[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Howard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Tori jijo gyoushi) Ninjutsu: Pecking Order Stare
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The person stares at the opponent not blinking as the opponent catches the the look of the eye of the user. The opponent gets fixated on the users eyes and cannot focus on the users postition or hand seals, the opponent has a strong urge to see the person blink thus he cannot blink as well, the user can yell "Pecking Order" before he starts to further confuse the opponent
~Can't use any other Basic Ninjutsu this turn~
~Must have mastered Basic Ninjutsu~
~Has to be used first that turn~
~Has to make eye contact just for a second~
~Doesn't work on Byakugan, Rinnegan and Sharingan 2t and above~

~Declined~ What is this? Make it a genjutsu or something else, but right now it couldn't be classified as a ninjutsu.

(Ara ato seiyuuki) Genjutsu: Oh a Monkey
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User sets the opponent into a genjutsu in which he sees a small agile monkey that runs from him the person inside of the genjutsu has the strongest urge to catch the monkey the opponent inside of the genjutsu runs around in a circle(Trying to catch the monkey) for one whole turn unable to think unless he can break the genjutsu
~Must have my permission to use~
~No variations can be made without my permission~
~Can only be used three times in a battle~
~Doesn't work on Sharingan 2T and above~
~Doesn't require eye contact~
~Can't use any other Genjutsu the turn before or this turn~
~Cannont use any Basic Ninjutsu this turn~

~Declined do not resubmit~ You cannot force an emotion into you opponent. You can make him see and feel things (pain mostly), but you can't force him to react that way when he sees a monkey (-___-).

(Raiton: Ookami kiba genkotsu) Lightning Release: Wolf Fang Fist
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60(-5 for each blast)
Description: The user will gather a vast amount of chakra into their hand and palm they can then hit the opponent with strong lighnting blasts that can either be held into the fist for a devistating short range attack or they can be channeled out of the fist into a blast of lighnting. If held into the fist the lightning begins to release from the fist forming small lightning bolts they do nothing but look cool. The lightning will get a tiny bit weaker with each hit but the first three hits have enough force to numb the part of the body hit for 1 turn. The lightning blast is about the size of a fist.
~Can only be used 3 times.~
~Can only use Raiton this turn nothing else~
~Must have mastered Raiton~
~Can only form three lightning blasts~
~Only HightimesHoward and who he teaches can use this~

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

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(Kchuysei: Sendo's kenshiki) Sendo's Pride
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short(Summon) Short-Mid(Lightning blast)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A(+80 for lightning blast)
Description: This sword is the second of two swords passed down from Lord Sendo. Named "Sendo's Pride" because of it's slick and slender beauty. This sword was always in Sendo's possession since he first obtained it from the Condor Elders long ago. He shared his chakra with it just as he did the other, so it too has the ability to rank up Raiton jutsu if the user so wishes it. It still feeds on the users chakra just as it did with Sendo taking in their Raiton chakra and making it it's own. The chakra absobed by the sword from the user can be sent out as a blast of lightning that can be used as a Short-Mid range attack. It can only be used a total of three times per battle. It's final ability is gained due to the fact that the sword has absorbed both the user's and Sendo's Raiton chakra. The sword can absorb C Raiton jutsu and below it then nullifies the attack this can be done 3 times as well.

Abilities:

+ 1 Rank to Raiton jutsu
Lightning blast(3 times per battle and counts as one of the users moves)
Absobtion of C rank and below jutsu Raiton jutsu (3 times per battle and counts as one of the users moves)

Notes:

~Has to be summoned within the first 3 turns~
~Cannot be summoned if any summon was used this battle beforehand~
~Doesn't need to be summoned if it is in the user's bio~
~Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Condor contract~
~When the user uses his 3 lightning blasts he loses the other perks of the sword~
~Can only be used for 6 turns then the user loses the perks and it becomes a regular sword~

~Declined~ No absorption of jutsu or elemental blast will be accepted anymore when it comes to CW.

 

[Kaze..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission


(Hayatōn:Shinigami Shinpaku) Swift Release: Death's Heartbeat
Rank: C-Ranked
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:
Description:The user simply forms a single handsign and through the release of Swift Chakra moves within close range of an opponent at fast speeds
Note: This Technique is Completely Silent



(Hayatōn: Ryoukenchigai) Swift Release: Misdirection
Rank: C-Ranked
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:N/A (dependent of the attack being completed with this jutsu)
Description: The user begins by doing a simple taijutsu or Kenjutsu attack but as the attack is about to be evaded or block the user uses swift release moving behind the opponent and then completes the attack


~Both Approved~ Check the bold part

 

[Heavens Blade]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kōton: rippoutai) steel release: cube
Rank: A
Type: Supplementry
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: /
Description: the user tosses a large steel cube over there opponent then you can use a four pillar or sixteen pillar to turn the cube into a large oven
-can only be used by a steel bio
- can only be taught by heavens blade

Declined. Give a better description of how the cube is formed and how large it is.

(Kōton: metaru sadou) steel release: metal movement
Rank: A
Type: Supplementry
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: /
Description: the user is able to move through metal object at very high speeds can be used to dodge attacks of gain tactical advantage over opponent
-can only be used by steel bio
-can only travel through steel that is connected
-can only be taught by heavens blade

Declined. Needs usage restrictions


(Kōton: Kōsame) steel release: steel shark
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user does three handseals then places there hand on the ground and makes a shark out of steel which travels under ground will then comes out of he ground and devours the opponent the shark moves at the same speed as water shark bomb
-shark travels 2 times faster if steel field is in play
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by heavens blade

~Appoved~


(doton: shiroari) earth release: termites
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user makes 5 handseals then makes a dozen termites made of earth the termites are larger then normal (the termites are the size of deidara clay spiders) the termites can eat through anything of a lower density
-can only be used twice
-can only be taught by heavens blade

Declined. Do not resubmit


(suiton: hitoshirenu heki) water release: useen tears
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user gathers suiton chakra into there hand making water droplets on there fingertips then flicks his/her wrist flinging the droplets at his/her opponent just before the water leaves his/her hand s/he condenses the droplets till there hard enough to pierce the skin (when the water leaves the finger tips it takes the shape of a tear drop)
-can only be taught by heavens blade

~Approved~


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(Kōton: rippoutai) steel release: cube
Rank: A
Type: Supplementry
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: /
Description: the user does a series of five handseals then two halves of a giant cube come up from the ground one half one each side of the opponent the cube is large enough to hold 30 people inside once the cube is close you can use a four pillar or sixteen pillar to turn the cube into a large oven
-can only be used by a steel bio
- can only be taught by heavens blade


(Kōton: metaru sadou) steel release: metal movement
Rank: A
Type: Supplementry
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: /
Description: the user is able to move through metal object at very high speeds can be used to dodge attacks of gain tactical advantage over opponent
-can only be used three times per match
-user cant use any other steel jutsu the turn this is used
-can only be used by steel bio
-can only travel through steel that is connected
-can only be taught by heavens blade

~Both declined and don't resubmit the second one~ The first one needs restriction.

I hope these are ok now if not please feel free to adjust to make them acceptable

(Kōton: mohaganedo) steel release: steel mode
Rank: S
Type: Mode
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40(+10 every turn in this mode)
Damage Points: -
Description: the user covers themself in a liquid steel and uses a huge amount of chakra to keep it in place however do to the weight of he steel the users speed is reduced but if the steel is knocked off the users body it will be replaced quickly while in this mode the user can only use steel jutsu, kenjutsu, and taijutsu also while in this mode all steel jutsu that require handseals can be done with a single handseal
-user take -60 damage from taijutsu (meaning immune to anything A ranked or lower and S rank and above do less damage)
-immune to A rank and below water
-A ranked katon will heat the steel causing severe burns (+ 25 damage)
-immune to wind and earth based attacks
-vunerable to lightning based attacks (they do +40)
--5 to users speed
-can only be used once per match
-last 4 turns
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Declined~ No offense, but there are so many things wrong with that one that I don't know where to start...First of all;

-For steel to be liquid it needs to be greatly heated, meaning you'd die from the shear heat of it around you.
-Only one hand seal fro all your steel jutsu? Make it "one less hand seal for all steel jutsu".
- -60 to taijutsu? Please change that.
-Immune to all earth and wind? Please change that.
-You are forbidden to make references to the speed chart (as stated on the speed chart thread).
-Last too long for all the abilities it grant you.

Please not that I was tempted to write "Do not resubmit" on that one, so please make the proper changes.

(Hyouton: yukidaruma)ice release: snowman
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user creates a large snowman above his opponent (its large enough to trap 10 people) after landing on its opponent it will trap them inside the snowman the opponent then become very vuneravle to lighting based jutsu
-can only be used 3 time per match
-+15 damage if opponent is hit with lighting based attack while trappened inside snowman
-can only be used by ice release bios
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Approved~

(genjutsu:kekkei genkai) illusion technique: bloodline limit
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: /
Description: as your opponent looks at you, you put them in a genjutsu where they believe you have a KG you can disguise your attacks using this or make your opponent rethink there stratagy with this jutsu
-can fake up to three kg
-the more kg you fake the easier it will be to tell its a illusion (however mei does have two kg so its not impossible to have more then one)
-can only fake KG (meaning no bugs not shadow manipulation just real KG)
-can only be used once per match

~Declined~ You'll have to be a lot more descriptive on that jutsu to get it approved. Make it clear how it works.

(Hyouton: hitoshirenu heki) ice release: useen tears
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user gathers suiton chakra into there hand making water droplets on there fingertips then flicks his/her wrist flinging the droplets at his/her opponent just before the water leaves his/her hand s/he turns the water into ice that is strong enough to pierce skin(when the water leaves the finger tips it takes the shape of a tear drop)
-can only be used by ice bios
-can only be taught by heavens blade

i want to turn this jutsu into a ice jutsu please

~Approved~

(genjutsu:kekkei genkai) illusion technique: bloodline limit
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: /
Description: as your opponent looks at you you put them in a genjutsu where they believe you have a KG you can disguise your attacks using this or make your opponent rethink there stratagy with this jutsu by simply shooting fire blast at your opponent and making it look as if it where a storm release lightning bolt the opponent would most likly use a wind jutsu which is weak against fire or by making it seem as if you have sharingan the opponent will be forced to believe you can see your movements
-can fake up to three kg
-the more kg you fake the easier it will be to tell its a illusion (however mei does have two kg so its not impossible to have more then one)
-can only fake KG (meaning no aburame insects or nara shadow manipulation just real KG)
-can only be used once per match
-can only be taught by Heavens blade

~Declined do not resubmit~ There's no hope for this one, sorry.

(Hyouton: yobigoe)ice release: hail
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user turns the rain into ice making it hail doing damage to everyone and everything on the field (including yourself if you dont denfend against it)
-must be raining
-can only be used by ice bio
-can only be taught be Heavens Blade

~Declined~ I think you're over extending your abilities. I've been hit by hail in real life and it doesn't hurt at all lol. Make it cause no damage or re-submit differently.

(Kuchiyose ai) summoning ai
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: ai is a relitivly small humming bird barely big enough for one person to ride on her she has a very warm attitude and gets along with most people which is very different then riders personallity however the two of them have amazing synchronicity ai has the ability to use all wind techneques that his summoner knows he can also use all suiton jutsu that his summoner knows up to A rank
-ai is riders personal summon
-any jutsu used by ai counts as one of your jutsu
-can be out for 4 turns for all who summon him except rider
-must have signed humming bird contract
-can be summoned once per match

~Declined~ Other then the boss summon, your summons shouldn't be able to wield more then 1 element and up to A-rank.

(Hyouton: yuki boufuu)ice release: snow storm
Type: Supplementry
Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: /
Description: the user condense the natural water in the air and turns it into snow making a snow storm wich will ruin visablity much like hidden in the mist tech however this jutsu cant be blown away as easily as hidden in the mist can
-the field would be covered in snow in two turns
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Declined~ Similar technique exist but without the bold part (which makes it auto-decline the way it's phrased anyway).

 

[Izuna Uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Submissions starting on the 9/18/2011 ending on the 9/25/2011

 

[Phobos]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouton: Aisu Kousei)- Ice Release: Ice Regeneration
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: With single hand seal the user send's his chakra into previously created ice technique and regenerate it. For instance, if enemy hit users ice technique with lower rank technique, this will be able to repair the damage done and restore its previous strenght.
Additionaly this can be used to prevent destruction of ones ice jutsu if it is struck by enemys technique of same power , though it needs to be done in the same moment the two techniques are colliding and can only be used twice this way.

-Regenerating ice can be used up to four times
-Preventing destruction can only be used twice

~Declined~ Elaborate on the bold part, not sure I can grasp the full potential of your technique so far.

(Hyouton: Aisu Kousei)- Ice Release: Ice Regeneration
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: With single hand seal the user send's his chakra into previously created ice technique and regenerate it. For instance, if enemy hit users ice technique with lower rank technique, this will be able to repair the damage done and restore its previous strenght (for instance Ice disc (A rank) could get destroyed by two B rank jutsus, but if I repair the damage done by the first B-rank, the second B-rank will not destroy it).
Additionaly this can be used to prevent destruction of ones ice jutsu if it is struck by enemys technique of same power , though it needs to be done in the same moment the two techniques are colliding and can only be used twice this way.

-Regenerating ice can be used up to four times
-Preventing destruction can only be used twice

~Declined do not resubmit~ Such jutsu is unfit for our RP considering it nullify any defense your opponent may try to use.

(Hyouton: Touketsu Senshu)- Ice Release: Frozen Bow
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: A
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 30 (+5 per turn)
Damage: 60 (this is for defensive purposes only, not for shooting normal arrows)
Description: The user makes one handseal and creates a bow made of ice with chakra string able to shoot ice arrows at high speed (must create arrows with another technique). Normal ice is solid and does not bend, thoug, this one is flexible but needs small amout of chakra every turn to maintain it's flexibility and function. The bow can be also used to block certain techniques that it is able to withstand, like sword slashes etc.

~Declined~ How long does it last? Is it only physical attacks it can block? Need to define these things

(It is really not much different from normal bow but I wanted to make it into ice to fit with bio and also a requirement to use other ice techniques that require bow like the next one I submit)

(Hyouton: Aisu Ya)- Ice Release: Ice Arrow
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: B
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user pulls string of his Frozen Bow and as they do so, arrow made of ice will materialize and is then shot at very high speeds (small part of charka is infused into the bow to increase the speed of the arrow). Due to it's speed, it is close to invisible to ordinary eyes.

~Declined~ Adjust highlighted areas. Either remove completely or have different speed levels for different chakra costs

(Hyouton: Touketsu Senshu)- Ice Release: Frozen Bow
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: A
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 30 (+5 per turn)
Damage:
Description: The user makes one handseal and creates a bow made of ice with chakra string able to shoot ice arrows at high speed (must create arrows with another technique). Normal ice is solid and does not bend, thoug, this one is flexible but needs small amout of chakra every turn to maintain it's flexibility and function. Lasts as long as the user is feeding chakra to the bow.

(I deleted the defensive part)

~Approved~


(Hyouton: Aisu Ya)- Ice Release: Ice Arrow
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: B
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user pulls string of his Frozen Bow and as they do so, arrow made of ice will materialize and is then shot at very high speeds (small part of charka is infused into the bow to increase the speed of the arrow). Due to it's speed, it is close to invisible to ordinary eyes- it is possible to see the arrow, though, it is so fast that it appears as a blured object. (ofcourse, special abilities as sharingan can see the arrow clearly)

-it's speed cannot be increased further by adding more chakra

(I didn't fully get the part about different speeds, but it's speed is always constant- it won't get fully invisible)

~Declined~ Why would normal chakra add to it's speed? Make it a normal ice arrow with a normal speed.

 

[Kurisutina]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Satetsu o Ushi) - Iron Sand Bull
Rank: B
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user creates a bull head with two horns on the front of it. The bull moves faster as it travels in a straight line. Once it reaches long-range, it won't move as fast however.
Restrictions:
~Only usable three times a battle.

~Declined~ Poor description in term of restrictions. How long does it last? Does it charge forward then disappear once it reach long range?

(Satetsu Sutorīmu / ストリーム) - Iron Sand Stream
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user controls their Iron Sand to streams of it that move in a line. The speed of it is incredible and it allows for a medium for jutsu. If this jutsu hits the opponent, it hits with large force while also binding them with Iron Sand.
Restrictions:
~Usable twice.
~Only able to create three streams at one time.

~Declined~ I really didn't understood what you jutsu does.

(Satetsu Supiasupureddo / スピアスプレッド) - Iron Sand Spear Spread
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user condenses his Iron Sand into a large cone, the first spear. The spear is then shot at the opponent. While travelling, the spear breaks up into many more spears of smaller volume. The end result is a few hundred spreading spears that are launched.
Restrictions:
~Usable twice.

~Declined~ Check the bold part. Make it a fixed number of spear and make it reasonable. If you want to have a spear big and strong enough to pierce your opponent, I'd say the original can only divide into 4 smaller spears.

 

[Mathias]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Slow Loris
Scroll Owner: Mathias
Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
Summoning Boss if existing: King Loris
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
Elemental Slow Loris: katon/Doton/Raiton/Suiton/Fuuton
(If contract approved I will summit them the week after)
Approved

(I checked both the custom jutsu and custom summoning thread and I did not find Rams.)Dropping my old contract for:
Summoning animal: Rams
Scroll Owner: Luffy..
Others who have signed this contract: Lord of Kaos
Summoning Boss if existing: Will make if approved
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Will make if approved

Who ever signs the Ram contract will receive a Ram tattoo on the top of their wrist.

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~Declined~ Contract already exist.

(Bunten Dyuaru) - Dual Equinox
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Two highly uniquely-designed knuckles created by Mathias a very long time ago. They are worn like a glove, these two unique knuckles have three very sharp blades coming out of them which are barely spaced together creating a very dangerous close range weapon. The knuckles are made from a special metal that can be infused through chakra flow with elemental chakra to produce added effects. When infused with wind or lightning natured chakra, they can easily pierce through stone. The knuckles damage and effect can also be maximized if the person has a better control of their chakra. If used for taijutsu related techniques these knuckles can be very deadly. Since these knuckles are worn like a glove the user has no problem performing hand signs. Because of the metal they are made from, the knuckles can be used to deflect incoming kunais or shurikens with ease.

Only Mathias way wield these knuckles.

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Approved

Dropping my CW for the one listed below.

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Sunadokei ‡ Hourglass
Rank: S
Type: Weapon/Item
Range: Close
Damage: (+15 to Gold Dust)
Chakra Cost: (-10 every turn it is held)
Description: The Sunadokei is an artifact which was founded by the Fourth Kazekage in a long forgotten ruin in the outskirts of Sunagakure during his childhood. The Sunadokei is made of toughest type of glass, making it nearly indestructible containing a special type of sand, or that’s what the Fourth thought at first. He carried the Sunadokei on his waist, over the years the Fourth found out about his magnetism kekkei genkai because he was able to manipulate the “sand” within the Sunadokei. However he realized that controlling sand with magnetism was impossible. That’s when he found out about the true properties of the “sand” which were made up of Gold Dust. Over the years the Fourth created his own style of gold dust, gathering gold dust particles from the earth itself. Although it seems that he did not fully mimic the original Gold Dust. The Sunadokei seems to have its own chakra generated by the raw gold dust inside. The frequency of the chakra that is coming from the Sunadokei resonates with the magnetic chakra that is used by the fourth, boosting all the gold dust techniques by +15 damage. When the Sunadokei is held it feeds on the Fourth’s magnetism chakra to keep itself “full” loosing -10 every turn it is held.

Boosts all Gold Dust techniques by +15 damage.
Allows the user to perform Gold dust techniques with one less hand seal.
The user loses -10 chakra every turn the Sunadokei is held.
After 5 turns the user will have to flip the hourglass to reset the dust.
Can only be wielded by the Luffy..

~Declined~ How many times can it be used per fight?
Feel free to edit anything to help its approval.

Sunadokei ‡ Hourglass
Rank: S
Type: Weapon/Item
Range: Close
Damage: (+15 to Gold Dust)
Chakra Cost: (-10 every turn it is held)
Description: The Sunadokei is an artifact which was founded by the Fourth Kazekage in a long forgotten ruin in the outskirts of Sunagakure during his childhood. The Sunadokei is made of toughest type of glass, making it nearly indestructible containing a special type of sand, or that’s what the Fourth thought at first. He carried the Sunadokei on his waist, over the years the Fourth found out about his magnetism kekkei genkai because he was able to manipulate the “sand” within the Sunadokei. However he realized that controlling sand with magnetism was impossible. That’s when he found out about the true properties of the “sand” which were made up of Gold Dust. Over the years the Fourth created his own style of gold dust, gathering gold dust particles from the earth itself. Although it seems that he did not fully mimic the original Gold Dust. The Sunadokei seems to have its own chakra generated by the raw gold dust inside. The frequency of the chakra that is coming from the Sunadokei resonates with the magnetic chakra that is used by the fourth, boosting all the gold dust techniques by +15 damage. When the Sunadokei is held it feeds on the Fourth’s magnetism chakra to keep itself “full” loosing -10 every turn it is held. The moment a gold dust technique is used the gold dust from the Sunadokei will start dropping and thus starting the four turn timer.

Boosts all Gold Dust techniques by +15 damage.
Allows the user to perform Gold dust techniques with one less hand seal.
The user loses -10 chakra every turn the Sunadokei is held.
After four turns the user will have to flip the hourglass to reset the dust.
After the dust fully drops the user can choose to flip the hourglass with his hand to reset it once per fight.
Can only be wielded by the Luffy..

~Declined~ Make it +10 and usable only one per match. Take out the part about flipping the hourglass to reset it's abilities. Also, make it last 3 turns.

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(Mokuton: Hayashi Dappi) Wood Style: Forest Emergence
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Description: The user gains the ability to merge himself into the trees at will to attack their target from whichever tree they want.
Restrictions:
*The user must be in a wooded area*
*Can only be used 4 times per battle*
Note: This is similar to Kimimaro's technique: Sawarabi no Mai - Dance of the Young Ferns

Got permission from SY to create a similar gold dust version.

(Sakin: Sakin Bouhatei) - Gold Dust: Gold Dust Mole
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: Using magnetism release, the user gains the ability to open a path and dig through gold dust techniques or substances. This technique is somewhat related to hiding like a mole technique, but instead of earth its gold dust. The user can choose exactly where he wants to come out of as long as there is gold dust in that desired location. This technique leaves the user extremely vulnerable to lightning based attack, considering Gold is a very good conductor.

Must be used on a gold dust technique or substance.
Can only be used four times per battle.
Only the Fourth Kazekage can use this.
Must be taught by Luffy..

~Approved~ Check the bold part.

(Doton: Earth Arms)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After making 3 hand signs the user sends his earth chakra into the ground around his opponent and raises arms from the ground that can grab his opponent and hold him/her in place.
-The user must make contact with the ground in order to use this jutsu meaning he/she cannot use this while being in the air.
-Must be taught by ~Yard~
-Must have a proper understanding of earth jutsu meaning you must be able to use B rank earth to learn this jutsu.
Note: If used in short-mid range you can add more chakra to the arms of earth and use them to crush the limbs of your opponent.


~Approved~

I got yard's permission to create a gold dost version.

(Sakin: Goruden Joushi) - Gold Dust: Golden Arms
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After making 3 hand signs, using magnetism release the user will bring forth gold dust particles right beneath the opponent raising arms from the ground that can grab his opponent and hold him/her in place.

Can only be used four times per battle.
If used in short-mid range the user can concentrate more on the magnetism and make the arms strong enough to crush the limbs of the opponent.
Can only be used by the Fourth Kazekage.
Must be taught by Luffy..

~Declined do not resubmit~ I don't care if you received a permission from Yard, there's just too many variation of this technique already.

New submissions:

(Sakin: Goruden Hayashi ) - Gold Dust: Golden Forest
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Using magnetism release, the user focuses a great deal of chakra within all ranges bringing forth gold dust particles from the Gold Dust Field. The user then molds all the particles creating a giant forest of tall sharp golden spikes that burst from the ground. This technique is very similar to the Kaguya's fifth and last dance forms "Dance of the Young Ferns", except the user can not merge themselves into the spikes in the same technique. Travelling through the spikes leaves the user extremely vulnerable to lightning as Gold is a very good conductor.

Must have "(Sakin: Sakin nohara) Gold Dust: Gold Dust Field" activated beforehand when creating the forest.
Must use "(Sakin: Sakin Bouhatei) - Gold Dust: Gold Dust Mole" if the user wants to travel through the spikes.
Can only be used once per battle.
No gold dust techniques of A-Rank or above next turn and no S-rank and above for the next 2 turns.
Can only be used by the Fourth Kazekage
Must be taught by Luffy..

A picture of a combination using Gold Dust: Gold Dust Mole and Gold Dust: Golden Forest.

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Feel free to edit anything to help its approval.

~Approved~ Made several edits on your custom. I made it clear that you were weak to lightning when traveling in the spikes or in gold in general. Many members think they're invulnerable when in another state.

 

[The_Empire]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

-Chakra Ring (Chakra Ringu)
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: The ring was made by Dei Dei to have a great weapon in any kind of situation. The ring is made of a metal that absorbs, and stabilize the user chakra so the user can use it to make shields around the user and/or partners, thin coat of chakra to protect against c rank and below attacks, hammer, katana, walls, platforms, slides, ropes and key(s). It lets off a yellow glow.

~Declined~. Fix the description a little. right now it looks like you are protecting yourself from C-ranked slides, which actually sound really fun. and since you are coating yourself in chakra, does that chakra glow yellow or is the ring the only thing that glows??

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-Chakra Ring Manipulation (Chakra Ringu Soujuu)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user channels chakra through the ring making shields around the user and/or partners, thin coat of chakra to protect against c rank and below attacks, hammer, katana, walls, platforms, slides, ropers, and key(s).
-Only used every other turn

~Declined~ See above

-Chakra Ring (Chakra Ringu)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary(Weapon)
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: The ring was made by Dei Dei who wanted a custom weapon for different situations. The ring is made of a metal that absorbs and stabilze the user`s chakra. The ring can make the following: a thin coat of chakra around the user(protects against C rank and below attacks), hammer, katana, wall(blocks B rank and below attacks), platforms, slide, rope and key. The ring is yellow and everything it makes is yellow also.

-Chakra Ring Manipulation (Chakra Ringu Soujuu)
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user channels chakra into the ring the user can manipulate the chakra and is yellow when making the following: a thin coat of chakra around the user(protects against C rank and below attacks), hammer, katana, walls(blocks B rank and below attacks), slide, rope, and key.
-Only used every other turn.

~Both Declined do not resubmit~ This is not a Green Lantern forum.

-Bat Style: Bat Confront (Batto: Batto Confront)
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: 40
Description: The user takes out a scroll. The user opens the scroll showing the inside towards the opponent. A kanji for "confront" is shown. Immedialy after opening the scroll, bats fly out out straight towards their target. The bats can go straight at the opponent or go around using their speed attacking the opponent blind spots. The bats attack using their sharp teeth and boo booing on the opponent letting out a nasty oder.
-Only used every other turn
-Only used by Dei Dei
-Must have signed the Bat contract
-The bats are the size of abult rl size bats and are around 100 bats coming out the scroll at the opponent

~Approved~

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Note 1: If the B rank and below blocking for the wall for my Chakra Ring is to much C rank and below is fine for it.
Note 2: Confront doesn`t have a japanesse name.

-Bat Mode (Batto Mo-do)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a mode made by the bats so the humans can be closer and feel the same as a bat. The user channels natural energy and wind chakra through their whole body while standing still. The user whole body changes all black just like the pic in the link below(no red just straight black). The user gains enhanced hearing just like a bat. The user can fly with their new wings found wings from this mode. The user can also use the Bat FightingStyle, Wing Slash, which is when the user uses their wings to slash at their opponent.
-Only used once per battle
-Lasts for four turns
-The user is exhausted after the mode is over
-No wind jutsus for three turns after the mode is over
-Must have signed the Bat-contract and trained my Dei Dei
-The user gains + 10 to taijutsu and wind ninjutsu, + 2 to speed only when flying
-Flying counts as a move when used to dodge/avoid attacks
-Only used by Dei Dei

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The look of the user is the best I could find for the Bat Mode. It is funny though.

~Declined~ No more human/animal hybrid mode will be approved.

 

[Scorps]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting some old rejected techniques:

(Raiton: Ryuudo Seichuu) Lighting Release: Flow Control
Type: Defense
Rank: B to S
Range: Short
Chakra: 25-40
Damage: N/A
Description:
When facing an enemy lightning technique, the user extends his right hand while infusing his body with his own lightning chakra. Upon receiving the enemy lightning in his hand he uses his own lightning chakra to direct the flow of electricity through his body to the ground (effectively grounding the lightning). The user must possess a great amount of chakra control and great experience in both shape and nature manipulation, as he has to make the electrical energy pass through his body without passing trough his heart as he also matches the exact amount of electrical energy received to enable him to control its flow. The amount of electrical energy one can direct is proportionate to ones own chakra, meaning that the users rank defines the rank of the technique. Upon releasing the electrical current through his feet, the energy produces a short range electrical shockwave that travels mostly in the ground in all directions around the user paralyzing both enemies and allies caught in it for 1 turn. The strength of the wave is 1 rank below the rank of the defended jutsu.
S-Jounin=B-Rank
Jounin=A-Rank
S-Ninja and above=S-Rank

Note: Can be used against any form of electricity
Note2: Cannot be used if the user isn't standing on earth/rock/mud/sand as he wouldn't be able to ground the electric current.
Note3: No other lightning technique the same turn
Note4: Must possess Raiton training up to said rank, Rasengan mastery, Ninjutsu mastery and master at least one element to prove that one possess the experience and ability to learn the technique
Note5: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note6: Can only be used 5 times


~All Declined~ Your panda summons can't be submitted before your summon is approved. All other jutsu's either OP or unrealistic

This was declined by being either OP or unrealistic (since there were more techniques on that submission i can't know which was the reason):

(Raiton: Ryuudo Seichuu) Lighting Release: Flow Control
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
When facing an enemy lightning technique, the user extends his right or left hand while infusing his body with his own lightning chakra. Upon receiving the enemy lightning in his hand he uses his own lightning chakra to direct the flow of electricity through his body to the ground effectively grounding the lightning. The user must possess a great amount of chakra control and great experience in both shape and nature manipulation, as he has to make the electrical energy pass through his body while using his own chakra to control the flow of electricity throughout his body. Upon releasing the electrical current through his feet, the energy produces a short range electrical shockwave that travels mostly in the ground in all directions around the user paralyzing and damaging both enemies and allies caught in it for 1 turn. The strength of the wave is 1 rank below the rank of the defended jutsu.

Note: Can be used against any form of electricity
Note2: Cannot be used if the user isn't standing on earth/rock/mud/sand as he wouldn't be able to ground the electric current.
Note3: No other lightning technique the same turn
Note4: Must possess Raiton training up to said rank, Rasengan mastery, Ninjutsu mastery and master at least one more element to prove that one possess the experience and ability to learn the technique
Note5: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note6: Can only be used 3 times

~Declined do not resubmit~ This technique already exist and was also re-created for a village custom in Kumo I think.

(Panda Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Myoushu) Panda Summoning Technique: Master
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Mid
Damage:40
Chakra:80
Description:
The Elder Ruler of the Pandas, Myoushu (Master) is the size of Gamabunta and looks like a normal giant panda (black and white). He's very harsh and outspoken but also very fair and wise. Strapped to his back he has a giant Staff (proportionate to his size) that he uses with great proficiency, when fighting upright on both his rear legs. He has Suiton chakra when most Pandas have either Doton or Katon chakras, allowing him to use any B-Rank Suiton technique the user knows but without the need to use handseals. Unique to him, he can be summoned anywhere within short to mid range of the summoner.

Note: Can only use S-Rank techniques and below in the next turn.
Note2: Must have signed the Panda contract and have its tattoo.
Note3: Can only be summoned once per battle
Note4: His moves count as one of the users normal 3 moves.
Note5: Can only stay in play for 5 turns.
Approved

I've seen other bosses and mine seems a little underpowered so i'm submitting an upgrade on its abilities:

(Panda Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Myoushu) Panda Summoning Technique: Master
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Mid
Damage:40
Chakra:80
Description:
The Elder Ruler of the Pandas, Myoushu (Master) is about half the size of Gamabunta (about 50 meters tall) and looks like a normal giant panda (black and white). He's very harsh and outspoken but also very fair and wise. Strapped to his back he has a giant Staff (proportionate to his size) that he uses with great proficiency, when fighting upright on both his rear legs. He has Suiton chakra when most Pandas have either Doton or Katon chakras, allowing him to use any S-Rank Suiton technique the user knows but without the need to use handseals. Unique to him, he can be summoned anywhere within short to mid range of the summoner. Because of his size and strength he is immune to basic ninja tools and Fire and Water C-Rank and bellow.

Note: Can only use up to S-Rank techniques in the same and the next turn.
Note2: Must have signed the Panda contract and have its tattoo.
Note3: Can only be summoned once per battle
Note4: His moves count as one of the users normal 3 moves.
Note5: Can only stay in play for 4 turns.

~Approved~ Made it 4 turns.

Suiton: Varuna Bachi | Water Release: Varuna's Punishment
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
User does two hand seals (Tiger+Ram) and rejects all water around him. This is done by releasing his Sui Chakra in a non focused way and using it to repulse any water around the user.

Note: Usable only 3 times per match
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps


~All 3 Declined~Restrictions?

Resubmitting:

Suiton: Varuna Bachi | Water Release: Varuna's Punishment
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
When facing an enemy Water technique the user does 3 hand seals (Boar+Tiger+Ram) and releases a large amount of unfocused water chakra that rejects all water short range around him. If this is done in a water battleground, the user will also reject the water beneath him which will return below the user once the technique is released/finishes, fact that has to be taken into account by the user, since he'll momentarily lose his footing.



Note: Usable only 3 times per match
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Can't use Water on the same turn nor water above S-Rank on the following one

~Declined~ Please explain how using your own suiton chakra can repulse your oponent's chakra infused suiton jutsu?

Doton/Fuuton: Semai Meimei Oberisuku | Earth/Wind Release: Small Divine Obelisk
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long (on throwing)
Chakra: 30 (-10 each turn)
Damage: 60
Description:
User does 3 hand seals (Dog+Ox+Bird) and 1 Rock Obelisk breaks from the ground within short range of the user. This obelisk is about 4 meters high and 2 meters wide. This Obelisk is then infused with wind chakra which makes it rise from the ground and hover above ground between short to mid range around the user. The user can direct the obelisk to defend against up to S-Rank Lightning and Water, A-Rank Earth, Wind, Fire. When the Obelisk is hit by Fire above B-Rank, the rock turns into lava from the combined heat of the Wind and the Fire, but the jutsu will still be stopped. The Obelisk can also be used to attack the enemy, by throwing it against the enemy.

Note: can only be used 3 times
Note2: stays active maximum of 3 turns
Note3: can only be taught by Scorps

Made a simpler version with only one obelisk and kept the basic idea. Tweaked the description in both grammar and description. Changed the restrictions and lowered the rank to A-Rank. Also changed the range of the trowing to long. When i get the rank i'll submit the S-Rank version with the basic idea but two obelisks. If this one gets approved that is ^^

~Approved~ my bad ^^

Submitting an S-Rank version:

Doton/Fuuton: Meimei Oberisuku No Yougo | Earth/Wind Release: Divine Obelisks of Protection
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long (on throwing)
Chakra: 40 (-15 each turn)
Damage: 80
Description:
User does 5 hand seals (Dog+Ox+Bird+Ox+Bird) and 2 Rock Obelisks breaks from the ground within short range of the user. Each obelisk is about 4 meters high and 2 meters wide. These Obelisks are then infused with wind chakra which makes them rise from the ground and hover above ground between short to mid range around the user making them each an A-Rank Doton/Fuuton. The user can direct each obelisk to defend against up to S-Rank Lightning and Water, A-Rank Earth, Wind, Fire or both to defend against up to Forbidden Rank Lightning and Water, S-Rank Fire, Earth or Wind. When an Obelisk is hit by Fire above B-Rank, the rock turns into lava from the combined heat of the Wind and the Fire, but the jutsu will still be stopped. These Obelisks can also be used to attack the enemy, by throwing them against the enemy.

Note: can only be used 2 times
Note2: stays active maximum of 3 turns
Note3: can only be taught by Scorps
Note4: can't use wind in the next turn
Note5: even if one obelisk is destroyed or used, the other still remains in play


Submitting my Custom Weapon:

Gaia No Buin | The Staff of Gaia
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:
The staff of Gaia, goddess protector of Earth, stolen by a special human for whom se had fell in love. The staff is covered in several ancient Kanji inscriptions and is about 1.7m long, 4 cms thick and made of sacred wood and a special unknown metal which makes it indestructible. The staff itself can channel Katon, Doton and Mokuton chakras and is a formidable hand to hand weapon. As the weapon of a God, no human can grasp its powers fully but the staff is known to have responded to some unique jutsu, a fact that has been related to the kanji inscriptions but is yet to be fully explained.

Abilities:
-Indestructible
-Doton: Domu | Earth Release: Iron Skin jutsu gets 2 Ranks in strength when used, making one almost indestructible to physical attacks.
-Katon: Karyu Endan | Fire Style: Dragon Flame Bomb jutsu gets 2 Ranks in strength when used, outputting a higher amount of fire.
-Kyousei Mokuton No Jutsu | Greater Wood Style Technique can be made out of the Staff's wood.
-Staff can dispel a Katon jutsu, disrupt a Doton jutsu or stop a Mokuton jutsu up to B-Rank 2 times per battle (this is done by the user channeling his Katon, Doton or Mokuton chakra into the staff and hitting the jutsu with it, which disrupts, dispels or stops the jutsu) and/or dispel/disrupt/stop 1 complete A-Rank Katon, Doton or Mokuton jutsu once per battle (with the same principle).

Resctrictions:
-All abilities of the staff count towards the move count and don't require hand seals if the user is holding the staff on his hands.
-The kanji's on the staff glow when chakra is channeled into it or its abilities used.
-If user is hit by lightning while holding the staff in his hands he'll receive a +20 damage penalty due to the staffs inherent Earth and Wood affinities.
-When used to counter 1 B-Rank technique it can only be used again to counter another B-Rank.
-While holding the staff in his hands, the user can't channel lightning jutsu.
-To wield the staffs abilities the user must have it with him either in hand or strapped to his back.
-Requires Wood Training and Bio to use the Wood Ability but not to wield the staff.
-The staff can only be wielded by Scorps; is someone else tries to wield the staff it will become 10 tons heavy and impossible to lift or wield.

I mention that you don't need handsigns for Dragon Flame, Iron Skin and the Greater Wood when you hold the staff on your hands because when you hold the staff, as a two handed weapon you can't actually use hand seals lol. But when the staff is stapped to ones back you still need to do them. If this needs to be added, i'll resubmitt ^^

~Both Approved~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Bushido: Abatā) - Way of the Samurai | Avatar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage: +10 to Kenjutsu
Description: This technique is an advanced form of the samurai saber technique in which rather than coating the blade with chakra, the samurai instead concentrates chakra within the blade. By doing this the sword begins to shine brightly taking on a bright white color while maintaining its original form, representing the soul of the Samurai within the blade. By concentrating the chakra into the blade rather than around it, it becomes more focused and powerful allowing normal slashes to cut through metallic weapons such as kunai or other swords in the same was as a chidori current. The technique is not without drawbacks. It must be used with their dominant arm and since the user must keep the chakra under better control it puts more strain on their body, especially the arm holding the sword. As a result once the technique wears off they lose use of that arm for two turns afterwards. It also makes the sword used become very brittle to the point that if it were to clash with another sword it would be easily broken (regardless of any custom weapon that says its indestructible).
-Can only be used by Samurai.
-Can only be used once and lasts five turns.
-User loses use of their dominant arm after the fourth turn for two turns.

Reduced the added damage from 15 to 10, completely removed any part about the light making it hard to follow the blade. Removed the ability to activate and deactivate numerous times, making it so its activated once and lasts a certain amount of turns. Since once activated you're stuck with it until it wears off I increased the turn duration from four to five.

~Declined~ This jutsu doesn't make sense when you consider what we know of chakra infused weapon. There is already chakra inside the weapon when you normally infuse it with an element,. However, it's the way you mold it (elemental manipulation) that gives you weapon an extra boost. You can re-read Naruto's training with Asuma if you want more info on it.

(Genjutsu: Chikin-icchi) - Demonic Illusion | Chicken Pox
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 10
Description: The user will either scratch their arm or neck causing the target to fall under an illusion. In the illusion the opponent's skin will become irresistibly itchy causing them to claw at their own body. They begin to scratch so hard that they actually cause themselves to bleed in several places. The pain caused by the scratching is enough to break them free of the genjutsu, making it very brief, but leaving them with numerous minor cuts on their body. While the genjutsu is in use the user is incapable of using other techniques.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-The motion of the user scratching themselves must be seen.

Added that the user can't preform other techniques during the duration of the genjutsu. Reduced damage from 20 to 10 since the damage aspect isn't the main purpose of this technique. Not really sure how else to change it without killing it. xd

~Declined~ Change the way it's cast on your opponent. Scratching yourself? Even Itachi had to point a finger at his opponent while having his Sharingan activated. Make hand seals and make it so you need a direct contact with your opponent.

(Bushido: Abatā) - Way of the Samurai | Avatar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage: +10 to Kenjutsu
Description: This technique is an advanced form of the samurai saber technique in which after coating the blade with chakra, the samurai focuses on using shape manipulation to condense the chakra to its limits. Rather than the normal samurai saber technique where the chakra is transparent and changes the shape and size of the weapon, the condensed chakra fits closely to the blade maintaining the same shape and size. The chakra is compressed extremely thin along the edge of the sword raising its cutting abilties past that of the normal samurai saber technique. By doing this the sword begins to shine brightly taking on a bright white color while maintaining its original form representing the soul of the Samurai within the blade. The technique is not without drawbacks. It must be used with their dominant arm and since the user must keep the chakra under better control it puts more strain on their body, especially the arm holding the sword. As a result once the technique wears off they lose use of that arm for two turns afterwards. It also makes the sword used become very brittle to the point that if it were to clash with another sword it would be easily broken (regardless of any custom weapon that says its indestructible).
-Can only be used by Samurai.
-Can only be used once and lasts five turns.
-User loses use of their dominant arm after the fourth turn for two turns.


Adjusted the logic behind it. Rather than focusing large amounts of chakra within the blade, it takes the chakra thats formed around the blade and compresses it using shape manipulation. So by increasing the density and thinness of the chakra it becomes stronger and sharper.

~Declined~ I know what you're trying to do here, but this is nothing more then infusing chakra into your sword. You're really overextending the abilities of this technique. There shouldn't even be a boost to Kenjutsu considering we don't had a boost when regularly adding elemental chakra to our swords. Also, check the bold part. If you next re-submission isn't drastically different, I will decline it for good.

(Genjutsu: Chikin-icchi) - Demonic Illusion | Chicken Pox
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 10
Description: The user will preform a series of three hand seals and then extend their left arm towards the opponent while scratching it, causing the opponent to fall under an illusion. In the illusion the opponent's skin will become irresistibly itchy causing them to claw at their own body. They begin to scratch so hard that they actually cause themselves to bleed in several places. The pain caused by the scratching is enough to break them free of the genjutsu, making it very brief, but leaving them with numerous minor cuts on their body. While the genjutsu is in use the user is incapable of using other techniques.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-The motion of the user scratching themselves must be seen.


Changed how its initiated, but I'd reeeeally like to avoid needing direct contact. In our RP getting that close to the opponent is no easy task and if I do get that close I'd rather do other things. >.<

~Approved~ Good change.

 

[~The Norwegian~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Genjutsu: (脳のカット)-Brain cutter
Rank: A
Type: Atack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Standing short range from an opponent the user points a finger on the opponents forhead, and when the user does it he/she looks into the opponents eyes, and cast a Genjutsu on them, disrupting thei're senses, and make them belive the user's cutting up their brain with his/hers finger.
~Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
~Note2: User must have Sharingan
~Note3: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

~Approved~ Edited it and took out the last sentence about your opponent falling to the ground. You can cause pain, but you can't tell how they'll react.
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Name: Doton: (Doton Tatsu Maki)-Earth style: Earth Tornado
Rank: S
Type: Suplumantary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
The user gathers up Doton chakra and release it into the ground, and release all stones from the earth and make them create a huge tornado of rocks that flies around in a circle around the user, and it covers the whole field. The user can increase or decrease the range and amount of the tornado.
~Note: Can only be used once per battle.
~Note 2: No Doton-Jutsus for 1 turn.
~Note 3: While the user is controlling the earth tornado he can't use any other jutsus, bcause he have to hold it flowing.
~Note 4: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

~Declined do not resubmit~ Similar technique already exist.


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Name: Katon: (雨の燃焼)-Fire Release: Burning Rain
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
The user sends a huge fireball up into the sky, and when it's high enough up it splits up and turns into lots of burning raindrops that covers the whole area.
~Note: If the user doesn't use a jutsu to protect himself, he'll be infected by the rain aswell.
~Note 2: Can only be used once per battle
~Note 3: The rain lasts 1 round(if not stopped)
~Note 4: No Fire jutsus for 3 turns
~Note 5: Must be Sannin rank or higher
~Note 6: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

~Declined~ OP. 1 turn of flaming rain? Change that. It shouldn't last more than the length of your move. Change the description to explain how such small flames can actually do damage. Also, how do the flames make their way to the ground?

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Name: Katon: (雨のコントロール)-Fire style: Rain Control
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
If the user has used the Burning Rain jutsu, he can use this to take controll over the rain and form it into whatever he wants.
~Note: Must have used Fire style: Burning Rain first
~Note 2: Can only be tought by ~The Norwegian~

~Declined do not resubmit~ Burning Rain wasn't approved and even if it was, such jutsu would never be accepted.


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[The Doctor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Shikotsumyaku: Soto kokkaku) Soto kokkaku: Exo Skeleton
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:The user manipulates the size of his entire skeletal system and extends it outwards, to create a second skeletal system (slightly larger) on the outside of his body, to form a plate armor-esque defense. The bones cover all of the user's immediate openings, and is as hard as steel.
Note:Takes 2 seconds to completely form the armor
Note: May only be used once per battle, but if the bones are broken, (I.E. my ribs break,) they can be reformed instantly.
Note: May only be used by a Kaguya
Note: May only be used by Polemarch.

(Shikotsumyaku: Sukeruton no bakudan) Shikotsumyaku: Skeleton Bomb
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage: 60
Description:The user separates his skeletal structure into small sharp pointed segments, that are fired at the speed of bone bullets. They act as if shrapnel would, embedding themselves deep into nearby people and object, leaving extremely deep cuts and lacerations all over what ever it hits. In short, you basically become a human grenade.
Note: This requires no menacing movement on the user's part.
Note: May only be used twice per battle
Note: May only be used by a Kaguya
Note: May only be used by Polemarch

(Puraimaru satsujin-sha) Primal killings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: By giving up his ability to use ninjutsu for the rest of the battle, the user reverts back to a primal state. His movements become erratic, and unpredictable, and due to this he begins to move faster and strike stronger. His speed increases significantly, and any form of taijutsu he uses, gets a bonus of +5 to damage. Afterwards, the user is exhausted and is not able to move for one turn.
Note:May only be used one per battle
Note: Only lasts 5 turns
Note:May only be used by Polemarch

~Leaving for Mugi to check~
~All Declined~ Similar jutsus exist
Exo skeleton = Bone armor, Skeleton bomb = Bone rage, Primal killings = similar to one of Alucards jutsus

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Been a long time since I submitted anything in here lol. Gonna try something a bit different than most.

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Drunken Fist Style: Drunken Monkey Mode|Suiken: Hebereke Seiyuuki Mo-do
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (-20 to user after using)
Description: The user drinks large amounts of sake, becoming very drunk, and brings his arms in front of him. He then grabs several more bottles of other types of alcohol and drinks those very quickly, becoming severely intoxicated and begins to stagger in his movements and becomes completely unpredictable. His movements are so wild and random that it would take a Mangekyou Sharingan to accurately predict his movements. Due to drinking such levels of alcohol, the user can stay in Drunken Monkey Mode for up to four turns and can activate this mode twice a battle. After sobering up the first time, the user is left with a severe headache that restricts his concentration and limits him from using taijutsu higher than A-rank for 2 turns. After using the second time, the user’s headache is worsened to the point that he cannot use any ninjutsu of higher than A rank and taijutsu of higher than B rank, each for three turns and he is left feeling very sick and with large amounts of fatigue, causing him to be able to perform only two jutsus per turn for three turns.
*Can only be used twice and can't be used with any other mode*
*Can only use Drunken Fist jutsu and taijutsu in this form*
*Lasts up to four turns. First time using lasts four turn, second time 3 turns*
*After first turn, user is only able to use taijutsu of A-rank and below for two turns*
*After using second turn, user is only able to use taijutsu of B-rank and below and ninjutsu of A-rank and below for three turns and can only use two jutsus per turn the second time*
*User sobers up from taking severe damage (i.e. broken bones, severe stabs, etc.). Not necessarily life-threatening injuries are needed*

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Drunken Monkey Style: Captain Morgan’s Uprising|Hebereke Seiyuuki Youshiki: Teichou Morgan's Boudou
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user, after drinking very strong alcohol, becomes very drunk and charges large amounts of chakra to his arms, strengthening them, which he holds out in front of him in the Drunken Monkey starting position. The user will then suddenly fall backwards, swinging his arms behind him to catch himself and swinging his legs upwards, kicking the enemy in his chin, and then quickly boosting himself in the air from his arms, landing with one foot in front of the other. He then immediately stumbles forward, and uppercuts the enemy several times in the chest and face as he/she rise from the “upper-kick”. As the drunken punches are thrown, the user continues to stumble forward, causing them to rise even further. The user then strikes the enemy with a powerful, uppercut sending them a few feet into the air. The user then falls forward, but catching himself by his forearms and using the momentum from falling to flip himself over his head into the air, upside-down. He then catches the enemy almost as if by accident, looping his ankles around the target’s neck, catching him. He then drunkenly rolls over in the air, causing the target to twist around under him. As they hit the ground, the user lands with his chakra enhanced arms hitting the target’s neck, causing deep damage to his throat, severely restricting his breathing and if used twice, can break the enemy's windpipes.
*Can only be done twice*
*After using, the user’s balance will be thrown off on a level that the user can’t focus and/or stand straight enough to perform jutsus higher than A rank for three turns*
*Can only be done with at least a three turn difference in between*
*Can only be used in Drunken Monkey Mode*

Note: The way they land is the opponent on the ground with one of the user's arm landing on the enemy's neck with him laying right beside the enemy. If I explained that in a good way lol.

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Drunken Monkey Style: Monkey’s Feigning Uppercut| Hebereke Seiyuuki Youshiki: Seiyuuki's Gishi Appa-katto
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user, after standing in the Drunken Fist position (with the hands held in front of the user, slightly bent and palms facing to the user), drunkenly throws a punch, narrowly missing the enemy’s head. He then loops it behind the target’s head, and pull forward while seeming to stumble drunkenly backwards, falling. As he falls backwards and the target’s head get’s pulled forward, the user extends his leg quickly, hitting the target in the chin with great force.
*Can only be used twice*
*Can only be used in Drunken Monkey Mode*

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Drunken Monkey Style: Idiot’s Stupor| Hebereke Seiyuuki Youshiki: Hakuchi Soushin
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30(+10 to user)
Description: The user drunkenly swings his left leg slightly in front of him (he swings it to his right) while throwing a punch towards the face of the enemy, losing his balance whilst doing so, causing him to fall forward. As he falls to his left, he head butts the enemy in the stomach, causing them to double over. The user, who by then would have hit the ground, then raises very quickly, once more head butting the enemy, this time in the chin with great force, causing him to fall backwards. The user is then left with a small headache from the drunken, accidental head butting.
*Can only be used in Drunken Monkey Mode*

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Drunken Monkey Style: Vodka’s Miscreant| Hebereke Seiyuuki Youshiki: Uxokka Hitodenashi
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user uppercuts the enemy while leaning backwards and extending his right leg, kicking him in the groins as well. He then turns his right hand over (palm facing outwards) and punch the enemy in the stomach as he leans back forward, head butting the target at the same time, busting both their foreheads from the impact. As this happens, the user stumbles to his forward and slightly to the left of the enemy, ending up behind him and to his right by a few inches. He then falls forward, swinging his right leg backwards as he does so, hitting the enemy in the crouch once more. As the user hit’s the ground, he rolls forward and drunkenly rises and turns facing the target once more.
*Can only be used three times*
*Can only be used in Drunken Monkey Mode*

Feel free to edit anything that you think needs to be edited in order for it gain approval. I really want these customs as part of a new fighting style I plan on implementing with my Lee bio.
~All Declined~

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Drunken Fist Style: Drunken Monkey Mode|Suiken: Hebereke Seiyuuki Mo-do
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (-20 to user after using)
Description: The user drinks large amounts of sake, and several more bottles of other types of alcohol and drinks those very quickly, becoming severely intoxicated and begins to stagger in his movements and becomes completely unpredictable. His movements become so wild and random that it would take a 3 Tomoe Sharingan to accurately predict his movements. Due to drinking such levels of alcohol, the user can stay in Drunken Monkey Mode for up to three turns and can activate this mode twice a battle. After sobering up the first time, the user is left with a severe headache that restricts his concentration and limits him from using taijutsu higher than A-rank for 2 turns. After using the second time, the user’s headache is worsened to the point that he cannot use any ninjutsu of higher than A rank and taijutsu of higher than B rank, each for three turns and he is left feeling very sick and with large amounts of fatigue, causing him to be able to perform only two jutsus per turn for three turns.
*Can only be used twice and can't be used with any other mode*
*Can only use Drunken Fist jutsu and taijutsu in this form*
*Lasts up to three turns*
*After first turn, user is only able to use taijutsu of A-rank and below for two turns*
*After using second turn, user is only able to use taijutsu of B-rank and below and ninjutsu of A-rank and below for three turns and can only use two jutsus per turn the second time*
*User sobers up from taking strong damage (attacks of A-rank and higher)

Restricted the turn usage to three turns each time used and changed how the user can get "knocked" from it to A-rank jutsus and higher. Don't really know what else to edit/remove as it wasn't specified what made it declined.

~Approved~ Make it track-able by 3 Tomoe and higher.

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Drunken Monkey Style: Captain Morgan’s Uprising|Hebereke Seiyuuki Youshiki: Teichou Morgan's Boudou
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 60 (-15)
Description: The user, after drinking very strong alcohol, becomes very drunk and charges large amounts of chakra to his arms, strengthening them, which he holds out in front of him in the Drunken Monkey starting position. The user will then suddenly fall backwards, swinging his arms behind him to catch himself and swinging his legs upwards, kicking the enemy in his chin, and then quickly boosting himself in the air from his arms, landing with one foot in front of the other. He then immediately stumbles forward, and uppercuts the enemy several times in the chest and face as he/she rise from the “upper-kick”. As the drunken punches are thrown, the user continues to stumble forward, causing them to rise even further. The user then strikes the enemy with a powerful, uppercut sending them several feet into the air. The user then falls forward, but catching himself by his forearms and using the momentum from falling to flip himself over his head into the air, upside-down. He then catches the enemy almost as if by accident, wraps his legs around the enemy's upper body, catching them. The user then drunkenly and, once more if as by accident, twists over in the air, and lands with one of his arm across the throat of the enemy, causing great damage to his neck and the other shielding his face as they hit the ground hard. The user is left slightly disorientated from hitting the earth and vision is extremely blurry, making it hard to make out incoming projectiles and attacks further than mid range from him during the next turn.
*Can only be done once*
*After using, the user’s balance will be thrown off on a level that the user can’t focus and/or stand straight enough to perform jutsus higher than A rank for three turns*
*Can only be used in Drunken Monkey Mode*

Changed to once per battle and re worded the jutsu, mainly the ending to show how both the user and enemy take damage

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Drunken Monkey Style: Monkey’s Feigning Uppercut| Hebereke Seiyuuki Youshiki: Seiyuuki's Gishi Appa-katto
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user, after standing in the Drunken Fist position (with the hands held in front of the user, slightly bent and palms facing to the user), drunkenly throws a punch, narrowly missing the enemy’s head. He then loops it behind the target’s head, and pull forward while seeming to stumble drunkenly backwards, falling. As he falls backwards and the target’s head get’s pulled forward, the user extends his leg quickly, hitting the target in the chin with great force.
*Can only be used twice*
*Can only be used in Drunken Monkey Mode*

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Drunken Monkey Style: Idiot’s Stupor| Hebereke Seiyuuki Youshiki: Hakuchi Soushin
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30(+10 to user)
Description: The user drunkenly swings his left leg slightly in front of him (he swings it to his right) while throwing a punch towards the face of the enemy, losing his balance whilst doing so, causing him to fall forward. As he falls to his left, he head butts the enemy in the stomach, causing them to double over. The user, who by then would have hit the ground, then raises very quickly, once more head butting the enemy, this time in the chin with great force, causing him to fall backwards. The user is then left with a small headache from the drunken, accidental head butting.
*Can only be used in Drunken Monkey Mode*

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Drunken Monkey Style: Vodka’s Miscreant| Hebereke Seiyuuki Youshiki: Uxokka Hitodenashi
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user uppercuts the enemy while leaning backwards and extending his right leg, kicking him in the groins as well. He then turns his right hand over (palm facing outwards) and punch the enemy in the stomach as he leans back forward, head butting the target at the same time, busting both their foreheads from the impact. As this happens, the user stumbles to his forward and slightly to the left of the enemy, ending up behind him and to his right by a few inches. He then falls forward, swinging his right leg backwards as he does so, hitting the enemy in the crouch once more. As the user hit’s the ground, he rolls forward and drunkenly rises and turns facing the target once more.
*Can only be used three times*
*Can only be used in Drunken Monkey Mode*

Last three were unchanged as they were most likely declined for being useable only in Drunken Monkey Mode and as it was declined, it lead to all jutsu being based on it to be declined as well.

~All Approved~ Gotta love drunken style taijutsu

 

[Pain..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Enkou Ken ) Holly Sword

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Holly sword is one legendary sword, people have said that is very, very light and is really strong that only the chosen one's are able to use it, if you are not a chosen one and you used the sword the sword itself will absorb your chakra till death and kill you little by little without you noticing. This sword took act with a guy name 'Peace' that guy is known as the "Best swordman of the whole world" no one really know's about Peace pass story, about his childhood but their has been rumors around the whole Naruto system that his father was a guy name 'Monkey D. Luffy' the most wanted criminal on the whole world, no one know's if is true or false thought it may be. Madara wanted Peace to join his force known as 'Akatsuki' by those times Akatsuki wasn't so big and if Peace would join Madara would make him co-leader but Peace refuse to join his force. One fine morning the fearless Peace read the newspaper and saw that Madara declared war to Konohagakure which is Peace homeland even thought he left, it and became Missing-ninja he still love Konoha and couldn't accept this. When the war was about to start which was the next, day Peace got prepared to beat Madara but Peace didn't know Madara plans so before the war started Peace went to talk to Madara to get information but Madara didn't gave him information. Finally, the war started everybody on Konoha is ready for Madara fearless force which is Akatsuki. Peace came after, the Hokage which is Izuna came out to fight and as soon as Peace came he wanted to finish the war as soon as possible but he couldn't find Madara on that same war Naruto was born that's why Madara wanted the war that day. As soon as Peace found out his plan it was too late, Madara already summon Kyuui also, known as the 'Nine tails fox' Peace ran to the Nine tails fox with all his speed and mighty to fight, with his sword on his left hand as soon as the Nine tails fox kill's Minato which is Naruto father Peace cut's six tails out of the Nine tails fox which was amazing and incredible no one has ever done that before. While Peace is fighting the Nine tails fox Izuna is taking care of Madara but Izuna seen's to fail because Madara found out what happen to the Nine tails fox so he use his Eternal Sharingan to go to the Nine tails fox, Izuna couldn't do anything about it as soon as Madara got to the Nine tails fox he surprised attacked Peace by stabbing him on the back but before, Peace die's he did a forbidden jutsu which would make a great explosion and summon the sword to a hidden place, this explosion crash the whole Konoha but Peace wanted to stop the war not destroy Konoha when the sword was summon to the hidden spot Peace last words was 'Take care of my son, Izuna' and Izuna answer was 'I will'. No one ever knew that Peace had a son, only Izuna knew his son name is Miles "Ichigo". Izuna talked to Miles about his father, and Miles was really proud of his father when Miles found out of the sword he wanted his father legacy so he went to travel and look for it. On a research on Konoha he found the sword hidden under Peace homeland which is Konoha. Miles was scared to take it so he didn't took it the first, day but when he got into a fight and loose the fight Miles decided to get stronger so he went back to get the sword and didn't tell anyone about it. Miles began to train with it on a hidden place on Konoha. Miles master the sword power within three years and talked to Izuna about it and Izuna talked to him about how to use it properly. He then, was known as the 'Peace legacy'. One of the sword power is speed. The user first, will point the sword at the opponent straight up and focus a larger amount of swift chakra which would make the user speed increase amazingly good. The second, power is to increase the user five senses to the maximum increasing the user five senses rapidly fast an amazingly good. The third, and only power is to release a chakra wave from the sword that is call "Wave of chakra" for the user to do this the user, first, need to focus chakra on the sword.

Restrictions|

-The Wave of Chakra can only be use five times on battle.
-The five senses can only last, up to three turns and can only be use twice per battle
-The user speed can last, six rounds if the user last, more than that the sword will start to absorb the user chakra
-This sword can only be use by Pain.. and it's abilities

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Chakra Wave|



1:13 - 1:20

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User speed|

The sword look's like this:

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Special Note: The sword is amazingly sharp.

To whoever check this, please again please, edit whatever you think it need's to be edit to make it approved that's all i ask for.

~Declined do not resubmit~ This is just ridiculous, don't resubmit such a wall of text. Do you have any idea how long it already is to check customs? If you want to make a background history for your sword, just put it in your bio and put the link in your custom.

Back to business. This is simply unacceptable. There are many things wrong, and I will cite a few:

-No chakra waves. We have enough sword that do that already. Plus, your restrictions are almost useless considering the amount of time you can use it.

-If anyone touch it/hold it they'll die from chakra exhaustion? Auto-decline.

-Your five sense enhancement is a rip off of one of my jutsu.

-Boosting your speed was just the cherry on top lol.

-etc...

 

[Pineapple]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton:Zeus Boruto) Lightning Release: Zeus Bolt
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: User makes 3 handseals, and then focuses his/her chakra into their hand and by using shape manipulation and chakra compression, to make a lightning bolt. The user can then throw the bolt (max mid range) or use it to stab somebody.
~Must be Taught be Papaya/Pineapple.
~You can keep the bolt and not use it on the turn you made it, but must be used in the following 2 turns.
~If it is still in your hand, you must continously focus chakra into the lightning.

~Declined do not resubmit~ This is way too similar to many cannon and custom lightning techniques.

(Doton: Ushi Poo) Earth Release: Cow poop
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: User focuses earth chakra into his/her hand to create a mud-like substance. They then manipulate the chakra so it looks and smells like cow poop. This can be
thrown at people or used to smudge in people's faces.
~must be taught by Papaya

~Declined~ If you re-submit such stupid jutsus I'll ban you for a week.

Don't come on my profile trying to explain how serious you were when submitting this.

 

[McRazor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kesshō yōso burēdo | Crystalline Elemental Blade
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: CEB is made of high density crystal which is the reason why it's so firm and sharp. A very old and secret blacksmith technique was used to create this blade. Rumors say that its previous owner originated from the Yuki clan. Upon his death he sealed a part of himself within it, making the blade chakra infusable and able to react to Fuuton, Suiton and Hyouton chakra. When the user channels his chakra into CEB, it starts glowing in the elements corresponding color and allows the user to use its element effect. Each element has its own effect which, together with chakra infusion, counts as one of three moves per turn. If the user infuses his Fuuton/Suiton chakra into CEB it starts glowing green/blue and allows the user to use its Fuuton/Suiton effect three times per match. If the user infuses both types of chakra, due to his mastery of both and his ability of controlling Ice, his sword starts glowing light blue and allows the user to use its Hyouton effect. When the user infuses Suiton chakra into his sword he can’t change it to Fuuton, but instead he can add Fuuton to get Hyouton, and vice versa. CEB is a very light blade due to its crystal construction and its only 50 inches long so it can be used with one hand. It's also unbreakable because crystal is one of the firmest materials.
Note: Effects can be used only three times per match
Note: Effects count as one of three moves per turn
Note: User can’t use effect two consecutive turns
Note: Chakra infusion lasts four turns
Note: Freezes on touch, unless Hyouton specialist
Note: Can only be used by McRazor

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~Approved~

Kesshō-sui burasuto | Crystalline Water Blast
Type: Weapon effect
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: +20
Description: When user infuses his Suiton chakra into his CEB it allows him to expand a water jutsu that he previously used. As he adds chakra into CEB he uses it as an emitter to give a blast of chakra to his jutsu so he can power it up for one rank and extend its range.
Note: Effect counts as one of three moves per turn
Note: Effect can be used only three times per battle
Note: User can't use other Suiton jutsus next turn
Note: Can only be used if holding CEB

~Declined do not resubmit~ Similar to existing technique.

Kesshō-sui no bāsuto | Crystalline Water Burst
Type: Weapon effect
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (+10 if the battlefield is on ice)
Description: When user infuses his Suiton chakra into his CEB it allows him to create a burst of water behind his enemy. As the water bursts, it's shapes into spikes which pierce through the enemy. If the battlefield is on ice and the water bursts, spikes get frozen and become deadlier, dealing more damage on impact. Due to his mastery of Suiton, user doesn't require a water source.
Note: Effect counts as one of three moves per turn
Note: Effect can be used only three times per battle and counts towards the 3 usage of the sword's abilities
Note: User can't use other Suiton jutsus next turn
Note: Can only be used if holding CEB
Note: No water source required

Water effect edited.​

~Declined~ Specify the size of this water jutsu and its distance to the opponent when created. If it's within shot-range then it's unacceptable considering it'd be an instant hit.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

you can decline a jutsu because there's no jap name O_O?

Yes he can, it's in the rules (official template).

re submitting

hyouton shikke kankaku (ice relase moisture senseing)
Type: supplenmatry
Rank: S
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user will make 3 hand seals and focas his wind and water chakra into the air where as long as there is moisure in the air the user will be able to sense what ever is in the air including chakra the chakra will sense the jutsu/ person moving threw the air sending signels to the user of the chakra sorce +
becase as something move's threw the air it will disdort the wind and water chakra in air letting the user know some one or some thing is moving. ( be it chakra or person)
( an example would be the hidden mist jutsu cold air or any where near a lake )
note: can only be used 3 time's per battle
note: last's 8 turns.
note: must have moisure in the air for this to work.
note: basicly this jutsu wouldn't work in a dessert.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. I have a very similar one using moisture in the air.

new


Hyouton koori bakudan ( ice relase ice bomb)

Type: attack
Rank: forbidden
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost: 100
Damage Points: 100 ( damage to the user is explained in the note's
Description: the user build's up a large amount of fuuton and suiton chakra the user then condense's the chakra's into one point inside of his gut and continue's to buold it up the user will then relase the chakra's in a gaint burst of ice chakra freezeing every thing that it touch's
note: after use the user will collpase from useing such a massive amount of chakra at once
note: can't use any more wind,water or ice jutsu's the rest of the battle
note: user goes numb and is unable to perform hand seal"s
note: user can not stand for an entire turn
note: jutsu work's as fast as a explosion.

~Declined~ OP: Up to long range and freeze everything that it touch? No matter how many restrictions you put there it'll never get that one approved. Re-word the description of your jutsu.



updateing

hyouton: mizu freezeing no jutsu) ice relase water freezeing jutsu ( no jap name for freezeing >.<)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: short to long.
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: the user does a row of ten hand seals and then focas's his wind chakra into an already amde water soruce cooling it untill it becomes ice.
note: Can only freeze an enemy's water jutsu up to a rank
note: no more Srank ice jutsu the next turn
note: can only be used 3 times

~Declined~ I don't know who approved the first version of your technique, but it already exist. I guess you can be happy you got the first one approved xd

you approved it any way it's been a week since i posted before this one ( meaning i have room to atleast post one jutsu )

re submitting

Hyouton: Koori Bakudan (Ice Relase: Ice Bomb)

Type: Attack
Rank: forbidden
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20 to the user from the blast)
Description:
The user makes 5 hand seals while building up a large amount of ice chakra. He then condenses it into a white sphere between his palms made of compressed pure ice chakra the size of a small egg. He then releases his control on the sphere, releasing that huge amount of chakra in a form of an ice shockwave that freezes all non-organic matter up to mid range, leaving only a frozen small crater with the user in the middle.

note: can't use any more ice jutsu for 2 turns and water or wind above A-Rank for 2 turns.
note: user can't perform taijutsu during the next turn
note: usable once per match
note: user collapses after use and can't stand for 15 seconds ( does not mean user can't move at all )
note: can only be taught by -Haku Yuki-



i changed basicly the entire thing so every thing is in bold

~Approved~ And lol at me approving that other jutsu...must have had my reasons >__>

 

[Ryūjin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kaen no kasai Karasu) - Summoning Technique: Blaze The Legendary Fire Crow
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on the back of his hand and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary fire crow, the fire crow is half the size of Gamabunta,what makes him special than other crows is the manipulation of the fire affinity, from his birth he was training to master the fire element and becomes more accustomed to it, therefore he can use the fire element up to S-rank techniques without the use of handseals in order to perform the fire techniques, he has thick feathers that makes him immune to fire techniques from A-rank and below,whenever this crow performs a fire technique it gets enhanced by +10 additional damage points due to him using more chakra in order to perform the fire technique required, being trained in the fire element from birth and being greatly accustomed to it, he can turn his body completely into flames which is considered a fire technique that equals the A-rank and gives him a huge burst of speed and can only be used once per battle
- Stays on the field for 5 turns
- Ability to turn completely into flames lasts only one turn and causes the crow to disperse automatically after it ends.
- Must have signed the crows contract
- Can only be taught by ~Crow~

(Meiton: Teikoku Sasshi) - Dark Release: Imperial Judgment
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 120 [-60 to the user due to the immense exhaustion]
Description: This is a stronger version of the dark release "Judgment" technique, by utilizing the energy absorbed from an S-ranked technique through the usage of the "grand inhaling maw" technique, the user extends both of his hands in front of him converting the chakra that was absorbed into black flames that cover a vast area similar to the judgment technique but much stronger and on a larger scale due to using more energy for the usage of the technique through the usage of a stronger version of the inhaling maw which is the grand inhaling maw, the black flames covers an area as the wind technique pressure damage does slicing deep through the earth as it heads towards it's destination utilizing the lightning properities that the dark chakra have making this technique as fast as most lightning techniques used.
- Can only be used once per battle
- This technique takes 2 jutsus out of 3 when it's used.
- Must have used the Grand Inhaling Maw technique beforehand
- No dark release techniques For 3 turns after this is used
- Can only use A-ranked elemental techniques for 3 turns after this is used.
- The user can't use Genjutsu techniques at all for 3 turns because he can't have full control on his chakra from the chakra exhaustion.
- The user is put into an immense state of exhaustion where the slightest movements puts a huge strain on his body for the next turn and can't use more than 2 jutsus the next turn due to the immense chakra exhaustion.
- Can only be taught by ~Crow~

(Meiton:Kuro Kyuutai No Jigoku) - Dark Release: Dark Orbs Of The Netherworld
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 [+20 per turn onwards to keep it active]
Damage Points: 80 [Divided among the orbs]
Description: The user performs these set of handseals (Horse → Bird → Tiger) and gathers a huge amount of dark chakra into the center of his body where after he releases the dark chakra while using shape manipulation abilities to shape the dark energy into the shape of 3 dark orbs that are constantly spinning around the user which the dark orbs also have a line of dark chakra spinning around it giving it an atomic look, the user can use these dark orbs seperately to either attack or defend as they are continuously spinning around him until a certain amount of time, another advantage to this technique is that the user can sacrifice each of the orbs to enhance a dark release technique, Lightning and fire technique used after this technique by +25 additional damage points for each orb that's sacrificed and giving the lightning and fire techniques infused with the power of the dark orbs the dark energy properities but due to the constant draw of chakra the user can't use techniques other than dark release techniques, fire or lightning techniques because the fire and lightning are the elements that are combined together to give the dark release.
- Can only be used once per battle.
- The dark orbs continuously spin around the user for 3 turns unless they are used/sacrificed.
- Only Fire, Lightning and Dark release techniques are to be used as long as this is active due to the continuous release of Dark chakra.
- No Dark release , Fire or Lightning techniques of S-rank for 2 turns after this technique deactivates.
- Can only be taught by ~Crow~

(Meiton: Kuro Sacchi) - Dark Release: Dark Sensing
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases performs the Horse handseal and releases his dark chakra around the battlefield as well as underground and in the air causing anything that his chakra touches or comes into contact with the dark chakra to be known by the user meaning that the position of the opponent if the chakra comes into contact with him his location will be known to the user, the user taking use of this dark chakra properities allows him whenever the opponent is using Dark, Lightning or Fire techniques.
~All Declined~ OP or unrealistic

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kaen no kasai Karasu) - Summoning Technique: Blaze The Legendary Fire Crow
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on the back of his hand and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary fire crow, the fire crow is half the size of Gamabunta,what makes him special than other crows is the manipulation of the fire affinity, from his birth he was training to master the fire element and becomes more accustomed to it, therefore he can use the fire element up to S-rank techniques without the use of handseals in order to perform the fire techniques, he has thick feathers that makes him immune to fire techniques from A-rank and below,whenever this crow performs a fire technique it gets enhanced by +15 additional damage points due to him using more chakra in order to perform the fire technique required.
- Stays on the field for 5 turns
- Must have signed the crows contract
- Can only be taught by ~Crow~

(Meiton: Teikoku Sasshi) - Dark Release: Imperial Judgment
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 [-40] to the user due to the immense exhaustion]
Description: This is a stronger version of the dark release "Judgment" technique, by utilizing the energy absorbed from an S-ranked technique through the usage of the "grand inhaling maw" technique, the user extends both of his hands in front of him converting the chakra that was absorbed into black flames that cover a vast area similar to the judgment technique but much stronger and on a larger scale due to using more energy for the usage of the technique through the usage of a stronger version of the inhaling maw which is the grand inhaling maw, the black flames covers an area as the wind technique pressure damage does slicing deep through the earth as it heads towards it's destination utilizing the lightning properities that the dark chakra have making this technique as fast as most lightning techniques used.
- Can only be used once per battle
- Must have used the Grand Inhaling Maw technique beforehand
- No dark release techniques For 3 turns after this is used
- The user cannot use any genjutsu techniques for 4 turns.
- The user is put into an immense state of exhaustion where the slightest movements puts a huge strain on his body for the next turn and can't use more than 2 jutsus the next turn due to the immense chakra exhaustion.
- Can only be taught by ~Crow~

(Meiton:Kuro Kyuutai No Jigoku) - Dark Release: Dark Orbs Of The Netherworld
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 [+20 per turn onwards to keep it active]
Damage Points: 80 [Divided among the orbs]
Description: The user performs these set of handseals (Horse → Bird → Tiger) and gathers a huge amount of dark chakra into the center of his body where after he releases the dark chakra while using shape manipulation abilities to shape the dark energy into the shape of 3 dark orbs that are constantly spinning around the user which the dark orbs also have a line of dark chakra spinning around it giving it an atomic look, the user can use these dark orbs seperately to either attack or defend as they are continuously spinning around him until a certain amount of time as with the constant draw of dark release chakra the user is able to maintain the orbs until the limited amount of time needed, another advantage to this technique is that the user can sacrifice each of the orbs to enhance a dark release technique, Lightning and fire technique used after this technique by +25 additional damage points for each orb that's sacrificed but due to the constant draw of chakra the user can't use techniques other than dark release techniques, fire or lightning techniques because the fire and lightning are the elements that are combined together to give the dark release.
- Can only be used once per battle.
- The dark orbs continuously spin around the user for 3 turns unless they are used/sacrificed.
- Only Fire, Lightning and Dark release techniques are to be used as long as this is active due to the continuous release of Dark chakra.
- No Dark release , Fire or Lightning techniques of S-rank for 2 turns after this technique deactivates.
- Can only be taught by ~Crow~

~All Declined~ All re-submission must have their changed/added part put in bold. If you didn't change anything then they're still declined.



(Raiton: Yofun Raiu No Karasu) - Lightning Release: Raging Thunderstorm Of Crows
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 50 [+20 If formed into one large Crow]
Damage Points: 90 [-40 to the user]
Description: After the user performs 10 handseals, the user gatheres a tremendous amount of lightning chakra into the center of his body drawing lightning chakra from almost all of his chakra producing cells, the user releases the lightning chakra all at once in a burst of lightning bolts around the user from all directions, then as the lightning is being produced the user uses shape manipulation to turn the lightning bolts into several crows of lightning energy that will shoot out of the user's body at high speeds of lightning from all directions around the user harming anything within mid range from the user whether he's behind the user or in front of him, the crows will paralyze anyone that comes into contact with them, if the user wishes he can manipulate the several crows he released by releasing more chakra to form a giant crow that is directed into a certain position of the user's choosing.
- Can only be used once per battle
- If the user have signed the Crows contract or is a lightning specialist he can perform this technique with 5 handseals only
- This technique takes two of the user's techniques allowed per turn.
- No lightning techniques at all for 3 turns after the turn this technique is used in.
- The user can't use more than 2 jutsus in the following turn due to the extreme chakra exhaustion in his body and the simplest movements puts a lot of strain on the user's body.
- Can only be taught by ~Crow~

(Katon: Shinkou Karasu No Jigoku) - Fire Release: Rising Crows Of The Netherworld
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 [-40 to the user due to the exhaustion of chakra]
Description: The user forms 13 handseals while molding a huge amount of fire chakra into his lungs as he inhales a specific amount of air and shoot out a highly compressed stream of fire while using shape manipulation to form the stream of fire into 5 highly compressed fireballs that each are in the shape of a crow that's the size of the water bullet Gamabunta used on Shukaku, each crow using the fire's high velocity and compression will race at the direction of the opponent at high speeds and upon reaching the position of the opponent each crow will cause an explosion that covers a wide area due to being highly compressed thus anyone that's in mid range of the opponent will suffer damage of the explosion including the user as one explosion of the crows is equivalent to kill a massive summoning like gamabunta.
- Can only be used once per battle
- If the user have signed the Crows contract or have a fire specialty can perform this technique with 6 handseals only.
- This technique takes a large amount of chakra and is considered two jutsus out of the user's techniques per turn.
- Due to the immense exhaustion the user can't use more than 2 techniques the following turn.
- No fire techniques at all for 3 turns after the turn this technique is used in.
- The user becomes extremely exhausted after this technique is used with the slightest movements being putting a large strain on his muscles due to the extremely high amount of chakra that's drawn from his body.
- Can only be taught by ~Crow~

~Both declined, don't resubmit~ Both ridiculously OP and unrealistic.

 

[Roger23]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: (suiton kuro-n): water style- hydro clone
Rank: A
Range: Supplementary
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: n/a
Description: The user creates up to 2 clones made out of faster flowing water. These clones can use suiton up to B-rank and below. They reform from physical, wind, water, and weak fire attacks. Vulnerable to earth and lightning.

note: only can be used/taught by Roger23
note: can only be used twice
note: moves made by the clone count as moves made by the user
note: can't use any water jutsu for 2 turns after making clones

~Declined do not resubmit~ This is a copy of a cannon technique. If you re-submit such rip off you will be banned from the CJ thread for a week. This is your first and only warning.

 

[-Yard-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This technique is an exact replica of my lightning pulse jutsu except it's wind and even more restricted.

Spoiler

already approved, this is just an example.

(Raiton: raikou myaku) Lightning Release: Lightning pulse
Type: Attack
Rank: S Rank - Forbidden Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( 50 If charges for 2 moves)
Damage Points: 80 (90 If charged for 2 moves)
Description: The user will make one handseal charging their raiton chakra and then forms another handseal which then releases a massive amount of electricity from their body. The amount of electricity that's released is based on how much raiton chakra they have charged. For instance, if the user charges it using enough chakra for two moves then the user can only use one more jutsu for that turn. But, will gain an extra rank in power. If Charged with enough chakra for two moves, this jutsu will release a massive amount of non focused electricity from the users body into the air and ground capable of destroying everything on the field and leaving a small crater in the ground around the user. The amount of chakra doesn't take more than a few seconds to charge since it's almost forced from the users body. If only charged for one move then it will release non focused electricity into the air and ground around around the user and opponent and will reach out to mid range.

Notes:

-No Raiton for the next turn if charged for Forbidden Rank.
-No A rank Raiton for the next turn if charged for only S rank.
-If charged for forbidden rank the user takes 20 damage due to the strain on the users body.
-No ninjutsu on the next turn just elemental jutsu.
-The electricity has enough amps and current to kill.
-Charging of 1 move = S rank rank.
-Charging of 2 moves = Forbidden Rank.

(Fuuton: Uindo Myaku) Wind Release: Wind Pulse
Type: Attack
Rank: S Rank - Forbidden Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( 50 If charges for 2 moves)
Damage Points: 80 (90 If charged for 2 moves)
Description: The user will make one handseal charging their Fuuton chakra and then forms another handseal which then releases a massive amount of wind from their body. The amount of wind that's released is based on how much fuuton chakra they have charged. For instance, if the user charges it using enough chakra for two moves then the user can only use one more jutsu for that turn. But, will gain an extra rank in power. If Charged with enough chakra for two moves, this jutsu will release massively strong winds from the users body that destroys everything on the field and is capable of crushing the ground around them leaving a crater in the ground around them. The wind is forced from them making the user have to stand completely still (leaving them open for attack) and their body starts feeling great pain from the strain of this. If only charged for one move then it will release a great amount of S rank wind from the users body that reaches out to mid range and leaves a great impact on anything it hits and requires a single handseal.

Notes:

-No S rank on the next turn if charged for Forbidden rank.
-Must not have used fuuton of B rank in the last turn.
-No wind for the next 2 turns if charged for Forbidden Rank.
-No wind for the next turn if charged for only S rank.
-No fire same turn due to concentration of wind
-If charged for forbidden rank the user takes 30 damage due to the strain on the users body.
-No ninjutsu on the next turn just elemental jutsu.
-Usable only once per battle.
-Charging of 1 move = S rank rank.
-Charging of 2 moves = Forbidden Rank.
-User feels worn out, as if it was beat with a base ball bat for an hour straight and thus movements are slower for the next turn.
- (-10) Taijutsu for the next turn if charged for Forbidden rank.
-Can only use the S rank version twice.


By "moves" it basically means like charging double the amount of chakra you would for the S rank version to equal F rank. That's also why it counts as 2 moves for the F rank version..and possibly the most restrictions I've ever placed on a jutsu 0_0

~Declined do not resubmit~ Restrictions means nothing when the jutsu in itself is unacceptable. OP.

(Doton: Tsuchi Kurassha) Earth Release: Earth crusher
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Like "Earth Release: Mud Fall" and "Earth Release: Dropping Lid" the user will make 3 handseals "Rat" "Tiger" "Boar" as they send earth chakra to above the opponent or target and will make a rift above them. What comes out is not mud nor a lid but a huge stone that falls from the rift and crashes down onto the opponent (see picture for the size of said stone). The stone is created several meters above the opponent, leaving enough time to react.
- Can only be used twice per match.
- Must have mastered at least A rank earth.

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~Approved~ Check bold part.

(Raiton: Tsuchi shiyoukinshi) Lightning Release: Earth disable
Type: Supplement
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:
Description: The performs a single handseal and releases a vast amount of raiton chakra into the ground on the battle field that cancels out any doton chakra in the ground that the opponent may try to place in. This jutsu makes it so neither the opponent nor user can use doton based techniques.
After filling the ground with raiton chakra no one can use earth based techniques unless the earth technique is created from their own chakra (Tsuchikages "Rock Hardening Technique" is an example).
- Lasts only 2 turns.
- User can't use any other raiton techniques in the same turn.
- Can only be used once per battle.
- must have mastered lightning with AACT's.
- Both user and opponent are unable to use earth techniques for 2 turns.

~Declined~ This jutsu doesn't make sense whatsoever. The reason why we say someone can't take his opponent's jutsu over with his own chakra is because of the amount of chakra found in that very jutsu. However, here you're charging the whole field with it (since it goes to long-range), you'd basically die from chakra exhaustion if you were to infuse enough chakra into the ground to keep your opponent from using it. Furthermore, it's the lightning element that negates earth, not the chakra in itself. Once you mold your chakra into lightning it takes all physical particularities of lightning, which are strong to earth.

Resubmitting​

(Doton: Futatsu Kabes) Earth Release: 2 Walls
Type: Offensive
Rank: Strong S (Both walls are S rank)
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes a single handseal, stomps their foot on the ground and 2 20ftX20ft (20ft in height and 20ft width) Size walls rise from the ground that are 6ft thick and are both equal to S rank. These walls take no more than 2 seconds to rise from the ground. These walls are capable of stopping 1 Forbidden rank attack With the exception of lightning techniques but would bring the lightning technique down to S rank. Other than that it has the durability to stop almost any technique. The walls are both filled with earth chakra to make them even more durable to achieve a good defense and make a loud rumbling sound when rising from the ground. This technique really shows the defensive power the earth element has.

Notes:
- After performing this technique the user feels drained of earth chakra and can't use earth techs on the next turn.
- No other Earth techniques can be used in the same turn.
- Can only be used once per match.
- No other S rank jutsu in the same turn.
- This jutsu counts as 2 of the users moves.


(Furi Kuuhaku) Free Space
Type: Supplement
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: Short-Long
Description: This is a technique made by the condors so that they can be more useful even upon summoning as it helps to create numerous useful plans of attacking. The user will add an extra handseal when summoning a condor and will choose where to summon that condor to. They can summon the animal to any place on the field. They obviously can't summon it inside solid objects or that will be instant death for the condor.
- Must have signed the condor contract.
- Can only be used twice per match.
- Must wait one turn before using this again or summoning an animal again.
- Can only be used for animal summoning that are tied to a contract.
- Counts as one of the users 3 moves per turn.

(Doton: Futatsu Kabes) Earth Release: 2 Walls
Type: Offensive
Rank: Strong S (Both walls are S rank)
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes 3 handseals, stomps their foot on the ground and two 15ftX20ft (15ft in height and 20ft width) Size walls rise from the ground that are 6ft thick and are both equal to S rank. These walls are capable of stopping 1 elemental Forbidden rank attack With the exception of lightning techniques but would bring the lightning technique down to S rank. The walls are both filled with earth chakra to make them even more durable to achieve a good defense and they make a loud rumbling sound when rising from the ground, the sound doesn't do anything to the opponent, this is just a detail. This technique really shows the defensive power the earth element has.

Notes:
- After performing this technique the user feels drained of earth chakra and can't use earth techs for 2 turns
- No other Earth techniques can be used in the same turn and this can only be used if you haven't used any earth techs of B rank or higher in the previous turn.
- Can only be used once per match.
- No other A rank techs in the same turn.
- This jutsu counts as 2 of the users moves

Restricted as much as I can and deleted a lot of the description and edited the description making it slightly smaller.

~Declined~ What's with those OP jutsus.


(Furi Kuuhaku) Free Space
Type: Supplement
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: Short-Long
Description: This is a technique made by the condors so that they can be more useful even upon summoning as it helps to create numerous useful plans of attacking. The user will add an extra 3 handseals when summoning a condor and will choose where to summon that condor to. They can summon the animal to any place on the field. They obviously can't summon it inside solid objects or that will be instant death for the condor.
- Must have signed the condor contract.
- Can only be used once per match.
- Must wait one turn before using this again or summoning an animal again.
- Can only be used for animal summoning that are tied to a contract.
- Counts as one of the users 3 moves per turn.
- No summoning for the next 3 turns
- Only works with summoning's of the contract that are big enough to only hold 1-2 people on their back.
- No ninjutsu for 2 turn besides elemental ninjutsu.
- No ninjutsu in the same turn besides regular ninjutsu.


Restricted it even more.

~Declined do not resubmit~ This jutsu is too similar to an existing technique.