[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Igneel]

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Suiton:Amatsu Supin|Water Style:Heavenly Spin
Rank:B
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:After creating a solid constructs made out of water,the user simply performs the tiger seal manipulating the water construct to spin rapidly at high speeds.If anybody was caught inside the construct before it started spinning,he/she would get dizzy and will eventually pass out due to dizziness.
-Usable 4 times per battle
-A solid construct has to be made prior to the usage of this jutsu
-Spinning lasts for a whole turn
-Only taught/usable by Igneel

~Declined~ what do you mean by a solid construct? make it more understandable so i can understand what do you want from it lol

Suiton:Amatsu Supin|Water Style:Heavenly Spin
Rank:B
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:After creating a solid construct made out of water[eg:Water Dragon,Gushing water imprisonment or any water jutsu that has a definite shape],the user simply performs the tiger seal manipulating the water construct to spin rapidly at high speeds.If used in conjunction with projectile based water jutsu's,this increases the penetration power of the projectile.If used in conjunction with jutsu's like Gushing water Imprisonment or other water jutsu that traps the opponent inside a water body,the opponent would get dizzy and will eventually pass out due to dizziness.
-Usable 4 times per battle
-A solid construct has to be made prior to the usage of this jutsu
-Spinning lasts for a whole turn
-Only Taught/Usable by Igneel

~Declined~ I'm fine with the technique itself, but not with the colored portion, spinning water around wouldn't really cause him to be dizzy, but you need some kind of definition on the "penetration" power of the water techniques, how exactly would they affect other techniques after being influenced by this?

Ninpou:Kibaku Karuto|Ninja Arts:Exploding Cards
Rank:C
Type:Offensive
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:15
Damage:30
Description:A ninjutsu achieved with just plain mastery over chakra.The user takes a few explosive tags and runs his chakra through the tag,making it more rigid than iron.After doing so,the user uses his chakra to push the tag towards the target at great speed.The tags can be controlled by the user using his chakra and only explodes on the user's command.
-Can only Manipulate 4 tags at a time
-Only Usable/Taught by Igneel

~Declined~ Lol no free manipulation, no increasing speeds through chakra.

Fuuton:Kokyuu|Wind Style:Breath
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:The user focuses fuuton chakra into his lungs,compressing and molding it to form oxygen inside his lungs.This allows the user to breathe without taking in air from the surrounding.The user can also sacrifice the build up oxygen in his lungs to rejuvenating his muscles,thereby increasing his reflexes and running speed for 1 turn.
-Usable 3 times per battle
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Lasts for 1 turn,if used to increase reflex and running speed.
-Speed and Reflex increases x1.5,if used to rejuvenate the muscles.
-Only Taught/Usable by Igneel

~Declined~ Similar techniques exist, McRazor's to be exact on that last portion of increasing reflexes and running speed, the part about you being able to breathe without taking in air from the surroundings is impossible.

 

[Ryūjin]

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[RokuNR]

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The new cycle starts from today, the 27th of February, and ends on the 6th of March.
Please make sure to familiarize yourself with the General RULES of Submission before submitting your Custom Jutsus​

 

[Alyx]

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(Tōsaku seijiātsu: Hāremu no tatchi)Perverted Sage Arts: Touch of Harem
Type:Offensive
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will first snap there fingers together causing a trigger to activate a Genjutsu where the user will appear to be the targets one true love(if target is female the user will appear as a man and vice versa for male targets).They will be sexual aroused making them feel uneasy around the user and will cause a faintish feeling on the target making them nearly at the brink of fainting of fainting,the user will appear behind the target grabbing there bosoms(for females) or grabbing there johnson(for males) and cause the tension to rise cause them to completely faint.But in reality the user will walk towards the target and channel chakra into there hands and force a punch intot the targets stomach sending them flying away.

-Can only be used by -Leaf-
-Genjutsu is C-Ranked
-Can only be used 2 times per battle

X-Declined-X Quite watching porno mate You cant give illusions that are outside of your own knowledge.

 

[Bloo]

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(Hyouton: Skadi's Haka) Ice Release: Skadi's Tomb
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will channel there ice chakra around there opponent. The user will perform one handseal, then cause a massive vortex or snow and ice shards to start swirling around he opponent. The vortex will taper off at the top creating a cone shape. The temperature inside the cone will be lowered drastically making it hard to breathe. The user will then perform one more handseal causing all the ice shards to shot at the opponent ripping them to shreds.

-Due to the thinness of the air no fire techs that come from the mouth can be used.
-Usable twice per battle.
-No S rank ice this turn or next.
-Can only be taught by Bloo.

X-Declined-X Instantly? Thats a bit oped. Its alright if you say the vortex slowly forms around the opponents and intensifies in time but not this.

 

[ZandaT]

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(Kchuysei: Asap)Summoning: Asap
Rank:A
Type:Summon
Range:Short/Long
Chakra Cost:30
Chakra Damage:60
Description: The user bites their finger, does 2 hand seals, and wipes blood on their LB tattoo, summoning Asap in the air short range of the user. Asap is light yellow, 90cm, capable of talking, lightning affinity Lesser Bird of Paradise. Asap is skilled in A Rank lightning jutsu and can perform lightning up to A Rank with no hand seals. Asap also has the ability to freely emit a blinding light from his body, that affects the eyes of anyone in short range of him, but he can only maintain the light for two seconds.(It's basically like a bright camera flash that gives momentary blindness).
Note:
-Can be summoned 1 times per battle
-Summon lasts 3 turns
-User cannot use lightning once Asap is on the field
-Asap's lightning jutsu counts as 1 of the users 3
-Flash technique can be used 1 per turn, but ASAP cannot attack in the same turn
-Once taught, you can teach anyone on the LBoP Contract
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~Declined~ Please follow the proper template, it's "Damage Points" not "Chakra Damage", and fix the grammar in the technique lol.

(Nikudan Gyorai) Human Torpedo
Rank:B-A
Type:Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:20-25
Damage Points: 40-50
Description: While any Partial or Super Expansion technique is activated the user will increase the strength and size of their lower leg's, making them able to leap in a sudden burst in any forward facing direction at various angles, headbutting the opponent in the stomach with great power and speed often sending them backwards in great pain. When used offensively, the attack can range in damage depending on the Expansion Technique used, but regardless of the technique used the move must be done in short range and the stomach pain can sometimes stun the opponent or cause internal bleeding.
Partial Expansion- B Rank Headbutt/Opp. pushed back into Mid.Range/Opp. Momentary pain stun
Super Expansion- A Ranked Headbutt/Opp. pushed into Long range/Opp. receives internal bleeding
NOTES:
-Can be used 3 times
-Must be taught by ZandaT

~Declined~ With the size that you gained from the super expansion technique, how are you able to headbutt the opponent "in the stomach"? considering how big of a difference your size and your opponent's size, and this is a simple headbutt? if so it's not A-rank, seems like a C/B-rank to me.

(Kchuysei: Asap)Summoning: Asap
Rank: A
Type: Summon
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user bites their thumb and does 2 hand seals before wiping the blood on their LB tattoo summoning Asap, in the air, short range of the user. Asap is light yellow, 90cm, lightning affinity, English talking Lesser Bird of Paradise. He is skilled in A Rank lightning jutsu and can perform lightning techniques, up to that rank, with no hand seals. Asap also has the ability to passively emit a blinding flash from his body that affects the eyes of anyone in short range of him causing momentary blindness, and eye glare.(It's basically the affects of a bright camera flash on the eye.)
NOTES:
-Can be summoned 1 time per battle
-Summon lasts 3 turns
-Asap's lightning jutsu counts as 1 of the users 3
-Flash technique can be used once, and ASAP cannot attack in that same turn
-Once taught, you can teach anyone on the LBoP Contract

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(Nikudan Gyorai) Human Torpedo
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementery
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will increase the size and strength of their lower leg's allowing them to launch themselves head first, in a sudden burst in any forward facing direction at various angles, delivering a headbutt to the opponents stomach with great force sending them backwards with slight internal damage. If the user misses then they would continue until mid.range where they would slow down enough to be able to recover.
NOTES:
-Can be used 3 times
-Partial Expansion must be activated
-Must be taught by ZandaT

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(Gigantikku no pisutoru) Gigantic Pistol
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user runs towards the opponent, and before reaching him he throws a fist, while adding Super Expansion to it to instantly change it's size. This results in the opponent getting hit by a close range fist the size of a massive boulder dealing massive damage to their body while also sending them into mid.range due to the force of the punch.
NOTES:
-Can be used 2 times
-Super Expansion must be activated
-Must be taught by ZandaT

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[BlacKing]

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Magen: Purometeusu no Okurimono to Noroi | Demonic Illusion: Prometheus - The Gift and the Curse
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 handseals and casts their opponent in a B Ranked Genjutsu where they believe themselves to have their head, arms and legs bound in chains (stretched outwards away from each other) unable to move as a large 5 meter griffon vulture descends upon them from the clouds/sky with a means to eat at their body. Outside of the Genjutsu, the user has channeled their fire chakra into the clouds/sky 20 meters above their paralyzed opponent and causes a large 5 meter, S Rankedflaming vulture with a 10 meter wingspan to quickly falling down from the sky towards them. If successfully hitting the opponent, the flaming vulture severely burns the body of the opponent. If the opponent does not successfully defend against the illusion and the technique, it causes the opponent in the illusion to feel that their skin is being rapidly picked and torn at by the griffon vulture as they scream in agony.
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
Note: User must wait 3 turns before using this technique again.
Note: No Genjutsu for 2 turns.
Note: No Fire techniques can be used the turn this technique is used.
Note: Genjutsu lasts for 1 turn.
Note: Damage comes from the flaming vulture.
Note: Counts as 2/3 moves in a turn

~Declined~ The core of the genjutsu is very similar to a CJ of Ushiro's i think, has the same thing of chains binding the opponent and a bird coming to feast on their body, i don't like the idea of mixing a ninjutsu technique with a genjutsu one, but the problem i have is how exactly is this flaming vulture released? the clouds can't release fire nor can the sky, Fire doesn't materialize like Water does from the thin air, make it only usable once.

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Ototon/Suiton: Māmansonābīmu | Sound/Water Combination: Merman Sonar Beam
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user, being submerged in water, channels sound chakra into their lungs and screams at a certain resonate frequency. The Sound picks up the water and travels as a combination towards the opponent. The sound/water combination then travels at an incredibly fast speed towards the opponent. The force of the blast is enough to send the user out of the water or deeper into it depending on the body of water and the angle at which the technique is used. The speed of this technique gives it incredible piercing power. The sound waves and water continue to spread out further as it travels, a small vortex with a 3 meter diameter.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note: This technique can also be used to deflect an A Ranked or lower Water technique back at the opponent as a sound/water combination without the user being submerged in water.
Note: No Sound or Water techniques in the same turn.

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~Declined~ Nice one, but one thing i don't agree with, which is the power blowing you into the water or out of it due to the force of the blast, this needs a medium to blow against, like a solid earth or water, or if you release a continuous stream of pressurized sound waves, tell you what, you can add the release out of the water or into it as a separate usage of the technique, like i said a continuous stream of sound waves that's close to you, because when you use it to move you it can't continue as a projectile but blows in the reversed direction, you can't use both the redirection and projectile attack with the same usage, and both would require using the technique twice.

Magen: Purometeusu no Okurimono to Noroi | Demonic Illusion: Prometheus - The Gift and the Curse
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 handseals and casts their opponent in a B Ranked Genjutsu where they believe themselves to have their head, arms and legs bound in chains (stretched outwards away from each other) unable to move as a large 5 meter griffon vulture descends upon them from the clouds/sky with a means to eat at their body. Outside of the Genjutsu, the user has channeled their fire chakra into the air 20 meters above their paralyzed opponent in which a portal (not unlike Earth Dropping Lid) emits a large 5 meter, S Ranked flaming vulture with a 10 meter wingspan to quickly falling down from the sky towards them. If successfully hitting the opponent, the flaming vulture severely burns the body of the opponent. If the opponent does not successfully defend against the illusion and the technique, it causes the opponent in the illusion to feel that their skin is being rapidly picked and torn at by the griffon vulture as they scream in agony.
Note: Can only be used 1x per battle.
Note: No Genjutsu for 2 turns.
Note: No Fire techniques can be used the turn this technique is used.
Note: Genjutsu lasts for 1 turn.
Note: Damage comes from the flaming vulture.

X-Approved-X Here's a simpler idea: Use a paralysing illusion then shoot a fire ball at your opponent. No point in this except saving you some move count ^^

Ototon/Suiton: Māmansonābīmu | Sound/Water Combination: Merman Sonar Beam
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user, being submerged in water, channels sound chakra into their lungs and screams at a certain resonate frequency. The Sound picks up the water and travels as a combination towards the opponent. The sound/water combination then travels at an incredibly fast speed towards the opponent. The speed of this technique gives it incredible piercing power. The sound waves and water continue to spread out further as it travels, a small vortex with a 3 meter diameter.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note: This technique can also be used to deflect an A Ranked or lower Water technique back at the opponent as a sound/water combination without the user being submerged in water.
Note: No Sound or Water techniques in the same turn.

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[Erzo]

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(Olm Genjutsu: Ikkō & Ikki's Fukushū ) - Olm Genjutsu Technique: Ikko & Ikki's revenge.
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple genjutsu which requires the user to summon 2 Olms who have trained themselves to be genjutsu specialists in their home land. This jutsu requires the use to either slam his hands down or stomp on the ground to summon these 2 Olms. Upon being summoned the twin Olms can release their chakra into the opponents brain whilst they zig zag around each other, catching the opponent in a visual genjutsu where he then suddenly feels another Olm is suddenly clutching his chest tightly (Olms have hands) as it's slime covers his whole body, slowly travelling downwards, all while the other two make their way towards him with quick haste, before slowly travelling past the slime which was made to cover his body by the big Olm 'summoned' at his back, and into his mouth, causing him gag as he's having breathing problems, all whilst he's struggling to move from his position due to the size of the Olm and the sticky slime it's holding him down with. Furthermore, the opponent's hearing would also be disturbed, only allowing him to hear the squelching of the slime which droops downwards, the heavy breathing of the Olm standing beside him and the Olm's hot breath on his back as it carries on clutching him extremely tightly. However, in reality, the two Olms summoned simply disperse back into their land, as soon as they've caught their opponent in this genjutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No other Olm jutsu in the next turn.

||Declined|| The hearing loss makes zero sense. Remove it.

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Resubmitting the following. No bold anywhere because I only had to remove a sentence.

(Olm Genjutsu: Ikkō & Ikki's Fukushū ) - Olm Genjutsu Technique: Ikko & Ikki's revenge.
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple genjutsu which requires the user to summon 2 Olms who have trained themselves to be genjutsu specialists in their home land. This jutsu requires the use to either slam his hands down or stomp on the ground to summon these 2 Olms. Upon being summoned the twin Olms can release their chakra into the opponents brain whilst they zig zag around each other, catching the opponent in a visual genjutsu where he then suddenly feels another Olm is suddenly clutching his chest tightly (Olms have hands) as it's slime covers his whole body, slowly travelling downwards, all while the other two make their way towards him with quick haste, before slowly travelling past the slime which was made to cover his body by the big Olm 'summoned' at his back, and into his mouth, causing him gag as he's having breathing problems, all whilst he's struggling to move from his position due to the size of the Olm and the sticky slime it's holding him down with. However, in reality, the two Olms summoned simply disperse back into their land, as soon as they've caught their opponent in this genjutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No other Olm jutsu in the next turn.

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(Mokuton: Mizu no Hōshi ) - Wood Style: Water Spores
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Water pores is a simple jutsu created by Hashirama Senju during the times which they were at war against the Mighty Uchiha. Knowing that the speciality of the Uchiha was the Fire element, Hashirama practised using his wood style in a slightly different way where each pillar or tree created had small pores within it, which he later focused his water chakra into, allowing the water within to make the wood moist, which in return would allow the wood to gain a resistance to Fire jutsus, making it so that Fire jutsus would have to be one rank higher than normal in order to be able to destroy/neutralize the wood. However, because the concentration of the water within the wood is so high, upon the wood getting pierced/cut open, water would burst out, returning the wood to its original strength, meaning an equally ranked Fire jutsu would be able to destroy the wood, as normal.
Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Lasts 4 turns each time.
Note: Can only be taught by Erzo.
Note: After using once (after it's deactivated), must wait one more turn before using it again.

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±± Declined ±± I already have a technique that infuses water into existing wood for the same result.

(Mokuton: Mokusei No Sōzō ) - Wood Style: Wooden Creation
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his Mokuton chakra into the ground and uses it to grow animals all varying in size from the ground. The biggest an animal can be is the size of Gamakichi, after time skip, allowing the wooden creation to be big enough for the user and at least 2 other people to hide behind it. The wooden creations have the ability to use Mokuton, Earth and Water jutsus up to B-rank without the need to perform hand seals for the Mokuton but they'd need to perform hand seals for the hand seal requiring Earth and Water jutsus. Furthermore the user has the ability to clap his hands together whilst focusing a large amount of chakra within the wooden creatures and explode them, in a similar to fashion to Exploding of Dense Woodland jutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: Can only be taught by Erzo.
Note: Can only make 2 creatures at a time.

Jinbei submitted something like this before, he gave me his permission to submit this.

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±± Approved ±± Love it!

 

[Ushiro]

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(Suiton: Hidora Taihō) - Water Release: True Hydra Cannon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user forms the Ram, Snake, and Boar handseals and calls forth a great amount of water from the ground nearby which takes the form of a large hydra with seven heads that attacks enemies with their sharp teeth and heads while also defending the user. Each hydra head is the same size of the Water Dragon Jutsu and can reach up to mid-range. They can also fire spiraling streams of pressurized water from their mouths at the enemy, crushing them with the immense force of the water. This counts as an additional move of the user and is A-rank in strength. The hydra can travel but cannot move very fast on land.
-Usable once per battle
-No other S-rank or higher water jutsu this turn or next
-The hydra can also be created from a large water source.

~Declined~ Seems fine, just the body of the hydra needs a size defined, the "Large" definition is broad lol, i need to know how big it exactly is, rest seems okay.

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(Suiton: Hidora Taihō) - Water Release: True Hydra Cannon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user forms the Ram, Snake, and Boar handseals and calls forth a great amount of water from the ground nearby which takes the form of a large hydra with seven heads that attacks enemies with their sharp teeth and heads while also defending the user. Each hydra head is the same size of the Water Dragon Jutsu and can reach up to mid-range. They can also fire spiraling streams of pressurized water from their mouths at the enemy, crushing them with the immense force of the water. This counts as an additional move of the user and is A-rank in strength. The body of the hydra is 8 meters tall and has reptilian limbs allowing it to travel but it cannot move very fast on land. In water, however, it can move as fast as Killerbee in his incomplete tailed-beast form.
-Usable once per battle
-No other S-rank or higher water jutsu this turn or next
-The hydra can also be created from a large water source.

X-Declined-X Turn Limit? And whats this about B's speed? remove it.

 

[-Jiraiya-]

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Wood Release: Parasitic seeds (Mokuton: Kisei za-men)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long (Created on the hands of the user and can be dispersed over long range)
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms a fist while focusing his wood chakra and creates special seeds (maximum 15 seeds, each about a size twice that of a wheat grain) made out of their chakra. The seeds can be dispersed on the ground or can be placed in the opponent's body using various means. Once successfully implanted on the opponent's body, as the opponent tries to use any earth or water or wood chakra based jutsus, the seeds will devour the respective chakra as they focus and sprout into a tree over them, binding them to ground.
Note(s):

• The seeds must be in contact with any part of the opponent to devour chakra.
• Can only devour water/earth/wood based chakra.
• Can be used over multiple opponents.
• Can be used by all wood bios but must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

X-Declined-X Similar to alot of existing techniques.

Wood Release: Six pillars pin missile (Mokuton: Roku hashira pin misairu)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the Snake hand seal and creates six wooden pillars with sharp pointed wooden spikes on their inner side around the opponent which shoots wooden spikes at high speed as they are erected. The pillars themselves are about 5 feet high and 1.5 feet in breadth and 1 feet in thickness. The wooden spikes, each, are about 20 cm in size arranged vertically over the inner surface of each pillars as 10 spikes per pillar.
Note(s):

• Can be used by wood bios and must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing techniques.

Wood Release: Kamikaze minions (Mokuton: Kamikaze minions)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (when made to explode)
Description: The user after performing the snake hand seal will create a maximum of 20 wood minions, each about 1 feet in size with a compressed chakra core at their chest out of ground, tree or wood. The minions have 4 legs, 2 small arms and they have spider like movement and agility. As soon as they're created they gang up over the opponent(s) causing massive explosion.
Note(s):

• Can be used by wood bios and must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

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±± Declined ±± Explosion? How and why? 20 is too much.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

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( Genjutsu: Hyakujuu ) Illusion Technique: Animalia

Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: By preforming 1 handseal, the user is able to cast an illusion where the opponent will feel (5 senses) a great amount of animals of any chosen size, within some limit (No boss sized animals), around himself. The illusion will manifest itself as body parts, whole animals, living or dead, attacking the user or standing still. While it can create any animal, it is more frequently used to summon animal specimens of one's summoning contract. Blood can be added to further reinstate the realism of the illusion.
*In order to summon up to boss sized animals, one must add another handseal, and it's considered an A rank technique
*Genjutsu specialist can cast a more complex and detailed illusion, usually casting a firmer grip on the opponent's senses (more than just the basic senses, adding a sense of body temperature, chakra perception, electromagnetic pulse, etc) it is considered an A rank technique or a stacked S rank technique.
*The S rank version of the technique can only be used 4 times per battle*

~Declined~ I'm fine with the technique itself, not the multiple ranks, needs to be defined into one rank and one rank only, the colored portion is a bit too much and you left it too generic, choose one rank, this seems like a B-rank, and S-rank being used 4 times is way too much.

Note: Dante signs darkred, but he typoed and forgot to color his note. I did not alter it, please don't immediately decline it because it's written in normal color xD.

( Genjutsu: Hyakujuu ) Illusion Technique: Animalia

Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/a
Description: By preforming 1 handseal, the user is able to cast an illusion where the opponent will feel a great amount of animals of any chosen size, within some limit , around himself. The illusion will manifest itself as body parts, whole animals, living or dead, attacking the user or standing still. While it can create any animal, it is more frequently used to summon animal specimens of one's summoning contract. Blood can be added to further reinstate the realism of the illusion.


X-Approved-X Removed damage points, reduced the rank and removed restrictions about boss summons. As i see it, you shouldn't be restricted unnecessarily about boss, the illusion is more or less the same. However its not something worth an A rank either.

(Genjutsu: Ganmi no Ichi Ni Gama) Illusion Technique: The Taste of the Yucky Pucky Toad

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu acts both as a form of Kai and an actual genjutsu. Yucky Pucky Toad allows the user to manipulate the jutsu and make it work towards her own purposes, while trapping the opponent. This jutsu comes in 2 phases.
In the first phase, the user will burst sharply, manipulating the Genjutsu she's on. For example, if an opponent genjutsu creates a tree that envelops the user, it will make it seem as if lightning burst from the user and destroys the tree. (The user can have any creativity she wants). This marks the release of the opponent jutsu.
In the second phase, the opponent will feel as if he has been shocked or stung, a very sharp and intense feeling. The shock and the genjutsu itself is very short-lived, but it's intensity leaves behind an underlying sensation of hesitation when attempting to to trap the user in a genjutsu again, as part of the brain will be programmed to shock the opponent again at the attempt (further blocking the genjutsu before it is efficiently cast, spending chakra but casting no illusion).
*Effects last 5 turns unless the target is struck by sufficient physical pain, (similar to genjutsu rules) which will cut the effects short. This is not about releasing a genjutsu, though, just the lingering effect of an already auto-released genjutsu*
*Can only be used against techniques of the same rank or lower*
*The user will not be able to use genjutsus for 3 turns*
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*Genjutsu specialist or doujutsu specialist will be able to counter techniques one rank above*

~Declined~ OP, no long range genjutsu, the colored portion is not going to be accepted because i'm not going to approve a genjutsu technique that has a release ability of other genjutsu techniques, and won't leave it this broad, you really need to tone down your techniques.

(Genjutsu: Ganmi no Ichi Ni Gama) Illusion Technique: The Taste of the Yucky Pucky Toad

Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu acts both as a form of Kai and an actual genjutsu. This is because the user will simultaneously cast a genjutsu on herself and on her opponent. Following the layering rules, by creating a directly contraditing genjutsu of a superior rank, it will corrupt and vanish the weaker technique and leave the strong. Yucky Pucky Toad allows the user to manipulate the jutsu and make it work towards her own purposes, while trapping the opponent. This jutsu comes in 2 phases. In the first phase, the user will burst sharply, manipulating the Genjutsu she's on. For example, if an opponent genjutsu creates a tree that envelops the user, it will make it seem as if lightning burst from the user and destroys the tree. (The user can have any creativity she wants, as long as the genjutsu directly contradicts the first). This marks the release of the opponent jutsu. In the second phase, the opponent will feel as if he has been shocked or stung, a very sharp and intense feeling. The shock and the genjutsu itself is very short-lived, but it's intensity leaves behind an underlying sensation of hesitation when attempting to to trap the user in a genjutsu again, as part of the brain will be programmed to shock the opponent again at the attempt (further blocking the genjutsu before it is efficiently cast, spending chakra but casting no illusion).
*Effects last 5 turns unless the target is struck by sufficient physical pain, (similar to genjutsu rules) which will cut the effects short. This is not about releasing a genjutsu, though, just the lingering effect of an already auto-released genjutsu*
*Can only be used against techniques of the same rank or lower*
*The user will not be able to use genjutsus for 3 turns*
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*Genjutsu specialist or doujutsu specialist will be able to counter techniques of the same rank as this technique*

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±± Declined ±± Its ok except for one thing: the part i bolded needs some definition. What does it mean in an actual fight?

Updating both in one (Mainly the first technique):

(Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige ) Ninja Arts: Rat Whiskers
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will expel chakra outwards, from her hands. The chakra will create a set of 5 wires, thin and sharp but strong, which will immediately wrap around the opponent. While they can be used on their own to powerfully constrict the opponent, they can be used more efficiently by adding an elemental nature to them. Strong elements (Earth, Metal, etc) or Slicing elements (Wind, Lightning, etc) will strengthen or sharpen the thin wires, which will allow them to slice through flesh and bone by the inherited constriction force. Other elements may weaken the body itself, allowing the said slicing effect (Fire burning, Rotting elements, etc). Elements that do not fall in these characteristics will simply add their characteristics to the wires, but will only have the tight grip of normal chakra wires, and not the slicing property.
With one handseal, the wires can be shot from the ground, the sharpness/strength/power of the wires can be gradually increased till rupture point as a method of capture and torture, by keeping the handseal
*If used from the ground, can't preform any further jutsu until the grip is released*
The wires are only able to severe the thinner limbs/weak spots and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
*This jutsu can only be used thrice per battle, at max 1 usage every two turns*
The wires follow the element's and rank's weaknesses and strengths

~Declined~ So your attempting to merge two already approved techniques in one to leave you one more slot for a CJ? ya not going to happen, if you want to update each technique separately, but i won't allow merging both together.

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(Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige ) Ninja Arts: Rat Whiskers
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will make one handseal and expel her chakra outwards, from her hands. The chakra will create a set of thin and sharp but strong wires, this chakra wires, which will have an Elemental Nature in order to be effective, will immediately wrap around the opponent. Wind will make the wires much sharper. Lightning would numb the opponent, and make the wires sharper. Fire would burn the opponent and make add to the sharpness of the wires melting properties, Earth will make the wires thinner but stronger. Water is useless to the effect desired.
Upon trapping the opponent, the user will quickly constrict the wires, severing the thinner limbs and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
*This jutsu can only be used twice per battle*
Note: The wires created aren't enough no envelop the whole body, so only a limb/body part can me affected.

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(Ninjutsu: Nezumi no Hoohige ) Ninja Arts: Rat Whiskers
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 per turn to maintain)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will expel chakra outwards, from her hands. The chakra will create a set of 5 wires, thin and sharp but strong, which will immediately wrap around the opponent. While they can be used on their own to powerfully constrict the opponent, they can be used more efficiently by adding an elemental nature to them. Strong elements (Earth, Metal, etc) or Slicing elements (Wind, Lightning, etc) will strengthen or sharpen the thin wires, which will allow them to slice through flesh and bone by the inherited constriction force. Other elements may weaken the body itself, allowing the said slicing effect (Fire burning, Rotting elements, etc). Elements that do not fall in these characteristics will simply add their characteristics to the wires, but will only have the tight grip of normal chakra wires, and not the slicing property.
With one handseal, the wires can be shot from the ground upwards, binding the target. The user can gradually increase the sharpness and the tight hold of the technique by hand gestures (when he uses it from his hands directly as "whips") or by maintaining the hand seal (if used from the ground).
*If used from the ground, can't preform any further jutsu until the grip is released*
The wires are only able to severe the thinner limbs/weak spots and severely injuring the thicker body parts (I.e Severe arms, legs, necks, and Injure torso, head).
*This jutsu can only be used thrice per battle, at max 1 usage every two turns*
The wires follow the element's and rank's weaknesses and strengths
*Cannot be used by CE elements.

X-Err.. as usual i'll get back to you after checking some others-X

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[Delta]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Raiton:Greater Thunder Demon(Taibu ikazuchi Tenma)
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank:S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:The user Performs 10 handseals and proceeds to make a figure in the shape of a demon infront of himself made of pure Raiton chakra(much like greater golem),Once formed the Demon can either take a defensive or offensive state.The offensive state allows the demon to fire off S rank lightning techniques with limited handseals or A rank techniques with no handseals.The defensive state turns the Demon into a lightning rod absorbing all lightning based attacks directed towards it.The demon can Absorb 1 Srank technique,2 Arank techniques and so on,If struck with an S rank ability the Demon will disperse.
Restriction:
Can only be used Once per battle
Must have Raiton Master
No other Raiton Abilites can be used in that turn
If the demon vanishes from Absorbing Raiton techniques,before vanishing the user recieves only 20% of the damage that the technique would have inflicted
The Demon only lasts 2 turns before dispering on its own
Can only be taught by Delta

X-Declined-X

Fire Style: Blade Swing Fire Strike(Katon:Ken Yurasu Katon Dageki)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels fire chakra into their blade making the outer hew glow a crimson red,by swinging the blade the fire chakra will be released into the form of firey slashes which strike out across the ground towards the opponent/opponents.
Restrictions:
Can only be used 3 times during battle
Need Katon up to A rank completed
Can only be taught by Delta
(what this technique looks like)

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Wind Release: Drive(Fuuton: Zenshin)
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user starts off by holding their bladed weapons tip directly at the opponent,by first bending their knees the user(much like how ninja walk on water) Channels chakra into his feet so that he can glide across the ground more easily,once in postion the user with channel a condensed ball of wind at the hilt of the blade which will act as a thrusting mechanism to propell the user forwards,once the condensed ball is completed the user will cause it to erupt sending out a great ammount of force from the ball,once this occurs the users sword will be propelled forward at great speeds allowing him to cover great distances very swiftly.This technique can cover 10 metres in just under two seconds. This technique can also be used to increase punching and kicking power by the same method. For example:creating the condensed wind ball on your elbow and exploding it just before your punch causing the punch to not only strike faster but much stronger.
Restrictions
Can only be used three times in battle
If use on a body part that body part will sustain damage. From first use badly bruised and sore,from second use in the same area muscle damage and severe pain,from three uses on the same body area broken bones and majoy pain.
Can only be taught by Delta
This move looks like from 18-19 second mark(with the stabbing part just the gap closing)

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[Shinta]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Yottsu chō shizen ken no jutsu) Four Supernatural Fists Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Similar to how a shadow clone is created, using one's chakra to create a perfect, physical copy; the user will use there chakra to 'grow' two extra arms from the back of there shoulder blades. These arms are slightly longer than the users original arms in such a way that all four wrists are in line when holding there arms out in front of them. These arms can be used in a multitude of ways as they are controlled by the user as if they were their normal arms, using them to support Kenjutsu, Taijutsu and even Ninjutsu. These arms can be used to perform hand seals for elemental jutsu as well. These arms give; a +10 damage boost to all kenjutsu attacks if they are used to support the hands in the swing or action with the sword; they also give a +10 damage boost to all taijutsu punches by adding an extra fist to each hit; and finally these arms can create rasengan and remove the need for shadow clones when using (Tsuin Rasengan) – Twin Spiraling Sphere.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta
- Can only be used four times
- The arms remain for three turns or until the user cancels the jutsu.

X-Declined-X Clone technique is an entirely seperate category of techniques, you cannot relate it to growing arms. Its alright if that composed of an element but not this.

Kuchiyose: Raikou no Kawasemi Torotoro - Summoning: The Lightning Kingfisher Torotoro
Type: supplementary
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After making a blood sacrifice and performing the Ox → Ram → Snake → Tiger hand seals, the user will place the hand on the ground or facing the ground below them and release there chakra to create the summoning seal, summoning Torotoro. Torotoro is a moderately sized Tree Kingfisher with a 2 meter wingspan that can carry a human on her back. She has a black crown patch, has an orange head and neck with a black nape patch and white throat. Her upper mantle is olive green on the back, blue-green on rump and with a blue tail and her upper wings are dull green-blue with dark olive-black flight feathers. Torotoro has a natural affinity to the Lightning element and is able to perform Lightning jutsu up to S-rank without hand seals by either releasing it from Her mouth, feet or body. She also has an immunity to all B-rank and lower Lightning jutsu which she can extend to Her rider.
Only the following can be used by Torotoro as they can be used with Torotoro body and released from its mouth.

Lightning jutsu not usable by Torotoro:
- (Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
- (Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
- (Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
- (Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
- (Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
- (Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
- (Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
- (Raiton: Fusei Shuriken Chidori Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Rigged Shuriken One Thousand Birds Style
- (Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
- (Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
- (Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
- (Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
- (Raiton Chidori: Raijin no sakebi ) - Lightning Release One Thousand Chirping Birds: Cry of the Thundergod
- (Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
- (Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
- (Raiton: Raiden ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Chain
- (Raiton: Raikiri Nirentotsu ) - Lightning Cutter Two Sequential Crashes
and any character specific lightning attack.
Notes:
- Torotoro remains on the battlefield for three turns,
- Torotoro can only be summoned if the users has signed the Kingfisher contract and has the tattoo as proof of signing,
- Torotoro can be summoned 2 times per battle with a two turn cool down between each of his summon,
- Torotoro can carry only one human on his back, extending the lightning Immunity to the rider,
- While riding on Torotoro, the rider cannot use earth or wind jutsu as they would interfere with the lightning immunity,
- Each jutsu Torotoro uses counts towards one of the three usable per turn,


X-Approved-X Removed a restriction. Made a change bolded.
I hold the Kingfisher Contract.

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[Flash]

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(Genjutsu: Wa ai nai) Illusion Arts: No love
Type: Attack
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (each opponent)
Description: The user performs four handseals and traps multiple opponents (or clones) under an illusion where he takes control over their 5 senses. In the illusion, the opponents find themselves being attacked by their ally(ies) and vice-versa.
Ex. User traps A, B and C in the illusion. A sees as B and C attacking him. B sees as A and C attacking him, C sees A and B attacking him (using canon jutsus only).
In reality, the opponents are free to move and act according to what they're shown, only that they all are shown a different picture.

Note: Can only be used on multiple opponents.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

X-Declined-X Existing technique

(Suiton: Ash ita ni kakeru hashi) Water Release: Bridge Over Troubled Water
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms the Snake handseal and manipulates his water/liquid chakra inside his body. By cooling the liquid to a certain degree (should not make it into ice (solid)) by changing the energy levels of the molecules which can be achieved by manipulating the chakra, he decreases the viscosity of the liquid so that it follows the principle of near superfluidity. This makes the liquid molecules less resistant to each other and thereby increasing their speed. If mastered and practised properly, the user can make the movements of his liquid Justus, 3x times faster.
-Once used, works till the end of the battle.
-Can only be taught by Flash07

~Declined~ So what is this exactly? speeding up the liquids inside your body? or you wanna use it to speed up water techniques' speed? you can't cool down the liquid using water chakra, only wind chakra and Ice chakra can do that, either way it's not approvable.

(Suiton/Futon: Ashita ni kakeru hashi) Water/Wind Release: Bridge Over Troubled Water
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms the Snake handseal and manipulates his water/liquid chakra. By cooling the liquid to a certain degree (should not make it into ice (solid)) by changing the energy levels of the molecules which can be achieved by manipulating the chakra, he decreases the viscosity of the liquid so that it follows the principle of near superfluidity. This makes the liquid molecules less resistant to each other and thereby
increasing their speed. If mastered and practised properly, the user can make the movements of his liquid Justus (techniques), 3x times faster.
-Once used, works till the end of the battle.
-Can only be taught by Flash07

X-Declined-X Moves in to manipulation of elements other then water. PS: i know viscosity of water can be controled.




(Genjutsu: Jimen ni sore o moyasu) Illusion Arts: Burn It To The Ground
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs three handseals and transmits his chakra into the opponent's brain taking control over his five senses. The chakra stays dormant till the opponent comes in close range (or contact) with a metal (probably while taking out his ninja tools/weapons). And when he does that, he notices that there are paperbombs attached to the metal which goes off creating a large explosion and damages him to a great extend. The opponent feels his ears ringing due to the loud explosion, his vision gets hindered due to the fumes created by the explosion, he can also smell the gas created by the explosion. Now this is where the problem starts. The inhaled gas causes the opponent to first choke and then go breathless. He feels lack of oxygen reaching his brains and therefore, he feels like loosing conscious. In reality, the opponent is immobilised on the spot. But his confidence level drops down. His speed, reflexes and power gets reduced by one rank.

Note: The effects lasts for only 3 turns.
Note: No other genjutsu in the same turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

X-Declined-X Damage Points are for?

 

[Abon]

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(Raiton: Sendo Gyoushi)Lighting Style: Death Gaze
Type: Offensive
Rank:B
Range: Mid-Short
Chakra:30
Damage:45
Description: The user concentrates raiton chakra into their eyes, keeping insight the opponent. The user then fires a semi-thick beam of electricity at the opponent. This beam can be fired quickly and with precision at the body of the enemy. This beam can numb the body part hit by it as well as mildly burn it.
-Numbness only lasts for a turn
-Can be shot 4 times
-The user can still see while using the technique

X-Declined-X Existing technique not to mention you'll fry your own eyes

 

[-Kenshin-]

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(Chanpurū kendō: Kao sumasshā)- Champloo Kendo: Face Smasher
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After Taking the patient Champloo Kendo stance the Users will rush their opponent as they get into range the user will drop to the ground performing a leg sweep on the oppoent as the leg sweep is completed the user will lean back while remaining low to the ground and will place both their hands on the ground bringing their legs straight up in the air the user will charge both their feet with chakra and then while in the handstand will lean their body towards the opponent dropping both feet onto their opponents head driving their head into the ground due to the force and extra damage from the chakra

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by Hìmurā
• Must have completed Champloo Kendo Training and be named a master of the style
• can not use any other Champloo Kendo Technquies in the same turn

(Kaze rirīsu: Coy no sakana no Sworm)- Wind Release: Sworm of the Coy Fish
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user will begin by gathering gathering up Wind chakra into their mouth as they gather up the chakra the user will do three handsigns and exhale the chakra and by using shape Transformation the user will shape the wind chakra into five Medium sized Sphere of wind shaped like coy fish the Coy fish will sworn on to the opponent greatly damaging him

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by Hìmurā
• the user can not use A rank and above Wind technquies for 1 completely turn
• can only be used 2 per match

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Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
Type: Attack / Defense
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 ( 20 to self )
Description:
The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user. When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the Opponent with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking The Koy Fish is made from the users body

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…

~All Declined~ Resubmit when the ban is lifted.

B](Chanpurū kendō: Kao sumasshā)- Champloo Kendo: Face Smasher[/B]
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After Taking the patient Champloo Kendo stance the Users will rush their opponent as they get into range the user will drop to the ground performing a leg sweep on the oppoent as the leg sweep is completed the user will lean back while remaining low to the ground and will place both their hands on the ground bringing their legs straight up in the air the user will charge both their feet with chakra and then while in the handstand will lean their body towards the opponent dropping both feet onto their opponents head driving their head into the ground due to the force and extra damage from the chakra

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by Hìmurā
• Must have completed Champloo Kendo Training and be named a master of the style
• can not use any other Champloo Kendo Technquies in the same turn

X-Declined-X Link to Champloo kendo?

(Kaze rirīsu: Coy no sakana no Sworm)- Wind Release: Sworm of the Coy Fish
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user will begin by gathering gathering up Wind chakra into their mouth as they gather up the chakra the user will do three handsigns and exhale the chakra and by using shape Transformation the user will shape the wind chakra into five Medium sized Sphere of wind shaped like coy fish the Coy fish will sworn on to the opponent greatly damaging him

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by Hìmurā
• the user can not use A rank and above Wind technquies for 1 completely turn
• can only be used 2 per match

X-Approved-X
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Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
Type: Attack / Defense
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 ( 20 to self )
Description:
The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user. When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the Opponent with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking The Koy Fish is made from the users body

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin

X-Declined-X Was fine until i read its made of your own body. What do you mean? Shouldn't it be made of ice?

 

[Venus]

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災厄兵器：パンドラ Saiyaku Heiki | Pandora
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
Pandora is a demonic briefcase that is said to once be owned by a dark demon. The briefcase itself is dark metallic silver and has the face of a demon carved onto the surface. Pandora reacts to chakra that is poured into the actual briefcase itself. When elemental chakra is leaked into the unholy box by the user, it will then react, taking on 1 of several forms. It is rumored to have 666 different faces and/or forms but very few are known to the Sparda lineage

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• Can only be summoned 3 times per battle
• Lasts 1-3 turns
• If Pandora is dispelled by the user before the 3 turns are up, it will still count as a full 3 turns no matter how little time it was used
• Can only be wielded by the bio(s) Sparda, Dante, Vergil and Nero.
• Can only be used under permission of Link

X-Declined-X

Raiton: 涙雷神 Namida Raijin | Tears of the Thunder God
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user releases 50-100 miniature bursts of raiton chakra that take the form of very small blue orbs the size of small marbles. These orbs jet towards the opponent and surround them. Among these blue orbs is a single, purple orb. At the users will or if the orb is disturbed in anyway, this purple orb will release a negative discharge that will cause all the orbs to release a static discharge in which will cause a chain reaction and make strong shock wave that will electrify the foe and cause a weak paralysis.

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It will look similar to this but the opponent will be in the middle of the scattered orbs.

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• If used during a storm, the attack power will +5
• If used when a mist or moist fog is covering the field, the user will also be affected slightly
• The opponent can still move after the attack but cannot use past B-rank raiton jutsu for 1 turn
• Can only be used 3 times per battle.
• If the opponent uses a small discharge of raiton against this jutsu, before the orbs reach the opponent, the orbs will activate and vanish without hurting the foe.

X-Approved-X

 

[Sharingdork]

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(Futon: Kenshi no Sutaffu) - Wind Release: Swordsman's Staff
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: A very simply, yet tricky technique, the user begins by channeling their futon chakra through a staff. The futon chakra within the staff causes the round body to gain a sharp, cutting quality, allowing the rod-like staff to cut like a sword regardless of which point makes contact with an object. The futon chakra causes the staff, regardless of what material it's made of, to cut with the same power as a steel sword, and allows the user to cut through up to A-rank raiton techniques.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Lasts 3 turns or until deactivated
~Must wait one turn until activating again after deactivation

(Doton: Kyojin no Tsuma Yōji) - Earth Release: Giant's Toothpick
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: A very simply technique, the user begins by channeling their doton chakra throughout the ground and into the dust in the air. The user will then, either in the middle of swinging his staff, thrusting his staff, or even simply holding his staff, gather dust, dirt, small rocks, and gravel around the end of his staff, causing its reach to extend a considerable distance (10 meters, same distance as Chidori Sharp Spear).
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Lasts for three turns or until deactivation or destruction
~Must wait a turn after deactivation before using again

(Katon: Doragon E no Eikyō) - Fire Release: Dragon Impact
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will begin by spinning his staff while focusing katon chakra into it. When the user stops spinning his staff, a small flame will be present on the top of his staff (if the staff is double-ended, there may be a flame on both ends). Now, when the staff comes into contact with another object, an explosive burst of B-rank flame will erupt from the point of impact, increasing the damage of a normal blunt staff hit.
Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
~Lasts for 3 turns or until deactivation
~Must wait one turn after deactivation before activating again

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[The Mockingjay]

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(Mockingbird: O-dio Ese) Mockingbird Technique: Auditory Mock
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: With this technique Mockingbirds are able to mimic human voices pitch perfectly in order to confuse opponents as to the whereabouts or number of their opponents.
-To mimic opponents voice they must have spoken previously in the fight.-
-Mockingbirds can memorize voices for up to one week-
-Bird does not have to be present when the opponent is speaking-

~Declined~ I'm fine with the technique, but some things your gonna have to consider, the second "restriction" doesn't really work in our RP, we don't measure these things with "weeks" but with battles instead, you can simply say that the mockingbird can replicate any voice he witnesses throughout the battle the summon witnessed the voice in, that last restriction that is colored is really weird, if the summon doesn't witness the voice, how is he capable of replicating it?

(Mockingbird: O-dio Ese) Mockingbird Technique: Auditory Mock
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: With this technique Mockingbirds are able to mimic human voices pitch perfectly in order to confuse opponents as to the whereabouts or number of their opponents.
-To mimic opponents voice they must have spoken previously in the fight.-
-Once mimicked Mockingbirds remember voices indefinitely (User must be able to prove that the Mockingbird has heard the voice previously if being taken from a past battle)-

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(Suiton: Sanmenroppi so$hite Onchou) Water Style: Versatility and Grace
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Whilst holding the tiger handseal the user spits out five highly compressed balls of water one at a time. Once all five are released they begin to orbit in the air around the user, once in orbit the balls can be moulded and controlled at will by the user (To a certain extent). When first released the balls are roughly the size of golf balls but as they are compressed they are capable of expanding to the size of a human torso when flat (as a shield or disc). Most ninja are only able to control the balls whilst they remain in short range of them. However, ninja with water specialty are able to manipulate them whilst in mid-range.
-Can be molded into any shape (within the limits of their size, including bubbles for underwater breathing [takes two balls]) and shot at speeds relative to that of a thrown Kunai-
-Must be taught by Songbird.

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(Kchuysei: Mellark) Summoning: Mellark
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his/ her hand on it. With this action the user summons Mellark the king Mockingbird. Mellark is big enough for the user to stand on comfortably whilst flying (Half the size of Gamabunta). Mellark is able to use Wind techniques up to S-rank that do not require handseals. Mellark possesses great strength for a bird and is capable of lifting whole trees or large rocks easily whilst in flight (he cannot however pull the trees from the ground)
-Can use wind jutsu requiring a fan-
-Can only be summoned once per battle-
-Remains on the field for four turns-
-Must have signed the Mockingbird contract to summon-

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[Trollo Lucilfer]

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Summoning Animal:

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Scroll Owner: Megaamine
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: Issai-ouja
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None yet
Description and Background:
Arctotherium is an extinct genus of South American short-faced bears within Ursidae of the Pleistocene. Their ancestors migrated from North America to South America during the Great American Interchange, following the formation of the Isthmus of Panama during the late Pliocene. The oldest remains are from the Ensenadan epoch whitin the early-middle Pleistocene 1.2 Mya. Their closest relatives were the North American short-faced bears of genus Arctodus (A. pristinus and A. simus). The closest living relative would be the spectacled bear (Tremarctos ornatus).
Arctotherium was named by Hermann Burmeister in 1879. It was assigned to Tremarctinae by Krause et al. 2008. A specimen of A. angustidens from Buenos Aires shows an individual estimated, using the humerus, to weight between 983 and 2,042 kg (2,170 and 4,500 lb), though the authors consider the upper limit as improbable and say that 1,588 kg (3,500 lb) is more likely; however, using the radius, the mass estimate shrinks to a maximum of 1,108 kg (2,440 lb). Independently of the method, it is possibly the largest bear ever found and contender for the largest carnivorous land mammal known to science. In contrast to their North American relatives, South American short-faced bears showed a trend of declining size and carnivory over time. This has been attributed to increased competition from other, later-arriving or evolving carnivorans, like jaguars, lions or Smilodon populator, following the early dispersal of short-faced bears to South America. (The North American carnivorans that invaded South America, including short-faced bears and Smilodon, quickly dominated the predatory niches formerly occupied by South America's native metatherian sparassodont and avian phorusrhacid carnivores.)

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