[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Yagura]

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Ikazuchi Uesama Modo Reveru Shunkan - Thunder Emperor Mode Level Two
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close-Short (self)
Chakra: 50
Damage: n/a
Description: When the user is in his Thunder Emperor Mode, he can power himself up into Level Two. Its power is almost the same as the Raikage's Lightning Release Armor (3/4) The user is can now slip through weak Fire jutsus just as Lightning goes through Fire. But the user is very vulnerable in Wind and Water jutsus, a critical decision. During the mode his Raiton affinity is more powerful, he doesn't use handseals anymore up to three handseal Raiton jutsus. Mostly used as a last resort, the user will faint after three turns, and will lose to his opponent. In duration of this technique, clouds become dark and lightning flashes to the ground and thunder can be heard although it doesn't harm the enemy.

Ikazuchi Uesama Raiton Panpan - Thunder Emperor Lightning Release Clap
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The Thunder Emperor During his Level Two state, claps his hands and two lightning bolts appear from the sky and strike down the opponent if the user decides to strike him. It can also be used as a defense to blind the opponent so it cannot see. Also thunder can be heard after the lightning and it can cause deafness to the opponent. When the thunder is heard the opponent falls to a genjutsu that he is electocuted by his father. The thunder can be stopped if the lightning is countered or defended or if the opponent doesn't see the light. The genjutsu lasts for two turns.

Ikazuchi Uesama Jisatsu - Thunder Emperor Suicide
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The Thunder Emperor During his Level Two state, goes near to his opponent while he focuses a Rasengan on his right hand then uses it to smash himself resulting to a discharge and causes a massive explosion that kills the user and the opponent near him. The opponent cannot be killed if he makes a move to an unreached range. The jutsu makes a huge crater making it impossible to go underground to evade it.

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~All declined~ OP, do not resubmit.

 

[Alyx]

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(Tengoku no hoīruāmā)Heaven's Wheel Armor
Type:Weapon
Rank:A
Range:Self
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60(+10 if rival come in contact)

Description:The breastplate of this armor is small and is composed of feather-shaped plates pointing upwards, which cover only the users breasts, revealing a fair amount of there cleavage and sporting a large metal flower on the front, extending down along there hips, exposing her stomach. There biceps are covered by straps seemingly made of metal, and her very large plated gauntlets sport feather-shaped plates at the edges.The metal of this armor is there sharp and hurt when come in direct contact.It also comes with a pair of duel swords.

Note:The user gains the ability to fly shorts distance but due to the weight only for 2 turns.
-User can rebound B rank and lower Raiton Jutsus
-Can be summoned during the match or in the start
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~Declined~ Most metals conduct lightning very well... So lightning up to b-rank "rebounded" by a metal armor is just stupid

 

[Serpent]

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(Ranton: Shinjouran) Storm Release: Body of Storm
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (+1 Rank Ranton | +5 Taijutsu)
Description: The user will push all of his Ranton based Chakra out of his body forming a bright aura around the user. This aura takes shape of Ancient Battle Armor that is semi-transparent. This drastically increases the users ability to use Storm Element, allowing the user to use stronger Storm based techniques then normal. Because of the Ranton Armor the user is able to achieve greater speed in similar fashion to "Raiton Armor", however this only allows the user +8 to their speed, instead of the +20 Raiton would allow. Thanks to the speed gained by the Ranton Taijutsu becomes more efficient. Ranton Armor seems like an excellent technique but because of output of Ranton, the user can only use Ranton based Jutsu and Taijutsu during this mode, upon deactivation of this mode the user will feel totally drain. As a side effect, the user will feel dizzy and move at half speed because of the lack of chakra and the strain on their body.
Notes:
-Last 5 turns.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Only Ranton and Taijutsu during this Mode.
-User moves at half speed for 2 turns after Jutsu.
-No S-ranks for two turns after this Jutsu.
-No Ranton Rest of Battle after this mode is deactivated.
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

~Pending~ Need another Mod's opinion. I'm not fond of Raiton Shroud copies, but it's adequately restricted.

±± Declined ±± No speed chart references. Also, we generally don't approve copies of cannon techniques that are this powerful as the one you are basing this one in. Resubmit and Izuna or Roku will have the last word.


(Suiton: Koi Kihou) Water Release: Dense Pressure
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After the user catches their opponent in "Water Style: Water Prison" the user will make a single handseal with their free hand. this causes the pressure of the water to build as if going deep into water, this causes the trapped opponent ear drums to burst. the pressure will continue to build until the opponent is completely crushed by the Jutsu, however because the user's hand is withing the water, their hand will be crushed as well.
Note:
-Can only be used after "Water Style: Water Prison"
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

~Declined~ This should rather be a Forbidden Jutsu because it crushes the user's arm. Also, restrict it to once per battle (you'll likely not need more). Otherwise, it's fine.

 

[Alternative]

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(Magen: Jigoku mirā hyōji) - Demonic Illusion: Hell Mirror Viewing
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: -
Description:
• The user, using some sort of weapon (katana, scythe etc.) will channel a thin layer of chakra into it. They will then swipe this weapon in front of the target's eyes as a feint move. When this happens, a thin wave of chakra is expelled and inserted through their eyes and into the brain, which slightly blurs their vision. When their vision is regained, everything they see is mirrored to what's normally happening. This is a great jutsu to use in conjunction with Taijutsu or Kenjutsu techniques.
Notes:
• Can only be used three times in battle.
~Declined~Similar jutsu exists. (Performed differently)
(Kugutsu: Rasen Kugutsu no Mai) - Puppetry Technique: Spiral Dance of Puppets
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 35 (+10 for additional puppet)
Description:
• Using various weapons such as swords and spikes concealed in two or more puppets, the user will control them to spiral around towards the target in a circular motion similar to Gatsūga, though it's no where near the speed of that spinning. The pronged sharp objects as well as the force from the puppets has the potential to cause deep cuts and wounds.
~Approved~

 

[Piccolosan]

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(Kenjutsu: shadan) Sword Arts: interception
Type: Defensive/Defense
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 40 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description: The user releases chakra unto their sword and quickly coats the sword with pure chakra. Then as the enemies attack is coming at the user, he twists the katana and and hits the attack with the non-sharp part of the katana. As the katana makes contact the user releases chakra and instead of breaking apart the jutsu, the user blocks and sends it to the left or right. Using the katana like a baseball bat to block and send the attack to the side.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle
~Because its pure chakra, it can only block A rank and below elemental jutsu.
~Must be Kage rank to use this
~It can block S rank pure chakra attacks
~Can not send the jutsu back, only to the right or left side of the user
~Can only be taught by Piccolosan
~Declined~ You expect to deflect an incomming giant fireball that covers the whole field with a small sword? Good luck with that.

 

[Howard]

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Resubmit

Due to the closure of the last thread I can't quote the previous jutsu all I can do is link >_<

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it's the second jutsu.

(Kuchiyose: Sekkou Buntai Arufa) Summoning: Scout Squad Alpha
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user draws blood and performs one hand seal (Bird) with ample pressure and chakra control he summons four small Kites deemed Scout Squad Alpha. They are elite squad of four Kites each are small in size being about 4 feet in height with a wing span of 2 and a half feet. They each fly at fast speeds great for relying messages around vast distances. They have a strong sense of sight able to see small prey such as rabbits and other small game from heights of 60 ft in the air. Their sight is so great they can keep track of the prey with ease, relying that location to the summoner through the network of Kites that usually begins in Long range with Alpha and ends in Short range close to the summoner with Gamma. Each of the 4 condors act and scout differently, Alpha is the leader and he scouts on his own using his sight to find the opponent and rely the message back to Omega and Beta who then rely the message to Gamma and then from Gamma to the summoner, they do this by either calling out the location to the closest Kite or using a special code that each Kite and the Summoner understands(Squaking along the same lines Crows communicate). He is usually found in Long Range. Beta and Omega work as a team scouting in Mid range they are able to see things a whole range away so if they are in mid depending on the way they look they can see both Long and Short ranges respectively. Lastly is Gamma he is a loner he has the worst sense of sight so he usually stays close to the summoner for quick response in short range attacks. They have amazing sight but Alpha is restricted to seeing that which is in his own range his sight can't see past that as his eyes are trained to keep close watch on the opponent. Omega and Beta can see past their own range into a different range as they have been trained to see things at a distance they can also focus on what they see in their own range if the opponent is in their range. Finally Gamma can see what is in his range he has poor sight and can only see what is close to him usually he is really close to the summoner on his shoulder or close enough to alert him when an opponent is near. They are not to strong when it comes to battle but if they attack an opponent they will most likely go for the eyes pecking and gouging them out and then either returning to their range or returning to the summoner. They are able to swarm and attack the opponent moving at incredible speeds they can swap positions at extreme speeds making it seem like there are more than just four Kites in the group.
Notes:

-Each can speak english
-Can only be summoned for 4 turns
-Cannot summon a Kite the turn before
-Cannot summon another Kite the same turn
-Gamma can see an opponent in the same range as him. He is usually found in short range.
-Beta and Omega can see someone one range away via Sight
-Alpha can only see what is in his range usually Long
-Their sight, albeit enhanced and specialized is a normal sight with no special abilities.​

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(Kuchiyose: Puu) Summoning: Puu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user draws blood and performs one hand seal (Snake) while applying pressure and chakra onto the blood. He then summons Puu, Puu is a summon that was raised by the holder of the contract. His mother and father where both killed when they were summoned into battle and the holder of the contract held himself responsible for their death. Puu started out life like any other Kite as an egg, a few days before his hatching from the egg the holder of the contract had gotten himself into a deep situation he was being tracked by 4 elite shinobi who wanted his head. He quickly summoned both Fuu and Paa, being the strongest summons at the time they gave their lives to protect the contract holder. Soon after their death the holder of the contract was reverse summoned to the Kite Nesting ground, the Elder spoke to him telling him how the egg would hatch soon and needed someone to keep it warm and safe and that without parents or a guardian the Nesting Ground wasn't safe. The holder took the egg with him back to his village and took care of it until it hatched. He then named the summon Puu in honor of both parents who had sacrificed their lives for him. He raised the summon long into Adult hood teaching it everything he could. Puu has two forms a small chibi type form which is used when it needs to stay hidden or when he needs to be smaller and a large form in which it can easily hold three grown humans on his back. The second form is used to fly many people around the area. In both forms he can use Water Release quite fluidly. He has mastered Water Release and can use every jutsu the user knows up to S rank, without hand seals due to the rigorous training they went through together. Puu in his second form can fly extremely fast and this flight is unhindered by the number of passengers he carries(Can't carry more than three). He can also speak fluid English and shares a deep bond with the contract holder due to the excess time spent with him. He also respects all the summoners listening to them without hesitation. In his first form he can't fly and is quite sluggish in moving about.
Notes:

-Can only be summoned for 4-turns
-Can carry 3 people on his back
-Can only be summoned if there is no other Kite on the field
-No other Kites can be summoned while he is on the field
-Must be a signer or the Holder of the Kite contract to summon
-Puu can transition between forms once a turn and it counts as a jutsu
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[Mathias]

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(Houtai Gigei: Manipyure-shon Enhansumento) - Bandage Arts: Manipulation Enhancement
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 chakra per turn active)
Attack Points: 60
Description: By focusing a desired chakra affinity (Pure, Earth, Fire or Wind) throughout a selected amount of bandages, the user can freely manipulate them to attack or bind his opponent. The channeling of pure chakra is mainly used to bind a selected target in place by manipulating the bandages. By channeling Earth chakra the user is able to manipulate and harden the bandages to a steel-like quality similar to the Iron Skin technique. This would allow the user to push himself off the ground by using the bandages as a support mechanism or even to deal hard hitting impacts to a desired target. By channeling fire chakra the user can manipulate and warm up the bandages enough to cause second degree burns to any skin it comes into contact with. Lastly, by channeling and coating Wind chakra, the user is able to manipulate the bandages being used to increase their cutting and piercing capabilities being able to slice/pierce through B rank and below earth ninjutsu. The coating of wind chakra can also be used a shielding mechanism to deflect thrown projectiles like lighting enhanced kunais, shuriken, etc.

Notes:
- Can be used four times per battle
- Bandages stay active until the user stops focusing said elemental affinity or they get destroyed
- Just like Iron Skin, the user can only use elemental techniques of the affinity they are focusing through the bandages
- Must be taught by Mathias
~Approved~ There are still just bandages, when infused with earth, it just means they are harder to cut, but bandages burn pretty well

(Ninpo: Isei no Yoi Hōtai) - Ninja Art: Slashing Bandages Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Hiruko can unwrap the bandages of his arms and use them as tendrils for long range attacks. The bandages are made so strong they can easily slice through rock.
Note: This technique is only capable of slicing through C rank and below Earth Ninjutsu.

Seeing as Hiroku's bandages reach up to long range, I figured mine could at least reach up to mid range, and due to the rank and elemental enhancement I also figured it would increase the rank in which it can slice earth. ^_^

(Houtai Gigei: Rappingu Sono Mashin) - Bandage Arts: Wrapping the Devil
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Attack Points: 40
Description: By focusing fire chakra in the tip of a bandage, the user will burn his own skin to close an open wound caused by foreign objects that pierced into the user. The user will then manipulate that same bandage to wrap around the wounded area. The user can also extend the bandages up to mid range to either use this as an offensive move by burning the opponent then binding him in place or it could also be used to help out a team mate.

Notes:
- Must be taught by Mathias
~Declining~ If you heat up a bandage to a temperature that can cauterize a wound, wouldn't the bandage just burn up? And if you are wrapped in them(Which I assume you are, or atleast some of your body parts) then that means you'd burn up.

 

[black uchiha]

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(Kingu Shinobu) King Shinobu
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons the King of Mt. Gen. Lord Shinobu is one of the few beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. King Shinobu stands 40ft tall, with a horn extending another 10ft from his head. Shinobu hands are tipped with claws, and he has powerful wings extending from his back for flight. He is capable of flying at high speed even while carrying extra weight. Being king, Shinobu is the strongest of all the Mt. Gen beetle. He has the nature affinitie of wind using it up to S-rank, his wings adds +10 damage to the wind. He has a special ability to release a loud hissing sound (

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under description and ecology) in a specific direction, that is deafening and debilitating to anyone/anything in its path (up to mid-range). Upon hearing this, the opponent(s) muscles become weak and fall to the ground unable to move for a short time (1 turn).
- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Wings add +10 damage to wind techs
- Hissing can only be used 2 times per battle
- Paralysis only last 1 turn
- The user can be caught in the hissing
- Can't summon another summoning for 3 turns after Shinobu is disspelled
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
- Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract for 3 months
~Declined~ First of all, there are no serious restrictions for this, and the paralysis can easily be abused. Plus, I see no point in the user being affected by the hissing, as the opponent would be practically dead anyway.

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[-Tauburn-]

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(Hyouton: Marikasui) Ice Release: Ice Ball of Spikes
Type: Attack
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: The user makes a single handseal then extends their arm outward a the opponent, while releasing wind and water chakra from their arm creating ice. Then mold the ice into a spining spiked ball, that is shot at the opponent, with a burst of wind chakra. Once it hits the opponent, the spining causes cuts a slashes to the opponents body.
- Can be used 6 times per battle.
- Cant be used after another Uce tech ever,

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(Dyuaru Gatsūga) Dual Fang Over Fang
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user and their ninken after having used, (Juujin Bunshin) - Beast Human Clone, on the ninken where they can then makes clones of themselves and preform a chakra enhanced, (Gatsūga) - Fang Over Fang, but with this one there are four powerful beast-like attacks that when contact is made with the opponent. The force of this attack is strong enough to break through the front gate of any village.
- Must have ninken.
- Must use Beast human clone, or have clones already made.
- Cant be used without a four users.
- Can be used 5 times per battle.
- Must have -Tauburn- permission to use.
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit.


(Jinjū Konbi Henge: Shimetsuki Hiroikuchi Okami) Human Beast Combination Transformation: Four Eyed Wide Mouthed Wolf
Type: Supp
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: n/a
Description: The user and his ninken both merge together, much like Double-Headed Wolf with a different form. This form takes on a more feral type of look, giving the user four eyes, two stacked on top of each other. The new form also has four large black claws for paws, The form also shares the size of the Inuzuka's Double-Headed Wolf. While in the new form he user is able to use single person, Inuzuka jutsu.
- Can only be used by Inuzuka bios.
- The new form only lasts 3 turns after Transformation.
- Once the 3 turns are up, the user and his ninken will not be able to use any other taijutsu for the next turn.
- Must have permission from -Tauburn- to use.

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~Declined~ What point does this serve?

Oh and just to verify that i have an Inuzuka Bio.

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[System001]

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Doton:Botoukai Kujo(Earth Style: Sphere demolition)
Rank:A
Type:Offense
Damage: 60
Chakra Cost:30
Description: The user preforms two handseals, causing several dense spiked sphere like rocks to violently erupt from the ground, each rock having a diameter of at least a foot. The Spiked balls orbit around the enemy at mutiple angles and directions essentially surronding the enemy in a "greater orb" through their orbiting keeping roughly 3feet away from the enemy at all times, and upon forming a second handseal, all of the rocks converge in on the enemy, crushing him inbetween he massess of spikes.
~No S Rank or above earth jutsu for the rest of the turn.
~Declined~ It's more or less alright save for the fact that 3 feet is incredible close, and please define how many rocks come out of the ground.

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Boukyaku (The Oblivion)
Rank:S
Type:weapon
Chakra cost:0/40
Damage:40
Description:It is a sword said to be forged long ago by the student of the very man who made the seven swordsman of the mist's swords, on the day that his teacher died he forged this sword in blinded rage and sorrow.It is said that this sword has many dormant abilities.The swords blade is about 4 and a half feet long and its hilt is roughly a foot long(including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches and a shallow groove runs along the middle of the flat of the blade on both sides.The sword was forged from a special alloy mined in the depths of a dormant volcano this alloy allows the user's fire chakra to be poured into the sword.The sword can also be repaired by pouring normal chakra into the sword which counts as a move,the sword also has

~All nature chakra's can be used with the sword however the sword prefers fire chakra
~The sword can only be infused with one nature chakra at a time
~The sword is not indestructible but is slightly stronger than your average sword due to its size and denseity
~It takes one turn for the sword to finish repairing
~While fire chakra is channeled into the sword the sword gains extra abilities giving the user:
~+5 to all kenjustu and fire justu
~Sword can only be infused with a nature chakra for five turns afterwards the sword requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again
~No water justu above B rank can be used while holding this sword.
~Can only be wielded by white flash and people he deems worthy

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(Akenomyōsei)The Morning Star
Rank:S
Damage:N/A
Type:Weapon
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40 for abilities
Description: The Morning Star is a legendary silvery snow white Fuuma Shuriken made of a lightweight yet immensly strong metal. It can be thrown with immense dexterity and accuracy and due to its light-weight build and heightened equilibrium the Fuuma Shuriken rotates at high speeds when thrown, easily reaching 400 rotations per minute and traveling at extreme speeds. Its blades are tapered to extremely sharp edges being able to slice through rocks with a level of grace beauty and strength unmatched by any sword. When traveling, because of its pure colour, it often reflects the suns rays making the blade dazzle with the colours of the rainbow, however because of its high rotation levels and speed of travel, it is often seen as a bright whitish light that can blind the enemy if they were to look directly at the blade, earning it the name of The Monring Star.The Morning Stars four blades are easily detachable and can be wielded like daggers if neccesary for close combat. Legend has it that upon creation, while being forged each each of the four blades were pre-infused with one of four elements, wind fire water and lightning.
The Morning Star comes with a silver chain that can easily be wrapped around and unwrapped from the inner rings of the blades for dislodging and retrieval of the Fuma Shuriken, or use the chain in conjunction with a single one of its blades creating a sword-chain effect.

-Abilities.
-Since the Morning Star's blades were preinfused with a element, the user can add basic chakra to the shuriken that will activate the element(s) producing the same effects as elemental chakra that manifests with a white or silverish tint that coats the Shuriken as it spins. This however can only be done with Two elements at a time and the elements cannot be at the opposite spectrum to eachother (Eg.Fire&Water)
-Fire coating causes the shuriken to burn and scald
-Wind coating heightens its cutting abilities rotation and speed
-Lightning coating causes it to vibrate making it sharper and cause slight paraylsis
-Water coating heightens cutting and causes target to become wet upon contact area.
-Coatings also allows the Morning Star to cut through B Rank(+Elemental dis-/advantages) Jutsu
-The chain was forged with its own abilities, the user through the use of basic chakra can make the chain extend and shorten or stiffen and harden to the extent that it resembles a rigid iron bar.

The abilities of The Morning Star makes it a very versatile weapon, that can be used for both close and long range fighting.Such as by detaching two of the blades and attaching them to either end of the chain which is then hardened the user can create a Naginta like weapon.

-Restrictions.
-For the Fuuma Shurken to be thrown, all Four blades must be attached and intact.
-Once thrown, the Shuriken has to be retrivied by physical means such as throwing it so that it loops around much like a boomerang, or via the use of the chain.
-Making the Chain rigid counts as a move. Chain can only be destroyed by S rank piercing and cutting techniques. Blades are indestructible (Doesn't mean it can cut through anything).

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Kenjutsu: Tenrai Hishoue Arashi Ken (Sword Arts: Divine Soaring Storm Blade)
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Type:Offense
Description: The user crouches low while twisting their body slightly, bunching up their muscles and building up potential energy, with a blade held in hand, prefrably a sword. The user then springs upwards while untwisting their body causing them to rotate rapidly as they ascend via their chakra enhanced jump, knocking the enemy into the air next to them with their blade as they ascend, while spinning the user pumps out a large amount of chakra/elemental chakra from their blade the chakra creating a vortex like tornado that encircles the user mimicking the blades sharpness and damaging the enmy in the process as they are caught in the vortex. Depending on the type of chakra used the vortex can have serveral different effects such as heightened cutting for wind ability of parylsis for lightning ability to drench for water and the ability to burn for fire.
-Must state what chakra type is used, otherwise it is Normal Chakra
-Can only be used 3x
-After the technique ends the user is left vunerable in the air.
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[PandaMan.]

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(Raiton: Desutorakutadisuku) Lightning Release: Destructo Disk
Type: Attack
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: The user focuses their ration chakra onto one of their raised hands and then creates a very thin spiraling disk. The condensed disk is sharp enough to cut through an primary human and only follows a straight path.
Note: Can only be taught by Tokun

(Raiton: Kuririn no Seishinbakudan) Lightning Release: Krillin Spirit Bomb
Type: Defense
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: The user performs the handseals Dog → Bird and then gathers a condensed ball of lightning on his hand. The lightning ball can then be thrown and expands to the size of Neji's "Eight palms Trigram rotation" on contact.
Note: Can only be taught by Tokun

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(Doton: Kuchiki Doragon) Earth Release: Dragon Expulsion
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user makes the handseals 'Bird → Ox → Tiger → Ram → Ox → Snake → Dog' and then releases a large earth dragon from their body. The dragon can be brought out from any part of the users body. If the dragon comes from the hand, then the user cannot perform handseals for the time being. The dragon is roughly half the size of "Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet".
Note: The dragon can be held upon the body or sent towards the opponent.
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: The dragon can only be kept for 3 turns
Note: Counts as 2 moves. One when being created and the other when used.
Note: Cannot use S-Rank earth for the rest of the battle
Note: Must have mastery over earth
Note: Can only be taught by Tokun

Please edit if needed.

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[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

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(Chi-ken) - Thousand Blades
Rank: S
Type: Offinsive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: 80
Description: In this jutsu gava move its wings and shoot one thousand wind blades towards the target making a rain of blades ,which are impossible to dodge due to the number of blades.

• Can be used 2 times per battle
• Can only used by Gava

(Boufuu ) WindStorm
Rank:A
Type: Off/Deff
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage: 60
Description: By fluttering the wings, summoning create a power windstorm which is ideal to clear clouds from the sky.

• Can be use 3 time per battle
• Can only be used by Gava

-Resubmitting-

(shinkansen)- Bullet Train
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: all
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: By releasing chakra from its wings, summoning get extremely fast speed which is impossible for a human eye to detect [unless having Dojutsu] which also allow him to pass through several B rank attacks [ storms,fires etc].

• Can be used by any Vulture summoning
• Can be use 3 times per battle

~All Declined~ Seriously?

 

[Lucifer]

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(Doton/Suiton: Mizu Funka) - Earth/Water Release: Water Eruption
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Deffensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus his earthen chakra through his feet into ground and stomp his both fist on the ground to send a shockwave of chakra into the earth beneath, and create a massive tunnel under the opponent(s) and under the batlefield. Then the user will materialize an enormous ammount of water into the tunnels, as the the ground gets pressurized the user will form the horse handseal and create a massive water eruption with an enormous amount of water from under the ground blasting everything from long to short range into the air causing enormous damages to the enemys, and as it will rain down half of the water that erupted will stay on the field as a water source, covering the field in water while the other gets absorbed by the earth and goes back into the tunnels again.

Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users moves as it's an elemental combo.
Note: The user can't perform any earth or water jutsu for one turn after this jutsu is used.
~Declined~ Sorry. A similar technique exists.
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(Raiton/Suiton: Kihou no Borute-ji) - Lightning/Water Release: High Voltage
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user starts by focusing a large amount of suiton chakra infront of his/her hand which is pointed at the opponent by converting the highly focused suiton chakra into water, materializing a large amount of water before their hand and as the water appears the user starts channeling his raiton chakra into his hand till the point it's a pure mass of focused lightning chakra than the user will blast it right into the water infront of him/her, exploding inside the wter and creating a lightning/water combination, with lightning coiled around the water blast and inside it. Directing this at the opponent and being fired in an "V" pattern and as it makes impact it will expolde leaving a large amount of water behind.

Example

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Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users moves as it's an elemental combo.
Note: The user can't perform any lightning or water jutsu for one turn after this jutsu is used.
~Approved~ Well done.
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(Doton: Bara no Toge) - Earth Style: Rose Thorns
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Deffensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus his doton chakra through the round and form a range of three handseals causing deadly thorns of earth to rise up around the opponent wrapping itself around the arms and legs practically the whole body of the opponent and as they are thorns they will tear the flesh open of the enemy hence the name "Rose Thorns". The user can make it rise up anywhere on the battlefield.

Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: The user can't perform any earth jutsu for one turn after this jutsu is used.
Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
~Declined~ Jinbei possesses a similar jutsu.

 

[LolaxXx]

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Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Barrier ( Zennou Raikou Shouheki)
Type: Supplementry/defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: Focusing their chakra, the user does a number of handseals and creates a large electric dome around themselves and the opponent, trapping the opponent inside. The dome goes 20 feet in a circle, including underground as well. Inside the barrier is filled with the users lightning chakra, allowing the user to be able to sense what is going on inside the barrier. While inside the user can have their lightning jutsu strike the opponent from any direction they choose. Can use to block outside Lightning attacks A-Rank and below. If the opponent comes into contact with the walls of the barrier, they are immidiately shocked with a small surge of lightning, causing them to jerk back, away from the lightning, an opponent can force there way out but as a result will be temporarily paralyzed. However, by using a powerful wind technique, the opponent can blow a hole, or even destroy the entire barrier.
- Can only be taught by Lola
~Declined~ It's not too bad, but you need to define how long the barrier can be sustained, any restrictions related to this use of this technique, and if the user can strike opponents outside of the barrier with lightning (as in the bolded).

Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Strikes ( Zennou Raikou Dageki )
Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: By using their lighting chakra in the air. The user moves at a extremely fast speed, surrounding themselves with the lighting chakra, making it seem like they are just a white flash of lightning. Using the chakra, the user assaults the opponent with a barrage of quick lightning infuse punches and kicks coming from all directions due to the user quickly running around the opponent, and ultimately finishing the attack with a crushing headbutt. The speed in which the attacks come makes it difficult for an unsuspecting opponent to successfully react.
- Can only be taught by Lola
- Can only use after successfully creating the Almighty Lightning Barrier
- Sharingan users especially can easily keep up with the speed of the attack, just because of the ability to better predict and precieve movement.
~Declined~ First Technique Wasn't Approved

Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Step ( Zennou Raikou Sochi )
Type: Supplementry
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: After making the respective handseals, and focusing on their lightning chakra in the air, the user uses the chakra to increase their speed for a brief instant. The user can move at a short distance at incredible speed, allowing them to dodge small/medium scale attacks, or to help get in close to opponents.
- Can Only be used after successfully using Almighty Lightning Barrier

Please edit if needed... Im not familiar with the handseal thing so i hope that dosent matter.
~Declined~ First Technique Wasn't Approved

 

[Baldy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Hateshiganai Se No Hinote)- Eternal Torrent of Flames
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (Requires more chakra, explained in description)
Damage: 40
Description: The user will build up a large amount of katon chakra in their mouth, the user then creates a small circle with their thumb and index finger, holding the circle up to their mouth, as they blow out their katon chakra, as their katon chakra passes out of the circle, its materializes into extremely hot flames, causing the user's mouth and fingers to act as a flamethrower blowing out a constant stream of spiraling torrent like flames, the stream of flames can be maintained for as long as the user wants, but at the slightest lapse of concentration, the technique will end. The torrent of fire is capable of spreading quickly along the ground, going all the way up to long-range. It is a continuous stream of fire, and if held for a long enough time, it can completely encase the entire battlefield in fire, providing a 'fire source' of some sorts, enveloping the opponent's waist and below in fiery flames, which would cause severe burns. The user must concentrate and if he gets disrupted, the flames would stop spreading. Due to the fact that one needs a sufficient amount of chakra to continuously spew out the flames, it takes up more chakra than normal.
Restrictions

• Can only be taught by Baldy..
• Only usable 3 times per battle
• No other technique may be used after performing this technique on the same turn, or the flames would get disrupted
• Flames on the battlefield stay there for 5 turns, before dissipating into the environment indefinitely
• Flames reach up to waist length when first created, and slowly sinks down as the turns go by, until it finally disappears

~Declined~ If you're continously spewing fire, this should have a continuous chakra cost. Also, the flames lasting for 5 turns is far too long. You should probably make this a higher ranked technique, as well, while you're at it.
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(Katon: Kushizashi No Za Moeru Shokushu & Muchi)-Impalement of the Flaming Tentacles & Whips
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: By focusing the users chakra into an existing fire source, with no chakra infused or your own chakra infused, the user manipulates the current existing fire source, preferably rather large, and changes its shape. Wherever he wishes, the user can cause a huge amount of fire tentacles and whips to spring forth from the fire source, like Water Dragon Whip, that are sharp, and fiery, and they then race towards the opponent. Despite their sharpness, it would usually be used to impale the opponent, but the intense heat of the whip does not necessarily need to pierce through, impaling your opponent, but its heat can cause burns also. However, the whips are still strong enough to pierce through flesh, burning a hole through and skewering through. The whips can be controlled individually.
Restrictions:

• Can only be taught by Baldy..
• Only usable 5 times per battle
• There must be a pre-existing fire source to create these technique, the tentacles and whips cannot be created out of nowhere
• Flaming tentacles and whips travel at a fairly fast pace
• Whips can travel up to mid-range, but the techniques creation can be anywhere between short-long range

~Declined~ Make this an A-rank technique and limit it's usage to 2-3 times per battle.
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(Raiton: Shitotsu Sansen)- Break-Piercing Triple Lightning Beam
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Shitotsu Sansen is primarily used to disable. The practitioner generates a huge amount of Raiton chakra in his palm, and manifests it into a burst of crackling yellow energy in his/her palm and uses that energy to draw an inverted yellow triangle. The triangle then generates solidified energy in the shape of triangles from the three points of the inverted triangle, like horns. The fired triangles hit the intended target and pin him/her against a nearby surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in the shape of a perfect triangle and immobilize the target. The fired triangles travel at a relatively fast speed, and upon impact, it could drill through and leave grievous injuries in the opponent's body where it hits. An electric current runs through the three fired triangles, and due to the high condensed voltage within each fired triangle, they can send an inner shock wave into your body, shocking your innards. However, the shock waves can only cause numbness in your body, and cannot fry you.
Restrictions

• Can only be taught by Baldy..
• Only usable 2 times per battle
• Cooldown period of 3 turns before you are able to use this technique a second time
• No S-rank Lightning and above for the next two turns
• Paralysation caused by the fired horns last for 1 whole turn if hit
• Numbing also lasts for 1 turn

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~Pending~ For another Mod. I prefer not to check Kido, and I feel that I would unfairly decline this.


±± Declined ±± This has already been submitted and declined before. Do Not Resubmit

 

[Vayne]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Ninja arts: Toxic transformation (Mizu rirīsu: Sekai saidai-kyū no mizu gijutsu)
Type:All
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: *The user creates a shadow clone (kage bunshin) that will have poison inside it's system the clone can then attack the opponent as the clone hits the opponent the clone puffs and poison covers the opponent.

Restrictions.
-Can only be used three times per battle.
-can not be used twice at the same turn.
-needs to be separated by a turn (the user).
-The poison only affects the opponents speed making it slower( makes handseals slower and a hand seal that can be done by one hand will become two hands to perform)
~Declined~ Alright concept, but you need to define how many clones can be made and show proof of a Medical Bio. If you do not have one, you cannot create such a jutsu.

Gentle fist style: 32 leg combo (Jentoru ken no sutairu: 32 Ashi no konbo)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: *The user after activating his Byakugan attacks the opponent with his gentle fist style but attacking the opponents leg stoping the chakra flow to the legs making the opponent unable to move. This move is better used when an opponent is wearing an armor for his chest.

Restrictions.
-Can only be used three times per battle
-lasts for 1 opponent turn.
-No gentle fist style techniques can be used at that turn or the following.
~Declined~ How is the more effective if the opponent is wearing chest armor, anyway?

Dimai sword (Dimai Ken)
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: non when not fusing 30 when fusing
Damage: when not fusing 40 and when fusing 60(+5 if used in conjunction with water)
Description:* The Dimai sword is a sword made up of rare metals found near the earns core those metals make the blade of the sword and it is made up of a wood of the first hokage (holding area) this sword allows the user to fuse lightning element to the sword making the sword more sharper and deadly the sword can release bolts of lightning (D rank) if the user wishes.
If the user uses the bolt of lightning the bolts of lightning can cause water to be electrically charged, this sword can cut through stones with ease like a hit knife through butter.

Restrictions.
-Only lightning element can be fused to the sword.
-Lightning bolts count to the three jutsu limit.
-Can only be used by mangekyo byakugan.
-No lightning techniques of B rank and higher can be used in the same turn or the next.

Sword looks like this

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Note: Feel free to edit.
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit

 

[Alyx]

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Summoning Animal:Horned Vipers
Scroll Owner:XxFallenUchihaxX
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing:Drago
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Snakerus,Scorpi
Description and Background:Sand Vipers can grow up to 50 cm in length. They venture out only during the night and usually bury themselves in the sand during the day. The horned viper is venomous and hemotoxic. That means its venom will cause tissue damage along with destroying red blood cells. The bite itself may not be fatal, but is definitely very painful. Prolonged exposure to high levels of hemotoxins will lead to a fatality. The horned viper is now an endangered species, due to a constantly degrading environment. It is not truly known why they have horns on top of their eyes. Speculations include the horns as protection for the eyes against the sand, camouflage or navigation through the sand.


±± Declined ±± Snakes are already a cannon contract. And it includes all variants. Do not resubmit.

 

[Blizzàrd1]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Sono houka kiji) - Fire Release: The Fire Cloak
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User channels Fire chakra in his/her hands. He then claps and separates his/her hands from each other creating a long cloak that could easily cover users body (10 feet by 10 feet). The clock is a mesh of strong tight fire bonds which are not harmful to the user whose chakra is used. He can then use this cloak to protect him from other jutsus by wrapping it around him or the jutsu. This cloak is super effective against Wind style technique which are A-Rank or below, It can tear the wind into molecular level, which means the fire mesh of the cloak will destroy the wind leaving no trace but it disappears after it is used once.
Note:
~ Can defend the user from A-Rank or below wind jutsus; such as: waves, balls or blasts etc.
~ Can be destroyed by B-Rank Water Jutsu.
~ Will disappear after used once.
~ Lasts for 2 turns without use.
~ Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~ Can only be taught by -Blizzard-

(Suiton: Sono mizu kiji) - Water Release: The Water Cloak
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User channels Water chakra in his/her hands. He then claps and separates his/her hands from each other creating a long cloak that could easily cover users body (10 feet by 10 feet). The clock is a mesh of strong tight water bonds which are not harmful to the user whose chakra is used. He can then use this cloak to protect him from other jutsus by wrapping it around him or the jutsu. This cloak is super effective against fire style technique which are A-Rank or below, It can tear the fire into molecular level, which means the water mesh of the cloak will destroy the fire leaving no trace but it disappears after it is used once.
Note:
~ Can defend the user from A-Rank or below fire jutsus; such as: balls, small blasts
~ Can be penetrated by B-ranked earth jutsu
~ Will disappear after used once.
~ Lasts for 2 turns without use.
~ Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~ Can only be taught by -Blizzard-


(Doton: Sono tsuchi kiji) - Earth Release: The Earth Cloak
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User channels Earth chakra in his/her hands. He then claps and separates his/her hands from each other creating a long cloak that could easily cover users body (10 feet by 10 feet). The clock is a mesh of strong tight earth bonds which are not harmful to the user whose chakra is used. He can then use this cloak to protect him from other jutsus by wrapping it around him or the jutsu. This cloak is super effective against water style technique which are A-Rank or below, It can absorb the water entirely, which means the earth mesh of the cloak will absorb the water leaving no trace but it disappears after it is used once.
Note:
~ Can defend the user from A-Rank or below water jutsus; such as: balls, small blasts
~ Can be penetrated by B-ranked lightning jutsu
~ Will disappear after used once.
~ Lasts for 2 turns without use.
~ Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~ Can only be taught by -Blizzard-
~All Declined~ Better variations exist.

 

[-Yard-]

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(Kunai Shikyo Genkaku) Kunai Death Illusion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: If the opponent throws a kunai at you, you essentially make 2 handseals placing the opponent under genjutsu and throw a kunai back, deflecting the kunai the opponent threw. However the opponent is set in a genjutsu as soon as the two seals were done. The genjutsu is that he sees you throw a kunai back, but his hits yours at a certain angle that makes him think it knocked yours away and killed you. Because he sees that happening in the genjutsu.

- Can only be used twice per match
- Lasts two turns
- Must skip 2 turns before using
- Must be used in mid range only to allow enough time for the two handseals.
~Declined~ Don't see the applicability of this and it seems really silly for the user to be supposedly killed by a single kunai that has been knocked away.

(Kunai Shikyo Genkaku) Kunai Death Illusion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: If the opponent throws a kunai at you, you essentially make 2 handseals placing the opponent under genjutsu and throw a kunai back, deflecting the kunai the opponent threw. However the opponent is set in a genjutsu as soon as the two seals were done. The genjutsu is that he sees you throw a kunai back, but his hits yours at a certain angle that makes him think it knocked yours away as well as making his kunai go of course a little and strikes into your head, with blood gushing out from the stab with you falling to the ground dying from blood loss and of course being stabbed in the forehead. Because he sees that happening in the genjutsu.

- Can only be used twice per match
- Lasts two turns
- Must skip 2 turns before using
- Must be used in mid range only to allow enough time for the two handseals.


You don't get killed by the knocked away kunai but the opponent hits your kunai at an angle to were it knocks yours away and kits you. Or at least that's what he sees in the gen. I should've explained that better tho lol


±± Declined ±± And now you made it unapprovable. Do Not Resubmit.

 

[Yanto]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(katon:hamon)
Fire:rings of fire
Type:attack/offence
Rank: B
range: long
chakra:25+2 per ring
Damage:40+5 per ring
Description: the user starts to gather and increase the katom chakra in his/her body to his/her palms and makes 2 handseals ox+tiger ,and after that he slams on to the ground(on ring per hitting time)which starts to go around him(but far from him)as the rings go away it grows
-¿?-can be used 3 times per battle
-¿?- if the user makes more than 3 rings he can use this jutsu 2 times
-¿?-must be s-class
-¿?-must be taught by me or traded or given permission forom me to the one who is using before using it
-¿?-sharingan should be activated

~Declined~ What?