter the target's ability to sense external stimuli in quite a unique manner. Under normal circumstances a person is unable to detect a stimuli until it has reached a certain intensity referred to as the absolute threshold. It is the body's natural mechanism to allow a person to block out unnecessary stimuli that would otherwise be distracting and preventative to accomplishing a focused goal. As such the body constantly sends a multitude of sensory signals that aren't registered by the brain. That is, the absolute threshold is the lowest intensity at which a stimulus can be detected; stimuli with intensities lower than this threshold are not registered by the brain. This technique effectively removes the mind's ability to block out these sensations i.e. removes the absolute threshold. This means that target(s) under its effect has all of their senses magnified/sensitized to all stimuli in and around him to the point that it clouds/completely engulfs their mind's ability to focus on anything but what they are sensing. In short, the target's sense of touch becomes extremely sensitive (i.e. hypersensitive) under this technique. In most cases this will immediately cause a target to fall into a comatose-like state due to the mass of information that is being channeled from every single one of their nerves. However, these effects are only temporary as the target's mind will eventually reestablish the sensory limitations after several seconds.
*Note: Can only be used twice.
*Note: No genjutsu in the same turn.
*Note: Must wait two turns to use again.
*Note: No technique above S-Rank in the same turn.
*Note: The target must counter/release this genjutsu in his countering turn or he'll lose consciousness at the beginning of the users following turn (from the pain and mental strain).
*Can only be taught by McKnockout
~Leaving for Emperor~
~ Again, and I said this before, a Genjutsu CANNOT actually reduce his absolute threshold. ~

 

[Baldy]

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(Kadou Mizu Norimono)- Water Release: Mobile Water Vehicle
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A - 60 if you use this to attack
Description: First off, the user focuses chakra through their feet, before materializing a huge spiraling stream of water from under their feet, forceful enough like a huge tidal wave beneath the user's feet, to launch them into the air. Furthermore, the wave can be rode easily. The stream of water allows the user to ascend high into the air, a dozen or so meters that can be used to avoid primary attacks. Once in the air, the stream of water, unlike Exploding Colliding Wave, the stream is like a torrent of water that can be controlled and manipulated at will, like a huge animal carrying a person wherever they want. The user can ride this wave to anywhere in mid-range, at high speeds. The wave impact itself, when crushed upon an opponent, can be devastating, carving the earth. Aside from that, the user, can, jump off the stream of water, and make the water particles separate into multiple water pellets that are shot individually and controlled at the opponent, they cover an expansive range that is not easily avoided.

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by me
• Only usable 3 times per battle
• Cooldown period of 2 turns before using it again
• Second action, the water pellets, can only be done once the entire battle
• No S-rank and above Water techniques during the duration of this jutsu, and the turn after that.
• User must retain concentration to form the water pellets.

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.
(Kyodaina Mizu Hanmā)- Water Release: Titanic Water Hammer
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user jumps into the air, and materializes a huge mass of water in his hands. He then molds the water into a gargantuan water hammer, with both weight and density. The water's manifests itself as a single elephantine and hard entity, in which the user, carrying the Titanic Water Hammer with great effort, slams the Titanic Water Hammer down on the opponent, like someone batting a fly. The immense power and weight that the hammer holds crushes the opponent, and smacks them silly including death possibly. Also, the descend of the water hammer is extremely fast, with its great weight with gravity's aid, giving minimal time to react. After using the technique, it leaves the user slightly fatigued and their hand seal speed is slower, given that he used much strength in lifting the water hammer.

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by me
• Only usable 2 times per battle
• Cooldown period of 3 turns
• No S-rank and above Water techniques during this turn, and the turn after
• Leaves the user slightly fatigued

~Declined~ Exactly how big is the hammer? And remove the possible death/giving minimal time to react. We all have different biographies with different abilities, there is no way for you to know how much time they have to react whether it be a lot or not. Also I'd like to you clearly specify the "Leaves the user slightly fatigued, because as it stands it is merely a sugar coated restriction.
(Suijin no Hageshī Ikari)- Water Release: Wrath of the Water God
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user infuses and mixes his own chakra with the water vapor and moisture in the air all around the battlefield. With his chakra mixed with the entire battlefield, he commands the water at his beck and call. Within moments, the user can materialize a sudden flow of gushing water, a spherical shield, or a projectile for attack. This forms of water can be used to attack, defend, or support. The water can be created anywhere on the battlefield, to attack the opponent, or to create a water source, or to suddenly defend against an attack quickly. The user can basically do 'anything' with water on the battlefield, for whatever purpose. This volume of water that is materialized can be directed and molded into specific shapes as well. Of course, this materialization of water, or so to say, cannot be created within a five meter radius circle of the opponent. Also, the water can be manipulated freely as well. It of course comes with heavy recoil.

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by me
• Only usable 1 time per battle
• No more S-rank and above Water techniques for the rest of the battle
• No water techniques at all for the next 3 turns
• No water techniques the turn before using this technique
• The volume of water cannot be too large, and must be reasonably sized (Eg. a cube of water roughly 5 meters in height of so)
• 2 times a turn, a volume a water can be materialized on the battlefield.
• Technique's effect lasts for 3 turns
• Leaves the user extremely fatigued after using this technique
• Cannot be created anywhere near the opponent(5 meter radius)

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.
Feel free to edit anything you wish ^^
O_____O

 

[Alucard]

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20. (Takamagahara: Hiketsu) ~ High Plain of Heaven: Rejection
Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: This technique makes use of Takamagahara's ability to disrupt chakra. In this technique, upon being attacked, the user will swing Takamagahara, while the sword uses its unique ability, literally slicing through an opponent's techniques. The user can opt, however, to mix some of his chakra with Takamagahara's, creating a ring of chakra around the tip of the sword, which has the ability to disrupt an incoming technique and will then be shoot forwards, cancelling it.
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*It can only defend from techniques up to S-rank and only one per usage.
*Can only be used twice per battle.

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(Takamagahara: Chakra Houtou) – High Plain of Heaven: Chakra Dissipation Technique
Rank: B-S
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (B-rank); 30 (A-rank); 40 (S-rank)
Damage Points: -
Description: Then, The user makes use of Takamagahara’s chakra disruption abilities by cutting through the opponent’s attacks. The user can opt, however, to create a ring of chakra around the tip of the sword, which has the ability to disrupt an incoming technique and will then be shoot forwards, cancelling it. Though its usage may not be that effective against water or earth based attacks, since once used to attack the user, may continue with its momentum, it’s quite useful against energy based attacks like wind, lightning and fire, completely dissipating them. This technique can only dissipate attacks up to the same rank used
- B-rank can be used 3 times per battle
- A-rank can be used 2 times per battle
- S-rank can be used 2 times per battle
- It can only disrupt/cancel one jutsu per usage
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(Takamagahara: Antacchaburu) ~ High Plain of Heaven: The Untouchable One
Rank: S
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will flow some chakra through Takamagahara to activate its chakra disruption abilities. Takamagahara will then start to emit chakra all around the user, forming a cloak of chakra around the user. This cloak disrupts any chakra other than the user's chakra signature to act, short range from him. This technique cannot prevent the user from being harmed, as fire, lightning, wind blasts, etc, will still damage him, but it will mess up any kind of chakra manipulation short range from the user, being an extremely effective technique for close range combat. It renders any kind of taijutsu involving chakra enhancement or manipulation useless, leaving the user vulnerable only to the physical damaged caused by kicks and punches.
- Usable twice per battle
- Lasts three turns
- Takamagahara cannot use any other technique or ability while this technique is active. Doing so will immediately cancel this jutsu.
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Weapon for reference:
(Takamagahara) ~ High Plain of Heaven

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - (Mid When shooting needles)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: - (60 When shooting needles)
Description: Takamagahara is a large living sword comparable in size to the Kubikiribōchō. This sword was created before Samehada, but soon abandoned and sealed away when Samehada was created, as it was significantly stronger than Takamagahara.
Takamagahara is very similar in appearance with Samehada, the only difference being that the actual blade is covered in needles instead of scales, which can be shoot to inflict damage. It is also covered in bandages and inflicts shredding or shaving damage rather than cutting what it comes into contact with. While it ordinarily remains rigid, Takamagahara is able to stretch and bend to a great extent (the same range Samehada can extend), allowing it to be used like a flail.
Takamagahara has the ability to disrupt chakra and it can be used in two ways: to disrupt the chakra of an incoming technique and disperse it (mostly energy based techniques like fire, lightning and wind) and to disrupt the chakra flow in the opponent's chakra pathway system.
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Note: All of the sword's abilities will be submitted as custom techniques techniques, which obviously will count towards one of my three moves per turn, except the ability to shoot needles which is part of the sword. The sword can shoot needles up to three times per match, and every time it does it count toward the user's three moves per turn.
Note: The sword can disrupt mostly energy based attacks since that energy can be disrupted and dispersed. Solid attacks, like water or earth, can also be cancelled, but it depends on the attack itself. If it's a rock or wave of water coming at me, i can't cancel that, but creatures made of water or earth for example, can be cancelled by disturbing the chakra which is maintaining them ''alive''. This way they loose their form and turn into rocks or a lake, depending on the element they are made of.

 

[Lucifer]

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Amaimon) - Summoning Technique: Amaymon
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and mighty

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, the earth emperor, Amaymon is a very large Gryphon and is able to carry a total of five people on his back, he is the exact same size as gamahiro, Amaymon usualy wears silver armor, which protects him from kunai's and basic weapons, as seen in the picture, but what makes him special is his looks his fur/feathers are goldish/silver of color, with the tip of his feathers colored light brown, and his eyes are the color of the desert repersenting his elemental affinity, he has a very interesting body strucutre which is very well build even amongs the Gryphon's it's muscular and just as hard as stones. Amaymon has the manipulation of the Earth affinity, from his birth he trained to master the earth element in Iwagakure and thus he became more accustomed to it, therefore she can use the earth element upto S-rank, with out any use of handseals, and he can only perform his jutsu's while he is on the ground. Amaymon is often refered to as the Earth King, Amaymon.

Note: Amaymon can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Amaymon can stay on the field for 4 turns per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.

~ Left for Scorps ~
±± Declined ±± link to contract

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Amaimon) - Summoning Technique: Amaymon
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and mighty

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, the earth emperor, Amaymon is a very large Gryphon and is able to carry a total of five people on his back, he is the exact same size as gamahiro, Amaymon usualy wears silver armor, which protects him from kunai's and basic weapons, as seen in the picture, but what makes him special is his looks his fur/feathers are goldish/silver of color, with the tip of his feathers colored light brown, and his eyes are the color of the desert repersenting his elemental affinity, he has a very interesting body strucutre which is very well build even amongs the Gryphon's it's muscular and just as hard as stones. Amaymon has the manipulation of the Earth affinity, from his birth he trained to master the earth element in Iwagakure and thus he became more accustomed to it, therefore she can use the earth element upto S-rank, with out any use of hand seals (counting towards the users moves), and he can only perform his jutsu's while he is on the ground. Amaymon is often refered to as the Earth King, Amaymon.

Note: Amaymon can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Amaymon can stay on the field for 4 turns per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Ririsu) - Summoning Technique: Lilith
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and mighty

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, the sky empress, Lilith is a fairly large gryphon and is able to carry a total of three people on her back, she is the exact same size as sasuke's hawk, but the thing that makes her special is her looks, her fur is completely sky blue, with the tip of her feathers colored light orange-blue, and her eyes are the color of the skies resembeling her elemental affinity, she has a very interesting bone strucutre which is hollow from the inside and very thin, thus it makes her lighter allowing her to be the most fastest gryphon of her kind to ever exist, a normal ninja could easly loose track of her in the skies, and she is also very hard to spot due to her effective camouflage. Lilith has the manipulation of the wind affinity, from her birth she trained to master the wind element and thus she became more accustomed to it, therefore she can use the wind element upto S-rank (counting towards the users moves), without the use of any handseals. Lilith is often refered to as the Sky Empress, or simply Sora.

Note: Lilith can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Lilith can stay on the field for 4 turns per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.

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(Fūton: Kazehadā) - Wind Release: Wind Body
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By releasing a decent amount of wind chakra through the whole body, the user will clap both hands together, by using circular, evasive movements, the user builds up massive momentum; this build up of all the wind chakra is released as massive powerand literally push of the wind of the skin of the user, the wind chakra is released through the skin, from every direction the wind body is pushed of till medium range and then it'll disolve. This technique serves to counter seals, paper bombs placed on the users body by enemies, or to even counter small weapons, such as needles, kunais or shurikens. Anything bigger than those particular ninja tools will break through the wind body. This jutsu can also be used to push of any sticky substance of the users body. It can also be used as an offensive type of jutsu.

Note: I searched this jutsu up in the old CJ thread, but i couldn't find any technique's like this.


±± Declined ±± Goro used a very similar technique against me not long ago.

 

[Scorps]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

±± New cycle of submissions starting today, 7th of May and ending on the 13th of May. I must remind members of the following:

-Between markers you cannot submit more than 3 techniques.

-Its not our job to teach members to make approvable customs, give inputs through VMs or PMs about ideas you might have nor to make your customs approvable.

-Bugging us will not be tolerated. Please respect our online time and our profiles. You should post on our profile only things that are absolutely required and not whining or complaints.

-You are not allowed to tell us how to check your custom techniques or to post your "reasonings" of our checkings on your resubmissions.

-Remember, reading the first post of this thread and understanding/following all the guidelines posted there is half way to having an approved custom.

Thank you, Scorps±±​

 

[Erzo]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Genjutsu: Hanshin Soshi) Illusionary Technique: Rebellious element
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: - (Depends on rank of Water jutsu used)
Description: The user releases his chakra into the opponents brain where it stays dormant until the opponent uses a water jutsu, the chakra will then take it's action and control the users vision and make them see their own attack suddenly take place on themselves, because of the element suddenly attacking them, they lose concentration and the attack they performed on the user of this genjutsu stops as they are no longer concentrating their chakra into that attack. Because of the various water jutsus the opponents reaction in reality will depend on the water jutsu used. For example should they use water gushing imprisonment they will think they are stuck in the water and drown as they struggle to disrupt the water, but in reality they will just stand at a point and later fall unconscious should they not figure out it's a genjutsu and get out of it. If the water jutsu used is more of a full on attack such as Water bullet then they will imagine getting hit by the brute force of the attack and get knocked back several meters whereas in reality they are again left standing at a spot screaming due to the injuries they think they are receiving. Whilst this genjutsu is active the opponent can see everything and anything the user does as normal.
Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Lasts 2 turns each time
Note: No Genjutsu in same and next turn after use of this technique.

~ You want to control your own vision ? ~

~Resubmitting~

(Genjutsu: Hanshin Soshi) Illusionary Technique: Rebellious element
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: - (Depends on rank of Water jutsu used)
Description: The user releases his chakra into the opponents brain where it stays dormant until the opponent uses a water jutsu, the chakra will then take it's action and control the opponents vision and make them see their own attack suddenly take place on themselves, because of the element suddenly attacking them, they lose concentration and the attack they performed on the user of this genjutsu stops as they are no longer concentrating their chakra into that attack. Because of the various water jutsus the opponents reaction in reality will depend on the water jutsu used. For example should they use water gushing imprisonment they will think they are stuck in the water and drown as they struggle to disrupt the water, but in reality they will just stand at a point and later fall unconscious should they not figure out it's a genjutsu and get out of it. If the water jutsu used is more of a full on attack such as Water bullet then they will imagine getting hit by the brute force of the attack and get knocked back several meters whereas in reality they are again left standing at a spot screaming due to the injuries they think they are receiving. Whilst this genjutsu is active the opponent can see everything and anything the user does as normal.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: Lasts 2 turns each time
Note: No Genjutsu in same and next turn after use of this technique.
~Leaving for Emperor~
~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
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(Katon: Nibai Batsu) Fire Release: Double attack
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra at the sides of his opponents (3 meters away from each of the opponents side) and creates two hawks -each roughly the size of the hawk sasuke summoned against danzo- to attack the opponent from both his left and right side, trapping the opponent in the center of the attack. Upon collision with each other and the opponent in the middle of them, the birds explode and create a giant fire viciously burning the opponent between them.
Note: Can be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank Fire in same turn.
~Declined~ You can't just "channel" fire chakra next to your opponent and create fire out of thin air pretty much. You need to either make it travel in the form of fire from the ground or be released from your body. If this was a wind or water styled technique then it would be understandable.
(Raiton: Tori Dageki) Lightning Release: Bird Strike
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his lightning chakra behind his opponent and uses shape manipulation to create a hawk -which is the same size as the one summoned by sasuke against danzo- the hawk then flies towards the opponent with its extremely sharp beak pointed at the opponents back aiming to piercing him, leaving quite a big gap in his chest. After peircing the opponent the bird disperses in all areas short range from it acting like chidori nagashi and paralyzing any opponent(s) within its vicinity. If needed the user can disperse the bird before it pierces the opponent so that the opponent(s) are only paralyzed.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank lightning same turn.
~Declined~ Same as above except for the added option of channeling your lightning chakra into the sky and bring down a lightning hawk.

 

[Zoro..]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Lightning punch - Raiton Panchi
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user punches or kicks the opponent coating that area in lightning chakra for a quick attack. This does not usually kill unless hit in the temple of a vital spot, this technique is meant to stun. Even when the opponent blocks the punch by normal means they get stunned for two seconds leaving an opening for the user.
~Can only be taught by Zoro..
~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.
One Sword One Light - Kenjutsu Ichi Subeta Ichi Ranpu
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user draws their sword at immense speeds. While drawing it they make sure to pull it out horizontally with their arm fully extended with the sword in reverse grip. The sheath should be resting on the back right above the buttocks and the sword will be within reach for the swordsman's arm. Drawing it horizontally in reverse grip using it for extra speed and power the user puts all their might into this blow. the speed of the draw is incredible, while the Samurai focuses their chakra into their blade to enhance it. It unleashes a devastating cut exchanging accuracy for speed and power, however the size of the cut is massive and horizontal therefore accuracy is unneeded anyways. The speed of this strike and power are both devastating, it being incredible thin able to slice through most like it was butter due to it's thinness.
~Can only be taught by Zoro..
~Can be used twice per battle
~The user can only use kenjutsu techniques below C rank next two turns.
~Leaving for Alucard/Scorps~
Hawk Eye's Bow - Taka Manako Senshu
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (+10-30)
Damage: 60
Description: A Bow forged in the ages of the First Great Ninja War. It was a magnificent weapon used by only a few who had enough chakra to use this beauty. It was a black bow made out of carbon fibers flexible enough to fire arrows far distances. The Bow was never alone, it always was with it's quiver making it a set. The Quiver was what made this weapon fearsome, the bow alone could only fire powerful arrows really far however the Quiver was filled with different Fuuinjutsu sealing tags rolled up and fit to an arrow. Each arrow's with a different Fuuinjutsu seal holds a different fletching allowing the user to distinguish the differences. The Quiver holds a great deal of arrows and at the bottom is a generic seal to let out more if they user runs out. The Quiver holds 20 arrows as it is each Fuuinjutsu seal is placed on a maximum of three arrows. Their is a Fuuinjutsu seal for each element on three arrows within the quiver and when the user flows his chakra through it from any distance they blow up giving off the equivalent of an A ranked blast. However doing so cost an extra 10 chakra to do so. After every three arrows shot the chakra amount enlarges by 5 extra until it reaches thirty. The last five arrows in the quiver without elemental seals contain generic seals for splintering shots, rope on the arrow, paper bombs, flash bombs and stun bombs.
~This weapon may only be wielded by those Zoro.. allows
~The time it takes to shoot an arrow is equivalent to three handseals
~Each arrow shot takes 40 chakra and adding +5 more after each third arrow
~The Fuuinjutsu seals only have three per element unless the Quiver is replenished with more
~Arrow's blowing up with the Fuuinseals are equivalent to A rank blasts
~Declined~ Why do none of these blasts count towards your jutsu's per turn?As it stands, you have a CW that can freely release elemental blasts without usage or jutsu post restrictions. Lastly, make sure that none of these arrows are infusable with chakra(Aside from the fuuin) because that would be reaching the similarities of my Sniper Arts.

 

[Lysander]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kasai hishou) Fire flight
Type:Supplementry/attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-long
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The user will channel fire chakra to there palms and the soles of there feet.They will then release fire from from these areas making a one meter stream of fire from there hands and feet.This grants the user the ability to fly.The user can also use this in combat to boost his taijutsu skills.when kneeing someone for example in the face when lifting his knee up he will shoot fire from the underneath of his foot to boost the speed and power of the attack.
-Only usable three times a battle
-Flight lasts for two turns and only usable once per fight.
-Lasts three turns in taijutsu form with a two turn cool down.
-Counts as one of the three moves per turn
-Due to the user emitting fire from his hands during flight he cannot weave hand seals but can shoot fire projectiles from his hands.
-Only usable my Lysander and those taught.

If you have seen the film iron man this is very similar.To move forward in the air they must have there palms open behind them aswell as there feet and if they wont to go back they must have there palms forward and feet or just turn around.

This clip is how its meant to be.13 to one minute:

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~Declined~ Similar technique already exists.
(risaizu) resize jutsu
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:After sending a projectile of a element or weapon attack the user will focus on the chakra in the projectile and reduce the amount of chakra making the projectile smaller.Before the projectile reaches the enemy he will then release a sudden burst of chakra back into the projectile making it revert to its normal size.
-This jutsu adds no added power to the attack
-Shrunken down version is two times the size of a normal bullet
-Only usable twice per fight
-Only usable by Lysander
~Declined~

 

[Blizzàrd1]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

[Raiton: Nenshou Ame] Lightning Release: Burning Rain
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After using Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique (or any other rain jutsu) the user channels his chakra in his palm and after making a single Tiger hand-seal he charges the cloud in a certain area with lightning bolts, The bolts charges the rain water making them able to conduct negative electric charges. When the rain drops fall of the opponent they release small charges of shocks on the part it touches making it extremely hard to channel chakra because of constant small shocks. The Jutsu is also powerful enough to help the user escape Genjutsu. If exposed to the Jutsus for more than 2 turns the victim will be paralyzed. It can be canceled with a Tiger hand-seal changing the rain back to normal.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

[Shitoryu: Kiba] Four Swords Flow: Fangs
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: (Shitoryu: Kiba literally meaning "Four Sword Flow: Fangs" or "Four Swords Style: Fangs") is a specialized form of using the fang swords. The weapon set consists of four different fangs, each having two special natures and highly attractive to one of the swords, however, repulsive to the other two. All four fangs are made with different Metals and elemental Chakra. When used together they become set of extremely powerful weapons with high durability.
The Fangs were considered to be super natural weapons, recorded by earlier generations that they were bestowed in the ninja world to keep balance in power. The legend continues to state that each of the sword was sent down to one of the country in the ninja world, some people trying to attain the power ended up slaughtering innocent people for their evil purpose. The Fangs were then sealed in an stone located in middle of those countries. Over the time the seal broke, once again revealing the power of legendary fangs to the mere humans. The elemental nature of each sword helps the user to channel that chakra (once; not constant supply) and increase the sword's range to 2 foot in length and 12 inches to the sides providing the user more cutting ability than normal.

暗殺者芳 | The Messiah's Fang:

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Elemental Nature; Ice
This particular fang has said to be the most cursed of all, the blood of countless ninjas was drawn by this very sword in the stealthiness of nights. The Blade holds two elemental natures; Wind and Ice, and it is made up of sharpest metal. The Fang was also shaped with spikes like all other fangs and is attractive to Demon's Fang. Being Attractive to a weapon means that the end of the handle (start of the sword) fits into the end of the handle of other sword allowing the user to hold two swords in one hand, both pointing in opposite directions.

悪魔芳 | The Demon's Fang:

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Elemental Nature; Fire
The Demon's Fang, the most fearful one is made up of Fire and abundant Chakra. It is attractive to The Messiah's Fang, meaning it connects with that sword allowing user to wield both at once. The sword is known for its intensity of damage.

悪魔芳 | The Devil's Fang:

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Elemental Nature; Earth
The Devil's Fang is the strongest of all the fangs. It holds the call to earth and is known for the magnitude of damage. It is also able to slice through bones and flesh of the opponent and is attractive to The Angel's Fang, which means the end of The Devil's Fang connects with the end on The Angel's fang, allowing user to wield the swords in one hand, where both sharp ends pointing at different directions.

天使芳 | The Angel's Fang:

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Elemental Nature; Lightning
The Angel's Fang is mightiest of all, It has the most piercing abilities and is the lightest in mass. The Sword is made up of elemental chakras; lightning and water. Its smoothness and piercing range allows user to use it in coalition with The Devil's Fang. The sword itself is shaped like The Messiah's Fang, "fangs" "spikes" pointing downwards.

Note:
The Wielder of the four fangs can use them separately, in pairs or the entire set.
The set of four fangs will be wielded using the connecting mechanism where two swords are combined together by their handles and the pointy edge pointing outwards in opposite direction. Two swords in each hand.
Using all of them together will effect the speed, but Taijutsu masters are not affected by it.
The Shitoryu is merely a name to the set of sword and not a fighting style allocated to the fangs.
Each sword can be summoned only once per battle or all of them together (still once).
To use the jutsu allocated to the weapon, all fangs must be wielded. A single fang cannot perform the jutsu alone.
They are SET of swords but they have the same ability which is chakra conduction, They conduct chakra but that is limited to what nature they hold.
If One of the sword is conducting chakra the others sword cannot conduct any chakra, which means only one of the sword gets the ability at one time.
The swords/fangs can only be wielded by -Blizzard-.

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I was actually confused since you are asking me to make a basic set of swords with fusing together ability to make it more complex, like i stated in the previous post that the chakra was just to add uniqueness to the sword, but now i am putting it to use with a limitation.

~ Since you clearly didn't understand what Alucard said, let me repeat it. THESE ARE 4 ( FOUR ) SWORDS. Each has their own ability and chakra nature. THESE CANNOT BE ONE ( 1 ) WEAPON. It will never be approved like this. Pick ONE weapon and submit it.~

[Shitoryu: Kiba] Four Swords Flow: Fangs
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: (Shitoryu: Kiba literally meaning "Four Sword Flow: Fangs" or "Four Swords Style: Fangs") is a specialized form of using the fang swords. The weapon set consists of four different fangs, each sword is highly attractive to one of the swords, however, repulsive to the other two. All four fangs are made with different Metals. When used together they become a set of extremely powerful weapon with high durability.
The Fangs were considered to be super natural weapons, recorded by earlier generations that they were bestowed in the ninja world to keep balance in power. The legend continues to state that each of the sword was sent down to one of the country in the ninja world, some people trying to attain the power ended up slaughtering innocent people for their evil purpose. The Fangs were then sealed in an stone located in middle of those countries. Over the time the seal broke, once again revealing the power of legendary fangs to the mere humans.The elemental nature of each sword is Ice and it helps the user to channel that chakra (once; not constant supply) and increase the sword's range to 2 foot in length and 12 inches to the sides providing the user more cutting ability than normal.

暗殺者芳 | The Messiah's Fang:

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This particular fang has said to be the most cursed of all, the blood of countless ninjas was drawn by this very sword in the stealthiness of nights. The Blade is made up of sharpest metal. The Fang was also shaped with spikes like all other fangs and is attractive to Demon's Fang. Being Attractive to a weapon means that the end of the handle (start of the sword) fits into the end of the handle of other sword allowing the user to hold two swords in one hand, both pointing in opposite directions.

悪魔芳 | The Demon's Fang:

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The Demon's Fang, the most fearful one. It is attractive to The Messiah's Fang, meaning it connects with that sword allowing user to wield both at once. The sword is known for its intensity of damage.

悪魔芳 | The Devil's Fang:

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The Devil's Fang is the strongest of all the fangs. It is known for the magnitude of damage. It is also able to slice through bones and flesh of the opponent and is attractive to The Angel's Fang, which means the end of The Devil's Fang connects with the end on The Angel's fang, allowing user to wield the swords in one hand, where both sharp ends pointing at different directions.

天使芳 | The Angel's Fang:

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The Angel's Fang is mightiest of all, It has the most piercing abilities and is the lightest in mass. Its smoothness and piercing range allows user to use it in coalition with The Devil's Fang. The sword itself is shaped like The Messiah's Fang, "fangs" "spikes" pointing downwards.

Note:
The Wielder of the four fangs can use them separately, in pairs or the entire set.
The set of four fangs will be wielded using the connecting mechanism where two swords are combined together by their handles and the pointy edge pointing outwards in opposite direction. Two swords in each hand.
Using all of them together will effect the speed, but Taijutsu masters are not affected by it.
The Shitoryu is merely a name to the set of sword and not a fighting style allocated to the fangs.
Each sword can be summoned only once per battle or all of them together (still once).
To use the jutsu allocated to the weapon, all fangs must be wielded. A single fang cannot perform the jutsu alone.
They are SET of swords but they have the same ability which is chakra conduction, They conduct chakra but that is limited to what nature they hold. They conduct one chakra, which is Ice.
The swords/fangs can only be wielded by -Blizzard-.

1 Chakra nature, 1 Ability of just sharpening the sword and 4 swords.. Am I close to a set of weapon and not four different weapons? Please do tell me how can I make it so that I keep all four and use the connecting sword feature. Also removed all the elemtal natures..

±± Leaving this for Emperor ±± Although i must remind you blizzard, that swords with channeling elemental chakra abilities are basically all existing.
~ What Scorps said, these swords now have no abilities different from any other 500000 swords. Now also add in the fact that only Ice bios can use this, and FOR THE LOVE OF GOD think about making it into one sword to avoid all confusion ~

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Summoning Animal: Bison
Scroll Owner: -Blizzard-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: N/A
~ Reserving | Will add details when it gets approved and will resubmit ~


±± Declined ±± Either submit it all or don't submit. Reserving stuff is forbidden. You know what can happen to those who do this.

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Summoning Animal: Bison
Scroll Owner: -Blizzard-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Taurus
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: Bisons are highly strong, bulky and large animals. They don't have the much of the swift capabilities like other summonings but they hold immense powers by using the firm footing of earth and incredible strength of their horns. Most of the Bison summoning animals are able to carry a lot of mass and withstand tremendous blows. Bison being in the bull family were also worshiped for many years, with this they developed a religious values in their own kind. When a contract with a Bison is signed, the owner of the contract develops a black tattoo on their skin, which is the head of a bison explicitly showing the horns. They are also very loyal to the summonings and from the very beginning were used as a sacrifice for human lives to protect them form natural disaster. Many Bison's capabilities comes from witnessing these sacrifices which made them strong, Using their bulky bodies they are also able to swim and face large waves of water with no trouble at all. Apart from the loyalty, A Bison can be merciless if denied its existence. They belong to the Ivorian Plains where a group of Bison have been living for centuries and developed their skills to suit the era.


±± Approved ±±

 

[ReXii]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Suiton:Oni-Bodi) Water Release: Demon Body
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60 (If used to hit with)
Description: This technique is a secret technique, Passed down by the Hozuki clan, To use this jutsu first you must have a large water source around your short range vicinity.
Upon using this technique your body will triple in size making the user around 17 feet tall and comprised of flowing water entirely, This could be considered a variant of the demon fish technique.

-User is more vulnerable to Raiton in this state-
-User is immune to A rank wind blades and B rank and below vortex's-
-User is immune to S rank and below fire-
-Lasts for 4 turns & can only be used Once-
-Can only be taught by ReXii or those he permits-
~Declined~ No, just no.


(Suiton:Tenma Re-ru-hou) Water Release: Demonic Railgun
Type:Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:After using the Demon Body technique the user raises there arm making the hand join together like a long smooth rail, Through the use of hydrification, Once this is done the user then forms a large amount of suiton chakra hyper accelerating it along there arm and firing a giant projectile of explosive water, This is a variant of the water gun technique, On a much larger scale.

-May only be used twice, With each usage causing a turn to be lost in Demon body form-
-Capable of destroying B rank and below earth easily due to the explosive force on impact-
-May only be taught by ReXii and those he permits-



(Suiton:Saishuu Tenma Senkou) Water Release: The Final Demonic Flash
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:F
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage:100
Description:Used as a last resort by hozuki members using a demon body form, This technique whilst having huge power comes at a high cost, The user will focus all of the water chakra in there body and in the demon body form causing it to rapidly expand while keeping a solid shape, This will cause the user to explode with incredible force in to millions of razor sharp droplets of water, Similar to the shrapnel from a grenade.
This would of course cause immense damage to the surrounding area but also to the user themselves.

-Can only be used once-
-Once used causes -30 damage to the user, Also causes them to reform slowly over the course of a turn at which point they are very vulnerable-
-User cannot use hydrification related techniques for 4 turns they must also remain stationery in this time-
-Cannot use S rank and above for two turns after this technique-
-Can only be taught by ReXii-

~Both Declined~ Demon body was not approved.

 

[XZA]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

( Gujin Bakhatsu)- Puppet explosion
Type: Supplementary, Offense
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short - Long Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user sends a large amount of katon chakra into a puppet and compresses the wood or material it is made out of until it is ready to explode. The user performs a single hand-seal and causes the puppet to explode out into a huge blast of fire and wood that can cause major damage to anyone short range of the puppet.
Note: Can only be used three times a match
Note: No S-rank or above fire next turn
~Declined~
(Jikashu Ninpou: Jin Nami)- Magnet ninja art: Magnetic Wave
Type: Supplementary, Defense, Offense
Rank: S - Rank
Range: Short - Long Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The third kazekage puppet will open its left chest compartment and begins sending out very fast pulses of magnetic energy that fill the whole terrain and magnetizes anything it comes in contact it with. The user can give anything inside the magnetic field a either north or south polarity. The field is extremely strong.
Note: Can only be used once
Note: Last for three turns
Note: Can not use iron sand while this is active
~Declined~ Similar technique already exists. In fact, it was made by me.
(Jikashu Ninpou: Sakin Bakhatsu)- Magnetic ninja art: Iron Sand explosion
Type: Offense
Rank: S- Rank
Range: Short - long Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs a single hand-seal and compresses the iron sand until it is ready to explode. The user then preforms a single hand-seal and causes the iron sand to detonate into a huge blast of iron sand that can cause fatal damage to the opponent.
Note: Can only be used once
Note: Can't use iron sand next turn
~Declined~You're making it sound as if Iron Sand is an element of its own. The element that controls iron sand is magnetism release and even then you can't make the iron sand explode. However you can make it compress and then release outwards, but not explode like a tag or all those exploding elemental techniques.

 

[AntiHero]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kinezumi Kuchiyose: Ganjou no Ogar)- Squirrel Summoning: Ogar, the Strong
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40 Chakra (+10 every turn Ogar stays summoned)
Damage: N/A
Description: The summoner bites his/her bottom lip and spits into their left hand, then slams his/her hands together to summon Ogar, the Stong. Ogar, the Strong is a Easter Grey squirrel (4ft and 40lbs). He has predominantly gray fur with brownish colored spots all over his coat, he also has a white underside and a large bushy tail (6ft long and 3ft wide).
Like all squirrels, Ogar shows four fingers on the front feet and five on the hind feet allowing him to be able to hold and use ninja tools as well as peform jutsu. His foot-pads often leave not visible tracks, when bounding or moving at speed. His strideds can be upto two or three feet long.
Ogar has excellent vision and well-developed senses of smell and is an experianced tracker. He has sharp, curved claws which enables him to climb and descend broad tree trunks, thick branches and even house walls. His strong hind legs enable it to leap gaps between trees.
Ogar has an affinity for Suiton chakra which allow him to perform Water style jutsu up to A-Rank with relative ease using squirrel hand-seals (3 fingers and a thumb on each forefoot). He is also very addapt at swimming.

Note: Can be only summoned twice in battle.
Note: Can only be summoned for up to 3 turns.
Note: Any jutsu done by Ogar count towards the 3 jutsu per turn.
Note: Must be a signer of the Squirrel contract or owner to summon.

(Kinezumi Kuchiyose: Don no Zalog)- Squirrel Summoning: Zalog, the Don
Type:Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40 Chakra (+10 every turn Zalog stays summoned)
Damage: N/A
Description: The summoner cuts his/her left plam and places his/her hand on their squirrel tatoo, to summon Zalog, the Don. Zalog is a Antelope squirrel (8ft and 60lbs). Zalog has a special adaptation, being able to resist Hyperthermia and can survive body temperatures over 104°F. His fur is a soft brown color and has a short white tail which is somewhat flattened. He has a single white stripe on his belly and a scar on the left side of his face.
Zalog has four fingers on his forefeet and five on the hind feet allowing him to hold and use ninja tools as well as peform jutsu. He has excellent vision and well-developed senses of smell and hearing. He has sharp, curved claws which enables him to climb and descend broad tree trunks, thick branches and even house walls. His strong hind legs enable it to leap gaps between trees.
Zalog, the Don is experianced in sword-play has an affinity for Katon chakra which allow him to perform Fire style jutsu with relative ease using squirrel hand-seals (3 fingers and a thumb on each forefoot). Using his Katon chakra Zalog can see heat signatures as well as heat waves flowing through the air. He cannot be harmed by any B-rank fire jutsu or lower that doesn't burn hotter then 105°F.

Note: Can be only summoned twice in battle.
Note: Can only be summoned for up to 3 turns.
Note: Any jutsu done by Zalog count towards the 3 jutsu per turn.
Note: Can only perform A-rank or lower Katon jutsus.
Note: Must be the owner of the Squirrel contract to summon.
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(Kinezumi Kuchiyose: Gosai no Click)- Squirrel Summoning: Click, the Yellow
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40 Chakra (+10 every turn Click stays summoned)
Damage: N/A
Description: The summoner cut his/her right plam, then slams his hands together to summon Click, the Yellow. Click, the Yellow is a Fox squirrel (2ft and 20lbs). He has short brownish-yellow fur and long slick black tail, which helps him balance when climbing, swimming, or running. Click has two rather large incisors teeth, which he can flick together to create a spark.
Click has excellent vision and well-developed senses of hearing and smell.He has sharp, curved claws which enables him to climb and descend broad tree trunks, thick branches and even house walls. His strong hind legs enable it to leap gaps between trees. Click also has several sets of vibrissae, which are used as touch receptors to sense his environment. They can be found above and below his eyes, on his chin and nose, and one each forearm.
Click has an affinity for Raiton chakra which allow him to perform Lighting style jutsu with relative ease using squirrel hand-seals (3 fingers and a thumb on each forefoot). He can use ninja tools with his hands and can absorb static charges from his environment using his vibrissae. Using his raiton chakra Click can create/absorb/dispel lighting based jutsu.

Note: Can be only summoned twice in battle.
Note: Can only be summoned for up to 3 turns.
Note: Any jutsu done by Click count towards the 3 jutsu per turn.
Note: Can only perform B-rank or lower Raiton jutsus.
Note: Absorbing raiton chakra or jutsu counts as a move.
Note: Must be a signer of the Squirrel contract or owner to summon.

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±± Declined ±± How large of a technique can it absorb? In terms of rank that is. And, the sensing...limits to it?

(Kinezumi Kuchiyose: Gosai no Click)- Squirrel Summoning: Click, the Yellow
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40 Chakra (+10 every turn Click stays summoned)
Damage: N/A
Description: The summoner cut his/her right plam, then slams his hands together to summon Click, the Yellow. Click, the Yellow is a Fox squirrel (2ft and 20lbs). He has short brownish-yellow fur and long slick black tail, which helps him balance when climbing, swimming, or running. Click has two rather large incisors teeth, which he can flick together to create a spark. Click has excellent vision and well-developed senses of hearing and smell. He has sharp, curved claws which enables him to climb and descend broad tree trunks, thick branches and even house walls. His strong hind legs enable it to leap gaps between trees. Click also has several sets of vibrissae, which are used as touch receptors to sense his environment. They can be found above and below his eyes, on his chin and nose, and one each forearm. Click has an affinity for Raiton chakra which allow him to perform Lighting style jutsu with relative ease using squirrel hand-seals (3 fingers and a thumb on each forefoot). He can use ninja tools with his hands and can absorb static charges from his environment using his vibrissae. Using his raiton chakra Click can create/absorb/dispel lighting based jutsu B-rank or below.

Note: Can be only summoned twice in battle.
Note: Can only be summoned for up to 3 turns.
Note: Any jutsu done by Click count towards the 3 jutsu per turn.
Note: Can only perform B-rank or lower Raiton jutsus.
Note: Absorbing raiton chakra or jutsu counts as a move.
Note: Must be a signer of the Squirrel contract or owner to summon.

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[System001]

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(Raiton | Mai Re-Za Bu-Mu) Lightning Release | My lasers goes PEW PEW
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The User will click their fingers, causing a large amount of lightning beams to sprout from the ground around the opponent, the beams having a radius of about 3 inches each and ascending several meters into the sky. The beams travel straight, but rise from all different angles, some rising just centimeters away from the opponents body. Ultimately this creates a maze of laser like lightning beams that are able to slice through human flesh like butter and radiate a fair amount of heat. As such the beams trap the opponent in place, as if he were to move, even to do handseals, he would inevitably move his body into a path of one of the various beams and damage himself severely as he does so. Alternatively, the user can form a underground network of these beams. Preventing the opponent from using earth jutsu that require contact with the ground while its active, and preventing them from going underground.
~Can only be used 3x.
~No other Lightning Jutsu S rank or above for the rest of the turn.
~Declined~ So these lightning beams are magically sprouting out of the ground beneath your target?
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(Akenomyōsei : Hyaku-Yari) The Morning Star : Hundred Spear
Rank: S-Forbbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40(+40)
Damage Points: 80/ 100
Description: The user, having The morning star in a Naginata, or spear like form, immediately begins a series of extremely fast thrusts, pumping chakra into their arms and into the spears blade with each thrust. The thrust however, are exceptionally faster than anything that could be achieved ordinarily even with ninja enhancements, as with each thrust, the user shortens and legnthens the stiffened chain that is acting as the shaft, effectively making the thrust much much quicker and expodentially more powerful. With each thrust a large amount of pressure is generated, as the pressure is generated, the user releases the coating of chakra on the blade, before retracting the spear, changing its position slightly to once again re-peat the process. This effectively creates 100 chakra spear heads comprised soley of chakra and pressure. Due to the speed of the thrusts, the 100 spear heads are released seemingly in more or less unison, the spear heads travelling forths and covering a fairly wide expanse, pulverising the opponent and slicing and piercing into their body. Each spear head having enough power to punch through concrete. Although this technique is made up of soley normal chakra, due to the level of shape composition and speed of the technique launch, the technique as a whole compares to a S rank elemntal technique in terms of power. The user, by sacrificing an extra 40 chakra, can activate the element of the blade that makes up the spear head, creating a forbidden rank elemental technique.
~Can only be used 3x.
~Due to the large amount of physical exertion, and the level of cocnentration needed, the user will feel tired and larthagic. *Their hand movements will slow by one stage for this and the next turn.* (**Forbidden rank version only)
~Each time this technique is used, its damage lowers by 5 for the rest of the battle.
~Declined~ Either S or F rank, you choose.


(Suiton : Sawarabi no Shubyou) Water Release : Dance of the Seedlings
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will spew a large drilling water bullet from their mouth, the water bullet travelling towards the opponent at fair speeds. During its flight, the water bullet will seperate into dozens of smaller drilling water bullets, diverging far from the path that their predecessor followed, and flying in arcs at great speeds, approaching the enemy from all directions, and striking the enemy all at once in near enough unison. As they strike the enemy, they expand, dealing severe damage to the opponent. The division of the bullets timing, is pre-determined by the users intentions upon spewing the bullet.
~No other S rank or above Water jutsu for the rest of the turn.
~Can only be used 3x.
~Must be Sannin Rank or above.
~Declined~ "Fair speeds", "Dozens" these are things you need to clarify. As for all directions, how exactly are they coming from underground? How are they coming from behind him? Are they arcing in such a way that it would reach them from behind? If so,they bullets wouldn't reach their target nearly in unison.

 

[Wesobi]

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Jinton: Kodai no Rerumu no Hageshī Yōgo-sha | Dust Release: Raging Defender of the Ancient Realm
Type: Defensive
Rank: B - S
Range: Short - mid
Chakra Cost: 20 - 40
Damage Points: 40 - 80
Description: The users starts by doing one(For B-rank), two (For A-rank) or three (for S-rank) hand seals. After doing the hand seals, 3 cubes start to float around the user's waist. These will spin around at a slow pace. Every time there is an incoming attack, the user can shoot activate one of these 3 cubes. Activating it will stop the cubes while one is in front of the user. The cube will then expand infront of the user and destroy any kind of incoming attack.
Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
Note: Can use the B-rank variant 2 times, the A-rank and S-rank once.
Note: B-rank cubes can only defend against B-rank techniques, A-rank cubes against A-rank techniques, S-rank cubes against S-rank techniques.
Note: No dust release techniques during the same turn as one of the cubes is used.
~Declined~ Either B, A, or S rank, you choose.
Kyūkyoku Meisai no Jutsu |Ultimate Camouflage technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mu, after doing one hand seal does his signature camouflage technique. His mastery over this is formidable, but he has upgraded this technique once more. While he is in this camouflage technique, his chakra is undetectable as it normally is (considering he is a Non-Person when using this), nor can his form be seen. However, he made adjustments to the technique so that it makes him intangible. Because of this, any sticky substance or object that would normally bounce through Mu is does not work. However, the downside is that Mu can not use any offensive technique while in this form.
Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
Note: Requires a Mu bio
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Lasts 3 turns
~Declined~ What exactly is making him intangible? The origin of the camouflage technique is controlling how light is reflected around their body bending the light in a certain way to blend in with the surroundings and utilizing his specialization in chakra sensory to suppress his chakra in combination with all of it.
Jinton: Honshitsu no Fukkatsu | Rebirth of Essence
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100 (and 20 to the user)
Description: The user does two hand seals and creates 8 cubes around the battlefield. one infront of him at short range to the left and to the right, one to his left at long range infront of him and to his right at long range infront of him, but also 10 meters into the air at the same formation. These cubes are small at first, not being more than 1cm², but then rapidly expand. The cubes then connect to one another at such an incredible rate that it appears to be no more than a blur to the opponent. Once the cubes have made connection with one another, everything inside of the connected area is destroyed at a molecular level.
Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
Note: Can only be used by once
Note: No more dust release for the rest of the battle
Note: The user can not move through physical means for 3 turns after this jutsu is used
Note: The user, due to the chakra being used in this can only use up to A-rank techniques for the next 2 turns, and up to S-rank after that.
Note: The user can not use more than two more jutsus per turn after this is used.
~Declined~ 20 damage to the user? We both know that won't affect you in our RP. As for the rest, remove the "Blur" speed reference and clarify exactly what type of cubes you are creating. For all I know they could be wind cubes that are later created into Dust release cubes, etc, etc.

 

[Howard]

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(Kuchyrose: Hana Hekireki Tentei) - Summoning: Bloom of the Thunder God
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user bites his thumb smearing the blood onto his palm. He then performs two hand seals (Ram - Snake.) By doing this he summons 1000 small blue flowers, from the Kite Nesting grounds. These flowers are called "Thunder Lilies" due to their ability to create small amounts of raiton chakra they are considered to be extremely tasty and a favorite meal time snack to King Kodak. As the flowers grow they store raiton chakra all throughout their life storing small amounts, until the day they bloom. Once they bloom they release the small amount of raiton chakra they have stored causing small pulses of raiton that can stun small animals (1 flower has enough raiton chakra when bloomed to stun small animals such as rabbits and snakes). Usually the flowers don't bloom all at once so the damage is minuscule (While not being forced to bloom). Once the 1000 flowers are summoned through the use of raiton chakra and the Ram hand seal they can all be forced to bloom at once, this forces all the flowers to release their raiton chakra violently shocking anything in range of the flowers. Each flower creates a small pulse and when combined they equal a strong S rank attack. The electric field is enough to stop the human heart as well as tear through the ground leaving decent sized craters.
Notes:

-Must have signed the Kite Contract to use
-Must have mastered Raiton (To use the ability to force bloom the flowers.)
-No other summons the same turn
-If the user is in the field of flowers he will be shocked too
-The flowers die soon after their forced bloom they can only be summoned once per battle

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In Blood Prison it is shown that flowers can produce chakra natures. This is shown when the flowers from the Hidden Grass Village release small fire balls that are similar to the jutsu the Hidden Grass Nin use called Demon Latern. This is a variation of flowers that store trace amounts of chakra. This is best seen at 6:20:

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This is also backed up by the fact that not only can animals be summoned but it's been shown that just about anything can be summoned.

~Declined~ Restrictions? Do these just suddenly appear out of nowhere and bloom? Plus, I don't buy the crater bit if all of the flowers release a small spark that chains them together.

(Kuchyrose: Hana Hekireki Tentei) - Summoning: Bloom of the Thunder God
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user bites his thumb smearing the blood onto his palm. He then performs two hand seals (Ram - Snake, this process takes the same time as a normal summon) By doing this he summons 1000 small blue flowers, from the Kite Nesting grounds. These flowers are called "Thunder Lilies" due to their ability to create small amounts of raiton chakra they are considered to be extremely tasty and a favorite meal time snack to King Kodak. As the flowers grow they store raiton chakra all throughout their life storing small amounts, until the day they bloom. Once they bloom they release the small amount of raiton chakra they have stored causing small pulses of raiton that can stun small animals (1 flower has enough raiton chakra when blooming to stun small animals such as rabbits and snakes). Usually the flowers don't bloom all at once so the damage is minuscule (While not being forced to bloom). Once the 1000 flowers are summoned through the use of raiton chakra and the Ram hand seal they can release a surge of raiton along/through the ground that forces all the flowers to bloom at once. Due to the excess amount of raiton chakra that is forced into the flowers they then release their raiton chakra violently shocking anything in range of the flowers this means anything in the field of flowers is shocked even the user if he's inside the field. Each flower creates a small pulse and when combined they equal a strong S rank attack. The electric field is enough to stop the human heart as well as stun and offset anyone inside the field.
Notes:

-Must have signed the Kite Contract to use
-Stun lasts for 1 turn
-No S rank Raiton for the next turn.
-Must have mastered Raiton (To use the ability to force bloom the flowers.)
-No other summons the same turn, or the following turn
-If the user is in the field of flowers he will be shocked too
-The flowers can only be summoned once per battle

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(Juinjutsu: Jūgo's Seichuu) - Cursed Seal: Jūgo's Restraint
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+25 each turn to maintain flow of Natural Energy)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Jūgo after many years of soft reflection and meditation has found out how to control himself while in his Second Seal State. Spending many years alone in caves with animals basically becoming a Hermit, he has found a way to sense the energy his body absorbs thus maintaining the flow of energy absorbing only that which his body can handle. Communicating with animals while unaffected by his Murderous side helped with this greatly as they were able to explain to Jūgo what this energy is and how it works. While in his Second Seal State Jūgo maintains the flow of Natural Energy into his body thus keeping a sane calm demeanor he does this by releasing the excess Natural Energy through vent like appendages he forms on his back thus maintaining a more stable amount of Natural Energy to Chakra ratio. He gains an increase to strength, speed, reactions and reflexes. This is because he has found a way to use his chakra to maintain the flow of Natural Energy and a way to balance it with his own chakra through the use of the vent like appendages that basically releases excess amounts of Natural Energy that would usually send Jūgo into a murderous state.

Perks:

-+5 to all Ninjutsu.
-+5 to Taijutsu.
-Increases base reaction speed to that of 2T sharingan.
-Increases Speed to that of his second state which could keep up with Raikage in Lightning armor


Drawbacks:

-No Genjutsu can be used while in this mode
-No A ranks and above the first turn this is activated.
-Only two jutsu can be used per turn while the mode is active.
-Lasts for 4 turn and Jūgo will die after deavtivation if he doesn't absorb a person.
-Can only be used by a Jugo bio.

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~ Just like any other boost, declined ~

(Genjutsu: Afurodite's Nemurmi) - Genjutsu: Aphrodite's Slumber
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: This jutsu is both a Genjutsu and a deception jutsu. The user performs three (Boar-Dog-Snake) and sets the opponent into a genjutsu. This genjutsu effects multiple senses in different ways. It alters the opponent's sense of sight making it seem as if a large field of bright red roses have been summoned below him these flowers are merely for show and do nothing to the opponent in all reality. The rose petals appear to break off from the roses and fly around the opponent the roses also appear to be releasing pollen into the air around the opponent. The user then alters the sense of touch making the opponent feel as if the thorns on the roses are slightly cutting his ankles as well as makes it feel as if the pollen is entering his nose and mouth. The user also begins to make the opponent feel as if he is tired relaxing his muscles and slowly putting him into a trance. This trance almost immediately transitions into a sleep state where the opponent is out cold. The user also adjusts the opponents sense of hearing making it sounds like the petals and pollen are dancing around the opponent as if the wind was only blowing it around his area and no where near the user of the jutsu. The user also alters the sense of smell making it smell like a field of roses. If the genjutsu is not broken the opponent will fall asleep in the field of Roses much to the same effect as Temple of Nirvana. This jutsu is fully immersive and is a deception tech as it lets the user make the opponent believe (through the use of deception and not genjutsu) that the sleeping effect is created by the flowers when in all reality it's created by the effects of the genjutsu.
Notes:

-Can target a max of three people at the same time
-Must have mastered basic Genjutsu to use
-No other Genjutu this turn or the next turn
-The opponent will fall asleep by the end of the turn if he doesn't break the genjutusu

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something like at 1:39

~ You make no sense in this technique. For one, it doesn't appear different from Temple of Nirvana at all, except for petals instead of flowers; secondly what exactly is this "deception" you keep talking about, and say that it is deception and not genjutsu ? Through reading the description, it's clearly a genjutsu, un-necessarily complex, but essenially similar to others. ~

 

[Selendrile]

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(Koishi Byōga Supia)- Pebble Drawing Spear
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Pebble Drawing Spear is a famed weapon rumored to be used by the Shodai Tsuchikage himself. The shaft itself its 5ft in length, and made from a heavy, chakra reinforced stone material. However, Selendrile has trained with the Spear for such a long amount of time; he is able to wield the heavy spear with normal dexterity. The triangular, bladed tip is composed of a tempered metal. Using his earth affinity, Selendrile is capable of channeling chakra into the spear. When this is performed, stones manifest themselves on the spear tip, using the shaft as a stone source. The stones can range from marble sized stones, to basketball sized ones. Using the Spear tip similar to a pencil, the user can draw various shapes and figures using the stones. After using this special ability two separate times, the user must replenish the stone shaft in order to maintain a source for drawing. This is done my simply placing the shaft against the ground, and elongating the shaft back to its original length using shape manipulation.
*Note: Only usable by Selendrile
*Note: Only usable by those with an Earth affinity
*Note: If not wielded by Selendrile, the Spear becomes impossible to lift due to its weight unless given permission first
*Note: The rocks produced by the Spear are B-ranked

~ What do you do once you draw with the rocks ? O_O ~

(Koishi Byōga Supia)- Pebble Drawing Spear
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Pebble Drawing Spear is a famed weapon rumored to be used by the Shodai Tsuchikage himself. The shaft itself its 5ft in length, and made from a heavy, chakra reinforced stone material. However, Selendrile has trained with the Spear for such a long amount of time; he is able to wield the heavy spear with normal dexterity. The triangular, bladed tip is composed of a tempered metal. Using his earth affinity, Selendrile is capable of channeling chakra into the spear. When this is performed, stones manifest themselves on the spear tip, using the shaft as a stone source. The stones can range from marble sized stones, to basketball sized ones. Using the Spear tip similar to a pencil, the user can draw various shapes and figures using the stones. This can range from drawing small barricades, ladders, or strong ropes made of rock. Even by swinging the Spear like a bat, the user can sling the rocks at the opponent. After using this special ability two separate times, the user must replenish the stone shaft in order to maintain a source for drawing. This is done my simply placing the shaft momentarily against the ground, and elongating the shaft back to its original length using shape manipulation.
*Note: Only usable by Selendrile
*Note: Only usable by those with an Earth affinity
*Note: If not wielded by Selendrile, the Spear becomes impossible to lift due to its weight unless given permission first
*Note: The rocks produced by the Spear are B-ranked

~ Approved ~

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(Bakuton: Kōdona Niji Nendo no Sōsa )- Explosion Release: Advanced Secondary Clay Manipulation
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: (+10 to existing creations)
Description: After placing a hand into a side pouch filled with the clay, the user will release a thick rope of explosive clay from either of his palms. With the clay rope, the user is able to manipulate already existing clay figurines in two different ways. The first, after attaching the cord to a clay creation, the user will pump more explosive clay into the figure, increasing it's damage by +10. The second, the user is able to split a clay creation in half, creating two of the previous singular figure. However, this action also splits the creations rank by half. (A-rank creation becomes B+B ranked)
*Note: Can only be used/taught by Selendrile
*Note: Usable three times per battle
*Note: No Clay Techniques above A-rank the same turn
*Note: The user is capable of manipulating the clay in only a single way per use, not both

~ Can only be USED/TAUGHT is a contradiction !! -.- ~

(Manipulation of already released clay was shown to be possible in Deidara's fight with Sasuke, his Explosive Clay Minion Technique is the epitome of this concept)

(Bakuton: Nendo Nano Sonshitsu)- Explosion Release: Nano Clay Dissipation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Using an already created and existing clay figurine, the user will perform the Tiger handseal as normal to detonate the object. However, the user will perform another Ram handseal follow up the Tiger. Once this is done, the targeted clay figurine will rapidly dissipate into an invisible cloud of nano-sized explosive clay bombs, similar to the bombs present in "Garuda". The nano-bombs form a large cloud and travel in the direction originally intended by the clay figurine. However, due to the large amount of clay required in the clay figure, this technique can only be used on larger clay creations. Due to the danger of the nano-sized bombs, the user is not capable of using this technique in short range. Anytime after the clay figure has turned into a cloud of nano-sized bombs, the user will perform a single hand seal, detonating the bombs.
*Note: Can only be used by Selendrile
*Note: No Clay Techniques in the same turn
*Note: Usable twice per battle
*Note: This technique is only usable on A-rank and below clay techniques

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Enzup]

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(Ninpou: Mitsukai Tsubasa) - Ninja Art: Angelic Wings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: User uses his ink brush to draw giant wings on his back. Once drawn, it appears like the wings are emerging out of user's back and gives user somewhat angelic look and flying ability. Because of giant size of wings, user can fly with very great speed such that only sharingan 2T and above will be able to keep up with speed.
Note: -Must know Ink ninjutsu.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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~ Do you have like super-bendy arms or something ? ~

(Katon/Raiton: Jisatsu Maniakku) - Fire/Lightning Style: Suicidal Maniac
Type: Offense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-Death of user-)
Description: This forbidden technique requires sacrifice and a lot of lightning and fire chakra. So user stands still and then starts concentrating his lightning and fire chakra in his stomach in a small ball. He keeps on concentrating the chakra for some time, and once tremendous amount of chakra is concentrated in the stomach, user makes Tiger handseal and says "baku" and as the moment he says "baku", the ball inside the user's stomach expands instantly turning into a giant sphere and thus user explodes. The sphere envelopes everyone and everything within 10m radius (mid-range). The impact of the explosion is that great that everything is turned into ash within range.
Note: -For concentrating chakra in stomach, user must stand still for 5 seconds. In this period of time, he can't move, or do anything.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any lightning or fire move in his previous turn.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any S-Rank or above technique in previous turn.
-If user explodes and opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw.
-Can only be used by Enzup.

~ Remove what I bolded. You have no idea whether he would turn to ash or not, depending on the defenses. ~

Changed it to 5 seconds. And I think 5 seconds are more than enough time for someone, to stop me from using this (or to kill me). Also just b'coz I said that "if opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw", I think you are assuming that whenever I will use this and explode, then opponent will not be able to block it? Although its a F-Rank, but it can also be blocked like other F-rank jutsus are blocked. I mean, even if I explode (die), then also my opponent can block the impact of the explosion.
And I have to stay still for 5 seconds (before using it), and thats no joke.

Resubmitting.

(Ninpou: Mitsukai Tsubasa) - Ninja Art: Angelic Wings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: User pours some ink on his back and then uses his brush to spread it in left and right direction. After spreading completely, the ink takes the shape of giant wings. Once done, it appears like the wings are emerging out of user's back and gives user somewhat angelic look and flying ability. Because of giant size of wings, user can fly with very great speed such that only sharingan 2T and above will be able to keep up with speed.
Note: -Must know Ink ninjutsu.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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~ Too fast ~
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(Katon/Raiton: Jisatsu Maniakku) - Fire/Lightning Style: Suicidal Maniac
Type: Offense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-Death of user-)
Description: This forbidden technique requires sacrifice and a lot of lightning and fire chakra. So user stands still and then starts concentrating his lightning and fire chakra in his stomach in a small ball. He keeps on concentrating the chakra for some time, and once tremendous amount of chakra is concentrated in the stomach, user makes Tiger handseal and says "baku" and as the moment he says "baku", the ball inside the user's stomach expands instantly turning into a giant sphere and thus user explodes. The sphere envelopes everyone and everything within 10m radius (mid-range).
Note: -For concentrating chakra in stomach, user must stand still for 5 seconds. In this period of time, he can't move, or do anything.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any lightning or fire move in his previous turn.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any S-Rank or above technique in previous turn.
-If user explodes and opponent gets caught in it unable to defend, then the match would result in draw unless he can heal or regenerate.
-Can only be used by Enzup.

~ Approved, edited ~

Removed what you said.

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(Raiton: Denjishaku) - Lightning Release: Electromagnet
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid (magnetic field)
Chakra Cost: 20 (+ 5 for each turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User passes his lightning chakra in the form of electricity in the insulated copper-wire wrapped around a metal or into a iron shaft connected to the metal. As the moment electricity is passed into the metal through the insulated copper wire, it starts behaving like an strong electro-magnet, which is way much powerful than a normal magnet. It can attract/repel other metals (within range) depending on direction in which electricity is passed.
Note: -The metal can by any sword, kunai, shuriken or any other metal.
-The metal should either be wrapped with insulated copper wire or should be connected with iron shaft, in order to act like magnet.
-As soon as effect of electricity is over on metal, it stops behaving like a magnet.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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~ Nice idea, but no mimicking magnetism abilities. Declined ~

 

[Korra.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Since Im owner of the CFS Ill submit his with some changes

(Sǐshén liándāo yìshù:Kama Nageru kama ) Reaper Scythe Arts: Scythe Throw
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user quickly throws his scythe towards the opponent with while throwing the scythe towards the opponent he also charges the scythe with normal chakra and thus grant him the ability to maneuver the scythe even after it has been launched by waving of his hands the scythe upon contact causes. cuts because of it razor sharp tips
-Must know scythe art to use it-
-Must have scythe in the bio-
-Can only be used thrice -
-It has other effects when the elemental infusion jutsu is used before

~ How the heck dows infusing chakra into a weapon allow it to change direction ? ~

Summoning Animal: Armadillos
Scroll Owner: ~Johninto~
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: None Yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet
Description and Background: Armadillos are New World placental mammals with a leathery armor shell. The Dasypodidae are the only surviving family in the order Cingulata, part of the superorder Xenarthra, along with the anteaters and sloths. The word armadillo in Spanish means "little armored one". The Aztec called them azotochtli, Nahuatl for “turtle-rabbit."

~ Left for Scorps ~

±± Declined ±± Contract taken

Resubmitting

(Sǐshén liándāo yìshù:Kama Nageru kama ) Reaper Scythe Arts: Scythe Throw
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user quickly throws his scythe towards the opponent with while throwing the scythe towards the opponent the user also attaches chain to the scythes before throwing allowing them to maneuver the scythe even after it has been launched.
-Must know scythe art to use it-
-Must have scythe in the bio-
-Can only be used 4 times -
-Has to be taught by ~Johninto~

±± Declined ±± Why do you need to submit a technique for this?


New
(Raiton: Rakurai)- Lightning Release: Lightning Strike
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will focus their Raiton chakra into the their fingers and than move their one of their hands from the sky in a circular motion and than again with their another hand while doing this lighting will start forming at their finger tips. Then the user will connect both their first two fingers from both hands near their hip and the point forward releasing a bolt of lighting directly at what they are pointing at.
Note: Has to be taught by ~Johninto~
Note: Can only be used 4x a battle
Looks like:

Spoiler

±± Declined ±± Similar lightning blasts exist.


(Kuchiyose: Akumu) ~ Summoning: Nightmare
Rank: S
Type:Offence/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Once the user bites his thumb and smears it on his tattoo and slams their hand on the ground they will summon Nightmare a snake thats big as Manda and is black with blue stripes. Nightmare is a personal snake of Johninto and is able to use to use Lightning up to S rank (counting towards the users move count).
Note: Has to be taught by ~Johninto~
Note: She may stay for 4 turns.
Note: Can be summoned once a battle
Note: Must have signed snake contract
Looks like

Spoiler

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±± approved ±±

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 Editted  changed (counting towards the enemies move count) to (counting towards the users move count) to avoid misuse.

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